《学霸笔记 同步精讲》Unit 9 Learning Section Ⅴ　Writing（课件）高中英语北师大版必修三

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Unit 9　Learning
Section Ⅴ　Writing
针对训练
读后续写
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写词数应为150左右。
Whether we notice it or not,our child is a little reflection of ourselves.They grow up looking more and more like us.They even have similar personalities and hobbies,and in some cases,the standard of choosing a good friend.
One day,my 10-year-old Jane said,“Mum,I made a new friend at school today.Can she come over tomorrow ” Her words made me extremely happy because Jane was a shy girl and I wanted her to make some friends to bring her out of her shell.
“Sure,honey,that sounds great,” I said,thinking back to my own childhood best friend,Susan.We lived across the street from each other in Washington Heights,New York.We met at the age of 10,too.Like my daughter,I was shy and had trouble making friends.But Susan drew me out.She was one of the friendliest people in school,with shiny black hair and a wide smile.Thanks to Susan,I was happy every day.
In senior high school,Susan went on a trip to Florida.This was the first time we had to be away from each other for a few days.“I’ll be back soon and I will write to you as soon as I arrive,” she told me.But I didn’t get her phone call nor receive any mail from her.Soon,my family moved to New Jersey,making my hope of seeing Susan impossible.
Whenever I thought of her,tears came into my eyes.
The next day Jane brought her new friend home. “Hi,Mrs.Smith,” the little girl said.Her hair was so shiny and black and she gave me a big smile.“My name is Jo.My mum will pick me up 2 hours later.”
I was puzzled because my daughter’s new friend looked so familiar._____________________________________________
Two hours passed really quickly,and there was a knock on the door._____________________________________________
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写作指导
1.理解全文,把握主线。通过阅读所给文章内容可知,作者的女儿Jane想要邀请自己的朋友来家里,这让作者想起了自己童年时的好朋友Susan,回忆了当初和Susan相处的事情,后来作者因为搬家就没能再和Susan见面。第二天Jane把新朋友带回家,小女孩说自己叫Jo,她妈妈两个小时后来接她。
2.分析段首提示,展开想象,合理推测两段内容。第一段开头是:我很困惑,因为我女儿的新朋友看起来很面熟。所以后文应该是讲述作者对于觉得Jo面熟的困惑,以及看到Jo和Jane两个女孩相处得很好,作者从心底里为女儿感到高兴。第二段开头是:两个小时过得真快,有人敲门。本段应该写Jo的妈妈来接Jo,作者发现正是Susan,Susan曾经联系过作者,但作者一家已经搬走了。两个小女孩也为她们高兴,Susan和作者都流下了喜悦的泪水。
写作模板
I was puzzled because my daughter’s new friend looked so familiar.But I was sure that I had never met Jo before.She told me that her family just 1.　　　　　　　　　 (从……搬来) Los Angeles,which 2.　　　　　　　　　　　　 (使我更加困惑) because I had never been to Los Angeles and we
3.　　　　　　　　 (没有亲戚) living in Los Angeles,either.I 4.　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　 (确信这只是我的想象).
moved from
puzzled me even more
had no relatives
convinced myself that it was only my imagination
The two girls 5.　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 (相处得很好) and they giggled from time to time.I watched them play and felt so happy for my daughter from the bottom of my heart.
got on very well
Two hours passed really quickly,and there was a knock on the door.It was Jo’s mum coming to 6.　　　　　　　 (接她) later that afternoon.On seeing her face,I 7.　　　 　　 (感到震惊).“Judy!” she cried.“It’s me,Susan!” We embraced each other.8.　　　　　　　　 (原来) her father’s company sent her father to Los Angeles before they 9.　　 　　 (安定下来) Florida.She tried calling me later but we had moved.
pick her up
was shocked
It turned out that
settled in
The two little girls were happy to see their mothers became good friends at once before we told them our story,with happy tears 10.　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 (顺着我们的脸颊流下来).
rolling down our cheeks