高考英语二轮讲义-读后续写微技能之动物描写（复习课件）（全国通用）(共46张PPT)
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(共46张PPT)
析·考情精解
01
构·知能架构
02
破·考点攻坚
03
真题动向 2023 1月浙江卷
必备知识 1.【狼】—— 代表危险、野性与恐惧
2.【狗】—— 代表忠诚、友谊与情感纽带
3.【猫】—— 代表独立、神秘与治愈
4.【熊】—— 代表巨大威胁、力量与求生
关键能力 能力1 基础巩固——精准用词填空（原创）
能力2 场景仿写——功能句子构建（原创）
能力3 情节创作——微型续写挑战（原创）
命题预测 考向1 《谷仓深处的呼救声》（新情境）
考向2 《林间偶遇与守护》（新情境）
考向3 《围墙边的紧急救援》（新情境）
剖析考情动向 精研考点分布
析·考情精解
part one
01
析·考情精解
命题轨迹透视 通过对近三年（2023-2025）高考英语读后续写真题的梳理，我们可以发现动物在高考读后续写中 主要干了三件事：
1. 让故事动起来（推动情节）
动物（或者人像动物一样的反应）一出现，经常就能打破平静，引出麻烦或转机。
如（2025年1月浙江卷 - 小偷与手表）：那个“小偷”愣住、又松口气的反应，像动物受到惊吓一样，这个反应让主角开始怀疑自己是不是做错了，故事就从“抓贼”转向了“寻找真相”。
说明：动物在这里就是一个“开关”，一按下去，故事就朝新的方向发展了。
2. 表达感情（传递情绪）
动物不说话，但它们的动作、眼神就是最好的语言，能替人说出心里话，也能温暖人心。
如（2023年1月浙江卷 - 蜂鸟）：蜂鸟“拼命挣扎”、“看着我的眼睛”、“发出叫声”，这些描写让我们感受到它的无助和感恩。救它，体现了“我”的善良；它飞回来，就像在说“谢谢”。
如（2025年新高考I卷 - 兄弟和解）：小狗Toby“活力十足”、“尾巴猛摇”。它不只是宠物，更是哥哥失去妻子后最重要的陪伴。对Toby好不好，直接体现了兄弟俩的感情好不好。
写动物，其实就是写人心。对动物好，说明人善良；动物对人亲近，说明人值得信任。
析·考情精解
命题轨迹透视 3. 说明道理（点明主题）
通过和动物打交道，故事里的人（和读故事的我们）能明白一些道理。
如（2017年6月浙江卷 - 遇狼）：狼代表危险。主角用喷雾、保持冷静、最终获救，这个故事告诉我们遇到困难要勇敢、机智、懂得求助。
动物的遭遇常常象征着我们人生的某种处境，从中能学到坚持、责任、爱护生命等品质。
在高考中，动物的描写通常是这样的：
动作写得很细：用的是“悬停”、“蹦跳”、“小跑”、“猛摇”这些很具体的词，画面一下子就出来了。
重点写眼睛和声音：“看着我的眼睛”、“吱吱叫”、“怒吼”。眼睛是心灵的窗户，声音直接传达情绪。
喜欢用对比：比如蜂鸟很小但懂得报恩，狼很凶但人最终战胜了恐惧。这种对比让故事更好看，道理也更鲜明。
析·考情精解
考点频次总结 核心考查能力 2025年 2024年 2023年
问题解决与策略迁移 全国I卷：修复家庭矛盾，主动道歉并提出解决方案。 浙江1月卷：青少年如何通过调查求证，解决“见义勇为”后的道德疑虑。 新高考I卷：乘客通过“承诺-履约”的策略解决车费支付危机。 浙江1月卷：Eva将“目标分解法”从跑步迁移到解决校园迷路问题。 新高考I卷：通过“化难为易”的策略（选择有趣视角、反复修改）解决写作难题。
情感修复与关系重建 全国I卷（核心）：兄弟因宠物产生隔阂，需通过理解、道歉和行动修复亲情。
身份认同与文化沟通 全国II卷（核心）：从因名字发音尴尬而回避，到主动解释名字含义、传播文化，完成从“适应者”到“传播者”的身份转变。
析·考情精解
考点频次总结 核心考查能力 2025年 2024年 2023年
信任建立与善意回馈 新高考I卷（核心）：司机对陌生乘客的信任，以及乘客如期返回履行承诺，完成“善意接收-回馈”的闭环。 浙江1月卷（核心）：人与蜂鸟之间超越物种的信任与“感恩式”回馈。
心理突破与认知升级 浙江1月卷：通过具体方法克服对“长跑”和“复杂环境”的恐惧，实现自我认知的突破（“我能行”）。 新高考I卷：对写作从“恐惧痛苦”到“享受过程”的认知转变，发现自我潜能。
道德判断与求证精神 浙江1月卷（核心）：在“见义勇为”与“可能冤枉好人”之间产生道德焦虑，并通过实际行动（询问邻居、前往警局）寻求真相，体现理性与善良的结合。
成长领悟与价值升华 所有卷别：最终都导向积极的领悟，如亲情可贵、文化自信、善良需智慧等。 析·考情精解
2026命题
预测 纯讲动物趣事可能不多了，更可能的是把动物和别的主题结合起来：
动物 + 情感修复：比如照顾一只流浪狗，让自己走出了考试成绩不理想的伤心。
动物 + 人际关系：像“兄弟与狗”那样，动物帮忙解决了和朋友、家人的矛盾。
动物 + 生活启示：比如观察蚂蚁搬家懂得了坚持，喂食公园的鸟明白了分享。
动物 + 文化元素：可能会和十二生肖、传统故事里的动物（如鲤鱼、仙鹤）联系起来，有一点文化寓意。
构·知能架构
part two
02
搭建知识网络 整合能力体系
构·知能架构
动物描写
核心架构图
三大核心
原则
核心技巧
象征化
两大功能
人格化
功能化
塑造人物
推动情节
深化主题
抓特征
动态行动
互动性
The lone wolf howling at the moon symbolized his isolation in the new city.
The butterfly emerging from its cocoon represented her transformation after the hardship.
The old dog watched over the children with a guardian’s patience.
The clever fox seemed to smile as it outwitted the hunter again.
The carrier pigeon’s arrival with the message changed the course of the battle.
The horse’s sudden panic alerted them to the approaching danger.
Just like the loyal dog by his side, the man never abandoned his friends in need.
The discovery of the eagle’s feather led them to the hidden mountain path.
The ant colony’s teamwork taught the children the importance of cooperation.
破·考点攻坚
part three
03
破解考点规律 攻克解题难关
真题动向
1． （2023·1月浙江卷）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
I was invited to a cookout on an old friend’s farm in western Washington. I parked my car outside the farm and walked past a milking house which had apparently not been used in many years. A noise at a window caught my attention, so I entered it. It was a hummingbird (蜂鸟), desperately trying to escape. She was covered in spider-webs (蛛网) and was barely able to move her wings. She ceased her struggle the instant I picked her up.
With the bird in my cupped hand, I looked around to see how she had gotten in. The broken window glass was the likely answer. I stuffed a piece of cloth into the hole and took her outside, closing the door securely behind me.
When I opened my hand, the bird did not fly away; she sat looking at me with her bright eyes. I removed the sticky spider-webs that covered her head and wings. Still, she made no attempt to fly. Perhaps she had been struggling against the window too long and was too tired Or too thirsty
As I carried her up the blackberry-lined path toward my car where I kept a water bottle, she began to move. I stopped, and she soon took wing but did not immediately fly away. Hovering (悬停), she approached within six inches of my face. For a very long moment, this tiny creature looked into my eyes, turning her head from side to side. Then she flew quickly out of sight.
真题动向
During the cookout, I told my hosts about the hummingbird incident. They promised to fix the window, As I was departing, my friends walked me to my car. I was standing by the car when a hummingbird flew to the center of our group and began hovering. She turned from person to person until she came to me. She again looked directly into my eyes, then let out a squeaking call and was gone. For a moment, all were speechless. Then someone said, “She must have come to say good-bye.”
注意：
(1)续写词数应为150左右；
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1: A few weeks later, I went to the farm again.
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Paragraph 2: I was just about to leave when the hummingbird appeared.
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真题动向
Paragraph 1:
A few weeks later, I went to the farm again. On arrival, I approached the milking house and noticed that the broken window had been completely fixed, with no sign of the danger that had once threatened the small bird. I was relieved and grateful that my friends had taken my warning to heart and taken action to protect the hummingbird. I spent the afternoon exploring the farm and chatting with my friends, hoping to catch a glimpse of the little bird. However, a ripple
of sadness surged through me when not seeing the lovely
creature the whole day. The night screen was to hang down.
【参考范文】
真题动向
Paragraph 2:
I was just about to leave when the hummingbird appeared. She was flying around me and hovering just a few inches in front of my face. I was amazed and touched by this unexpected visit. The tiny bird seemed to be thanking me for rescuing her and making sure she was safe. I stood there, entranced by her beauty and grace as she flew circles around me. After a few moments, she let out a squeaking call as if bidding me farewell and flew off into the distance. As I said goodbye to the
hummingbird and climbed into my car, I knew that I would
always treasure the memory of that special encounter.
【参考范文】
这篇续写的新颖之处在于，出题者提供的结尾“She must have come to say good-bye.” 并非封闭式结局，而是一个开放的起点。它暗示了这种联结的非同寻常，允许甚至鼓励考生在续写中构建新的情境。
真题动向
新情境
传统考法：故事围绕一个明确的外部问题展开，续写的核心是“如何解决问题”。（例如：迷路了怎么办？早餐做砸了怎么办？熊来了怎么办？）情节推进是显性的、动作性的。
新考法（本题）：原文的核心“事件”在给出部分已经基本结束（救鸟、放生、告别）。续写的任务不再是解决一个外部冲突，而是处理一个内部情感与关系状态。它考查的是对一种微妙“联结”（bond）的延续、深化与诠释。故事的推动力从外部事件转为人物的内心情感与对关系的探寻。
新考法
传统角度：情感逻辑基于日常人际互动（感恩、友谊、勇气），易于共情和理解。
新角度：本文中，它建立了一种超越日常的、充满诗意甚至灵性的情感逻辑。蜂鸟两次与“我”进行长时间的“眼神对视”，并专程飞来“告别”，这在生物学上并非典型行为，但在文学和情感上是完全成立的。它要求考生接受并延续这种 “拟人化但不过度”的、象征性的情感逻辑，这对于习惯了写实主义叙事的考生是一种新挑战。
新角度
真题动向
1. 原文动物描写分析
原文对蜂鸟的描写，是全文情感基调的基石，其特点是 “脆弱与灵性并存，观察与互动交织”。
（1）聚焦“受困状态”，激发救助本能：
desperately trying to escape（拼命试图逃脱）
covered in spider-webs（沾满蛛网）
barely able to move her wings（几乎无法移动翅膀）
ceased her struggle the instant I picked her up（在我捧起它的瞬间停止了挣扎）
分析：用一系列状态描写，快速建立蜂鸟的 “绝对脆弱” 形象。而“停止挣扎”这一细节至关重要——它暗示了蜂鸟对“我”的初步感知与本能的顺从或信任，为后续跨物种沟通埋下第一处伏笔。
（2）刻画“眼神交流”，确立沟通核心：
she sat looking at me with her bright eyes（它坐着，用明亮的眼睛看着我）
this tiny creature looked into my eyes（这个小生灵凝视着我的眼睛）
She again looked directly into my eyes（它再次直视我的眼睛）
分析：“眼睛”是原文中人鸟互动最核心的渠道，重复了三次。这不是随意的看，而是“注视”、“凝视”、“直视”。作者通过赋予蜂鸟“凝视”的能力，将其从普通动物提升为一个可以与之进行无声对话的灵性主体。这是整个故事超现实感和情感深度的来源。
真题动向
（3）描绘“悬停与告别”，完成诗意升华：
Hovering... approached within six inches of my face（悬停……逼近到离我脸六英寸内）
let out a squeaking call（发出一声吱吱的鸣叫）
分析：“悬停”是蜂鸟的招牌动作，在此场景下极具仪式感。“逼近至六英寸”打破了常规的人与野生动物的安全距离，营造了一种亲密而震撼的私人时刻。最后的“鸣叫”，则是这种无声凝视的声音化出口，像一个明确的信号，将整个相遇推向了高潮，并直接引出了众人“它是来道别”的解读。
原文描写总括：命题者通过精心设计的动物描写，塑造了一只既是真实生物（脆弱、需救助），又是情感符号（会凝视、懂告别） 的蜂鸟。它要求续写者延续这种 “写实与诗意相结合” 的独特笔调。
2. 范文动物描写分析
所给范文的动物描写，遵循了原文的基调，但选择了最安全、最直接的延续方式，即“重现美好，确认感恩”。
（1）动作的复现与延续：
She was flying around me and hovering just a few inches in front of my face.（它绕着我飞，在我脸前几英寸处悬停。）
...she let out a squeaking call as if bidding me farewell...（……它发出一声吱吱鸣叫，仿佛在向我道别……）
真题动向
分析：范文几乎复刻了原文的核心动作：“绕飞”替代“接近”，“悬停”、“鸣叫”直接重现。这确保了与前文行为逻辑的高度一致性，向阅卷老师清晰表明：考生读懂了原文中蜂鸟行为的特殊含义，并予以忠实再现。
（2）情感指向的明确化：
The tiny bird seemed to be thanking me for rescuing her and making sure she was safe.（这只小鸟似乎在感谢我救了它，并确保它的安全。）
分析：这是范文的核心句，它用“seemed to be thanking me”将蜂鸟所有诗意、模糊的行为，明确解读为“感恩”。这是一种安全的主题锚定，直接呼应了原文众人“来道别”的猜测，使故事主题清晰无误。
（3）描写的功能化：
范文的动物描写主要是为 “我”的情感服务的。蜂鸟的出现是为了让“我”感到 amazed and touched（惊讶和感动），为了让我 be entranced（入迷），最终让我 treasure the memory（珍藏记忆）。蜂鸟在这里更多是一个触发美好情感的客体。
1. 【狼】—— 代表危险、野性与恐惧
必备知识
（1）展现困境与攻击性
① Its yellow eyes glowed in the dark.（它黄色的眼睛在黑暗中发光。）
② show its sharp teeth（露出尖牙）
③ growl low and deep（发出低沉、深沉的吼叫）
④ circle around, looking for a chance to attack（绕着圈走，寻找攻击机会）
例：The wolf was circling our tent, its low growls freezing us with fear.（狼正绕着我们的帐篷转圈，它低沉的吼叫让我们恐惧得僵住了。）
（2）带有威胁的灵性/象征
① a symbol of wild danger（野生危险的象征）
② a test of courage（对勇气的考验）
③ Its howl was a lonely sound in the vast wilderness.（它的嚎叫在广袤荒野中是一种孤独的声音。）
例：Facing the wolf, I learned that courage is not the absence of fear, but the will to protect.（面对狼，我懂得了勇气不是没有恐惧，而是保护的意志。）
2. 【狗】—— 代表忠诚、友谊与情感纽带
必备知识
（1）表达信任与亲近
① wag its tail wildly（疯狂摇尾巴）【核心特征】
② lick my hand/face（舔我的手/脸）
③ follow me everywhere（到处跟着我）
rest its head on my lap（把头枕在我腿上）
例：When I came home, my dog wagged its tail so wildly that its whole body shook.
（当我回家时，我的狗尾巴摇得如此疯狂，全身都在晃动。）
（2）描写活泼与生机
① chase its own tail（追自己的尾巴）
② fetch a ball/branch（叼回球/树枝）
③ bark happily（开心地吠叫）
例：At the park, my dog chased the ball with endless energy, its happy barks filling the air.（在公园，我的狗以无尽的精力追球，它快乐的吠叫声充满空气。）
3. 【猫】—— 代表独立、神秘与治愈
必备知识
（1）展现困境（常用）
① a small, wet kitten（一只湿漉漉的小猫）
② meow weakly（微弱地喵喵叫）
③ hide under a car, too scared to come out（躲在车下，吓得不敢出来）
例：I found a small, wet kitten hiding in the corner, meowing weakly for help.（我发现一只湿漉漉的小猫躲在角落，虚弱地喵喵求助。）
（2）表达含蓄的信任
① purr softly when petted（被抚摸时发出柔和的咕噜声）【核心特征】
② slowly blink its eyes at me（对我慢慢眨眼）【猫的“亲吻”】
③ curl up beside me while I read（我读书时蜷缩在我身边）
例：As I stroked its fur, the cat began to purr softly, a sign that it finally trusted me.（当我抚摸它的毛时，猫开始发出柔和的咕噜声，这表明它终于信任我了。）
4. 【熊】—— 代表巨大威胁、力量与求生
必备知识
（1）展现绝对的危险与压迫
① a huge shadow appeared（一个巨大的影子出现）
② stand on its back legs（用后腿站立）【制造威慑】
③ sniff the air（嗅闻空气）【发现人类】
④ make the ground shake as it walked（走路时让地面震动）
例：Suddenly, a huge shadow appeared. A bear stood on its back legs, sniffing the air toward our direction.（突然，一个巨大的影子出现。一头熊用后腿站立，朝我们的方向嗅着空气。）
（2）作为生存挑战的象征
① a force of nature（一股自然的力量）
② face-to-face with raw power（面对面地面对原始的力量）
例：Surviving the bear encounter taught us to respect nature and stay calm in crisis.（从遭遇熊的经历中幸存，教会了我们尊重自然并在危机中保持冷静。）
5. 【鸟】—— 代表自由、灵性与脆弱的美好
必备知识
（1）展现困境（常用）
① a tiny bird with a hurt wing（一只翅膀受伤的小鸟）
② flutter helplessly on the ground（无助地在地上扑腾）
③ too young to fly（太小了还不会飞）
④ trapped in（被困在……）【如网、房间、荆棘中】
例：I found a tiny bird with a hurt wing. It fluttered helplessly on the sidewalk, unable to escape.（我发现一只翅膀受伤的小鸟。它无助地在人行道上扑腾，无法逃脱。）
（2）表达信任与观察
① cock its head and look at me（歪着头看我）【经典可爱动作】
② perch on my finger gently（轻轻地停在我的手指上）
③ Its bright eyes watched my every move.（它明亮的眼睛注视着我的一举一动。）
④ hop closer for food/water（为食物/水跳近一些）
例：As I offered water, the little bird cocked its head, then hopped closer with cautious trust.（当我提供水时，小鸟歪了歪头，然后带着谨慎的信任跳近了一些。）
5. 【鸟】—— 代表自由、灵性与脆弱的美好
必备知识
（3）描写飞翔与生机（核心）
① flutter its wings（拍动翅膀）
② take flight / fly into the sky（起飞/飞向天空）【关键动作】
③ circle above me（在我头顶盘旋）
④ sing a beautiful song（唱出美妙的歌）
例：After its wing healed, I opened the window. It hesitated for a moment, then took flight into the blue sky.（它的翅膀愈合后，我打开了窗户。它犹豫了片刻，然后振翅飞向了蓝天。）
（4）象征自由与告别
① a symbol of freedom and hope（自由与希望的象征）
② a messenger of peace（和平的信使）
③ Its song seemed like a thank-you note.（它的歌声像是一封感谢信。）
④ watching it fly away, my heart felt both happy and a little sad（看着它飞走，我的心既快乐又有一点悲伤）【复杂情感】
例：Letting the bird go taught me that true kindness sometimes means setting something free, even if you love it.（放飞小鸟让我明白，真正的善良有时意味着放手，即使你爱它。）
关键能力
能力1 基础巩固——精准用词填空
练习题1：困境与救助
The lost puppy was (1) ___________________ (颤抖) under the bench, its fur wet from the rain. It let out a (2) ____________ (微弱的) whine. Seeing the (3) ________ (哀求的) look in its eyes, I knew I had to help.
练习题2：信任与亲近
After I fed the injured cat for a few days, it began to (4) _____________ (轻轻蹭) my leg. One afternoon, it even jumped onto my lap and started to (5) ________ (发出咕噜声) softly, a sure sign of (6) ________ (信任).
练习题3：活力与生机
Once recovered, the little bird didn’t just fly away. It (7) ________________ (在我头顶盘旋) for a moment, as if saying goodbye. Then, with a powerful flap of its wings, it (8) ___________ (飞向) the forest, (9) ____________________ (重新充满活力).
trembling/shivering
weak/feeble
pleading
rub against
purr
trust
circled above me
flew into
full of energy again
关键能力
能力2 场景仿写——功能句子构建
练习题1：
原文情境：你在徒步时，远处传来一声狼嚎。
句子开头：As dusk fell, a long, lonely...
你的续写(描述嚎叫及其带给你的感受)：
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1. As dusk fell, a long, lonely howl echoed through the valley, freezing me with fear and reminding me I was not alone in the wilderness.
关键能力
能力2 场景仿写——功能句子构建
练习题2：
原文情境：你治愈了一只受伤的鸽子并准备放飞。
句子开头：Opening my hands, I felt a mix of emotions as the pigeon...
你的续写 (描述鸽子飞走时的动作和你的复杂心情)：
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2. Opening my hands, I felt a mix of emotions as the pigeon fluttered its wings, hesitated, and then soared into the sky, becoming a symbol of freedom I had helped restore.
关键能力
能力2 场景仿写——功能句子构建
练习题3：
原文情境：暴风雨后，你在车库发现一窝受惊的小猫。
句子开头：The storm had passed, and in a corner of the garage, I found...
你的续写： (提示描述小猫的状态，以及你如何初步获得它们的信任)：
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The storm had passed, and in a corner of the garage, I found a litter of kittens, huddled together and shivering. I placed some milk nearby, and the bravest one slowly crept out, cocking its head to look at me.
关键能力
能力3 情节创作——微型续写挑战
练习题1：
规定动物：狗
故事开头：I first met Max on the coldest night of the year. He was a stray dog, searching through the trash outside my apartment.
续写要求：
请描写Max最初的困境。
描写“我”如何尝试接近并最终获得它信任的过程。
结尾暗示关系的变化。
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关键能力
【参考范文】
I first met Max on the coldest night of the year. He was a stray dog, searching through the trash outside my apartment. He looked thin and was shivering badly in the wind. His coat was dirty and his eyes were sad. (功能一：困境) I went inside to get some bread. When I came back, he watched me carefully but didn’t run away. I placed the food on the ground and took a few steps back. Slowly, he came closer, sniffed the food, and then ate it hungrily. The next evening, he was waiting at the same spot. This time, his tail gave a small, hopeful wag when he saw me. (功能二：信任)
From that day on, Max wasn’t just a stray; he became my faithful
shadow every night, and his wagging tail grew wilder and happier
each time. (功能三：生机 + 主题暗示)
关键能力
能力3 情节创作——微型续写挑战
练习题2：
规定动物：鸟 (非猛禽)
故事开头：My little brother found a featherless baby bird that had fallen from its nest.
续写要求：
描写小鸟的脆弱状态和我们的决定。
描写在照顾过程中，小鸟的一个可爱或令人鼓舞的细节。
为最终放飞它埋下伏笔。
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关键能力
【参考范文】
My little brother found a featherless baby bird that had fallen from its nest. It was so tiny and weak, its eyes still closed, and it couldn’t even make a sound. (功能一：困境) We decided to take care of it. We made a soft nest from a box and fed it warm milk with a dropper. After a week, small feathers began to grow. Its favorite thing was to tilt its head and listen to my brother talk. (功能二：信任/可爱细节) We knew we couldn’t keep it forever. The day it first fluttered its tiny wings inside the box, we felt both proud and a little sad. We understood that our job was
to help it grow strong enough for the sky, not to keep it in
a box. (功能四：升华与伏笔)
关键能力
能力3 情节创作——微型续写挑战
练习题3 (高阶挑战)：
规定动物：熊/狼 (或大型野生动物)
故事开头：Our camping trip took an unexpected turn when we realized a bear was investigating our food supplies from a distance.
续写要求：
描写熊/狼的出现带来的紧张感和威胁。
描写“我们”冷静、正确的应对行动（不是逃跑，而是制造声响、缓慢后退等）。
描写危机解除后，由此产生的对自然的感悟。
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关键能力
【参考范文】
Our camping trip took an unexpected turn when we realized a bear was investigating our food supplies from a distance. A huge, dark shape moved at the edge of the trees. It stood up on its back legs, sniffing the air toward our campsite. (功能一：威胁压迫) Fear shot through us, but we remembered the rules: don’t run. We stayed together, made ourselves look big by raising our arms, and shouted loudly while slowly backing away. (应对行动) The bear dropped to all fours, watched us for a tense moment, then turned and walked back into the woods. When its shadow disappeared, we let out a shaky breath. That night, we learned a powerful lesson: in the wild,
respect and calm are your best friends, not fear. (功能四：感悟)
命题预测
考向1《谷仓深处的呼救声》
（2025·南京六校联考）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
A determined 10-year-old girl Callie lived with her parents and older brother, Ben, on a quiet farm. Though she was small and thin, she loved helping with housework, especially feeding the horses in their big barn (畜棚). One side of the barn housed the horse stalls (马厩), while the other side was piled with hay bales (干草捆) for feeding.
One afternoon, Callie went into the barn to feed the horses. As she walked towards the tall stacks of hay, she suddenly stopped. A tiny, weak sound came through the dusty air. Meow... meow...
Her heart jumped. A kitten must be trapped in the hay! Breathing hard, she ran back to find Ben and her father. “Dad! Ben! Come quick! A kitten is stuck in the hay!” she called urgently. Ben sighed, putting down his tools. Her father looked doubtful. “Probably just the wind, Callie,” he said gently. But they followed her to the barn.
They stood quietly near the hay stacks, listening. The barn was silent. “Hear anything ” Ben asked. Their father shook his head. “Nothing, sweetheart. Maybe it was just a mouse. Don’t worry about it.” Disappointed, Callie watched them leave.
命题预测
After dinner, Callie slipped back to the barn, determined. She stood still, listening attentively. And there it was again! Meow... meow... Weaker now, but clear. She raced back to the house. Her father was watching TV.
“Dad, please!” she pleaded (恳求). “I heard it again! It is a kitten! Please, just come check one more time ” He looked unwilling but saw the real worry in her eyes. “Alright, alright, one last look.”
He returned a few minutes later. “Callie, I listened hard. All I heard was an owl outside. No kitten. Try not to worry.” He gave her a tired smile. “Thanks for checking, Dad.” Callie whispered, though she still felt uneasy.
注意：
1. 续写词数应为150左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
That night, Callie woke up suddenly.
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“I have no choice but to get help!” Callie thought to herself.
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考向1《谷仓深处的呼救声》
关键能力
【参考范文】
That night, Callie woke up suddenly. The weak cries filled her mind. She couldn’t rest. Quietly, she put on her coat, took a flashlight and slipped out. Inside the barn, near the hay stacks, Callie held her breath, listening with full attention. Then, it came: Meow... meow... Her flashlight beam swept across the bales. There! Near the bottom of a tall stack, she spotted a tiny movement-a small patch of gray fur barely visible between two enormous
bales. She rushed over and pushed the bales again, but
they wouldn’t move.
关键能力
【参考范文】
“I have no choice but to get help!” Callie thought to herself. She raced back home and quickly awoke Ben and their father. Seeing Callie’s worried face and absolute certainty, they both hurried with her back to the barn. Working together, Ben and their father carefully moved the heavy hay bales which Callie pointed at. Eventually, a narrow passage was revealed. There was a tiny gray kitten, its eyes wide with fright. Trembling and exhausted, it let out another pitiful meow. Carefully, Callie’s father reached in and gently held the little creature out. Callie’s heart
swelled with relief and joy as she looked at the rescued kitten,
safe and warm in her father’s large, gentle hands.
命题预测
考向2《林间偶遇与守护》
（2026·湖南长沙开学考）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
It was a sunny Saturday afternoon when a family of four decided to explore the woods near their home. With their camping equipment, they embarked on a much-anticipated trip in the nearby woods, full of excitement.
Upon arrival, the parents set up the tent while their two children, Max and Emma, wandered around and looked for fun. They were especially thrilled, laughter echoing through the woods. Max, the big brother, proposed to go deeper into the woods and explore more. Emma followed.
As they walked along the narrow path, chatting and laughing, they suddenly heard a strange noise coming from a thick bush. Feeling a little bit scared, Emma came closer to her brother. Then, they noticed another sound. Even with the scare and nervousness, curiosity got the better of them. They carefully approached the source of that sound.
To their big surprise, they found a small, injured fox lying there, making some heartbroken sounds. Taking a closer look, Max found that one of her legs was bleeding, and she looked weak and scared. Emma’s heart ached at the sight of the poor creature. “We can't just leave her here. Let's do something,” she begged, looking determined. Max hesitated for a while and nodded in agreement.
命题预测
Emma suggested coming back to the camping site and called their parents for help. But they worried the fox could be attacked by other bigger animals. Then Max decided to take the fox back. They knew they had to be extremely careful, not scaring the fox and not causing further injury.
Slowly, Max made his first attempt. He took off his coat and tried to gently place it over the fox. The fox, sensing Max's approach, struggled to run away but failed due to her bleeding leg. Max did another try. This time, he succeeded. He covered the fox carefully with his coat. The fox still whined(哀鸣) sadly, but didn't run away. With great care, they lifted the fox and carried her back.
注意：
1. 续写词数应为150左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Once they arrived, they quickly called their parents.
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A few days later, the fox's leg was fully healed. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
考向2《林间偶遇与守护》
关键能力
【参考范文】
Once they arrived, they quickly called their parents. Both surprised, their parents were supportive of their children's kind act. The father, a veterinarian(兽), examined the fox's leg in detail. He professionally cleaned the wound, applied some medicine, and tenderly bandaged it. The fox seemed to sense that the family was trying to help and became calmer. Then, they took the fox home for further care. The following few days witnessed a warm scene Max and Emma took turns to
look after the fox. They fed her small amounts of food and
fresh water, and gradually, the fox's strength returned.
关键能力
【参考范文】
A few days later, the fox's leg was fully healed. She became more active and sometimes played around the backyard, running and jumping with newfound energy. The family were delighted to see her recovery. However, they knew that the fox was a wild animal and belonged in the wild. Max and Emma decided it was time to let her go. They took the fox back to the woods where they had found her. As they opened the cage, the fox looked at them for a moment, as if to say goodbye, and then disappeared into the bushes. The siblings, feeling proud of what they had done,
looked at the deep woods, and anticipating their next adventure in
nature.
命题预测
考向3《围墙边的紧急救援》
（2025·河北石家庄期末）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
A Fortunate Escape
Max, Ben and I were walking home together while I bit into the brown beef burger I had grabbed from a shop nearby. “Truth or dare, Ben ” Max questioned. It was a game we usually played to amuse ourselves on the lengthy, boring journey home. Ben wanted a dare. “Well, Ben, I dare you to carry my bag all the way home!” Max commanded.
As Ben pulled the heavy bag up his shoulder and adjusted the bag belts, he noticed that Max’ bag was partly open. When he quickly turned it around, an object flew out of the bag, and over the fence of our neighbor’s house.
“Oh, no,” Max shouted, “I think that was my English homework!” Stretching his hand out and trying to crawl (爬) under the fence to get the paper, Ben found that it was just out of reach.
“Well, I guess I’ll have to climb over the fence to get it,” Ben complained. He was barely able to climb up, using small gaps in the wooden fence as handholds, as the fence was nearly as tall as him, and low enough for something to be thrown over it.
命题预测
Sliding down the fence, Ben grabbed the valued piece of paper, complaining about injured self-respect. Just then, a loud and terrifying bark cut his words short.
“Woof, woof!”
Our neighbor, Mr. Mason, owned a German Shepherd (德国牧羊犬), known for its fierceness, which guarded the house. It was something we had overlooked, too focused on getting back Max’s homework. Ben’s legs trembled uncontrollably and his face turned a deathly white as the German Shepherd advanced slowly on him like a wolf approaching its target.
Max and I stared at it, frozen with fear. Ben backed up against the fence, attempting to climb up, but a loud bark stopped him in his tracks. I desperately searched my mind for a sliver of an idea about how I could assist Ben. Should I climb up the fence and help Ben Or could I do something to distract the dog
注意：
1. 续写词数应为150左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Searching the road for stones, my eyes landed upon a brown object.
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Afterwards, the three of us made our way home again.
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考向3《围墙边的紧急救援》
关键能力
【参考范文】
Searching the road for stones, my eyes landed upon a brown object. It was the half-eaten burger that I had dropped in panic. All of a sudden, a silver of an idea came to me in a flash of inspiration — I could make good use of it to distract the dog. Dogs like beef! Every second counting, I swiftly picked up the beef burger, gathered all my strength and threw it at the fierce dog. Thankfully, giving way to the temptation of the delicious beef, the dog turned around and was quickly immersed in delicacy, ignoring the frozen
Ben. With a sigh of relief, Ben swiftly regained his focus and climbed
over the fence. Tightly hugged by Max and me, Ben gradually lifted his
spirits.
关键能力
【参考范文】
Afterwards, the three of us made our way home again. Strangely enough, the lengthy journey home didn’t seem that boring. In an instant, we began to amuse ourselves on Ben’s dare. Max apologized to Ben for the dare which had led to the entire adventure. However, Ben patted him on the back as if to show his forgiveness. Subsequently, squeezing my hands, Ben sincerely extended his gratitude, saying that without my wisdom and bravery, he could have been severely injured. I responded
jokingly that he owed me a new beef burger. Waves of laughter permeating
in the air, we awakened to the realization that timely help among friends
can break down any obstacle, changing a venture into a fortunate escape.
析·考情精解
01
构·知能架构
02
破·考点攻坚
03
真题动向 2023 1月浙江卷
必备知识 1.【狼】—— 代表危险、野性与恐惧
2.【狗】—— 代表忠诚、友谊与情感纽带
3.【猫】—— 代表独立、神秘与治愈
4.【熊】—— 代表巨大威胁、力量与求生
关键能力 能力1 基础巩固——精准用词填空（原创）
能力2 场景仿写——功能句子构建（原创）
能力3 情节创作——微型续写挑战（原创）
命题预测 考向1 《谷仓深处的呼救声》（新情境）
考向2 《林间偶遇与守护》（新情境）
考向3 《围墙边的紧急救援》（新情境）
剖析考情动向 精研考点分布
析·考情精解
part one
01
析·考情精解
命题轨迹透视 通过对近三年（2023-2025）高考英语读后续写真题的梳理，我们可以发现动物在高考读后续写中 主要干了三件事：
1. 让故事动起来（推动情节）
动物（或者人像动物一样的反应）一出现，经常就能打破平静，引出麻烦或转机。
如（2025年1月浙江卷 - 小偷与手表）：那个“小偷”愣住、又松口气的反应，像动物受到惊吓一样，这个反应让主角开始怀疑自己是不是做错了，故事就从“抓贼”转向了“寻找真相”。
说明：动物在这里就是一个“开关”，一按下去，故事就朝新的方向发展了。
2. 表达感情（传递情绪）
动物不说话，但它们的动作、眼神就是最好的语言，能替人说出心里话，也能温暖人心。
如（2023年1月浙江卷 - 蜂鸟）：蜂鸟“拼命挣扎”、“看着我的眼睛”、“发出叫声”，这些描写让我们感受到它的无助和感恩。救它，体现了“我”的善良；它飞回来，就像在说“谢谢”。
如（2025年新高考I卷 - 兄弟和解）：小狗Toby“活力十足”、“尾巴猛摇”。它不只是宠物，更是哥哥失去妻子后最重要的陪伴。对Toby好不好，直接体现了兄弟俩的感情好不好。
写动物，其实就是写人心。对动物好，说明人善良；动物对人亲近，说明人值得信任。
析·考情精解
命题轨迹透视 3. 说明道理（点明主题）
通过和动物打交道，故事里的人（和读故事的我们）能明白一些道理。
如（2017年6月浙江卷 - 遇狼）：狼代表危险。主角用喷雾、保持冷静、最终获救，这个故事告诉我们遇到困难要勇敢、机智、懂得求助。
动物的遭遇常常象征着我们人生的某种处境，从中能学到坚持、责任、爱护生命等品质。
在高考中，动物的描写通常是这样的：
动作写得很细：用的是“悬停”、“蹦跳”、“小跑”、“猛摇”这些很具体的词，画面一下子就出来了。
重点写眼睛和声音：“看着我的眼睛”、“吱吱叫”、“怒吼”。眼睛是心灵的窗户，声音直接传达情绪。
喜欢用对比：比如蜂鸟很小但懂得报恩，狼很凶但人最终战胜了恐惧。这种对比让故事更好看，道理也更鲜明。
析·考情精解
考点频次总结 核心考查能力 2025年 2024年 2023年
问题解决与策略迁移 全国I卷：修复家庭矛盾，主动道歉并提出解决方案。 浙江1月卷：青少年如何通过调查求证，解决“见义勇为”后的道德疑虑。 新高考I卷：乘客通过“承诺-履约”的策略解决车费支付危机。 浙江1月卷：Eva将“目标分解法”从跑步迁移到解决校园迷路问题。 新高考I卷：通过“化难为易”的策略（选择有趣视角、反复修改）解决写作难题。
情感修复与关系重建 全国I卷（核心）：兄弟因宠物产生隔阂，需通过理解、道歉和行动修复亲情。
身份认同与文化沟通 全国II卷（核心）：从因名字发音尴尬而回避，到主动解释名字含义、传播文化，完成从“适应者”到“传播者”的身份转变。
析·考情精解
考点频次总结 核心考查能力 2025年 2024年 2023年
信任建立与善意回馈 新高考I卷（核心）：司机对陌生乘客的信任，以及乘客如期返回履行承诺，完成“善意接收-回馈”的闭环。 浙江1月卷（核心）：人与蜂鸟之间超越物种的信任与“感恩式”回馈。
心理突破与认知升级 浙江1月卷：通过具体方法克服对“长跑”和“复杂环境”的恐惧，实现自我认知的突破（“我能行”）。 新高考I卷：对写作从“恐惧痛苦”到“享受过程”的认知转变，发现自我潜能。
道德判断与求证精神 浙江1月卷（核心）：在“见义勇为”与“可能冤枉好人”之间产生道德焦虑，并通过实际行动（询问邻居、前往警局）寻求真相，体现理性与善良的结合。
成长领悟与价值升华 所有卷别：最终都导向积极的领悟，如亲情可贵、文化自信、善良需智慧等。 析·考情精解
2026命题
预测 纯讲动物趣事可能不多了，更可能的是把动物和别的主题结合起来：
动物 + 情感修复：比如照顾一只流浪狗，让自己走出了考试成绩不理想的伤心。
动物 + 人际关系：像“兄弟与狗”那样，动物帮忙解决了和朋友、家人的矛盾。
动物 + 生活启示：比如观察蚂蚁搬家懂得了坚持，喂食公园的鸟明白了分享。
动物 + 文化元素：可能会和十二生肖、传统故事里的动物（如鲤鱼、仙鹤）联系起来，有一点文化寓意。
构·知能架构
part two
02
搭建知识网络 整合能力体系
构·知能架构
动物描写
核心架构图
三大核心
原则
核心技巧
象征化
两大功能
人格化
功能化
塑造人物
推动情节
深化主题
抓特征
动态行动
互动性
The lone wolf howling at the moon symbolized his isolation in the new city.
The butterfly emerging from its cocoon represented her transformation after the hardship.
The old dog watched over the children with a guardian’s patience.
The clever fox seemed to smile as it outwitted the hunter again.
The carrier pigeon’s arrival with the message changed the course of the battle.
The horse’s sudden panic alerted them to the approaching danger.
Just like the loyal dog by his side, the man never abandoned his friends in need.
The discovery of the eagle’s feather led them to the hidden mountain path.
The ant colony’s teamwork taught the children the importance of cooperation.
破·考点攻坚
part three
03
破解考点规律 攻克解题难关
真题动向
1． （2023·1月浙江卷）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
I was invited to a cookout on an old friend’s farm in western Washington. I parked my car outside the farm and walked past a milking house which had apparently not been used in many years. A noise at a window caught my attention, so I entered it. It was a hummingbird (蜂鸟), desperately trying to escape. She was covered in spider-webs (蛛网) and was barely able to move her wings. She ceased her struggle the instant I picked her up.
With the bird in my cupped hand, I looked around to see how she had gotten in. The broken window glass was the likely answer. I stuffed a piece of cloth into the hole and took her outside, closing the door securely behind me.
When I opened my hand, the bird did not fly away; she sat looking at me with her bright eyes. I removed the sticky spider-webs that covered her head and wings. Still, she made no attempt to fly. Perhaps she had been struggling against the window too long and was too tired Or too thirsty
As I carried her up the blackberry-lined path toward my car where I kept a water bottle, she began to move. I stopped, and she soon took wing but did not immediately fly away. Hovering (悬停), she approached within six inches of my face. For a very long moment, this tiny creature looked into my eyes, turning her head from side to side. Then she flew quickly out of sight.
真题动向
During the cookout, I told my hosts about the hummingbird incident. They promised to fix the window, As I was departing, my friends walked me to my car. I was standing by the car when a hummingbird flew to the center of our group and began hovering. She turned from person to person until she came to me. She again looked directly into my eyes, then let out a squeaking call and was gone. For a moment, all were speechless. Then someone said, “She must have come to say good-bye.”
注意：
(1)续写词数应为150左右；
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1: A few weeks later, I went to the farm again.
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Paragraph 2: I was just about to leave when the hummingbird appeared.
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真题动向
Paragraph 1:
A few weeks later, I went to the farm again. On arrival, I approached the milking house and noticed that the broken window had been completely fixed, with no sign of the danger that had once threatened the small bird. I was relieved and grateful that my friends had taken my warning to heart and taken action to protect the hummingbird. I spent the afternoon exploring the farm and chatting with my friends, hoping to catch a glimpse of the little bird. However, a ripple
of sadness surged through me when not seeing the lovely
creature the whole day. The night screen was to hang down.
【参考范文】
真题动向
Paragraph 2:
I was just about to leave when the hummingbird appeared. She was flying around me and hovering just a few inches in front of my face. I was amazed and touched by this unexpected visit. The tiny bird seemed to be thanking me for rescuing her and making sure she was safe. I stood there, entranced by her beauty and grace as she flew circles around me. After a few moments, she let out a squeaking call as if bidding me farewell and flew off into the distance. As I said goodbye to the
hummingbird and climbed into my car, I knew that I would
always treasure the memory of that special encounter.
【参考范文】
这篇续写的新颖之处在于，出题者提供的结尾“She must have come to say good-bye.” 并非封闭式结局，而是一个开放的起点。它暗示了这种联结的非同寻常，允许甚至鼓励考生在续写中构建新的情境。
真题动向
新情境
传统考法：故事围绕一个明确的外部问题展开，续写的核心是“如何解决问题”。（例如：迷路了怎么办？早餐做砸了怎么办？熊来了怎么办？）情节推进是显性的、动作性的。
新考法（本题）：原文的核心“事件”在给出部分已经基本结束（救鸟、放生、告别）。续写的任务不再是解决一个外部冲突，而是处理一个内部情感与关系状态。它考查的是对一种微妙“联结”（bond）的延续、深化与诠释。故事的推动力从外部事件转为人物的内心情感与对关系的探寻。
新考法
传统角度：情感逻辑基于日常人际互动（感恩、友谊、勇气），易于共情和理解。
新角度：本文中，它建立了一种超越日常的、充满诗意甚至灵性的情感逻辑。蜂鸟两次与“我”进行长时间的“眼神对视”，并专程飞来“告别”，这在生物学上并非典型行为，但在文学和情感上是完全成立的。它要求考生接受并延续这种 “拟人化但不过度”的、象征性的情感逻辑，这对于习惯了写实主义叙事的考生是一种新挑战。
新角度
真题动向
1. 原文动物描写分析
原文对蜂鸟的描写，是全文情感基调的基石，其特点是 “脆弱与灵性并存，观察与互动交织”。
（1）聚焦“受困状态”，激发救助本能：
desperately trying to escape（拼命试图逃脱）
covered in spider-webs（沾满蛛网）
barely able to move her wings（几乎无法移动翅膀）
ceased her struggle the instant I picked her up（在我捧起它的瞬间停止了挣扎）
分析：用一系列状态描写，快速建立蜂鸟的 “绝对脆弱” 形象。而“停止挣扎”这一细节至关重要——它暗示了蜂鸟对“我”的初步感知与本能的顺从或信任，为后续跨物种沟通埋下第一处伏笔。
（2）刻画“眼神交流”，确立沟通核心：
she sat looking at me with her bright eyes（它坐着，用明亮的眼睛看着我）
this tiny creature looked into my eyes（这个小生灵凝视着我的眼睛）
She again looked directly into my eyes（它再次直视我的眼睛）
分析：“眼睛”是原文中人鸟互动最核心的渠道，重复了三次。这不是随意的看，而是“注视”、“凝视”、“直视”。作者通过赋予蜂鸟“凝视”的能力，将其从普通动物提升为一个可以与之进行无声对话的灵性主体。这是整个故事超现实感和情感深度的来源。
真题动向
（3）描绘“悬停与告别”，完成诗意升华：
Hovering... approached within six inches of my face（悬停……逼近到离我脸六英寸内）
let out a squeaking call（发出一声吱吱的鸣叫）
分析：“悬停”是蜂鸟的招牌动作，在此场景下极具仪式感。“逼近至六英寸”打破了常规的人与野生动物的安全距离，营造了一种亲密而震撼的私人时刻。最后的“鸣叫”，则是这种无声凝视的声音化出口，像一个明确的信号，将整个相遇推向了高潮，并直接引出了众人“它是来道别”的解读。
原文描写总括：命题者通过精心设计的动物描写，塑造了一只既是真实生物（脆弱、需救助），又是情感符号（会凝视、懂告别） 的蜂鸟。它要求续写者延续这种 “写实与诗意相结合” 的独特笔调。
2. 范文动物描写分析
所给范文的动物描写，遵循了原文的基调，但选择了最安全、最直接的延续方式，即“重现美好，确认感恩”。
（1）动作的复现与延续：
She was flying around me and hovering just a few inches in front of my face.（它绕着我飞，在我脸前几英寸处悬停。）
...she let out a squeaking call as if bidding me farewell...（……它发出一声吱吱鸣叫，仿佛在向我道别……）
真题动向
分析：范文几乎复刻了原文的核心动作：“绕飞”替代“接近”，“悬停”、“鸣叫”直接重现。这确保了与前文行为逻辑的高度一致性，向阅卷老师清晰表明：考生读懂了原文中蜂鸟行为的特殊含义，并予以忠实再现。
（2）情感指向的明确化：
The tiny bird seemed to be thanking me for rescuing her and making sure she was safe.（这只小鸟似乎在感谢我救了它，并确保它的安全。）
分析：这是范文的核心句，它用“seemed to be thanking me”将蜂鸟所有诗意、模糊的行为，明确解读为“感恩”。这是一种安全的主题锚定，直接呼应了原文众人“来道别”的猜测，使故事主题清晰无误。
（3）描写的功能化：
范文的动物描写主要是为 “我”的情感服务的。蜂鸟的出现是为了让“我”感到 amazed and touched（惊讶和感动），为了让我 be entranced（入迷），最终让我 treasure the memory（珍藏记忆）。蜂鸟在这里更多是一个触发美好情感的客体。
1. 【狼】—— 代表危险、野性与恐惧
必备知识
（1）展现困境与攻击性
① Its yellow eyes glowed in the dark.（它黄色的眼睛在黑暗中发光。）
② show its sharp teeth（露出尖牙）
③ growl low and deep（发出低沉、深沉的吼叫）
④ circle around, looking for a chance to attack（绕着圈走，寻找攻击机会）
例：The wolf was circling our tent, its low growls freezing us with fear.（狼正绕着我们的帐篷转圈，它低沉的吼叫让我们恐惧得僵住了。）
（2）带有威胁的灵性/象征
① a symbol of wild danger（野生危险的象征）
② a test of courage（对勇气的考验）
③ Its howl was a lonely sound in the vast wilderness.（它的嚎叫在广袤荒野中是一种孤独的声音。）
例：Facing the wolf, I learned that courage is not the absence of fear, but the will to protect.（面对狼，我懂得了勇气不是没有恐惧，而是保护的意志。）
2. 【狗】—— 代表忠诚、友谊与情感纽带
必备知识
（1）表达信任与亲近
① wag its tail wildly（疯狂摇尾巴）【核心特征】
② lick my hand/face（舔我的手/脸）
③ follow me everywhere（到处跟着我）
rest its head on my lap（把头枕在我腿上）
例：When I came home, my dog wagged its tail so wildly that its whole body shook.
（当我回家时，我的狗尾巴摇得如此疯狂，全身都在晃动。）
（2）描写活泼与生机
① chase its own tail（追自己的尾巴）
② fetch a ball/branch（叼回球/树枝）
③ bark happily（开心地吠叫）
例：At the park, my dog chased the ball with endless energy, its happy barks filling the air.（在公园，我的狗以无尽的精力追球，它快乐的吠叫声充满空气。）
3. 【猫】—— 代表独立、神秘与治愈
必备知识
（1）展现困境（常用）
① a small, wet kitten（一只湿漉漉的小猫）
② meow weakly（微弱地喵喵叫）
③ hide under a car, too scared to come out（躲在车下，吓得不敢出来）
例：I found a small, wet kitten hiding in the corner, meowing weakly for help.（我发现一只湿漉漉的小猫躲在角落，虚弱地喵喵求助。）
（2）表达含蓄的信任
① purr softly when petted（被抚摸时发出柔和的咕噜声）【核心特征】
② slowly blink its eyes at me（对我慢慢眨眼）【猫的“亲吻”】
③ curl up beside me while I read（我读书时蜷缩在我身边）
例：As I stroked its fur, the cat began to purr softly, a sign that it finally trusted me.（当我抚摸它的毛时，猫开始发出柔和的咕噜声，这表明它终于信任我了。）
4. 【熊】—— 代表巨大威胁、力量与求生
必备知识
（1）展现绝对的危险与压迫
① a huge shadow appeared（一个巨大的影子出现）
② stand on its back legs（用后腿站立）【制造威慑】
③ sniff the air（嗅闻空气）【发现人类】
④ make the ground shake as it walked（走路时让地面震动）
例：Suddenly, a huge shadow appeared. A bear stood on its back legs, sniffing the air toward our direction.（突然，一个巨大的影子出现。一头熊用后腿站立，朝我们的方向嗅着空气。）
（2）作为生存挑战的象征
① a force of nature（一股自然的力量）
② face-to-face with raw power（面对面地面对原始的力量）
例：Surviving the bear encounter taught us to respect nature and stay calm in crisis.（从遭遇熊的经历中幸存，教会了我们尊重自然并在危机中保持冷静。）
5. 【鸟】—— 代表自由、灵性与脆弱的美好
必备知识
（1）展现困境（常用）
① a tiny bird with a hurt wing（一只翅膀受伤的小鸟）
② flutter helplessly on the ground（无助地在地上扑腾）
③ too young to fly（太小了还不会飞）
④ trapped in（被困在……）【如网、房间、荆棘中】
例：I found a tiny bird with a hurt wing. It fluttered helplessly on the sidewalk, unable to escape.（我发现一只翅膀受伤的小鸟。它无助地在人行道上扑腾，无法逃脱。）
（2）表达信任与观察
① cock its head and look at me（歪着头看我）【经典可爱动作】
② perch on my finger gently（轻轻地停在我的手指上）
③ Its bright eyes watched my every move.（它明亮的眼睛注视着我的一举一动。）
④ hop closer for food/water（为食物/水跳近一些）
例：As I offered water, the little bird cocked its head, then hopped closer with cautious trust.（当我提供水时，小鸟歪了歪头，然后带着谨慎的信任跳近了一些。）
5. 【鸟】—— 代表自由、灵性与脆弱的美好
必备知识
（3）描写飞翔与生机（核心）
① flutter its wings（拍动翅膀）
② take flight / fly into the sky（起飞/飞向天空）【关键动作】
③ circle above me（在我头顶盘旋）
④ sing a beautiful song（唱出美妙的歌）
例：After its wing healed, I opened the window. It hesitated for a moment, then took flight into the blue sky.（它的翅膀愈合后，我打开了窗户。它犹豫了片刻，然后振翅飞向了蓝天。）
（4）象征自由与告别
① a symbol of freedom and hope（自由与希望的象征）
② a messenger of peace（和平的信使）
③ Its song seemed like a thank-you note.（它的歌声像是一封感谢信。）
④ watching it fly away, my heart felt both happy and a little sad（看着它飞走，我的心既快乐又有一点悲伤）【复杂情感】
例：Letting the bird go taught me that true kindness sometimes means setting something free, even if you love it.（放飞小鸟让我明白，真正的善良有时意味着放手，即使你爱它。）
关键能力
能力1 基础巩固——精准用词填空
练习题1：困境与救助
The lost puppy was (1) ___________________ (颤抖) under the bench, its fur wet from the rain. It let out a (2) ____________ (微弱的) whine. Seeing the (3) ________ (哀求的) look in its eyes, I knew I had to help.
练习题2：信任与亲近
After I fed the injured cat for a few days, it began to (4) _____________ (轻轻蹭) my leg. One afternoon, it even jumped onto my lap and started to (5) ________ (发出咕噜声) softly, a sure sign of (6) ________ (信任).
练习题3：活力与生机
Once recovered, the little bird didn’t just fly away. It (7) ________________ (在我头顶盘旋) for a moment, as if saying goodbye. Then, with a powerful flap of its wings, it (8) ___________ (飞向) the forest, (9) ____________________ (重新充满活力).
trembling/shivering
weak/feeble
pleading
rub against
purr
trust
circled above me
flew into
full of energy again
关键能力
能力2 场景仿写——功能句子构建
练习题1：
原文情境：你在徒步时，远处传来一声狼嚎。
句子开头：As dusk fell, a long, lonely...
你的续写(描述嚎叫及其带给你的感受)：
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1. As dusk fell, a long, lonely howl echoed through the valley, freezing me with fear and reminding me I was not alone in the wilderness.
关键能力
能力2 场景仿写——功能句子构建
练习题2：
原文情境：你治愈了一只受伤的鸽子并准备放飞。
句子开头：Opening my hands, I felt a mix of emotions as the pigeon...
你的续写 (描述鸽子飞走时的动作和你的复杂心情)：
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2. Opening my hands, I felt a mix of emotions as the pigeon fluttered its wings, hesitated, and then soared into the sky, becoming a symbol of freedom I had helped restore.
关键能力
能力2 场景仿写——功能句子构建
练习题3：
原文情境：暴风雨后，你在车库发现一窝受惊的小猫。
句子开头：The storm had passed, and in a corner of the garage, I found...
你的续写： (提示描述小猫的状态，以及你如何初步获得它们的信任)：
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The storm had passed, and in a corner of the garage, I found a litter of kittens, huddled together and shivering. I placed some milk nearby, and the bravest one slowly crept out, cocking its head to look at me.
关键能力
能力3 情节创作——微型续写挑战
练习题1：
规定动物：狗
故事开头：I first met Max on the coldest night of the year. He was a stray dog, searching through the trash outside my apartment.
续写要求：
请描写Max最初的困境。
描写“我”如何尝试接近并最终获得它信任的过程。
结尾暗示关系的变化。
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关键能力
【参考范文】
I first met Max on the coldest night of the year. He was a stray dog, searching through the trash outside my apartment. He looked thin and was shivering badly in the wind. His coat was dirty and his eyes were sad. (功能一：困境) I went inside to get some bread. When I came back, he watched me carefully but didn’t run away. I placed the food on the ground and took a few steps back. Slowly, he came closer, sniffed the food, and then ate it hungrily. The next evening, he was waiting at the same spot. This time, his tail gave a small, hopeful wag when he saw me. (功能二：信任)
From that day on, Max wasn’t just a stray; he became my faithful
shadow every night, and his wagging tail grew wilder and happier
each time. (功能三：生机 + 主题暗示)
关键能力
能力3 情节创作——微型续写挑战
练习题2：
规定动物：鸟 (非猛禽)
故事开头：My little brother found a featherless baby bird that had fallen from its nest.
续写要求：
描写小鸟的脆弱状态和我们的决定。
描写在照顾过程中，小鸟的一个可爱或令人鼓舞的细节。
为最终放飞它埋下伏笔。
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【参考范文】
My little brother found a featherless baby bird that had fallen from its nest. It was so tiny and weak, its eyes still closed, and it couldn’t even make a sound. (功能一：困境) We decided to take care of it. We made a soft nest from a box and fed it warm milk with a dropper. After a week, small feathers began to grow. Its favorite thing was to tilt its head and listen to my brother talk. (功能二：信任/可爱细节) We knew we couldn’t keep it forever. The day it first fluttered its tiny wings inside the box, we felt both proud and a little sad. We understood that our job was
to help it grow strong enough for the sky, not to keep it in
a box. (功能四：升华与伏笔)
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能力3 情节创作——微型续写挑战
练习题3 (高阶挑战)：
规定动物：熊/狼 (或大型野生动物)
故事开头：Our camping trip took an unexpected turn when we realized a bear was investigating our food supplies from a distance.
续写要求：
描写熊/狼的出现带来的紧张感和威胁。
描写“我们”冷静、正确的应对行动（不是逃跑，而是制造声响、缓慢后退等）。
描写危机解除后，由此产生的对自然的感悟。
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【参考范文】
Our camping trip took an unexpected turn when we realized a bear was investigating our food supplies from a distance. A huge, dark shape moved at the edge of the trees. It stood up on its back legs, sniffing the air toward our campsite. (功能一：威胁压迫) Fear shot through us, but we remembered the rules: don’t run. We stayed together, made ourselves look big by raising our arms, and shouted loudly while slowly backing away. (应对行动) The bear dropped to all fours, watched us for a tense moment, then turned and walked back into the woods. When its shadow disappeared, we let out a shaky breath. That night, we learned a powerful lesson: in the wild,
respect and calm are your best friends, not fear. (功能四：感悟)
命题预测
考向1《谷仓深处的呼救声》
（2025·南京六校联考）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
A determined 10-year-old girl Callie lived with her parents and older brother, Ben, on a quiet farm. Though she was small and thin, she loved helping with housework, especially feeding the horses in their big barn (畜棚). One side of the barn housed the horse stalls (马厩), while the other side was piled with hay bales (干草捆) for feeding.
One afternoon, Callie went into the barn to feed the horses. As she walked towards the tall stacks of hay, she suddenly stopped. A tiny, weak sound came through the dusty air. Meow... meow...
Her heart jumped. A kitten must be trapped in the hay! Breathing hard, she ran back to find Ben and her father. “Dad! Ben! Come quick! A kitten is stuck in the hay!” she called urgently. Ben sighed, putting down his tools. Her father looked doubtful. “Probably just the wind, Callie,” he said gently. But they followed her to the barn.
They stood quietly near the hay stacks, listening. The barn was silent. “Hear anything ” Ben asked. Their father shook his head. “Nothing, sweetheart. Maybe it was just a mouse. Don’t worry about it.” Disappointed, Callie watched them leave.
命题预测
After dinner, Callie slipped back to the barn, determined. She stood still, listening attentively. And there it was again! Meow... meow... Weaker now, but clear. She raced back to the house. Her father was watching TV.
“Dad, please!” she pleaded (恳求). “I heard it again! It is a kitten! Please, just come check one more time ” He looked unwilling but saw the real worry in her eyes. “Alright, alright, one last look.”
He returned a few minutes later. “Callie, I listened hard. All I heard was an owl outside. No kitten. Try not to worry.” He gave her a tired smile. “Thanks for checking, Dad.” Callie whispered, though she still felt uneasy.
注意：
1. 续写词数应为150左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
That night, Callie woke up suddenly.
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“I have no choice but to get help!” Callie thought to herself.
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考向1《谷仓深处的呼救声》
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【参考范文】
That night, Callie woke up suddenly. The weak cries filled her mind. She couldn’t rest. Quietly, she put on her coat, took a flashlight and slipped out. Inside the barn, near the hay stacks, Callie held her breath, listening with full attention. Then, it came: Meow... meow... Her flashlight beam swept across the bales. There! Near the bottom of a tall stack, she spotted a tiny movement-a small patch of gray fur barely visible between two enormous
bales. She rushed over and pushed the bales again, but
they wouldn’t move.
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【参考范文】
“I have no choice but to get help!” Callie thought to herself. She raced back home and quickly awoke Ben and their father. Seeing Callie’s worried face and absolute certainty, they both hurried with her back to the barn. Working together, Ben and their father carefully moved the heavy hay bales which Callie pointed at. Eventually, a narrow passage was revealed. There was a tiny gray kitten, its eyes wide with fright. Trembling and exhausted, it let out another pitiful meow. Carefully, Callie’s father reached in and gently held the little creature out. Callie’s heart
swelled with relief and joy as she looked at the rescued kitten,
safe and warm in her father’s large, gentle hands.
命题预测
考向2《林间偶遇与守护》
（2026·湖南长沙开学考）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
It was a sunny Saturday afternoon when a family of four decided to explore the woods near their home. With their camping equipment, they embarked on a much-anticipated trip in the nearby woods, full of excitement.
Upon arrival, the parents set up the tent while their two children, Max and Emma, wandered around and looked for fun. They were especially thrilled, laughter echoing through the woods. Max, the big brother, proposed to go deeper into the woods and explore more. Emma followed.
As they walked along the narrow path, chatting and laughing, they suddenly heard a strange noise coming from a thick bush. Feeling a little bit scared, Emma came closer to her brother. Then, they noticed another sound. Even with the scare and nervousness, curiosity got the better of them. They carefully approached the source of that sound.
To their big surprise, they found a small, injured fox lying there, making some heartbroken sounds. Taking a closer look, Max found that one of her legs was bleeding, and she looked weak and scared. Emma’s heart ached at the sight of the poor creature. “We can't just leave her here. Let's do something,” she begged, looking determined. Max hesitated for a while and nodded in agreement.
命题预测
Emma suggested coming back to the camping site and called their parents for help. But they worried the fox could be attacked by other bigger animals. Then Max decided to take the fox back. They knew they had to be extremely careful, not scaring the fox and not causing further injury.
Slowly, Max made his first attempt. He took off his coat and tried to gently place it over the fox. The fox, sensing Max's approach, struggled to run away but failed due to her bleeding leg. Max did another try. This time, he succeeded. He covered the fox carefully with his coat. The fox still whined(哀鸣) sadly, but didn't run away. With great care, they lifted the fox and carried her back.
注意：
1. 续写词数应为150左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Once they arrived, they quickly called their parents.
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考向2《林间偶遇与守护》
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【参考范文】
Once they arrived, they quickly called their parents. Both surprised, their parents were supportive of their children's kind act. The father, a veterinarian(兽), examined the fox's leg in detail. He professionally cleaned the wound, applied some medicine, and tenderly bandaged it. The fox seemed to sense that the family was trying to help and became calmer. Then, they took the fox home for further care. The following few days witnessed a warm scene Max and Emma took turns to
look after the fox. They fed her small amounts of food and
fresh water, and gradually, the fox's strength returned.
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【参考范文】
A few days later, the fox's leg was fully healed. She became more active and sometimes played around the backyard, running and jumping with newfound energy. The family were delighted to see her recovery. However, they knew that the fox was a wild animal and belonged in the wild. Max and Emma decided it was time to let her go. They took the fox back to the woods where they had found her. As they opened the cage, the fox looked at them for a moment, as if to say goodbye, and then disappeared into the bushes. The siblings, feeling proud of what they had done,
looked at the deep woods, and anticipating their next adventure in
nature.
命题预测
考向3《围墙边的紧急救援》
（2025·河北石家庄期末）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
A Fortunate Escape
Max, Ben and I were walking home together while I bit into the brown beef burger I had grabbed from a shop nearby. “Truth or dare, Ben ” Max questioned. It was a game we usually played to amuse ourselves on the lengthy, boring journey home. Ben wanted a dare. “Well, Ben, I dare you to carry my bag all the way home!” Max commanded.
As Ben pulled the heavy bag up his shoulder and adjusted the bag belts, he noticed that Max’ bag was partly open. When he quickly turned it around, an object flew out of the bag, and over the fence of our neighbor’s house.
“Oh, no,” Max shouted, “I think that was my English homework!” Stretching his hand out and trying to crawl (爬) under the fence to get the paper, Ben found that it was just out of reach.
“Well, I guess I’ll have to climb over the fence to get it,” Ben complained. He was barely able to climb up, using small gaps in the wooden fence as handholds, as the fence was nearly as tall as him, and low enough for something to be thrown over it.
命题预测
Sliding down the fence, Ben grabbed the valued piece of paper, complaining about injured self-respect. Just then, a loud and terrifying bark cut his words short.
“Woof, woof!”
Our neighbor, Mr. Mason, owned a German Shepherd (德国牧羊犬), known for its fierceness, which guarded the house. It was something we had overlooked, too focused on getting back Max’s homework. Ben’s legs trembled uncontrollably and his face turned a deathly white as the German Shepherd advanced slowly on him like a wolf approaching its target.
Max and I stared at it, frozen with fear. Ben backed up against the fence, attempting to climb up, but a loud bark stopped him in his tracks. I desperately searched my mind for a sliver of an idea about how I could assist Ben. Should I climb up the fence and help Ben Or could I do something to distract the dog
注意：
1. 续写词数应为150左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Searching the road for stones, my eyes landed upon a brown object.
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Afterwards, the three of us made our way home again.
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考向3《围墙边的紧急救援》
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【参考范文】
Searching the road for stones, my eyes landed upon a brown object. It was the half-eaten burger that I had dropped in panic. All of a sudden, a silver of an idea came to me in a flash of inspiration — I could make good use of it to distract the dog. Dogs like beef! Every second counting, I swiftly picked up the beef burger, gathered all my strength and threw it at the fierce dog. Thankfully, giving way to the temptation of the delicious beef, the dog turned around and was quickly immersed in delicacy, ignoring the frozen
Ben. With a sigh of relief, Ben swiftly regained his focus and climbed
over the fence. Tightly hugged by Max and me, Ben gradually lifted his
spirits.
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【参考范文】
Afterwards, the three of us made our way home again. Strangely enough, the lengthy journey home didn’t seem that boring. In an instant, we began to amuse ourselves on Ben’s dare. Max apologized to Ben for the dare which had led to the entire adventure. However, Ben patted him on the back as if to show his forgiveness. Subsequently, squeezing my hands, Ben sincerely extended his gratitude, saying that without my wisdom and bravery, he could have been severely injured. I responded
jokingly that he owed me a new beef burger. Waves of laughter permeating
in the air, we awakened to the realization that timely help among friends
can break down any obstacle, changing a venture into a fortunate escape.