写作主题八 演讲文稿
——发现失分短板
（2024·全国甲卷改编）英语课要求做课堂展示，请你根据所给图片，以Development of Transport in China为题写一篇发言稿。
注意：（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式作答。
Development of Transport in China
Good morning class， today we’ll look at some developments in China.
——探究失分原因
1.文章逻辑层次不清晰
文章开头没有点明演讲主题，没有介绍中国在共享单车、高铁和新能源汽车方面取得的成就以及对我们生活的影响；结尾没有总结升华。
2.结尾忽略与主题相照应
学生在结束写作时应该呼应文章主题，这样可以使文章行文连贯，意义完整。否则，会因为作文结构松散，主题不明确而扣分。
——规范答题架构
演讲稿通常要有吸引力，明确发言的对象。演讲稿一般是议论文，在语言使用上一定要简洁明了、层次清晰并具有说服力。具体写作架构为：
——储备靓点表达
1.吸引阅卷人的开头句——引出主题
①（2024·浙江金华十校二模）Good morning， ladies and gentlemen！ It’s a great honor to share my thoughts of reading on this special World Reading Day.
②（2024·江西模拟）Hello everyone！ It’s my honor to give you a speech about my hometown.In recent years， with economic development， our hometown has undergone tremendous changes.
③Good morning， everyone！ I feel honored to share my views on how to win friends and influence people.
2.吸引阅卷人的篇中句——陈述演讲主题
①（2024·南通模拟）In spite of the fact that ChatGPT can chat and write articles like a person， I don’t think it can replace human beings to engage in writing professions.
②（2024·浙江金华十校二模）Meanwhile， the books lead me into a splendid world， where I will share joys and sorrows with the characters.
③（2024·宁波模拟）Obviously， micro-dramas， often lasting only a few minutes， are more suitable to modern people， who are burdened with a fast-paced life and busy work schedules and can’t afford much time to watch long TV dramas.
3.吸引阅卷人的结尾句——表达感谢
①（2024·浙江金华十校二模）In a word， there is no doubt that reading can bring us wisdom and help us to be better people.Do some reading regularly.Thanks for your listening！
②I hope all of us can have/take a positive attitude and enjoy a healthy life. Thanks for your listening！
——研读满分佳作
Development of Transport in China
Good morning class， today we’ll look at some developments in China.
As we all know， changes in transportation will bring great changes to people’s lives.Shared bicycles provide a convenient and environmentally friendly means of transport for short trips.Besides， China’s high-speed railway network has connected various cities effectively， greatly saving travel time and promoting economic development.Currently， advanced new energy vehicles have entered our lives， helping reduce air pollution.
These developments in transportation have raised our quality of life and showed the power of science.Therefore， we need to study hard and make a contribution to the further development of transportation.
Thank you for your listening！
——冲击满分作文
（2024·南通模拟）第33届夏季奥运会于2024年在巴黎被成功举办，你校打算组织一次主题为What Is the Olympic Spirit？的英语演讲比赛。请你写一篇演讲稿参赛，内容包括：
（1）你对奥运精神的理解；
（2）动员人人发扬奥运精神。
注意：（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式作答。
What Is the Olympic Spirit？
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——发现失分短板
（2024·全国甲卷改编）英语课要求做课堂展示，请你根据所给图片，以Development of Transport in China为题写一篇发言稿。
注意：（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式作答。
Development of Transport in China
Good morning class， today we’ll look at some developments in China.
——探究失分原因
1.文章逻辑层次不清晰
文章开头没有点明演讲主题，没有介绍中国在共享单车、高铁和新能源汽车方面取得的成就以及对我们生活的影响；结尾没有总结升华。
2.结尾忽略与主题相照应
学生在结束写作时应该呼应文章主题，这样可以使文章行文连贯，意义完整。否则，会因为作文结构松散，主题不明确而扣分。
——规范答题架构
演讲稿通常要有吸引力，明确发言的对象。演讲稿一般是议论文，在语言使用上一定要简洁明了、层次清晰并具有说服力。具体写作架构为：
——储备靓点表达
1.吸引阅卷人的开头句——引出主题
①（2024·浙江金华十校二模）Good morning， ladies and gentlemen！ It’s a great honor to share my thoughts of reading on this special World Reading Day.
②（2024·江西模拟）Hello everyone！ It’s my honor to give you a speech about my hometown.In recent years， with economic development， our hometown has undergone tremendous changes.
③Good morning， everyone！ I feel honored to share my views on how to win friends and influence people.
2.吸引阅卷人的篇中句——陈述演讲主题
①（2024·南通模拟）In spite of the fact that ChatGPT can chat and write articles like a person， I don’t think it can replace human beings to engage in writing professions.
②（2024·浙江金华十校二模）Meanwhile， the books lead me into a splendid world， where I will share joys and sorrows with the characters.
③（2024·宁波模拟）Obviously， micro-dramas， often lasting only a few minutes， are more suitable to modern people， who are burdened with a fast-paced life and busy work schedules and can’t afford much time to watch long TV dramas.
3.吸引阅卷人的结尾句——表达感谢
①（2024·浙江金华十校二模）In a word， there is no doubt that reading can bring us wisdom and help us to be better people.Do some reading regularly.Thanks for your listening！
②I hope all of us can have/take a positive attitude and enjoy a healthy life. Thanks for your listening！
——研读满分佳作
Development of Transport in China
Good morning class， today we’ll look at some developments in China.
As we all know， changes in transportation will bring great changes to people’s lives.Shared bicycles provide a convenient and environmentally friendly means of transport for short trips.Besides， China’s high-speed railway network has connected various cities effectively， greatly saving travel time and promoting economic development.Currently， advanced new energy vehicles have entered our lives， helping reduce air pollution.
These developments in transportation have raised our quality of life and showed the power of science.Therefore， we need to study hard and make a contribution to the further development of transportation.
Thank you for your listening！
——冲击满分作文
（2024·南通模拟）第33届夏季奥运会于2024年在巴黎被成功举办，你校打算组织一次主题为What Is the Olympic Spirit？的英语演讲比赛。请你写一篇演讲稿参赛，内容包括：
（1）你对奥运精神的理解；
（2）动员人人发扬奥运精神。
注意：（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式作答。
What Is the Olympic Spirit？
参考范文：
What Is the Olympic Spirit？
The 33rd Olympic Games have been successfully held in Paris.It’s a good time for us to think about what the Olympic spirit is.
From my point of view， the Olympic spirit means the courage to take part， the willingness to compete fairly， and the determination to challenge our limits.First of all， we must be courageous/brave enough to accept a challenge because it is taking part that matters.Secondly， we should obey the rules no matter what game we participate in.Finally， we need to spare no effort to perform our best and strive for perfection.
My fellow students， let’s carry forward the Olympic spirit and strive constantly to become faster， higher and stronger！
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