(共12张PPT)
写作规范增分练(一)
(限时:40分钟)
报道+家庭亲情篇
第一节 应用文写作(满分15分)
假定你是李华,上周你校举办了中国传统文化周活动。请你为校英文报写一篇报道,内容包括:
1.活动目的;
2.活动内容;
3.活动反响。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.请按如下格式作答。
A Traditional Chinese Culture Week
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A Traditional Chinese Culture Week
A traditional Chinese culture week campaign was launched last week in our school to enhance students' confidence in our national culture(不定式短语作目的状语).
During the campaign,we students were encouraged to participate in numerous cultural activities,including singing Chinese folk songs,attending Chinese calligraphy classes and introducing traditional Chinese festivals.Every one of us chose one to our taste and we enjoyed ourselves very much.
The campaign is a success and has gained popularity among us students,which will encourage us to further spread Chinese culture in future(which引导非限制性定语从句).
第二节 读后续写(满分25分)
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
I live in a small but lovely neighborhood.Our house is neither large nor luxurious,but it has a fairly big garden.My father loves his garden.He planted some seeds in it,and took good care of the plants,watering them,applying fertilizer,weeding and getting rid of bugs.He was never tired of doing all that stuff.But at that time,I didn't understand why working in the dirt excited him so much.
Unfortunately,in the summer vacation before my senior high school,my father was seriously injured in an accident.He had to stay in bed for a while.My mother had several business trips,so she couldn't take care of the garden.I didn't want my father to worry.I said that I would take care of his garden until he recovered.I assumed that the little plants would continue to grow as long as they had water,and luckily it rained fairly often,so I didn't think much about the garden.
One Saturday morning,my father said to me,“Christine,the vegetables should be about ready to be picked.Let's have a salad today!”I went out to the garden and was upset to see that the lettuce (生菜) leaves and carrots had been half eaten by bugs.There were hundreds of bugs all over them!
I panicked for a moment but then I quietly went to the nearest supermarket to buy some vegetables.When I was making the salad,my mother came home and saw the bag from the supermarket in the kitchen.I was embarrassed and admitted,“Dad would like a salad,but the garden is a disaster.I don't want to disappoint him,so I went to the supermarket and bought some vegetables.”My mother smiled,saying,“Honey,you know what is the right thing to do.”
注意:
1.续写词数应为150个左右;
2.请按如下格式作答。
My father seemed very pleased when I took the salad to him.
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My father seemed very pleased when I took the salad to him.“It looks so good.Your salad makes my mouth water,”Dad couldn't wait to try it.He forked a piece into his mouth and chewed slowly,a satisfied smile spreading across his face(独立主格结构).Giving me a thumbs-up(现在分词短语作状语),he said,“Little did I know you are so good at gardening(部分倒装).You are a woman of your word.”My father kept praising me,which made my ears burning(非限制性定语从句).Feeling bad about what I had done(宾语从句),I forced a bitter smile.How could I cheat my father
Feeling guilty,I decided to do the right thing.With tears welling up in my eyes (with复合结构),I told my father I didn't live up to his expectations and that the garden was a mess(宾语从句).To my surprise,instead of scolding me,my father patted me on the shoulder gently and told me to turn to him if I needed any help.Under his guidance,I learned to apply fertilizer,weed and remove bugs.The vegetables became better and better day by day,and so did my father.I began to enjoy taking care of vegetables and I finally understood my father's pleasure of working in the dirt.(共11张PPT)
写作规范增分练(五)
(限时:40分钟)
求助信+个人成长篇
第一节 应用文写作(满分15分)
假定你是李华,你准备参加学校即将举办的英文歌曲大赛。请给你班交换生Anna写一封邮件请她给予指导,内容包括:
1.说明比赛要求;
2.请她推荐歌曲;
3.请求陪同练习。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.请按如下格式作答。
Dear Anna,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
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Dear Anna,
I'm writing to ask for your help.Our school will hold an English Singing Contest next weekend.I have signed up for it.It is required that the theme should be about nature (It作形式主语,that引导的从句作真正的主语).Each contestant is given up to five minutes to sing the song.So,would you please give me some recommendations on which song to choose?Besides,what I need(主语从句)is the skills of singing,including pronunciation and intonation,which will perfect my performance (非限制性定语从句).I'd appreciate it if you could practice with me.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
第二节 读后续写(满分25分)
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Once upon a time,there was a young athletic boy who is really hungry for success.For him,winning was everything and success was measured just by winning.He practised hard every day to win every race lying ahead of him.
One day,the boy was preparing himself for a running competition in his small village.A large crowd had gathered to witness the sporting event.A wise old man had travelled far to bear witness too.The race began.The boy with his determination,strength and power took the winning line and came to the first.The crowd were excited,cheering and waving at the boy.However,the wise man remained still and calm,expressing no excitement.The little boy,however,felt proud and important.
A second race was called and two new young fit challengers came forward to run with him.The race was started and sure enough the little boy ran fast and finished first.Once again the crowd were excited again,and cheered and waved at the boy.The wise man remained still and calm again,expressing no excitement.The little boy,however,felt proud and important.
In another race,the wise old man stepped forward and presented the little boy with two new challengers,an elderly weak lady and a blind man.“What is this?”the little boy was puzzled.“This is no race!” he claimed.“Race,” said the wise man.
注意:
1.续写词数应为150个左右;
2.请按如下格式作答。
The race was started and the boy was the only finisher. _____________
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The race was started and the boy was the only finisher.The other two challengers were left at the starting line.The little boy was very happy,so he raised his arms in delight.The crowd,however,were silent showing no sentiment toward the little boy(现在分词短语作伴随状语).“What has happened?Why don't the people join in my success?”he asked the wise old man.
“Race again,” replied the wise man,“this time finish together with all three of you.” The little boy thought a little,stood in the middle of the blind and the weak,and then took the two challengers.The little boy walked slowly to the finishing line and crossed it.The crowd were crazy and cheered and waved at the boy.The wise man smiled,nodding his head(现在分词短语作伴随状语).The little boy felt proud and important.Lost in deep thought for a while(过去分词短语作伴随状语),the boy thanked the wise old man for making him realize the real meaning of success.From then on,he could be regarded as a truly successful athlete.(共12张PPT)
写作规范增分练(六)
(限时:40分钟)
感谢信+个人成长篇
第一节 应用文写作(满分15分)
假定你是校学生会成员李华,你校学生会组织了图书捐赠及互换活动,外教Smith捐赠了许多英文图书。请你代表学生会给他写一封邮件表示感谢,内容包括:
1.表达感激之情;
2.回顾活动以及Smith给予的帮助。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.请按如下格式作答。
Dear Smith,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
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Dear Smith,
On behalf of the Students' Union,I'm writing to express our heartfelt gratitude for your generous donation of so many English books.
Last Friday,we organized a book donation and exchange event.Many students and teachers took an active part in it.It's so kind of you to bring books covering a wide range of topics(现在分词短语作定语). Besides,the books you donated(定语从句) were very popular,all of which were taken away in a short time(非限制性定语从句).There is no denying that your generosity and contribution made a big difference to our event,which turned out to be a great success.
Thank you once again for your support.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
第二节 读后续写(满分25分)
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Ms.Johnson will never forget Chelsea,a wounded soul.Over the years Chelsea had always struggled,both academically and with self-confidence.Additionally,her mother had died after a heroic battle with a terminal illness when Chelsea was a fifth grader.As she began her sixth grade,Chelsea was still hurting.Ms.Johnson worried about her with good reason.
Each fall,Ms.Johnson takes the students for a five-day adventure at Wolf Ridge,an environmental learning center in the woods of Northern Minnesota overlooking Lake Superior.The week is filled with learning,team building,and overcoming seemingly impossible challenges.They go in October,and the turning leaves of trees come to symbolize the changes happening to the students over the week.The steps and growth students make at Wolf Ridge become a metaphor Ms.Johnson uses throughout the year as her students face challenges in the classroom.
The most difficult activity is the adventure ropes course,which stretches from tower to tower high among the treetops 25—30 feet above the ground.Ms.Johnson knew this experience would be particularly difficult for Chelsea.
When it was time for her to fasten the harness (安全带),Chelsea was already trembling.The harness offers physical protection,but not much mental comfort when nothing but a slippery board or an unsteady wire is between your feet and the ground far below.Chelsea stepped hesitantly onto the Swinging Wood Bridge,and only after the instructor's encouragement,slowly made
her way across its shaky boards up to the first tower.With the support of a chaperone (监护人) stationed there,she began her way across the Burma Bridge,made of merely three wires and straps.Her trembling body added to its shaking.From down below,her ground partners shouted out supportively,“Come on,Chelsea,you're doing great!”
Chelsea finally reached the second tower and eventually stepped out onto the next challenge and slowly inched her way across
注意:
1.续写词数应为150个左右;
2.请按如下格式作答。
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Now she faced what for many is the most difficult activity:the Single Wire.Thinking about the fact that there was only one wire(现在分词短语作伴随状语,其中that引导同位语从句),Chelsea was trembling again and afraid to take one more step.But hearing the cheers from her teacher and classmates below,she got to gain courage.Holding the harness tightly,Chelsea began to walk step by step carefully and cautiously.Finally,she made it.
The final challenge is a zip line (高空滑绳),which requires leaping off the last tower and sliding to the ground.Staring at the zip line,Chelsea didn't feel frightened any longer.Because she found it is much easier to slide to the ground with the line(it作形式主语,动词不定式作真正的主语).She had experienced much tougher activities before,so she had the faith to go through it.Without hesitation,Chelsea slid along the zip line and landed on the ground safe and sound.All her teacher and classmates applauded her and there was a wide smile on her face.(共12张PPT)
写作规范增分练(四)
(限时:40分钟)
邀请信+人际关系篇
第一节 应用文写作(满分15分)
假设你是李华,你市的科技馆将在本周末举办“中国之太空探索”图片展,你知道你校的外教Carl是一位太空迷。请你给他写一封邮件,邀请他前往观看。内容包括:
1.写信目的;
2.时间与地点;
3.图片展的内容及目的或意义。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.请按如下格式作答。
Dear Carl,
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Yours,
Li Hua
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Dear Carl,
Knowing you are keen on the space(现在分词短语作状语),I can't wait to invite you to a photo exhibition whose theme is China's space exploration(定语从句).
The photo exhibition will take place in the Science and Technology Museum at 9 a.m. this weekend.To enable the general public to know more about China's space exploration,the exhibition will show what progress China has made(宾语从句) and how China has struggled to explore the space(宾语从句) despite lots of difficulties.
I believe you will be interested in it and I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
第二节 读后续写(满分25分)
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
On Black Friday,the busiest shopping day of the year,I went for breakfast in downtown Little Rock.
Even at 8 a.m.there was a waiting line at the cafe.Customers stood in groups,chatting and rubbing their cold hands together,waiting to share a hot breakfast and more conversation before pouring into the stores for bargains.I could feel the cheery excitement of the holidays,but it was tied with the usual stress that spoilt the season with layers of anxiety and tiredness.
Finally,I was seated by a large window.I noticed that it had begun to rain lightly outside.“Oh,no,”I complained.“I'm going to be dashing around in the rain.Shopping will be messy today!”I heard others complaining,too.
Then,out of the corner of my eye,I noticed an elderly man on the other side of the window,making his way carefully down the sidewalk.He was carrying a black umbrella in his left hand,sheltering himself from the rain,and balancing several brooms (扫帚) on his right shoulder.Beneath a thin gray coat,he was dressed in brown pants.A striped ski cap protected his head and thick glasses covered his eyes.As I watched,he smiled and stepped politely aside to allow a couple to rush by.
“Who's that?”I asked the waitress.
“That's Melvin.He's been walking these streets for years and years.I've heard he put several orphans through college by selling those brooms.He's almost blind and in his seventies,but he keeps on working.I don't know how he does it.Everybody buys brooms from him.He lives a poor life but he is a wonderful person.People here have always been good to him.”
Suddenly I was curious.This dear man could hardly see.Selling brooms on the streets could not earn good money.Melvin was the one who needed help!“So how does he help people?”I asked frankly.
注意:
1.续写词数应为150个左右;
2.请按如下格式作答。
Just then Melvin walked slowly into the restaurant. ________________
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Just then Melvin walked slowly into the restaurant.Waiting customers smiled and cleared the way for him.A few shook his hand.Others patted his shoulder as he moved quietly from table to table,smiling and asking(现在分词作伴随状语),“Do you need a broom today?”Several frequenters bought from him and rose to pile their new brooms near the doorway.He gestured toward his brooms by the door,“I'm grateful for what you did for me.”At the scene,I was deeply touched by him and his story.I ordered him a breakfast and asked him to sit next to me.
We chatted over the breakfast.From our interactions,I learned that he always chose the path of gratitude and service,even though there was much he could have complained about,not like the rest of us ...well,at least me,who complained just because we had to go shopping in the rain (who引导的定语从句).He also shared that he was earning nearly enough to fund another orphan through college and that he was doing his bit to make the world better.He really made me feel humbled,and it was then that I decided to be intentionally positive and become a better person(强调句型).(共12张PPT)
写作规范增分练(二)
(限时:40分钟)
第一节 应用文写作(满分15分)
随着知识经济的发展,我们的社会越来越需要“全能型人才”。假设你是李华,学校英文社团请你写一封倡议书,主题为“To Be an All-round Student”。 写作要点:
1.提出倡议的背景;
2.倡议的内容;
3.提出呼吁。
参考词汇:all-round talents 全能型人才
注意:
1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.请按如下格式作答。
To Be an All-round Student
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To Be an All-round Student
Dear boys and girls,
With the development of knowledge economy,it is necessary that we should strive to be an all-round senior high school student(主语从句).
We are supposed to do whatever we can to improve ourselves from all aspects.Firstly,be physically and mentally healthy,which lays a solid foundation for our study and life(非限制性定语从句).Secondly,we must hold an active attitude towards study,forming a good learning habit(现在分词短语作状语).Furthermore,while studying hard(时间状语从句的省略),we should attach great importance to the innovation consciousness and practical ability.
For the benefit of our future development,let's take immediate action from now on.
The English Club
第二节 读后续写(满分25分)
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
I grew up in a small town where the primary school was a ten-minute walk from my house and children could go home for lunch and find their mothers waiting.
At the time,I did not consider this a luxury,although today it certainly would be.I took it for granted that mothers were the sandwich-makers,the finger-painting appreciators and the homework monitors.I never doubted that this ambitious,intelligent woman,who had had a career before I was born and would eventually return to a career,would spend almost every lunch hour throughout my primary school years just with me.
I only knew that when the noon bell rang,I would race breathlessly home.My mother would be standing at the top of the stairs,smiling down at me with a look that suggested I was the only important thing she had on her mind.For this I am forever grateful.
Some sounds bring it back:the high and long sound of my mother's boiling teapot,the low and continuous noises of the washing machine in the basement,the ringing of my dog's license tags as she bounded down the stairs to greet me.Some memories are still in my mind: the delicious peanut butter sandwiches and the chocolate-chip cookies,and the dandelion that once gave me courage at the night of my performance.
A few months ago,my mother came to visit.I took a day off from work and treated her to lunch.The restaurant staff busy themselves with noontime activities as business people made deals and glanced at their watches.In the middle of all this sat my mother,now retired,and I.From her face I could see that she actually enjoyed the pace of the world.
注意:
1.续写词数应为150个左右;
2.请按如下格式作答。
“Mom,you must have been terribly bored with staying at home when I was a child,”I said.____________________________________________
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“Mom,you must have been terribly bored with staying at home when I was a child,”I said.“Bored?Housework is boring.But you were never boring,”she answered.I didn't believe her,so I said,“Surely children are not as stimulating as a career.”“A career is stimulating,” she said.“I am glad I had one.But the career is like an open balloon.It remains inflated as long as you keep pumping(条件状语从句).A child is like a seed.You water it.You try your best to care for it.And then it grows all by itself into a beautiful flower.”
Just then,looking at her,I could picture us sitting at her kitchen table once again.We enjoyed our lunchtimes together,bathed in the soft sunlight.They are the commas in my childhood,the pauses that told me life is not savored in pre-measured increments,but in the sum of daily rituals and small pleasures we casually share with loved ones(省略了关系词的定语从句).Over peanut butter sandwiches and chocolate-chip cookies,I learned that love,first and foremost,means being there for the little things(that引导的宾语从句).(共13张PPT)
写作规范增分练(三)
(限时:40分钟)
建议信+人际关系篇
第一节 应用文写作(满分15分)
假定你是李明,你的外国朋友David最近选修了中文课程。他来信向你咨询学好中文的方法。请你写一封回信,内容包括:
1.提出建议;
2.表达祝愿。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.请按如下格式作答。
Dear David,
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Yours,
Li Ming
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Dear David,
I'm thrilled to know you're learning Chinese(宾语从句)!It's normal to feel a bit anxious at first.Don't worry.Here are some suggestions.
First,read aloud poems.Chinese is a beautiful language,and I'm sure you'll enjoy its rhyme and rhythm.Second,try to communicate often.You may find a Chinese friend with similar interests.That way,you will feel more relaxed and comfortable.Last,use websites of Chinese media,like China Daily or CGTN,where you'll find sufficient quality learning resources(定语从句).By immersing yourself in it,you'll soon have a deeper insight and eventually be eager to learn more.
The Great Wall was not built in a day.I'm sure your constant efforts will be rewarded.
Yours,
Li Ming
第二节 读后续写(满分25分)
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Magen double-checked the words on her spelling test.If she got a full mark today,she'd win the First-Quarter Spelling Challenge of her class and a brand-new dictionary that came with videos and other cool stuff.Plus,Ms.McCormack had promised to do a handstand (倒立) if anyone got a perfect score.
Three more words to go.N-i-c-e-l-y.Q-u-i-c-k-l-y.H-o-n-e-s-t-y.Wait!She'd spelled honesty,not honestly!She erased “-ty”and wrote “-ly”before handing in her paper.Ms.McCormack graded the papers while the students were at rest.
After a break,Magen hurried into the classroom,sitting in her seat nervously.Ms.McCormack walked to the front of the room and cleared her throat.“Congratulations,Magen!You did it!”Then,as if she were an Olympic gymnast,Ms.McCormack's feet flipped into the air.The whole class erupted!
Ms.McCormack presented Magen with her prize.A big smile spread across Magen's face as she read the label on the box:To Magen Carter,for her perfect first-quarter score in spelling.
“Is everything OK ?”Mom asked as Magen burst through the front door after school.
“Everything's perfect!”Magen shouted,showing Mom her spelling test and prize.
Mom hugged her.“Put the test on the fridge so Dad can see it when he gets home.”
Magen scooped up (抱起) her cat.“Can you spell nicely,Casper?And quickly and honestly,and ...”It suddenly occurred to her that she had misspelled the word.Rooted to the spot,Magen reflected on how she could tell the whole class she shouldn't have earned the prize at all.She dashed into her room and pulled out the test paper.“If I put the missing‘t’ back in,no one would ever know,” she thought.Recalling the joyful moment,a mixture of guilt and unwillingness overwhelmed her.
注意:
1.续写词数应为150个左右;
2.请按如下格式作答。
Aware that there was something wrong with Magen,Mom knocked on the door and entered her room. _____________________________________
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Aware that there was something wrong with Magen,Mom knocked on the door and entered her room.“What happened,sweetheart?”asked Mom in a worried voice.Magen threw herself into her mother's arms and burst into tears.Hearing the whole story(现在分词短语作状语),Mom tried to comfort her.She taught Magen a lesson— It is honesty that is better than all wisdom(强调句).Enlightened by Mom's words(过去分词短语作状语),Magen made up her mind to acknowledge her fault.
The next day,arriving early at school,Magen pushed the door of Ms.McCormack's office open.With her hands trembling (with复合结构),Magen handed the dictionary and her spelling paper to her teacher.Head down,she explained her mistake in the spelling test.For a moment,Ms.McCormack stood there staring at her(现在分词短语作状语)before handing the prize back to Magen.“Shall I still keep this?”Magen asked unbelievably.“Not for the spelling test,”Ms.McCormack smiled,“but for your honesty.”