《创新课堂》Unit 4 Amazing art4 Period 4 Writing(课件)高中英语外研版必修3同步讲练测

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名称 《创新课堂》Unit 4 Amazing art4 Period 4 Writing(课件)高中英语外研版必修3同步讲练测
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Period 4 Writing
CONTENTS
目 录
01
主题引领 情境写作
假定你是你校校报英文版的编辑李华,你们计划在下期报纸的“Great Artworks”栏目中为读者介绍梵高的《向日葵》。请你根据表格内的提示信息,写一篇短文介绍这一作品。
写作一 应用文写作——介绍艺术作品的说明文
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,使行文连贯。
作品名称 《向日葵》(Sunflowers)
作者 文森特·梵高(Vincent van Gogh)
作品特点 1.这幅画完成于1889年,是梵高最著名的油画作品之一;
2.插在花瓶中的15朵向日葵,以黄色为主,颜色深浅不一,有亮黄色和棕黄色,分别代表了不同时期的向日葵。
作品评价 这幅画展现了生命的意义,加深了对生命的理解
1.《向日葵》是文森特·梵高的一幅油画。梵高是一位来自荷兰的伟大画家。
The Sunflowers is ____________________by Vincent van Gogh. Van Gogh is __________________ from the Netherlands.
2.它于1889年在阿尔勒完成,是他最著名的作品之一。
It was completed in Arles in 1889 and __________________________.
an oil painting
a great painter
is one of his most famous works
3.它描绘了花瓶里的向日葵。
It shows ___________________________.
4.这幅画主要有三种深浅的黄色,从亮黄色到棕黄色。
The painting is mostly ____________________________________, from bright yellow to brownish yellow.
sunflowers in a vase
in three shades of yellow
5.我可以看到这些花处于生命的不同阶段——有些刚开始绽放,有些开始枯萎了。
I can see the flowers are _________________________—some are just starting to bloom and some are starting to wither.
6.这幅画给我留下了深刻的印象。
The painting ____________________________________ me.
at different stages of life
leaves a great impression on
7.它向我展现了生命的意义。
It shows me ___________________________.
8.每一朵花都在尽力生长和展示自己的美丽,无论它处于生命的哪个阶段。
Each of the flowers is trying its best to grow and show its beauty, ___________________________________.
the meaning of life
no matter which stage of life it is at
9.【读教材原句】 (教材P2) We played well, but I felt the team were let down by one member, our point guard.
【记句式】 同位语
【学仿写】 用同位语改写句1
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The Sunflowers is an oil painting by Vincent van Gogh, a great painter from the Netherlands.
10.【读教材原句】 (人教必修三U2)At age 18, instead of following the traditional path of marriage like the majority of girls, she chose to study medicine.
【记句式】 介词短语作状语
【学仿写】 用介词短语作状语合并句3和句4
___________________________________________________________________________________________________
It shows sunflowers in a vase,mostly in three shades of yellow, from bright yellow to brownish yellow.
11.【读教材原句】 (教材P60)Those who saw Han Gan's horse paintings all sang high praises for his unique skill, saying that his horses “could gallop off the paper”.
【记句式】 现在分词作状语
【学仿写】 用现在分词作状语合并句6和句 7
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The painting leaves a great impression on me, showing me the meaning of life.
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One possible version:
The Sunflowers is an oil painting by Vincent van Gogh, a great painter from the Netherlands. It was completed in Arles in 1889 and is one of his most famous works.
It shows sunflowers in a vase, mostly in three shades of yellow, from bright yellow to brownish yellow. I can see the flowers are at different stages of life—some are just starting to bloom and some are starting to wither.
The painting leaves a great impression on me, showing me the meaning of life. Each of the flowers is trying its best to grow and show its beauty,no matter which stage of life it is at. The painting gives me a deeper understanding of life.
假定你是李华,你校英文报正在征文,要求介绍徐悲鸿的《奔马图》。请你写一篇短文进行投稿。内容包括:
1.介绍徐悲鸿和《奔马图》;
2.表达自己的看法。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,使行文连贯。
参考词汇:《奔马图》(Galloping Horse)
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One possible version:
Xu Beihong is one Chinese well -known twentieth-century artist who is famous for his lively horse paintings.
Xu Beihong followed the traditional Chinese style of painting, so Galloping Horse is known for its brush drawings in black inks and natural colors. The painting Galloping Horse not only shows one horse running towards us, which looks wonderfully alive, but also represents the personality and ideal of the gifted painter.
In a word, I am so crazy about the painting Galloping Horse, which has been listed in the national grade one cultural relics.
环境描写交代故事背景,衬托人物,渲染气氛,推动故事情节发展。有时环境描写可间接地表达角色的内心情感变化,即借景抒情。因此,在读后续写中环境描写必不可少。
特别注意:没有无缘无故的写景,只有依据主旨的写景。写景应为主旨服务,否则就是无效的写景。
掌握有效的环境描写公式,将为续写文章增色不少。
写作二 读后续写登峰篇
——父亲手工制作的宇宙飞船是最好的生日礼物
1.无生命名词作主语
表达时间、地点等抽象意义的名词作主语,谓语动词使用 “(使)看见”“(使)听见”等。
*The past decade witnessed the great changes in this city.
过去的十年见证了这个城市的巨大变化。
*That chilly night witnessed him walking with great difficulty in the snow.
那个寒冷的夜晚见证了他在雪中艰难地行走。
2.比喻/拟人句
读后续写中运用比喻的修辞手法可以创造视觉和情感上的联想,运用拟人的修辞手法能增加描写的生动感和表达的深度。
*The stars twinkled like a child's curious eyes blinking with anticipation.
星星闪烁着,就像孩子好奇的眼睛满怀期待地闪烁着。
*The smell of the popcorn filled the house, which, as if by magic, had turned into a bakery.
就像变魔术一样,爆米花的香味充满了整个屋子,这里变成了一家面包店。
3.完全倒装句
读后续写中最常出现的环境描写是地点、方位的描写,常用“完全倒装句”这一句式结构。
*From our neighbor's house came a beautiful music.
从我们邻居家传来了美妙的音乐。
*At one of the tables sat a family with two daughters who were about Li Mei's age.
其中一张桌子旁坐着有着两个女儿的一家人,这两个女儿的年龄和李美差不多。
4.情景交融
情景交融即借助某些特定物品或景色,委婉地表达某种感情或志向,达到写作目的。主要包括以景写情、以景衬情和以景比情三种形式。
*Bathed in wonderful sunshine, other students were busy chatting and taking photos with their teachers, while Steven was sitting quietly on his chair, drawing something.
沐浴在明媚的阳光下,其他同学正忙着和他们的老师聊天拍照,而史蒂文静静地坐在椅子上画画。
阅读下面的材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
[1]Carlos and Maya dreamed of becoming space explorers.
[2]On their way home, Carlos and Maya saw a spaceship in the window of a toy store. They went inside the store to see how much it cost. They saw the price and it was too expensive. They tried to pool their money together but it still wasn't enough.
[3]They left the store, sad and disappointed. Carlos suddenly realized that his birthday was coming up. Maybe he could ask their parents to buy the spaceship as a gift for his birthday.
[4]When they got home, Carlos ran straight to their mother and told her what he wanted for his birthday.
[5]Their family didn't have much when it came to money. So, when their dad stopped by the store to see the toy that Carlos wanted, he found it was too expensive. They couldn't afford it.
[6]On the day of his birthday, Carlos got up early, excited to see his gift. In the living room lay a spaceship that was made out of a cardboard box. His dad had made it for him. It had wings on each side and had enough space to ride in. It was a spaceship but it wasn't what he wanted.
[7]Tears flowed (流) from Carlos' eyes and he ran back to his room. Maya had just woken up and saw their mom knocking on the door and asking Carlos to come out. But he didn't want to.
[8]Maya got to the living room but couldn't see the spaceship they had seen, only the cardboard box. She saw their dad beside it, bending down (弯着腰) on one knee with his head down. Silence filled the whole room.
[9]Maya didn't want her brother to be sad on his birthday. So she tried to think of a way to cheer her brother up. She looked at the cardboard spaceship and got an idea.
[10]Carlos didn't have breakfast and now he was hungry. He was about to get out of bed when he heard a knock on the door. It was Maya. She said that they had a surprise for him.
注意:续写词数应为150左右。
Carlos opened the door and just saw Maya was sitting in the cardboard spaceship.__________________________________________
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A moment later, they stopped at the dinner table where there was a card that said “Best Restaurant in Space”.______________________
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【Settings背景】
On the day of his birthday
Where When& [6] ________________________, Carlos got up early, excited to see his gift. __________________ lay a spaceship that was made out of a cardboard box.
In the living room
【Characters角色】
Carlos
Who ____________; ______; Dad; Mom
Maya
【Plots情节】
saw a spaceship
What [2]On their way home, Carlos and Maya _____________in the window of a toy store.
[4]When they got home, Carlos ran straight to their mother and told her __________________ for his birthday.
[6]It was a spaceship but it wasn't __________________.
what he wanted
what he wanted
the cardboard box
What [8]Maya got to the living room but couldn't see the spaceship they had seen, only __________________.
[9]She looked at the cardboard spaceship and ____________.
[10]She said that they __________________ for him.
Why [1]Carlos and Maya dreamed of ________________________.
got an idea
had a surprise
becoming space explorers
【Feelings情感】
sad and disappointed
How [3]They left the store, ________________________.
[6]On the day of his birthday, Carlos got up early, ____________to see his gift.
[7] __________________ from Carlos' eyes and he ran back to his room.
excited
Tears flowed
Theme (正能量 原则) Carlos wanted __________________ for his birthday. For lack of money, his family couldn't afford one. His dad made ________________________, but it wasn't what he wanted. Maya came up with a good idea, which made Carlos ____________.
a spaceship
a cardboard spaceship
happy
每段三个微情节(Q&A策略):注重衔接和冲突解决原则
第一段段首句:Carlos opened the door and just saw Maya was sitting in the cardboard spaceship.
[Question 1] What did Maya do
[Answer]  _________________________________________________
____________________
She invited Carlos to sit in front of her and drive the spaceship.
[Question 2] What did Dad do
[Answer]  _________________________________________________
___________________________________________
[Question 3] How did Carlos feel
[Answer]  ____________________________________
He made the sound of a spaceship launching as it lifted off and pushed the cardboard spaceship slowly.
He felt surprised and delighted.
第二段段首句:A moment later, they stopped at the dinner table where there was a card that said“Best Restaurant in Space”.
[Question 1] What did Carlos and Maya do
[Answer]  __________________________________________
They walked just like real spacemen did.
[Question 2] What did the whole family do
[Answer]  ________________________________________________
_______________
[Question 3] What was Carlos' reaction
[Answer]  ____________________________________
They enjoyed the big meal and sang a birthday song for Carlos.
He felt happy to receive such a gift.
环境描写公式:无生命名词作主语+完全倒装句

1.客厅里放着一艘用纸板箱做成的宇宙飞船。
____________________________________ that was made out of a cardboard box. (环境描写公式:完全倒装句) 
2.整个房间鸦雀无声。
_________ filled the whole room. (环境描写公式:无生命名词作主语)
In the living room lay a spaceship
Silence
1.他们的父亲在飞船后面站着,他在飞船升空时发出飞船发射的声音。
_____________________________________, who was making the sound of a spaceship launching as it lifted off.(环境描写公式:完全倒装句)
Behind the spaceship stood their dad
2.当他们走进客厅时,墙上有星星在闪耀。
When they came into the living room, __________________shining around the walls.(环境描写公式:完全倒装句)
3.笑声在房间里回荡。
____________lingered around the room.(环境描写公式:无生命名词作主语)
there were stars
Laughter
1.在好奇心的驱使下,卡洛斯迅速地走向宇宙飞船。
________________________, Carlos walked towards the spaceship quickly.(过去分词形式作状语)
2.看到玛雅脸上明显的兴奋,卡洛斯进入飞船,立即坐了下来。
____________________________________on Maya's face, Carlos got in the spaceship and sat down immediately.(v. -ing形式作状语)
Driven by curiosity
Seeing the obvious excitement
3.卡洛斯既惊讶又高兴,感觉自己仿佛置身于外太空。
______________________________, Carlos felt like he were in outer space.(形容词作状语)
4.他们的妈妈面带灿烂的笑容等着他们。
Their mom were waiting for them _____________________________.
(with复合结构)
Surprised and delighted
with a bright smile on her face
5.吃完饭后,他们回到宇宙飞船,在那里度过了一整天。
After eating the meal, they got back in their spaceship, _______________________________.(where引导定语从句)
where they spent the whole day
Carlos opened the door and just saw Maya was sitting in the cardboard spaceship.__________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
A moment later, they stopped at the dinner table where there was a card that said “Best Restaurant in Space”._______________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
One possible version:
Carlos opened the door and just saw Maya was sitting in the cardboard spaceship. Driven by curiosity, Carlos walked towards the spaceship quickly. Maya invited Carlos to sit in front of her and drive the spaceship. Seeing the obvious excitement on Maya's face, Carlos got in the spaceship and sat down immediately. Then he heard their dad's voice. Behind the spaceship stood their dad, who was making the sound of a spaceship launching as it lifted off. Meanwhile, he pushed the cardboard spaceship slowly. It seemed as if they were driving the real spaceship. When they came into the living room, there were stars shining around the walls. Surprised and delighted, Carlos felt like he were in outer space.
A moment later, they stopped at the dinner table where there was a card that said “Best Restaurant in Space”. Carlos and Maya got out of the spaceship eagerly. As they were walking towards the table, they walked just like those spacemen shown on TV. Their mom were waiting for them with a bright smile on her face. The whole family enjoyed the feast together, singing a birthday song for Carlos. Laughter lingered around the room. After eating the meal, they got back in their spaceship, where they spent the whole day. When it was time for bed, Carlos hugged his dad tightly and said with a big smile, “That was the best birthday gift. Never have I felt so happy. I love you, Dad!”