高考英语二轮复习专题提高写作能力读后续写第一节读后续写三步解题流程课件

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第一节　读后续写三步解题流程
读后续写要求考生在理解一篇不完整的文章的基础上，充分发挥想象力，大胆预测文章后续部分的情节发展，进行合乎逻辑的续写。如果考生不知道原文讲的情节是什么，原文情节已经发展到哪里，续写就无从谈起。考生必须先梳理出原文本的故事情节，才能在延续原文情节的基础上合理构建故事，顺利完成续写任务。考生可以根据实际情景和续写文章的特点利用读后续写三步解题流程来完成续写。
[经典范例]
(2024·新课标Ⅰ/Ⅱ卷)I met Gunter on a cold，wet and unforgettable evening in September.I had planned to fly to Vienna and take a bus to Prague for a conference.Due to a big storm，my flight had been delayed by an hour and a half.I touched down in Vienna just 30 minutes before the departure of the last bus to Prague.The moment I got off the plane，I ran like crazy through the airport building and jumped into the first taxi on the rank without a second thought.
That was when I met Gunter.I told him where I was going，but he said he hadn't heard of the bus station.I thought my pronunciation was the problem，so I explained again more slowly，but he still looked confused.When I was about to give up，Gunter fished out his little phone and rang up a friend.After a heated discussion that lasted for what seemed like a century，Gunter put his phone down and started the car.
Finally，with just two minutes to spare we rolled into the bus station.Thankfully，there was a long queue (队列) still waiting to board the bus.Gunter parked the taxi behind the bus，turned around，and looked at me with a big smile on his face.“We made it，” he said.
Just then I realised that I had zero cash in my wallet.I flashed him an apologetic smile as I pulled out my Portuguese bankcard.He tried it several times，but the card machine just did not play along.A feeling of helplessness washed over me as I saw the bus queue thinning out.
At this moment，Gunter pointed towards the waiting hall of the bus station.There，at the entrance，was a cash machine.I jumped out of the car，made a mad run for the machine，and popped my card in，only to read the message: “Out of order.Sorry.”
注意：
1．续写词数应为150个左右；
2．请按如下格式作答。
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第一步：读——读取信息
1．读要素、主题
要素 描述 主题
When On a cold，wet evening in September 本文讲述了作者因飞机延误导致从机场赶往公共汽车站的行程紧张。经过一番波折后，作者终于乘坐Gunter的出租车赶到了公共汽车站。作者发现自己没有带现金，取款机出了故障，作者不能正常支付出租车车费。文章主题是良好的人际关系和社会交往，而不是个人面对苦难时的坚持与热情。
Where In Vienna
Who I，Gunter
What I took a taxi to catch the last bus to Prague，but I had zero cash.
Why Due to a big storm，my flight had been delayed by an hour and a half.
2.读情节线索
结构 情节线 情感线
开端 I had planned to fly to Vienna and take a bus to Prague for a conference. hopeful
发展 Due to a big storm，my flight had been delayed by an hour and a half. unexpected
I jumped into the first taxi on the rank to catch the last bus to Prague. worried
I told Gunter where I was going，but he said he hadn't heard of the bus station. helpless
Gunter rang up a friend，had a heated discussion and started the car. hopeful
结构 情节线 情感线
高潮 We rolled into the bus station in time but I realised that I coudn't pay for the fare. anxious
结局 Four days later，when I was back in Vienna，I called Gunter as promised. ？
3.读语言风格
(1)语言简洁明了：整体用词较为简单直接，没有过多华丽复杂的词汇，如ran like crazy，jumped into，fished out等表述生动形象且易懂，能让读者快速理解情境。
(2)注重动作描写：通过一系列动作描写来推动情节发展，比如got off，ran，jumped，parked，turned around等，增强了故事的动态感和紧张感。
(3)口语化表达：对话部分较为自然和口语化，符合日常交流的风格，如but he said he hadn't heard of the bus station；we made it等，使读者更容易产生代入感。
第二步：思——构思情节
1．思矛盾冲突
根据情节梳理，不难得出续写中需要解决的问题或困难是：How can I pay the taxi fare for Gunter？How to pay the fare for going to Prague 如何向冈特支付打车费？如何支付前往布拉格的车费？
2．思谋篇布局
(1)由第一段首句内容“我跑回到冈特那里，告诉他这个坏消息。”和第二段首句“四天后，当我回到维也纳时，我按照承诺给冈特打了电话。”可知，第一段可描写作者留下冈特的电话，承诺会还钱给对方，冈特同意，最终作者及时登上了公共汽车并按时参加了会议。为丰富细节，考生可以尝试问自己以下三个问题：
①根据第一段提示句提出的问题：How did Gunter react to the bad news What did he do and say (续写首段的第二句)
②根据第二段提示句提出的问题：What promise did I make How to end the first paragraph？(续写首段的结尾句)
③根据上述的问题提出衔接性的问题：What did Gunter and I do before the bus pulled away with me？(续写首段的中间过渡内容)
(2)由第二段首句内容“四天后，当我回到维也纳时，我按照承诺给冈特打了电话。”可知，第二段可描写作者付费给冈特，并向对方表示感激，两人成了好朋友。为提示语篇及丰富语篇的内容，考生可以再次尝试问自己以下四个问题：
①What did I learn from the special experience？(续写尾段〈整个语篇〉的最后一句)
②What was Gunter's reaction on hearing my voice (续写尾段的第二句)
③How did the whole event end？(故事本身的结束句，也就是续写尾段的倒数第二句)
④What did we say or do when we two met (续写尾段的中间过渡及衔接内容)
第三步：写——续写成篇
在确定了思路和内容之后，续写时，要注意句子结构的多样性，语言的丰富性，并通过句与句之间连接词的正确使用，使上下文连贯。重读所续写的两段内容，核查词汇、句式、语法结构以及标点的使用是否正确，以使文章行文规范。
[范文赏读]
I ran back to Gunter and told him the bad news.The cash machine was also out of order! In other words，I couldn't pay him now.I felt so depressed and sorry，an embarrassed smile creeping into my face.Then an idea occurred to me.I pointed at my phone and asked him to give his phone number to me so that I could contact him when I came back here.Surprisingly，he comforted me that everything was OK since he had known how anxious I was.After we said goodbye to each other，I rushed to the queue.Fortunately，I didn't miss the whole arrangements for the conference.
Four days later，when I was back in Vienna，I called Gunter as promised.He didn't recognize me immediately when I said hello to him.So I explained my intention.At first，he refused to charge me the fare.But I insisted I owe him the money.Therefore，we made a deal to meet at the bus station.When we met，I extended my gratitude for his trust in me，gave him the fare and tipped him another sum of money.Satisfied，he gave me a thumbs-up，praised me a lot for my honesty and also thanked me for the tip，but I told him that he deserved it.Till now，every time I recall this experience，I can't help wondering if there is more trust and honesty in the world，how charming our world will be.
[针对训练]
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
It was my birthday that day，and my grandfather gave me a gift—a piggy bank.It had an opening through which one could put money in，but the opening was not big enough to reach in and get the money out.The only way to get the money was to break the piggy bank open.My grandfather explained that was the whole idea.And he added.“The piggy bank would help save your money so that，at the end of the year，you might have enough for that bike you dreamed about.” He asked if I would put some of the money he gave me into the piggy bank.I agreed immediately and promised sincerely，“I wouldn't break it open until I could afford my dream bike.”
Whenever my grandfather gave me some pocket money，he would say，“This is for spending.But you can save some and put it in the piggy bank if you want to save it up.” When he gave me larger amounts，it was clear for me to save the extra money in the piggy bank.For some time，this worked fine.I loved shaking the piggy bank and hearing the sound of the coins.As it became heavier，I grew more excited，dreaming about buying my new bike，and all the adventures I could have on it.
Whenever I wanted to take some money from the piggy bank to buy delicious ice-creams or beautiful presents，I would imagine riding my bike on the street，and thinking of that，my thoughts about buying those things went away.So for almost three years，I had only put money into the piggy bank without taking any out.I thought I wouldn't break my piggy bank for anything.But one day something unexpected happened.I saw a piece of news on the television that a serious earthquake had happened in a nearby province.As many houses were destroyed，a lot of children became homeless.Seeing their shabby clothes and crying faces，I was sleepless that night.Staring at my piggy bank，I was thinking about what I could do with it.
注意：
1．续写词数应为150个左右；
2．请按如下格式作答。
The next morning.I took out my piggy bank and shook it.____________
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[参考范文]
The next morning，I took out my piggy bank and shook it.“There should be a lot of money in it.This is years of my savings，” I said to myself.I was about to break it and withdraw money when my mind came back to the bike I wanted to buy，and I hesitated.However，thinking of the look in the eyes of the children hoping for help in the earthquake，I grabbed the piggy bank and threw it to the ground.Suddenly，the piggy bank broke into pieces and the coins rolled all over the floor.
Hearing the noise，my grandfather came over.I explained to him what had happened.Having known my thought，he fondly touched my head and said，“Good boy，you did the right thing.Grandpa is proud of you.” He continued，“My dear grandson，you deserve that bicycle.As a bonus，let's buy that bike together now.” “Thank you，Grandpa，” I was overwhelmed with happiness.From that day on，you would always see me riding my bike on the street，leaving my hearty laughter behind.