2026中考作文讲解之常考的5种题材
图表作文
题型点拨
图表作文要求考生对图表中的数据信息进行分析、研究,提炼要点,组织语言进行写作。考察考生对数据的分析能力以及对材料的归纳能力。
图表类型主要包含柱状图、曲线图,饼状图和表格等
该类型的作文多为说明文或议论文,在写作时,考生要开门见山点明主题,之后对图表内的数据进行描述,分析数据背后的原因,最后归纳总结,发表个人看法。
真题重现
2025重庆中考
某权威英语阅读网站发布报告:从小学到高中毕业,如每天坚持阅读 15分钟,学生的累积阅读量可达680万词;不足15分钟,则只有约150万词。你校英语社团在全校每天阅读时间不足15分钟的学生中进行原因调查后(结果见下图),针对最突出的原因,以“Everyone can have time to read”为主题发起征文。请你简述调查结果,提出行之有效的建议(1—2条)参与投稿。
要求
1. 80—120词,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
2. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。
参考信息
spare moments (碎片化时间) (during lunch breaks, while waiting, before bed...)
use/ create an AI reading agent (智能体) (make plans, remind sb. to read, manage time well...)
less screen time (less time on the phone...)
be a better learner (focus well, learn better in less time...)
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According to the survey, 16% show little interest in reading. ________________
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高分范文
According to the survey, 16% show little interest in reading. 12% don't know what to read. And 4% have other reasons. Most students, about 68%, think they have no time. However, I think if we truly want to read, we can always find time.
First, we can use spare moments wisely. We can read during short moments while waiting for the bus. Also, always carrying a book makes it convenient to read. Every minute counts.
Second, we can create an Al reading agent. It creates our own reading plans, records our reading time and reminds us about our reading tasks. It can help us manage time well.
Dear friends, time is like sunshine-if you look for it, you' Il always find some. Let's swim together in the ocean of reading.
佳句积累
图表引入类
这幅折线图直观地呈现了2022-2024年我市初中生日均体育锻炼时长的变化趋势。
This line graph clearly shows the changing trend of daily physical exercise duration of junior high school students in our city from 2022 to 2024.
下面的饼状图详细说明了我校学生周末课余时间的分配比例。
The following pie chart illustrates in detail the distribution proportion of junior high school students' spare time on weekends in our school.
这张表格对比了2023年和2024年中考各科目的平均分变化情况。
This table compares the changes in average scores of each subject in the high school entrance examination between 2023 and 2024.
数据变化描述类
从2022年到2024年,我校学生的英语口语满分率从12%上升至35%,增长幅度显著。
From 2022 to 2024, the full-score rate of oral English among students in our school rose from 12% to 35%, showing a significant increase.
随着线上学习资源的普及,初中生每周自主学习的时长以每年2小时的速度稳步增长。
With the popularization of online learning resources, the weekly self-study duration of junior high school students has increased steadily at a rate of 2 hours per year.
近三年来,我市初中生近视率从78%下降到65%,这得益于学校护眼措施的落实。
Over the past three years, the myopia rate of junior high school students in our city has decreased from 78% to 65%, which benefits from the implementation of eye protection measures in schools.
由于课后服务的推广,学生每天在家完成书面作业的时间从1.5小时减少到了45分钟。
Due to the promotion of after-school services, the time students spend on written homework at home every day has reduced from 1.5 hours to 45 minutes.
2023年全年,我市初中生每月参加校外辅导班的人数呈现出先升后降的波动趋势。
Throughout 2023, the number of junior high school students attending off-campus tutoring classes in our city showed a fluctuating trend of first rising and then falling.
占比与对比类
在所有兴趣社团中,机器人社团的参与占比最高,达到了28%,远超书法社团的8%。
Among all interest clubs, the participation proportion of the robot club is the highest, reaching 28%, far exceeding the 8% of the calligraphy club.
与男生相比,女生在语文科目上的优秀率高出12个百分点,而男生在数学科目上的表现略占优势。
Compared with boys, the excellent rate of girls in Chinese is 12 percentage points higher, while boys have a slight advantage in mathematics.
周末时间分配中,用于自主阅读的时间占比为30%,仅次于用于完成作业的40%。
In the weekend time distribution, the proportion of time spent on independent reading is 30%, second only to the 40% spent on homework.
趋势总结与原因分析
综上所述,这些数据表明我市初中生的体育锻炼意识正在逐步增强,这与学校和家庭的重视密不可分。
To sum up, these data indicate that the awareness of physical exercise among junior high school students in our city is gradually increasing, which is closely related to the attention of schools and families.
从图表中可以推断,随着电子产品管控措施的加强,学生的视力健康状况正在得到改善。
It can be inferred from the chart that with the strengthening of electronic product control measures, students' visual health is improving.
整体来看,初中生的课余生活正在向多元化发展,学习与兴趣培养的平衡逐渐受到重视。
On the whole, the after-school life of junior high school students is developing in a diversified way, and the balance between study and interest cultivation has gradually been valued.
写作训练
2025北京中考
假设你是李华,你们班的英语课正在开展研究性学习,你选择研究同学们做家务的情况,为此你对班里40名同学进行了问卷调查,下图是部分统计结果。请用英语写一篇短文,简要说明图表内容,并对班级同学参与家务劳动提出建议。
提示词语:show, chores, spend, tidy up, helpful
内容提示:
● What can you learn from the results
● Offer some advice to your classmates on doing housework.
I did a survey on my classmates doing housework. _____________________
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看图作文
题型点拨
看图作文可分成记叙文和说明文两大类。记叙文指根据图片叙述过去或即将发生的事件,说明文指根据图片描述一个地方或一种现象。
根据图片的数量可以分为单图作文和多图作文。
写作时,考生需要先审题目,分析图片意思,确定问题、人称和时态,之后根据问题列出题纲,合理安排作文的层次,最后表达图片内容,扩展成文章。
真题重现
2025凉山州中考
近期你校英语校刊正在举办以“团结就是力量(Many Hands Make Light Work)”为主题的征文活动。请根据以下图示,写一篇英语短文投稿。
The Story of Three Monks
参考词汇: monk和尚 temple寺庙
break out爆发 put out扑灭
要求:
1.短文应包括图示中的所给信息并拟题目;
2.条理清楚,行文连贯,可适当发挥,使内容充实;
3.短文中不得出现真实姓名、校名;
4.词数:80左右。
高分范文
The Story of Three Monks
Once there was a young monk living in a small temple. He carried water for himself every day and lived peacefully.
Later, a thin monk came. They decided to carry water together-they talked and laughed while working, and never ran out of water. But things changed when a fat monk arrived. None of them wanted to carry water. They just sat around talking about who should go and carry it, and soon there was no water left in the temple.
One day, a fire broke out suddenly. The three monks were scared. They forgot their arguments, picked up buckets, and worked together to put out the fire. After that, they knew the importance of teamwork. From then on, they helped each other and lived happily ever after.
佳句积累
图片内容开篇描述
这幅图生动描绘了课间休息时,一名男生主动帮女同学捡起散落一地书本的温暖瞬间。
This picture vividly depicts a warm moment during recess when a boy takes the initiative to help a girl pick up books scattered all over the floor.
图中,一群穿着红马甲的中学生志愿者正围坐在社区长椅旁,耐心地教几位老人使用智能手机视频通话。
In the picture, a group of middle school student volunteers in red vests are sitting around a community bench, patiently teaching several elderly people to make video calls with smartphones.
这张照片记录了暴雨滂沱的傍晚,一位交警站在积水的路口中央,冒雨指挥车辆通行的感人场景。
This photo records a touching scene in a rainy evening when a traffic police officer stands in the middle of a waterlogged intersection, directing traffic in the heavy rain.
细节动作与神态描写
画面左侧的小女孩眉头紧锁,手指反复摩挲着数学题的题干,而身旁的同桌则微笑着拿起草稿纸,准备帮她梳理解题思路。
The little girl on the left side of the picture frowns tightly, her fingers repeatedly rubbing the stem of the math problem, while her deskmate beside her smiles and picks up a draft paper, ready to help her sort out the problem-solving ideas.
老人布满皱纹的脸上洋溢着欣慰的笑容,双手紧紧握住志愿者递来的热水杯,浑浊的眼睛里满是感激的光芒。
翻译:The old man's wrinkled face is filled with a gratified smile, his hands tightly holding the hot water cup handed by the volunteer, and his cloudy eyes are full of grateful light.
跑道上的运动员咬紧牙关,双腿奋力交替向前,额头上的汗水顺着脸颊滑落,眼神死死盯着前方的终点线。
The athlete on the track grits his teeth, his legs striding forward alternately, sweat sliding down his cheeks from his forehead, and his eyes fixed firmly on the finish line ahead.
图片寓意与主题提炼
这幅图看似记录了普通的校园日常,实则旨在传达“互助互爱”的集体精神,提醒我们在校园生活中要学会主动关心他人。
This picture seems to record ordinary campus daily life, but it actually aims to convey the collective spirit of "mutual help and love", reminding us to learn to take the initiative to care for others in campus life.
从这张环保主题图中,我们可以深刻体会到“小事见担当”的道理:哪怕只是弯腰捡起一片垃圾,也是为保护环境贡献力量。
From this environmental protection-themed picture, we can deeply understand the truth that "responsibility can be seen in small things": even just bending down to pick up a piece of garbage is contributing to environmental protection.
这张照片蕴含着“尊重劳动者”的核心主题,它告诉我们:城市的整洁与便利,离不开每一位环卫工人的默默付出。
This photo contains the core theme of "respecting workers", which tells us that the cleanliness and convenience of the city cannot be separated from the silent efforts of every sanitation worker.
联系现实与观点表达
在现实生活中,类似图中的暖心场景随处可见:同学间分享学习笔记、陌生人主动为孕妇让座、志愿者在社区帮忙整理物资……
In real life, warm scenes similar to those in the picture can be seen everywhere: students sharing study notes, strangers offering seats to pregnant women voluntarily, volunteers helping sort out materials in the community...
作为中学生,我们应该像图中的志愿者一样,积极参与社会实践活动,用实际行动传递温暖与正能量。
As middle school students, we should, like the volunteers in the picture, actively participate in social practice activities and pass on warmth and positive energy with practical actions.
这幅图让我想起了去年学校组织的“关爱孤寡老人”活动,那次经历让我明白:陪伴,是给老人最好的礼物。
This picture reminds me of the "caring for the elderly living alone" activity organized by our school last year. That experience made me understand that company is the best gift for the elderly.
总结升华与倡议
总而言之,这幅图不仅是一个生活瞬间的记录,更是对美好品德的歌颂与倡导,值得我们每一个人用心体会、身体力行。
All in all, this picture is not only a record of a life moment, but also a praise and advocacy of good virtues, which is worth every one of us to experience and practice with our hearts.
通过这幅图,我们明白了“细节见真情”的道理:无论身处何时何地,保持一颗善良、乐于助人的心,就能让生活充满温暖。
Through this picture, we understand the truth that "true feelings can be seen in details": no matter when and where we are, keeping a kind and helpful heart can make life full of warmth.
这张图给我们敲响了警钟:青少年长时间使用电子产品会严重影响视力健康,我们必须养成合理用眼、定时休息的好习惯。
This picture sounds an alarm to us: teenagers' long-term use of electronic products will seriously affect visual health, and we must develop good habits of using eyes reasonably and taking regular breaks.
写作训练
2025菏泽中考
假如你是李华,你校英语社团正在开展以“Every Small Step Counts!”(每一小步都算数!)为主题的征文活动。请从以下你的生活情境中任选一个,用英语写一篇短文投稿。
其他情境
要点如下:
1. 讲述故事;
2. 分享感悟。
写作要求:
1. 100词左右;
2. 不得出现个人真实信息。
Every Small Step Counts!
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提示性作文
题型点拨
提示性作文指在题目中给出写作的要点提示,这类提示包含中文提示,英文提示,表格提示,思维导图提示等。
这些提示给出了写作的中心思想和主要内容,对完成作文有指导性和一定的限制性。
写作该类型的作文时,要注意要点齐全,适当自由发挥。
真题重现
2025宿迁中考
学校英语角开展以“健康饮食”为主题的演讲比赛,假如你是李华,请你以“A Healthy Diet”为题写一份英语演讲稿。要求:参照下表,阐述健康饮食的重要性,列举不良饮食习惯及危害,并给出合理的建议。
A Healthy Diet
健康饮食的重要性 1. 提供能量 2. 强壮身体
不良饮食习惯及危害 1. 甜食:对牙齿有害 2. 油炸食品(fried food):使身体变胖
合理的建议 1. 按时吃饭 2. 多吃水果、蔬菜 3. ……(补充2点)
注意:
1. 词数90左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
2. 可适当发挥,使短文连贯通顺;
3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。
A Healthy Diet
Dear classmates,
I’m Li Hua. I’m glad to be here to give a speech. My topic is “A Healthy Diet”.
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That’s all for my speech. Thank you for listening!
高分范文
A Healthy Diet
Dear classmates,
I’m Li Hua. I' m glad to be here to give a speech. My topic is "A Healthy Diet".
As we all know, a healthy diet plays a vital role in our life. It can provide us with enough energy to study and play. Also, it helps build up our bodies and makes us stronger.
However, some bad eating habits are common among us. Many students love eating sweet food, which is bad for our teeth. And fried food is popular too, but it can make us fat easily.
So how can we have a healthy diet First, we should eat regularly. Second, we are supposed to eat more fruits and vegetables which are rich in vitamins. Third, drink more milk and water instead of sugary drinks. Last but not least, control the amount of food we eat and avoid overeating.
Let's start from now on and form a good eating habit. Only in this way can we keep healthy and enjoy a happy life.
That' s all for my speech. Thank you for listening!
佳句积累
开篇点题
我认为首先要从身边的小事做起,比如主动承担班级值日任务。
I think we should start with small things around us, such as taking the initiative to undertake class on-duty tasks.
我们可以围绕智能手机对学习和社交的影响展开具体讨论。
We can discuss specifically around the impact of smartphones on study and social interaction.
我想分享去年运动会上,全班同学为我加油助威的温暖经历。
I want to share the warm experience when my whole class cheered for me at the sports meeting last year.
观点表达
在我看来,坚持每天阅读30分钟课外书籍,是提升语文素养和拓宽视野的最有效方式之一。
In my opinion, sticking to reading extracurricular books for 30 minutes every day is one of the most effective ways to improve Chinese literacy and broaden horizons.
我认为,与朋友发生矛盾时,真诚的沟通比冷战更能解决问题,也能让友谊更加坚固。
I believe that when conflicts arise with friends, sincere communication can solve problems better than cold war, and it can also make friendship stronger.
毫无疑问,养成早睡早起的作息习惯,不仅能让我们保持充沛的精力,还能提高课堂学习效率。
There is no doubt that developing a routine of going to bed early and getting up early can not only keep us energetic but also improve classroom learning efficiency.
原因分析
之所以强调垃圾分类的重要性,是因为它能减少环境污染,还能将可回收资源重新利用,真正实现绿色生活。
The reason why we emphasize the importance of garbage classification is that it can reduce environmental pollution, reuse recyclable resources, and truly realize green life.
我们应该珍惜与家人相处的时光,因为亲情是我们成长道路上最温暖的港湾,能在我们受挫时给予无限支持。
We should cherish the time spent with our families, because family affection is the warmest harbor on our growth path and can give us unlimited support when we are frustrated.
坚持写英语日记能快速提升写作能力,这是因为它能锻炼我们的词汇运用能力和句子组织能力,还能培养英语思维。
Keeping an English diary can quickly improve writing skills, because it can exercise our vocabulary application ability and sentence organization ability, and also cultivate English thinking.
举例论证
就拿我的同桌来说,他每天坚持背诵15个英语单词,一学期下来不仅词汇量大幅提升,英语考试成绩也提高了20多分。
Take my deskmate as an example. He persists in reciting 15 English words every day. After one semester, his vocabulary has greatly increased, and his English exam score has also improved by more than 20 points.
比如,我校的“环保小卫士”社团通过组织校园捡垃圾、绿植养护等活动,让全校同学的环保意识明显增强。
For example, the "Environmental Protection Guards" club in our school has significantly enhanced the environmental awareness of all students by organizing activities such as campus garbage picking and green plant maintenance.
我曾经参加过社区的“关爱孤寡老人”志愿活动,那次经历让我明白:简单的陪伴,就是给老人最好的温暖。
I once participated in the volunteer activity of "Caring for Elderly Living Alone" in the community. That experience made me understand that simple company is the best warmth for the elderly.
对比转折
虽然电子产品能提供便捷的线上学习资源,但过度依赖手机或平板会分散我们的注意力,甚至导致视力下降。
Although electronic products can provide convenient online learning resources, over-reliance on mobile phones or tablets will distract our attention and even lead to vision loss.
与传统的纸质书籍相比,电子书具有携带方便、存储量大的优势,但它缺少纸质书带来的沉浸式阅读体验。
Compared with traditional paper books, e-books have the advantages of easy carrying and large storage capacity, but they lack the immersive reading experience brought by paper books.
有些人认为“成绩是衡量学生的唯一标准”,然而我觉得,良好的品德、团队合作能力和创新思维同样重要。
Some people think that "grades are the only standard to measure students", but I believe that good morality, teamwork ability and innovative thinking are equally important.
总结升华
综上所述,成为一名优秀的中学生,需要我们在学习上刻苦努力,在品德上诚实守信,在生活中乐于助人,实现全面发展。
To sum up, being an excellent middle school student requires us to work hard in study, be honest and trustworthy in morality, and be ready to help others in life, so as to achieve all-round development.
通过以上分析,我们可以得出结论:保护环境不仅是成年人的责任,更是我们中学生的义务,我们要从点滴小事做起,守护共同的家园。
Through the above analysis, we can draw the conclusion that protecting the environment is not only the responsibility of adults but also the obligation of us middle school students. We should start from small things to protect our common home.
最后,我想呼吁所有同学:珍惜宝贵的初中时光,明确目标,脚踏实地,用汗水和努力浇灌出属于自己的青春之花。
Finally, I want to appeal to all students: cherish the precious middle school time, set clear goals, be down-to-earth, and water the flower of youth belonging to ourselves with sweat and efforts.
写作训练
2025济宁中考
某英文公众号正在举办以A meaningful birthday为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华,请根据下面的提示信息,用英语写一篇征文,记录你经历的一次既难忘又有意义的生日。
注意:
1. 须包括以上所有提示信息,可适当发挥;
2. 文中不得出现任何透露考生真实身份的信息;
3. 100词左右 (开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
A meaningful birthday
Birthdays are always special, and this year, mine was truly unforgettable.
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命题作文
题型点拨
命题作文是给定标题的作文,通常以贴近学生生活的话题为主,聚焦个人成长、校园生活、情感交流、社会热点四大方向,要求学生结合自身经历或观点完成写作
该题型要求考生依据题目写出符合题意、内容充分、语言自然流畅的文章
在审题时,考生要抓住核心词,确保全文围绕该关键词展开,结构多采用“总—分—总”的形式。
真题重现
2025盐城中考
你校英文报正在组织题为“A Meaningful Trip”的征文活动。请根据所给提示,写一篇英语短文投稿,分享一次有意义的出行经历。
注意事项:
1. 文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息;
2. 文章必须包含所有要点,可适当发挥,使短文连贯、通顺;
3. 词数:100词左右(文章开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
A Meaningful Trip
I have been to many places. The most meaningful one I want to share is the trip to
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高分范文
A Meaningful Trip
I have been to many places. The most meaningful one I want to share is the trip to a small mountain village last summer.
Instead of typical sightseeing, our class volunteered to help the local community. We taught English to the children and helped farmers pick fruits. Although the work was tiring, the smiles on the villagers’ faces made it all worthwhile. I was deeply touched by their kindness and simple way of life.
This trip was meaningful not only because we offered help, but also because we learned the importance of giving and gratitude. It was an unforgettable experience that taught me to cherish what I have and to always be willing to help others.
佳句积累
开篇引入
适用命题:《An Unforgettable Experience》《A Letter to My Parents》《The Importance of Reading》等
我脑海中立刻浮现出去年参加校园1000米长跑比赛的经历。
The memory of participating in the campus 1000-meter race last year immediately popped into my mind.
写这封信是为了感谢您在我数学成绩下滑时,利用午休时间帮我梳理知识点的温暖瞬间。
I am writing this letter to thank you for the warm moment when you spent your lunch break helping me sort out knowledge points when my math grades declined.
我想从自己的阅读经历出发,分享它对我成长的影响。
I want to start from my own reading experience and share its impact on my growth.
观点表达
适用命题:《My View on Online Learning》《Is Grades the Only Standard 》《The Value of Teamwork》等
在我看来,线上学习最大的优势是能随时随地获取优质资源,但过度依赖电子产品也会分散学习注意力。
In my opinion, the biggest advantage of online learning is that we can access high-quality resources anytime and anywhere, but over-reliance on electronic products can also distract our attention from study.
我认为,成绩不是衡量学生的唯一标准,良好的品德、团队合作能力和创新思维同样重要。
I believe that grades are not the only standard to measure students; good morality, teamwork ability and innovative thinking are equally important.
毫无疑问,团队合作是完成复杂任务的关键,就像一场足球比赛,只有每个球员配合默契才能赢得胜利。
There is no doubt that teamwork is the key to completing complex tasks. Just like a football match, only when every player cooperates tacitly can we win.
细节描写
适用命题:《A Warm Moment in My Class》《An Unforgettable Trip》《I Learned to Be Brave》等
发令枪响的那一刻,我深吸一口气,双腿用力蹬地,耳边是同学们震耳欲聋的加油声,手心的汗水浸湿了号码布。
At the moment the starting gun went off, I took a deep breath, pushed off the ground hard with my legs, the deafening cheers of my classmates filled my ears, and the sweat in my palms soaked the number cloth.
当我把考砸的数学试卷递给妈妈时,她没有批评我,而是轻轻摸了摸我的头,温柔地说:“没关系,我们一起分析错题。”
When I handed my failed math test paper to my mom, she didn't criticize me. Instead, she gently touched my head and said softly, "It's okay, let's analyze the wrong questions together."
那天的夕阳把天空染成了橘红色,我们坐在山顶的草地上,分享着背包里的零食,笑声在山谷里回荡。
The sunset dyed the sky orange-red that day. We sat on the grass on the top of the mountain, sharing snacks in our backpacks, and our laughter echoed in the valley.
原因分析
适用命题:《Why We Should Protect the Environment》《The Reason I Love Reading》《How to Improve Our English》等
我们必须重视垃圾分类,因为它不仅能减少垃圾填埋场的负担,还能将塑料、纸张等可回收资源重新利用,真正实现绿色生活。
We must attach importance to garbage classification because it can not only reduce the burden on landfills but also reuse recyclable resources such as plastic and paper, truly realizing green life.
我热爱阅读,因为每一本书都像一扇窗户,能带我看到不同的世界,了解不同人的故事,让我变得更加包容和智慧。
I love reading because every book is like a window that can take me to see different worlds, understand different people's stories, and make me more tolerant and wise.
要提高英语口语能力,最有效的方法是多开口练习,因为只有通过实际交流,我们才能纠正发音错误,培养英语思维。
To improve oral English ability, the most effective way is to practice speaking more, because only through actual communication can we correct pronunciation mistakes and cultivate English thinking.
总结升华
适用命题:《What I Learned from Failure》《The Meaning of Friendship》《Grow Up with Courage》等
这次失败的经历让我明白,真正的成长不是永远成功,而是在跌倒后有勇气站起来,继续朝着目标前进。
This failed experience taught me that true growth is not about being successful forever, but about having the courage to stand up and keep moving forward towards the goal after falling down.
总而言之,友谊是人生路上最珍贵的财富,它能在我们开心时分享喜悦,在我们难过时给予安慰,值得我们用心去珍惜。
All in all, friendship is the most precious wealth in life. It can share joy when we are happy and give comfort when we are sad, which is worth cherishing with our hearts.
通过这次志愿者活动,我深刻体会到:帮助别人不仅能给他人带来温暖,也能让自己收获满满的幸福感,这就是“赠人玫瑰,手有余香”的道理。
Through this volunteer activity, I deeply realized that helping others can not only bring warmth to others but also make myself gain full happiness. This is the truth of "The rose's in her hand, the flavor in mine."
写作训练
2025广元中考
“细微处见光芒”。生活中总有一些事对你产生了影响,促使你成长。你校微信公众号以“That Made a Difference to Me”为题征稿,请联系自己亲身经历的一件事写一篇英语短文,向公众号编辑部投稿。
写作要点:
1. 简要描述事情经过;
2. 事情对你的影响。
写作要求:
1. 短文须包含以上要点,不得出现真实姓名和校名;
2. 语言流畅,层次清晰,书写规范,卷面整洁;
3. 词数80词左右,文章标题已给出,不计入总词数。
That Made a Difference to Me
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开放式作文
题型点拨
开放式作文是中考英语中灵活性最强的题型,通常以宽泛话题、场景设定、名言警句或半命题形式呈现,考察学生的自主立意能力、逻辑组织能力和个性化表达能力。
叙事类开放式作文在写作时需注意避免流水账式叙事,要着重突出事件带来的成长感悟,可以适当加入细节描写。
议论类开放式作文在写作时需注意明确立场,开篇直接给出观点,在分点论述时,可结合自身事例,避免空泛说理;若话题有争议性,可以客观分析利弊后给出结论。
开放式作文在写作时要注意立意新颖,结构清晰,逻辑连贯,多采用“引入—叙事/论述—感悟”的结构,语言方面,需注意用词丰富,句式多变。
真题重现
2025贵州中考
英语老师Lucy为激发同学们学习英语的兴趣,鼓励大家记录课堂故事、班级活动、师生趣事等校园生活点滴,共同编写班级故事集Our Stories。请参考图文信息,以“A (n)________Story”为题,写下你(们)的故事。
写作要求:
1. 请补全标题;
2. 记录真实故事,表达个人情感;
3. 词数为80左右;
4. 文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
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高分范文
A Funny English Class Story
Last week, our English teacher Lucy made us play a word game. She asked us to describe objects without saying their names. When it was my turn, I tried to describe an "apple" by saying, "It' s red, round, and you can eat it." But my classmate shouted, "A tomato!" Everyone laughed, including Lucy.
Though I failed, it was so funny! This game not only made the class lively but also helped us remember new words better. I felt happy and excited. Now I look forward to every English class because learning can be full of joy!
佳句积累
开篇引入
适用于以物品、瞬间、回忆为切入点的开放式作文
每当我看到书桌上那支磨旧的钢笔,就会想起爸爸在我中考前说的话——“坚持就是胜利”,它是我面对困难时的力量源泉。
Whenever I look at the worn-out pen on my desk, I remember what my dad said to me before the high school entrance exam—"Persistence leads to victory." It is my source of strength when facing difficulties.
上周在公交车上看到的一幕,让我对“善良”有了新的理解,今天我想和大家分享这个温暖的瞬间。
A scene I saw on the bus last week gave me a new understanding of "kindness". Today I want to share this warm moment with you.
如果要问我成长路上最珍贵的礼物是什么,我会说是妈妈每天晚上为我留的那盏小夜灯。
If you ask me what the most precious gift on my growth path is, I will say it is the small night light my mom leaves on for me every night.
观点表达
适用于议论类开放式作文,如“What does courage mean to you ”“Is failure a bad thing ”
在我看来,真正的勇气不是无所畏惧,而是即使心怀恐惧,依然选择去做正确的事情。
In my opinion, true courage is not the absence of fear, but choosing to do the right thing even when you are afraid.
我认为,失败不是终点,而是成长的起点——它能让我们发现自己的不足,变得更强大。
I believe that failure is not an end, but a starting point for growth—it allows us to find our shortcomings and become stronger.
对我而言,幸福不是拥有很多物质财富,而是和家人一起吃一顿简单的晚餐,和朋友一起分享生活的点滴。
To me, happiness is not having a lot of material wealth, but having a simple dinner with my family and sharing bits of life with my friends.
细节描写
适用于叙事类开放式作文,如“Describe an unforgettable trip”“Share a time you helped others”
那天雨下得很大,妈妈撑着伞站在学校门口,伞的大部分都偏向了我这边,她的左肩膀全湿了,却还笑着问我有没有淋到雨。
It was raining heavily that day. Mom stood at the school gate holding an umbrella, most of which was tilted towards me. Her left shoulder was completely wet, but she still smiled and asked if I got caught in the rain.
当我把热牛奶递给楼下独居的李奶奶时,她布满皱纹的脸上露出了笑容,紧紧握住我的手,不停地说“谢谢你,好孩子”。
When I handed the hot milk to Grandma Li, who lives alone downstairs, a smile appeared on her wrinkled face. She held my hand tightly and kept saying "Thank you, good kid."
在山顶上,我们坐在草地上,看着夕阳把天空染成橘红色,风轻轻吹过,带着青草的香味,那一刻我觉得所有的辛苦都是值得的。
On the top of the mountain, we sat on the grass and watched the sunset dye the sky orange-red. The wind blew gently, carrying the scent of grass. At that moment, I felt all the hard work was worth it.
原因分析类
适用于需要解释理由的开放式作文,如“Why do you love reading ”“What’s the importance of teamwork ”
我喜欢阅读,因为每一本书都像一扇窗户,能带我看到不同的世界,了解不同人的故事,让我变得更加包容和智慧。
I love reading because every book is like a window that can take me to see different worlds, understand different people's stories, and make me more tolerant and wise.
我认为团队合作很重要,因为一个人的力量是有限的,但当我们一起努力时,就能解决更难的问题,还能收获珍贵的友谊。
I think teamwork is important because one person's strength is limited, but when we work together, we can solve more difficult problems and gain precious friendship.
我坚持每天跑步,不仅是为了锻炼身体,更是为了培养自律的习惯,它让我在学习上也能更专注、更有毅力。
I keep running every day not only to exercise my body, but also to develop the habit of self-discipline. It makes me more focused and persistent in my studies.
五、感悟升华
这次经历让我明白,最珍贵的不是完美的结果,而是在努力的过程中收获的成长、友谊和勇气。
This experience taught me that the most precious thing is not the perfect result, but the growth, friendship and courage gained in the process of striving.
原来,真正的善良不需要惊天动地的举动,一个微笑、一次伸手、一句问候,就能温暖别人的心灵。
It turns out that true kindness does not require earth-shaking actions. A smile, a helping hand, or a greeting can warm someone's heart.
从那以后,我学会了珍惜当下的每一刻,因为时间不会重来,而那些和家人、朋友一起度过的时光,才是生命中最宝贵的财富。
Since then, I have learned to cherish every moment in the present, because time will not come back, and the time spent with family and friends is the most precious wealth in life.
结尾倡议类
适用于呼吁行动、传递正能量的开放式作文,如“What can we do to make our school better ”“How to spread kindness around us ”
我希望更多的同学能加入志愿者队伍,用小小的善举温暖身边的人,让我们的校园和社区变得更美好。
I hope more students can join the volunteer team, warm the people around us with small acts of kindness, and make our campus and community better.
让我们从现在开始,每天花10分钟阅读课外书籍,在文字的世界里寻找成长的力量,拓宽自己的视野。
Let's start from now on, spend 10 minutes every day reading extracurricular books, find the power of growth in the world of words, and broaden our horizons.
我呼吁大家多和家人沟通,不要因为忙碌而忽略了身边最珍贵的亲情,因为家永远是我们最温暖的港湾。
I urge everyone to communicate more with their families, and not ignore the most precious family affection around us because of busyness, because home is always our warmest harbor.
写作训练
2025遂宁中考
假如你是李华,你收到一封来自外国朋友Alan的电子邮件,他与你分享了校园生活。请根据以下内容,给他回复一封邮件。
Dear Li Hua, How’s it going I’m always tired these days. Every day, I have P.E. class and do much exercise. You know I’m not good at exercising but I have to do it. What’s your opinion about it and why I’m looking forward to your reply. Yours, Alan
注意:
1. 不少于80词,文章开头已给出,不计入字数;
2. 表达你的观点,给出两点理由并进行阐述;
3. 要求语句通顺,行文连贯;
4. 文章中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。
Dear Alan,
I’m glad to get your e-mail and I really understand you.
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Yours,
Li Hua
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图表作文
I did a survey on my classmates doing housework. According to the results, 15% of them usually do housework, while 80% sometimes help with chores. Sadly, 5% seldom do any housework at all. This shows that most students are slow to take part in household tasks.
To improve this, I suggest my classmates spend some time every day doing simple chores, like tidying up their rooms or washing dishes. Housework is not only helpful for keeping our homes clean but also beneficial for teaching us responsibility. Let' all try to do more to help our families.
看图作文
Every Small Step Counts!
Last Sunday, on my way to the library, I saw an elderly man struggling to cross the street. Without hesitation, I rushed to help him. At first, he was a bit nervous, but when he felt my assistance, he relaxed. Step by step, we made it to the other side. The man thanked me repeatedly. This experience made me realize that every small act of kindness matters. Just like taking small steps, these little deeds can bring warmth and make a difference. No matter how tiny our efforts seem, they are valuable in making the world better.
提示性作文
A meaningful birthday
Birthdays are always special, and this year, mine was truly unforgettable. On May 25, 2025, with my parents and friends, I had a meaningful birthday. We gave away used books and clothes to those in need. Then, we adopted a dog from an animal shelter. After that, we made colorful greeting cards for sick kids in the hospital. Later, we took part in a volunteer activity at a nursing home, talking with the elderly.
This birthday made me spread warmth and love. I discovered the true meaning of giving. I also learned that helping others can bring more happiness to myself. What a meaningful and unforgettable birthday I had!
命题作文
That Made a Difference to Me
Last year, I had a really hard time learning English. I couldn’t remember new words and often felt very upset. One day, my English teach, Mr Li, noticed my problem. He came up to me and said, “Don’t worry. Learning a language takes time. Why don’t you try making flashcards to help you remember the words ” I followed his advice and started making flashcards. To my surprise, it really worked! I began to remember more words and my grades improved.
This experience taught me that asking for help is not a weakness. It also showed me that sometimes, a small change can make a big difference. Now, I am not afraid to ask for help when I need it, and I have become more confident in my studies.
开放式作文
Dear Alan,
I'm glad to get your e-mail and I really understand you. However, I think doing exercise is important for us. Here are my reasons.
First, exercise helps us strengthen our health. Though you feel tired now, regular exercise will make you stronger. For example, it can improve your sleep and give you more energy.
Second, exercise reduces stress. After studying for a long time, playing sports helps you relax and clear your mind. You might even find it fun once you get used to it!
Don't worry if you' re not good at it now. Just try your best and do it step by step. You' I| see the difference soon!
Your,
Li Hua