人教版高中英语选择性必修第二册Unit 1 Section Ⅴ Writing课件

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Reading for writing
Reading Passage 1
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Reading Passage 2
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Writing after reading
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Are you familiar with the people in the picture below
They are the greatest scientists in different fileds.
Qian Xuesen
Stephen Hawking
How much do you know about them？
1911:________in Hangzhou, Zhejiang Province
1934：graduated from____________________
_________
PH.D degree：___________and mathematics
Occupation:_________ and researcher
1955: __________ China
1956: _______ the first research institute of rockets ans missiles
Title(头衔): Father of ______________
October 31,2009:_______________
Famous saying：
____________ is in China;
_____________is in China;
_____________ is in China.
returned to
China’s Missiles
aerospace
teacher
Born in
Shanghai Jiao Tong
University
set up
passed away
My career
My success
My destination
Reading Passage 1
Para Main idea Linking words
1
2
3
4
5
6
7
Introduction
Personal experience—________
Personal experience —
_______________________
______________________
Personal experience —
_____________________
Personal experience —
______________________
Personality
His death and people's
commemoration of him
However after
At that time
nevertheless
Because
However
title
A biography—Qian Xuesen
education
further education abroad and achievements
returning to motherland
great achievements
衔接词语(linking words)是语篇衔接的纽带, 表达的逻辑意义包括时间关系、空间关系、列举和顺序、例证、递进、对比和转折、等同和替换、过渡和总结、结果和推论等, 其中多数是衔接性状语。
Qian was born in Shanghai
Under Qian’ s ___________and his research, China developed ____________________and successfully lauched ________________ ______.
2009 Qian _______________
1911
Qian switched his major to _________ because China needed _________________.
aviation
powerful air force
patriotic,
selfless
Qian went to the US in 1935 to _________ his graduate studies , and became a ________ in American jet and rocket techonlogy.
pursue
pioneer
gifted/excellent/
outstanding; knowledgeable
Qian __________________________and returned to China , and was put in charge of developing_________________________ and _________________________.Though there were no ___________ in rock science, Qian took on the challenge.
overcame some difficulties
talents or experts
China’s rocket science
space and missile programme
determined , fearless, confident,
devoted,
pioneering, hardworking,
creative
leadership
the Dongfeng missles
first man-made satellite
1932
1930s-1940s
1955
-1970
1955-1970
Read carefully and find out the time and events, and summarize Qian’s qualities.
passed away
1. What made him “the father of China’s areospace”
2. Beside the personal qualities we summarized , what aspect of Qian xuesen also impressed you a lot
Much of the technology behind the Shenzhou rockets was based on his research.
—para5
Thinking
What might have made him such an outstanding and creative scientist was probably his strong interest in other things, such as music and drawing. His deep appreciation for art often gave him inspiration in his scientific research.
—para6
Thinking
Scientific Spirits
+
Tireless Efforts
=
A Great Scientist
Multiple Interests
Reading Passage 2
Watch the video and learn about Stephen Hawking.
Para Main idea Linking words
1
2
3
A biography—Stephen Hawking
Introduction
How he first
achieved fame
Personal qualities
besides,
furthermore,
above all
in general,
the first,
the other
_______________ make the article coherent and logical.
Linking words
Read the text again and complete the mind map.
Supporters
Two popular theories
Hawking pointed out that _____________
____________________________
The truth
The big bang theory was proven by
_____________________
Supporting evidence
Qualities
the steady state theory
the big bang theory
Fred Hoyle
Stephen Hawking
Hoyle made a mistake in his maths.
astronomers with telescopes
wrong
Stephen Hawking was one of the most famous and gifted scientists in physics. Most people are familiar with images of him in his wheelchair, unable to move and using a computer to talk. Since he came down with a disease which caused him to lose the use of most of his muscles, his world became one of abstract thought.
开始患上某种疾病。
Para. 1
1. Why was Stephen in a world of pure thought
Para. 2
The biggest champion of the steady state concept was Fred Hoyle, a professor at Cambridge. During the question and answer period after one of Hoyle’s lectures, Hawking stood up and pointed out that Hoyle had made a mistake in his maths. Once the maths was corrected, it showed that the big bang theory—and not the steady state theory—was true. Hawking’s own work on the big bang theory was soon proven by astronomers with telescopes. A star was born.
2. How was Hawking’s own theory proven correct
Para. 3
So, what made Stephen Hawking a genius Besides being brilliant, he was brave, though sometimes careless in what he said or did. He was willing to say what others were afraid to say, and to dream of what others were afraid to dream about. Furthermore, he was quite determined. This had helped him as a scientist, and had helped him even more in his fight against his disease. Above all, Hawking was willing to admit his faults. This odd combination of characteristics had made him one of the greatest thinkers of the 20th and 21st centuries.
3. What made Hawking a genius
brave
gifted\
brilliant
determined
honest
Personality & Qualities
Apart from being clever, what are the most important
qualities a scientist must have to be successful
patriotic;selfless;gifted;outstanding; knowledgeable ;
devoted;fearless;pioneering; hardworking, knowledgeable ; determined;
brilliant;brave;
be willing to say what others were afraid;
to dream of what others were afraid to dream about ;
willing to admit his/her faults;
serve his/her homeland with effort;
not let the difficulty disourage him/her
The Father of China’s Aerospace
A World of Pure Thought
follow the time order
1. show the logic between sentences
2. tie the ideas together
1. born in Hangzhou in 1911
2. after the Songhu Battle broke out in 1932
3. over the course of the 1930s and 1940s
4. under Qian's leadership
5. followed by
6. in 1970
1. however
2. nevertheless
3. because
4. in general
5. besides
6. furthermore
7. above all
Further reading
Writing skill:Circle the linking words and phrases and describe sum up their function
衔接词语(linking words)是语篇衔接的纽带, 表达的逻辑意义包括时间关系、空间关系、列举和顺序、例证、递进、对比和转折、等同和替换、过渡和总结、结果和推论等, 其中多数是衔接性状语。
Summary
Scientific Spirit
Pragraph 1: Brief introduction
Pragraph 2: Quality 1
Pragraph 3: Quality 2
Pragraph 4: Quality 3
...
significance of the scientific spirit& inspiration you get from it
story
story
story
in time order,
using linking words and phrases
Writing after reading
According to the two articles, What will be included in your essay if you are writing about a great person
Pre-writing
Writing
Write about a scientist you admire, focusing on his/her personalities and qualities that make him/her a great scientist, with evidence.
The scientist I admire
Pragraph 1:________
___________
Pragraph 2:________
Pragraph 3:________
Pragraph 4:________
...
Last para: _______________________
_______________________________
story
story
in _____order,
using linking words and phrases
Quality 1
Quality 2
Quality 3
Brief
Introduction
time
significance of the scientific spirit& inspiration you get from it
Structure
题目：你要为英语校报写一篇报道，介绍科学家Marie Curie(MadameCurie)及其伟大精神，以激发学生们努力奋进，勇攀科学高峰。信息如下：
出生日期：1867年11月7日
出 生 地：波兰一个知识分子家庭
兴趣爱好：自幼对物理及阅读兴趣很浓。
经历：当时波兰不允许女子上大学，她去法国深造并获得物理学位。
主要成就：发现镭，获得诺贝尔奖。伟大品质：意志坚强，有决心。
评价：对科学界做出巨大贡献，被认为是最伟大的女性科学家。
你的感悟：弱者等待时机，强者创造时机。
　　
Writing---Outline
a physicist
known as Madame Curie
born in 1867

Para 2
Achievement
Qualities Use specific details
Give examples

achieved great success in discovering radium
win the Nobel Prize
Para 3
Comments
Inspiration
regarded as the greatest woman scientist
Writing---making sentences
1. 玛丽·居里，也被称为居里夫人，在她年轻的时候就表现出了对物理的极大兴趣。
Marie Curie, Madame Curie, showed great interest in physics she was young.
2. 她于1867年出生于波兰的一个知识分子家庭。
She an intellectual family in Polandon in1867.
also known as
was born into
, Marie Curie, also known as Madame Curie, showed great interest in physics when she was young.
when
Born into an intellectual family in Polandon in1867
变为高级句式 v.作状语
Writing---making sentences
3. 居里夫人有坚强的意志和巨大的决心。
Madame Curie and great determination.
4.居里夫人在发现镭方面取得了巨大的成功。
Madame Curie discovering radium.
5. 镭的发现使她获得了诺贝尔奖。
Discovering radium win the Nobel Prize.
had strong will
enabled her to
and great determination, Madame Curie achieved great success in discovering radium, enabled
her to win the Nobel Prize.
achieved great success in
变为高级句式 with作状语 +定语从句
With strong will
which
Writing---making sentences
6. 我最佩服居里夫人对科学的态度。
I admire Madame Curieheld's science most.
7. 它就是弱者等待机会，强者创造机会。
It is the weak wait for opportunities create them.
attitude towards
while the strong
I admire Madame Curieheld's attitude towards science most, is that the weak wait for opportunities while the strong create them.
that
变为高级句式 非限制性定语从句
which
Writing---making the essay
Born into an intellectual family in Polandon in1867, a physicist,Marie Curie, also known as Madame Curie, showed great interest in physics when she was young.
Because of having no chance of being admitted to a university in Poland as a woman at that time, she went to France for further studies and received a degree in physics.With strong will and great determination, Madame Curie achieved great success in discovering radium, which enabled herto win the Nobel Prize. Not only did she make great contributions to the world of science but she is regarded as the greatest woman scientist on account of what she did.
I admire Madame Curieheld's attitude towards science most,which is that the weak wait for opportunities while the strong create them.
Pair work---polish the essay
Exchange drafts with a partner and use the checklist to help you review his/her draft.
1.Does the writer explain clearly the personal qualities that make up the scientific spirit
2.Does the writer give examples from the lives of the scientist(s) to illustrate the points
3.Does the writer use appropriate linking words and phrases to tie the ideas together
4.Does the writer use separate paragraphs,each with its own function
根据以下信息用英语写一篇短文介绍袁隆平教授。
基本信息
1.1937年9月7日出生于中国重庆。自幼刻苦学习,酷爱农业科学；
2.自从1953 年大学毕业以后,他已经研究水稻近半个世纪,一直在为世界农业默默耕耘。
主要成绩
3.由于他的研究,我国水稻产量快速增长, 为很多国家解决了粮食不足的问题;他被誉为“杂交水稻之父” (“Father of Hybrid Rice”);
4.由于他对世界的贡献，他获奖甚多；在2019年，他被授予“共和国勋章”(“Medal of the Republic”);
5.虽然他很出名, 但是他过着简朴的生活，不计名利;
6.2021年5月22日，袁隆平，在湖南长沙逝世，享年91岁。