第二讲 咨询类
(2025·全国二卷)假定你是校英文报编辑李华，外教Chris上个月答应写一篇介绍加拿大体育运动的文章，请给Chris写一封邮件，内容包括：
1．询问进度；
2．提醒交稿时间。
注意：1．写作词数应为80左右；
2．请按如下格式作答。
Dear Chris，
_____________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________
Best wishes，
Li Hua
一、教你审题
1．明确任务类型：这是一封邮件写作，属于应用文中的书信类，需注意格式(开头 Dear Chris，结尾 Best wishes，Li Hua)和语气(礼貌、委婉)。
2．抓住核心要求：
内容要点：询问文章进展＋提醒交稿时间。
人称/时态：第一人称和第二人称；以现在时为主。
词数限制：80词左右，需简洁明了。
3．关注细节：
写信人是校英文报编辑李华；
收件人是外教Chris，语言需礼貌得体，避免生硬催促；
需提及“加拿大体育运动”这一主题，体现针对性。
二、教你构思
1．快速确定写作框架
Reminder Beginning Greeting & Expressing gratitude
Body Part 1：Inquiring about the progress of the article politely
Part 2：Giving a friendly reminder about the submission time
Ending Making a concise and positive ending
2．内容拓展与细节填充
Inquiring about the progress of the article politely How's ...coming along？
Could you give me a brief update on ...？
Just checking in to see how things are progressing with ...
I'm really looking forward to the article．
Could you please let me know when I can expect to receive it？
Giving a friendly reminder about the submission time Friendly reminder: the submission deadline is...
Just a gentle reminder about the submission time．
May I kindly remind you of the submission deadline？
This is to friendly remind you that the submission time is approaching．
Please note the submission deadline: ...
A friendly heads-up on the submission time: ...
三、教你成文
Dear Chris，
I hope you're doing well．Thank you again for agreeing to write the article on Canadian sports last month! (问候＋背景＋感谢)
I'm writing to follow up on its progress．Could you please let me know how it's going？(询问进展) Just a friendly reminder that the submission deadline is June 30．We'd truly appreciate it if you could share your draft by then to allow time for editing．(提醒交稿时间)
Thank you for your support! Please feel free to reach out if you need assistance．Looking forward to reading your article! (再次感谢＋表达期待)
Best wishes，
Li Hua
四、教你出彩
Dear Chris，
I hope this email finds you well．(开头更正式：用“I hope this email finds you well”替代口语化的“I hope you're doing well”)Thank you once again for your kind agreement to contribute (词汇更丰富) the article on Canadian sports last month—we truly value your expertise(强调专业性：增加“we truly value your expertise”突出对对方的尊重)!
I'm writing to follow up on its progress．Could you please update (使用update使语言较正式) me on its current status As a gentle reminder (将“friendly reminder”改为“gentle reminder”，更符合正式邮件用语)，the submission deadline is June 30．To ensure smooth editing and timely publication，(逻辑更清晰：补充“to ensure smooth editing and timely publication”解释注意截止时间的重要性)we'd truly appreciate it if you could share your draft by then．
Your support means a lot to us！(使语言更地道)Should you need any assistance (使用虚拟语气使语气更委婉，句式更多样)，please feel free to reach out．I'm eagerly (用副词eagerly增强期待感)looking forward to your insightful piece！(结尾更简洁)
Best wishes，
Li Hua
(一)
(2025·广西南宁一模)假定你是李华，你的英国交换生朋友Chris向你借了一本中国名著至今未还，请给Chris写一封邮件，内容包括：
1．询问阅读进度；
2．提醒还书。
注意：1．写作词数应为80个左右；
2．请按如下格式作答。
Dear Chris，
_____________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________
Yours，
Li Hua
(二)
(2025·浙江绍兴模拟)假定你是学校科学社团负责人李华，下个月社团将举行“奇思妙想(Blue-sky Thinking)”创新营活动。请你给英国朋友 Chris写一封邮件，请他就活动方案提出意见，内容包括：
1．介绍方案；
2．征询建议。
注意：1．写作词数应为80左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Chris，
_____________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________
Yours，
Li Hua
第二讲 咨询类
应用模拟练·提能力
(一)
【参考范文】
Dear Chris，
Hope you've been enjoying the copy of Dream of the Red Chamber I lent you last month．I'm wondering how you're getting along with it．
Have you had a chance to dive deep into the characters and their stories I'm really interested to hear your thoughts．We're planning to have a reading group discussion on the book next Monday．If possible，could you return the book this weekend You could let me know when it would be a convenient time for me to pick it up．
I can't wait to discuss the book with you soon，and let me know if you need any help with the story!
Yours，
Li Hua
(二)
【参考范文】
Dear Chris，
I hope this email finds you well．Aiming to spark students' curiosity and foster their creativity，our school's Science Club is organizing a science camp themed “Blue sky Thinking” next month．I'm writing to seek your advice on the plan for the camp．
As scheduled，the camp will offer a rich blend of activities，including expert lectures，interactive seminars，and collaboration on creative designs．The camp will kick off with a lecture delivered by a renowned scientist，whose remarkable insights are sure to encourage the participants to contribute innovative ideas．Following that，all enthusiasts from the club will also share their original designs to make the camp experience more enjoyable and inspiring．Given your experience and keen eye for innovation，we are eager to receive your feedback on the plan．Best wishes!
Yours，
Li Hua(共24张PPT)
专题五 应用文写作
第二讲 咨询类
第一部分 题型突破
典例 做真题·悟考法
(2025·全国二卷)假定你是校英文报编辑李华，外教Chris上个月答应写一篇介绍加拿大体育运动的文章，请给Chris写一封邮件，内容包括：
1．询问进度；
2．提醒交稿时间。
注意：1．写作词数应为80左右；
2．请按如下格式作答。
Dear Chris，
___________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________
Best wishes，
Li Hua
一、教你审题
1．明确任务类型：这是一封邮件写作，属于应用文中的书信类，需注意格式(开头 Dear Chris，结尾 Best wishes，Li Hua)和语气(礼貌、委婉)。
2．抓住核心要求：
内容要点：询问文章进展＋提醒交稿时间。
人称/时态：第一人称和第二人称；以现在时为主。
词数限制：80词左右，需简洁明了。
3．关注细节：
写信人是校英文报编辑李华；
收件人是外教Chris，语言需礼貌得体，避免生硬催促；
需提及“加拿大体育运动”这一主题，体现针对性。
二、教你构思
1．快速确定写作框架
Reminder Beginning Greeting & Expressing gratitude
Body Part 1：Inquiring about the progress of the article politely
Part 2：Giving a friendly reminder about the submission time
Ending Making a concise and positive ending
2．内容拓展与细节填充
Inquiring about the progress of the article politely How's ...coming along？
Could you give me a brief update on ...？
Just checking in to see how things are progressing with ...
I'm really looking forward to the article．
Could you please let me know when I can expect to receive it？
Giving a friendly reminder about the submission time Friendly reminder: the submission deadline is...
Just a gentle reminder about the submission time．
May I kindly remind you of the submission deadline？
This is to friendly remind you that the submission time is approaching．
Please note the submission deadline: ...
A friendly heads-up on the submission time: ...
三、教你成文
Dear Chris，
I hope you're doing well．Thank you again for agreeing to write the article on Canadian sports last month! (问候＋背景＋感谢)
I'm writing to follow up on its progress．Could you please let me know how it's going？(询问进展) Just a friendly reminder that the submission deadline is June 30．We'd truly appreciate it if you could share your draft by then to allow time for editing．(提醒交稿时间)
Thank you for your support! Please feel free to reach out if you need assistance．Looking forward to reading your article! (再次感谢＋表达期待)
Best wishes，
Li Hua
四、教你出彩
Dear Chris，
I hope this email finds you well．(开头更正式：用“I hope this email finds you well”替代口语化的“I hope you're doing well”)Thank you once again for your kind agreement to contribute (词汇更丰富) the article on Canadian sports last month—we truly value your expertise(强调专业性：增加“we truly value your expertise”突出对对方的尊重)!
I'm writing to follow up on its progress．Could you please update (使用update使语言较正式) me on its current status As a gentle reminder (将“friendly reminder”改为“gentle reminder”，更符合正式邮件用语)，the submission deadline is June 30．To ensure smooth editing and timely publication，(逻辑更清晰：补充“to ensure smooth editing and timely publication”解释注意截止时间的重要性)we'd truly appreciate it if you could share your draft by then．
Your support means a lot to us！(使语言更地道)Should you need any assistance (使用虚拟语气使语气更委婉，句式更多样)，please feel free to reach out．I'm eagerly (用副词eagerly增强期待感)looking forward to your insightful piece！(结尾更简洁)
Best wishes，
Li Hua
应用 模拟练·提能力
(一)
(2025·广西南宁一模)假定你是李华，你的英国交换生朋友Chris向你借了一本中国名著至今未还，请给Chris写一封邮件，内容包括：
1．询问阅读进度；
2．提醒还书。
注意：1．写作词数应为80个左右；
2．请按如下格式作答。
Dear Chris，
___________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________
Yours，
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Chris，
Hope you've been enjoying the copy of Dream of the Red Chamber I lent you last month．I'm wondering how you're getting along with it．
Have you had a chance to dive deep into the characters and their stories I'm really interested to hear your thoughts．We're planning to have a reading group discussion on the book next Monday．If possible，could you return the book this weekend You could let me know when it would be a convenient time for me to pick it up．
I can't wait to discuss the book with you soon，and let me know if you need any help with the story!
Yours，
Li Hua
(二)
(2025·浙江绍兴模拟)假定你是学校科学社团负责人李华，下个月社团将举行“奇思妙想(Blue-sky Thinking)”创新营活动。请你给英国朋友 Chris写一封邮件，请他就活动方案提出意见，内容包括：
1．介绍方案；
2．征询建议。
注意：1．写作词数应为80左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Chris，
___________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________
Yours，
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Chris，
I hope this email finds you well．Aiming to spark students' curiosity and foster their creativity，our school's Science Club is organizing a science camp themed “Blue-sky Thinking” next month．I'm writing to seek your advice on the plan for the camp．
As scheduled，the camp will offer a rich blend of activities，including expert lectures，interactive seminars，and collaboration on creative designs．The camp will kick off with a lecture delivered by a renowned scientist，whose remarkable insights are sure to encourage the participants to contribute innovative ideas．Following that，all enthusiasts from the club will also share their original designs to make
the camp experience more enjoyable and inspiring．Given your experience and keen eye for innovation，we are eager to receive your feedback on the plan．Best wishes!
Yours，
Li Hua
谢 谢！
