写作主题一 提出建议
——发现失分短板
（2023·新课标Ⅰ&Ⅱ卷）假定你是李华，外教Ryan准备将学生随机分为两人一组，让大家课后练习口语，你认为这样分组存在问题。请你给外教写一封邮件，内容包括：
1.说明问题；2.提出建议。
注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.请按如下格式作答。
Dear Ryan，
I’m Li Hua from Class 3.
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
——探究失分原因
1.向老师提出建议的方式不恰当
有些学生过分关注文章首段的简洁明了、开门见山，忽略了向老师提出建议时应采用委婉表达。请从以下两种开头方式中选择较恰当的一种。
①I think it’s not a good idea to randomly pair up students for the spoken English training after class.The reasons are as follows.（ ）
②I really appreciate your idea of asking us to practice spoken English after class， but I’m writing to express my concerns regarding the plan to randomly assign us in pairs.（√）
2.分析问题与提出建议时没有说服力
部分学生在分析随机分组带来的问题时，容易站在宏观的角度进行宽泛的分析，所以写出的内容大多为随意性较强的空洞语言。写本篇作文时，应多联系自身实际，从微角度找切入口，如：
①与不熟悉的同学搭档练习口语会不好意思开口；
②英语水平差距大的同学分在一组会造成沟通不顺畅。
找准这些写作微点才能做到下笔成章、有理有据。
——规范答题架构
建议信通常是写给亲朋好友，就对方在生活、工作或求学过程中遇到的问题或困难提出看法或建议。具体写作架构为：
——储备靓点表达
1.吸引阅卷人的开头句——开篇表意
①（2024·湖北八市联考）Learning that you get upset easily and often lose your temper with your parents and classmates， I am writing to provide some suggestions to help you cope with your emotions.
②（2024·广东二模）I’m more than delighted to hear you will hold an activity on Chinese Language Day.My suggestions are as follows.
2.吸引阅卷人的篇中句——具体建议
①（2024·湖北八市联考）To begin with， it’s a good idea to breathe deeply.If you take a few moments to focus on your breathing， you can find it will help you relax and clear your mind.
②（2024·湖北八市联考）What’s more， I recommend you should work out regularly. Taking exercise is a great way to relieve stress and improve your mood.
③（2024·湖北八市联考）Last but not least， it is helpful to talk to someone such as a trusted friend， a family member， or a teacher who can provide support and encouragement.
3.吸引阅卷人的结尾句——提出希望
①I’d appreciate it if you could take my suggestions into consideration/account.
②I do hope my suggestions will be of benefit to you.
——研读满分佳作
Dear Ryan，
I’m Li Hua from Class 3.I really appreciate your idea of asking us to practice spoken English after class， but I’m writing to express my concerns regarding the plan to randomly assign us in pairs.
To begin with， it couldn’t be better if students with mixed levels of English could be grouped together deliberately rather than at random， so that we can help each other during our practice. Additionally， to ensure that our oral practice goes smoothly， I suggest that you put three to four students together， with one as the group leader， in which case we can communicate with each other at a great depth.
Should it be possible， I truly hope you can take my suggestions into consideration.
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
——冲击满分作文
（2024·辽宁协作体二模）假定你是李华，你的加拿大好友Peter发来邮件说他在数学学习中遇到困难。请你给他回复一封邮件，内容包括：
（1）表示理解并安慰；
（2）提出学好数学的具体建议。
注意：（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式作答。
Dear Peter，
Yours，
Li Hua
3 / 3写作主题一 提出建议
——发现失分短板
（2023·新课标Ⅰ&Ⅱ卷）假定你是李华，外教Ryan准备将学生随机分为两人一组，让大家课后练习口语，你认为这样分组存在问题。请你给外教写一封邮件，内容包括：
1.说明问题；
2.提出建议。
注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.请按如下格式作答。
Dear Ryan，
I’m Li Hua from Class 3.
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
——探究失分原因
1.向老师提出建议的方式不恰当
有些学生过分关注文章首段的简洁明了、开门见山，忽略了向老师提出建议时应采用委婉表达。请从以下两种开头方式中选择较恰当的一种。
①I think it’s not a good idea to randomly pair up students for the spoken English training after class.The reasons are as follows.（ ）
②I really appreciate your idea of asking us to practice spoken English after class， but I’m writing to express my concerns regarding the plan to randomly assign us in pairs.（√）
2.分析问题与提出建议时没有说服力
部分学生在分析随机分组带来的问题时，容易站在宏观的角度进行宽泛的分析，所以写出的内容大多为随意性较强的空洞语言。写本篇作文时，应多联系自身实际，从微角度找切入口，如：
①与不熟悉的同学搭档练习口语会不好意思开口；
②英语水平差距大的同学分在一组会造成沟通不顺畅。
找准这些写作微点才能做到下笔成章、有理有据。
——规范答题架构
建议信通常是写给亲朋好友，就对方在生活、工作或求学过程中遇到的问题或困难提出看法或建议。具体写作架构为：
——储备靓点表达
1.吸引阅卷人的开头句——开篇表意
①（2024·湖北八市联考）Learning that you get upset easily and often lose your temper with your parents and classmates， I am writing to provide some suggestions to help you cope with your emotions.
②（2024·广东二模）I’m more than delighted to hear you will hold an activity on Chinese Language Day.My suggestions are as follows.
2.吸引阅卷人的篇中句——具体建议
①（2024·湖北八市联考）To begin with， it’s a good idea to breathe deeply.If you take a few moments to focus on your breathing， you can find it will help you relax and clear your mind.
②（2024·湖北八市联考）What’s more， I recommend you should work out regularly. Taking exercise is a great way to relieve stress and improve your mood.
③（2024·湖北八市联考）Last but not least， it is helpful to talk to someone such as a trusted friend， a family member， or a teacher who can provide support and encouragement.
3.吸引阅卷人的结尾句——提出希望
①I’d appreciate it if you could take my suggestions into consideration/account.
②I do hope my suggestions will be of benefit to you.
——研读满分佳作
Dear Ryan，
I’m Li Hua from Class 3.I really appreciate your idea of asking us to practice spoken English after class， but I’m writing to express my concerns regarding the plan to randomly assign us in pairs.
To begin with， it couldn’t be better if students with mixed levels of English could be grouped together deliberately rather than at random， so that we can help each other during our practice. Additionally， to ensure that our oral practice goes smoothly， I suggest that you put three to four students together， with one as the group leader， in which case we can communicate with each other at a great depth.
Should it be possible， I truly hope you can take my suggestions into consideration.
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
——冲击满分作文
（2024·辽宁协作体二模）假定你是李华，你的加拿大好友Peter发来邮件说他在数学学习中遇到困难。请你给他回复一封邮件，内容包括：
（1）表示理解并安慰；
（2）提出学好数学的具体建议。
注意：（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式作答。
Dear Peter，
Yours，
Li Hua
参考范文：
Dear Peter，
I’m sorry to hear that you run into difficulties when learning maths.I can understand how you feel， but don’t worry.The following tips might be helpful to you.
First of all， keep practising because practice makes perfect.There’s no substitute for practice when it comes to mastering maths， so do maths problems on a daily basis.What’s more， find a good partner or join a study group.This can help you to tackle difficult problems together and learn more effectively.Finally， it’s a good idea to make connections.Try to connect maths concepts to real-life situations， which will help you see maths in a new perspective.
I sincerely hope my suggestions will be of benefit to you and wish you great success in your maths learning！
Yours，
Li Hua
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