高考英语二轮复习专项2丰富语言表达技巧课件

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专项2　丰富语言表达技巧
语言基础板块　读后续写提分策略
1．表达要正确、规范(精选好“词”，用到位)
(1) 词汇类错误
①Doing a part－time job can actually effect your studies. (词类误用，应把effect改成affect)
②People throwed cans, paper, bags and so on into the river, causing serious pollution. (词形变化错误，应把throwed改成threw)
③He opened the light as soon as he entered the room.(词汇运用错误，应把opened改成turned on)
④Though we failed in the game, we didn't lose__our__heart．(习惯表达错误，应把lose our heart改成lose heart)
(2)语法类错误
①The lady walk her dog every morning. (主谓一致错误，应把walk改为walks)
②I will not come here if it will__rain tomorrow.(时态错误，应把will rain改成rains)
③The book has to return at the end of the week.(语态错误，应把return
改成be returned)
④I have a lot of readings completing this weekend.(非谓语动词使用错误，应把completing改成to complete)
⑤The driver brought the car to stop. In this way, he avoided an accident.(冠词使用错误，应在stop前加a)
(3)汉语式英语
①纯汉语式思维和汉语式语序
误： At this school studying, I really very happy.
正： Studying at this school, I am really very happy.
②纯汉语式翻译
误： The boy ran in the house from west to east without having a break.
正：The boy ran about in the house restlessly.
③搭配不当
误： Under the help of the teacher, I have made great progress in my English.
正： With the help of the teacher, I have made great progress in my
English.
④前后不合逻辑
误： At the age of ten, my grandfather died.
正： When I was ten, my grandfather died. 或者 At the age of ten, I lost my grandfather.
⑤ 词性乱用
误：None can negative the importance of water.
正：None can deny the importance of water.
⑥否定误用
误： We should try our best not to live up to our parents' expectations.
正：We should try our best to live up to our parents' expectations.
(4)句子错误的“非完整”性
①句子成分残缺
误： It was raining hard, they could not work in the fields.(缺连词)
正：It was raining hard, so they could not work in the fields.
误： There are many students don't support the project.(缺关系词)
正： There are many students who don't support the project.
误：On the other hand, dogs are our best friends, bring us a lot of fun.(缺关系词或连词)
正： On the other hand, dogs are our best friends, which/and bring us a lot of fun.
②分词误用
误：We sat back to watch the movie, not expected anything special, but to
our surprise, we clapped，cheered, and cried for the next two hours.
正： We sat back to watch the movie, not expecting anything special, but to our surprise, we clapped, cheered, and cried for the next two hours.
③前后人称不一致
误：As their living standards have improved, we tend to care more about food quality.
正：As our living standards have improved, we tend to care more about food quality.
④句子成分重复
误：There are a lot of things I don't have time to do them.(things后为定语从句，定语从句中省略了指代things的关系代词that或which，them多余)
正：There are a lot of things I don't have time to do.
⑤句法混乱
误：There is going to have an evening party at the meeting hall on the fifth floor of the office building.
正：There is going to be an evening party at the meeting hall on the fifth floor of the office building.
(“there be”和“have”均表示“有”，但前者表存在，后者表所属，两种表达不可杂糅在一起)
⑥句式单一
He was waiting for the last bus. He looked worried and looked at his watch for several times.
改为：With a worried look/Looking worried, he checked/referred
to/turned to his watch constantly while waiting for the last bus.
(5)拼写错误
误：They prefered to bargain with the local people，for cash.
正：They preferred to bargain with the local people，for cash.
(6)标点错误
误：If you're interested in becoming a volunteer, you will need to fill out an application, and sign an agreement。
正：If you're interested in becoming a volunteer, you will need to fill out an application, and sign an agreement.
2．词汇要升级、具体化(精选好“词”，用得妙)
(1)替换常用简单词
①名词变身
简单词汇 高级词汇
effect influence(影响，作用)，impact(影响，作用)，impression(印象，感想；影响)
shopper customer(顾客), client(客户)，consumer(消费者)，purchaser(买主；购买者)
choice option(可选择的事物；选择，选择权), alternative(可供选择的事物，替代物)，pick(选择)
job career(职业，事业)，employment(雇用；就业)；profession(职业)
communication interaction(互动)，exchange(交流)
advantage virtue(优点；长处)，merit(优点)，benefit(优势；益处)
disadvantage shortcoming(缺点；短处)，drawback/minus(缺点；不利条件)，defect(缺陷)
mistake fault(过错)，error(错误；差错)，fallacy(谬论；谬误)
opinion viewpoint(观点)，point of view(观点，看法)，perspective(观点，想法)，standpoint(立场；观点)
fame reputation(名誉；名声)，renown(名誉；声誉)，prestige(声望；威望)
续表
简单词汇 高级词汇
ability capacity(能力)，capability(能力；才能)，competence(能力)
top climax(顶点)，peak(高峰，顶点)，summit(最高点，顶点)
competitor rival(对手，竞争者)，opponent(对手；竞争者)，contestant(竞争者)，match(敌手；旗鼓相当的人)
way method(方法；办法)，approach(方式；方法)，means(途径；手段)
②动词(短语)变身
简单词汇 高级词汇
say, believe, think figure, hold the view that, assume that, I am convinced that
improve promote, enhance, strengthen; facilitate
never give up stick to, insist on, persist in, adhere to; persevere
should do be supposed to do, It is wise/sensible to do, It makes sense to do, nothing could be better than．.., It's worthwhile to do．.., deserve doing, find it rewarding and enjoyable to do
like have a passion for，be passionate about, be fond of, fall in love with, have an affection for, be crazy about, care for, be mad about, be keen on, be addicted to, be hooked on
come approach, around the corner
make enable, allow
thank appreciate, be grateful to sb for sth, convey one's heartfelt thanks to
help do sb a favor, go/come to one's aid, with the assistance of, give sb a helping hand
try attempt to do，make efforts to do，endeavor to do, manage to do, strive to do
solve settle, deal with, cope with, handle, do with
obtain (sb) gain access to, (sth) be accessible to
give offer sth to sb, provide sb with sth, supply sb with sth
explain account for，illustrate，clarify, demonstrate
③动词具体化
笼统词 具体词
walk edge(徐徐移动)，stroll(闲逛，溜达)，tiptoe(踮着脚走)，stagger(摇摇晃晃地走，蹒跚)，trudge(步履沉重地走)，creep(爬行，匍匐，蹑手蹑脚地移动)
run dart(猛冲，飞奔)，charge(猛冲)，gallop(疾驰，飞奔)，scamper(蹦蹦跳跳地跑), sprint (快速奔跑，冲刺)
look glance(瞥一眼)，glimpse(瞥见)，glare(怒目而视)，peek(偷看)，stare(盯着看)，gaze(凝视)；gawk(呆呆地看)
say/talk chat(闲聊)，announce(宣布)，argue(争论)，complain(抱怨)，debate(辩论)，discuss(讨论)，murmur(低语)，whisper(低语；耳语)，persuade(说服)，remark(谈论，说起), state(陈述，说明)，utter(说，讲)
laugh chuckle(轻声地笑)，giggle(咯咯笑；傻笑)，guffaw(大笑；哄笑)，snigger(暗笑；窃笑)，beam(眉开眼笑，笑容满面), grin (露齿而笑，咧着嘴笑)
cry wail(哭号，恸哭)，sob(啜泣；呜咽)，weep(哭泣，流泪)，whimper(啜泣；呜咽)，blubber (大哭)
eat bite(咬)，chew(咀嚼)，devour(狼吞虎咽地吃)，gobble(狼吞虎咽；贪婪地吃)，swallow(吞下；咽下)，wolf(狼吞虎咽地吃)
drink drain(喝光；喝干)，sip(小口地喝；抿)，booze(喝酒，尤指酗酒)，sample(品尝)
④形容词、副词和介词变身
want crave(渴望；热望)，desire(渴望；期望)，long(渴望), hunger(渴求，渴望)
catch capture(俘获；捕获)，grasp(抓紧，抓牢)，seize(抓住，捉住), grip(握紧，抓住)
hit pat(轻拍)，beat(敲打；击打)，strike(撞击)
break crack(裂开；破裂)，demolish(拆毁，拆除)，destroy(摧毁；毁灭)
简单词汇 高级词汇
more and
more popular increasingly popular，prevail，prevalent，pervasive
big enormous, tremendous, gigantic, vast, boundless, dramatic, significant
difficult tough，strenuous，challenging，daunting，arduous, punishing, torturous
obvious apparent, evident
very extremely, remarkably, overwhelmingly, pretty, perfectly, exceedingly
续表
简单词汇 高级词汇
beautiful attractive, appealing, fascinating, eye－catching, gorgeous, breathtaking, impressive
famous accomplished, have a high reputation,
distinguished, renowned, well－reputed，
established
good remarkable, awesome, outstanding, superior, decent, fantastic, brilliant, fabulous, superb, marvelous, striking, prominent
surprising amazing, extraordinary, miraculous, unbelievable, incredible, exceptional
bad disgusting, awful, terrible, horrible, evil
important significant, vital, essential, fundamental, crucial, primary
all completely, absolutely, fully, thoroughly
about concerning, relevant to, with regard to/regarding, with respect to, in relation to, in terms of
certainly definitely, doubtlessly, beyond question, unquestionably, beyond (a shadow of) a doubt
sad frustrated，discouraged，depressed，downhearted, disheartened, low－spirited
例句：
A．With only twenty seconds left, I darted to the finishing line.(代替ran)只剩下20秒了，我冲向终点线。
B．He fell, striking his head on the edge of the desk.(代替hitting)他摔倒了，头撞在了桌角上。
C．With only two minutes left, he gobbled his meal.(代替ate)只剩下2分钟了，他狼吞虎咽地把他的饭吃了下去。
D．I don't want to stay up all night over such a trifle．(代替an
unimportant thing)我不想因为这样一件小事熬一整夜。
E．They trudged onwards with exhausted bodies through the desert.(代替walked)他们在沙漠中拖着疲惫的身体艰难地前进。
F．It was merely a flicker of light in the distance, yet it filled them with hope.(代替only)这只是远处的一道微光，但它给他们带来了希望。
G．She heard her mother whisper as she tiptoed/crept down the hall，“Don't wake your father up.”(代替say与walked)当她踮着脚/蹑手蹑脚地走过大厅时，她听到母亲低声说：“别吵醒你父亲。”
H.Those girls argued/debated hotly about the question of the most beautiful princess in fairy tales.(代替talked)那些女孩热烈地谈论着童话故事中最美丽的公主的问题。
I．She choked and began coughing.When he pushed a glass of water to her mouth, she drained it. (代替drank)她噎住了，开始咳嗽。当他把一杯水推到她的嘴里时，她把它喝干了。
(2)多用高级短语，引人入胜
①常见单词与相对应的高级短语

单词 高级短语
begin get down to
appreciate be indebted to
raise bring up
use make use of
desire long for/be thirsty for
decide make up one's mind
cry burst into tears
come draw near
think(思考) mull/ponder over
think(认为) hold the view
bear put up with
affect have an effect on
remember bear．..in mind
own be in possession of
believe be convinced of
tired worn out
stress(强调) put/place/lay emphasis on
solve work out, figure out
replace take the place of
see catch sight of，catch a glimpse of
suit be suitable for，be suited to/for
refuse turn down
attract appeal to
usually more often than not，as is often the case
finally in the end, at length
realize be aware of, be conscious of, arouse one's awareness of
②常见中文表达与相对应的高级短语
汉语 高级短语
努力 struggle for＝strive for＝spare no effort to do＝make an effort/every endeavor to do
开始从事，
着手 embark on＝take up＝set out to do/set about doing
当今；当代 in contemporary society＝in present－day society＝in this day and age
大量的 a host of＝a great number of＝a large amount of＝a load of＝masses of＝ a wealth of
更糟糕的是 what's worse＝worse still＝to make matters worse
偶然遇见 run/knock/bump into＝come across＝have an encounter with
依我看 in my opinion/viewpoint＝as far as I'm concerned＝from my point of view＝from where I stand
除了……
之外(还有) in addition to＝apart/aside from＝as well as＝along with
高度评价 think highly/well of＝sing sb's praises＝set a high value on
把……考虑
在内 take．..into consideration＝take．..into account
有资格的；有能
力的；胜任的 be fit for＝be equal to＝be qualified for＝be competent in＝be capable of＝be up to
参加 take part in＝participate in＝get involved in＝engage in
克服紧张；
缓解焦虑 erase/overcome/get over nervousness，
relieve anxiety
对……有益的 be of great benefit to＝be beneficial to
对……有害的 do harm/damage to＝be harmful/detrimental to
接触到；
有机会使用 gain/have access to＝be accessible to
对……(不)
方便的 be convenient/inconvenient for sb＝bring convenience/inconvenience to sb
对……有影
响/作用 have an effect/influence/impact on．..＝make a difference to．..
激发某人
的热情 kindle passion in sb, stimulate/spark/fuel one's passion/enthusiasm for
伤心欲绝 break one's heart, tear one's heart out, cry one's heart out, with a heavy/sinking/sorrowful heart
让某人伤感 put sb into a sentimental mood, a flash of grief came upon sb, be down in spirits
例句：
A．More often than not, he would walk alone by the lake in a daze. 他经常茫然地独自在湖边走。
B.It is a truth/universally acknowledged that the Internet plays an important role in our daily life. 因特网在我们的日常生活中扮演着重要的
因为 due to, on account of, owing to
目的是，
为了 in a bid to, with the aim of, for the sake of, so as to
为……做
好准备 make full preparations for, pave the way for, lay a solid foundation for
事实上 in reality，in effect，as a matter of fact
角色，这是一个事实/全世界公认的事实。
C．The minute I heard her voice, I burst into tears.一听到她的声音，我就哭了起来。
D．If you want to be outstanding, you must first be convinced of your capability to succeed.如果你想出类拔萃，你必须首先确信自己有能力取得成功。
E．Keep an eye out for the beautiful, observe the unusual and catch sight of the surprising.留心美丽的事物，观察不寻常的事物，捕捉让人惊喜的
事物。
F.She is a good singer, and her music appeals to a much larger audience.她是个好歌手，她的音乐吸引了更多的观众。
G.Had my mother laid less emphasis on the importance of reading, I wouldn't have found my interest in it. 如果我妈妈没这么强调阅读的重要性，我不可能发现我对它的兴趣。
H．We were so worn out when we returned from the fields that we went to bed immediately.我们从田里回来时筋疲力尽，于是立即上床睡觉了。
I．At length/In the end，the ambulance came and carried away the injured.最后，救护车来了，把受伤的人带走了。
J．I tried to mull over the problem and then figure out how to solve it. 我尽力仔细考虑这个问题，然后想办法解决它。
③续写主题与相对应的高级短语
成长类 个人成长personal growth, 内心之旅inner journey, 自我探索/实现/反思/发现self－exploration/realization/reflection/discovery，发现自己的潜力和价值discover one's potential and worth，发现自己内心的力量和独特之处uncover one's inner strength and uniqueness
合作类 克服困难，建立深厚的友谊overcome difficulties and build strong bonds of friendship，相互支持、相互信任with mutual support and trust，建立牢固的友谊forge strong friendships，共同努力with joint/united/collaborative/collective efforts
决心类 面对挑战face challenges，克服障碍overcome obstacles，坚定的决心unwavering determination，展现勇气display/demonstrate courage
梦想类 不懈的努力和付出relentless efforts and dedication，追逐梦想 chase/go after/pursue one's dreams，不懈追求 relentless pursuit, 力求卓越 strive for excellence, 实现梦想 fulfill/achieve/realize one's dreams
希望类 保持乐观 stay optimistic, 坚定的毅力 unwavering perseverance, 面对挑战时的韧性 resilience in the face of challenges, 不断向前 keep pushing forward, 坚定的决心 steadfast determination，坚持和希望点亮前方的道路perseverance and hope light the way ahead，保持希望，坚持不懈，相信更美好的未来maintain hope, persevere, and believe in a brighter future
关怀类 无条件的爱 unconditional love, 关心他人 care for others, 对……表示同情 show compassion for, 发自内心的同情 heartfelt sympathy, 培养关系 nurture relationships, 珍惜当下 cherish the moment
逆境类 接受逆境 embrace adversity, 逆境中的韧性 resilience in adversity，从挫折中学习 learn from setbacks, 适应变化adapt to change, 改变人的经历a transformative experience
自信类 建立自信 build self－confidence，一个积极的自我形象a positive self－image, 提高自尊心 boost self－esteem
耐心类 培养耐心 practice patience, 展示毅力 demonstrate perseverance, 坚韧的精神 enduring spirit，持之以恒的努力 persistent efforts，坚定的承诺 steadfast commitments
感恩类 对……有强烈的感激和欣赏之情have a great sense of gratitude and appreciation for．..，对……充满感激be filled with gratitude toward．..，认可并感激某人的努力 acknowledge and appreciate one's efforts
④其他常用的高级短语
A.at the thought of 一想起……
Her enthusiasm is fading at the thought of the difficulties she is going to face.
一想到她将要面对的困难，她的热情就减退了。
B.be overwhelmed with(感情上)使(某人)感到不能自持
She was overwhelmed with fear at the thought of what she had done.
一想到自己所做过的事，她就陷入恐惧之中。
C.a pang of 一阵……的感觉
She felt a pang of envy at the thought of his success.一想到他的成功，她便感到一阵忌妒。
D.one's eyes twinkle/gleam with pleasure某人的眼睛里闪烁着愉快的光芒
She saw her mother's eyes twinkling with pleasure.
她看到母亲的眼睛里正闪烁着愉快的光芒。
E.tears blur one's vision泪水模糊视线
Dora lifted the lid of the box, tears beginning to blur her vision.朵拉打开盒盖，泪水开始模糊她的视线。
F.one's eyes are blazing with fury怒火中烧
He got to his feet and his eyes were blazing with fury. 他站起身来，怒火中烧。
G.be wide－eyed and stunned目瞪口呆
They were wide－eyed and stunned by the view from the summit of the mountain.
在山顶上看到的景色让他们目瞪口呆。
H.avert one's eyes/gaze from转移目光；背过脸
She averted her eyes from the terrible scene in front of her.
她背过脸，不去看面前可怕的场面。
3．句式要丰富、多样(精选好“句”，用得活)
(1)常用情感表达
①to one's＋情绪名词，＋主句　令某人……的是，……
Much/Greatly to my surprise，Tom won first prize in the English Speech Contest.令我非常惊讶的是，汤姆居然获得了英语演讲比赛的第一名。
②What＋情绪动词＋sb＋is/was＋that从句　使某人……的是……
What surprised me was that Tom should gave away the secret to his rivals.
使我吃惊的是汤姆竟然把秘密泄露给了他的对手。
③a feeling/sense of＋情绪名词＋welling up in sb's heart and surging through sb一股强烈的……涌上心头，涌向全身
Jane felt a great sense of horror welling up in her heart and surging through her.
简感到一股强烈的恐惧涌上心头，并涌向全身。
④a flush of＋情绪名词 一阵……
A flush of pride swept over him as he watched his children./He felt a flush of pride as he watched his children.
当他看着自己的孩子的时候， 一阵强烈的自豪感涌上心头。
⑤sb could feel one's heart pounding wildly in one's chest某人感到心在胸口怦怦直跳
I could feel my heart pounding wildly in my chest as I went on stage to collect the prize.
上台领奖时我感到心在胸口怦怦直跳。
⑥．..be close to tears 几乎要哭了
My mother was close to tears when she heard I was admitted to a key
university.当得知我被一所重点大学录取时，我妈妈差点儿就哭了。
⑦tremble/shiver/shake (with fear, panic, rage, excitement．..)(因恐惧、恐慌、愤怒、兴奋……而)颤抖
Her lips shivered with excitement and big tears rolled down her cheeks.她因激动而双唇颤抖，泪珠顺着面颊滚落下来。
⑧It was like doing sth.好像做某事。
It seemed as if/that．..好像……
We talked and talked, and it was like meeting a long－lost friend.
我们聊啊聊啊，就像遇到了一个久别的朋友。
⑨It occurred to sb＋that从句．＝It hit sb＋that从句．＝It struck sb＋that从句．＝It dawned on sb＋that从句．某人突然想到/开始明白……
It dawned on me that I didn't really need these things to be happy.
我开始明白我并不需要这些东西来让自己快乐。
⑩(idea, thought．..)occurred/came to sb＝(idea, thought．..) flashed through one's mind＝(idea, thought．..)crowded in on sb某人想到/明白……；某人有了(主意、想法……)；……闪过某人的脑海；……涌上
某人的心头
Suddenly a brilliant idea flashed through his mind.
突然他想到一个好主意。
强调句：It was only＋时间状语＋that sb felt/realized that从句．直到……时某人才感到/意识到……
It was only then that she felt that her stomach was growling.
直到那时她才感觉到她的肚子在咕咕叫。
without a second thought 不假思索；毫不犹豫
The water was freezing cold, but without a second thought that young man jumped in.水非常凉，可那个年轻人想也没想就跳了进去。
there were cheers (from．..)(从……)传来欢呼声
There were loud cheers when he went on the platform.
当他登上讲台时， 现场传来了响亮的欢呼声。
breathe a sigh of relief/sigh with relief 松了一口气
I breathed a sigh of relief as the plane landed safely./I sighed with relief as
the plane landed safely.飞机安全着陆时，我松了一口气。
One's words echoed/rang in one's ears.某人的话在某人耳边回响。
One's words/voice/song echoed/rang in one's head.某人的话/声音/歌声在某人的脑海中回响。
Her teacher's encouraging words still echoed in her ears./Her teacher's encouraging voice still rang in her head.老师鼓励的话还在她的耳边/脑海中回响。
sth be rooted/engraved in one's memory某事深深刻在某人的脑海中
The valuable lesson Mr Green taught him will be rooted in his memory forever.
格林先生给他上的宝贵的一课将会深深刻在他的脑海中。
(2)借助无灵主语
①表示地点或范围的名词作主语
Shanghai witnessed the birth of the Communist Party of China.
上海见证了中国共产党的成立。
The city boasts a beautiful lake.
这个城市拥有一个美丽的湖。
②表示时间的名词作主语
Dusk found the little girl crying in the street because she was hungry and thirsty.
黄昏时刻，那个小女孩又饿又渴，在街上哭泣。
The world history has seen more tears than laughter.
在世界历史上，泪水比欢笑多。
③表示情感状态或心理活动的名词作主语
谓语动词用creep、seize、grip、overcome、sweep、 take possession of、 desert、 tear等词语。
Fear gripped the village.这个村庄笼罩在恐惧之中。
Courage deserted him.他没有了勇气。
Anxiety tore him into pieces.
他焦虑万分，肝肠寸断。
A chill of horror suddenly swept over him.
他突然感到不寒而栗。
Anger choked her words.
她气得说不出话来。
Despair seized him at the thought of his setting out alone to renew the weary quest for work.
一想到他又要一个人出去重新登上找工作的艰辛路途，他觉得万念俱灰。
Astonishment deprived me of my power of speech.
我惊讶得说不出话来。
④表示动作的名词作主语
A glance through his office window offers a panoramic view of the town.
从他办公室的窗户可以一眼看到城镇的全景。
The thought of seeing her son very soon filled her heart with great happiness.
一想到不久就要见到她的儿子，她心中感到十分快乐。
⑤表示自然现象的名词作主语
The night breeze brought him the perfume of the flower.夜晚微风徐徐，他闻到了花的香味。
An earthquake comes like a thief in the night, without warning.
地震到来，犹如夜贼，毫无预兆。
⑥表示情景的名词作主语
The softness of the earth gave him an idea.
松软的泥土让他突然有了个主意。
The beautiful scenery gained the place quite a reputation.美景使这个地方
颇有名气。
(3)语法结构升级
①with/without结构
With his heart racing, the boy pretended to be annoyed.男孩心跳加速，假装很生气。
As a saying goes, “Living without an aim is like sailing without a compass.”
正如一句谚语所说：“生活没有目标，就像航海没有指南针。”
②so．..that．..句型及“so＋adj./adv.”置于句首引起的部分倒装
She performed so elegantly that the entire class was totally absorbed in it.她表演得如此优雅，以至于全班同学都沉浸其中。
So cold was the weather that we had to stay at home.天气太冷，我们只好待在家里。
③no sooner．..than．..、 hardly．..when．..及否定词few、little、 seldom、 not until、 no longer等置于句首引起的部分倒装
No sooner had the performance begun than the lights went out, leaving
the audience in the dark.
演出一开始，灯就熄灭了，观众们处于一片漆黑中。
④“only＋状语”置于句首引起的部分倒装
Only with our joint efforts can we live in harmony with nature.只有通过我们的共同努力，我们才能与自然和谐相处。
⑤there be 句式
Nowadays, there are so many people who start to protect the environment that our city is becoming more and more beautiful.现在，有这么多人
开始保护环境，以至于我们的城市正变得越来越美丽。
⑥not only．..but also．..及not only置于句首引起的部分倒装
Not only will our club's works be displayed, but we will also have a valuable set of paper cutting created by a famous artist of this field.
我们不仅会展示我们俱乐部的作品，而且我们还有一套由该领域著名艺术家创作的珍贵剪纸。
⑦as引导让步状语从句的部分倒装
Tired as she was, Judy still patiently comforted the old lady.
尽管很累，但朱迪仍然耐心地安慰着那个老妇人。
⑧形容词(短语)作状语
Cold and frightened, he couldn't help trembling.
又冷又害怕，他禁不住颤抖起来。
⑨only to do 表示出乎意料的结果
I turned around, only to see my car move suddenly away from me.
我转过身来，看见我的车突然离开了我。
⑩独立主格结构
She roared, tears streaming down.
她怒吼着，眼泪流了下来。
but for/without 引起的虚拟语气
But for/Without Norwood's quick thinking, she couldn't have been rescued and recovered so well.
要不是诺伍德思维敏捷，她不可能获救并恢复得这么好。
非谓语动词 having done
Having walked for quite a long time，she found herself lost.
她走了很长时间后发现自己迷路了。
强调句型：it is/was＋被强调部分＋that/who．..
It is working in teams instead of on my own that has freed me of trouble and made my work more efficient.
正是团队合作而不是单打独斗，使我摆脱了麻烦，让我的工作更有效率。
虚拟语气
He looked through the photo album, wishing that he had joined the party last night.
他翻看相册，真希望自己也参加了昨晚的派对。
while doing．.. 状语从句的省略
While wandering in the street, I heard my name called.
当我在街上闲逛时，我听见有人叫我的名字。
as soon as/the moment/the instant/immediately/ directly/instantly．.. 一……就……
As soon as/The moment/The instant/Immediately/Directly/Instantly I entered the classroom, my teacher asked me why I was so late.
我一进教室，老师就问我为什么来这么晚。
(4)巧用修辞
①明喻
Reading is to the mind what food is to the body.(A is to B what/as C is to D)
阅读之于大脑正如食物之于身体。
Kyle stared at the test paper with his head as blank as his notebook.
凯尔茫然地看着试卷，头脑如同他的笔记本一样空白。
The book has accompanied me for quite a long time like an old friend.
这本书陪伴了我很久，就像一位老朋友似的。
②暗喻
Laughter is the sun that drives winter from the human face.
笑容如阳光，驱散人脸上的寒冬。
Life is an unexplored river, full of twists and turns.
生活就像一条未被涉足的河流，充满了曲折。
I felt a lump in my throat, with tears welling up in my eyes.
我感到喉咙哽咽，泪水夺眶而出。
③夸张
Peter was scared to death with a pale look.
彼得脸色苍白，吓得要死。
The young girl brought the house down with her performance.
这个年轻女孩的表演博得了满堂喝彩。
Gloria was hungry enough to eat up an elephant.
格洛丽亚饿得可以吃掉一头大象。
For she was extremely fair, her beauty made the bright world dim, and everything beside her seemed like the fleeting image of a shade.
她是绝代佳人，她的美使明亮的世界黯然失色，使身边万物犹如过眼烟云。
④拟人
The summer breeze brushed/rubbed/kissed my face gently, so I was overwhelmed by a sense of relief.
夏天的微风轻轻地抚摸着我的脸，我有一种如释重负的感觉。
The drizzle kissed me on the cheek tenderly.
细雨轻轻地亲吻着我的脸颊。
I could hear birds singing/chirping around as if they welcomed my arrival.
我能听到鸟儿在周围歌唱，好像在欢迎我的到来。
The church has witnessed the city's overwhelming/considerable changes in the past 20 years.
这个教堂见证了这个城市在过去20年间翻天覆地的变化。
⑤押韵
Faith, family and friendship have been not only constant for me but a source of personal comfort and reassurance.信仰、家人和友谊对我来说
不仅是永恒的，而且也是给我带来慰藉和心安的源泉。
The family takes pride in sticking to its companies through thick and thin.
家族为能与公司风雨同舟而感到自豪。
How and why he had come to Princeton, New Jersey is a story of struggle, success，and sadness.
他是如何以及为何来到新泽西州的普林斯顿的，这是一个充满奋斗、成功和悲伤的故事。
Tom rushed at her, held her arms and looked at her from head to toe to
make sure she was safe and sound.
汤姆冲向她，抓住她的胳膊，从头到脚看了看她，确保她安然无恙。
(5)动作链构造法
①动作两连或三连结构(A、 B and C结构)
The boys rushed excitedly to the pool, took off their clothes and jumped into the water.
男孩们兴奋地冲到游泳池边，脱下衣服，跳进水里。
She dashed forward, knelt down and gathered her son into her arms.
她冲上前去，跪下来，把儿子抱在怀里。
He stopped, introduced himself and proceeded to change the blown－out tire.
他停下来，做了自我介绍，然后着手去更换爆胎。
He stood up, hugged his parents, and smiled, trying not to let his emotions get the better of him.
他站起来，拥抱他的父母，微笑着，试图不让他的情绪失控。
My dad and I put on our new cowboy hats, got on our horses, and headed
slowly toward the mountains.我和爸爸戴上新的牛仔帽，骑上马，慢慢地向群山走去。
②非谓语结构
She ran toward the bank, crying and shouting in the rain, trying to catch up with the ship but in vain.
她朝岸边跑去，在雨中哭泣和喊叫，试图赶上船，但没赶上。
His shoulders shaking, and his voice quivering, Jack was at a loss what to do next.
他的肩膀抖动着，他的声音颤抖着，杰克对下一步该怎么办不知所措。
Facing the whole class, Tom cleared his throat, greeted everyone politely and then began his recitation.面对全班同学，汤姆清了清嗓子，礼貌地和大家打招呼，然后开始背诵。
Sitting around the camp fire, we talked and laughed.我们坐在篝火旁，聊着、笑着。
③时间状语从句
As I was removing the jack, a heavy truck went flying past us at top speed.
在我正移开千斤顶的时候，一辆重型卡车以最快速度飞一般地经过我们身边。
As we said goodbye, I reached into my pocket and offered him a $20 bill for his help.
在我们道别的时候，我把手伸进口袋，拿出20美元给他来感谢他的帮助。
When I arrived there, I walked to the door and knocked.
当我到达那里时，我走到门口敲门。
④混合结构
Burning with anger, he glared at me with his big frightening eyes, yelling, “You're such an idiot！”
(此处的burning with anger是情感描写，glare和yell是动作链，同时将情感描写和动作描写结合在了一起，形成了饱满的动作结构，属于高分表达。) 他怒火中烧，用他那可怕的大眼睛瞪着我，喊道：“你真是个笨蛋！”
As night was beginning to fall, Jane sat on the grass, staring at the vast sky, frightened and ravenous.
夜幕降临，简坐在草地上，望着广阔的天空，既害怕又饥饿。
Facing the four strong men, the wolf might feel threatened, starting to withdraw.面对这四个壮汉，狼可能会感到受到威胁，开始撤退。