概要写作·上海卷（信息提炼+语言转换+逻辑整合+精准表达）-2026年高考英语新题型解析模板

高考英语新题型解析模板（上海卷）
概要写作
语言风格统一 说明文+议论文+记叙文
（20题） （30题）
考查目标
① 信息提炼能力
② 语言转换能力
③ 逻辑整合能力
④ 精准表达能力
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高考英语（上海卷）概要写作
题型说明
核心定位：适配上海卷高考英语概要写作（60词以内）
备考需求，覆盖说明文、议论文、记叙文三大体裁及科技、环
保、教育等高频主题，每道模板均含“试题框架+满分范文模板
+四大能力详细解析”，可直接替换具体主题/数据/情节使用。
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一、说明文类试题模板
试题模板 1：科技类·AI与教育应用
试题模板框架
Read the following passage. Summarize the main idea and the main point(s)
of the passage in no more than 60 words. Use your own words as far as possible.
原 文 ： With the rapid development of artificial intelligence (AI), it has
gradually penetrated into the field of education, bringing changes such as
personalized learning plans and intelligent homework correction. Some people
worry that AI may replace teachers, but experts point out that AI is only a tool to
assist teaching, which cannot replace teachers role in cultivating students critical
thinking and emotional intelligence. The combination of AI and education will
promote the modernization of education.
满分范文模板
AI has entered education, bringing changes. Though some fear it replaces
teachers, experts regard it as a teaching aid. Its combination with education will
advance educational modernization. (56 words)
详细解析（考查四大能力）
信息提炼能力：模板核心要点——① AI渗透教育领域带来变革；② 部分人担
忧 AI替代教师；③ 专家认为 AI是教学辅助工具；④ AI与教育结合推动教育现代
化。考查学生区分核心观点（专家结论、变革意义）与冗余细节（具体变革案例：
个性化学习计划、智能作业批改）的能力。
语言转换能力：考查同义替换（“penetrated into”→“entered”、“tool to assist
teaching”→“teaching aid”、 “promote”→“advance”）、句式重构（将 “bringing
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changes such as...”整合为“bringing changes”简洁表达）、冗余信息精简的能力，
避免照抄原文举例。
逻辑整合能力：考查梳理“变革呈现→争议（担忧 vs专家观点）→积极影响”逻
辑链的能力，要求用“Though”衔接转折关系，用逗号自然衔接因果逻辑（AI与教育
结合→推动现代化），确保层次清晰。
精准表达能力：考查用 “teaching aid”精准界定 AI 角色（非替代品）、用
“advance educational modernization”准确概括核心影响的能力，要求语义无扭曲，
词数控制在 60词以内。
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试题模板 2：环保类·海洋塑料污染
试题模板框架
Read the following passage. Summarize the main idea and the main point(s)
of the passage in no more than 60 words. Use your own words as far as possible.
原文：Marine plastic pollution has become a global environmental crisis,
causing serious harm to marine organisms and coastal ecosystems. The chart
clearly shows the worsening trend of marine plastic pollution. To address this
problem, countries around the world need to strengthen international cooperation,
promote plastic reduction and improve plastic recycling systems.
满分范文模板
Marine plastic pollution, a global crisis harming marine organisms and
ecosystems, is worsening as shown in the trend chart. Global cooperation, plastic
reduction and improved recycling are needed to solve it. (55 words)
详细解析（考查四大能力）
信息提炼能力：模板核心要点——①海洋塑料污染成全球环境危机（危害海洋
生物、海岸生态）；② 图像显示污染趋势恶化；③ 解决措施（国际合作、减塑、
完善回收体系）。考查提炼核心问题、图像核心信息与解决方案，排除图像中具体
数据（如 8000万吨）、数据来源等冗余细节的能力。
语言转换能力：考查同义替换（ “serious harm”→“harming”、 “address this
problem”→“solve it”、 “promote”→“carry out”）、句式整合（将 “causing serious
harm to...”整合为后置定语“a global crisis harming...”）、明确图像指代（“the trend
chart”对应原文折线图）的能力。
逻辑整合能力：考查梳理“问题定性→图像佐证→解决措施”逻辑链的能力，要
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求用“as shown in”衔接图像与问题趋势，用逗号衔接措施并列关系，确保逻辑连贯
无断层。
精准表达能力：考查用“a global crisis”精准定位污染严重程度、用“strengthen
international cooperation”准确概括措施核心的能力，要求图像指代清晰，语义无遗
漏（如未遗漏“减塑” “回收”两大具体措施）。
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试题模板 3：教育类·劳动教育的意义
试题模板框架
Read the following passage. Summarize the main idea and the main point(s)
of the passage in no more than 60 words. Use your own words as far as possible.
原 文 ： Labor education has been officially incorporated into the basic
education system in recent years, which is of great significance for students all-
round development. It helps students develop practical skills, cultivate a sense of
hard work and understand the value of labor. Different from theoretical learning,
labor education emphasizes the combination of knowledge and practice. Schools
are advised to carry out diverse labor courses to ensure the effectiveness of labor
education.
满分范文模板
Labor education, incorporated into basic education recently, is vital for
students all-round development by fostering practical skills and hard work
awareness. Schools need diverse courses for effectiveness. (52 words)
详细解析（考查四大能力）
信息提炼能力：模板核心要点——① 劳动教育近年纳入基础教育体系；② 对
学生全面发展意义重大（培养实践能力、勤劳意识、理解劳动价值）；③特点（知
行合一）；④建议学校开展多样化劳动课程。考查提炼核心政策背景、价值与建议，
排除“different from theoretical learning”等对比类冗余细节的能力。
语言转换能力：考查同义替换（“of great significance”→“vital”、“incorporated
into”→“included in”、“fostering”→“developing/cultivating”）、句式简化（将“which
is of great significance...”整合为后置定语）、冗余语义合并（将“practical skills,
cultivate a sense of hard work and understand the value of labor”合并为“practical
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skills and hard work awareness”）的能力。
逻辑整合能力：考查梳理“政策背景→核心价值→实施建议”逻辑链的能力，要
求用介词“by”衔接教育价值的实现方式，用句号分隔核心价值与学校建议，层次分
明。
精准表达能力：考查用“incorporated into”精准体现政策属性、用“all-round
development”准确概括教育目标的能力，要求合并语义时不遗漏核心价值（实践能
力、勤劳意识）。
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试题模板 4：科技类·5G 技术的应用与优势
试题模板框架
Read the following passage. Summarize the main idea and the main point(s)
of the passage in no more than 60 words. Use your own words as far as possible.
原文：The 5G technology has been widely applied in various fields such as
medical treatment, intelligent transportation and daily pared with 4G, 5G
has obvious advantages: high speed, low latency and large capacity. These
advantages enable 5G to promote the digital transformation of industries and
bring more convenience to peoples life. With the continuous progress of
technology, 5G will be applied in more fields in the future.
满分范文模板
5G is widely used in many fields with advantages of high speed, low latency
and large capacity, promoting industrial digital transformation and bringing
convenience. It will have more applications in the future. (53 words)
详细解析（考查四大能力）
信息提炼能力：模板核心要点——① 5G广泛应用于多领域（医疗、智能交通、
日常生活）；②优势（高速、低延迟、大容量）；③作用（推动产业数字化转型、
便利生活）；④ 未来趋势（更多领域应用）。考查排除“compared with 4G” “with
the continuous progress of technology”等冗余对比与背景细节的能力。
语言转换能力：考查同义替换（“widely applied”→“widely used”、 “obvious
advantages”→“advantages”、 “promote”→“boosting”）、句式整合（将 “These
advantages enable 5G to...”整合为伴随状语 “promoting...”）、具体领域概括
（“many fields”对应原文列举）的能力。
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逻辑整合能力：考查梳理“应用范围→核心优势→现实作用→未来趋势”逻辑链
的能力，要求用逗号自然衔接各环节，用“with”衔接优势与作用，逻辑流畅。
精准表达能力：考查用“high speed, low latency and large capacity”精准概括
5G核心优势、用“industrial digital transformation”准确对应产业变革方向的能力，
要求未来趋势表述清晰无歧义。
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试题模板 5：环保类·低碳生活的倡导
试题模板框架
Read the following passage. Summarize the main idea and the main point(s)
of the passage in no more than 60 words. Use your own words as far as possible.
原文： Low-carbon life has become a popular concept in modern society,
which advocates reducing carbon emissions to protect the environment. The
mind map clearly shows feasible ways to practice low-carbon life. Practicing low-
carbon life can not only reduce environmental pollution but also help people
develop healthy living habits.
满分范文模板
Low-carbon life, advocating carbon reduction for environmental protection,
has feasible ways shown in the mind map. It reduces pollution and fosters healthy
habits, so it’s worth practicing. (50 words)
详细解析（考查四大能力）
信息提炼能力：模板核心要点——① 低碳生活是现代流行概念（倡导减碳环
保）；② 图像展示可行实践方式；③ 意义（减少污染、培养健康习惯）。考查提
炼核心概念、图像作用与意义，排除图像中具体分支细节（如随手关灯）、简笔画
描述等冗余信息的能力。
语言转换能力：考查同义替换（ “popular concept”→“popular”、 “feasible
ways”→“practical methods”、 “fosters”→“develops”）、句式重构（将 “which
advocates...”整合为后置定语）、图像指代明确（“the mind map”对应原文思维导
图）的能力。
逻辑整合能力：考查梳理“概念定义→图像辅助→实践意义”逻辑链的能力，要
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求用“so”衔接意义与隐含的“倡导实践”结论，逻辑完整。
精准表达能力：考查用 “advocating carbon reduction for environmental
protection”精准界定低碳生活核心内涵、用“fosters healthy habits”准确概括意义的
能力，要求图像指代无歧义。
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试题模板 6：教育类·在线学习的利弊
试题模板框架
Read the following passage. Summarize the main idea and the main point(s)
of the passage in no more than 60 words. Use your own words as far as possible.
原文： Online learning has become increasingly popular in recent years,
especially after the epidemic. It has obvious advantages: flexibility in time and
space, rich learning resources. However, online learning also has disadvantages,
such as low learning efficiency caused by poor self-discipline and lack of face-to-
face interaction between teachers and students. To improve the effect of online
learning, students need to enhance self-discipline and teachers should strengthen
interactive teaching.
满分范文模板
Online learning is popular with advantages of time-space flexibility and rich
resources, but has drawbacks like low efficiency and lack of interaction. Students
and teachers need corresponding efforts to improve its effect. (54 words)
详细解析（考查四大能力）
信息提炼能力：模板核心要点——① 在线学流行（疫情后尤甚）；②
优势（时空灵活、资源丰富）；③劣势（自律差导致效率低、缺乏师生互动）；④
改进建议（学生增强自律、教师加强互动教学）。考查排除“especially after the
epidemic”等冗余背景细节的能力。
语言转换能力：考查同义替换（“increasingly popular”→“popular”、“flexibility
in time and space”→“time-space flexibility”、“drawbacks”→“disadvantages”）、句
式简化（将“such as...”整合为“like...”短语）、并列结构整合（“students need... and
teachers should...”→“students and teachers need corresponding efforts”）的能力。
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逻辑整合能力：考查梳理“流行现状→优势→劣势→改进建议”逻辑链的能力，
要求用“but”衔接转折关系，用句号分隔利弊与建议，逻辑层次清晰。
精准表达能力：考查用 “time-space flexibility”精准概括核心优势、用
“corresponding efforts”准确对应学生与教师的不同改进措施的能力，要求不遗漏关
键利弊点。
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试题模板 7：社会类·银发经济的发展
试题模板框架
Read the following passage. Summarize the main idea and the main point(s)
of the passage in no more than 60 words. Use your own words as far as possible.
原文：With the deepening of population aging, the silver economy (serving
the elderly group) has emerged as a new economic growth point. The silver
economy covers a wide range of fields, including elderly care services, elderly
education, elderly tourism and health products. It not only meets the diverse
needs of the elderly but also drives employment and promotes economic
development. The government should provide policy support for the development
of the silver economy.
满分范文模板
Amid population aging, the silver economy (serving the elderly) has become
a new economic growth point covering many fields. It meets the elderly’s needs
and boosts economy, requiring government policy support. (52 words)
详细解析（考查四大能力）
信息提炼能力：模板核心要点——①人口老龄化加深背景下，银发经济成新经
济增长点；② 涵盖多领域（养老服务、老年教育等）；③ 意义（满足老人多元需
求、带动就业、促经济发展）；④建议政府提供政策支持。考查排除具体领域列举
等冗余细节的能力。
语言转换能力：考查同义替换（“with the deepening of”→“amid”、“emerged
as”→“become”、“boosts”→“promotes”）、句式整合（将“covers a wide range of
fields, including...” 整 合 为 “covering many fields” ） 、 意 义 合 并 （ “drives
employment and promotes economic development”→“boosts economy”）的能力。
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逻辑整合能力：考查梳理“背景→定位→意义→建议”逻辑链的能力，要求用
“amid”衔接背景，用逗号衔接定位与意义，用现在分词“requiring”衔接意义与建议，
逻辑连贯。
精准表达能力：考查用“the silver economy (serving the elderly)”精准界定概念、
用“policy support”准确概括政府措施的能力，要求意义合并时不遗漏核心价值（满
足需求、促经济）。
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试题模板 8：科技类·人工智能伦理规范
试题模板框架
Read the following passage. Summarize the main idea and the main point(s)
of the passage in no more than 60 words. Use your own words as far as possible.
原文：With the wide application of artificial intelligence (AI), ethical issues
have become increasingly prominent, such as data privacy leaks, algorithm
discrimination and AI misuse. The flowchart helps people recognize the types of
AI ethical risks. Experts suggest governments formulate relevant laws and
enterprises strengthen self-supervision to standardize AI development.
满分范文模板
AI’s wide application brings prominent ethical issues, which are classified in
the flowchart. Experts advise governments to make laws and enterprises to
strengthen self-supervision for standardized AI development. (56 words)
详细解析（考查四大能力）
信息提炼能力：模板核心要点——① AI广泛应用使伦理问题凸显（数据泄露、
算法歧视、滥用）；② 图像分类展示伦理风险类型；③ 建议（政府立法、企业加
强自律以规范 AI发展）。考查排除图像中具体分支说明、警示图标等冗余细节的
能力。
语言转换能力：考查同义替换（ “wide application”→“widely applied”、
“formulate”→“make”、“standardize”→“regulate”）、句式重构（将“such as...”整合
为 “ethical issues”的隐含语义）、图像作用概括（ “which are classified in the
flowchart”对应原文流程图功能）的能力。
逻辑整合能力：考查梳理“问题呈现→图像辅助→解决建议”逻辑链的能力，要
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求用“which”衔接问题与图像作用，用“for”衔接建议与目标（规范 AI发展），逻辑
清晰。
精准表达能力：考查用“ethical issues”精准概括核心问题范畴、用“make laws
and strengthen self-supervision”准确对应政府与企业的不同责任的能力，要求图像
作用表述简洁准确。
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试题模板 9：教育类·阅读经典的价值
试题模板框架
Read the following passage. Summarize the main idea and the main point(s)
of the passage in no more than 60 words. Use your own words as far as possible.
原文：In the era of fragmented reading, reading classic works is particularly
important. Classics carry the wisdom of predecessors and the essence of national
culture, which can help readers improve literary literacy and cultivate noble
sentiments. Many young people prefer popular reading materials and ignore
classics, but reading classics can help them establish correct values. Young
people should attach importance to reading classics.
满分范文模板
Amid fragmented reading, reading classics is important as they carry
predecessors’ wisdom and cultural essence, boosting literacy and values. Young
people should value classics despite preferring popular materials. (53 words)
详细解析（考查四大能力）
信息提炼能力：模板核心要点——①碎片化阅读时代，阅读经典尤为重要；②
经典价值（承载前人智慧、民族文化精髓，提升文学素养、树立正确价值观）；③
现状（年轻人偏好通俗读物忽视经典）；④ 建议年轻人重视经典。考查排除
“cultivate noble sentiments”等可合并的冗余语义的能力。
语言转换能力：考查同义替换（ “in the era of”→“amid”、 “particularly
important”→“important”、 “boosting”→“improving/cultivating”）、句式整合（将
“which can help...”整合为伴随状语“boosting...”）、语义合并（“literary literacy and
cultivate noble sentiments”→“literacy”）的能力。
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逻辑整合能力：考查梳理“时代背景→经典价值→现状→建议”逻辑链的能力，
要求用“as”衔接经典价值与重要性，用“despite”衔接现状与建议，逻辑紧凑。
精准表达能力：考查用“predecessors’ wisdom and cultural essence”精准概括
经典核心价值、用“value classics”准确对应“attach importance to reading classics”
的能力，要求语义合并不丢失核心要点（素养、价值观）。
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试题模板 10：环保类·垃圾分类的意义与推广
试题模板框架
Read the following passage. Summarize the main idea and the main point(s)
of the passage in no more than 60 words. Use your own words as far as possible.
原文： Garbage classification is an important measure for environmental
protection. It can reduce environmental pollution, save resources by recycling
reusable garbage and improve the quality of living environment. To promote
garbage classification, governments have issued relevant policies, communities
have carried out publicity activities and schools have taught students classification
knowledge. Everyone should actively participate in garbage classification.
满分范文模板
Garbage classification, a vital environmental protection measure, reduces
pollution, saves resources and improves living environment. Governments,
communities and schools promote it, requiring everyone’s active participation. (51
words)
详细解析（考查四大能力）
信息提炼能力：模板核心要点——① 垃圾分类是环保重要措施；② 意义（减
少污染、节约资源、改善居住环境）；③ 推广主体（政府、社区、学校）；④ 呼
吁全民积极参与。考查排除具体推广措施细节（如政策内容、宣传活动形式）的能
力。
语言转换能力：考查同义替换（ “important measure”→“vital measure”、
“promote”→“popularize”、 “requiring”→“calling for”）、句式整合（将 “it can
reduce...”整合为后置定语修饰的并列短语）、推广主体概括（ “governments,
communities and schools”对应原文列举）的能力。
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高考英语新题型
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逻辑整合能力：考查梳理“措施定位→核心意义→推广主体→呼吁参与”逻辑链
的能力，要求用逗号衔接意义并列关系，用现在分词“requiring”衔接推广与呼吁，
逻辑流畅。
精准表达能力：考查用“vital environmental protection measure”精准定位垃圾
分类的属性、用“everyone’s active participation”准确概括呼吁核心的能力，要求意
义列举不遗漏关键要点。
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试题模板 11：社会类·志愿服务的价值
试题模板框架
Read the following passage. Summarize the main idea and the main point(s)
of the passage in no more than 60 words. Use your own words as far as possible.
原文：Volunteer service is an important part of social public welfare. It brings
many benefits to individuals and society. For individuals, it can cultivate a sense of
responsibility and improve practical abilities; for society, it can help those in need
and promote social harmony. In recent years, the number of volunteer service
participants has been increasing, making the world warmer. More people should
participate in volunteer service.
满分范文模板
Volunteer service, part of social public welfare, benefits individuals (cultivating
responsibility, improving abilities) and society (helping the needy, promoting
harmony). With more participants warming the world, more people should join in.
(54 words)
详细解析（考查四大能力）
信息提炼能力：模板核心要点——① 志愿服务是社会公益重要部分；② 价值
（个人：培养责任、提升实践能力；社会：帮助困难群体、促进和谐）；③ 现状
（参与者增多，让世界更温暖）；④ 呼吁更多人参与。考查排除“in recent years”
等冗余时间状语的能力。
语言转换能力：考查同义替换（“important part”→“part”、“benefits”→“brings
benefits to”、“join in”→“participate in”）、句式整合（用括号分类列举个人与社会
价值）、现状概括（“with more participants warming the world”对应原文表述）的
能力。
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高考英语新题型
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逻辑整合能力：考查梳理“定位→价值（个人+社会）→现状→呼吁”逻辑链的能
力，要求用括号清晰区分价值主体，用“with”衔接现状与呼吁，逻辑层次分明。
精准表达能力：考查用“cultivating responsibility, improving abilities”精准概括
个人价值、用“helping the needy, promoting harmony”准确概括社会价值的能力，
要求分类清晰无混淆。
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试题模板 12：教育类·充足睡眠的重要性
试题模板框架
Read the following passage. Summarize the main idea and the main point(s)
of the passage in no more than 60 words. Use your own words as far as possible.
原文：Adequate sleep is essential for people’s physical and mental health.
Physically, it helps the body repair and enhance immunity; mentally, it can improve
memory and concentration, especially for students’ learning efficiency. However,
many people ignore sleep health and often stay up late for work or entertainment.
It is suggested that people should form a regular sleep schedule.
满分范文模板
Adequate sleep is essential for physical (body repair, immunity) and mental
health (memory, concentration). Many people ignore it by staying up late, so a
regular sleep schedule is suggested. (50 words)
详细解析（考查四大能力）
信息提炼能力：模板核心要点——① 充足睡眠对身心健康至关重要；② 身心
益处（身体：修复、增强免疫力；心理：提升记忆、专注力，助力学生学习）；③
现状（多人忽视睡眠健康，熬夜工作 /娱乐）；④ 建议规律作息。考查排除
“especially for students’ learning efficiency” “for work or entertainment”等冗余细节
的能力。
语言转换能力：考查同义替换（ “essential”→“vital”、 “ignore”→“neglect”、
“form”→“develop”）、句式整合（用括号分类列举身心益处）、现状简化（“ignore
it by staying up late”对应原文表述）的能力。
逻辑整合能力：考查梳理“重要性→具体益处→现状→建议”逻辑链的能力，要
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高考英语新题型
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求用括号清晰区分身心益处，用“so”衔接现状与建议，逻辑紧凑。
精准表达能力：考查用括号分类精准区分身心益处、用 “a regular sleep
schedule”准确概括建议核心的能力，要求不遗漏关键益处（修复、免疫力、记忆、
专注力）。
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试题模板 13：社会类·共享经济的发展与挑战
试题模板框架
Read the following passage. Summarize the main idea and the main point(s)
of the passage in no more than 60 words. Use your own words as far as possible.
原文：The sharing economy has developed rapidly in recent years, changing
people’s consumption habits by sharing resources such as cars, houses and tools
through online platforms. It brings convenience to life and reduces resource waste.
However, the sharing economy also faces challenges, such as poor management
and low public morality of some users. Governments need to strengthen
supervision to promote its healthy development.
满分范文模板
The rapidly developing sharing economy changes consumption habits by
sharing online resources, bringing convenience and reducing waste. Facing poor
management and low public morality, it needs government supervision for healthy
development. (53 words)
详细解析（考查四大能力）
信息提炼能力：模板核心要点——①共享经济近年快速发展，通过线上平台共
享资源改变消费习惯；②优势（便利生活、减少资源浪费）；③挑战（管理不善、
部分用户公德低）；④建议政府加强监管促健康发展。考查排除具体共享资源列举
（汽车、房屋）的能力。
语言转换能力：考查同义替换（“developed rapidly”→“rapidly developing”、
“changing”→“transforming”、“strengthen supervision”→“enhance regulation”）、
句式整合（将“by sharing resources such as... through online platforms”整合为“by
sharing online resources”）、挑战概括（ “poor management and low public
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高考英语新题型
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morality”对应原文）的能力。
逻辑整合能力：考查梳理“发展现状→核心优势→面临挑战→解决建议”逻辑链
的能力，要求用现在分词“bringing”衔接优势，用“facing”衔接挑战，逻辑连贯。
精准表达能力：考查用“sharing online resources”精准概括共享经济核心模式、
用“government supervision”准确对应解决措施的能力，要求挑战表述不遗漏关键问
题。
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试题模板 14：文化类·非遗数字化传播的必要性
试题模板框架
Read the following passage. Summarize the main idea and the main point(s)
of the passage in no more than 60 words. Use your own words as far as possible.
原文：Intangible cultural heritage (ICH) is a precious part of national culture,
but it is facing the risk of being lost due to the lack of effective communication.
Digital communication methods, such as online exhibitions and short videos, can
break the limitations of time and space, making ICH more accessible to the public.
Digital communication also attracts young people’s attention and helps inherit ICH.
We should promote the digital communication of ICH.
满分范文模板
National intangible cultural heritage (ICH) faces loss due to ineffective
communication. Digital methods (online exhibitions, etc.) break time-space
limitations, attract youth and aid inheritance, so its digital communication should
be promoted. (54 words)
详细解析（考查四大能力）
信息提炼能力：模板核心要点——①非遗是民族文化宝贵部分，因传播不力面
临失传风险；②数字化传播优势（打破时空限制、让公众易接触、吸引年轻人、助
力传承）；③建议推动非遗数字化传播。考查排除具体数字化方式列举（短视频）
的能力。
语言转换能力：考查同义替换（ “precious part”→“valuable part”、 “lack of
effective communication”→“ineffective communication”、 “aid inheritance”→“help
inherit”）、句式整合（用括号列举数字化方式并加“etc.”概括）、风险表述简化
（“faces loss”对应原文“risk of being lost”）的能力。
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高考英语新题型
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逻辑整合能力：考查梳理“非遗现状（价值+风险）→数字化优势→推广建议”逻
辑链的能力，要求用“due to”衔接风险原因，用逗号衔接优势并列关系，用“so”衔接
优势与建议，逻辑清晰。
精准表达能力：考查用“intangible cultural heritage (ICH)”精准界定概念、用
“break time-space limitations”准确概括数字化核心优势的能力，要求优势列举不遗
漏关键要点（吸引年轻人、助力传承）。
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试题模板 15：教育类·课外活动的重要性
试题模板框架
Read the following passage. Summarize the main idea and the main point(s)
of the passage in no more than 60 words. Use your own words as far as possible.
原文： Some people think that students should focus solely on academic
studies, but in fact, extracurricular activities are equally important. Extracurricular
activities can help students develop practical skills, relieve learning pressure,
cultivate hobbies and broaden their horizons. Taking part in sports teams, for
example, can improve physical fitness and teamwork spirit. Students should
balance academic studies and extracurricular activities.
满分范文模板
Contrary to the view that students should only focus on academics,
extracurricular activities are equally important, fostering practical skills, relieving
pressure and broadening horizons. Students should balance both. (51 words)
详细解析（考查四大能力）
信息提炼能力：模板核心要点——①有人认为学生应专注学业，实则课外活动
同等重要；②课外活动价值（培养实践能力、缓解压力、培养爱好、拓宽视野）；
③建议平衡学业与课外活动。考查排除具体举例（加入运动队）的能力。
语言转换能力：考查同义替换（ “focus solely on”→“only focus on”、
“academic studies”→“academics”、 “fostering”→“developing”）、句式整合（将
“can help students develop...”整合为伴随状语 “fostering...”）、争议观点简化
（“contrary to the view that...”对应原文表述）的能力。
逻辑整合能力：考查梳理“争议观点→课外活动价值→平衡建议”逻辑链的能力，
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高考英语新题型
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要求用“contrary to”衔接争议观点，用逗号衔接价值并列关系，用“both”指代“学业与
课外活动”，逻辑紧凑。
精准表达能力：考查用“equally important”精准界定课外活动地位、用“balance
both”准确概括建议核心的能力，要求价值合并不遗漏关键要点（实践能力、缓解压
力、拓宽视野）。
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议论文类试题模板
试题模板 16：社会类·过度使用手机的危害
试题模板框架
Read the following passage. Summarize the main idea and the main point(s)
of the passage in no more than 60 words. Use your own words as far as possible.
原文：Overusing mobile phones has become a common social problem,
causing various harms to people’s physical and mental health. Physically, staring
at the screen for a long time can lead to eye fatigue, myopia and cervical
spondulicks. Mentally, it may reduce people’s face-to-face communication ability,
cause loneliness and distract attention. People should control the time of using
mobile phones.
满分范文模板
Overusing mobile phones, a common social problem, harms physical (eye
fatigue, myopia) and mental health (reduced communication, loneliness,
distraction). People should control their usage time. (52 words)
详细解析（考查四大能力）
信息提炼能力：模板核心要点——① 过度使用手机是常见社会问题；② 身心
危害（身体：眼疲劳、近视、颈椎病；心理：面对面沟通能力下降、孤独感、注意
力分散）；③ 建议控制使用时间。考查排除“staring at the screen for a long time”
等冗余原因细节的能力。
语 言 转 换 能 力 ： 考 查 同 义 替 换 （ “overusing”→“excessive use of” 、
“harms”→“causes harms to”、“usage time”→“time of using”）、句式整合（用括号
分类列举身心危害）、危害概括（合并同类项，如身体危害列举核心项）的能力。
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高考英语新题型
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逻辑整合能力：考查梳理“问题定性→身心危害→解决建议”逻辑链的能力，要
求用括号清晰区分危害类型，用句号分隔危害与建议，逻辑层次分明。
精准表达能力：考查用“reduced communication, loneliness, distraction”精准
概括心理危害、用“control their usage time”准确概括建议核心的能力，要求危害列
举不遗漏关键类别（身体、心理）。
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试题模板 17：文化类·传统文化传承的意义
试题模板框架
Read the following passage. Summarize the main idea and the main point(s)
of the passage in no more than 60 words. Use your own words as far as possible.
原文：Traditional culture is the spiritual treasure of a nation, reflecting its
history and values. Inheriting traditional culture is of great significance for
enhancing national identity and promoting cultural confidence. However, affected
by foreign cultures, some traditional cultures are facing the risk of being lost. We
should attach great importance to the inheritance of traditional culture.
满分范文模板
Traditional culture, a nation’s spiritual treasure reflecting history and values, is
significant for enhancing national identity. Faced with loss risk due to foreign
culture impact, its inheritance should be valued. (53 words)
详细解析（考查四大能力）
信息提炼能力：模板核心要点——①传统文化是民族精神财富，反映历史与价
值观；② 传承意义（增强民族认同感、提升文化自信）；③ 面临风险（受外来文
化冲击，有失传风险）；④ 建议重视传承。考查排除 “promoting cultural
confidence”等可合并的冗余语义的能力。
语言转换能力：考查同义替换（ “spiritual treasure”→“spiritual wealth”、
“enhancing”→“boosting”、“valued”→“attached great importance to”）、句式整合
（将“reflecting its history and values”整合为后置定语）、风险表述简化（“faced
with loss risk due to foreign culture impact”对应原文）的能力。
逻辑整合能力：考查梳理“文化定位→传承意义→面临风险→重视建议”逻辑链
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高考英语新题型
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的能力，要求用后置定语衔接文化定位与属性，用“faced with”衔接风险，逻辑连贯。
精准表达能力：考查用“a nation’s spiritual treasure”精准定位传统文化价值、
用“its inheritance”准确指代“传统文化传承”的能力，要求意义表述不遗漏核心要点
（民族认同感）。
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试题模板 18：社会类·心理健康服务的重要性
试题模板框架
Read the following passage. Summarize the main idea and the main point(s)
of the passage in no more than 60 words. Use your own words as far as possible.
原文： In modern society, people are facing increasing mental pressure,
making mental health services more important than ever. Mental health services
can help people relieve pressure, solve psychological problems and maintain
emotional stability. For teenagers, timely mental health guidance can prevent
psychological disorders. However, the supply of mental health services is
insufficient. Governments should increase investment to improve the service
system.
满分范文模板
Rising mental pressure in modern society highlights the importance of mental
health services, which relieve pressure, solve psychological problems and help
teenagers prevent disorders. Government investment is needed due to insufficient
supply. (56 words)
详细解析（考查四大能力）
信息提炼能力：模板核心要点——①现代社会心理压力增大，心理健康服务愈
发重要；② 服务作用（缓解压力、解决心理问题、帮青少年预防心理障碍）；③
现状（服务供给不足）；④ 建议政府增加投入完善体系。考查排除 “maintain
emotional stability”等可隐含的冗余语义的能力。
语言转换能力：考查同义替换（“increasing mental pressure”→“rising mental
pressure”、 “highlights”→“makes... more important”、 “insufficient supply”→“the
supply is insufficient”）、句式整合（用“which”衔接服务与作用）、现状与建议衔
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接（“due to”替代“however”）的能力。
逻辑整合能力：考查梳理“压力现状→服务重要性→服务作用→供给问题→解决
建议”逻辑链的能力，要求用“which”衔接服务与作用，用“due to”衔接问题与建议，
逻辑流畅。
精准表达能力：考查用“highlights the importance of”精准体现压力与服务的关
联、用“help teenagers prevent disorders”准确概括青少年群体的特殊作用的能力，
要求不遗漏关键群体（青少年）。
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试题模板 19：教育类·自主学习能力的培养
试题模板框架
Read the following passage. Summarize the main idea and the main point(s)
of the passage in no more than 60 words. Use your own words as far as possible.
原文：Cultivating students’ autonomous learning ability is an important goal
of modern education. Autonomous learning ability enables students to arrange
their study plans independently, explore knowledge actively and adapt to lifelong
learning. Many students lack autonomous learning ability, relying too much on
teachers’ guidance. Schools and parents should work together to help students
develop this ability.
满分范文模板
Cultivating students’ autonomous learning ability is a key goal of modern
education, helping them arrange study plans independently, explore knowledge
actively and adapt to lifelong learning. Many students lack it, over-relying on
teachers, so schools and parents should cooperate to develop it. (58 words)
详细解析（考查四大能力）
信息提炼能力：模板核心要点——①培养学生自主学习能力是现代教育重要目
标；② 该能力的作用（自主安排学习计划、主动探索知识、适应终身学习）；③
现状（多数学生缺乏，过度依赖教师指导）；④建议（家校合作培养）。考查排除
“rely too much on teachers’ guidance”中“too much”等冗余修饰细节的能力。
语 言 转 换 能 力 ： 考 查 同 义 替 换 （ “important goal”→“key goal” 、
“enables”→“helping” 、 “work together”→“cooperate” ） 、 句 式 整 合 （ 将
“Autonomous learning ability enables students to...”整合为伴随状语 “helping
them...”）、指代简化（用“it”指代“autonomous learning ability”）的能力。
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高考英语新题型
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逻辑整合能力：考查梳理“教育目标→能力作用→现状问题→解决建议”逻辑链
的能力，要求用逗号衔接目标与作用，用“so”衔接现状与建议，逻辑紧凑且层次分
明。
精准表达能力：考查用“autonomous learning ability”精准界定核心概念、用
“cooperate to develop it”准确概括家校合作的核心措施的能力，要求指代清晰（“it”
无歧义），不遗漏能力核心作用。
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试题模板 20：教育类·挫折教育的价值
试题模板框架
Read the following passage. Summarize the main idea and the main point(s)
of the passage in no more than 60 words. Use your own words as far as possible.
原文：In the process of students’ growth, setback education is indispensable.
Many parents overprotect their children, making them unable to bear difficulties
and setbacks. Setback education can help students cultivate anti-frustration ability,
strengthen willpower and learn to solve problems independently. Schools and
parents should attach importance to setback education to promote students’
healthy growth.
满分范文模板
Setback education is indispensable for students’ growth. Overprotected by
parents, students can’t bear difficulties, while setback education fosters their anti-
frustration ability and willpower. Schools and parents should value it for their
healthy growth. (57 words)
详细解析（考查四大能力）
信息提炼能力：模板核心要点——① 挫折教育对学生成长不可或缺；② 现状
（家长过度保护导致学生无法承受困难挫折）；③挫折教育的作用（培养抗挫折能
力、增强意志力、学会独立解决问题）；④建议（家校重视以促健康成长）。考查
排除“learn to solve problems independently”等可隐含的冗余语义的能力。
语 言 转 换 能 力 ： 考 查 同 义 替 换 （ “indispensable”→“necessary” 、
“overprotect”→“overprotect”、“value”→“attach importance to”）、句式重构（将被
动关系“many parents overprotect their children”转化为“overprotected by parents”
后置定语）、对比关系简化（用“while”衔接现状与教育作用）的能力。
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高考英语新题型
高考英语新题型解析模板 41 41
逻辑整合能力：考查梳理“教育定位→现状问题→教育作用→家校建议”逻辑链
的能力，要求用“while”清晰衔接转折对比关系，用“for”衔接建议与目标，逻辑连贯。
精准表达能力：考查用 “anti-frustration ability”精准概括核心能力、用
“overprotected by parents”准确描述现状的能力，要求建议对象（家校）明确，目
标（学生健康成长）清晰。
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试题模板 21：社会类·网络谣言的危害与治理
试题模板框架
Read the following passage. Summarize the main idea and the main point(s)
of the passage in no more than 60 words. Use your own words as far as possible.
原文：With the development of the Internet, online rumors have spread
widely, bringing great harm to society and individuals. They may cause public
panic, damage others’ reputations and disrupt social order. To curb online rumors,
governments should strengthen supervision, and individuals should improve their
ability to distinguish right from wrong and refuse to spread rumors.
满分范文模板
Online rumors spread widely with Internet development, harming society and
individuals by causing panic, damaging reputations and disrupting order.
Governments and individuals should take corresponding measures to curb them.
(53 words)
详细解析（考查四大能力）
信息提炼能力：模板核心要点——① 互联网发展使网络谣言广泛传播；② 危
害（引发公众恐慌、损害他人名誉、扰乱社会秩序）；③治理措施（政府加强监管、
个人提升辨别能力并拒绝传播）。考查直接提炼核心危害与措施，无冗余细节需排
除。
语言转换能力：考查同义替换（ “spread widely”→“spread extensively”、
“curb”→“restrain”、 “corresponding measures”→“relevant actions”）、句式整合
（将“bringing great harm to... by...”整合为“harming... by...”伴随状语）、措施概括
（“take corresponding measures”对应政府与个人的不同行动）的能力。
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高考英语新题型
高考英语新题型解析模板 43 43
逻辑整合能力：考查梳理“传播背景→核心危害→治理措施”逻辑链的能力，要
求用“by”衔接危害的具体表现，用句号分隔危害与措施，逻辑层次清晰。
精准表达能力：考查用“causing panic, damaging reputations and disrupting
order”精准概括谣言三大危害、用“corresponding measures”准确涵盖家校两类主体
措施的能力，要求语义无遗漏。
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试题模板 22：文化类·文化交流的重要性
试题模板框架
Read the following passage. Summarize the main idea and the main point(s)
of the passage in no more than 60 words. Use your own words as far as possible.
原 文 ： Cultural exchange is an important way to promote mutual
understanding between different nations. It helps spread national culture, absorb
the essence of other cultures and enrich the diversity of world culture. In the
globalized era, strengthening cultural exchange is conducive to promoting world
peace and development. We should actively carry out cultural exchange activities.
满分范文模板
Cultural exchange, promoting mutual national understanding, spreads
national culture, absorbs foreign essence and enriches world cultural diversity. It
benefits world peace in globalization, so we should actively conduct it. (54 words)
详细解析（考查四大能力）
信息提炼能力：模板核心要点——①文化交流是促进国家间相互理解的重要方
式；② 作用（传播民族文化、吸收外来文化精髓、丰富世界文化多样性）；③ 时
代意义（全球化时代利于世界和平发展）；④建议（积极开展文化交流活动）。考
查排除“an important way”中“important”等冗余修饰的能力。
语言转换能力：考查同义替换（ “promote”→“boost”、 “absorb the essence
of”→“absorb foreign essence”、“conduct”→“carry out”）、句式整合（将“it helps...”
整合为并列谓语）、时代背景简化（“in the globalized era”→“in globalization”）的
能力。
逻辑整合能力：考查梳理“交流定位→核心作用→时代意义→实践建议”逻辑链
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高考英语新题型
高考英语新题型解析模板 45 45
的能力，要求用逗号衔接并列作用，用“so”衔接意义与建议，逻辑流畅。
精准表达能力：考查用“mutual national understanding”精准概括核心目标、用
“world cultural diversity”准确表述关键作用的能力，要求时代意义与建议的关联清
晰。
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试题模板 23：社会类·城市共享单车的利弊与规范
试题模板框架
Read the following passage. Summarize the main idea and the main point(s)
of the passage in no more than 60 words. Use your own words as far as possible.
原文：Shared bikes have brought great convenience to urban travel, helping
people solve the “last mile” problem and reduce environmental pollution. However,
they also bring problems such as random parking and damage. To standardize
the development of shared bikes, governments should improve relevant
regulations and users should enhance their sense of responsibility.
满分范文模板
Shared bikes bring convenience to urban travel by solving the “last mile”
problem and reducing pollution, but cause random parking and damage.
Governments and users should take measures to standardize their development.
(55 words)
详细解析（考查四大能力）
信息提炼能力：模板核心要点——① 共享单车为城市出行带来便利（解决“最
后一公里”、减少污染）；②弊端（乱停放、车辆损坏）；③规范措施（政府完善
法规、用户提升责任意识）。考查直接提炼核心利弊与措施，无冗余细节需排除。
语言转换能力：考查同义替换（ “great convenience”→“convenience”、
“standardize”→“regulate”、 “take measures”→“adopt actions”）、句式整合（将
“helping people solve...”整合为 “by solving...”方式状语）、措施概括（ “take
measures”对应政府与用户的不同行动）的能力。
逻辑整合能力：考查梳理“积极作用→存在弊端→规范措施”逻辑链的能力，要
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高考英语新题型
高考英语新题型解析模板 47 47
求用“but”清晰衔接转折关系，用不定式“to standardize”明确措施目标，逻辑层次分
明。
精准表达能力：考查用 “the ‘last mile’ problem”精准概括核心便利点、用
“random parking and damage”准确描述弊端的能力，要求措施主体（政府、用户）
明确，目标清晰。
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试题模板 24：教育类·家校合作的必要性
试题模板框架
Read the following passage. Summarize the main idea and the main point(s)
of the passage in no more than 60 words. Use your own words as far as possible.
原文：The growth of students cannot be separated from the joint efforts of
schools and families. Schools are responsible for imparting knowledge and
cultivating abilities, while families play an important role in cultivating students’
good habits and moral qualities. Lack of home-school cooperation may lead to
inconsistent educational concepts and affect educational effects. We should
strengthen home-school cooperation to promote students’ all-round development.
满分范文模板
Students’ growth needs joint school-family efforts: schools impart knowledge
and cultivate abilities, families foster habits and morality. Lack of cooperation
affects effects, so we should strengthen it for their all-round development. (53
words)
详细解析（考查四大能力）
信息提炼能力：模板核心要点——① 学生成长需家校共同努力；② 家校分工
（学校传知培能、家庭养习惯育品德）；③缺失合作的影响（教育理念不一致、影
响教育效果）；④ 建议（加强合作促全面发展）。考查排除 “the growth of
students cannot be separated from”中“cannot be separated from”等冗余表述的能
力。
语 言 转 换 能 力 ： 考 查 同 义 替 换 （ “joint efforts”→“joint efforts” 、
“impart”→“teach”、“foster”→“cultivate”）、句式简化（用冒号衔接分工说明）、语
义 合 并 （ “inconsistent educational concepts and affect educational
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高考英语新题型
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effects”→“affects effects”）的能力。
逻辑整合能力：考查梳理“成长需求→家校分工→缺失影响→合作建议”逻辑链
的能力，要求用冒号清晰衔接核心需求与具体分工，用“so”衔接影响与建议，逻辑
紧凑。
精准表达能力：考查用 “joint school-family efforts”精准概括核心需求、用
“impart knowledge and cultivate abilities”准确描述学校职责的能力，要求分工清晰，
建议目标明确。
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试题模板 25：社会类·青少年网络沉迷的治理
试题模板框架
Read the following passage. Summarize the main idea and the main point(s)
of the passage in no more than 60 words. Use your own words as far as possible.
原文：Teenagers’ Internet addiction has become a prominent social problem,
affecting their physical and mental health and academic performance. The main
reasons include the allure of the Internet and the lack of family supervision. To
solve this problem, families should strengthen supervision, schools should carry
out guidance activities, and society should create a healthy network environment.
满分范文模板
Teenagers’ Internet addiction, a prominent social problem, harms their
physical and mental health and studies. Due to Internet allure and lack of family
supervision, families, schools and society should work together to solve it. (52
words)
详细解析（考查四大能力）
信息提炼能力：模板核心要点——① 青少年网络沉迷是突出社会问题；② 危
害（影响身心健康、学业表现）；③ 主要原因（网络诱惑、家庭监管缺失）；④
治理措施（家校社协同发力）。考查排除“the main reasons include”中“the main”等
冗余修饰的能力。
语言转换能力：考查同义替换（prominent→outstanding、harms→affects、
work together→cooperate）、句式整合（用 due to衔接原因与问题）、措施概括
（families, schools and society should work together对应三类主体行动）的能力。
逻辑整合能力：考查梳理“问题定性→核心危害→主要原因→治理措施”逻辑链
上海卷·概要写作 050
高考英语新题型
高考英语新题型解析模板 51 51
的能力，要求用“due to”清晰衔接原因与问题，用逗号衔接问题与措施，逻辑流畅。
精准表达能力：考查用 “Internet addiction”精准界定核心问题、用 “work
together”准确概括协同治理的能力，要求危害与原因表述无遗漏，措施主体明确。
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记叙文类试题模板
试题模板 26：成长经历类·第一次独立解决问题
试题模板框架
Read the following passage. Summarize the main idea and the main point(s)
of the passage in no more than 60 words. Use your own words as far as possible.
原文：Last summer vacation, I forgot to bring my key when I got home, and
my parents were not at home. At first, I felt anxious, but then I tried to calm down
and called my neighbor for help. With the neighbor’s guidance, I contacted the
lock picker and got into the house. This experience made me realize that I should
learn to stay calm and solve problems independently.
满分范文模板
Last summer vacation, I was locked out without keys and parents. Anxious at
first, I calmed down, asked the neighbor for help and contacted a lock picker. The
experience taught me to stay calm and solve problems independently. (56 words)
详细解析（考查四大能力）
信息提炼能力：模板核心要点——①时间（去年暑假）、事件（忘带钥匙且父
母不在家被锁门外）；②过程（初期焦虑→冷静→求助邻居→联系开锁师傅进门）；
③ 感悟（学会冷静、独立解决问题）。考查排除“with the neighbor’s guidance”等
冗余细节的能力。
语言转换能力：考查同义替换（ “forgot to bring my key”→“was locked out
without keys”、“called my neighbor for help”→“asked the neighbor for help”）、句
式简化（将“at first, I felt anxious, but then I tried to calm down”整合为“anxious at
first, I calmed down”）、事件概括（“got into the house”隐含于过程中）的能力。
上海卷·概要写作 052
高考英语新题型
高考英语新题型解析模板 53 53
逻辑整合能力：考查梳理“事件背景→过程变化→感悟收获”逻辑链的能力，要
求用时间顺序自然衔接事件发展，用句号分隔过程与感悟，逻辑清晰。
精准表达能力：考查用“was locked out”精准概括核心事件、用“taught me to
stay calm and solve problems independently”准确提炼感悟的能力，要求时间、事
件要素完整。
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试题模板 27：社会见闻类·陌生人的暖心帮助
试题模板框架
Read the following passage. Summarize the main idea and the main point(s)
of the passage in no more than 60 words. Use your own words as far as possible.
原文：Last Friday, I fell down and hurt my knee when I was riding a bike to
school. A kind passer-by stopped, helped me up and asked about my condition.
He also helped me push the bike to the nearby clinic. This warm experience made
me believe that there are many kind people in the world and we should pass on
kindness.
满分范文模板
Last Friday, I fell off my bike to school and hurt my knee. A kind passer-by
helped me up, asked about my condition and pushed my bike to a nearby clinic,
making me believe in kindness and the need to pass it on. (57 words)
详细解析（考查四大能力）
信息提炼能力：模板核心要点——①时间（上周五）、事件（骑车上学摔倒伤
膝盖）；②关键情节（陌生人停车救助：扶起、询问状况、推 bike去附近诊所）；
③感悟（相信世间有善意、应传递善意）。考查直接提炼核心情节与感悟，无冗余
细节需排除。
语言转换能力：考查同义替换（“fell down and hurt my knee”→“fell off my bike
and hurt my knee”、“kind passer-by”→“kind stranger”）、句式整合（将感悟句整
合为现在分词“making me...”伴随状语）、事件简化（“riding a bike to school”→“to
school”隐含骑行方式）的能力。
逻辑整合能力：考查梳理“事件发生→他人救助→感悟收获”逻辑链的能力，要
上海卷·概要写作 054
高考英语新题型
高考英语新题型解析模板 55 55
求用时间顺序衔接事件与救助，用伴随状语衔接救助与感悟，逻辑连贯。
精准表达能力：考查用“fell off my bike”精准描述事件、用“pass on kindness”
准确概括感悟核心的能力，要求救助细节完整，感悟语义清晰。
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试题模板 28：校园生活类·一次成功的小组合作
试题模板框架
Read the following passage. Summarize the main idea and the main point(s)
of the passage in no more than 60 words. Use your own words as far as possible.
原文：Last month, our class had a group project on environmental protection.
At first, our group had different opinions and couldn’t cooperate well. Later, we
communicated fully and divided the tasks reasonably. Finally, we completed the
project successfully and won praise from the teacher. This experience let me
know the importance of teamwork and effective communication.
满分范文模板
Last month, our class did an environmental protection group project. We
initially had disagreements but communicated fully and divided tasks reasonably,
completing it successfully and winning teacher’s praise. I learned the importance
of teamwork and communication. (58 words)
详细解析（考查四大能力）
信息提炼能力：模板核心要点——①时间（上个月）、事件（班级环保小组项
目）；②过程（初期意见分歧→充分沟通→合理分工→成功完成获老师表扬）；③
感悟（明白团队合作与有效沟通的重要性）。考查排除“couldn’t cooperate well”等
冗余表述的能力。
语言转换能力：考查同义替换（“had a group project”→“did an environmental
protection group project”、“different opinions”→“disagreements”）、句式简化（将
“at first... later...” 整 合 为 “initially... but...” ） 、 语 义 合 并 （ “effective
communication”→“communication”隐含有效）的能力。
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高考英语新题型
高考英语新题型解析模板 57 57
逻辑整合能力：考查梳理“项目背景→过程变化→成果与感悟”逻辑链的能力，
要求用“but”衔接过程转折，用逗号衔接过程与成果，逻辑层次分明。
精准表达能力：考查用“environmental protection group project”精准界定事件、
用“the importance of teamwork and communication”准确概括感悟的能力，要求过
程关键节点完整，成果表述清晰。
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试题模板 29：实践体验类·第一次做志愿者
试题模板框架
Read the following passage. Summarize the main idea and the main point(s)
of the passage in no more than 60 words. Use your own words as far as possible.
原文：During the National Day holiday, I participated in a volunteer activity in
the community, helping the elderly clean their rooms and chat with them. At first, I
was nervous, but the elder's kindness made me relax. I felt happy when I saw
their smiling faces. This experience made me realize that helping others can bring
happiness to both others and myself.
满分范文模板
During National Day holiday, I volunteered in the community, helping the
elderly clean rooms and chat. Nervous at first, I relaxed due to their kindness and
felt happy seeing their smiles. I learned helping others brings mutual happiness.
(53 words)
详细解析（考查四大能力）
信息提炼能力：模板核心要点——①时间（国庆假期）、事件（社区志愿者活
动，帮老人打扫房间、聊天）；②过程（初期紧张→因老人善意放松→看到笑容感
到开心）；③ 感悟（帮助他人能给双方带来快乐）。考查排除“participated in a
volunteer activity”中“participated in”等冗余表述的能力。
语 言 转 换 能 力 ： 考 查 同 义 替 换 （ “participated in a volunteer
activity”→“volunteered”、“made me relax”→“relaxed”）、句式简化（将“at first, I
was nervous, but...”整合为 “nervous at first, I relaxed...”）、语义合并（ “bring
happiness to both others and myself”→“brings mutual happiness”）的能力。
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高考英语新题型
高考英语新题型解析模板 59 59
逻辑整合能力：考查梳理“活动背景→过程感受→感悟收获”逻辑链的能力，要
求用时间顺序衔接活动与感受，用句号分隔感受与感悟，逻辑流畅。
精准表达能力：考查用 “volunteered in the community”精准描述事件、用
“mutual happiness”准确概括感悟核心的能力，要求活动内容与感受要素完整。
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试题模板 30：成长感悟类·克服困难学会新技能
试题模板框架
Read the following passage. Summarize the main idea and the main point(s)
of the passage in no more than 60 words. Use your own words as far as possible.
原文：I wanted to learn to swim last summer, but I was afraid of water at first.
My coach encouraged me and taught me basic skills patiently. I practiced hard
every day and gradually overcame my fear. Finally, I could swim freely. This
experience made me understand that perseverance can help us overcome
difficulties.
满分范文模板
Last summer, I wanted to learn swimming but was afraid of water.
Encouraged by my coach who taught me basic skills, I practiced hard, overcame
fear and swam freely. I learned perseverance helps overcome difficulties. (54
words)
详细解析（考查四大能力）
信息提炼能力：模板核心要点——①时间（去年夏天）、事件（想学游泳但初期怕
水）；②过程（教练鼓励并教基础技能→每日刻苦练习→克服恐惧→自由游泳）；
③ 感悟（坚持能帮助克服困难）。考查排除“patiently” “gradually”等冗余修饰细节
的能力。
语言转换能力：考查同义替换（“learn to swim”→“learn swimming”、“overcame
my fear”→“overcame fear”）、句式整合（将教练的行为整合为后置定语
“encouraged by my coach who taught me basic skills”）、过程简化（合并练习与
克服恐惧的表述）的能力。
上海卷·概要写作 060
高考英语新题型
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逻辑整合能力：考查梳理“目标与困难→外界帮助→努力过程→成果与感悟”逻辑链
的能力，要求用过去分词衔接外界帮助，用逗号衔接过程与成果，逻辑紧凑。
精准表达能力：考查用“was afraid of water”精准描述核心困难、用“perseverance
helps overcome difficulties”准确概括感悟的能力，要求过程关键节点（教练帮助、
刻苦练习）完整。