第三讲 演讲类
(2025·浙江1月卷)你将参加英语课上的“一分钟演讲”活动。请你针对部分同学在校园内用手机拍摄短视频的现象写一篇演讲稿,内容包括:
1.陈述看法;
2.提出建议。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式作答。
My views on filming short videos on campus
_____________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________
一、教你审题
1.明确任务类型:这是一篇演讲稿,属于应用文中的发言稿类,需注意口语化和号召力。
2.抓住核心要求:
内容要点:对校园拍摄短视频现象的看法+具体建议。
人称/时态:第一人称和第三人称;以现在时为主。
词数限制:80词左右,需简洁有力。
格式要求:以“My views on filming short videos on campus”为标题。
3.关注细节:
针对“部分同学”的行为,语气需客观,避免绝对化批评。
建议需具体可行,体现建设性。
二、教你构思
1.快速确定写作框架
Lecture Beginning Background information
Body Expressing views,including the positive and negative aspects
Offering suggestions: time management,respect for others and content direction
Ending Advocating for responsible smartphone use
2.内容拓展与细节填充
Expressing views acknowledge the positive aspects (such as documenting life and showcasing creativity)
point out potential issues (like disrupting studies or violating privacy)
allow us to preserve memories and express creativity
be mindful not to let it interfere with academic responsibilities or compromise others' privacy
Offering suggestions It's advisable to film during break times or after-school hours.
Always obtain consent before filming others to avoid disturbance.
We should encourage creating educational and meaningful video content.
三、教你成文
Good morning,everyone!
A lot of students have been using their mobile phones to take short videos on campus.(背景陈述,表达观点)
It has remarkable advantages.(列举好处) For example,it offers a vivid and creative way to record precious moments of school life,like memorable classroom discussions or exciting sports events.It does have disadvantages.(说明弊端) It may easily distract us from studying as we might get overly absorbed in filming and editing.We should set strict time limits for shooting,say,no more than 30 minutes a day.(提出条件)We must ensure the content is positive,such as sharing study tips or acts of kindness.
I call upon everyone to use our smartphones wisely and responsibly.(发出倡议)
四、教你出彩
Good morning,everyone!
In recent days (加上时间状语,增加真实性),an increasing number of (词汇更加丰富)students have been using their mobile phones to shoot (使语言地道)short videos on campus.
On the one hand(使用连接词,使层次清晰),it has remarkable advantages.For example,it offers a vivid and creative way to capture fun moments (动词短语增强表现力)of school life,like memorable classroom discussions or exciting sports events.On the other hand(使用连接词,使层次清晰),it does have disadvantages.It may easily distract us from studying as we might get overly absorbed in filming and editing.To make better use of this activity (使用非谓语动词短语,增加句式的丰富性,使衔接更加紧密),we should set strict time limits for shooting,say,no more than 30 minutes a day.Moreover (使用连接词,使层次清晰),we must ensure the content is positive,such as sharing study tips or acts of kindness.
Let's make our campus life more meaningful.(结尾呼吁升华主题,具有感染力)
(一)
(2025·浙江G12名校协作体模拟)假定你是李华,你将参加你校举办的“Music and Me”主题英语演讲比赛,请撰写一篇演讲稿,内容包括:
1.分享你和音乐的故事;
2.音乐对你的影响。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式作答。
Hello everyone,
_____________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________
That's all.Thank you!
(二)
(2025·浙江杭州模拟)假定你是李华,在学校“网络文明”主题研讨会上,你将作题为“青少年网络社交:该如何守住边界”的演讲。内容包括:
1.阐述现象;
2.分析危害;
3.提出建议。
注意:1.词数不少于80;
2.可适当增添细节,以使内容充实、行文连贯。
_____________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________
第三讲 演讲类
应用模拟练·提能力
(一)
【参考范文】
Hello everyone,
My name is Li Hua,and today I'm thrilled to share with you my journey of “Music and Me”.From a tender age,music has been my soul's companion,whispering stories of joy and sorrow through melodies.It was the piano's gentle notes that first captivated my heart,leading me to explore a world of harmonies and rhythms.
Music has shaped me in more ways than one.It has been my sanctuary,healing my wounds and igniting my passions.Through its magic,I've learned empathy,resilience,and the art of expressing the inexpressible.
Thank you for letting me share this harmonious bond between music and me.
That's all.Thank you!
(二)
【参考范文】
Good morning,everyone!
Today,I'd like to talk about how teenagers should set boundaries in online socializing.
Nowadays,many teenagers are deeply involved in online social platforms,sharing personal information freely.This behavior,however,can lead to privacy leaks and cyberbullying,posing a threat to their safety.To address this,I suggest that teenagers should be cautious about what they share online and set strict privacy settings.Additionally,they should learn to respect others and avoid spreading rumors or engaging in online arguments.
Let's all work together to create a safer and more civilized online environment!(共23张PPT)
专题五 应用文写作
第三讲 演讲类
第一部分 题型突破
典例 做真题·悟考法
(2025·浙江1月卷)你将参加英语课上的“一分钟演讲”活动。请你针对部分同学在校园内用手机拍摄短视频的现象写一篇演讲稿,内容包括:
1.陈述看法;
2.提出建议。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式作答。
My views on filming short videos on campus
___________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________
一、教你审题
1.明确任务类型:这是一篇演讲稿,属于应用文中的发言稿类,需注意口语化和号召力。
2.抓住核心要求:
内容要点:对校园拍摄短视频现象的看法+具体建议。
人称/时态:第一人称和第三人称;以现在时为主。
词数限制:80词左右,需简洁有力。
格式要求:以“My views on filming short videos on campus”为标题。
3.关注细节:
针对“部分同学”的行为,语气需客观,避免绝对化批评。
建议需具体可行,体现建设性。
二、教你构思
1.快速确定写作框架
Lecture Beginning Background information
Body Expressing views,including the positive and negative aspects
Offering suggestions: time management,respect for others and content direction
Ending Advocating for responsible smartphone use
2.内容拓展与细节填充
Expressing views acknowledge the positive aspects (such as documenting life and showcasing creativity)
point out potential issues (like disrupting studies or violating privacy)
allow us to preserve memories and express creativity
be mindful not to let it interfere with academic responsibilities or compromise others' privacy
Offering suggestions It's advisable to film during break times or after-school hours.
Always obtain consent before filming others to avoid disturbance.
We should encourage creating educational and meaningful video content.
三、教你成文
Good morning,everyone!
A lot of students have been using their mobile phones to take short videos on campus.(背景陈述,表达观点)
It has remarkable advantages.(列举好处) For example,it offers a vivid and creative way to record precious moments of school life,like memorable classroom discussions or exciting sports events.It does have disadvantages.(说明弊端) It may easily distract us from studying as we might get overly absorbed in filming and editing.We should set strict time limits for shooting,say,no more than 30 minutes a day.(提出条件)We must ensure the content is positive,such as sharing study tips or acts of kindness.
I call upon everyone to use our smartphones wisely and responsibly.(发出倡议)
四、教你出彩
Good morning,everyone!
In recent days (加上时间状语,增加真实性),an increasing number of (词汇更加丰富)students have been using their mobile phones to shoot (使语言地道)short videos on campus.
On the one hand(使用连接词,使层次清晰),it has remarkable advantages.For example,it offers a vivid and creative way to capture fun moments (动词短语增强表现力)of school life,like memorable classroom discussions or exciting sports events.On the other hand(使用连接词,使层次清晰),it does have disadvantages.It may easily distract us from studying as we might get overly absorbed in filming and editing.To make better use of this activity (使用非谓语动词短语,
增加句式的丰富性,使衔接更加紧密),we should set strict time limits for shooting,say,no more than 30 minutes a day.Moreover (使用连接词,使层次清晰),we must ensure the content is positive,such as sharing study tips or acts of kindness.
Let's make our campus life more meaningful.(结尾呼吁升华主题,具有感染力)
应用 模拟练·提能力
(一)
(2025·浙江G12名校协作体模拟)假定你是李华,你将参加你校举办的“Music and Me”主题英语演讲比赛,请撰写一篇演讲稿,内容包括:
1.分享你和音乐的故事;
2.音乐对你的影响。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式作答。
Hello everyone,
___________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________
That's all.Thank you!
【参考范文】
Hello everyone,
My name is Li Hua,and today I'm thrilled to share with you my journey of “Music and Me”.From a tender age,music has been my soul's companion,whispering stories of joy and sorrow through melodies.It was the piano's gentle notes that first captivated my heart,leading me to explore a world of harmonies and rhythms.
Music has shaped me in more ways than one.It has been my sanctuary,healing my wounds and igniting my passions.Through its magic,I've learned empathy,resilience,and the art of expressing the inexpressible.
Thank you for letting me share this harmonious bond between music and me.
That's all.Thank you!
(二)
(2025·浙江杭州模拟)假定你是李华,在学校“网络文明”主题研讨会上,你将作题为“青少年网络社交:该如何守住边界”的演讲。内容包括:
1.阐述现象;
2.分析危害;
3.提出建议。
注意:1.词数不少于80;
2.可适当增添细节,以使内容充实、行文连贯。
___________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________
【参考范文】
Good morning,everyone!
Today,I'd like to talk about how teenagers should set boundaries in online socializing.
Nowadays,many teenagers are deeply involved in online social platforms,sharing personal information freely.This behavior,however,can lead to privacy leaks and cyberbullying,posing a threat to their safety.To address this,I suggest that teenagers should be cautious about what they share online and set strict privacy settings.Additionally,they should learn to respect others and avoid spreading rumors or engaging in online arguments.
Let's all work together to create a safer and more civilized online environment!
谢 谢!