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40分写作规范增分练（五）
（建议用时40分钟）
第一节（满分15分）
　　（2024·安徽六校联考）中国体育代表团在巴黎奥运会获得40金、
27银、24铜共91枚奖牌，取得了空前的成功。你校微信公众号打算制
作一则相关英文视频，现征集该视频的文字稿。请你写一篇短文投
稿，内容包括：
　　（1）报道中国队所取得的巨大成功；
　　（2）说明这一成功的意义所在。
注意：（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考范文：
　　China’s sports delegation/Team China has won a total of 91 medals — 40
gold， 27 silver and 24 bronze medals at the Paris Olympic Games in 2024，
marking the country’s best performance since it comprehensively participated
in a Summer Olympic Games abroad in 1984.
　　There is no doubt that China’s splendid achievement has a far-reaching
significance.For one thing， a country’s sports level/power reflects its
comprehensive strength.With such a remarkable success， we have every
reason to believe that the Chinese nation has achieved the tremendous
transformation from standing up and growing prosperous to becoming
strong.For another， the Olympic athletes’ success will spread the Olympic
spirit across the country and encourage all of us to strive constantly to challenge
ourselves and surpass ourselves in whatever we are doing.
第二节（满分25分）
　　阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一
篇完整的短文。
　　（2024·辽宁适应性测试）The words rang in my ears for days.With her
arms around me as I fell apart and my world drowned in black， my doctor
whispered to me，“Leah， thousands of women have been where you are and
thought it was the end.They are still here.”
　　I was like a zombie （僵尸）.My feet moved， I continued breathing，
but I couldn’t think.When I saw her face as I walked into her office， I knew
immediately it was cancer.I began to wonder what I had done wrong in my life
to deserve such a sentence.
　　The night before my operation， I was quiet on the outside， but inside I
was screaming.It was then that I came to grips with the possibility of my death.
　　I had been on the operating table for nearly ten hours and I knew my body
would never be the same.My sister， mother and I huddled （依偎） with our
arms around one another， praying for the strength to accept this new
sentence.My tears had begun again and the world seemed to go silent.
　　It was at this time I finally began to see that I had a mental strength， a
positive attitude my mother had ingrained in me.Sitting quietly alone in my
room one day， I thought about my year off from work and my year of
treatment.Then I saw my violin.It seemed to scream at me，“Here I am！
Look at me！”
　　It was a gift， given to me for my birthday one year by a good friend.The
old violin had been restrung and was waiting for me to fulfill a dream I never
had time to pursue.For me， the sound of a violin was the closest sound to
angels singing.I told myself I would finally be given the time to make mine
sing.
注意：1.续写词数应为150个左右；
2. 请按如下格式作答。
　　I began to pursue this goal as I signed up for the violin class at the local
community college. 　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　A few months later， as I sat in the college band， my dream became a
reality. 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
参考范文：
　　I began to pursue this goal as I signed up for the violin class at the local
community college.Now， I had something meaningful to do with my
fingers， with my mind， something that made my heart sing when I felt the
strings vibrate under my fingertips.To me， the violin was medicine for my soul
and spirit.I kept practicing playing the violin whenever I was free.While
playing the violin， I forgot all my worries and problems.It lightened my fear，
replacing it with hope.
　　A few months later， as I sat in the college band， my dream became a
reality.Those beautiful melodies were being played by me， by my fingers， as
I was surrounded by my musician friends.The audience applauded my
performance for a long time， who thought highly of my battling against cancer
and mastering the violin skill.I knew deep inside me that there was a light and
an end to this journey.The strings of my violin had pulled me through.