高考英语二轮复习专题六读后续写第二节如何打磨续写语言课件

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专题六 读后续写
第二节 如何打磨续写语言
一、丰富的句式运用
1.非谓语动词
①（2024·新课标Ⅰ、Ⅱ卷）Giving him a firm handshake, I jumped
out of the car, made a mad run for the bus, and jumped onto it just
before its departure.
我和他紧紧地握了握手，随即跳下车，疯狂地向公共汽车跑去，在发
车前跳上了车。
②（2023·新课标Ⅰ、Ⅱ卷）Encouraged by his words, I agreed to give
it a try.
他的话让我深受鼓舞，我同意试一试。
对点精练
完成句子
① （2025·全国二卷）我站起身来，感到既紧张又兴奋。
_____________, I felt a mix of nervousness and excitement.
Standing up
② 被困在南瓜里，我感到呼吸困难，喉咙发干，脸发烫。
________________________, I found it difficult for me to breathe, my
throat dry and face burning.
Trapped in the pumpkin
2.独立主格
①（2025·全国二卷）As I spoke, I noticed the complete attention of
my classmates, their eyes reflecting curiosity and respect.
我讲话的时候注意到同学们全神贯注的样子，他们的眼神流露出好奇
和敬意。
②（2023·浙江1月卷）It seemed that the bird was waiting for me, its
beady eyes locked on me as if trying to convey some deep,
unspoken gratitude.
那只鸟似乎在等着我，它那炯炯有神的眼睛盯着我，仿佛在试图表达
某种深深的、不言而喻的感激之情。
③To our delight, David crossed the finish line smoothly, his face
shining with a satisfied smile.
令我们高兴的是，戴维顺利地冲过了终点线，他的脸上洋溢着满足的
笑容。
对点精练
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① （2025·全国二卷）他们包围着我，问题如溪流般涌出。
They surrounded me, _______________________________________.
their questions pouring out like a stream
② 所有的眼睛都注视着我，我试图清清嗓子说点儿什么，但却只能感
受到我怦怦跳动的心。
_____________________, I tried to clear my throat to utter something,
but what I could feel was my thumping heart.
All eyes fixed on me
③ 我的心狂跳不止，我僵立在漆黑的走廊里，吓得寸步难移。
______________________, I stood frozen in the dark hallway, too
scared to move an inch.
Heart pounding wildly
3.主从复合句
①（2024·新课标Ⅰ、Ⅱ卷）The moment Gunter picked up the phone,
he seemed to know that I was going to call and said softly, “I
know it's you.”
Gunter一拿起电话，他似乎就知道是我打来的,并轻轻地说：“我知道是
你。”
②It was at that moment that I couldn't help thinking of my teacher,
who encouraged me to try again and again.就在那一刻，我不禁想
起了我的老师，他鼓励我一次又一次地尝试。
③One evening, I picked up the phone and left him a voice message,
apologizing for my behavior and asking if we could meet.
一天晚上，我拿起电话，给他留了一条语音留言，为自己的行为道歉，
并问他是否可以见面。
对点精练
完成句子
① （2024·新课标Ⅰ、Ⅱ卷）那个时候，我觉得自己很幸运，遇到了
Gunter这样一个热心肠的人，他有一颗金子般的心。
At that time, I felt blessed to have met such a warm-hearted man like
Gunter ________________________（限制性定语从句）.
who has a heart of gold
② 结果证明这是一次有益的经历，我从中不仅收获了快乐，而且认识
到努力的价值。
It turned out to be a rewarding experience, _______________________
_______________________________________________（非限制性定语
从句）.
from which I not only
harvested joy, but also learned the value of efforts
③ （2024·浙江1月卷）在又跑了一圈庆祝自己的成功后，Eva开始思
考这个技巧在其他情况下是否也管用。
After celebrating her success by completing another lap, Eva began to
wonder ___________________________________________
（宾语从句）.
whether the trick would work in other cases
④ 我突然明白，片刻的善意对另一个人来说可能意义重大。
It dawned on me _____________________________________________
________________（主语从句）.
that a moment of kindness could mean so
much to another
⑤ 毫无疑问，这已经成为我一生中最难忘的经历，我将永远珍惜。
There is no doubt _____________________________________________
____________________（同位语从句）, __________________________
_______（非限制性定语从句）.
that it has become the most unforgettable
experience in my life
which I will cherish
forever
⑥ 我从这段难忘的经历中学到的是，有时候最美好的回忆都是由最意
想不到的时刻创造出来的。
_____________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________
（主语从句；表语从句）.
What I learn from this unforgettable experience is that sometimes the best memories are made from the most unexpected moments
⑦ 他一越过终点线，观众就爆发出雷鸣般的欢呼声和掌声。
________________________________________（时间状语从句）, the
spectators burst into thunderous cheers and applause.
The moment he crossed the finishing line
4.倒装
①Only then did I realize that it was bravery and determination that
could conquer all the difficulties.
直到那时，我才意识到，只有勇敢和决心才能克服所有的困难。
②（2023·新课标Ⅰ、Ⅱ卷）A few weeks later, when I almost forgot the
contest, there came the news.
几周后，我几乎忘记比赛的事了，这时消息来了。
③So moved/touched and overjoyed was I that I wanted to give her
a big hug to express my deepest gratitude.我非常感动，欣喜若狂，想
给她一个大大的拥抱以表达我最深切的感激。
对点精练
句式升级
① （2024·新课标Ⅰ、Ⅱ卷）I was so surprised and moved that words
failed me when I tried to express my thanks to him.
→ ______________________________（倒装）that words failed me
when I tried to express my thanks to him.
So surprised and moved was I
② A cafeteria was next to the gym, which provided a wide range of
foods and drinks.
→ _______________________________ （倒装）, which provided a
wide range of foods and drinks.
Next to the gym was a cafeteria
③ （2023·新课标Ⅰ、Ⅱ卷）He not only pushed me to taste the
sweetness of winning, but he also made me believe anything is
possible if you try.
→ ________________________________________________________
（倒装）, but he also made me believe anything is possible if you
try.
Not only did he push me to taste the sweetness of winning
5.强调句
①（2023·新课标Ⅰ、Ⅱ卷）It was your encouragement that made me
brave enough to sign up for the competition.
正是你的鼓励让我足够勇敢地报名参加了比赛。
②It was at that moment that I realized that his love was like an
everlasting flower, blooming in the river of my memories and
nourishing my soul with fragrance.
就在那一刻,我意识到他的爱犹如一朵永恒的花，在我的记忆之河中绽
放，用芬芳滋养我的灵魂。
③It wasn't until a couple of hours later that we opened the doors
and began serving dinner.
直到几个小时后，我们才开门，开始提供晚餐。
对点精练
完成句子
① 正是从那一刻起，我决心把爱传递给他人。
_________________________________ I made up my mind to pass on
love to others.
It was from that moment on that
② 正是这次独特的经历让我意识到，每一次挑战都是一块垫脚石，引
领我取得更大的成功。
_________________________________________________that each
challenge was a stepping stone, leading me to a bigger success.
It was this unique experience that made me realize
6.感叹句
①How pleased and proud Mother would be when they brought her
breakfast in bed！当他们把早餐端到床前的时候，母亲会多么高兴和
自豪啊！
②After the play, parents and students approached Sarah, not just to
congratulate her, but also to share how moved they were by Mr.
Thompson's unexpected appearance.
演出结束后，家长和学生们走近萨拉，不仅是为了祝贺她，还是为了
分享汤普森先生意外出现时他们有多么感动。
③When we were floating around, I said, “What a nice holiday! Let's
swim out, not that far.”
当我们四处漂浮的时候，我说：“多么美好的假期啊！我们游出去吧，
不用那么远。”
对点精练
完成句子
① 当我坐在长沙发上时，我的心里充满了内疚。我回忆起我的错误是
多么可怕，对我的每一个举动都感到后悔。
As I sat on the couch, my heart was filled with guilt. I recalled
____________________________, regretting my every move.
how terrible my mistake was
② “多么难忘的一天哪！多亏我的叔叔和救援队，我们才得救了。”多
拉说。
“ __________________________! Thanks to my uncle and the rescue
team, we were saved,” said Dora.
What an unforgettable day
7.虚拟语气
①“But for your help, I couldn't have signed up for the writing
contest and won first prize,” I said with gratitude.
我感激地说：“要不是你的帮助，我不可能报名参加写作比赛并获得一
等奖。”
②How I wish I had spent more time with my grandmother while
she was alive!我多么希望在奶奶活着的时候，我多花点时间陪她啊！
③I threw my arms around her and hugged her tightly. “Thank you!
You're really a wonderful friend! If it had not been for you, I
would not have done so well!” I exclaimed.我伸出胳膊搂住她，紧紧
地抱着她。“谢谢你！你真是一个很好的朋友！如果没有你，我就不会
做得这么好！”我喊道。
对点精练
完成句子
① （2023·新课标Ⅰ、Ⅱ卷）我说：“老师，谢谢您。没有您， 我不可能
发现自己在写作方面有潜力。”
I said, “Thank you, sir. Without you, ____________________________
__________________.”
I couldn't have found my
potential in writing
② 我兴奋又高兴，感觉自己仿佛站在了世界之巅。
Thrilled and delighted, _________________________________________.
I felt as if I were on the top of the world
③ （2025·全国一卷）“我多希望我没有忽视你的感受！”我满怀愧疚地
对哥哥哽咽道，泪水涌出了眼睛。
“ _________________________________________!” I said to my
brother with guilt, tears welling up in my eyes.
How I wish I hadn't ignored your feelings
8.无灵主语
①（2024·新课标Ⅰ、Ⅱ卷）A feeling of helplessness washed over me
as I saw the bus queue thinning out.
当我看到排队等候公共汽车的人越来越少时，一种无助的感觉向我袭来。
②Her heart pounded and her legs felt like jelly, but a sense of
accomplishment surged through her.她的心怦怦直跳，双腿发软，但
一种成就感涌上心头。
③（2023·新课标Ⅰ、Ⅱ卷）My heart raced as I read the letter
announcing that my essay had won first place!当我读到那封宣布我的
文章获得第一名的信时，我的心跳加速！
对点精练
完成句子
① 他的鼓励之言使我的精神振奋，给了我继续前进的力量。
_____________________________________________________________
_________ to keep going.
His words of encouragement lifted my spirits and gave me the
strength
② 他听到这个坏消息后，脸上一片失望。
_______________________________ when he heard the bad news.
Disappointment clouded his face
③ 我心中涌起一阵自豪，因为我成功地救了那个被困在房子里的男孩。
____________________________________as I successfully saved the
boy trapped in the house.
A burst of pride welled up inside me
二、“细化”的动作描写
1.“A, B and C”结构
我发表演讲。
I delivered the speech.
→I took a deep breath to calm myself down, beamed a bright
smile and gathered all my courage to deliver the speech.
评析：在细化动作描写中，作者将发表演讲的动作拆解为“深吸一口气
+露出灿烂的微笑+鼓起勇气”，并加入了“深吸一口气”的目的，即“让
自己平静下来”，通过一系列的动作描写，续写部分的画面感更强了，
而且也把作者发表演讲时的状态展现得很生动。
对点精练
完成句子
① （经典高考）戴维被我的话触动=他抬起头+迎着我专注的目光+低
声说“当然，我会做到的”
Struck by my words, __________________________________________
______________, “Of course, I will make it.”
David raised his head, met my intent gaze
and murmured
② 小男孩向母亲道歉=靠近母亲+低下头+向母亲说“对不起”
The little boy ________________________________________________
_____________________.
approached his mother, hung his head and said
“Sorry” to his mother
③ 我享受夜晚=吃了一顿美味的晚餐+演奏轻音乐+静静地躺在床上
I ___________________________________________________________
______________.
enjoyed a delicious dinner, played soft music and lay on the
bed peacefully
2.“句子+非谓语动词”结构
他为孩子们回家做准备。
He prepared for the kids' coming home.
→He prepared for the kids' coming home, cleaning the house,
mowing the grass and buying their favourite food.
评析：在细化动作描写中，作者加入了“打扫房子”“割草”“买他们最喜
欢的食物”三个动作。通过非谓语动词的处理，尽管有一系列的动作，
但句子显得并不拥挤。另外，续写部分的画面感更强，人物的形象更
饱满，将一个盼望孩子们回家的慈爱的父亲形象刻画得非常生动。
对点精练
完成句子
① 他们坐在沙滩上，享受着阳光，既放松又快乐。
They sat on the beach, _____________________, relaxed and happy.
enjoying the sunshine
② 他们围在营火旁，分享着旅行中发生的一些有趣的事情，享受着这
个美妙的时刻。
______________________________, they shared something interesting
happening during the trip, _______________________________.
Gathering around the campfire
enjoying the wonderful moment
三、丰富的情感描写
1.Seeing/Hearing/Thinking of/that..., sb. felt/did...
①Hearing the good news, everybody present smiled from ear to ear.
听到这个好消息，在场的每个人都笑得合不拢嘴。
②Seeing a dark figure approaching, Lily felt a strong sense of fear
welling up inside her and surging through her body, with tears of
hopelessness running down her cheeks.看到一道黑影靠近，莉莉感到一
种强烈的恐惧感涌上心头，涌遍全身，绝望的眼泪顺着她的脸颊流了
下来。
对点精练
完成句子
① 看到我的队员们失望的脸，我感到我的脸从苍白变得通红。
_______________________________________________________, I felt
my face went from pale white to bright red.
Seeing the disappointed faces of the members of my team
② 听到那些话，史蒂文非常感动，他紧紧地抱住了本。
__________________________________________that he hugged Ben
tightly.
Hearing those words, Steven was so touched
2.“With+身体部位+非谓语动词/形容词
（shaking/shining/trembling/wide open/burning hot/lit up/held up
high/...），sb.+谓语...”或“Sb.+谓语...+with+身体部位+非谓语动词/
形容词.”
①She burst into laughter, with her eyes shining with excitement.她
突然大笑起来，眼睛里闪烁着兴奋的光芒。
②With his eyes wide open, he stared in disbelief at the incredible
sight.他睁大眼睛，不敢相信地盯着那不可思议的景象看。
③With her head held up high, she crossed the room, each step
echoing with the determination that coursed through her veins.她昂着
头穿过房间，每一步都回荡着她血脉中流淌的决心。#2.3
对点精练
完成句子
① 一想到她的竞争对手是去年的冠军，她就更加焦虑，心跳加速，手
心出汗。
At the thought of the fact that her rival was last year's champion, she
felt more anxious _____________________________________________.
with her heart beating fast and hands sweating
② 男孩为自己的行为感到内疚，低下了头，眼里噙着泪水。
Guilty about his behavior, the boy lowered his head _______________
_____________________.
with tears
welling up in his eyes
③ “看，妈妈，我找到了！”特里斯坦惊叫道，眼睛里闪烁着兴奋的光芒。
“Look, Mom, I found it!” Tristan exclaimed
______________________________________.
with his eyes twinkling with excitement
3.复杂心情专用表达——情绪词A and情绪词B/情绪词A mixed with情
绪词B/a mix of情绪词A and情绪词B
①I felt a mix of excitement and nervousness as I saw the diverse
and impressive artworks surrounding mine.
当看到我的艺术作品周围多样且令人印象深刻的艺术作品时，我感到
既兴奋又紧张。
②At that very moment, within my heart was a feeling of gratitude,
mixed with overwhelming excitement, making me unable to utter
any words.
就在那时，我的心里有一种感激之情，混杂着极度的兴奋，让我说不
出话来。
对点精练
完成句子
① 琳达的内心充满愤怒，夹杂着难以言表的羞愧之情，使她不敢面对
家人。
Linda's heart was filled with anger, ______________________________,
making her afraid to face her family.
mixed with unspeakable shame
② 当她坐在窗边，凝视着夜空中闪烁的星星时，她的心中充满了遗憾
和希望。
As she sat by the window, gazing at the twinkling stars in the night
sky, _________________________________________________.
her heart was filled with a mix of regret and hope
四、巧妙的环境描写
在续写中可以通过环境描写，衬托主人公心理，暗示事件发展的
艰难曲折。
But when the rain poured down, we knew the bad luck wasn't over.
The heavy rain made it even harder to see the road ahead, and
the wind started to blow strongly.
但当雨倾盆而下时，我们知道坏运气还没有结束。大雨使我们更难看
到前面的道路，风开始猛烈地刮起来。（通过雨倾盆而下、视线受阻、
风势加大点明了形势的严峻，反映了主人公面临的困难）
对点精练
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① 乌云遮住了太阳，不一会儿便下起了倾盆大雨。
________________________________, and soon heavy rain began to
pour down.
The dark clouds covered the sun
② 河水涨得很快，几乎要淹没他们过河的唯一小路。
______________________, almost covering the only path they had to
cross.
The river rose quickly
③ 黑暗渐渐吞噬了森林。周围一片寂静，他只能听到自己心脏快速跳
动的声音。
______________________________________. It was completely silent,
and he could only hear the sound of his own heart beating fast.
Darkness gradually swallowed the forest
五、精准的动物描写
1.The dog wagged its tail excitedly, its eyes fixed on the food in
my hand as if asking for a share.
那只狗兴奋地摇着尾巴，眼睛盯着我手里的食物，像是在要求分一份。
［句子通过“wagged its tail”（动作描写）和“eyes fixed on”
（眼神描写），生动体现了狗的期待与急切。as if句式巧妙地拟人化，
赋予动物情感］
2.The cat rubbed the boy's leg gently with its head, showing trust
and comfort.
猫用头轻轻地蹭男孩的腿，表现出信任与安慰。（句子通过“rubbed
the boy's leg gently”这一动作说明“showing trust and comfort”，生动
地刻画了动物与人之间的情感交流）
对点精练
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① 那只猫用它那悲伤的眼神看着她，好像在求助。
The cat looked at her with her sad eyes, _____________________.
as if asking for help
② 小狗跳起来,摇着尾巴,眼睛里闪烁着兴奋的光芒。
The puppy __________________, ________________ and his eyes
sparkling with excitement.
leaped to his feet
wagging his tail
③ 熊生气了,用后腿站立起来,开始咆哮。
The bear got angry, ________________________, and ______________
_____.
rose up on his hind legs
began to
growl
④ 看到孩子在哭，狗走过去舔了舔她的手，试图安慰她。
Seeing the child crying, ______________________________________,
trying to comfort her.
the dog went over and licked her hand