外研版高中英语必修第三册Unit 1 Knowing me,knowing you Section Ⅳ Writing—Writing an essay课件

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主题语境：人际关系
本单元的写作任务是写一篇寓言读后感，属于议论文范畴，常用于叙述寓言的启示，说出在简单的故事中富有教育意义的主题或深刻的道理。包括三部分：(1)寓言故事概要；(2)教给我们的道理及生活中的类似案例；(3)得出结论。
首段：开门见山，提出中心论点
1.It's generally considered that/It's widely believed that the best mirror is an old friend.Your friend can point out your mistakes without laughing at you and sincerely help you.
2.As the saying goes，action is the ladder of success.The more action you take，the higher you climb.
3.It goes without saying that planning in advance is necessary.However，a plan cannot bear fruit without being actually carried out.
主体段：提供论据，介绍自己或他人的经历以支撑论点
1.My own experience is a typical example/a classic case.In an English speech contest I lost face and felt down.It was Li Lei who encouraged me.Without his help，I couldn't have cheered up so quickly.
2.I get a better understanding of this proverb from my own experience.I well remember it was a cold winter.I felt lonely for going to a new school.My friend Li Lei wrote to me every week.It was his letters that helped me get through the hard times.
3.My own experience in an English speech contest can prove the importance of action.I used to plan well，but mostly failed to carry my plans out.
尾段：总结归纳，重申自己的观点
1.Therefore，I have reason to believe that our life will become better if we have several true friends.
2.In a word，if we have true friendship，we should try to value it by keeping in touch with our friends.
3.In short/All in all/In a word/In conclusion/In brief，success comes from not only good planning，but also better doing.
根据下面的寓言故事，结合生活实例，写一篇读后感。
The Pigeon and the Ant
An ant came to the river to drink，but unfortunately fell into the river.A pigeon saw it and threw down a branch to save it.Before long，the ant saw that the hunter was aiming at the pigeon with a gun，so it bit the hunter's foot hard，not letting him shoot the pigeon.The pigeon was very grateful to the ant，and they became good friends from then on.
注意：写作词数应为80个左右。
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[审题谋篇]
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Ⅰ.对接单元词汇
1.____ v. 使(船)沉没
2._____ adj. 坦率的，坦诚的，直言不 讳的
3._______ adv. 此外，而且
4.________ 帮一把
5.________ 使失望，辜负
sink
frank
moreover
help out
let down
Ⅱ.巧用单元句式、语法完成句子
1.这则寓言讲述了一个故事：一只鸽子救了一只掉进河里的蚂蚁。后来，蚂蚁从猎人手中救了鸽子。
The fable tells a story that a pigeon saved an ant after it_____________.The ant later saved the pigeon from a hunter.
2.有些朋友被认为不重要。当我们遇到困难时，他们可以帮助我们摆脱困境。
Some friends are considered unimportant.They can __________when we're in trouble.
3.我们一定不能看不起别人。我们应该平等对待他们。
We mustn't ____________others.We should treat them equally.
sank into a river
help us out
look down on
4.当他们需要帮助时，我们不应该让他们失望，而是尽我们所能帮助他们。
When they are in need of help，we should not ____________but do what we can to help them.
5.反过来，他们将不遗余力地帮助我们。
In return，they will ______________help us.
6.坦率地说，我认为我们只有通过这种方式才能交到更多的朋友。
______________，I conclude that only in this way can we make more friends.
let them down
spare no effort to
Frankly speaking
[亮点提升]
1.用定语从句合并句1。
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2.用过去分词改写句2。
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3.用“not...but...”改写句3。
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The fable tells a story that a pigeon saved an ant after it sank into a river，who later saved the pigeon from a hunter.
Some friends considered unimportant can help us out when we're in trouble.
We mustn't look down on others but treat them equally.
[妙笔成篇]
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One possible version：
The fable tells a story that a pigeon saved an ant after it sank into a river，who later saved the pigeon from a hunter.The two became good friends by helping each other.
The fable teaches us that some friends considered unimportant can help us out when we're in trouble.So，in our real life，we mustn't look down on others but treat them equally.Moreover，when they are in need of help，we should not let them down but do what we can to help them.In return，they will spare no effort to help us.
Frankly speaking，I conclude that only in this way can we make more friends.
读下面经典寓言故事《农夫与蛇》(The Farmer and the Snake)，并根据要求写一篇文章。
1.你对这则寓言的理解；
2.举例说明；
3.总结并思考。
注意：写作词数应为80个左右。
参考词汇：寓言(fable)；邪恶的，有害的(evil)
Once upon a time，on a cold winter day，a farmer who had gone home from the market found a snake on the roadside.He thought it was frozen and stiff (僵硬的)，so he put it in his arms and let it wake up.The snake was frightened，and when it fully recovered，it instinctively bit the farmer and finally killed the farmer.Before he died，the farmer regretted very much and said sadly，“I had intended to do a good deed，but because of my shallow knowledge，I hurt my life，so I get this kind of reward.”
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One possible version：
I'm deeply impressed by The Farmer and the Snake.The fable goes like this：A farmer saved a frozen snake，which killed him at last.
Many of us have all surely had the experience of being hurt by the people we ever helped out.Instead of being grateful to the people who helped them，some people deceived them，hurt them and got a lot of money，which made the public annoyed.But on the other hand，some people in trouble died for lack of timely help.
Frankly speaking，it's very important to extend our helping hands.But remember to help the people who are really in need.