专题五 应用文写作
第一讲 建议类
(2025·全国一卷)假定你是李华，你班的英语报要增设一个栏目。外教Jenny提出“Fun at my school”和“Guess who I am”两个选项供大家选择。请给Jenny写一封邮件，内容包括：
1．你的选择；
2．说明理由。
注意：1．写作词数应为80左右；
2．请按如下格式作答。
Dear Jenny，
I really like the idea of adding a new column to our English newspaper．
_____________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________
Yours，
Li Hua
一、教你审题
1．明确任务类型：这是一封邮件写作，属于应用文中的书信类，需注意格式(开头 Dear Jenny，结尾 Yours，Li Hua)和语气(礼貌、自然、简洁)。
2．抓住核心要求：
内容要点：选择栏目(二选一)并说明理由。
人称/时态：第一人称和第三人称；以将来时为主。
词数限制：80词左右，需简洁明了。
3．关注细节：
写信人李华的身份是学生；
收件人是外教Jenny，语言需得体，体现尊重；
两个栏目名称需准确引用(“Fun at my school”或“Guess who I am”)。
注意： 避免同时讨论两个选项，理由需紧扣 “英语报栏目” 的功能(如学习、交流、趣味等)。
二、教你构思
1．快速确定写作框架
My choice Beginning Greetings＋background information(Given) State your preferred column clearly
Body Reasons for my choice: advantages /significance
Ending Summarize/appreciate/anticipate/wish
2．理由拓展与细节填充
Reasons for “Fun at my school” draw readers in by showing the many interesting parts of school life
encourage more students to write for the paper
preserve and celebrate the little joys of school days
bring classmates closer together
create a more friendly school atmosphere
build a positive school spirit
Reasons for “Guess who I am” sharpen students' attention to detail
develop critical thinking
improve English proficiency when writing or interpreting clues
transform English study into an engaging detective game
spark curiosity and encourage interaction among students
bridge understanding and cultivate closer and more meaningful bonds
三、教你成文
Dear Jenny，
I really like the idea of adding a new column to our English newspaper．(背景信息) I strongly believe that “Fun at my school” is the best option．(内容要点：选择栏目)
This column would draw readers in by showing the many interesting parts of school life—like fun daily moments，exciting sports meets，and lively club activities．(理由一) It will encourage more students to write for the paper，and make it truly “by students，for students”．(理由二) It will be very helpful in bringing classmates closer together．So it will create a more friendly school atmosphere，and build a positive school spirit．(理由三)
This column will become a popular part of our newspaper，bringing fun and learning to everyone．(作出评价)
Yours，
Li Hua
四、教你出彩
Dear Jenny，
I really like the idea of adding a new column to our English newspaper．After carefully considering，(添加介词短语使语气上礼貌、自然)I strongly believe that “Fun at my school” is the best option．
Here are my reasons．(添加过渡句和主题句，使衔接自然、段意清晰) First，(添加逻辑衔接词，使层次清晰) this column would draw readers in by showing the many interesting parts of school life—like fun daily moments，exciting sports meets，and lively club activities．Second，(添加逻辑衔接词，使层次清晰) it will encourage more students to write for the paper，which makes it truly “by students，for students” (用定语从句丰富句式)．Additionally，(添加逻辑衔接词，使层次清晰)it will be very helpful in bringing classmates closer together，creating a more friendly school atmosphere，and building a positive school spirit(用非谓语动词短语丰富句式)．
I am confident that (用主从复合句引出看法) this column will become a popular and enjoyable (添加形容词增加词汇的丰富性与文章的可读性) part of our newspaper，bringing fun and learning to everyone．
Yours，
Li Hua
(一)
(2025·山东潍坊模拟)假定你是李华，外教Mr．Pullen计划使用AI工具为学生提供全天候的英语口语练习支持。然而，你认为这种做法可能存在问题。请你给外教写一封邮件，内容包括：
1．说明问题；
2．提出建议。
注意：1．写作词数应为80左右；
2．请按如下格式作答。
Dear Mr．Pullen，
_____________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________
Best regards，
Li Hua
(二)
(2025·辽宁本溪模拟)假定你是李华，你校交换生Mike准备参加“厉害了，中国(Amazing China)”短视频大赛，特发邮件向你征询视频创意。请给他回一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1．提出建议；
2．阐明理由。
注意：1．写作词数应为80左右；
2．请按如下格式作答。
Dear Mike，
_____________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________
Yours，
Li Hua
第一讲 建议类
应用模拟练·提能力
(一)
【参考范文】
Dear Mr．Pullen，
I am writing to share my thoughts about the plan to use AI tools for providing oral English practice around the clock．
While AI is useful，I worry that some students might become overly reliant on it，missing opportunities for realtime communication with teachers and classmates．This interaction is essential for improving speaking skills in a natural environment．
To address this，I suggest balancing AI with facetoface interactions to ensure students continue to develop their communication skills in authentic settings．Additionally，integrating group discussions and roleplaying activities can also further enhance their conversational abilities．
Thank you for considering my perspective．
Best regards，
Li Hua
(二)
【参考范文】
Dear Mike，
Learning you're going to sign up for the short video competition on the theme of Amazing China，I'm writing to share my ideas with you．
If I were you，I would not hesitate to shoot a short video about China's smart agriculture．Nowadays，you can see modern farmers using cuttingedge technologies and devices for agricultural production，monitoring and management．Thanks to this，the efficiency is greatly improved and the country's grain security is guaranteed．Therefore，I'm convinced that showing the enormous changes in Chinese agriculture will hold much appeal for the viewers．
May your entry stand out in the competition!
Yours，
Li Hua(共24张PPT)
专题五 应用文写作
第一讲 建议类
第一部分 题型突破
典例 做真题·悟考法
(2025·全国一卷)假定你是李华，你班的英语报要增设一个栏目。外教Jenny提出“Fun at my school”和“Guess who I am”两个选项供大家选择。请给Jenny写一封邮件，内容包括：
1．你的选择；
2．说明理由。
注意：1．写作词数应为80左右；
2．请按如下格式作答。
Dear Jenny，
I really like the idea of adding a new column to our English newspaper．
___________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________
Yours，
Li Hua
一、教你审题
1．明确任务类型：这是一封邮件写作，属于应用文中的书信类，需注意格式(开头 Dear Jenny，结尾 Yours，Li Hua)和语气(礼貌、自然、简洁)。
2．抓住核心要求：
内容要点：选择栏目(二选一)并说明理由。
人称/时态：第一人称和第三人称；以将来时为主。
词数限制：80词左右，需简洁明了。
3．关注细节：
写信人李华的身份是学生；
收件人是外教Jenny，语言需得体，体现尊重；
两个栏目名称需准确引用(“Fun at my school”或“Guess who I am”)。
注意：避免同时讨论两个选项，理由需紧扣 “英语报栏目” 的功能(如学习、交流、趣味等)。
二、教你构思
1．快速确定写作框架
My choice Beginning Greetings＋background information(Given)
State your preferred column clearly
Body Reasons for my choice: advantages /significance
Ending Summarize/appreciate/anticipate/wish
2．理由拓展与细节填充
Reasons for “Fun at my school” draw readers in by showing the many interesting parts of school life
encourage more students to write for the paper
preserve and celebrate the little joys of school days
bring classmates closer together
create a more friendly school atmosphere
build a positive school spirit
Reasons for “Guess who I am” sharpen students' attention to detail
develop critical thinking
improve English proficiency when writing or interpreting clues
transform English study into an engaging detective game
spark curiosity and encourage interaction among students
bridge understanding and cultivate closer and more meaningful bonds
三、教你成文
Dear Jenny，
I really like the idea of adding a new column to our English newspaper．(背景信息) I strongly believe that “Fun at my school” is the best option．(内容要点：选择栏目)
This column would draw readers in by showing the many interesting parts of school life—like fun daily moments，exciting sports meets，and lively club activities．(理由一) It will encourage more students to write for the paper，and make it truly “by students，for students”．(理由二) It will be very helpful in bringing classmates closer together．So it will create a more friendly school atmosphere，and build a positive school spirit．(理由三)
This column will become a popular part of our newspaper，bringing fun and learning to everyone．(作出评价)
Yours，
Li Hua
四、教你出彩
Dear Jenny，
I really like the idea of adding a new column to our English newspaper．After carefully considering，(添加介词短语使语气上礼貌、自然)I strongly believe that “Fun at my school” is the best option．
Here are my reasons．(添加过渡句和主题句，使衔接自然、段意清晰) First，(添加逻辑衔接词，使层次清晰) this column would draw readers in by showing the many interesting parts of school life—like fun daily moments，exciting sports meets，and lively club activities．Second，(添加逻辑衔接词，使层次清晰) it will encourage more students to write for the paper，which makes it truly “by students，for students” (用定语从句丰富句式)．Additionally，(添
加逻辑衔接词，使层次清晰)it will be very helpful in bringing classmates closer together，creating a more friendly school atmosphere，and building a positive school spirit(用非谓语动词短语丰富句式)．
I am confident that (用主从复合句引出看法) this column will become a popular and enjoyable (添加形容词增加词汇的丰富性与文章的可读性) part of our newspaper，bringing fun and learning to everyone．
Yours，
Li Hua
应用 模拟练·提能力
(一)
(2025·山东潍坊模拟)假定你是李华，外教Mr．Pullen计划使用AI工具为学生提供全天候的英语口语练习支持。然而，你认为这种做法可能存在问题。请你给外教写一封邮件，内容包括：
1．说明问题；
2．提出建议。
注意：1．写作词数应为80左右；
2．请按如下格式作答。
Dear Mr．Pullen，
___________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________
Best regards，
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Mr．Pullen，
I am writing to share my thoughts about the plan to use AI tools for providing oral English practice around the clock．
While AI is useful，I worry that some students might become overly reliant on it，missing opportunities for real-time communication with teachers and classmates．This interaction is essential for improving speaking skills in a natural environment．
To address this，I suggest balancing AI with face-to-face interactions to ensure students continue to develop their communication skills in authentic settings．Additionally，integrating group discussions and role-playing activities can also further enhance their conversational abilities．
Thank you for considering my perspective．
Best regards，
Li Hua
(二)
(2025·辽宁本溪模拟)假定你是李华，你校交换生Mike准备参加“厉害了，中国(Amazing China)”短视频大赛，特发邮件向你征询视频创意。请给他回一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1．提出建议；
2．阐明理由。
注意：1．写作词数应为80左右；
2．请按如下格式作答。
Dear Mike，
___________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________
Yours，
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Mike，
Learning you're going to sign up for the short video competition on the theme of Amazing China，I'm writing to share my ideas with you．
If I were you，I would not hesitate to shoot a short video about China's smart agriculture．Nowadays，you can see modern farmers using cutting-edge technologies and devices for agricultural production，
monitoring and management．Thanks to this，the efficiency is greatly improved and the country's grain security is guaranteed．Therefore，I'm convinced that showing the enormous changes in Chinese agriculture will hold much appeal for the viewers．
May your entry stand out in the competition!
Yours，
Li Hua
谢 谢！
