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Period 4 Writing
写作一 应用文写作——介绍无现金支付的说明文
目前越来越多的人使用移动支付(mobile payment),移动支付改变了人们的生活。请写一篇英语短文介绍移动支付,要点如下:
1.移动支付的优缺点;
2.你的看法。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,使行文连贯。
1.现在,移动支付变得越来越受欢迎,越来越少的人使用现金。
Nowadays, the mobile payment is becoming increasingly popular, and _________________ people use cash.
2.我们没必要带钱包。
_____________________________ a wallet.
fewer and fewer
There is no need for us to carry
3.我们将永远不会担心收到假钱或不得不数零钱。
We will never _____________ getting fake notes or having to count change.
4.在中国,移动支付已大大改变了人们的生活。
The mobile payment ________________________________________.
5.手机容易被偷。这样会使我们的银行账户不安全。
Phones can be stolen easily. It will _______________________________.
worry about
has changed people's life in China greatly
make our bank accounts unsafe
6.移动支付容易导致过度消费。
The mobile payment can easily _________ over-consumption.
7.只有这样,移动支付才能在我们的日常生活中发挥它的重要作用。
Only in this way ______________________________________________ our daily life.
lead to
can the mobile payment play its important role in
8.【读教材原句】 (教材P35) The Apsaras are depicted sailing in the bright blue sky, with their scarves flying, as if they are about to fly down to meet us.
【记句式】 with复合结构
【学仿写】 用 with复合结构改写句1
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Nowadays, with the mobile payment becoming increasingly popular, fewer and fewer people use cash.
9.【读教材原句】 (外研选必二U5)Nor would they fail to imagine how its native inhabitants, including royal penguins, king penguins, and elephant seals, existed in perfect harmony with their natural habitat for thousands of years.
【记句式】倒装结构
【学仿写】 用倒装句改写句3
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Never will we worry about getting fake notes or having to count change.
10.【读教材原句】 (教材P51)Zhang therefore decided to return to her home town and grow roses, which surprised many people.
【记句式】 which引导非限制性定语从句
【学仿写】 用which引导非限制性定语从句改写句5
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Phones can be stolen easily, which will make our bank accounts unsafe.
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One possible version:
Nowadays, with the mobile payment becoming increasingly popular, fewer and fewer people use cash.
There is no need for us to carry a wallet. Besides, never will we worry about getting fake notes or having to count change. In short, the mobile payment has changed people's life in China greatly. However, the mobile payment also has its disadvantages. First, phones can be stolen easily, which will make our bank accounts unsafe. Second, the mobile payment can easily lead to over-consumption.
Personally, the mobile payment is really convenient for us all but we should be careful. Only in this way can the mobile payment play its important role in our daily life.
假定你是李华,某英文报社正在就“刷脸支付(face-scanning payment)的利弊”这一话题进行征文。请用英语写一篇短文并投稿,内容包括:
1.分析利弊;
2.展望前景。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,使行文连贯。
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One possible version:
Nowadays, face-scanning payment is very popular among customers, but it has both advantages and disadvantages.
As for its advantages, first, the payment can be completed quickly, thus avoiding long-time waiting in line. Second, customers don't have to carry a bank card, which makes payment more convenient. When it comes to its disadvantages, the most worrying thing is that face recognition hasn't reached 100% accuracy, which might lead to payment risks. In addition, customers' personal information may be revealed illegally.
Imperfect as it is, I believe with the improvement of face recognition technology, face-scanning payment will surely become more and more popular.
写作二 读后续写强效篇
——陌生人给小男孩庆祝生日体现爱与温暖
读后续写中常见的人物包括:男性、女性、老人及孩子。因为续写语篇的特点,人物描写不宜过多过细;因此,视觉描写多集中于人物的外貌、表情,听觉描写通常涉及人物的嗓音及其他声音,触觉描写通常包括直接的肢体动作及带给人的感觉,嗅觉和味觉描写往往涉及口、鼻器官的动作。
请在横线上写出下列描写人物的句子对应的五感。
1.The chef sampled the food and announced that it was well done.____________
2.The young man looked very tidy, dressed very smartly in his black suit.______
3.The gentleman at the door beamed and asked in friendly voice if my parents were home.______
味觉;听觉
视觉
听觉
4.My coach gave me a firm handshake and patted me on the shoulder with approval.______
5.She came forward, with a smile that could brighten up the entire room.______
6.The teacher spoke slowly in a patient and gentle voice, which miraculously calmed the panicked boy.______
7.Mom was cooking in the kitchen and tested its taste from time to time.______
触觉
视觉
听觉
味觉
8.At the sight of his grandchildren, his face lit up and his eyes twinkled merrily.______
9.Whenever Grandma is in the house, there is always the inviting aroma of her handmade cake.______
10.Light-hearted sounds of children's laughter filled the air.______
11.After a long day of hiking, all the children were both thirsty and hungry. ______
12.The mingled happy chatter of the girls could almost tear the house down.______
视觉
嗅觉
听觉
味觉
听觉
阅读下面的材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
[1]As the afternoon sun bathed the local beach with its warm, golden rays, four-year-old William sat on the beach with a mix of expectation and confusion.His dad, Steven, sat by his side. They were waiting for William's friends to arrive and celebrate his long-awaited birthday party. William's wide eyes, filled with hope and happiness, stared at the shoreline, looking for familiar faces.
[2]He kept asking his dad where everyone was, and Steven just replied, “they're coming soon,” trying to ease his son's growing impatience.But the longer they waited, the more disappointed William became. When hearing that the two invited families couldn't make it to the celebration because of unexpected situations, he was suddenly thrown into a world of darkness and sank into hopelessness.
[3]Steven watched his son, who had been eagerly expecting his special day for what seemed like ages. This year, William had been more aware than ever of his upcoming birthday, asking throughout the month when his birthday was, eagerly expecting a good time.
[4]Feeling a sense of guilt for his son's disappointment, Steven decided to turn to social media for help. He posted a lovely picture of him and William on the beach. Their faces were filled with a mix of hope and disappointment. The sincere words with the picture read, “William would love some friends to play with on the beach. To celebrate his fourth birthday, he has sand toys, dinosaurs, and we have some snacks and drinks. Any and all welcome. ”
[5]William's wish for companionship produced a strong response from the local people. They flooded the post with messages of support, birthday wishes, and offers to join the celebration. They were determined to make William's day special.
[6]“Going there. See you soon,”one warm-hearted local commented on the post, promising to bring her family along. The message aroused the same feeling from many others, who were quick to follow suit.
注意:续写词数应为150左右。
Soon, the beach was filled with scenes of joy. __________________
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After hours of laughter and games, the sun began to set. _________
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【Settings背景】
When& Where [1]As ___________________ bathed _________________ with its warm, golden rays, four-year-old William sat on the beach with a mix of expectation and confusion.
the afternoon sun
the local beach
【Characters角色】
Who __________, Steven, the local people
William
【Plots情节】
What [1]They were waiting for William's friends to arrive and ___________________________________________.
[2]When hearing that the two invited families couldn't ____________________________ because of unexpected situations, he was suddenly thrown into a world of darkness and sank into hopelessness.
[4]He posted ______________________________________ on the beach.
[5]William's wish for companionship produced _________________________________________.
celebrate his long-awaited birthday party
make it to the celebration
a lovely picture of him and William
a strong response from the local people
Why [3]This year, William had been more aware than ever of his upcoming birthday, asking throughout the month when his birthday was, _______________________________.
eagerly expecting a good time
【Feelings情感】
How [1]William's wide eyes, ________________________________, stared at the shoreline, looking for familiar faces.
[2]He was suddenly thrown into _____________________ and sank into ______________.
[4]Feeling a sense of guilt for his son's ________________, Steven decided to turn to social media for help.
filled with hope and happiness
a world of darkness
hopelessness
disappointment
Theme (正能量原则) On William's Birthday, the two __________________ failed to come. His dad Steven turned to ______________ for help, and the local people offered to join _________________,which showed ______ and warmth.
invited families
social media
the celebration
love
每段三个微情节(Q & A策略):注重衔接和冲突解决原则
第一段段首句:Soon, the beach was filled with scenes of joy.
[Question 1] What did parents and children do
[Answer] __________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________
Parents chatted and connected, forming new friendships and children built sandcastles and shared their favourite toys.
[Question 2] What did the two invited families do
[Answer] __________________________________________________
[Question 3] How did they celebrate the birthday
[Answer] _________________________________________________
They sent their birthday wishes through videos.
They ate cakes and gathered to sing “Happy Birthday”.
第二段段首句:After hours of laughter and games, the sun began to set.
[Question 1] How did they end the birthday party
[Answer] _____________________________________
[Question 2] How did William feel
[Answer] _________________________
[Question 3] What did Steven do on social media
[Answer] __________________________________________________ ________________
They said goodbye and headed home.
William was overjoyed.
He expressed his gratitude for the birthday wishes and support.
遣词造句:五感描写人物
语言协同原则:应用高级词汇、句型和语法结构
1.William's wide eyes, filled with hope and happiness, stared at the shoreline, looking for familiar faces. (通过______描写人物)
2.He kept asking his dad where everyone was, and Steven just replied,“they're coming soon,” trying to ease his son's growing impatience. (通过______描写人物)
视觉
听觉
1.当他吹灭生日蛋糕上的蜡烛时,他的眼睛里闪烁着喜悦和甜蜜。
When he ______________________ on his birthday cake, his eyes danced ________________________.(通过视觉描写人物)
2.当大家聚在一起唱“生日快乐”并分享这一甜蜜时刻时,蛋糕的香味弥漫在空气中。
______________________________ filled the air as everyone gathered ______________________________ and _________________________. (通过嗅觉和听觉描写人物)
blew out the candles
with joy and sweetness
The delicious scent of the cake
to sing “Happy Birthday”
share this sweet moment
3.他们回家了,脸上洋溢着喜悦。
They headed home, their faces ___________________________. (通过视觉描写人物)
lighting up with pleasure
1.越来越多的社区成员来到这里,让威廉的生日变得特别,他们渴望分享一个小男孩的兴奋。
More and more community members arrived to make William's birthday special, ______________________________________________. (形容词短语作状语)
eager to share the excitement of a young boy
2.孩子们一起玩耍,建造沙堡,分享他们最喜欢的玩具。
Children played together, __________________________ and ___________________________. (v.-ing形式作状语)
3.威廉周围欢声笑语。
_____________________ surrounded William. (无生命名词作主语)
building sandcastles
sharing their favourite toys
Laughter and cheer
4.事实证明,正是来自陌生人的爱和温暖造就了威廉的一天,创造了甜蜜的回忆。
As it turned out, _____________________________________________ made William's day, creating sweet memories.(强调句型)
it was the love and warmth from strangers that
Soon, the beach was filled with scenes of joy. __________________
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After hours of laughter and games, the sun began to set. _________
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One possible version:
Soon, the beach was filled with scenes of joy. More and more community members arrived to make William's birthday special, eager to share the excitement of a young boy. Children played together, building sandcastles and sharing their favourite toys. Parents chatted and connected, forming new friendships on the sun-kissed shoreline. The two invited families also sent their birthday wishes through videos. Laughter and cheer surrounded William. When he blew out the candles on his birthday cake, his eyes danced with joy and sweetness. The delicious scent of the cake filled the air as everyone gathered to sing “Happy Birthday” and share this sweet moment.
After hours of laughter and games, the sun began to set. The little boy's heart was filled with happiness, and he couldn't stop smiling as he looked back on the day's events. As the sun dipped below the horizon, it was time for their newfound friends to say goodbye. They headed home, their faces lighting up with pleasure. His dad, Steven, took to social media once more to express his sincere gratitude. “Thank you so much, everyone, for the birthday wishes and support,” he wrote. “I'll never lose faith in humanity.” As it turned out, it was the love and warmth from strangers that made William's day, creating sweet memories.