Unit 1 Animal friends书面表达15篇
（单元话题：动物）
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
一、书面表达
1．以“A Trip to the Zoo”为题，写一篇80~100词的短文，包含以下要点：
1. 参观动物园的时间、地点和同伴；
2. 描述看到的动物及其行为（至少两种）；
3. 你或他人是否遵守规则（如投喂、拍照、路径等）；
4. 结果与感受（规则的重要性）。
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2．请根据以下要点提示，写一篇短文介绍你最喜欢的动物——大熊猫。
要点：
1.大熊猫拥有黑白相间的皮毛，看起来很可爱；
2.它们生活在中国四川、陕西等地的森林和山区；
3.它们喜欢吃竹子，每天花很多时间吃东西和睡觉；
4.大熊猫是中国的象征之一，目前世界上仅存大约2,000只野生大熊猫，因此我们会尽力保护它们。
要求：
1.包含所有要点，可适当发挥；
2.词数80左右，短文标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数。
My favourite animal—the giant panda
There are many kinds of animals in the world, _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
3．假如你是李华，你的外国笔友Tom得知你最近养了只兔子当宠物, 想多了解它的相关信息。请根据以下表格，写一篇90词左右的回信。
Name Jimmy
Age 2 years old
Looks long ears, red eyes, a short tail
Food vegetables, fruit
Activities run after me, play on the grass
注意事项：
1. 短文须包含表格中所有内容，可以适当发挥。
2. 开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
3. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。
Dear Tom,
How are you these days Now let me tell you something about my pet. It’s a rabbit. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Please tell me about your pet in the next email.
Yours,
Li Hua
4．你喜欢聪明而强壮的大象吗？在泰国大象是好运的象征。然而大象又是世界上的濒危动物之一，我们怎么才能够挽救大象呢？请你根据提示内容，写一篇英语短文介绍你心目中的大象。要求：不少于80词。
提示内容：strong and clever a symbol of good luck huge large ears and long trunks in danger save the elephants
There are many kinds of animals in the world. My favorite animal is the elephant. I love elephants because ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I hope people can save elephants.
5．某英文网站正在开展以“人类的好朋友——动物”的专题征文活动。请你以My favorite animal为题写一篇短文，向该网站投稿，介绍你最喜欢的一种动物，描写它的外貌并阐述你喜欢它的原因。
提示问题：
1. What does it look like
2. What can it do
3. What is it like
4. Why do you like it
注意：
（1）文中不得出现人名或校名等真实信息；
（2）词数为80左右。
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6．学校英语社团要求你们写一篇主题为爱护动、植物的倡议性文章。根据提示，完成作文。
内容要点：
（1）动、植物为人类做什么
（2）动、植物对人类生活的重要性
（3）如何爱护动、植物
注意：
（1）作文必须包含上述内容要点
（2）词数60-80，开头已给出，不计入总词数
（3）不可透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息；否则不予评分
Protect man’s friends
Animals and plants are our friends. They help us a lot in our daily lives.
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7．动物是人类的好朋友，学校英语社团正在举行主题为“My favourite animal”的故事分享会，假设你是李华，请写一篇短文来介绍一下你最喜欢的动物吧。
内容：
（1）你最喜欢的动物是什么？
（2）它长什么样子？
（3）你是如何与它相处的（例如：带它一起散步、玩游戏等）？
要求：
（1）词数不少于60，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
（2）须包括所有要点提示，并适当补充，语句通顺，内容连贯；
（3）文中不得出现个人真实姓名、学校信息等。
Hello, I’m Li Hua. My favourite animal is
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8．你校英文报“人与自然”栏目对蓝鲸进行了报道，并决定在校内组织一次英语演讲活动，以此呼吁大家从小事做起，保护动物，人人有责。假如你参加此次活动，请根据要点提示完成演讲稿，并不少于60个字。
(注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、班级及其他相关信息，否则不予评分)
注意涵盖以下信息：
Situation (现状)：only 3,000 blue whales, die…
Reason (原因)：kill, not enough food, no safe places…
Steps (措施)：stop, make…
Dear friends,
As we all know, _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
9．假如你是Li Ming，你在动物园做义务导游，请你向外国朋友介绍中国的国宝 (national treasure)——大熊猫。请根据以下提示，以“Cute Panda”为题写一篇短文，80词左右。
要求：
1、熊猫是你最喜欢的动物，以及喜欢的原因……
2、描述大熊猫来自哪里以及外貌特征
3、大熊猫的喜好和生存现状
4、熊猫是国宝、是中国的象征，因此我们应该尽力保护他们，至少列举2种保护大熊猫的方法。
提示词：forest森林；bamboo竹子；protect保护
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10．假如你是李华，请根据下列提示问题，用英语写一篇短文介绍自己最喜欢的动物——熊猫，词数50-70 词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
提示:
1. What do they look like
2. Why do you like them
3. Where do they come from
4. What food do they like
提示词：round 圆圆的 bamboo 竹子 Sichuan 四川
My Favorite Animal—Pandas
My name is Li Hua. ____________________________________________________________________
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11．假设你有一只宠物或喜欢的动物朋友，以My Animal Friend为题写一篇短文介绍它，包括：
1. 外貌特征；
2. 特殊能力或习性；
3. 你如何照顾它。
（词数：60—70）文章中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。
My Animal Friend
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12．动物是人类的好朋友。学校的英语俱乐部正在举行“Animal Week”征文活动。假如你是英语俱乐部的一名成员，请你根据以下提示，用英语写一篇短文介绍你最喜欢的动物。
注意：
1.词数80左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2.文中应包括所给内容要点，可适当发挥，使文章连贯；
3.文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等信息。
Animals are our good friends.
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13．憨态可掬的大熊猫是中国的国宝，人们喜欢它。请根据表格中的信息写一篇短文介绍你心目中的熊猫。
要求：
1. 不少于80词；
2. 包含所有要点内容，可适当发挥；
3. 语句通顺，语法正确。
Name Panda
Color Black and white
Birthplace China
What it eats Bamboo leaves (竹叶)
Why people like it Gentle (温和的) and cute
What it can do Climb the trees and swim
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14．假设你是动物园的管理员，请你根据以下提示，向游客介绍动物园。
1. 动物园里有各种各样的动物，列举四种以上。
2. 介绍2至3种动物的主要特征。
3. 欢迎大家来动物园参观。
参考词汇： all kinds of， friendly，national treasure，fierce
要求：
1. 词数70词左右；
2. 必须包含以上所有要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 文章中不得涉及真实的人名、校名、地名。
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15．假设你是复兴，要参加一个主题为“Animals in Danger”的英语演讲比赛，请根据以下提示，写一篇英语演讲稿，倡导大家携手守护动物，为它们创造美好家园。
要点：1. Which animals are in danger
2. Why are they in danger
3. What can we do to protect (保护) them
要求：1. 必须包含所有要点，可适当发挥；
2. 文中不得透露个人信息；
3. 词数70左右 (首尾两段已给出，不计入总词数) 。
(参考词：friends，in danger，cut down)
Animals in Danger
Hello, everyone! I am Fu Xing. Today I want to talk about animals in danger. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Thanks for listening!Unit 1 Animal friends书面表达15篇
（单元话题：动物）
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
参考答案
1．范文
A Trip to the Zoo
Last Sunday, I visited the zoo with my classmates. We saw many interesting animals. In the monkey area, some monkeys were climbing trees and playing with each other. Then, we watched beautiful peacocks showing their colorful feathers. During the trip, everyone followed the rules. We didn’t feed the animals and stayed on the right path. This made our visit safe and enjoyable. I learned that rules are important. They protect both animals and visitors. We all had a wonderful time.
[总体分析]
①题材：话题作文；
②时态：一般过去时；
③提示：需包含四个给定要点，按事件发展顺序叙述。
[写作步骤]
第一步：开门见山交代时间、地点、人物；
第二步：按题目要求描述两种动物的行为；
第三步：说明遵守规则的情况并阐述感受。
[亮点词汇]
①climbing trees爬树
②each other互相
③have a wonderful time玩得开心
[高分句型]
①In the monkey area, some monkeys were climbing trees and playing with each other. (and并列结构)
②I learned that rules are important. (宾语从句)
2．例文
My favourite animal—the giant panda
There are many kinds of animals in the world, but my favourite is the giant panda.
Giant pandas are very cute animals with black-and-white fur. They usually live in the forests and mountains of Sichuan and Shaanxi. They mainly live on bamboo. They seem to be lazy because they spend much time eating and sleeping.
Giant pandas are one of the greatest symbols of China. Nevertheless, now there are only about 2,000 wild giant pandas in the world. In fact, they are in great danger. We must try our best to save them.
[总体分析]
①题材：话题作文；
②时态：一般现在时；
③提示：围绕大熊猫的皮毛外观、栖息地、生活习性、象征意义及保护现状展开，重点突出其可爱特征和保护必要性。
[写作步骤]
第一步：用1-2句话引出主题，表达大熊猫是最喜欢的动物；
第二步：描述皮毛颜色和栖息地点，覆盖要点1和2；
第三步：介绍饮食习性、象征意义及保护呼吁，覆盖要点3和4；
[亮点词汇]
①spend much time doing sth花费大量时间做某事
②in the world在世界上
③in great danger处于极大危险之中
[高分句型]
①Giant pandas are very cute animals with black-and-white fur.（介词短语作后置定语）
②They seem to be lazy because they spend much time eating and sleeping. Giant pandas look shy and quiet.（because引导的原因状语从句）
3．例文
Dear Tom,
How are you these days Now let me tell you something about my pet. It’s a rabbit.
His name is Jimmy and he is 2 years old. He has long ears, red eyes and a short tail. He looks cute and lovely. He’s very quiet and seldom makes any sound. Jimmy eats fruit and vegetables every day, and his favorite food is carrots. When I come home from school, he always runs after me. I often take him out for a walk in my free time. He enjoys playing on the grass. We have so much fun together. I think he is the best pet in the world.
Please tell me about your pet in the next email.
Yours,
Li Hua
[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要求根据提示内容介绍自己的宠物，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，引出对宠物的介绍；
第二步，具体介绍宠物的相关信息；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①eat fruit and vegetables吃果蔬
②run after追逐
③enjoy doing sth享受做某事
[高分句型]
①His name is Jimmy and he is 2 years old.（and 连接并列句）
②When I come home from school, he always runs after me.（When引导的时间状语从句）
4．例文
There are many kinds of animals in the world. My favorite animal is the elephant. I love elephants because they are strong and clever. They have huge bodies, large ears, and long trunks, which help them drink water and pick up food.
In Thailand, elephants are a symbol of good luck. However, they are now in danger because of hunting and habitat loss. To save the elephants, we should protect their homes and stop buying ivory products.
Elephants are friendly and intelligent. They can remember places and help people with work. So we should do our best to protect these amazing animals.
I hope people can save elephants.
[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；
② 时态：主要使用一般现在时；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点明主题 —— 表明自己最爱的动物是大象，并简述喜爱原因及大象的核心身体特征；
第二步，介绍大象的文化意义，转而阐述其当前濒危的现状及原因，并提出具体的保护措施；
第三步，补充大象的其他优点，最后表达希望更多人采取行动保护大象的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
① a symbol of... ……的象征
② in danger 处于危险中
③ habitat loss 栖息地丧失
④ take action 采取行动
[高分句型]
They have huge bodies, large ears, and long trunks, which help them drink water and pick up food.（定语从句）
5．例文：
My Favorite Animal
My favorite animal is the dog. It usually has a furry body and a wagging tail. Dogs can run fast and guard our homes. They are friendly and smart. Once my dog helped me find my lost keys. I like dogs because they are loyal and bring me happiness. They are really our good friends.
[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文。
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”。
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意要点齐全，可适当补充。
[写作步骤]
第一步，点明主题。以“我最喜欢的动物是狗”引出下文，明确要介绍的对象。
第二步，具体描述动物特征与事例。先描述狗的外形和能力，再讲其性格，并通过的具体事例增强真实感。
第三步，阐述喜爱原因与总结。说明喜欢狗是因为它们忠诚且能带来快乐，最后以“他们是我们的好朋友”收尾，升华对狗的情感。
[亮点词汇]
①furry毛茸茸的
②wagging摇摆的
③loyal忠诚的
[高分句型]
①I like dogs because they are loyal and bring me happiness. (because引导的原因状语从句)
6．例文
Protect man’s friends
Animals and plants are our friends. They help us a lot in our daily lives.
Plants give us food, clean air and beautiful places. Animals provide us with food, clothes and help in work. They are very important because they make our world lively and keep nature in balance.
We must protect them. Don’t pick wild flowers or hurt small animals. Plant more trees and be kind to animals. Let’s take action to protect our friends together!
[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接上文，点题，说明动植物对我们的重要性；
第二步，具体介绍动植物能为人类做什么以及对人类生活重要性以及如何爱护动植物；
第三步，书写结语，号召大家一起保护动植物。
[亮点词汇]
①provide sb. with sth.为某人提供某物
②be kind to善待
③take action to do sth.采取行动做某事
[高分句型]
①They are very important because they make our world lively and keep nature in balance.（because引导的原因状语从句）
②Plant more trees and be kind to animals.（祈使句）
7．例文
Hello, I’m Li Hua. My favourite animal is a dog. We have a small dog in my family. He is brown with curly hair. We call him Peter. I love him very much.
Every morning, I get up early and take him for a walk outside. Then we play some games for some time. In the evening, I do my homework and he sits next to me. He doesn’t make any noise.
That’s my favourite animal. Do you like him
[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：应注意题干给出的要点并适当补充，使文章内容充实。
[写作步骤]
第一步，借用文章已给开头，引出主题，介绍最喜欢的动物是什么以及它长什么样子；
第二步，第二段介绍与最喜欢的动物的相处日常；
第三步，书写结语，再次强调最喜欢的动物。
[亮点词汇]
①get up起床
②have a walk散步
[高分句型]
Every morning, I get up early and take him for a walk outside. （and连接的并列句）
8．例文：
Dear friends,
As we all know, blue whales are in great danger. There are only about 3,000 left worldwide, and many die due to human activities. They are killed for their body parts, and they also face food shortages and loss of safe habitats. We must act now! Stop buying whale products, reduce plastic pollution to keep oceans clean, and support marine protection. Remember, every small action counts. Protecting animals is protecting ourselves. Let’s start today!
[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要求根据提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍蓝鲸的现状；
第二步，介绍蓝鲸面临生存威胁的原因；
第三步，给出措施建议。
[亮点词汇]
①be in great danger 处于极大的危险中
②due to 由于
③face food shortages 面临食物短缺的情况
④reduce plastic pollution 减少塑料污染
[高分句型]
①There are only about 3,000 left worldwide, and many die due to human activities. （There be句型和并列句）
②Stop buying whale products, reduce plastic pollution to keep oceans clean, and support marine protection. （祈使句）
9．例文：
Cute Panda
Pandas are my favourite animals. I think they are the cutest animals in the world.
Pandas are from China. They have black-and-white fur. Their chubby bodies and big black eyes make them look really lovely. They love eating bamboo and living in quiet forests.
However, because people cut down forests, there are fewer pandas. As China’s national treasure, pandas are a symbol of China. We must protect them. First, we can build more nature reserves to give them safe homes. Second, planting more bamboo helps provide enough food. Let’s protect these cute friends!
[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：主要采用“一般现在时”；
③提示：文章应该包括所有提示信息，要适当补充，使文章内容充实；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍最喜欢的动物是大熊猫及原因；
第二步，介绍大熊猫的产地、特征以及爱好；
第三步，阐述大熊猫的生存现状，并呼吁对其进行保护。
[亮点词汇]
①look really lovely看起来非常可爱
②a symbol of象征
③provide enough food提供足够食物
[高分句型]
①I think they are the cutest animals in the world. (宾语从句)
②However, because people cut down forests, there are fewer pandas. (because引导原因状语从句)
10．范文一
My Favorite Animal—Pandas
My name is Li Hua. My favorite animals are pandas. They are really lovely. Pandas are black and white. They have round bodies and big eyes and they always make me happy.
Pandas love eating bamboo. They live in the forests in Sichuan, China. They spend most of their time eating and playing.
I love these cute animals!
范文二
My Favorite Animal—Pandas
My name is Li Hua. My favorite animal is the panda. Pandas are black and white with round faces. They look very cute. I like them because they are lovely and playful. Pandas come from China, and we can see them in Sichuan. Their favorite food is bamboo. I hope everyone can protect pandas.
[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作提示已给出，注意不要遗漏任何要点，适当发挥，使上下文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，点明最喜欢的动物是大熊猫；
第二步，具体介绍大熊猫；
第三步，书写结语，呼吁大家保护大熊猫。
[亮点词汇]
①round faces圆脸
②come from来自
[高分句型]
①I like them because they are lovely and playful.（because引导原因状语从句）
②I hope everyone can protect pandas.（宾语从句）
11．例文
My Animal Friend
My pet is a cat named Mimi. She has soft, white fur and bright blue eyes. Mimi loves to play. She can jump high and often runs after balls around the house. Sometimes, she climbs onto the sofa.
I take care of Mimi by feeding her twice a day and cleaning her litter box regularly. I also play with her every evening to keep her happy and healthy. Mimi is not just a pet; she is my best friend!
[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为一般现在时；
③提示：写作要点已给出，涵盖宠物的名字、外貌、喜好以及与 “我” 的关系等，注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，先介绍 Mimi 的名字及外貌特征，包括毛发和眼睛。
第二步，再根据提示内容描述 Mimi 喜欢的活动以及 “我” 对 Mimi 的照顾，最后点明 Mimi 与 “我” 的特殊关系。
[亮点词汇]
①bright blue eyes明亮的蓝色眼睛
②twice a day一天两次
③around the house在房子周围
[高分句型]
①She has soft, white fur and bright blue eyes.（and 连接两个名词短语，描述外貌）
②I also play with her every evening to keep her happy and healthy.（动词不定式作目的状语）
12．例文
Animals are our good friends. My favorite animal is the dog. Dogs are very smart and friendly. They can be our best friends. My pet dog has brown fur and big, bright eyes. It likes to wag its tail when it sees me. We play together every day. It can catch balls and understand some commands. It always makes me happy.
I love dogs because they are loyal and bring joy to our lives. We should be kind to all animals.
[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：应注意题干给出的要点并适当补充，使文章内容充实。
[写作步骤]
第一步，借用文章已给开头，引出主题；
第二步，根据题干的要点，介绍自己最喜欢的动物；
第三步，号召大家对动物友好，并收尾。
[亮点词汇]
①best friends 最好的朋友
②every day 每天
[高分句型]
①I love dogs because they are loyal and bring joy to our lives.（原因状语从句）
13．例文
The giant panda, with its black and white fur and gentle eyes, is China’s national treasure and deeply loved by people. Born in the mountains of China, pandas spend most of their time eating bamboo leaves, which make up almost their entire diet.
People adore pandas not just for their cute, gentle faces and playful appearance, but also for their calm nature. Despite their size, they are surprisingly agile! Pandas can climb trees skillfully and even swim when needed.
To me, pandas symbolize peace and harmony. Their unique beauty and quiet strength remind us to protect nature. That’s why I strongly believe they deserve all our love and care.
[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据表格信息写作，语句通顺，无语法错误，可适当添加。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍大熊猫的毛色、出生地和饮食习惯；
第二步，介绍人们喜欢大熊猫的原因，以及大熊猫会做的事情；
第三步，表达自己对大熊猫的喜爱之情。
[亮点词汩]
①spend time doing sth花费时间做某事
②make up组成，构成
③remind sb to do sth提醒某人做某事
[高分句型]
That’s why I strongly believe they deserve all our love and care.（表语从句）
14．范文：
Dear visitors,
Welcome to our zoo! There are all kinds of animals here. We have elephants, pandas, giraffes and lions. The elephants are very big and friendly. Pandas are very cute and are China’s national treasure. Giraffes are very tall and they have long necks. Lions are fierce but they are also very interesting to watch.
We hope you enjoy your visit to our zoo.
[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，注意字母大小写以及标点符号。
[写作步骤]
第一步、例举动物园里的动物；
第二步、介绍2至3种动物的主要特征；
第三步、表达欢迎大家来动物园参观。
[亮点词汇]
①all kinds of各种各样的
②national treasure国宝
③long necks长脖子
[高分句型]
①We hope you enjoy your visit to our zoo.(宾语从句)
15．范文：
Animals in Danger
Hello, everyone! I am Fu Xing. Today I want to talk about animals in danger.
Many animals are in danger in the world today, such as tigers, pandas and so on. They are in danger because people cut down trees, and there are fewer places for them to live in. Also, some bad people kill animals for their fur or to eat their meat.
Animals are our friends, so it’s very important to protect them. We can plant more trees to make their homes better. What’s more, we should always tell people not to kill animals.
If each of us loves animals, our world will become much more beautiful. Let’s start to protect them now.
Thanks for listening!
[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：以“一般现在时”为主，描述现状、阐述原因、提出建议时使用；可使用“情态动词”提出号召性建议。
③提示：文章需包含“哪些动物濒危、为什么濒危、如何保护”三个方面，首尾呼应，语言简洁有号召力。
[写作步骤]
第一步：开篇点题，表明演讲主题（保护濒危动物）；
第二步：举例说明哪些动物濒危，并指出原因（砍伐树木、非法捕杀等）；
第三步：提出保护动物的具体措施（植树、宣传等）；
第四步：总结呼吁，让大家从现在做起，保护动物，共建美好家园。
[亮点词汇]
①in danger 处于危险中
②cut down 砍伐
③such as 例如
[高分句型]
①Many animals are in danger in the world today, such as tigers, pandas and so on. (such as列举)
②They are in danger because people cut down trees, and there are fewer places for them to live in. (because引导原因状语从句)
③Animals are our friends, so it’s very important to protect them. (so连接两个并列句，表因果)
④If each of us loves animals, our world will become much more beautiful. (if引导条件状语从句)(共17张PPT)
人教版2024 七年级下册
Unit1 Animal friends 书面表达15篇（单元话题：动物）
1．范文
A Trip to the Zoo
Last Sunday, I visited the zoo with my classmates. We saw many interesting animals. In the monkey area, some monkeys were climbing trees and playing with each other. Then, we watched beautiful peacocks showing their colorful feathers. During the trip, everyone followed the rules. We didn’t feed the animals and stayed on the right path. This made our visit safe and enjoyable. I learned that rules are important. They protect both animals and visitors. We all had a wonderful time.
一、快速核对
2．例文
My favourite animal—the giant panda
There are many kinds of animals in the world, but my favourite is the giant panda.
Giant pandas are very cute animals with black-and-white fur. They usually live in the forests and mountains of Sichuan and Shaanxi. They mainly live on bamboo. They seem to be lazy because they spend much time eating and sleeping.
Giant pandas are one of the greatest symbols of China. Nevertheless, now there are only about 2,000 wild giant pandas in the world. In fact, they are in great danger. We must try our best to save them.
一、快速核对
3．例文
Dear Tom,
How are you these days Now let me tell you something about my pet. It’s a rabbit.
His name is Jimmy and he is 2 years old. He has long ears, red eyes and a short tail. He looks cute and lovely. He’s very quiet and seldom makes any sound. Jimmy eats fruit and vegetables every day, and his favorite food is carrots. When I come home from school, he always runs after me. I often take him out for a walk in my free time. He enjoys playing on the grass. We have so much fun together. I think he is the best pet in the world.
Please tell me about your pet in the next email.
Yours,
Li Hua
一、快速核对
4．例文
There are many kinds of animals in the world. My favorite animal is the elephant. I love elephants because they are strong and clever. They have huge bodies, large ears, and long trunks, which help them drink water and pick up food.
In Thailand, elephants are a symbol of good luck. However, they are now in danger because of hunting and habitat loss. To save the elephants, we should protect their homes and stop buying ivory products.
Elephants are friendly and intelligent. They can remember places and help people with work. So we should do our best to protect these amazing animals.
I hope people can save elephants.
一、快速核对
5．例文：
My Favorite Animal
My favorite animal is the dog. It usually has a furry body and a wagging tail. Dogs can run fast and guard our homes. They are friendly and smart. Once my dog helped me find my lost keys. I like dogs because they are loyal and bring me happiness. They are really our good friends.
一、快速核对
6．例文
Protect man’s friends
Animals and plants are our friends. They help us a lot in our daily lives.
Plants give us food, clean air and beautiful places. Animals provide us with food, clothes and help in work. They are very important because they make our world lively and keep nature in balance.
We must protect them. Don’t pick wild flowers or hurt small animals. Plant more trees and be kind to animals. Let’s take action to protect our friends together!
一、快速核对
7．例文
Hello, I’m Li Hua. My favourite animal is a dog. We have a small dog in my family. He is brown with curly hair. We call him Peter. I love him very much.
Every morning, I get up early and take him for a walk outside. Then we play some games for some time. In the evening, I do my homework and he sits next to me. He doesn’t make any noise.
That’s my favourite animal. Do you like him
一、快速核对
8．例文：
Dear friends,
As we all know, blue whales are in great danger. There are only about 3,000 left worldwide, and many die due to human activities. They are killed for their body parts, and they also face food shortages and loss of safe habitats. We must act now! Stop buying whale products, reduce plastic pollution to keep oceans clean, and support marine protection. Remember, every small action counts. Protecting animals is protecting ourselves. Let’s start today!
一、快速核对
9．例文：
Cute Panda
Pandas are my favourite animals. I think they are the cutest animals in the world.
Pandas are from China. They have black-and-white fur. Their chubby bodies and big black eyes make them look really lovely. They love eating bamboo and living in quiet forests.
However, because people cut down forests, there are fewer pandas. As China’s national treasure, pandas are a symbol of China. We must protect them. First, we can build more nature reserves to give them safe homes. Second, planting more bamboo helps provide enough food. Let’s protect these cute friends!
一、快速核对
10．范文一
My Favorite Animal—Pandas
My name is Li Hua. My favorite animals are pandas. They are really lovely. Pandas are black and white. They have round bodies and big eyes and they always make me happy.
Pandas love eating bamboo. They live in the forests in Sichuan, China. They spend most of their time eating and playing.
I love these cute animals!
一、快速核对
11．例文
My Animal Friend
My pet is a cat named Mimi. She has soft, white fur and bright blue eyes. Mimi loves to play. She can jump high and often runs after balls around the house. Sometimes, she climbs onto the sofa.
I take care of Mimi by feeding her twice a day and cleaning her litter box regularly. I also play with her every evening to keep her happy and healthy. Mimi is not just a pet; she is my best friend!
一、快速核对
12．例文
Animals are our good friends. My favorite animal is the dog. Dogs are very smart and friendly. They can be our best friends. My pet dog has brown fur and big, bright eyes. It likes to wag its tail when it sees me. We play together every day. It can catch balls and understand some commands. It always makes me happy.
I love dogs because they are loyal and bring joy to our lives. We should be kind to all animals.
一、快速核对
13．例文
The giant panda, with its black and white fur and gentle eyes, is China’s national treasure and deeply loved by people. Born in the mountains of China, pandas spend most of their time eating bamboo leaves, which make up almost their entire diet.
People adore pandas not just for their cute, gentle faces and playful appearance, but also for their calm nature. Despite their size, they are surprisingly agile! Pandas can climb trees skillfully and even swim when needed.
To me, pandas symbolize peace and harmony. Their unique beauty and quiet strength remind us to protect nature. That’s why I strongly believe they deserve all our love and care.
一、快速核对
14．范文：
Dear visitors,
Welcome to our zoo! There are all kinds of animals here. We have elephants, pandas, giraffes and lions. The elephants are very big and friendly. Pandas are very cute and are China’s national treasure. Giraffes are very tall and they have long necks. Lions are fierce but they are also very interesting to watch.
We hope you enjoy your visit to our zoo.
一、快速核对
15．范文：
Animals in Danger
Hello, everyone! I am Fu Xing. Today I want to talk about animals in danger.
Many animals are in danger in the world today, such as tigers, pandas and so on. They are in danger because people cut down trees, and there are fewer places for them to live in. Also, some bad people kill animals for their fur or to eat their meat.
Animals are our friends, so it’s very important to protect them. We can plant more trees to make their homes better. What’s more, we should always tell people not to kill animals.
If each of us loves animals, our world will become much more beautiful. Let’s start to protect them now.
Thanks for listening!
一、快速核对
