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写作主题七　短文投稿
——发现失分短板
　　（2023·全国乙卷改编）学校英文报组织同学们分享自己在假期中学到
的新技能，请你以此为主题写一篇短文投稿。内容包括：
　　（1）简要描述；
　　（2）体验和感受。
注意：（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式作答。
Learning a New Skill
——探究失分原因
1. 学习的新技能缺乏实际意义
学习新技能范围很广，学生要学习积极的、正能量的技能，然而，有的
学生随意写技能，缺乏正确的价值观， 因而失分。如：
Addicted to computer games， I learned to play Ma Jiang with other students
on the Internet.
2. 对“新技能描述”要点理解有误
有些学生把题目要求中的“简要描述”误解为“新技能的介绍”，而不
是介绍学习新技能的过程描写。如：
Last summer， I learned the new skill of Chinese painting.As is known to
all， Chinese painting dates back to ancient times ...
——规范答题架构
投稿是投稿人根据征稿要求进行写作，所投稿件应紧贴主题，内容应新
颖、有趣、实用等。具体写作架构为：
——储备靓点表达
1. 吸引阅卷人的开头句——点明目的
①（2024·河南部分市质量预测）Last Sunday our school organized an
interesting tree-planting activity on campus.Almost all students took an
active part in it.
②（2024·江西部分高中联考）Our school recently launched a campaign
for garbage classification， aiming to raise our awareness of
environmental protection.
③Recently， we conducted a survey concerning different ways to learn
English beyond the classroom. The results are as follows.
2. 吸引阅卷人的篇中句——介绍基本情况
①（2024·成都诊断考试）We set out early in the morning and the sun was
shining brightly.As soon as we got there， we were divided into two
groups.
②（2024·河南六校质检）Shortly after we arrived there， we watched a
variety of vegetables in the greenhouses and picked some strawberries as
well.
③（2024·徐州模拟）What impressed us most were precious cultural
relics and priceless works of art in the Palace Museum， which were really a
feast for the eyes.
④Additionally， oceans are the lungs of our planet， providing most of the
oxygen we breathe.
3. 吸引阅卷人的结尾句——收获和感悟
①（2024·江西部分高中联考）It was through the campaign that I have
realized the significant impact that small individual actions， such as
proper garbage classification， can have on the environment.
②（2024·河南部分市质量预测）After the activity was over， we felt
tired but delighted.What a meaningful day we had！
③The experience made me realize that we make a living by what we get
but we make a life by what we give.
——研读满分佳作
Learning a New Skill
　　It is important for us to master some basic living skills to prepare us for our
future lives. That is why I learned how to cook during the May Day holiday.
　　Since my mother is skilled at cooking， I decided to learn from her. Early
in the morning we bought some ingredients， including some vegetables， meat
and a fish in the local market. Once we got back home， I began to wash and
cut them carefully. Under the guidance of my mother， I turned on the gas
cooker. I first stir-fried two vegetables. Then I cooked meat with potatoes. The
most difficult task to do was cook fish with tomatoes. However， I finally did it.
　　The moment I put the dishes on the table， my parents gave me a thumbs-
up. I felt so proud that I shared housework with my parents， which also
showed I had grown up.
——冲击满分作文
　　（2024·河北部分高中模拟）假定你是校英文广播站的小记者，上周你
校组织了给灾区学生捐赠爱心包裹的活动。请你写一篇短文报道此事，内
容包括：
　　（1）简要报道此活动（目的、时间、地点等）；
　　（2）举办该活动的意义。
注意：（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考范文：
　　To lend a helping hand to the disaster areas， our school organized a
campaign on the playground last Friday afternoon to call on us to donate “love
packages” to students there.
　　It turned out that the campaign was a great success.All the students took an
active part in the activity and made generous donations.Their donations ranged
from a variety of stationery and books to scarves， gloves and clothes.More
than 3，000 packages were collected in the end， which will surely send our
love to the disaster areas.
　　The activity serves as a reminder that we should always think of helping
those in need.Obviously， it is through making a difference to others’ lives
that we can make our own lives meaningful.