《创新课堂》Unit 5 What an adventure！4 Period 4 Writing（课件）高中英语外研版必修3同步讲练测
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Period 4 Writing
CONTENTS
目 录
01
主题引领 情境写作
假如你是李华，暑假里和父母去法恩群岛(Farne Islands)进行了一次海底探险，体验了一次海底潜水。请根据下面的内容，写一篇英语短文，介绍你的潜水经历：
写作一 应用文写作——海底探险类记叙文
1．穿上潜水装备，跟潜水教练一起下水；
2．跟海豹在多彩缤纷的水下世界中近距离接触；
3．自我感受。
注意：1.词数80左右；
2．可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。
1．我以前从没想过我会进行海底探险。
I had never thought I could ______________________________ before.
2．我父母带我去了法恩群岛，我在那里试着潜水。
My parents took me to the Farne Islands and I ________________．
start an adventure under the sea
tried diving there
3．潜水的难度比我想象的要小得多。
Diving was ________________________________．
4．在教练的指导下，我穿上装备，跟在他后面。
________________________ my instructor, I put on the instruments and followed him.
much less difficult than I had imagined
Under the guidance of
5．我可以看到深蓝色的海浪上下移动，还有小鱼在游动。
I could ________________________________ and small fishes swimming.
6．我转过身来，几乎惊呆了——那是一只巨大的公海豹。
I ________________ and almost got astonished—it was a huge male seal.
see deep blue waves moving up and down
turned around
7．我把手放在它的背上，试着摸它光滑的皮肤。
I ________________________ and tried to feel its smooth skin.
8．这里的世界如此安静，以至于我觉得时间已经停止了。
The world here was ________________________________．
put my hands on its back
so quiet that I felt that time had stopped
9．最后，我的教练示意我上去。
Finally, my instructor ________________________．
10．刚才发生的一切就像一场梦。
________________________________ was like a dream.
gestured for me to go up
Everything that happened just now
11．【读教材原句】 (教材P67)Sadly, Mallory would die on the mountain in 1924, although his body would not be found until many years later.
【记句式】 “not...until”句型
【学仿写】 用“not...until”句型合并句1和句2
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I had never thought I could start an adventure under the sea until my parents took me to the Farne Islands and I tried diving there.
12．【读教材原句】 (教材P67)For these people, climbing Qomolangma is an experience like no other, making some feel weak and others, powerful.
【记句式】 现在分词短语作伴随状语
【学仿写】 用现在分词短语作伴随状语升级句7
________________________________________________________
I put my hands on its back，trying to feel its smooth skin.
13．【读教材原句】 (教材P67)What we get from this adventure is just sheer joy.
【记句式】 what引导主语从句
【学仿写】 用what引导主语从句升级句10
________________________________________________________
What happened just now was like a dream.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
One possible version：
I had never thought I could start an adventure under the sea until my parents took me to the Farne Islands and I tried diving there.
Diving was much less difficult than I had imagined.Under the guidance of my instructor, I put on the instruments and followed him.At first, I could see nothing, but gradually, I could see deep blue waves moving up and down and small fishes swimming. When we reached the spot, something big appeared on my right.I turned around and almost got astonished—it was a huge male seal. I put my hands on its back，trying to feel its smooth skin.The world here was so quiet that I felt that time had stopped.Finally, my instructor gestured for me to go up.
What happened just now was like a dream.
假如你是李华，请你为班级英语角写一篇短文，介绍一次令你难忘的海底探险活动，内容包括：
1．活动时间和地点；
2．活动过程；
3．个人感受。
注意：1.词数80左右；
2．可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
One possible version：
I had always been looking forward to diving. Last summer in Sanya, I went diving for the first time, which became the most exciting experience I'd ever had.
With my instructor guiding me, we managed to reach the spot, where we came across hundreds of seals. At first I was so scared, fearing they would attack me, but the instructor told me they were harmless. One of the seals just touched me lightly with its body, as if wanting to hug me.
Finally, I had to leave when my instructor gestured for me to go up. Although tiring, it was an exciting and unforgettable adventure.
在记叙文中，结尾起到至关重要的作用。读后续写的主题往往是积极向上的，因此可以通过表达人生感悟、生活真谛、人生观或价值观来升华主题。除了点明故事结局以外，也会和原文相互照应，点明主旨，深化主题。
写作二 读后续写登峰篇——
慈善组织成员凯茜整理书籍时拾金不昧
主题升华包括以下方面：
·揭示事物的普遍规律；
·由具体的人、物、事概括出世间的一般道理；
·合理迁移，由此及彼，由个体联系到整体，大至国家社会，小至企业、家庭等。
因此，一个好的结尾，往往起到画龙点睛的作用，既能够展现学生的视野和见识， 又能够有效地总结全文，并且提升续写文章的档次。 常见结尾如下：
1．常用的三种结尾类型
(1)首尾呼应法：关注标题和开头所表达的主题
①原文开头：
*I had an interesting childhood. It was filled with surprises and amusements, all because of my mother—loving, sweet, yet absent minded and forgetful.
我有一个有趣的童年。它充满了惊喜和乐趣，这一切都是因为我的母亲——可爱、温柔，却又心不在焉、健忘。
②续写结尾：
*Despite Mom's being absent minded and forgetful, she was still a kind and nice Mom, offering a great deal of happiness and unforgettable memories.
尽管妈妈心不在焉、健忘，但她仍然是一个和蔼可亲的妈妈，给了我很多快乐和难忘的回忆。
(2)主题升华：也称哲理式结尾，即在结尾用富含哲理的语句，总结全文，升华主旨，并给人以启发。学生在日常学习中，可以积累一些富含哲理的段落或句子，如果引用得当，不仅能深化主题，而且能引人深思，给读者以有益的启迪。
*It turned out that a simple act of kindness not only helped a person in need but also made a difference to the suffering community.
事实证明，一个小小的善行不仅帮助了有需要的人，还为有困难的社区带来了改变。
(3)自然而然的结尾：顺着文章发展的自然趋势结束全文。自然式结尾简单、自然，使文章的结构显得十分完整。
*Tired from fishing, we lay down on the river bank, bathing in the sun. When the sun went down, we returned home happily.
钓鱼累了，我们躺在河岸边，沐浴在阳光下。当太阳下山的时候，我们高兴地回家了。
2．四个高分结尾句型
(1)It turned out to be 句型＋not only...but (also)...
*It turned out to be a rewarding/unforgettable experience, where Mary not only harvested friendship, but also became a better version of herself. 这证明是一次有益的/难忘的经历，在这次经历中，玛丽不仅收获了友谊，而且也成了更好的自己。
(2)One thing is for certain—主句＋which引导的非限制性定语从句
*One thing is for certain—Mary benefited greatly from this experience, which will go a long way with her/gave her the sweet taste of friendship and happiness.
有一件事是肯定的——玛丽从这次经历中受益匪浅，这将伴她走很长一段路/让她尝到了友谊和幸福的甜蜜滋味。
(3)强调句型
*It is through this painful experience that Mary learned the value of friendship and enjoyed real/genuine happiness in life.
正是通过这次痛苦的经历，玛丽才认识到友谊的价值并享受到生活中真正的幸福。
(4)含蓄虚拟句
*But for this valuable experience, Mary wouldn't have learned/known the importance of friendship.
要不是这次宝贵的经历，玛丽就不会了解到友谊的重要性。
3．不同主题语境的高分结尾
(1)人与自我：往往归结到个人的积极改变和成长。
*But for this unforgettable experience, I would never have realized the importance of helping others in times of hardship.
要不是这次难忘的经历，我永远不会意识到在困难时帮助别人的重要性。
*Only then did I realize that it was bravery and determination that could conquer all the difficulties.
那时我才意识到勇敢和决心可以战胜一切困难。
*Hard work paid off eventually.
努力工作最终会有回报。
(2)人与社会：往往归结到人与人之间的和谐相处或者互帮互助。
①亲情
*One thing is for certain, what matters most in the world is family.
有一件事是肯定的，世界上最重要的是家庭。
②友情、师生情
*As the famous saying goes, “A friend in need is a friend indeed.”
正如那句名言所说，“患难见真情。”
*It is through this unforgettable experience that I have realized that my teacher is the person who offered me unconditioned support.
正是通过这次难忘的经历，我意识到我的老师是无条件支持我的人。
③社会温情
*From then on, I was determined to try my best to help more people in the future to make our world a better place.
从那时起，我决心尽我最大的努力在未来帮助更多的人，使我们的世界变成一个更加美好的地方。
*One thing is for certain—any act of kindness, however small, can make a difference.
有一件事是肯定的——任何善举，无论多么渺小，都能产生影响。
*Love/Kindness is one thing that really deserves to be passed on from one to another.
爱/善良是一件真正值得传递的东西。
④救援脱困
*What an unforgettable experience! It turns out that there's always a way out of any trouble as long as we stay calm.
多么难忘的一次经历啊！事实证明，只要我们保持冷静，任何困难都是有办法解决的。
*From the story/experience, we can learn that a good knowledge of first aid can make a real difference.
从这个故事/经历中，我们可以了解到，良好的急救知识可以起到真正的作用。
(3)人与自然：往往归结到人与自然和谐共生、相互依存。
*From then on, I realized that only in this way can we live in harmony with nature.
从那时起，我意识到只有这样我们才能与自然和谐相处。
*Humans and nature depend on each other. Let's live in harmony with the natural world and protect nature, for it is our home and future.
人与自然相互依存。让我们与自然世界和谐生存，保护自然，因为它是我们的家园和未来。
阅读下面的材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
[1]There are a number of volunteer organizations out there that deal in things like clothing donations and the sale of remaining books. Retired schoolteacher Cathy McAllister has been a member of such an organization, VNSA, since 2012. Her duties in this regard involve working throughout the year to help prepare the books for their February sale and acting as personnel chair for the sale itself. This means that she helps coordinate (协调) all the other volunteers that help out before, during, and after the event.
[2]It was before the 2019 book sale and Cathy once again found herself sitting among a towering pile of books and sorting through them to ensure that they would be in good enough condition to resell. As she was sorting, she came upon a book. The slightly broken book was in fair condition but it was one of four copies she had already found. The other three were much better than this one. Though she didn't like doing it, she had done this long enough to know that the only remaining choice was to throw it into the pile for repurposing.
[3]A greedy book lover herself, Cathy felt guilty about throwing away a perfectly good book. Before she threw it away, she decided to check for more serious damage inside that might justify her giving it up. She opened the cover and moved to fan through the pages when she noticed something unusual.
[4]When she opened the cover, Cathy was surprised to see that a part had been hollowed out inside the book. It looked as though someone had taken an X-Acto knife and rather expertly hollowed out a significant space. What's more, the book's previous owner had chosen to hide something in that space. She looked down and saw that someone had hidden four packages in the space, each containing ten$100 bills. Cathy's first thought was that the bills were toy money that perhaps a kid had hidden inside as part of some childish game or something.
注意：续写词数应为150左右。
But Cathy soon realized that these were real $100 bills. __________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Luckily for Cathy, the book also contained the name of the book owner. ____________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【Settings背景】
When&Where [2]It was ____________________ and Cathy once again found herself sitting among____________________ and sorting through them to ensure that they would be in good enough condition to resell.
before the 2019 book sale
a towering pile of books
【Characters角色】
Who __________; the book owner
Cathy
【Plots情节】
What [2]As she was sorting, she came upon __________.
[3]Before she threw it away, she decided to ________________________________that might justify her giving it up.
[3]She __________ the cover and moved to ___________________ when she noticed something unusual.
a book
check for more serious damage inside
opened
fan through the pages
What [4]She looked down and saw that someone _______________________ in the space, each containing ten $100 bills.
Why [1]Her duties in this regard involve working throughout the year to ____________________ for their February sale and acting as personnel chair for the sale itself.
had hidden four packages
help prepare the books
【Feelings情感】
How [3]A ____________________ herself, Cathy felt __________ about throwing away a perfectly good book.
[4]When she opened the cover, Cathy ____________________ that a part had been hollowed out inside the book.
greedy book lover
guilty
was surprised to see
Theme (正能量 原则) While sorting out books, Cathy noticed something __________. She found four packages in a book, each containing ____________________. She managed to find ____________________and returned the money. Finally, the book owner donated a large amount of money in return for Cathy's __________．
unusual
ten $100 bills
the book owner
honesty
每段三个微情节(Q&A策略)：注重衔接和冲突解决原则
第一段段首句：But Cathy soon realized that these were real $100 bills.
[Question 1] How did she feel
[Answer] ____________________
She felt surprised.
[Question 2] What was her second thought
[Answer] ___________________________________
[Question 3] What was her decision
[Answer] ______________________________
She wanted to do charity with the money.
She decided to return it to its owner.
第二段段首句：Luckily for Cathy, the book also contained the name of the book owner.
[Question 1] What did Cathy do
[Answer] ______________________________
She turned to the Internet for help.
[Question 2] How did she find the book owner
[Answer] __________________________________________________
[Question 3] What did the book owner do
[Answer] ____________________________________________________
________________
Numerous volunteers online helped her to find the owner.
The book owner donated a large amount of money in return for
Cathy's honesty.
精彩结尾公式：首尾呼应；主题升华；自然而然的结尾
1．有许多志愿组织在那里处理像捐赠衣服和出售剩余书籍这样的事务。
There are a number of ____________________________out there that deal in things like clothing donations and _________________________. (开头给出背景信息：“志愿者组织”和“卖书”，推动故事情节发展)
volunteer organizations
the sale of remaining books
2．自2012年以来，退休教师凯茜·麦卡利斯特一直是VNSA这样一个组织的成员。
______________________________ Cathy McAllister has been a member of ____________________, VNSA, since 2012.(文章的主要人物及慈善组织出现，为下文做铺垫)
Retired schoolteacher
such an organization
他们非常感谢凯茜的诚实，以至他们最终向VNSA捐赠了一大笔钱来表达他们的感激之情。
So thankful were they for Cathy's honesty that they actually ended up ____________________________________________________．(精彩结尾公式：自然而然的结尾)
donating a generous amount to VNSA to show their gratitude
1．她惊讶地张大了嘴。
__________dropped open in surprise. (无生命名词作主语)
2．很明显，这本书的主人曾选择把4 000美元藏在书里。
____________________ someone who owned the book had chosen to hide $ 4，000 inside the book. (it作形式主语)
Her mouth
It was obvious that
3．看到这些钱，凯茜的第二个想法是这些钱足够做慈善了。
Upon seeing the money, Cathy's second thought was___________________________________ ．(that引导表语从句)
4．用这个名字，凯茜也许能找到它的合法主人。
____________________, Cathy might be able to find its rightful owner.(v.-ing形式作状语)
that this was sufficient to do charity
Using this name
5．谢天谢地，这本书的前主人碰巧有一个非常不寻常的姓氏，这让搜索变得容易多了。
Thankfully, the book's previous owner happened to have a pretty unusual last name, ____________________________________．(which引导非限制性定语从句)
which made the search much easier
But Cathy soon realized that these were real $100 bills. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Luckily for Cathy, the book also contained the name of the book owner. ____________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
One possible version：
But Cathy soon realized that these were real $100 bills. Her mouth dropped open in surprise. Cathy was lost in thought. It was obvious that someone who owned the book had chosen to hide $4，000 inside the book. Upon seeing the money, Cathy's second thought was that this was sufficient to do charity. She didn't bother considering keeping the money herself, but it just didn't feel right to keep it for any reason. Regardless of how much good she thought she might be able to do with the money, Cathy decided that the only realistic choice left to her was to return it to its owner.
Luckily for Cathy, the book also contained the name of the book owner. Using this name, Cathy might be able to find its rightful owner. She turned to the Internet for help. Unexpectedly, she received more than 1，000 comments within ten minutes. Thankfully, the book's previous owner happened to have a pretty unusual last name, which made the search much easier. With the help of numerous volunteers online, Cathy found the owner successfully in just about half an hour. As it turned out, the money belonged to a man and his daughter. So thankful were they for Cathy's honesty that they actually ended up donating a generous amount to VNSA to show their gratitude.
Period 4 Writing
CONTENTS
目 录
01
主题引领 情境写作
假如你是李华，暑假里和父母去法恩群岛(Farne Islands)进行了一次海底探险，体验了一次海底潜水。请根据下面的内容，写一篇英语短文，介绍你的潜水经历：
写作一 应用文写作——海底探险类记叙文
1．穿上潜水装备，跟潜水教练一起下水；
2．跟海豹在多彩缤纷的水下世界中近距离接触；
3．自我感受。
注意：1.词数80左右；
2．可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。
1．我以前从没想过我会进行海底探险。
I had never thought I could ______________________________ before.
2．我父母带我去了法恩群岛，我在那里试着潜水。
My parents took me to the Farne Islands and I ________________．
start an adventure under the sea
tried diving there
3．潜水的难度比我想象的要小得多。
Diving was ________________________________．
4．在教练的指导下，我穿上装备，跟在他后面。
________________________ my instructor, I put on the instruments and followed him.
much less difficult than I had imagined
Under the guidance of
5．我可以看到深蓝色的海浪上下移动，还有小鱼在游动。
I could ________________________________ and small fishes swimming.
6．我转过身来，几乎惊呆了——那是一只巨大的公海豹。
I ________________ and almost got astonished—it was a huge male seal.
see deep blue waves moving up and down
turned around
7．我把手放在它的背上，试着摸它光滑的皮肤。
I ________________________ and tried to feel its smooth skin.
8．这里的世界如此安静，以至于我觉得时间已经停止了。
The world here was ________________________________．
put my hands on its back
so quiet that I felt that time had stopped
9．最后，我的教练示意我上去。
Finally, my instructor ________________________．
10．刚才发生的一切就像一场梦。
________________________________ was like a dream.
gestured for me to go up
Everything that happened just now
11．【读教材原句】 (教材P67)Sadly, Mallory would die on the mountain in 1924, although his body would not be found until many years later.
【记句式】 “not...until”句型
【学仿写】 用“not...until”句型合并句1和句2
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I had never thought I could start an adventure under the sea until my parents took me to the Farne Islands and I tried diving there.
12．【读教材原句】 (教材P67)For these people, climbing Qomolangma is an experience like no other, making some feel weak and others, powerful.
【记句式】 现在分词短语作伴随状语
【学仿写】 用现在分词短语作伴随状语升级句7
________________________________________________________
I put my hands on its back，trying to feel its smooth skin.
13．【读教材原句】 (教材P67)What we get from this adventure is just sheer joy.
【记句式】 what引导主语从句
【学仿写】 用what引导主语从句升级句10
________________________________________________________
What happened just now was like a dream.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
One possible version：
I had never thought I could start an adventure under the sea until my parents took me to the Farne Islands and I tried diving there.
Diving was much less difficult than I had imagined.Under the guidance of my instructor, I put on the instruments and followed him.At first, I could see nothing, but gradually, I could see deep blue waves moving up and down and small fishes swimming. When we reached the spot, something big appeared on my right.I turned around and almost got astonished—it was a huge male seal. I put my hands on its back，trying to feel its smooth skin.The world here was so quiet that I felt that time had stopped.Finally, my instructor gestured for me to go up.
What happened just now was like a dream.
假如你是李华，请你为班级英语角写一篇短文，介绍一次令你难忘的海底探险活动，内容包括：
1．活动时间和地点；
2．活动过程；
3．个人感受。
注意：1.词数80左右；
2．可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。
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One possible version：
I had always been looking forward to diving. Last summer in Sanya, I went diving for the first time, which became the most exciting experience I'd ever had.
With my instructor guiding me, we managed to reach the spot, where we came across hundreds of seals. At first I was so scared, fearing they would attack me, but the instructor told me they were harmless. One of the seals just touched me lightly with its body, as if wanting to hug me.
Finally, I had to leave when my instructor gestured for me to go up. Although tiring, it was an exciting and unforgettable adventure.
在记叙文中，结尾起到至关重要的作用。读后续写的主题往往是积极向上的，因此可以通过表达人生感悟、生活真谛、人生观或价值观来升华主题。除了点明故事结局以外，也会和原文相互照应，点明主旨，深化主题。
写作二 读后续写登峰篇——
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主题升华包括以下方面：
·揭示事物的普遍规律；
·由具体的人、物、事概括出世间的一般道理；
·合理迁移，由此及彼，由个体联系到整体，大至国家社会，小至企业、家庭等。
因此，一个好的结尾，往往起到画龙点睛的作用，既能够展现学生的视野和见识， 又能够有效地总结全文，并且提升续写文章的档次。 常见结尾如下：
1．常用的三种结尾类型
(1)首尾呼应法：关注标题和开头所表达的主题
①原文开头：
*I had an interesting childhood. It was filled with surprises and amusements, all because of my mother—loving, sweet, yet absent minded and forgetful.
我有一个有趣的童年。它充满了惊喜和乐趣，这一切都是因为我的母亲——可爱、温柔，却又心不在焉、健忘。
②续写结尾：
*Despite Mom's being absent minded and forgetful, she was still a kind and nice Mom, offering a great deal of happiness and unforgettable memories.
尽管妈妈心不在焉、健忘，但她仍然是一个和蔼可亲的妈妈，给了我很多快乐和难忘的回忆。
(2)主题升华：也称哲理式结尾，即在结尾用富含哲理的语句，总结全文，升华主旨，并给人以启发。学生在日常学习中，可以积累一些富含哲理的段落或句子，如果引用得当，不仅能深化主题，而且能引人深思，给读者以有益的启迪。
*It turned out that a simple act of kindness not only helped a person in need but also made a difference to the suffering community.
事实证明，一个小小的善行不仅帮助了有需要的人，还为有困难的社区带来了改变。
(3)自然而然的结尾：顺着文章发展的自然趋势结束全文。自然式结尾简单、自然，使文章的结构显得十分完整。
*Tired from fishing, we lay down on the river bank, bathing in the sun. When the sun went down, we returned home happily.
钓鱼累了，我们躺在河岸边，沐浴在阳光下。当太阳下山的时候，我们高兴地回家了。
2．四个高分结尾句型
(1)It turned out to be 句型＋not only...but (also)...
*It turned out to be a rewarding/unforgettable experience, where Mary not only harvested friendship, but also became a better version of herself. 这证明是一次有益的/难忘的经历，在这次经历中，玛丽不仅收获了友谊，而且也成了更好的自己。
(2)One thing is for certain—主句＋which引导的非限制性定语从句
*One thing is for certain—Mary benefited greatly from this experience, which will go a long way with her/gave her the sweet taste of friendship and happiness.
有一件事是肯定的——玛丽从这次经历中受益匪浅，这将伴她走很长一段路/让她尝到了友谊和幸福的甜蜜滋味。
(3)强调句型
*It is through this painful experience that Mary learned the value of friendship and enjoyed real/genuine happiness in life.
正是通过这次痛苦的经历，玛丽才认识到友谊的价值并享受到生活中真正的幸福。
(4)含蓄虚拟句
*But for this valuable experience, Mary wouldn't have learned/known the importance of friendship.
要不是这次宝贵的经历，玛丽就不会了解到友谊的重要性。
3．不同主题语境的高分结尾
(1)人与自我：往往归结到个人的积极改变和成长。
*But for this unforgettable experience, I would never have realized the importance of helping others in times of hardship.
要不是这次难忘的经历，我永远不会意识到在困难时帮助别人的重要性。
*Only then did I realize that it was bravery and determination that could conquer all the difficulties.
那时我才意识到勇敢和决心可以战胜一切困难。
*Hard work paid off eventually.
努力工作最终会有回报。
(2)人与社会：往往归结到人与人之间的和谐相处或者互帮互助。
①亲情
*One thing is for certain, what matters most in the world is family.
有一件事是肯定的，世界上最重要的是家庭。
②友情、师生情
*As the famous saying goes, “A friend in need is a friend indeed.”
正如那句名言所说，“患难见真情。”
*It is through this unforgettable experience that I have realized that my teacher is the person who offered me unconditioned support.
正是通过这次难忘的经历，我意识到我的老师是无条件支持我的人。
③社会温情
*From then on, I was determined to try my best to help more people in the future to make our world a better place.
从那时起，我决心尽我最大的努力在未来帮助更多的人，使我们的世界变成一个更加美好的地方。
*One thing is for certain—any act of kindness, however small, can make a difference.
有一件事是肯定的——任何善举，无论多么渺小，都能产生影响。
*Love/Kindness is one thing that really deserves to be passed on from one to another.
爱/善良是一件真正值得传递的东西。
④救援脱困
*What an unforgettable experience! It turns out that there's always a way out of any trouble as long as we stay calm.
多么难忘的一次经历啊！事实证明，只要我们保持冷静，任何困难都是有办法解决的。
*From the story/experience, we can learn that a good knowledge of first aid can make a real difference.
从这个故事/经历中，我们可以了解到，良好的急救知识可以起到真正的作用。
(3)人与自然：往往归结到人与自然和谐共生、相互依存。
*From then on, I realized that only in this way can we live in harmony with nature.
从那时起，我意识到只有这样我们才能与自然和谐相处。
*Humans and nature depend on each other. Let's live in harmony with the natural world and protect nature, for it is our home and future.
人与自然相互依存。让我们与自然世界和谐生存，保护自然，因为它是我们的家园和未来。
阅读下面的材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
[1]There are a number of volunteer organizations out there that deal in things like clothing donations and the sale of remaining books. Retired schoolteacher Cathy McAllister has been a member of such an organization, VNSA, since 2012. Her duties in this regard involve working throughout the year to help prepare the books for their February sale and acting as personnel chair for the sale itself. This means that she helps coordinate (协调) all the other volunteers that help out before, during, and after the event.
[2]It was before the 2019 book sale and Cathy once again found herself sitting among a towering pile of books and sorting through them to ensure that they would be in good enough condition to resell. As she was sorting, she came upon a book. The slightly broken book was in fair condition but it was one of four copies she had already found. The other three were much better than this one. Though she didn't like doing it, she had done this long enough to know that the only remaining choice was to throw it into the pile for repurposing.
[3]A greedy book lover herself, Cathy felt guilty about throwing away a perfectly good book. Before she threw it away, she decided to check for more serious damage inside that might justify her giving it up. She opened the cover and moved to fan through the pages when she noticed something unusual.
[4]When she opened the cover, Cathy was surprised to see that a part had been hollowed out inside the book. It looked as though someone had taken an X-Acto knife and rather expertly hollowed out a significant space. What's more, the book's previous owner had chosen to hide something in that space. She looked down and saw that someone had hidden four packages in the space, each containing ten$100 bills. Cathy's first thought was that the bills were toy money that perhaps a kid had hidden inside as part of some childish game or something.
注意：续写词数应为150左右。
But Cathy soon realized that these were real $100 bills. __________
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Luckily for Cathy, the book also contained the name of the book owner. ____________________________________________________
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【Settings背景】
When&Where [2]It was ____________________ and Cathy once again found herself sitting among____________________ and sorting through them to ensure that they would be in good enough condition to resell.
before the 2019 book sale
a towering pile of books
【Characters角色】
Who __________; the book owner
Cathy
【Plots情节】
What [2]As she was sorting, she came upon __________.
[3]Before she threw it away, she decided to ________________________________that might justify her giving it up.
[3]She __________ the cover and moved to ___________________ when she noticed something unusual.
a book
check for more serious damage inside
opened
fan through the pages
What [4]She looked down and saw that someone _______________________ in the space, each containing ten $100 bills.
Why [1]Her duties in this regard involve working throughout the year to ____________________ for their February sale and acting as personnel chair for the sale itself.
had hidden four packages
help prepare the books
【Feelings情感】
How [3]A ____________________ herself, Cathy felt __________ about throwing away a perfectly good book.
[4]When she opened the cover, Cathy ____________________ that a part had been hollowed out inside the book.
greedy book lover
guilty
was surprised to see
Theme (正能量 原则) While sorting out books, Cathy noticed something __________. She found four packages in a book, each containing ____________________. She managed to find ____________________and returned the money. Finally, the book owner donated a large amount of money in return for Cathy's __________．
unusual
ten $100 bills
the book owner
honesty
每段三个微情节(Q&A策略)：注重衔接和冲突解决原则
第一段段首句：But Cathy soon realized that these were real $100 bills.
[Question 1] How did she feel
[Answer] ____________________
She felt surprised.
[Question 2] What was her second thought
[Answer] ___________________________________
[Question 3] What was her decision
[Answer] ______________________________
She wanted to do charity with the money.
She decided to return it to its owner.
第二段段首句：Luckily for Cathy, the book also contained the name of the book owner.
[Question 1] What did Cathy do
[Answer] ______________________________
She turned to the Internet for help.
[Question 2] How did she find the book owner
[Answer] __________________________________________________
[Question 3] What did the book owner do
[Answer] ____________________________________________________
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Numerous volunteers online helped her to find the owner.
The book owner donated a large amount of money in return for
Cathy's honesty.
精彩结尾公式：首尾呼应；主题升华；自然而然的结尾
1．有许多志愿组织在那里处理像捐赠衣服和出售剩余书籍这样的事务。
There are a number of ____________________________out there that deal in things like clothing donations and _________________________. (开头给出背景信息：“志愿者组织”和“卖书”，推动故事情节发展)
volunteer organizations
the sale of remaining books
2．自2012年以来，退休教师凯茜·麦卡利斯特一直是VNSA这样一个组织的成员。
______________________________ Cathy McAllister has been a member of ____________________, VNSA, since 2012.(文章的主要人物及慈善组织出现，为下文做铺垫)
Retired schoolteacher
such an organization
他们非常感谢凯茜的诚实，以至他们最终向VNSA捐赠了一大笔钱来表达他们的感激之情。
So thankful were they for Cathy's honesty that they actually ended up ____________________________________________________．(精彩结尾公式：自然而然的结尾)
donating a generous amount to VNSA to show their gratitude
1．她惊讶地张大了嘴。
__________dropped open in surprise. (无生命名词作主语)
2．很明显，这本书的主人曾选择把4 000美元藏在书里。
____________________ someone who owned the book had chosen to hide $ 4，000 inside the book. (it作形式主语)
Her mouth
It was obvious that
3．看到这些钱，凯茜的第二个想法是这些钱足够做慈善了。
Upon seeing the money, Cathy's second thought was___________________________________ ．(that引导表语从句)
4．用这个名字，凯茜也许能找到它的合法主人。
____________________, Cathy might be able to find its rightful owner.(v.-ing形式作状语)
that this was sufficient to do charity
Using this name
5．谢天谢地，这本书的前主人碰巧有一个非常不寻常的姓氏，这让搜索变得容易多了。
Thankfully, the book's previous owner happened to have a pretty unusual last name, ____________________________________．(which引导非限制性定语从句)
which made the search much easier
But Cathy soon realized that these were real $100 bills. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Luckily for Cathy, the book also contained the name of the book owner. ____________________________________________________
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One possible version：
But Cathy soon realized that these were real $100 bills. Her mouth dropped open in surprise. Cathy was lost in thought. It was obvious that someone who owned the book had chosen to hide $4，000 inside the book. Upon seeing the money, Cathy's second thought was that this was sufficient to do charity. She didn't bother considering keeping the money herself, but it just didn't feel right to keep it for any reason. Regardless of how much good she thought she might be able to do with the money, Cathy decided that the only realistic choice left to her was to return it to its owner.
Luckily for Cathy, the book also contained the name of the book owner. Using this name, Cathy might be able to find its rightful owner. She turned to the Internet for help. Unexpectedly, she received more than 1，000 comments within ten minutes. Thankfully, the book's previous owner happened to have a pretty unusual last name, which made the search much easier. With the help of numerous volunteers online, Cathy found the owner successfully in just about half an hour. As it turned out, the money belonged to a man and his daughter. So thankful were they for Cathy's honesty that they actually ended up donating a generous amount to VNSA to show their gratitude.