中考英语记叙文高分策略

课件26张PPT。How can we become
good learners?Unit 1English writing basic steps(基本写作步骤) 1.审题
2.列提纲
3.加开头和结尾,加连接词
4.美化句子(谚语/例子/高级词汇)
5.查漏补缺
6.誊写（1）认真审题
（2）定人称
（3）定时态
（4）审要求Which is better? 他们在海滩上听音乐。 A They listened to the music on the beach.
B They enjoyed the music on the beach. 最后，他的狗得救了，他感到很惊讶。A To his surprise, his dog was saved at last.
B His dog was saved at last. He was very surprised. 我们应该保护环境。A We should protect the environment.
B It’s our duty to protect the environment.加连接词Dear Daddy,
It’s a gift for Father’s Day when you are reading it.
I still remember the day last summer when I climbed the mountain with you. _______ , it was sunny and warm. ________, it began raining on the half way. I complained to you about the bad weather. I felt _____ cold ______I wanted to give up. _______, you put your coat on me and told me not to give up. _______, I reached the top of the mountain and enjoyed the beauty of the nature there.
Now I want to say: I love you. Daddy. You raise me up!
Happy Father’s Day!
Yours,
Mike
At firstUnluckilysothatHoweverFinally1.表示并列或递进: and, as well as, both…and, what’s more
not only…but also, neither…nor
2.表示选择: or, either…or
3.表示转折: but,however,althoughthough,after all
4.表示因果: because, so, therefore,since,for,as a result
5.表示条件: if , unless
6.表示对比: instead, not…but, while, in the same way,
on the one hand…on the other hand
7.表示解释: for example, for instance, such as,
that is to say, in other words,to tell the truth
8.表示顺序: to begin with, firstly, first (of all), second(ly), next, later, since then, from then on, finally, in the end
9.表示强调: also, besides, especially, actually, in fact
10.表示结论: all in all, altogether, in a word,
generally speaking, in short连接词高级词汇替换
1．but替换very
???The film we saw last night was very interesting.
The film we saw last night was nothing but interesting.
???The film we saw last night was anything but boring.
2．suppose 替换should
???He is supposed to ( should ) have driven more slowly.
3．appreciate 替换thank
???Thank you very much for you help. →
???We appreciate your help very much. / Your help is much appreciated.
4．more than替换very
????① I’m very glad to learn that you are coming in September. →
?????I’m more than glad to learn that you are coming in September.???
???② If there is anything I can do for you, I would be more than glad to help.
5．come up with替换think of
????Jack is very clever. He often comes up with ( thinks of ) new ideas.
6．perfect (ly) 替换good/ very well
He speaks perfect ( good ) English./ He speaks English perfectly ( very well ).
7．amazing替换surprising
8.fortunately替换luckily加谚语(Proverb/saying)
可用于”beginning”和”ending”，多用后者。锻炼对学生有好处 It is good for us students to take exercise.
As the saying goes, “All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.” So it is good for us students to take exercise.集中注意力于学习We should concentrate on our studies.As the saying goes, “No pains, no gains.” So we should concentrate on our studies...加谚语(Proverb/saying)
可用于开头和结尾，多是结尾。加谚语(Proverb/saying)
可用于”beginning”和”ending”，多用后者。加入英语俱乐部是学习英语的好方法Joining the English club is a good way to learn English.As the saying goes, “Practice makes perfect.” So joining the English club is a good way to learn English.加谚语(Proverb/saying)
可用于开头和结尾，多是结尾。加谚语(Proverb/saying)
可用于”beginning”和”ending”，多用后者。Enjoy some proverbs
1.Practice makes perfect.
2.Think twice before you do.
4.Do as the Romans do.

三思而后行。熟能生巧。有志者事竟成。入乡随俗。早起的鸟儿有虫吃。失败是成功之母。5.The early bird catches the worm.3.Where there is a will,
there is a way.6.Failure is the mother of success.Enjoy some proverbs
7.It is no use crying over spilt milk.
8.An apple a day keeps the doctor away.
9.All roads lead to Rome.
10.Never too old to learn.

覆水难收。一天一个苹果， 医生远离我。条条大路通罗马。活到老，学到老。请以“My good habit”为题写一篇短文。
要求：1.语言表达准确，语意通顺、连贯；
2.文中不得出现真实的地名或人名等信息；
3.80词左右。 basic steps(基本写作步骤) 1.审题
2.列提纲
（1）认真审题
（2）定人称
（3）定时态
（4）审要求第一人称一般现在时总→分→总每个人都应该有好习惯，好习惯对我们有帮助。总：分：饮食、运动、睡眠总：应该坚持好习惯 basic steps(基本写作步骤)
3.加开头和结尾,加连接词
4.美化句子(谚语/例子/高级词汇)
5.查漏补缺
6.誊写 My Good Habit

首：I think everyone should have good habit.It is known to us that good habits are necessary for everybody to success.
Firstly,I think eating habit is important for our health.So I eat fruit every day.I love vegetables.And I usually drink milk.I eat junk food about once a week.
Secondly,taking more exercise is important,too.As the old saying goes ,''All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.''So it is good for us students to take exercise.I seldom grasped by flus or fevers.Thanks to this good habit.分：Firstly,I think eating habit is important for our health.So I eat fruit every day.I love vegetables.And I usually drink milk.I eat junk food about once a week.
Secondly,taking more exercise is important,too.As the old saying goes ,''All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.''So it is good for us students to take exercise.I seldom catch a cold.Thanks to this good habit.
Finally,I always get up early.I sleep nine hours every day.''Early to bed,early to rise.''so goes an old saying.尾：In a word,good habit could bring us something happy and effect on our life. From now on let's try to keep our good habits. basic steps(基本写作步骤) 1.审题
2.列提纲
（1）认真审题
（2）定人称
（3）定时态
（4）审要求第一人称一般现在时总→分→总英语口语对大部分学生来说都是困难的。总：分： 三条建议。总：贵在坚持。 How to improve spoken English seems to be a difficult thing for lots of students.Here are some suggestions.
First,we should read more English articles to learn some useful words and sentences .
Second,it is helpful to watch English movies .By doing this ,we can learn more native expressions.
Finally,it is necessary to take every chance to practice,for example, taking part in the English Corner. I hope the above suggestions could be helpful in improving spoken English.As the old saying goes,''Practice makes perfect.''All in all,we should keep practicing so that we will be better.Thanks for your time!