热考话题六 人与自然——灵性动物
灵性动物话题常受到高考命题者的青睐，如2023年1月浙江卷的救助蜂鸟和2020年1月浙江卷的人狗和谐。此类话题旨在倡导人们关爱动物，与动物和谐相处，树立可持续发展的理念。
一、 谋好篇——续写情节安排
二、写好句——细节佳句积累
（一）人与动物和谐共处
1.蜂鸟表达感谢
A flash of movement caught my attention （一阵动静引起了我的注意）.I turned around to see the same hummingbird hovering in the air （在空中盘旋）.It seemed that the bird was waiting for me， its sharp eyes fixed on me （它那双锐利的眼睛紧盯着我） as if trying to convey some deep unspoken gratitude （好像传达某种深深的、不言而喻的感激之情）.I felt a surge of relief and awe （感到一阵宽慰和敬畏） at the sight of this sound and grateful creature.
情节走向：蜂鸟的行为引起了我的注意→蜂鸟好像在等我→蜂鸟看着我好像在对我表示感激→我感到宽慰和敬畏
2.小狗陪伴主人
My grandfather enjoyed Luck’s company （喜欢 Luck 的陪伴），while Luck was really attached to （非常依恋）my grandfather.Luck was always by my grandfather’s side， eagerly waiting for his attention （等待他的关注）.Sometimes grandfather would often touch Luck’s fur and praise him for being such a good boy （抚摸Luck的毛发并称赞它是个好孩子）.In response， Luck would reach out his paw and wag his tail slowly at first， then faster （伸出他的爪子，开始慢慢地摇尾巴，然后越来越快） as if he understood every word my grandfather said.
情节走向：祖父喜欢Luck的陪伴→Luck非常依恋祖父→Luck总是在祖父身边，希望得到他的关注→祖父和Luck之间的亲密互动
3.小狗改善祖父健康
Their connection grew stronger with each passing day （联系与日俱增）.Luck’s company had a positive impact on （对……产生积极影响）my grandfather’s health.He seemed to have more energy and was in higher spirits （情绪更好） when Luck was around.
情节走向：他们的联系与日俱增→Luck的陪伴对祖父的健康有益→祖父状态变好
（二）人与动物的救助
1.小狗提醒主人火情
Swiftly I got up from my bed.I opened the door and found Max running around the living room， trying to let all the things fall down.These abnormal behaviors really confused me （这些异常行为真的让我感到困惑） while they also made me a little afraid.He firmly bit my trousers and motioned me to the kitchen （紧紧咬住我的裤子，示意我去厨房） where I could obviously smell something burning and instantly knew what had happened （明显闻到有东西烧焦了，瞬间明白发生了什么）.
情节走向：我起床发现 Max行为异常→它的异常行为让我困惑→它咬住我的裤子，示意我去厨房→我闻到烧焦味，瞬间明白发生了什么
2.收养流浪狗
We feel proud that we’ve given Charie a home and a second chance.We have settled him in his doghouse in the front garden （把它安置在前院的狗窝里）， where he enjoys his favourite food.Every evening， we take him for walks around our neighbourhood （带它在社区周围散步），and on occasion， he joins other dogs in playful games of chases and bounds on the grass （和其他狗一起在草地上玩追逐和跳跃的游戏） while Sam and I chat with our neighbours.Witnessing his energy and enthusiasm fills us with a sense of fulfillment and pride （看到它的活力和热情，我们感到满足和自豪）.
情节走向：我们为能给Charie一个家和第二次机会而感到自豪→把它安置在狗窝→每晚带它散步→它和其他狗玩耍→我们感到满足和自豪
（三）主旨升华
1.In the face of the emergency， it was loyalty and kindness that crossed all boundaries （跨越所有界限） and brought hope of survival （带来了生存的希望）.
2.It is through this silent companionship that he came to understand the depth of loyalty and devotion， which went beyond words and gestures （超越了言语与行动）.
3.From time to time I look at the photo as a reminder to show respect for all animals.After all， it is we who are the visitors to their world （我们才是闯入它们世界的访客）.
4.The courage and selflessness of these animals inspire me to be a better person， to live with greater empathy and kindness toward all beings， and never to underestimate the power of love and loyalty （永远不要低估爱和忠诚的力量）.
5.Just as a saying goes， “Love never fails （爱永不止息）.” The lovely dogs opened their hearts to me in spite of everything they had experienced.
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热考话题六 人与自然——灵性动物
灵性动物话题常受到高考命题者的青睐，如2023年1月浙江卷的
救助蜂鸟和2020年1月浙江卷的人狗和谐。此类话题旨在倡导人们关
爱动物，与动物和谐相处，树立可持续发展的理念。
一、 谋好篇——续写情节安排
二、写好句——细节佳句积累
（一）人与动物和谐共处
1. 蜂鸟表达感谢
A flash of movement caught my attention （一阵动静引起了我的注
意）.I turned around to see the same hummingbird hovering in the air
（在空中盘旋）.It seemed that the bird was waiting for me， its sharp
eyes fixed on me （它那双锐利的眼睛紧盯着我） as if trying to
convey some deep unspoken gratitude （好像传达某种深深的、不言
而喻的感激之情）.I felt a surge of relief and awe （感到一阵宽慰和
敬畏） at the sight of this sound and grateful creature.
情节走向：蜂鸟的行为引起了我的注意→蜂鸟好像在等我→蜂鸟看着
我好像在对我表示感激→我感到宽慰和敬畏
2. 小狗陪伴主人
My grandfather enjoyed Luck’s company （喜欢 Luck 的陪伴），
while Luck was really attached to （非常依恋）my grandfather.Luck
was always by my grandfather’s side， eagerly waiting for his attention
（等待他的关注）.Sometimes grandfather would often touch Luck’s
fur and praise him for being such a good boy （抚摸Luck的毛发并称
赞它是个好孩子）.In response， Luck would reach out his paw and
wag his tail slowly at first， then faster （伸出他的爪子，开始慢慢地
摇尾巴，然后越来越快） as if he understood every word my grandfather
said.
情节走向：祖父喜欢Luck的陪伴→Luck非常依恋祖父→Luck总是在祖
父身边，希望得到他的关注→祖父和Luck之间的亲密互动
3. 小狗改善祖父健康
Their connection grew stronger with each passing day （联系与日俱
增）.Luck’s company had a positive impact on （对……产生积极影
响）my grandfather’s health.He seemed to have more energy and was in
higher spirits （情绪更好） when Luck was around.
情节走向：他们的联系与日俱增→Luck的陪伴对祖父的健康有益→祖
父状态变好
（二）人与动物的救助
1. 小狗提醒主人火情
Swiftly I got up from my bed.I opened the door and found Max running
around the living room， trying to let all the things fall down.These
abnormal behaviors really confused me （这些异常行为真的让我感到
困惑） while they also made me a little afraid.He firmly bit my trousers
and motioned me to the kitchen （紧紧咬住我的裤子，示意我去厨
房） where I could obviously smell something burning and instantly
knew what had happened （明显闻到有东西烧焦了，瞬间明白发生了
什么）.
情节走向：我起床发现 Max行为异常→它的异常行为让我困惑→它咬
住我的裤子，示意我去厨房→我闻到烧焦味，瞬间明白发生了什么
2. 收养流浪狗
We feel proud that we’ve given Charie a home and a second chance.We
have settled him in his doghouse in the front garden （把它安置在前院
的狗窝里）， where he enjoys his favourite food.Every evening， we
take him for walks around our neighbourhood （带它在社区周围散
步），and on occasion， he joins other dogs in playful games of chases
and bounds on the grass （和其他狗一起在草地上玩追逐和跳跃的游
戏） while Sam and I chat with our neighbours.Witnessing his energy
and enthusiasm fills us with a sense of fulfillment and pride （看到它
的活力和热情，我们感到满足和自豪）.
情节走向：我们为能给Charie一个家和第二次机会而感到自豪→把它
安置在狗窝→每晚带它散步→它和其他狗玩耍→我们感到满足和自豪
（三）主旨升华
1. In the face of the emergency， it was loyalty and kindness that crossed
all boundaries （跨越所有界限） and brought hope of survival （带来
了生存的希望）.
2. It is through this silent companionship that he came to understand the
depth of loyalty and devotion， which went beyond words and gestures
（超越了言语与行动）.
3. From time to time I look at the photo as a reminder to show respect for
all animals.After all， it is we who are the visitors to their world （我
们才是闯入它们世界的访客）.
4. The courage and selflessness of these animals inspire me to be a better
person， to live with greater empathy and kindness toward all beings，
and never to underestimate the power of love and loyalty （永远不要
低估爱和忠诚的力量）.
5. Just as a saying goes， “Love never fails （爱永不止息）.” The
lovely dogs opened their hearts to me in spite of everything they had
experienced.
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