40分写作规范增分练（一）
（建议用时40分钟）
第一节（满分15分）
你校正在组织英语作文比赛。请你以A Voluntary Activity为题写一篇短文参赛，内容包括：
（1）这次活动的经过；（2）你的收获和体会。
注意：（1）写作词数应为80个左右；（2）请按如下格式作答。
A Voluntary Activity
第二节（满分25分）
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
（2024·云南“三诊”联考）“You’re fired！” Andrew Chilton wasn’t joking.At that moment， the high school junior wanted his personal care attendant， Christy Chachere， out of his life forever.Gone.He didn’t want her telling him， he didn’t need help using the computer， and he could write his own term papers.Enough already.
“You’re fired！” He said it again for extra emphasis.Christy didn’t flinch （畏缩）.She needed this job.Huricane Katrina had destroyed her savings along with her house.But the retired PE teacher wasn’t frightened.“I’m a tough nut，” she says today.“You know， I’ve taught middle schoolers.” And Andrew’s outburst？ It was music to her ears.Progress.She’d gotten through to him.
When Andrew was diagnosed with autism （自闭症）， at age eight， people told his mom， Cindy， to “get him on the list” for an attendant to provide after-school care.Someone to drive him to places and see that he was safe.In New Orleans， Louisiana， the wait can be years； the need is much more than the supply.Cindy chose a program through Volunteers of America， a national faith-based organization.
Even so， it was eight years before they were matched with Christy.In the meantime， Andrew’s family did their best to shelter him from life’s hardships.“I worried about him，” Cindy says. “I tended to hover a lot.”
There was a lot to worry about.Doctors and school officials predicted that Andrew might not even graduate from high school.Other questions were approaching.Would he ever have a job？ Live independently？ Cindy would do anything for her son.
Christy saw the problem right away.“Andrew wouldn’t take a step without his mother’s permission，” she remembers.“You have to let him fail，” she told the family. “It’s the only way he’s going to learn.To be able to do things on his own.”
No longer would Cindy write Andrew’s papers for him.His younger brother wouldn’t help him navigate the computer.Christy wouldn’t be helping him with homework either.It was a little scary to step back.Andrew complained.Loudly at times.
注意：1.续写词数应为150个左右；2.请按如下格式作答。
But then things began to change.
With the company of Christy for six years， Andrew has been developing well.
2 / 240分写作规范增分练（一）
（建议用时40分钟）
第一节（满分15分）
你校正在组织英语作文比赛。请你以A Voluntary Activity为题写一篇短文参赛，内容包括：
（1）这次活动的经过；
（2）你的收获和体会。
注意：（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式作答。
A Voluntary Activity
参考范文：
A Voluntary Activity
To better work for the good of the community， our class organized a voluntary activity last Saturday.We planned to do a thorough clean in the city square.
We set out early in the morning and the sun was shining brightly.As soon as we got there， we were divided into two groups.One group picked up rubbish on the ground， such as waste paper， cigarette ends and plastic bags.The other group removed the illegal advertisements on the poles and trees， which was a tough job.
After the activity was over， we felt tired but delighted.What a meaningful day we had！ It’s true that we make a living by what we get but we make a life by what we give.
第二节（满分25分）
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
（2024·云南“三诊”联考）“You’re fired！” Andrew Chilton wasn’t joking.At that moment， the high school junior wanted his personal care attendant， Christy Chachere， out of his life forever.Gone.He didn’t want her telling him， he didn’t need help using the computer， and he could write his own term papers.Enough already.
“You’re fired！” He said it again for extra emphasis.Christy didn’t flinch （畏缩）.She needed this job.Huricane Katrina had destroyed her savings along with her house.But the retired PE teacher wasn’t frightened.“I’m a tough nut，” she says today.“You know， I’ve taught middle schoolers.” And Andrew’s outburst？ It was music to her ears.Progress.She’d gotten through to him.
When Andrew was diagnosed with autism （自闭症）， at age eight， people told his mom， Cindy， to “get him on the list” for an attendant to provide after-school care.Someone to drive him to places and see that he was safe.In New Orleans， Louisiana， the wait can be years； the need is much more than the supply.Cindy chose a program through Volunteers of America， a national faith-based organization.
Even so， it was eight years before they were matched with Christy.In the meantime， Andrew’s family did their best to shelter him from life’s hardships.“I worried about him，” Cindy says. “I tended to hover a lot.”
There was a lot to worry about.Doctors and school officials predicted that Andrew might not even graduate from high school.Other questions were approaching.Would he ever have a job？ Live independently？ Cindy would do anything for her son.
Christy saw the problem right away.“Andrew wouldn’t take a step without his mother’s permission，” she remembers.“You have to let him fail，” she told the family. “It’s the only way he’s going to learn.To be able to do things on his own.”
No longer would Cindy write Andrew’s papers for him.His younger brother wouldn’t help him navigate the computer.Christy wouldn’t be helping him with homework either.It was a little scary to step back.Andrew complained.Loudly at times.
注意：1.续写词数应为150个左右；
2.请按如下格式作答。
But then things began to change.
With the company of Christy for six years， Andrew has been developing well.
参考范文：
But then things began to change. Andrew would come home from school， get a snack and start on his homework.He saw that Christy was really there for him.She wouldn’t do his papers for him.But she showed him how to get organized.And she coached him on how to deal with frustration and difficulties — to break work down into small pieces， so as not to be overwhelmed.How fortunate to have her！ “She understood autism，” Andrew says.“It turned out she was really nice.”
With the company of Christy for six years，Andrew has been developing well. Last spring Andrew moved into his own apartment after graduating from college.He’s working toward an associate’s degree in video game design.This past summer， he was a counselor at a sleepaway camp for kids with autism.He’s studying to get his learner’s permit to drive.At 25， he says life has never been better：“I’ve been blessed.” Andrew and Christy.They’ve done it together.No doubt about it.They’ve been doubly blessed.
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