写作主题四 活动邀请
——发现失分短板
（2022·新高考Ⅰ卷）假定你是校广播站英语节目“Talk and Talk”的负责人李华，请给外教Caroline写邮件邀请她做一次访谈。内容包括：
1.节目介绍；2.访谈的时间和话题。
注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.请按如下格式作答。
Dear Caroline，
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
——探究失分原因
1.开头不够简洁明了
本邀请信的开头应开门见山介绍李华，并简单说明写信目的。有些学生会介绍过于详细，出现无效信息。如：
I am Li Hua in charge of the English program “Talk and Talk” at our school broadcasting station.Our school broadcasting station is well received among the students， enriching our school lives. I’m writing to invite you to attend our program.中间一句就是多余的无效信息。
2.时间表述存在误差
①出现语法错误：如at 9 am on the next Sunday，当时间名词前有 this、 that、 last、 next、 every、 each等词修饰时，其前通常不用任何介词。其正确表达应该是：at 9 am the next Sunday；②表达方式不恰当：出于礼貌，写信人应该与对方协商一下时间是否方便。有些学生可能会忽略这一点，往往采用过于直白或命令式邀请。如：
Remember to attend our program then and you are welcome.这句话看上去很委婉，其实直接单方规定了邀约的时间，不属于礼貌交际。
尝试委婉表达：We would be honored if you could attend our party on Saturday evening， 3 July.
3.要点陈述过于宽泛
本文的要点包含节目介绍与访谈话题，节目的内容介绍可以宽泛一些，但访谈的话题要具体，并且要具有可操作性。如：
宽泛表达：You are expected to talk about something you are interested in.
具体表达：You are expected to talk about how to improve the Chinese students’ communication skills in English.
——规范答题架构
邀请信是邀请收信人参加某项活动的书信，在写作时，语气要热情真挚，不要强人所难。具体写作架构为：
——储备靓点表达
1.吸引阅卷人的开头句——诚挚相邀，传递热情
①（2024·安徽江淮十校联考）Representing our school， I’d like to invite you to give us a speech on British culture on 25th this month.
②（2024·南京模拟）On behalf of our school， I feel honoured to invite you to give us a speech on your local cuisine on 25th this month.
③（2024·湖北八市模拟）I am Li Hua， chairman of the Students’ Union.I am more than delighted to invite you to participate in the upcoming teacher-student friendship basketball game at our school.
2.吸引阅卷人的篇中句——活动内容，详细安排
①Here are some details about this activity./Some details about this activity are as follows.
②（2024·湖北八市模拟）The game is scheduled to kick off at 2 pm next Friday afternoon at the school gymnasium.After a brief opening ceremony， the students and teachers will engage in a friendly competition.
③（2024·湖北八市模拟）Additionally， the game will not only be an opportunity for interaction and exchange between teachers and students but also a platform for everyone to relax and have fun.
3.吸引阅卷人的结尾句——期待接受邀请，早日回复
（2024·湖北八市模拟）I would appreciate it if you could take my invitation into consideration. Looking forward to your reply at your earliest convenience.
——研读满分佳作
Dear Caroline，
Being in charge of the English program “Talk and Talk” run by our school broadcast station， I feel much privileged to invite you to our program for a live talk show.
The program， meant to promote the interest of the students in English learning and broaden their horizons， is widely popular among us students.The interview will be held at 9 this coming Sunday morning， lasting about an hour.Your talk show can cover anything related to English， or what school life is like in your country.
I sincerely hope you can accept my invitation.
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
——冲击满分作文
（2024·衡水模拟）假定你是李华，你校将举行元旦联欢晚会。请你代表校学生会给你校外教Richard写一封邮件，内容包括：
（1）提出邀请；
（2）告知元旦晚会相关事项（时间、地点、参加人员、节目类型等）；
（3）表达感谢与期望。
注意：（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式作答。
Dear Richard，
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
参考范文：
Dear Richard，
I’m glad to inform you that the annual New Year’s Evening Party will be held in our school.On behalf of the Students’ Union， I’m writing to invite you to attend the party.
The evening party is scheduled to take place at 7：00 pm on the playground on 31 December.All the students and teachers will be required to attend it and a variety of interesting performances will be put on， including songs， dance， cross talk， sketches and magic.You are also expected to give us a performance.
I sincerely hope you will accept our invitation and thank you in advance.We are looking forward to your coming and wonderful performance.
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
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——发现失分短板
（2022·新高考Ⅰ卷）假定你是校广播站英语节目“Talk and Talk”的负责人李华，请给外教Caroline写邮件邀请她做一次访谈。内容包括：
1.节目介绍；
2.访谈的时间和话题。
注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.请按如下格式作答。
Dear Caroline，
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
——探究失分原因
1.开头不够简洁明了
本邀请信的开头应开门见山介绍李华，并简单说明写信目的。有些学生会介绍过于详细，出现无效信息。如：
I am Li Hua in charge of the English program “Talk and Talk” at our school broadcasting station.Our school broadcasting station is well received among the students， enriching our school lives. I’m writing to invite you to attend our program.中间一句就是多余的无效信息。
2.时间表述存在误差
①出现语法错误：如at 9 am on the next Sunday，当时间名词前有 this、 that、 last、 next、 every、 each等词修饰时，其前通常不用任何介词。其正确表达应该是：at 9 am the next Sunday；②表达方式不恰当：出于礼貌，写信人应该与对方协商一下时间是否方便。有些学生可能会忽略这一点，往往采用过于直白或命令式邀请。如：
Remember to attend our program then and you are welcome.这句话看上去很委婉，其实直接单方规定了邀约的时间，不属于礼貌交际。
尝试委婉表达：We would be honored if you could attend our party on Saturday evening， 3 July.
3.要点陈述过于宽泛
本文的要点包含节目介绍与访谈话题，节目的内容介绍可以宽泛一些，但访谈的话题要具体，并且要具有可操作性。如：
宽泛表达：You are expected to talk about something you are interested in.
具体表达：You are expected to talk about how to improve the Chinese students’ communication skills in English.
——规范答题架构
邀请信是邀请收信人参加某项活动的书信，在写作时，语气要热情真挚，不要强人所难。具体写作架构为：
——储备靓点表达
1.吸引阅卷人的开头句——诚挚相邀，传递热情
①（2024·安徽江淮十校联考）Representing our school， I’d like to invite you to give us a speech on British culture on 25th this month.
②（2024·南京模拟）On behalf of our school， I feel honoured to invite you to give us a speech on your local cuisine on 25th this month.
③（2024·湖北八市模拟）I am Li Hua， chairman of the Students’ Union.I am more than delighted to invite you to participate in the upcoming teacher-student friendship basketball game at our school.
2.吸引阅卷人的篇中句——活动内容，详细安排
①Here are some details about this activity./Some details about this activity are as follows.
②（2024·湖北八市模拟）The game is scheduled to kick off at 2 pm next Friday afternoon at the school gymnasium.After a brief opening ceremony， the students and teachers will engage in a friendly competition.
③（2024·湖北八市模拟）Additionally， the game will not only be an opportunity for interaction and exchange between teachers and students but also a platform for everyone to relax and have fun.
3.吸引阅卷人的结尾句——期待接受邀请，早日回复
（2024·湖北八市模拟）I would appreciate it if you could take my invitation into consideration. Looking forward to your reply at your earliest convenience.
——研读满分佳作
Dear Caroline，
Being in charge of the English program “Talk and Talk” run by our school broadcast station， I feel much privileged to invite you to our program for a live talk show.
The program， meant to promote the interest of the students in English learning and broaden their horizons， is widely popular among us students.The interview will be held at 9 this coming Sunday morning， lasting about an hour.Your talk show can cover anything related to English， or what school life is like in your country.
I sincerely hope you can accept my invitation.
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
——冲击满分作文
（2024·衡水模拟）假定你是李华，你校将举行元旦联欢晚会。请你代表校学生会给你校外教Richard写一封邮件，内容包括：
（1）提出邀请；
（2）告知元旦晚会相关事项（时间、地点、参加人员、节目类型等）；
（3）表达感谢与期望。
注意：（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式作答。
Dear Richard，
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
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