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热考话题二 人与自我——成长蜕变
2021年6月浙江卷通过个人薪水话题,强调个人成长和对劳动的认
识。2022年新高考卷讲了大卫克服障碍,战胜自我,最终参加比赛的故
事。2023年新课标卷讲了作者在老师的鼓励下参加写作比赛,最终获奖的
故事。2024年1月浙江卷讲述把大目标分成若干个小目标,然后一个接一
个地去解决问题。
一、谋好篇——续写情节安排
【思维建模】
二、写好句——细节佳句积累
(一)成长前的烦恼
1. 自我怀疑
As I walked into the classroom, my heart raced with nervousness (我因
紧张心跳加速).I couldn’t shake the feeling (无法摆脱这种感觉)
that my classmates were judging me, and I struggled to find my place
among them. Doubts and insecurities hovered in my mind (怀疑和不安
全感在我的脑海中盘旋), making it difficult for me to focus on anything
else. The fear of rejection weighed heavily on my shoulders, causing me
to doubt every decision I made (导致我对自己的每一个决定都产生怀疑).
情节走向:走进教室,心跳加速→感到同学们在评判我→心中充满怀疑
和不安全感→无法专注于其他事情→怀疑自己的每一个决定
2. 负面情绪
I burst out of the door (冲出门), tears streaming down my cheeks
(眼泪顺着脸颊流淌). Before Mom stopped me,I stormed into my room
and slammed the door shut (砰地关上了门) behind me. I threw myself
down on the bed (扑到床上)and my body was shaking with sobs (身
子随着哭泣抖动)and buried my face in the pillow (把脸埋进枕头里).
情节走向:我冲出门,泪流满面→冲进房间关上门→扑到床上哭起来
(二)成长中的经历
1. 勇敢坚定促蜕变
To everyone’s joy, he reached the final line and ranked the 20th.It was no more important whether he won the first place or not (他是否赢得第一名不再重要).It was his bravery and strong faith that could make something unusual happen finally (正是他的勇敢和坚定的信念最终使一些不同寻常的事情发生了). He conquered his fears and broke the physical and mental barriers (突破了身心障碍) that had once held him back.
情节走向:他到达终点→是否赢得第一名不再重要→勇敢和坚定的信念
让不同寻常的事情发生了→他克服了恐惧并突破了身心障碍
2. 战胜恐惧促蜕变
The crowd watched in awe, their applause and cheer resounding in the
hall (掌声和欢呼声回荡在大厅里).Facing the overwhelming response
(面对极其强烈的反应), I knew that I had conquered my fears. Yes,
the unexpected discouragement can be a blessing if we have belief in
ourselves (相信自己) and never give up our dreams (永不放弃梦
想).
情节走向:人们鼓掌并欢呼→我战胜了自己的恐惧→相信自己,永不放
弃梦想
3. 积极心态促蜕变
Participating in this long-distance race posed a tremendous challenge (构
成极大的挑战) for David. He understood that he needed to overcome not
only his physical limitations but also the psychological fears that held him
back. Nevertheless, he chose to confront these obstacles head-on (选择
直面这些障碍) rather than shy away from them. He began to enjoy the
challenge (开始享受这个挑战), enjoying the opportunity to test his
limits and prove to himself what he was truly capable of achieving.
情节走向:参加比赛是一个极大的挑战→需要克服身体和心理上的障碍
→选择直面障碍→开始享受挑战
(三)成长后的感悟
1. Now, I am proud of what I look like and much happier, because I have
realized it is your personality that decides who you truly are (你的个性
决定你会成为什么样的人).
2. If you are still trapped in the worry, do not be depressed but let the thing
go and try to challenge yourself (让事情过去,试着挑战自己) right
now.
3. Not until then did I realize that difficulties are an important part of life and
that they can actually serve as valuable opportunities for growth and self-
improvement (成为成长和自我提升的宝贵机会).
4. The journey to success is not smooth (通往成功的道路不是平坦的).It
is full of challenges and difficulties, which we should be brave to face
(我们应该勇敢面对). As long as we don’t give up and make every
effort to overcome all the difficulties, we will achieve our goal(s)
finally.
5. It’s never too late to go for your dreams (追逐你的梦想).As long as
you grasp every opportunity (抓住每个机会) and take full advantage of
it, you will stand a chance to realize your dreams (实现你的梦想).
6. Determination and optimism are what it takes to conquer your fear and
accomplish your goal(s) (决心和乐观是克服你的恐惧和实现你的目
标所需要的).