《创新方案》Unit 6 Space and beyond Period 4 Writing（课件）高中英语外研版选修4同步讲练测
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Period 4 Writing
假定你是李华，你曾经有机会在太空生活过，请写一篇太空生活日志，叙述一下你在太空飞船上生活的经历。内容如下：
1.太空生活的日常活动；
2.你的感受。
注意：词数80左右。
写作一 应用文写作——太空生活日志
1.我曾经有机会在太空生活过，这虽然困难但很有趣。
I once ____________________________, and it was difficult but fun.
2．因为没有重力，在太空中你会四处漂浮。
In space you would float around because ____________________．
had a chance to live in space
there is no gravity
3．晚上，我进入了一个小柜子，然后钻进睡袋里睡觉。
At night, I went into a small cupboard and then _________________
______________．
4．在太空中，宇航员的骨骼和肌肉会变得疏松。
Astronauts' bones and muscles can ____________ in space.
got into a sleeping
become weak
bag to sleep
5．为了保持健康，我需要定期锻炼。
___________________, I had to exercise ___________________．
6．虽然在太空中生活很不舒服，但是我很感激有这样的机会。
Although I was living an uncomfortable life in space, I ______________________________．
In order to stay fit
on a regular basis
appreciated having the chance
7．【读教材原句】 (教材P51)Zhang therefore decided to return to her home town and grow roses, which surprised many people.
【记句式】 which引导非限制性定语从句
【学仿写】 用which引导非限制性定语从句改写句1
__________________________________________________________
I once had a chance to live in space, which was difficult but fun.
8．【读教材原句】 (教材P11)When reading The Road Not Taken, one cannot help but see in one's mind images of a peaceful wood deep within the countryside.
【记句式】 状语从句的省略
【学仿写】 用状语从句的省略改写句6
_________________________________________________________________________________
Although living an uncomfortable life in space, I appreciated having the chance.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
One possible version：
I once had a chance to live in space, which was difficult but fun. Here are some everyday things I experienced.
In space you would float around because there is no gravity. At night, I went into a small cupboard and then got into a sleeping bag to sleep. What's more, astronauts' bones and muscles can become weak in space. In order to stay fit, I had to exercise on a regular basis.
Although living an uncomfortable life in space, I appreciated having the chance. I wish I would have more chances to experience life in space.
假如现在是2050年，你们学校组织了一次去火星的旅行。在火星上你们到处参观，邀请外星人(alien)一起聚会……总之，你们玩得很愉快。 请根据以上材料，写一篇日志，描述一下你的火星之旅。
注意：1.词数80左右；
2．可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。
____________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________
One possible version：
It is the year of 2050.Our school organized a great trip to Mars a few days ago.We went to Mars by a space shuttle.
On Mars we visited everywhere, and found a lot of things different from our earth.After that, we invited many aliens to our party which was held in our space shuttle.They danced and sang together with us.Their songs were so awesome that all of us screamed.
We all had a good time on Mars.The trip was very interesting and I hope to travel to Mars again soon.
写作二 读后续写强效篇——男孩对奶奶真诚的道歉让彼此重建联系
在读后续写中，高分的句型往往包含多种高级语法结构。因此倒装、虚拟语气和从句的使用，往往能够令人眼前一亮。
一、倒装
倒装是英语中一个重要的语法项目。在一定语境下，可以用来强调特定句子成分。
灵活应用倒装会增加句式的多样性，使文章表达更加丰富、生动、有力，成为写作中的增分亮点。
完成句子
1．我震惊得睁大眼睛，待在当场。(“so＋adj.”置于句首引起部分倒装)
_________________ that I froze at the spot with my eyes wide open.
2．直到那只兔子完全消失在我们的视线之外，我们才不追了。(not until置于句首引起部分倒装)
_________________________________________________ did we stop chasing after it.
So shocked was I
Not until the rabbit got completely out of sight
3．现在轮到玛丽(Mary)做一个简短的演讲。(now置于句首引起完全倒装)
______________________ to make a short speech.
4．站在前门的是简(Jane)的丈夫，他找不到她时，非常焦急。(介词短语置于句首引起完全倒装)
_______________________________________ who suffered great anxiety when she was nowhere to be found.
Now comes Mary's turn
At the front door stood Jane's husband
5．这就是“有志者事竟成”这个真理。(such作表语置于句首引起完全倒装)
___________________ that “Where there is a will, there is a way”．
Such is the truth
二、虚拟语气
虚拟语气通过谓语动词的特殊形式来表示，主要用来表示假设，常用来表达惊异、惋惜、遗憾、理应如此等含义，可以用来表达比较强烈的感情。
完成句子
1．要不是你的教导，我不会有这么大的进步。(but for 引起的虚拟)
But for your instruction, I ____________________ such great progress.
would not have made
2．要是没有埃里克的鼓励，我不可能克服困难。(without引起的虚拟)
Without Eric's encouragement, I _______________________ the difficulties.
3．他无法想象如果杰克(Jack)不来救他，会发生什么。(if 条件状语从句引起的虚拟)
He couldn't imagine what would have happened __________________
___________．
if Jack hadn't come
to his rescue
wouldn't have overcome
4．“要是我当初听取了妈妈的建议该多好！”小女孩低声对自己说。(if only 引起的虚拟)
“________________________________________！” the little girl whispered to herself.
If only I had listened to my mother's advice
5．苏珊的伙伴们都在到处跑着，玩得很开心，可她却独自坐在草坪上，希望自己此刻在家里。(wish引起的虚拟)
Susan's companions were running about enjoying themselves，but she sat alone on the grass, _____________________________________．
wishing she were at home this moment
三、从句
在读后续写中常用的从句类型包括名词性从句、状语从句和定语从句等。这些从句在写作中能够丰富表达，增强文章的逻辑性和地道性。
完成句子
1．就像其他老人一样，我祖父喜欢谈论过去的美好时光。(as引导定语从句)
_____________________ with old people, my grandfather is fond of talking about good old days.
As is often the case
2．直到河时的鱼全死光了，村民们才意识到污染是多么严重。(until引导时间状语从句)
The villagers didn't realize how serious the pollution was _______________________________．
until all the fish died in the river
3．我接受了父亲的建议，要成为一名医生，虽然我对这样的前途毫无把握。(that引导同位语从句)
I accepted my father's suggestion _______________________________,
though I was not sure the prospect at all.
that I should become a doctor
4．让我们珍惜大自然的美丽，努力与环境和谐相处，因为它是我们的家园和遗产。(for引导原因状语从句)
Let's cherish the beauty of nature and strive to live in harmony with the environment, ____________________________________．
5．从这次难忘的经历中，我意识到这种随意的善举对我有很大的影响。如果可能的话，我总是向别人伸出援手。(that引导宾语从句)
From the unforgettable experience, I have realized _________________
______________________________________. If possible，I always give a helping hand to other people.
for it is our home and our heritage
that this random
act of kindness has a great influence on me
阅读下面的材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
[1]Avoiding people in a small town requires the skills of a spy. So Brad Ryan moved like a ghost, taking precautions to stay far away from the woman who he thought had broken his heart. He had not seen or spoken to Grandma Joy for six years.
[2]One day, he received a call from his mom, saying his elder sister had announced her engagement and a wedding date had been set for a Duncan Falls church. Brad's heart sank, because Grandma Joy would be there. But he loved his sister, and if he had missed the wedding, he would have been in regret.
[3]Despite Joy Ryan's first name, there were lots of sufferings and regrets instead of joy in her life. She grew up in a home with no electricity, running water or plumbing. She attended a one-room schoolhouse. And she suffered the loss of two sons. She was a widow (寡妇) for 14 years. She lived a small life that stopped at the edge of the county line. Never had she had the chance to see what she called the great outdoors other than a trip to see relatives in Louisiana.
[4]“My earliest memory of her is when I was 3，” said Brad. “We'd walk to Blue Rock State Park, which is close to her house. She'd help me lift rocks in the creek (小溪) to find crawfish. We'd hold them in our hands and talk about how beautiful it was being in nature. No one in my family thought like that.”
[5]However, as Brad entered adolescence, he was growing emotionally distant from his family, with occasional quarrels. One day, a violent conflict broke out between Brad and his father. Brad turned to his grandma, hoping for help or just a kind word. But he got neither. He found Grandma Joy by his father's side. “That was the end of my relationship with Grandma Joy，” he said.
[6]At the wedding venue, on seeing Grandma Joy, thin and gaunt (憔悴的), Brad found himself thinking a lot about her and the happy time they spent together. It puzzled him why that memory in particular stayed with him. Now Grandma, 78, walked unsteadily into the Duncan Falls church.
注意：续写词数应为150 左右。
Brad hesitantly walked over to her.___________________________
____________________________________________________________
After that day, Brad decided not to leave any regrets in his grandma's life._______________________________________________
_________________________________________________________
【Settings背景】
When &Where [2]__________, he received a call from his mom, saying his elder sister had announced her engagement and a wedding date had been set for a __________________．
One day
Duncan Falls church
【Characters角色】
Who ____________, Grandma Joy, Brad's father
Brad Ryan
【Plots情节】
What [2]One day, he received _______ from his mom.
[3]Despite Joy Ryan's first name, there were lots of _______________________ instead of joy in her life.
[4]“My earliest memory of her is _____________，” said Brad.
a call
sufferings and regrets
when I was 3
What [5]One day, _____________________________ between Brad and his father.
[5]He found Grandma Joy _____________________．
[6]Now Grandma, 78, _______________________ the Duncan Falls church.
Why [1]He had not _______________________________for six years.
a violent conflict broke out
by his father's side
walked unsteadily into
seen or spoken to Grandma Joy
【Feelings情感】
How [1]So Brad Ryan moved like a ghost, taking precautions to stay far away from the woman who he thought _____________________．
[2]Brad's heart _____．
[5]That was ___________________________ with Grandma Joy.
[6]Brad found himself thinking a lot about her and _______________ they spent together. It ________ him why that memory in particular stayed with him.
had broken his heart
sank
the end of my relationship
the happy time
puzzled
Theme (正能量原则) Brad hadn't __________________________ for six years. On seeing Grandma again, he __________________. During their travel, they became closer and closer, leaving no regret for each other.
seen or spoken to Grandma
apologized to her
每段三个微情节(Q & A策略)：注重衔接和冲突解决原则
第一段段首句：Brad hesitantly walked over to her.
[Question 1] What did Brad do
[Answer] __________________________
[Question 2] What was Grandma's reaction
[Answer] ________________________________________________
__________________________________
He apologized to Grandma.
She was moved, saying she should have given Brad more patience and understanding.
[Question 3] How did they spend the rest of the day
[Answer] _________________________________________________
_________________
They took seats next to each other, spending a happy time together.
第二段段首句：After that day, Brad decided not to leave any regrets in his grandma's life.
[Question 1] What did Brad decide to do
[Answer] ________________________________________________
___________________________
[Question 2] What did they do during the trip
He decided to spare more time to accompany Grandma, taking her on trips.
[Answer] _________________________________________________
____________________
[Question 3] What lesson did Brad learn
[Answer] _________________________________________________
________________
They enjoyed the beautiful scenery and shared sorrows and joys.
If he hadn't reached out to his grandma, it would be a lifelong regret.
遣词造句：倒装、虚拟语气和从句重点练
语言协同原则：应用高级词汇、句型和语法结构
1．But he loved his sister, and if he had missed the wedding, he would have been in regret.(______语气)
2．Never had she had the chance to see what she called the great outdoors other than a trip to see relatives in Louisiana.(部分______)
虚拟
倒装
3．We'd hold them in our hands and talk about how beautiful it was being in nature.(______从句)
4．However, as Brad entered adolescence, he was growing emotionally distant from his family, with occasional quarrels. (______从句)
宾语
状语
1．奶奶极为感动，说她本应该给布拉德更多的耐心和理解。
Grandma was overwhelmingly moved, saying that _________________
_______________________________________．(虚拟语气)
2．对于布拉德来说，他意识到如果他没有联系他的奶奶，那将是他一生的遗憾。
For Brad, he realized ____________________________________,it _______________________．(虚拟语气)
she should have
given Brad more patience and understanding
if he hadn't reached out to his grandma
would be a lifelong regret
3．婚礼开始时，他们手牵着手，挨着坐在一起。
______________________________, they took seats next to each other, hand in hand. (状语从句)
4．他们不仅是旅行伙伴，还是亲密的朋友。
__________________________________, but they were also close friends. (部分倒装)
As the wedding ceremony began
Not only were they traveling partners
1．震惊但很高兴，奶奶正要说些什么，却被布拉德打断了：“奶奶，我欠你一个道歉。”
______________________, Grandma was about to say something when she was interrupted by Brad, “Grandma, I owe you an apology.”(形容词作状语)
Stunned but delighted
2．他们带着理解的微笑看着对方，眼里闪烁着幸福的泪光。
They looked at each other with understanding smiles, _____________
______________________________．(独立主格结构)
3．他开始抽出更多的时间陪伴奶奶，带她去旅行，欣赏世界上令人印象最深刻的风景。
He began to spare more time to accompany Grandma, _____________
_________________________________________________．(v.-ing形式作状语)
their eyes
glittering with tears of happiness
taking her on
trips to enjoy the most impressive scenery in the world
4．远离邓肯福尔斯的旅行改变了奶奶和布拉德本人的生活。
___________________ Duncan Falls was life-changing for Grandma as well as Brad himself.(v.-ing形式作主语)
Traveling far from
Brad hesitantly walked over to her.__________________________
___________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________
After that day, Brad decided not to leave any regrets in his grandma's life.________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________
One possible version：
Brad hesitantly walked over to her. He gave Grandma his arm to help her walk steadily. Stunned but delighted, Grandma was about to say something when she was interrupted by Brad, “Grandma, I owe you an apology.” Grandma was overwhelmingly moved, saying that she should have given Brad more patience and understanding. That was a great regret for her in those years. They looked at each other with understanding smiles, their eyes glittering with tears of happiness. As the wedding ceremony began, they took seats next to each other, hand in hand.
After that day, Brad decided not to leave any regrets in his grandma's life. He began to spare more time to accompany Grandma, taking her on trips to enjoy the most impressive scenery in the world. During the trips, Brad and Grandma shared their life stories, sorrows and joys. Traveling far from Duncan Falls was life-changing for Grandma as well as Brad himself. Not only were they traveling partners, but they were also close friends. For Grandma Joy, her life was eventually full of joys. For Brad, he realized if he hadn't reached out to his grandma, it would be a lifelong regret.
Period 4 Writing
假定你是李华，你曾经有机会在太空生活过，请写一篇太空生活日志，叙述一下你在太空飞船上生活的经历。内容如下：
1.太空生活的日常活动；
2.你的感受。
注意：词数80左右。
写作一 应用文写作——太空生活日志
1.我曾经有机会在太空生活过，这虽然困难但很有趣。
I once ____________________________, and it was difficult but fun.
2．因为没有重力，在太空中你会四处漂浮。
In space you would float around because ____________________．
had a chance to live in space
there is no gravity
3．晚上，我进入了一个小柜子，然后钻进睡袋里睡觉。
At night, I went into a small cupboard and then _________________
______________．
4．在太空中，宇航员的骨骼和肌肉会变得疏松。
Astronauts' bones and muscles can ____________ in space.
got into a sleeping
become weak
bag to sleep
5．为了保持健康，我需要定期锻炼。
___________________, I had to exercise ___________________．
6．虽然在太空中生活很不舒服，但是我很感激有这样的机会。
Although I was living an uncomfortable life in space, I ______________________________．
In order to stay fit
on a regular basis
appreciated having the chance
7．【读教材原句】 (教材P51)Zhang therefore decided to return to her home town and grow roses, which surprised many people.
【记句式】 which引导非限制性定语从句
【学仿写】 用which引导非限制性定语从句改写句1
__________________________________________________________
I once had a chance to live in space, which was difficult but fun.
8．【读教材原句】 (教材P11)When reading The Road Not Taken, one cannot help but see in one's mind images of a peaceful wood deep within the countryside.
【记句式】 状语从句的省略
【学仿写】 用状语从句的省略改写句6
_________________________________________________________________________________
Although living an uncomfortable life in space, I appreciated having the chance.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
One possible version：
I once had a chance to live in space, which was difficult but fun. Here are some everyday things I experienced.
In space you would float around because there is no gravity. At night, I went into a small cupboard and then got into a sleeping bag to sleep. What's more, astronauts' bones and muscles can become weak in space. In order to stay fit, I had to exercise on a regular basis.
Although living an uncomfortable life in space, I appreciated having the chance. I wish I would have more chances to experience life in space.
假如现在是2050年，你们学校组织了一次去火星的旅行。在火星上你们到处参观，邀请外星人(alien)一起聚会……总之，你们玩得很愉快。 请根据以上材料，写一篇日志，描述一下你的火星之旅。
注意：1.词数80左右；
2．可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。
____________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________
One possible version：
It is the year of 2050.Our school organized a great trip to Mars a few days ago.We went to Mars by a space shuttle.
On Mars we visited everywhere, and found a lot of things different from our earth.After that, we invited many aliens to our party which was held in our space shuttle.They danced and sang together with us.Their songs were so awesome that all of us screamed.
We all had a good time on Mars.The trip was very interesting and I hope to travel to Mars again soon.
写作二 读后续写强效篇——男孩对奶奶真诚的道歉让彼此重建联系
在读后续写中，高分的句型往往包含多种高级语法结构。因此倒装、虚拟语气和从句的使用，往往能够令人眼前一亮。
一、倒装
倒装是英语中一个重要的语法项目。在一定语境下，可以用来强调特定句子成分。
灵活应用倒装会增加句式的多样性，使文章表达更加丰富、生动、有力，成为写作中的增分亮点。
完成句子
1．我震惊得睁大眼睛，待在当场。(“so＋adj.”置于句首引起部分倒装)
_________________ that I froze at the spot with my eyes wide open.
2．直到那只兔子完全消失在我们的视线之外，我们才不追了。(not until置于句首引起部分倒装)
_________________________________________________ did we stop chasing after it.
So shocked was I
Not until the rabbit got completely out of sight
3．现在轮到玛丽(Mary)做一个简短的演讲。(now置于句首引起完全倒装)
______________________ to make a short speech.
4．站在前门的是简(Jane)的丈夫，他找不到她时，非常焦急。(介词短语置于句首引起完全倒装)
_______________________________________ who suffered great anxiety when she was nowhere to be found.
Now comes Mary's turn
At the front door stood Jane's husband
5．这就是“有志者事竟成”这个真理。(such作表语置于句首引起完全倒装)
___________________ that “Where there is a will, there is a way”．
Such is the truth
二、虚拟语气
虚拟语气通过谓语动词的特殊形式来表示，主要用来表示假设，常用来表达惊异、惋惜、遗憾、理应如此等含义，可以用来表达比较强烈的感情。
完成句子
1．要不是你的教导，我不会有这么大的进步。(but for 引起的虚拟)
But for your instruction, I ____________________ such great progress.
would not have made
2．要是没有埃里克的鼓励，我不可能克服困难。(without引起的虚拟)
Without Eric's encouragement, I _______________________ the difficulties.
3．他无法想象如果杰克(Jack)不来救他，会发生什么。(if 条件状语从句引起的虚拟)
He couldn't imagine what would have happened __________________
___________．
if Jack hadn't come
to his rescue
wouldn't have overcome
4．“要是我当初听取了妈妈的建议该多好！”小女孩低声对自己说。(if only 引起的虚拟)
“________________________________________！” the little girl whispered to herself.
If only I had listened to my mother's advice
5．苏珊的伙伴们都在到处跑着，玩得很开心，可她却独自坐在草坪上，希望自己此刻在家里。(wish引起的虚拟)
Susan's companions were running about enjoying themselves，but she sat alone on the grass, _____________________________________．
wishing she were at home this moment
三、从句
在读后续写中常用的从句类型包括名词性从句、状语从句和定语从句等。这些从句在写作中能够丰富表达，增强文章的逻辑性和地道性。
完成句子
1．就像其他老人一样，我祖父喜欢谈论过去的美好时光。(as引导定语从句)
_____________________ with old people, my grandfather is fond of talking about good old days.
As is often the case
2．直到河时的鱼全死光了，村民们才意识到污染是多么严重。(until引导时间状语从句)
The villagers didn't realize how serious the pollution was _______________________________．
until all the fish died in the river
3．我接受了父亲的建议，要成为一名医生，虽然我对这样的前途毫无把握。(that引导同位语从句)
I accepted my father's suggestion _______________________________,
though I was not sure the prospect at all.
that I should become a doctor
4．让我们珍惜大自然的美丽，努力与环境和谐相处，因为它是我们的家园和遗产。(for引导原因状语从句)
Let's cherish the beauty of nature and strive to live in harmony with the environment, ____________________________________．
5．从这次难忘的经历中，我意识到这种随意的善举对我有很大的影响。如果可能的话，我总是向别人伸出援手。(that引导宾语从句)
From the unforgettable experience, I have realized _________________
______________________________________. If possible，I always give a helping hand to other people.
for it is our home and our heritage
that this random
act of kindness has a great influence on me
阅读下面的材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
[1]Avoiding people in a small town requires the skills of a spy. So Brad Ryan moved like a ghost, taking precautions to stay far away from the woman who he thought had broken his heart. He had not seen or spoken to Grandma Joy for six years.
[2]One day, he received a call from his mom, saying his elder sister had announced her engagement and a wedding date had been set for a Duncan Falls church. Brad's heart sank, because Grandma Joy would be there. But he loved his sister, and if he had missed the wedding, he would have been in regret.
[3]Despite Joy Ryan's first name, there were lots of sufferings and regrets instead of joy in her life. She grew up in a home with no electricity, running water or plumbing. She attended a one-room schoolhouse. And she suffered the loss of two sons. She was a widow (寡妇) for 14 years. She lived a small life that stopped at the edge of the county line. Never had she had the chance to see what she called the great outdoors other than a trip to see relatives in Louisiana.
[4]“My earliest memory of her is when I was 3，” said Brad. “We'd walk to Blue Rock State Park, which is close to her house. She'd help me lift rocks in the creek (小溪) to find crawfish. We'd hold them in our hands and talk about how beautiful it was being in nature. No one in my family thought like that.”
[5]However, as Brad entered adolescence, he was growing emotionally distant from his family, with occasional quarrels. One day, a violent conflict broke out between Brad and his father. Brad turned to his grandma, hoping for help or just a kind word. But he got neither. He found Grandma Joy by his father's side. “That was the end of my relationship with Grandma Joy，” he said.
[6]At the wedding venue, on seeing Grandma Joy, thin and gaunt (憔悴的), Brad found himself thinking a lot about her and the happy time they spent together. It puzzled him why that memory in particular stayed with him. Now Grandma, 78, walked unsteadily into the Duncan Falls church.
注意：续写词数应为150 左右。
Brad hesitantly walked over to her.___________________________
____________________________________________________________
After that day, Brad decided not to leave any regrets in his grandma's life._______________________________________________
_________________________________________________________
【Settings背景】
When &Where [2]__________, he received a call from his mom, saying his elder sister had announced her engagement and a wedding date had been set for a __________________．
One day
Duncan Falls church
【Characters角色】
Who ____________, Grandma Joy, Brad's father
Brad Ryan
【Plots情节】
What [2]One day, he received _______ from his mom.
[3]Despite Joy Ryan's first name, there were lots of _______________________ instead of joy in her life.
[4]“My earliest memory of her is _____________，” said Brad.
a call
sufferings and regrets
when I was 3
What [5]One day, _____________________________ between Brad and his father.
[5]He found Grandma Joy _____________________．
[6]Now Grandma, 78, _______________________ the Duncan Falls church.
Why [1]He had not _______________________________for six years.
a violent conflict broke out
by his father's side
walked unsteadily into
seen or spoken to Grandma Joy
【Feelings情感】
How [1]So Brad Ryan moved like a ghost, taking precautions to stay far away from the woman who he thought _____________________．
[2]Brad's heart _____．
[5]That was ___________________________ with Grandma Joy.
[6]Brad found himself thinking a lot about her and _______________ they spent together. It ________ him why that memory in particular stayed with him.
had broken his heart
sank
the end of my relationship
the happy time
puzzled
Theme (正能量原则) Brad hadn't __________________________ for six years. On seeing Grandma again, he __________________. During their travel, they became closer and closer, leaving no regret for each other.
seen or spoken to Grandma
apologized to her
每段三个微情节(Q & A策略)：注重衔接和冲突解决原则
第一段段首句：Brad hesitantly walked over to her.
[Question 1] What did Brad do
[Answer] __________________________
[Question 2] What was Grandma's reaction
[Answer] ________________________________________________
__________________________________
He apologized to Grandma.
She was moved, saying she should have given Brad more patience and understanding.
[Question 3] How did they spend the rest of the day
[Answer] _________________________________________________
_________________
They took seats next to each other, spending a happy time together.
第二段段首句：After that day, Brad decided not to leave any regrets in his grandma's life.
[Question 1] What did Brad decide to do
[Answer] ________________________________________________
___________________________
[Question 2] What did they do during the trip
He decided to spare more time to accompany Grandma, taking her on trips.
[Answer] _________________________________________________
____________________
[Question 3] What lesson did Brad learn
[Answer] _________________________________________________
________________
They enjoyed the beautiful scenery and shared sorrows and joys.
If he hadn't reached out to his grandma, it would be a lifelong regret.
遣词造句：倒装、虚拟语气和从句重点练
语言协同原则：应用高级词汇、句型和语法结构
1．But he loved his sister, and if he had missed the wedding, he would have been in regret.(______语气)
2．Never had she had the chance to see what she called the great outdoors other than a trip to see relatives in Louisiana.(部分______)
虚拟
倒装
3．We'd hold them in our hands and talk about how beautiful it was being in nature.(______从句)
4．However, as Brad entered adolescence, he was growing emotionally distant from his family, with occasional quarrels. (______从句)
宾语
状语
1．奶奶极为感动，说她本应该给布拉德更多的耐心和理解。
Grandma was overwhelmingly moved, saying that _________________
_______________________________________．(虚拟语气)
2．对于布拉德来说，他意识到如果他没有联系他的奶奶，那将是他一生的遗憾。
For Brad, he realized ____________________________________,it _______________________．(虚拟语气)
she should have
given Brad more patience and understanding
if he hadn't reached out to his grandma
would be a lifelong regret
3．婚礼开始时，他们手牵着手，挨着坐在一起。
______________________________, they took seats next to each other, hand in hand. (状语从句)
4．他们不仅是旅行伙伴，还是亲密的朋友。
__________________________________, but they were also close friends. (部分倒装)
As the wedding ceremony began
Not only were they traveling partners
1．震惊但很高兴，奶奶正要说些什么，却被布拉德打断了：“奶奶，我欠你一个道歉。”
______________________, Grandma was about to say something when she was interrupted by Brad, “Grandma, I owe you an apology.”(形容词作状语)
Stunned but delighted
2．他们带着理解的微笑看着对方，眼里闪烁着幸福的泪光。
They looked at each other with understanding smiles, _____________
______________________________．(独立主格结构)
3．他开始抽出更多的时间陪伴奶奶，带她去旅行，欣赏世界上令人印象最深刻的风景。
He began to spare more time to accompany Grandma, _____________
_________________________________________________．(v.-ing形式作状语)
their eyes
glittering with tears of happiness
taking her on
trips to enjoy the most impressive scenery in the world
4．远离邓肯福尔斯的旅行改变了奶奶和布拉德本人的生活。
___________________ Duncan Falls was life-changing for Grandma as well as Brad himself.(v.-ing形式作主语)
Traveling far from
Brad hesitantly walked over to her.__________________________
___________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________
After that day, Brad decided not to leave any regrets in his grandma's life.________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________
One possible version：
Brad hesitantly walked over to her. He gave Grandma his arm to help her walk steadily. Stunned but delighted, Grandma was about to say something when she was interrupted by Brad, “Grandma, I owe you an apology.” Grandma was overwhelmingly moved, saying that she should have given Brad more patience and understanding. That was a great regret for her in those years. They looked at each other with understanding smiles, their eyes glittering with tears of happiness. As the wedding ceremony began, they took seats next to each other, hand in hand.
After that day, Brad decided not to leave any regrets in his grandma's life. He began to spare more time to accompany Grandma, taking her on trips to enjoy the most impressive scenery in the world. During the trips, Brad and Grandma shared their life stories, sorrows and joys. Traveling far from Duncan Falls was life-changing for Grandma as well as Brad himself. Not only were they traveling partners, but they were also close friends. For Grandma Joy, her life was eventually full of joys. For Brad, he realized if he hadn't reached out to his grandma, it would be a lifelong regret.