《创新课堂》UNIT 4 SPACE EXPLORATION Period 5 Writing课件 高中英语必修3同步讲练测

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名称 《创新课堂》UNIT 4 SPACE EXPLORATION Period 5 Writing课件 高中英语必修3同步讲练测
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(共44张PPT)
Period 5 Writing
写作一 应用文写作——关于太空探索的议论文
  对于太空探索,人们有着不同的看法。请你根据表格提示用英语写一篇关于太空探索的短文,介绍人们的不同观点,并表达自己的看法。
赞成的理由 1.有助于改善人们的生活,尤其是在通信领域和天气预报方面;
2.开阔眼界,满足人们对宇宙的好奇心
反对的理由 1.浪费时间和金钱;
2.可能没有成果
你的看法 ……
1.随着科技的发展,太空探索正在成为一个热门话题。
____________________________________________,space exploration is becoming a popular topic.
2.有些人坚持说它浪费了大量的金钱和时间,没有得到任何回报。
Some people maintain that _____________________________________ , getting nothing back.
With the development of science and technology
it wastes a large amount of time and money
3.另一些人则认为探索太空是值得的。
Others believe that _______________________________.
4.它在通信领域和天气预报方面改善了我们的生活。
It has improved our living _____________________________________ _______________________________.
5.它拓宽了我们的视野,满足了我们对宇宙奥秘的好奇心。
It ______________________ and _________________________ about the mystery of the universe.
exploring space is worthwhile
in the area of communication and in the aspect of weather forecast
expands our horizons
satisfies our curiosity
6.就我而言,我赞同后者。
____________________________,I agree with the latter.
7.探索太空使我们了解外部环境,这有利于人们寻找新的适宜的人类居住区。
Space exploration makes us understand the outer environment, __________________________________________________________.
8.我相信它会给我们带来更多的好处。
I believe that ___________________________________.
As far as I am concerned
which is good for people to find new suitable human settlements
it will bring more benefits to us
9.【读教材原句】 (教材P45)It is necessary to find a new home for people in space, as the resources on Earth will run out.
【记句式】 it作形式主语
【学仿写】 用it作形式主语改写句3
____________________________________________________________
Others believe that it is worthwhile to explore/exploring space.
10.【读教材原句】 (教材P44)Countries around the globe are spending billions of dollars and lots of time on various space missions, whether to Mars or other planets much further away.
【记句式】 “whether...or...”意为“无论是……还是……”
【学仿写】 用“whether...or...”改写句4
________________________________________________________________________________________________________
It has improved our living whether in the area of communication or in the aspect of weather forecast.
____________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________
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One possible version:
  With the development of science and technology, space exploration is becoming a popular topic.
  Some people maintain that it wastes a large amount of time and money, getting nothing back.However, others believe that it is worthwhile to explore/exploring space. First of all, it has improved our living whether in the area of communication or in the aspect of weather forecast. Secondly, it expands our horizons and satisfies our curiosity about the mystery of the universe.
  As far as I am concerned, I agree with the latter. Space exploration makes us understand the outer environment, which is good for people to find new suitable human settlements. I believe that it will bring more benefits to us. So we should support it.
  假定你是李华,最近你们班的同学就“太空探索是否值得”这一话题展开了一场激烈的讨论。请你根据以下提示,用英文写一篇文章,介绍此次讨论的结果。内容包括:
  1.太空探索的弊端;
  2.太空探索的好处;
  3.你的观点。
注意:1.词数80左右;
  2.可适当增加细节,使行文连贯。
____________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________
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One possible version:
  Recently, the students in our class had a heated discussion on whether space is worth exploring.
  On one hand, some students think space exploration is not worthwhile. They think space is too far away from us and our daily life. And a lot of money spent on space exploration can be used to solve many problems such as pollution and starvation. On the other hand, other students think space exploration is necessary because people have benefited a lot from it, such as using satellites for communication and weather forecast. Besides, space research will enable people to find new resources to solve the problem of energy shortages on the Earth.
  In my opinion, we should support space exploration, which will bring more benefits to the future. Space exploration is a challenge to human beings, that's why several countries try hard to carry out it continuously.
写作二 读后续写登峰篇
——父亲手工制作的宇宙飞船是最好的生日礼物
  环境描写交代故事背景,衬托人物,渲染气氛,推动故事情节发展。有时环境描写可间接地表达角色的内心情感变化,即借景抒情。因此,在读后续写中环境描写必不可少。
  特别注意:没有无缘无故的写景,只有依据主旨的写景。写景应为主旨服务,否则就是无效的写景。
  掌握有效的环境描写公式,将为续写文章增色不少。
1.无生命名词作主语
  表达时间、地点等抽象意义的名词作主语,谓语动词使用 “(使)看见”“(使)听见”等。
*The past decade witnessed the great changes in this city.
过去的十年见证了这个城市的巨大变化。
*That chilly night witnessed him walking with great difficulty in the snow.
那个寒冷的夜晚见证了他在雪中艰难地行走。
2.比喻/拟人句
  读后续写中运用比喻的修辞手法可以创造视觉和情感上的联想,运用拟人的修辞手法能增加描写的生动感和表达的深度。
*The stars twinkled like a child's curious eyes blinking with anticipation.
星星闪烁着,就像孩子好奇的眼睛满怀期待地闪烁着。
*The smell of the popcorn filled the house, which, as if by magic, had turned into a bakery.
就像变魔术一样,爆米花的香味充满了整个屋子,这里变成了一家面包店。
3.完全倒装句
  读后续写中最常出现的环境描写是地点、方位的描写,常用“完全倒装句”这一句式结构。
*From our neighbor's house came a beautiful music. 从我们邻居家传来了美妙的音乐。
*At one of the tables sat a family with two daughters who were about Li Mei's age.
其中一张桌子旁坐着有着两个女儿的一家人,这两个女儿的年龄和李美差不多。
4.情景交融
  情景交融即借助某些特定物品或景色,委婉地表达某种感情或志向,达到写作目的。主要包括以景写情、以景衬情和以景比情三种形式。
*Bathed in wonderful sunshine, other students were busy chatting and taking photos with their teachers, while Steven was sitting quietly on his chair, drawing something.
沐浴在明媚的阳光下,其他同学正忙着和他们的老师聊天拍照,而史蒂文静静地坐在椅子上画画。
  阅读下面的材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
  [1]Carlos and Maya dreamed of becoming space explorers.
  [2]On their way home, Carlos and Maya saw a spaceship in the window of a toy store. They went inside the store to see how much it cost. They saw the price and it was too expensive. They tried to pool their money together but it still wasn't enough.
  [3]They left the store, sad and disappointed. Carlos suddenly realized that his birthday was coming up. Maybe he could ask their parents to buy the spaceship as a gift for his birthday.
  [4]When they got home, Carlos ran straight to their mother and told her what he wanted for his birthday.
  [5]Their family didn't have much when it came to money. So, when their dad stopped by the store to see the toy that Carlos wanted, he found it was too expensive. They couldn't afford it.
  [6]On the day of his birthday, Carlos got up early, excited to see his gift. In the living room lay a spaceship that was made out of a cardboard box. His dad had made it for him. It had wings on each side and had enough space to ride in. It was a spaceship but it wasn't what he wanted.
  [7]Tears flowed (流) from Carlos' eyes and he ran back to his room. Maya had just woken up and saw their mom knocking on the door and asking Carlos to come out. But he didn't want to.
  [8]Maya got to the living room but couldn't see the spaceship they had seen, only the cardboard box. She saw their dad beside it, bending down (弯着腰) on one knee with his head down. Silence filled the whole room.
  [9]Maya didn't want her brother to be sad on his birthday. So she tried to think of a way to cheer her brother up. She looked at the cardboard spaceship and got an idea.
  [10]Carlos didn't have breakfast and now he was hungry. He was about to get out of bed when he heard a knock on the door. It was Maya. She said that they had a surprise for him.
  注意:续写词数应为150左右。
  Carlos opened the door and just saw Maya was sitting in the cardboard spaceship. __________________________________________
____________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________
  A moment later, they stopped at the dinner table where there was a card that said “Best Restaurant in Space”.________________________
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【Settings背景】
When& Where [6]_____________________________,Carlos got up early, excited to see his gift. _____________________ lay a spaceship that was made out of a cardboard box.
On the day of his birthday
In the living room
【Characters角色】
Who _________;________; Dad; Mom
Carlos
Maya
【Plots情节】
What [2]On their way home, Carlos and Maya _________________ in the window of a toy store.
[4]When they got home, Carlos ran straight to their mother and told her ________________ for his birthday.
[6]It was a spaceship but it wasn't ________________.
[8]Maya got to the living room but couldn't see the spaceship they had seen, only ___________________.
[9]She looked at the cardboard spaceship and ____________.
[10]She said that they ________________ for him.
Why [1]Carlos and Maya dreamed of _________________________.
saw a spaceship
what he wanted
what he wanted
the cardboard box
got an idea
had a surprise
becoming space explorers
【Feelings情感】
How [3]They left the store, ______________________.
[6]On the day of his birthday, Carlos got up early, _________ to see his gift.
[7]_______________ from Carlos' eyes and he ran back to his room.
sad and disappointed
excited
Tears flowed
Theme (正能量原则) Carlos wanted _____________ for his birthday. For lack of money, his family couldn't afford one. His dad made _______________________,but it wasn't what he wanted. Maya came up with a good idea, which made Carlos _______.
a cardboard spaceship
happy
a spaceship
每段三个微情节(Q&A策略):注重衔接和冲突解决原则
第一段段首句:Carlos opened the door and just saw Maya was sitting in the cardboard spaceship.
[Question 1] What did Maya do
[Answer] __________________________________________________ __________________
[Question 2] What did Dad do
She invited Carlos to sit in front of her and drive the spaceship.
[Answer] __________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________
[Question 3] How did Carlos feel
[Answer] ___________________________________
He made the sound of a spaceship launching as it lifted off and pushed the cardboard spaceship slowly.
He felt surprised and delighted.
第二段段首句:A moment later, they stopped at the dinner table where there was a card that said“Best Restaurant in Space”.
[Question 1] What did Carlos and Maya do
[Answer] ___________________________________________
[Question 2] What did the whole family do
[Answer] _________________________________________________ _________________
[Question 3] What was Carlos' reaction
[Answer] ________________________________________
They walked just like real spacemen did.
They enjoyed the big meal and sang a birthday song for Carlos.
He felt happy to receive such a gift.
环境描写公式:无生命名词作主语+完全倒装句

1.客厅里放着一艘用纸板箱做成的宇宙飞船。
_____________________________________ that was made out of a cardboard box. (环境描写公式:完全倒装句)
2.整个房间鸦雀无声。
__________ filled the whole room. (环境描写公式:无生命名词作主语)
In the living room lay a spaceship
Silence
1.他们的父亲在飞船后面站着,他在飞船升空时发出飞船发射的声音。
____________________________________,who was making the sound of a spaceship launching as it lifted off.(环境描写公式:完全倒装句)
2.当他们走进客厅时,墙上有星星在闪耀。
When they came into the living room, __________________ shining around the walls.(环境描写公式:完全倒装句)
Behind the spaceship stood their dad
there were stars
3.笑声在房间里回荡。
___________ lingered around the room.(环境描写公式:无生命名词作主语)
Laughter
1.在好奇心的驱使下,卡洛斯迅速地走向宇宙飞船。
______________________,Carlos walked towards the spaceship quickly.(过去分词形式作状语)
2.看到玛雅脸上明显的兴奋,卡洛斯进入飞船,立即坐了下来。
________________________________ on Maya's face, Carlos got in the spaceship and sat down immediately.(v.-ing形式作状语)
Driven by curiosity
Seeing the obvious excitement
3.卡洛斯既惊讶又高兴,感觉自己仿佛置身于外太空。
__________________________,Carlos felt like he were in outer space.(形容词作状语)
4.他们的妈妈面带灿烂的笑容等着他们。
Their mom were waiting for them _____________________________. (with复合结构)
5.吃完饭后,他们回到宇宙飞船,在那里度过了一整天。
After eating the meal, they got back in their spaceship, ________________________________.(where引导定语从句)
Surprised and delighted
with a bright smile on her face
where they spent the whole day
  Carlos opened the door and just saw Maya was sitting in the cardboard spaceship. __________________________________________
____________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________
  A moment later, they stopped at the dinner table where there was a card that said “Best Restaurant in Space”.________________________
____________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________
One possible version:
  Carlos opened the door and just saw Maya was sitting in the cardboard spaceship. Driven by curiosity, Carlos walked towards the spaceship quickly. Maya invited Carlos to sit in front of her and drive the spaceship. Seeing the obvious excitement on Maya's face, Carlos got in the spaceship and sat down immediately. Then he heard their dad's voice. Behind the spaceship stood their dad, who was making the sound of a spaceship launching as it lifted off. Meanwhile, he pushed the cardboard spaceship slowly. It seemed as if they were driving the real spaceship. When they came into the living room, there were stars shining around the walls. Surprised and delighted, Carlos felt like he were in outer space.
  A moment later, they stopped at the dinner table where there was a card that said “Best Restaurant in Space”. Carlos and Maya got out of the spaceship eagerly. As they were walking towards the table, they walked just like those spacemen shown on TV. Their mom were waiting for them with a bright smile on her face. The whole family enjoyed the feast together, singing a birthday song for Carlos. Laughter lingered around the room. After eating the meal, they got back in their spaceship, where they spent the whole day. When it was time for bed, Carlos hugged his dad tightly and said with a big smile, “That was the best birthday gift. Never have I felt so happy. I love you, Dad!”