(共33张PPT)
定语从句在写作中的应用
01 小小百家讲堂
相思
唐 王维
红豆生南国,
春来发几枝。
劝君多采撷,
此物最相思。
I want to recommend you a poem of Tang Dynasty.
It is an important part of Chinese civilization.
I want to recommend you a poem of Tang Dynasty, which is an important part of Chinese civilization.
定语从句
Step1 找出两个简单句中都出现的同一个事物。
Step2 将其中的一个简单句改成从句,去修饰另外一个句中那个相同的事物。(注意关系词的选用)
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01 什么是定语从句?
I like beautiful poems.
I like the poems which are beautiful.
定语从句
定语
I like the poems which are beautiful.
定语从句
先行词
关系词
先行词被定语从句修饰的成分
代词作用
连词作用
人:
物:
人或物:
关系副词:
关系代词
who,whom
which
whose that as
when where why
关系词
The students benefiting most from college are those _____ are totally engaged(参与)in academic life.
(2019·北京卷语法填空)
We all like our English teacher, from ______ we have learned a lot.
定语从句
who
宾语
whom
主语
人
Besides, the stories of world-famous people are also attractive to me, ______ help me learn a lot from them.
I think such activities are necessary and meaningful, from _____ I learn that we should help people who are in trouble if possible.
定语从句
which
宾语
which
主语
物
The boy standing there is looking at a tree, ______ branches are broken.
Our monitor is the boy _______ father is a lawyer.
定语从句
whose
定语
whose
定语
定语从句
关系代词
where
whom
when
which
as
that
whose
why
who
关系副词
关系词 Relative words
02 如何写定语从句?
In the class you will mainly learn Tang poetry.
并列句 定语从句
In the class you will mainly learn Tang poetry, which reflects traditional Chinese culture and is deeply loved by Chinese.
which
唐诗
课堂上,你将主要学习唐诗,唐诗反应了中国传统文化、深受中国人喜爱。
Tang poetry reflects traditional Chinese culture and is deeply loved by Chinese.
I plan to help you study some poems of the Tang Dynasty。
简单句 定语从句
I plan to help you study some poems of the Tang Dynasty, many of which have greatly influenced Chinese literature.
which
唐诗
我打算帮你研究一些唐代的诗歌,其中很多都对中国文学产生了很大的影响。
Many of the poems of the Tang Dynasty have greatly influenced Chinese literature.
Li Bai is regarded as the greatest romantic poet of the Tang Dynasty.
并列句 定语从句
Li Bai is regarded as the greatest romantic poet of the Tang Dynasty,whose poem is filled with rich imagination and striking imagery.
whose
诗人
李白被认为是唐代最伟大的浪漫主义诗人,他的诗充满了丰富的想象力和惊人的意象。
rich imagination
striking imagery
His poem is filled with rich imagination and striking imagery.
What I appreciate most are his landscape poems。
并列句 定语从句
What I appreciate most are his landscape poems, which are clear and natural in words with profound messages.
which
诗人
我最欣赏的是他的山水诗,文字清晰自然,寓意深刻。
They are clear and natural in words with profound messages.
03 写作中如何应用定语从句?
假如你是李华,你校将要赠送一批关于中国传统文化的书籍给你的英国朋友Jack就读的学校。请你代表学校给他写一封信,内容要点如下:
1. 赠书的目的;
2. 介绍书籍类型(如节日、食品等);
3. 表示需要与其沟通具体细节。
注意:1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 开头已给出,不计入总词数。
语篇写作
Our school is going to donate a large number of books to your school.
Our school is going to donate a large number of books to your school, whose aim is to make the students in your school have a better understanding of Chinese traditional culture.
whose
我们学校将向你们学校捐赠大量书籍,目的是让你们学校的学生更好地了解中国传统文化。
It’s aim is to make the students in your school have a better understanding
of Chinese traditional culture.
1. 赠书的目的
As is known to all, we have a rich traditional culture.
As is known to all, we have a rich traditional culture which/that covers a diversity of topics.
which/that
众所周知,我们有丰富的传统文化,涵盖了各种各样的话题。
2. 介绍书籍类型(如节日、食品等)
It covers a diversity of topics.
Therefore, we have been carefully choosing books.
Therefore, we have been carefully choosing books that are most typical and cater for us teenagers.
which/that
因此,我们一直在精心挑选最具代表性、最适合我们青少年的书籍。
2. 介绍书籍类型(如节日、食品等)
The books are most typical and cater for us teenagers.
After heated discussions, we have agreed that books which are about traditional Chinese festivals, food and costumes are likely to be what you show great interest in.
which
经过热烈的讨论,我们一致认为关于中国传统节日、食物和服装的书籍可能是你感兴趣的。
After heated discussions, we have agreed that books about traditional Chinese festivals, food and costumes are likely to be what you show great interest in.
2. 介绍书籍类型(如节日、食品等)
about traditional
Chinese festivals, food and costumes
There are many detailed information, such as the time and way to deliver the books.
There are many detailed information that we need to discuss about the donation, such as the time and way to deliver the books.
which/that
关于捐赠,我们有很多详细的信息需要讨论,比如送书的时间和方式。
we need to discuss many detailed information about the donation.
3. 表示需要与其沟通具体细节。
Dear Jack,
How is everything going Our school is going to donate a large number of books to your school, whose aim is to make the students in your school have a better understanding of Chinese traditional culture.
As is known to all, we have a rich traditional culture which/that covers a diversity of topics. Therefore, we have been carefully choosing books that are most typical and cater for us teenagers.After heated discussions, we have agreed that books which are about traditional Chinese festivals, food and costumes are likely to be what you show great interest in.
There are many detailed information that we need to discuss about the donation, such as the time and way to deliver the books. So I hope you can write me a reply at your earliest convenience.
Yours,
Li Hua
语篇欣赏
04 更多传统文化?
Chinese calligraphy is highly recommended.
Chinese calligraphy is highly recommended, which is the cultivation of one’s morality as well as a window into Chinese profound culture.
which/that
推崇中国书法,它是一种修身养性,是了解中国深厚文化的窗口。
Chinese calligraphy is the cultivation of one’s morality as well as a window into Chinese profound culture.
中国传统文化
书法
Learning calligraphy is one of the best ways to approach Chinese traditional culture.
Learning calligraphy is one of the best ways to approach Chinese traditional culture, which is well represented with lines, structure, strength and balance embodied in each character.
which/that
学习书法是了解中国传统文化的最好方法之一,书法在每个汉字中都体现了线条、结构、力量和平衡。
Calligraphy is well represented with lines, structure, strength and balance embodied in each character.
中国传统文化
书法
I have benefited a lot from martial arts.
I have benefited a lot from martial arts, which not only helped me improve my health significantly, but also deepened my understanding about the concept of good sportsmanship.
which/that
武术让我受益匪浅,它不仅让我的健康状况有了很大的改善,也加深了我对良好体育道德的理解。
The martial arts not only helped me improve my health significantly, but also deepened my understanding about the concept of good sportsmanship.
中国传统文化
中国武术
2. How to write the Attributive Clause
Summary
1. What is the Attrbutive Clause
3. How to use the Attributive Clause in writing to introduce the splendid Chinese culture.
4. The relative words of attributive clauses:
who whom which whose that as
when where why
05 科技中国
As scheduled, the lecture is to be held at 15:45 next Wednesday in the school hall.
As scheduled, the lecture is to be held at 15:45 next Wednesday in the school hall, during which astronauts will demonstrate how they live and how to conduct experiments in the station.
which/that
讲座将于下周三15点45分在学校礼堂举行,届时宇航员将展示他们的生活和如何在空间站进行实验。
During the lecture, astronauts will demonstrate how they live and how to conduct experiments in the station.
科技中国
天宫课堂
The Tiangong Class
假定你是李华,中国空间站“天宫课堂”太空投课将于近期举行,校学生会委托你写一则通知告知全体学生相关事宜。
要点:1.授课教师:宇航员;
方式:现场直播;
内容:太空生活、实验演示。
2.观看时间:下周三15:45开始;
地点:校大厅。
3.联系方式:LH@
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Homework
天宫课堂
The Tiangong Class
下课啦!