《创新方案》Unit 5 Into the unknown Period 4 Writing（课件）高中英语外研版选修4同步讲练测
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Period 4 Writing
假定你是校报编辑，在本期《科学探秘》专栏中，要向读者介绍世界未解之谜“神农架野人”。请你用英语写一篇短文，要点包括：
1.神农架自然保护区位于湖北省，传说这里常有“野人”出没；
2.目击者称“野人”有两米多高，全身红棕色毛发，直立行走；
写作一 应用文写作——介绍未解之谜的说明文
3.曾收集到“野人”的毛发和脚印等；
4.多年来，我国科学家一直在探索神农架，希望能解开“野人”之谜。
注意：1.词数80左右；
2．可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。
1.你听说过“野人”吗？
Have you ever _________ the “wild man”？
2．传说湖北省神农架自然保护区自古以来就不时出现“野人”。
___________________ the “wild man” appeared from time to time in the Shennongjia Nature Reserve in Hubei Province from early times.
heard of
Legend has it that
3．据目击者称，“野人”身高超过两米，有着有力的手臂和强壮的双腿，全身都是红棕色的毛发，直立行走。
According to witnesses, the “wild man” is ____________________,with powerful arms, strong legs and reddish-brown hair all over, and walks upright.
4．更多有关“野人”的证据被收集到，如毛发和脚印。
____________________________________________, such as hair and footprints.
over two metres tall
Further evidence of the “wild man” was collected
5．多年来，中国科学家一直在探索神农架，因为他们希望有一天能解开这个谜团。
For years, Chinese scientists ____________________ Shennongjia, because they hope to solve the mystery someday.
have been exploring
6.到目前为止，人们还没有证明神农架有“野人”存在。
So far, people ____________________________________________ in Shennongjia.
7．一些科学家猜测它可能是一种类似猿的灵长类动物，与人类相似。
Some scientists guess it may be a kind of ape-like primate _________________________________．
haven't proved that there is the “wild man”
which is similar to human beings
8．【读教材原句】 (教材P76)Being a tough environment of complete darkness, enormous pressure and intense cold, the ocean depths have long been beyond the reach of human exploration.
【记句式】 现在分词短语作状语
【学仿写】 用现在分词短语作状语改写句5
____________________________________________________________________________________________________
For years, Chinese scientists have been exploring Shennongjia, hoping to solve the mystery someday.
9．【读教材原句】 (外研必修二U3)That football is such a simple game to play is perhaps the basis of its popularity.
【记句式】 that引导主语从句
【学仿写】 用that引导主语从句改写句6
________________________________________________________________________
So far, that there is the “wild man” in Shennongjia hasn't been proved.
10．【读教材原句】 (外研选必三U4)Of course，it could be very useful to have a more advanced form of AI—a truly independent form of artificial intelligence, capable of exercising its own judgement, could help us solve many of the world's problems.
【记句式】 形容词短语作定语
【学仿写】 用形容词短语作定语改写句7
____________________________________________________________________________________
Some scientists guess it may be a kind of ape-like primate similar to human beings.
________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________
One possible version：
Have you ever heard of the “wild man”？ Legend has it that the “wild man” appeared from time to time in the Shennongjia Nature Reserve in Hubei Province from early times.
According to witnesses, the “wild man” is over two metres tall, with powerful arms, strong legs and reddish-brown hair all over, and walks upright. Further evidence of the “wild man” was collected, such as hair and footprints. For years, Chinese scientists have been exploring Shennongjia, hoping to solve the mystery someday.
So far, that there is the “wild man” in Shennongjia hasn't been proved, but some scientists guess it may be a kind of ape-like primate similar to human beings.
下表是关于世界未解之谜“百慕大三角(Bermuda Triangle)”的一些信息，请你根据此表写一篇英语短文，简单介绍一下“百慕大三角”。
地理位置 位于北大西洋西部，大约呈三角形
怪异现象 很多飞机和船只在这里神秘失踪，没有留下任何痕迹
人们的猜测 ①外星人在作怪；②当地特殊的地理条件造成的
注意：1.词数 80左右；
2．可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。
________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________
One possible version：
There are many unexplained mysteries in the world, of which the Bermuda Triangle is a particular one. This is an area in the western part of the North Atlantic Ocean, roughly triangular in shape, where numerous ships and planes have disappeared mysteriously，leaving no wreckage or body.
Several guesses have been made to explain the disturbing incidents that occurred in the area. Some people think aliens might have arrived there and taken those ships and planes away, while some believe the incidents might be caused by special local geographical conditions. But no one can give a believable reason. Maybe we can find the answer later on with the development of science and technology.
写作二 读后续写强效篇——一名建筑师指引“我”找到职业方向
在读后续写中巧用状语结构可以使状态描写更生动、更具体。常见的状语结构为：形容词作状语和非谓语动词作状语；此外，with复合结构和独立主格结构也可以充当状语。
1．形容词
形容词作状语时通常用来补充说明主语的状态，一般表示原因、结果或者伴随。
*Curious to know what was happening inside, Eric pushed the door open and slipped into the house. (原因状语)
*Jerry was encouraged by the teacher's smile, full of confidence in his plan. (结果状语)
*Lost in the forest, Mary lay under a tree, full of fear and despair.(伴随状语)
2．非谓语动词，with复合结构，独立主格结构
分词作状语时，可以表示原因、结果、伴随、时间等。v.-ing形式作状语时所表达的动作与逻辑主语之间构成主动关系；v.-ed形式作状语时所表达的动作与逻辑主语之间构成被动关系。动词不定式作状语时可以用来表示动作的目的、结果、原因等。only to do 表示出乎意料的结果，v.-ing形式充当结果状语表示自然而然的结果。with复合结构和独立主格结构也可以充当状语。
*Seeing what I did, my mother frowned as if to ask me to stand up quickly. (主动)
*Scolded by the teacher, he burst into tears. (被动)
*A young man came to the police station, surrounded by a group of journalists.(被动)
*She fell asleep with the light burning.(with复合结构)
*Lamb and mother reunited (独立主格结构), I turned back to the tractor only to see (表示出乎意料的结果) it move suddenly away from me.
*His father died, leaving the family even worse off.(表示自然而然的结果)
阅读下面的材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
[1]I was nearly twenty-two, about to graduate, and unsure which to follow—my head and my long interest in natural science, or my heart and my passion for photography. A job at the museum would be the safe choice. Or I could try to pursue a career in architectural photography, even though I had no specific training in the field. I longed to land that job.
[2]I asked the advisor, John Smith, to recommend someone qualified to give me an objective opinion. His reply：“See Benjamin Moskowitz, a famous architect, NYC. Good luck.”
[3]During the Spring break I booked a cheap room and took the train to New York City. At his office on the twenty-third floor I asked the receptionist for Mr. Moskowitz.“I think Mr. Moskowitz has already left, Miss. I know he was planning a long weekend. Did you have an appointment？”．..
[4]She sighed and asked my name and told me to wait while she tried to see if he might still be there.I paced nervously, thinking that my time and money and my best chance for an expert opinion had been thrown away. The receptionist rang his office; no answer.“Sorry, but it looks like you're out of luck, Miss White，” she said.
[5]Why hadn't I planned this better Called for an appointment Taken an earlier train How could I have made such a mistake？Anxious, I was close to tears.
[6]Just then a tall, gray-haired man, beautifully dressed, strode (阔步) through the reception area. The receptionist signaled me and mouthed, “That's him.” I didn't hesitate.“Oh, Mr. Moskowitz！”I called out. “Just a moment, sir, please! I'd like to speak to you.”
[7]He glanced at his expensive-looking gold watch and kept walking.“Sorry, I have a train to catch，” he said straightforward.“I don't believe you had an appointment.” I hurried after him toward the elevator. “I apologize, sir, but I was told to talk to you and to show you some photographs.”
注意：续写词数应为 150 左右。
Mr. Moskowitz glanced at it, impatiently at first and then more carefully a second time. _____________________________________
__________________________________________________________
One hour later, I walked out of his office with great confidence and excitement. _________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________
【Settings背景】
When&Where [3]During _________________ I booked a cheap room and took the train to ______________．
the Spring break
New York City
【Characters角色】
Who I, John Smith, ___________________ (a famous architect)
Benjamin Moskowitz
【Plots情节】
What [2]I asked the advisor, John Smith, to recommend someone qualified to _____________________________.
[3]At his office on the twenty-third floor I asked the receptionist for Mr. Moskowitz.
[4]She sighed and asked my name and ________________ while she tried to see if he might still be there.
give me an objective opinion
told me to wait
What [4]The receptionist _______________; no answer.
[6]Just then a tall, gray-haired man, beautifully dressed, __________________________________.
[7]He ___________ his expensive-looking gold watch and _____________．
rang his office
strode through the reception area
glanced at
kept walking
Why [1]I was nearly twenty-two, about to graduate, and _______________________—my head and my long interest in natural science, or my heart and my passion for photography.
unsure which to follow
【Feelings情感】
How [1]I __________ land that job.
[4]I paced __________．
[5]Anxious, I was _______________．
[6]I didn't _________．
longed to
nervously
close to tears
hesitate
Theme (正能量 原则) I was not sure which _______ to choose. After seeing Benjamin Moskowitz, a famous architect, I was determined to follow my passion for ____________. With his ______________ and my own persistence, I believe I could go further in ________________．
career
photography
encouragement
natural science
每段三个微情节(Q & A策略)：注重衔接和冲突解决原则
第一段段首句：Mr. Moskowitz glanced at it, impatiently at first and then more carefully a second time.
[Question 1] What was Mr. Moskowitz's comment on my photographs
[Answer] _________________________________________________
He thought they were fantastic and that I had a talent.
[Question 2] How did I feel
[Answer] ___________
[Question 3] What did Mr. Moskowitz do next
[Answer] _____________________________
Overjoyed.
He invited me to his office.
第二段段首句：One hour later, I walked out of his office with great confidence and excitement.
[Question 1] Why did I feel confident and excited
[Answer] _________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________
[Question 2] How did I feel
[Answer] __________________________________________________
_________________________________
Because Mr. Moskowitz gave me invaluable feedback on my photographs and also encouraged me to follow my passion.
I was excited about the future and ready to take on the challenges that lay ahead.
[Question 3] What lesson did I learn
[Answer] _________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________
With Mr. Moskowitz's encouragement and my own persistence, I believe I could go further in natural science.
遣词造句：状语结构
语言协同原则：应用高级词汇、句型和语法结构
1．I paced nervously, thinking that my time and money and my best chance for an expert opinion had been thrown away.(v.-ing形式作_______)
2．Anxious, I was close to tears.(形容词作_______)
状语
状语
1．面带严肃的表情，他上下扫视着一张又一张照片。
___________________________, he scanned up and down one photograph after another.(v.-ing形式作状语)
2．我喜出望外，忍不住跳上跳下。
____________I couldn't help jumping up and down. (形容词作状语)
3．注意到我仍然站在原地，他示意我跟着他进入他的办公室。
__________________________________,he gestured to me to follow him into his office. (v.-ing形式作状语)
Wearing serious expressions
Overjoyed
Noticing I still stood rooted to the spot
4．他激励我追随自己对摄影的热爱，说只要有奉献精神和努力工作，我就能为自己开创一个成功的职业生涯。
He motivated me to follow my passion for photography, ______________________________________, I could carve out a successful career for myself. (v.-ing形式作状语)
saying that with dedication and hard work
5．大约半个小时后，我登上了返回学校的火车，对未来感到兴奋，并准备迎接未来的挑战。
After about half an hour, I boarded the train back to school, __________________________ and ready to take on the challenges that lay ahead.(形容词作状语)
excited about the future
1．我太紧张了，一动都不动。
_________________ that I couldn't move an inch.(“so...that...”句型中，so位于句首引起部分倒装)
2．似乎过了很长时间，他的脸色变温和了。
__________________________, his face softened.(what引导宾语从句)
So nervous was I
After what seemed like ages
3．“你的作品太棒了！你真有天赋！”他喊道，脸上带着灿烂的笑容。
“Fantastic works! You really have a talent！” he exclaimed, _______________________________．(with复合结构)
4．莫斯科威茨先生不仅对我的照片给予了极宝贵的反馈，他还分享了他作为建筑师的见解。
_______________________________________________________ on my photographs, but he also shared insights from his own journey as an architect. (not only位于句首引起部分倒装)
with a broad smile on his face
Not only did Mr. Moskowitz give me invaluable feedback
Mr. Moskowitz glanced at it, impatiently at first and then more carefully a second time._______________________________________
__________________________________________________________
One hour later, I walked out of his office with great confidence and excitement.___________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________
One possible version：
Mr. Moskowitz glanced at it, impatiently at first and then more carefully a second time. Wearing serious expressions, he scanned up and down one photograph after another. So nervous was I that I couldn't move an inch. After what seemed like ages, his face softened.“Fantastic works! You really have a talent！” he exclaimed, with a broad smile on his face. Overjoyed, I couldn't help jumping up and down. Never had I imagined my works got recognized. Noticing I still stood rooted to the spot, he gestured to me to follow him into his office. I knew I won the opportunity to have an interaction with him.
One hour later, I walked out of his office with great confidence and excitement. Not only did Mr. Moskowitz give me invaluable feedback on my photographs, but he also shared insights from his own journey as an architect. He motivated me to follow my passion for photography, saying that with dedication and hard work, I could carve out a successful career for myself. After about half an hour, I boarded the train back to school, excited about the future and ready to take on the challenges that lay ahead. With Mr. Moskowitz's encouragement and my own persistence, I believe I could go further in natural science.
Period 4 Writing
假定你是校报编辑，在本期《科学探秘》专栏中，要向读者介绍世界未解之谜“神农架野人”。请你用英语写一篇短文，要点包括：
1.神农架自然保护区位于湖北省，传说这里常有“野人”出没；
2.目击者称“野人”有两米多高，全身红棕色毛发，直立行走；
写作一 应用文写作——介绍未解之谜的说明文
3.曾收集到“野人”的毛发和脚印等；
4.多年来，我国科学家一直在探索神农架，希望能解开“野人”之谜。
注意：1.词数80左右；
2．可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。
1.你听说过“野人”吗？
Have you ever _________ the “wild man”？
2．传说湖北省神农架自然保护区自古以来就不时出现“野人”。
___________________ the “wild man” appeared from time to time in the Shennongjia Nature Reserve in Hubei Province from early times.
heard of
Legend has it that
3．据目击者称，“野人”身高超过两米，有着有力的手臂和强壮的双腿，全身都是红棕色的毛发，直立行走。
According to witnesses, the “wild man” is ____________________,with powerful arms, strong legs and reddish-brown hair all over, and walks upright.
4．更多有关“野人”的证据被收集到，如毛发和脚印。
____________________________________________, such as hair and footprints.
over two metres tall
Further evidence of the “wild man” was collected
5．多年来，中国科学家一直在探索神农架，因为他们希望有一天能解开这个谜团。
For years, Chinese scientists ____________________ Shennongjia, because they hope to solve the mystery someday.
have been exploring
6.到目前为止，人们还没有证明神农架有“野人”存在。
So far, people ____________________________________________ in Shennongjia.
7．一些科学家猜测它可能是一种类似猿的灵长类动物，与人类相似。
Some scientists guess it may be a kind of ape-like primate _________________________________．
haven't proved that there is the “wild man”
which is similar to human beings
8．【读教材原句】 (教材P76)Being a tough environment of complete darkness, enormous pressure and intense cold, the ocean depths have long been beyond the reach of human exploration.
【记句式】 现在分词短语作状语
【学仿写】 用现在分词短语作状语改写句5
____________________________________________________________________________________________________
For years, Chinese scientists have been exploring Shennongjia, hoping to solve the mystery someday.
9．【读教材原句】 (外研必修二U3)That football is such a simple game to play is perhaps the basis of its popularity.
【记句式】 that引导主语从句
【学仿写】 用that引导主语从句改写句6
________________________________________________________________________
So far, that there is the “wild man” in Shennongjia hasn't been proved.
10．【读教材原句】 (外研选必三U4)Of course，it could be very useful to have a more advanced form of AI—a truly independent form of artificial intelligence, capable of exercising its own judgement, could help us solve many of the world's problems.
【记句式】 形容词短语作定语
【学仿写】 用形容词短语作定语改写句7
____________________________________________________________________________________
Some scientists guess it may be a kind of ape-like primate similar to human beings.
________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________
One possible version：
Have you ever heard of the “wild man”？ Legend has it that the “wild man” appeared from time to time in the Shennongjia Nature Reserve in Hubei Province from early times.
According to witnesses, the “wild man” is over two metres tall, with powerful arms, strong legs and reddish-brown hair all over, and walks upright. Further evidence of the “wild man” was collected, such as hair and footprints. For years, Chinese scientists have been exploring Shennongjia, hoping to solve the mystery someday.
So far, that there is the “wild man” in Shennongjia hasn't been proved, but some scientists guess it may be a kind of ape-like primate similar to human beings.
下表是关于世界未解之谜“百慕大三角(Bermuda Triangle)”的一些信息，请你根据此表写一篇英语短文，简单介绍一下“百慕大三角”。
地理位置 位于北大西洋西部，大约呈三角形
怪异现象 很多飞机和船只在这里神秘失踪，没有留下任何痕迹
人们的猜测 ①外星人在作怪；②当地特殊的地理条件造成的
注意：1.词数 80左右；
2．可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。
________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________
One possible version：
There are many unexplained mysteries in the world, of which the Bermuda Triangle is a particular one. This is an area in the western part of the North Atlantic Ocean, roughly triangular in shape, where numerous ships and planes have disappeared mysteriously，leaving no wreckage or body.
Several guesses have been made to explain the disturbing incidents that occurred in the area. Some people think aliens might have arrived there and taken those ships and planes away, while some believe the incidents might be caused by special local geographical conditions. But no one can give a believable reason. Maybe we can find the answer later on with the development of science and technology.
写作二 读后续写强效篇——一名建筑师指引“我”找到职业方向
在读后续写中巧用状语结构可以使状态描写更生动、更具体。常见的状语结构为：形容词作状语和非谓语动词作状语；此外，with复合结构和独立主格结构也可以充当状语。
1．形容词
形容词作状语时通常用来补充说明主语的状态，一般表示原因、结果或者伴随。
*Curious to know what was happening inside, Eric pushed the door open and slipped into the house. (原因状语)
*Jerry was encouraged by the teacher's smile, full of confidence in his plan. (结果状语)
*Lost in the forest, Mary lay under a tree, full of fear and despair.(伴随状语)
2．非谓语动词，with复合结构，独立主格结构
分词作状语时，可以表示原因、结果、伴随、时间等。v.-ing形式作状语时所表达的动作与逻辑主语之间构成主动关系；v.-ed形式作状语时所表达的动作与逻辑主语之间构成被动关系。动词不定式作状语时可以用来表示动作的目的、结果、原因等。only to do 表示出乎意料的结果，v.-ing形式充当结果状语表示自然而然的结果。with复合结构和独立主格结构也可以充当状语。
*Seeing what I did, my mother frowned as if to ask me to stand up quickly. (主动)
*Scolded by the teacher, he burst into tears. (被动)
*A young man came to the police station, surrounded by a group of journalists.(被动)
*She fell asleep with the light burning.(with复合结构)
*Lamb and mother reunited (独立主格结构), I turned back to the tractor only to see (表示出乎意料的结果) it move suddenly away from me.
*His father died, leaving the family even worse off.(表示自然而然的结果)
阅读下面的材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
[1]I was nearly twenty-two, about to graduate, and unsure which to follow—my head and my long interest in natural science, or my heart and my passion for photography. A job at the museum would be the safe choice. Or I could try to pursue a career in architectural photography, even though I had no specific training in the field. I longed to land that job.
[2]I asked the advisor, John Smith, to recommend someone qualified to give me an objective opinion. His reply：“See Benjamin Moskowitz, a famous architect, NYC. Good luck.”
[3]During the Spring break I booked a cheap room and took the train to New York City. At his office on the twenty-third floor I asked the receptionist for Mr. Moskowitz.“I think Mr. Moskowitz has already left, Miss. I know he was planning a long weekend. Did you have an appointment？”．..
[4]She sighed and asked my name and told me to wait while she tried to see if he might still be there.I paced nervously, thinking that my time and money and my best chance for an expert opinion had been thrown away. The receptionist rang his office; no answer.“Sorry, but it looks like you're out of luck, Miss White，” she said.
[5]Why hadn't I planned this better Called for an appointment Taken an earlier train How could I have made such a mistake？Anxious, I was close to tears.
[6]Just then a tall, gray-haired man, beautifully dressed, strode (阔步) through the reception area. The receptionist signaled me and mouthed, “That's him.” I didn't hesitate.“Oh, Mr. Moskowitz！”I called out. “Just a moment, sir, please! I'd like to speak to you.”
[7]He glanced at his expensive-looking gold watch and kept walking.“Sorry, I have a train to catch，” he said straightforward.“I don't believe you had an appointment.” I hurried after him toward the elevator. “I apologize, sir, but I was told to talk to you and to show you some photographs.”
注意：续写词数应为 150 左右。
Mr. Moskowitz glanced at it, impatiently at first and then more carefully a second time. _____________________________________
__________________________________________________________
One hour later, I walked out of his office with great confidence and excitement. _________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________
【Settings背景】
When&Where [3]During _________________ I booked a cheap room and took the train to ______________．
the Spring break
New York City
【Characters角色】
Who I, John Smith, ___________________ (a famous architect)
Benjamin Moskowitz
【Plots情节】
What [2]I asked the advisor, John Smith, to recommend someone qualified to _____________________________.
[3]At his office on the twenty-third floor I asked the receptionist for Mr. Moskowitz.
[4]She sighed and asked my name and ________________ while she tried to see if he might still be there.
give me an objective opinion
told me to wait
What [4]The receptionist _______________; no answer.
[6]Just then a tall, gray-haired man, beautifully dressed, __________________________________.
[7]He ___________ his expensive-looking gold watch and _____________．
rang his office
strode through the reception area
glanced at
kept walking
Why [1]I was nearly twenty-two, about to graduate, and _______________________—my head and my long interest in natural science, or my heart and my passion for photography.
unsure which to follow
【Feelings情感】
How [1]I __________ land that job.
[4]I paced __________．
[5]Anxious, I was _______________．
[6]I didn't _________．
longed to
nervously
close to tears
hesitate
Theme (正能量 原则) I was not sure which _______ to choose. After seeing Benjamin Moskowitz, a famous architect, I was determined to follow my passion for ____________. With his ______________ and my own persistence, I believe I could go further in ________________．
career
photography
encouragement
natural science
每段三个微情节(Q & A策略)：注重衔接和冲突解决原则
第一段段首句：Mr. Moskowitz glanced at it, impatiently at first and then more carefully a second time.
[Question 1] What was Mr. Moskowitz's comment on my photographs
[Answer] _________________________________________________
He thought they were fantastic and that I had a talent.
[Question 2] How did I feel
[Answer] ___________
[Question 3] What did Mr. Moskowitz do next
[Answer] _____________________________
Overjoyed.
He invited me to his office.
第二段段首句：One hour later, I walked out of his office with great confidence and excitement.
[Question 1] Why did I feel confident and excited
[Answer] _________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________
[Question 2] How did I feel
[Answer] __________________________________________________
_________________________________
Because Mr. Moskowitz gave me invaluable feedback on my photographs and also encouraged me to follow my passion.
I was excited about the future and ready to take on the challenges that lay ahead.
[Question 3] What lesson did I learn
[Answer] _________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________
With Mr. Moskowitz's encouragement and my own persistence, I believe I could go further in natural science.
遣词造句：状语结构
语言协同原则：应用高级词汇、句型和语法结构
1．I paced nervously, thinking that my time and money and my best chance for an expert opinion had been thrown away.(v.-ing形式作_______)
2．Anxious, I was close to tears.(形容词作_______)
状语
状语
1．面带严肃的表情，他上下扫视着一张又一张照片。
___________________________, he scanned up and down one photograph after another.(v.-ing形式作状语)
2．我喜出望外，忍不住跳上跳下。
____________I couldn't help jumping up and down. (形容词作状语)
3．注意到我仍然站在原地，他示意我跟着他进入他的办公室。
__________________________________,he gestured to me to follow him into his office. (v.-ing形式作状语)
Wearing serious expressions
Overjoyed
Noticing I still stood rooted to the spot
4．他激励我追随自己对摄影的热爱，说只要有奉献精神和努力工作，我就能为自己开创一个成功的职业生涯。
He motivated me to follow my passion for photography, ______________________________________, I could carve out a successful career for myself. (v.-ing形式作状语)
saying that with dedication and hard work
5．大约半个小时后，我登上了返回学校的火车，对未来感到兴奋，并准备迎接未来的挑战。
After about half an hour, I boarded the train back to school, __________________________ and ready to take on the challenges that lay ahead.(形容词作状语)
excited about the future
1．我太紧张了，一动都不动。
_________________ that I couldn't move an inch.(“so...that...”句型中，so位于句首引起部分倒装)
2．似乎过了很长时间，他的脸色变温和了。
__________________________, his face softened.(what引导宾语从句)
So nervous was I
After what seemed like ages
3．“你的作品太棒了！你真有天赋！”他喊道，脸上带着灿烂的笑容。
“Fantastic works! You really have a talent！” he exclaimed, _______________________________．(with复合结构)
4．莫斯科威茨先生不仅对我的照片给予了极宝贵的反馈，他还分享了他作为建筑师的见解。
_______________________________________________________ on my photographs, but he also shared insights from his own journey as an architect. (not only位于句首引起部分倒装)
with a broad smile on his face
Not only did Mr. Moskowitz give me invaluable feedback
Mr. Moskowitz glanced at it, impatiently at first and then more carefully a second time._______________________________________
__________________________________________________________
One hour later, I walked out of his office with great confidence and excitement.___________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________
One possible version：
Mr. Moskowitz glanced at it, impatiently at first and then more carefully a second time. Wearing serious expressions, he scanned up and down one photograph after another. So nervous was I that I couldn't move an inch. After what seemed like ages, his face softened.“Fantastic works! You really have a talent！” he exclaimed, with a broad smile on his face. Overjoyed, I couldn't help jumping up and down. Never had I imagined my works got recognized. Noticing I still stood rooted to the spot, he gestured to me to follow him into his office. I knew I won the opportunity to have an interaction with him.
One hour later, I walked out of his office with great confidence and excitement. Not only did Mr. Moskowitz give me invaluable feedback on my photographs, but he also shared insights from his own journey as an architect. He motivated me to follow my passion for photography, saying that with dedication and hard work, I could carve out a successful career for myself. After about half an hour, I boarded the train back to school, excited about the future and ready to take on the challenges that lay ahead. With Mr. Moskowitz's encouragement and my own persistence, I believe I could go further in natural science.