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外研版2024 七年级下册
Unit1 The secrets of happiness
书面表达15篇（单元话题：幸福）
1．例文：
How to Be Happy
Everyone hopes to get happiness in daily life. As for me, there are several ways to achieve it. First, love your family. Spending time with them, like having dinners together or chatting, can bring warmth. Second, stay positive. When facing problems, a smile and a hopeful heart help a lot. Third, help others. Giving a hand to those in need, such as volunteering, makes you feel useful. Also, enjoy sports. Running or playing ball games lets you release stress and feel energetic. By doing these, happiness will surely fill your life.
一、快速核对
2．参考范文
The Secret of My Happiness
Happiness is very important in our life. It can make us healthier and happier. Let me tell you the secrets of my happiness.
First, I always stay positive even when I meet bad things. Second, I love reading books. I can get lots of knowledge from books and become better and better. Third, I enjoy helping others. When I see their smiles, I feel warm. Finally, I like making more friends because friendship is like sunshine.
These are the secrets of my happiness.
一、快速核对
3．例文
My Memory of Love
Love is everywhere in our life. One of my most precious memories of love happened during my illness. I had a high fever and had to stay in bed. My parents took turns taking care of me. They made delicious porridge for me and watched over me day and night. My classmates also came to visit me, bringing me schoolwork and sharing funny stories to cheer me up. This experience made me realize that love is the most powerful force. It gives us strength and courage in difficult times. We should cherish the love we receive and also spread love to others.
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4．例文
A Special School Trip
Last weekend, our school took us to the Old People’s Home. We went there by bus. It was a sunny day and we had a great time there.
We did a lot of things there. First, we cleaned the room for the old. Then, some students played the guitar for them and some students sang songs with them. I drew a picture for all the old people. In the evening, we cooked food with the grandmas and grandpas. We had a big dinner together.
What a special school trip we had! We learnt a lot and we were all very happy. I really enjoyed it very much.
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5．例文
An Unforgettable Experience Last month, my classmates and I went on a school trip to a farm. Early in the morning, we took a bus there and helped feed cows, pick strawberries and water vegetables. Though we got tired, we laughed a lot when seeing the cute animals and our full baskets of fruits.
From this experience, I learned that hard work brings happiness. It’s also amazing to see how food grows, and now I really value every meal!
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6．例文
My Progress
As a middle school student, I see great progress in my life.
In my studies, I used to struggle with English grammar. But now, through continuous practice and the help of my teacher, I can use grammar rules correctly and my English grades have improved a lot.
For a healthy lifestyle, I have developed the habit of exercising regularly. I run for 30 minutes every morning, which makes me full of energy throughout the day. I also try to eat more vegetables and fruits instead of junk food.
In interpersonal relationships, I used to be shy and not good at communicating with others. However, I have become more outgoing and active. I actively participate in class discussions and after-school activities, and I have made many new friends. We help each other and get along well.
Looking back, I am proud of my progress. I will continue to work hard to become a better person.
一、快速核对
7．例文：
The Warmth Around Me
Warmth is like a soft sweater and I wear it every day. It comes from everything around me.
My home is always full of warmth. My parents and I live in a house with two floors. There is a beautiful garden with lots of flowers and trees. We can smell the flowers and hear the birds sing. At the weekend, it’s a good time for us to have a BBQ in the garden.
The red paper-cut on my bedroom wall is my favorite warmth. It is called zhubaoping’an. It means I have a safe and healthy life. The bamboo seems alive and the leaves look like they are dancing. I feel the warmth of it.
I’m lucky to have so much warmth around me. Warmth turns my daily life into something golden.
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8．例文
Helping Others Makes Me Happy
Last Sunday, I saw an old lady struggling with heavy bags at the bus stop. Without thinking twice, I offered to help her carry them home. Though the bags were heavy and the walk was long, her grateful smile warmed my heart. She thanked me and even gave me a homemade cookie.
This experience taught me that helping others not only brings them joy but also fills me with happiness. A small act of kindness can make a big difference. I will continue to help others because sharing love makes the world better.
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9．例文
Hello, everyone! It’s a great honor to give a talk here. Health is important for students. Here is my advice about how to be a healthy student.
First, we should have healthy living habits. Washing hands often before meals is a good way to keep healthy. Also we must say no to smoking and drinking. Second, we should do sport every day. We can play basketball, football, run and so on. They can build us up. Third, we should have healthy eating habits. Breakfast gives us energy for the whole morning. So don’t go to school without it. Also we should drink enough water every day. Last but not least, we should be happy. Happiness is important for our health. Let’s try our best to keep healthy.
Thanks for listening.
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10．例文
A Special Day for Me in Grade 7
Last month, my 13th birthday was a special day in Grade 7.
In the morning, my deskmate gave me a handmade card. During break time, classmates surrounded me, singing “Happy Birthday”. After school, my best friend and I found a box of cupcakes in my desk—my parents prepared them.
This day made me feel loved and warm. It’s a precious memory of Grade 7.
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11．例文
A Special Day
There is a special day in my life. I will never forget it. Let me tell you something about it.
It was my twelfth birthday. The weather was sunny and warm. My parents took me to a park where we had a picnic. We played games, flew kites, and shared delicious food. Later, my friends surprised me with handmade gifts and a birthday cake.
I felt happy and loved. That day taught me that true happiness comes from spending time with people who care about you. I learned to appreciate the small moments of joy in life, and I will always treasure this memory.
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12．例文
An Unforgettable Day One rainy Sports Day, I fell down the stairs and hurt my knee badly during a race. Blood soaked through my pants, and I burst into tears. Immediately, my classmates rushed over. One girl wrapped my knee with her scarf while two boys helped carry me to the clinic. The nurse cleaned the wound gently as they stayed by my side, comforting me.
Though I missed the race, their kindness warmed my heart. That day, I learned that true friendship shines brightest in difficult times. Even now, remembering their worried faces and warm hands fills me with gratitude. It wasn’t just a fall—it was a lesson in love and teamwork I’ll never forget.
一、快速核对
13．One possible version:
Staying Positive
Last term, I faced a big problem in my school life. The English vocabulary was so difficult for me to remember that I often did badly in tests. I was really worried and afraid that I couldn’t learn English well.
However, I didn’t give up. Every morning, I got up early to read and remember the new words. I write five words a day on pieces of paper and place them in my room. I tried to use them when I saw them. With my hard wok, I got a good grade in the final English test. I was so excited and proud of myself.
This experience taught me that staying positive and working hard can help us solve any problem.
一、快速核对
14．范文：
A happy moment
Hello, everyone! Today I am very glad to share my happiness with you.
Last summer vacation, I stayed at home and decided to make a cake for my family. I followed the recipe carefully, mixing flour, sugar, and eggs. When the cake was finally out of the oven, it looked perfect! My family tasted it and said it was delicious. Seeing their smiles, I felt so happy and proud. I realized that sharing handmade food could bring people together and spread joy. From then on, I often cook for my family, and every time, we share a happy moment.
This is my happiness. And I’m looking forward to yours.
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15． My favourite outdoor activity
My favourite outdoor activity is cycling.
Last weekend, I rode my bike to a nearby park with my friends. The fresh air and beautiful scenery made me feel relaxed. We raced along the path and laughed together. Suddenly, I fell off my bike but my friends helped me immediately.
This experience taught me the importance of teamwork and friendship. I love cycling because it keeps me healthy and happy.
一、快速核对Unit1 The secrets of happiness书面表达15篇
（单元话题：幸福）
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
一、书面表达
1．陪伴家人你会幸福，笑对人生你会幸福，好友相聚你会幸福，努力奋斗你会幸福，酣畅淋漓地运动你会幸福，一顿美食你会幸福，亲近自然你会幸福，一次出游你会幸福，帮助他人你会幸福……，英语校报正在开展以“如何获得幸福”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请你用英文，以“How To Be Happy”为题，写一篇短文投稿。
How to be happy 1. love…
2. stay positive …
3. help others…
4. …
要求：1.短文词数80左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和人名；
4.短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。
How to Be Happy
Everyone hopes to get happiness in daily life. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
2．快乐在我们的生活中很重要，它可以让我们更健康、更幸福，请以“The Secret of My Happiness”为题，写一篇英语短文，介绍你幸福的秘诀。
内容包括：
1. 总是保持乐观 (stay positive) ，即使遇到坏的事情；
2. 热爱读书，读书可以获取知识还可以变得更优秀；
3. 帮助他人，快乐自己；
4. 广交朋友，友谊就像阳光。
要求：
1. 语言表达准确，语意通顺、连贯；
2. 词数：70词左右。
The Secret of My Happiness
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3．爱是付出，是陪伴，是支持，是分享。在生活中, 我们付出爱: 学校里随时向老师同学提供帮助，社区、敬老院里参加志愿者活动……在生活中，我们也收获爱: 享受家人制作的美味佳肴，得到父母、师长的各种关爱和帮助，假日里家人朋友陪伴我们的休闲出游……假如你是李辉，学校英文网站正在开展以“My memory of love”为题目的征文活动。请你用英文写一篇短文，积极参与投稿，分享你的爱的记忆。
内容包括：
（1）分享你的爱的记忆；
（2）介绍你的感悟。
注意:：
（1）词数 80 左右；
（2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
（3）文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
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4．“双减”政策背景下，初中生活丰富多彩。请你结合自己的经历，以“A Special School Trip”为题，写一篇短文，描述事件的经过，并谈谈你的个人感受。
要求：1. 短文须包括所有要点内容，可适当发挥；
2. 短文中不能出现真实人名，校名和地名；
3. 词数80左右。
A Special School Trip
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5．七年级的学习生活即将结束，这一年中总有一些经历令你难以忘怀，或是一次研学旅行，或是一场篮球比赛，亦或是你的第一次尝试……本期英语角活动的主题是An Unforgettable Experience（一次难忘的经历），请你根据以下要点提示写一篇英语短文，与大家分享。
要点提示：1. 描述你的难忘经历；
2. 你的收获和感受。
写作要求：1. 内容全面，结构完整，语言准确，书写规范；
2. 80词左右。
An Unforgettable Experience
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6．经过一年的初中生活，你已褪去小学生的稚嫩。在这一年里，作为中学生的你，一定在各个方面都取得了不少的进步。学校英文报正在征集关于“My Progress”的稿件。请根据以下思维导图的提示，写一篇短文向校报投稿，谈谈你在学习体验、健康生活、人际交往方面取得的进步。
要求：
1. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名；
2. 词数60左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
My Progress
As a middle school student, I see great progress in my life.
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7．暖阳跃入客厅的青瓷茶碗，暖风拂过濠河的粼粼波光，暖意流淌在邻居递来的青团中，志愿者挥动的扫帚尖，更凝结在奶奶剪的窗花上——温暖何须寻觅？水韵含香的人间烟火，恰是最绵长的温暖。请你以“The warmth around me”为题, 根据以下提示, 从中选择2—3个方面写一篇作文。
注意事项：
(1)要求语句通顺，意思连贯，并展开合理想象，适当发挥;
(2)词数：70 词左右，短文的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总数;
(3)表达中请勿提及真实校名及姓名。
The warmth around me
Warmth is like a soft sweater and I wear it every day. It comes from everything around me.
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I’m lucky to have so much warmth around me. Warmth turns my daily life into something golden.
8．乐于助人是一种美德。现在某英语报社拟出版以“Helping others makes me happy”为主题的故事集，请你写一篇不少于80词的短文投稿。
要求：（1）讲述一个乐于助人的故事；
（2）表达你的感悟；
（3）文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和校名。
Helping others makes me happy
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9．你校英语俱乐部将开展“How to Be a Healthy Student”的演讲比赛，假如你是李华，请根据以下思维导图写一篇英文演讲稿，谈谈如何保持健康。
要求：
1.内容积极向上，不少于60词；
2.文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。
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10．同学们，在七年级的美好时光里，一定有许多难忘瞬间！哪一天让你觉得最特别呢？是生日那天收到惊喜？考试拿到满分的开心时刻？还是经历了一件让你特别感动的事？请以“A Special Day for Me in Grade 7”为题，用英语写一篇短文。
要点：
1.哪一天对你来说最特别？
2.那天发生了什么有趣或难忘的事？
3.这一天给你留下了怎样的感受？
要求：
1.文中须包含提示的所有信息，可适当发挥；
2.文中不得使用真实姓名、校名；
3.词数不少于70。
A Special Day for Me in Grade 7
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11．同学们，在你的生活中肯定也有某一时刻或某一天，因一件事或一个人，幸福感悄然而生。这一天对你而言一定是特别的一天。请你以“A Special Day”为题，介绍你特别的一天。在那一天，你做了什么？学到了什么？
题目：A Special Day
提示：
(1) What was your special day
(2) What happened on that day (weather, place, activities…)
(3) How did you feel What did you learn
要求：
1.文中不得出现真实的人名，校名：
2.词数在80-120之间，必须包含所有要点。
A Special Day
There is a special day in my life. I will never forget it. Let me tell you something about it.
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12．一年的初中生活，一定有很多事给你留下了深刻的印象。请以“An Unforgettable Day”为题，介绍你最难忘的一天。
要点：1. 讲述难忘的一天经历；2. 谈一谈感受。
要求：1. 80—100 词左右；2. 文中不能出现真实的人名和地名。
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13．假如你是李华，本周是你校的英语节，活动内容之一是以“Staying positive”为主题的英语征文比赛。请根据以下提示，写一篇英语短文，分享你的经历。
1. What problems did you meet in your school life
2. What did you do
3. How did you react to the problems
4. How did you feel
5. What did you learn from the experience
注意：1. 80词左右；
2. 不要出现本人信息；
3. 禁止抄袭试卷中的语篇。
Staying Positive
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14．生活中的快乐是可以传递的，快乐可以是你亲手做一份美食，可以是你喜欢的运动，也可以是你旅行在路上……。请你以“A happy moment”为题写一篇短文将你经历过并感到快乐的一件事分享给你的小伙伴们！
内容要点：1. 什么时间，在哪里发生？
2. 结果如何？
3. 在这件事中你的收获和感受是什么？
注意：1. 词数70左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称；
4. 开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：happiness (n. 快乐)；feel (v. 感觉)；forget (v. 忘记)
A happy moment
Hello, everyone! Today I am very glad to share my happiness with you. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
This is my happiness. And I’m looking forward to yours.
15．同学们，户外活动能给我们带来很多快乐和收获！请以“My favourite outdoor activity”为题，写一篇英语短文。
要点：1. 介绍你最喜欢的户外活动；2. 分享一次参与该活动的经历；3. 谈谈你在这次经历中的收获。
要求：1. 短文应包含所有给出的提示信息，并适当发挥。2. 字数70词左右。
My favourite outdoor activity
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（单元话题：幸福）
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
参考答案
1．例文：
How to Be Happy
Everyone hopes to get happiness in daily life. As for me, there are several ways to achieve it. First, love your family. Spending time with them, like having dinners together or chatting, can bring warmth. Second, stay positive. When facing problems, a smile and a hopeful heart help a lot. Third, help others. Giving a hand to those in need, such as volunteering, makes you feel useful. Also, enjoy sports. Running or playing ball games lets you release stress and feel energetic. By doing these, happiness will surely fill your life.
【总体分析】
① 题材：说明文（阐述获得幸福的方法）；
② 时态：一般现在时（表述获得幸福的常规做法、观点等）；
③ 提示：围绕 “如何获得幸福”，从陪伴家人、保持积极、帮助他人、运动等方面展开，结合自身视角阐述 。
【写作步骤】
第一步：开篇点明大家都希望在生活中获得幸福，“Everyone hopes to get happiness in daily life.” ，引出话题；
第二步：从爱家人、保持积极、帮助他人、享受运动等方面，阐述获得幸福的具体做法，丰富内容；
第三步：总结做到这些，幸福会充满生活 ，收束全文。
【亮点词汇】
① release stress释放压力
② give a hand to帮助
【高分句型】
①As for me, there are several ways to achieve it. （there be句型）
②When facing problems, a smile and a hopeful heart help a lot.（省略了主语和be动词的时间状语从句）
③By doing these, happiness will surely fill your life.（by doing sth. 作方式状语）
2．参考范文
The Secret of My Happiness
Happiness is very important in our life. It can make us healthier and happier. Let me tell you the secrets of my happiness.
First, I always stay positive even when I meet bad things. Second, I love reading books. I can get lots of knowledge from books and become better and better. Third, I enjoy helping others. When I see their smiles, I feel warm. Finally, I like making more friends because friendship is like sunshine.
These are the secrets of my happiness.
[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生写作时应注意按材料要求写，需围绕保持乐观、热爱读书、帮助他人、广交朋友这几个要点展开叙述，清晰阐述每个要点与幸福的关联，根据实际情况可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点明幸福在生活中的重要性，引出要介绍自己幸福秘诀的意图；
第二步，分别从保持乐观、热爱读书、帮助他人、广交朋友这几方面，阐述每个行为是如何成为幸福秘诀的；
第三步，书写结语，总结强调这些就是自己幸福的秘诀。
[亮点词汇]
① stay positive 保持乐观
② get lots of knowledge 获取大量知识
③ enjoy helping others 喜欢帮助他人
④ make more friends 交更多朋友
⑤ the secrets of ……的秘诀
[高分句型]
① I always stay positive even when I meet bad things. (含有时间状语从句的复合句)
② When I see their smiles, I feel warm. (含有时间状语从句的复合句)
③ I like making more friends because friendship is like sunshine. (含有原因状语从句的复合句)
3．例文
My Memory of Love
Love is everywhere in our life. One of my most precious memories of love happened during my illness. I had a high fever and had to stay in bed. My parents took turns taking care of me. They made delicious porridge for me and watched over me day and night. My classmates also came to visit me, bringing me schoolwork and sharing funny stories to cheer me up. This experience made me realize that love is the most powerful force. It gives us strength and courage in difficult times. We should cherish the love we receive and also spread love to others.
[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，适当添加细节并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，分享你的爱的记忆；
第二步，书写结语，介绍你的感悟。
[亮点词汇]
①had a high fever 发高烧
②stay in bed躺在床上
③cheer up振作起来
[高分句型]
①This experience made me realize that love is the most powerful force.（宾语从句）
②We should cherish the love we receive and also spread love to others.（and连接的句子）
4．例文
A Special School Trip
Last weekend, our school took us to the Old People’s Home. We went there by bus. It was a sunny day and we had a great time there.
We did a lot of things there. First, we cleaned the room for the old. Then, some students played the guitar for them and some students sang songs with them. I drew a picture for all the old people. In the evening, we cooked food with the grandmas and grandpas. We had a big dinner together.
What a special school trip we had! We learnt a lot and we were all very happy. I really enjoyed it very much.
[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般过去时”；
③提示：根据要求完成写作，注意时态和文章条理清晰，适当增加细节，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍学校旅行的地点、天气、交通方式；
第二步，具体介绍学校旅行的活动；
第三步，表达自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①have a great time玩得开心
②learn a lot学到很多
③play the guitar弹吉他
[高分句型]
What a special school trip we had! (感叹句)
5．例文
An Unforgettable Experience Last month, my classmates and I went on a school trip to a farm. Early in the morning, we took a bus there and helped feed cows, pick strawberries and water vegetables. Though we got tired, we laughed a lot when seeing the cute animals and our full baskets of fruits.
From this experience, I learned that hard work brings happiness. It’s also amazing to see how food grows, and now I really value every meal!
[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：主要为“一般过去时”；
③提示：包含提示中的所有要点，详细描述了一次农场研学旅行的经历及从中的收获，适当添加了细节，突出了难忘的主题。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出经历，说明时间、人物和地点，即上个月和同学去农场；
第二步，详细描述在农场的活动，包括早上乘车去、喂牛、摘草莓、浇蔬菜等，以及活动中的感受；
第三步，阐述从这次经历中学到的道理，即努力带来快乐，懂得珍惜食物。
[亮点词汇]
①went on a school trip进行学校旅行
②fed cows喂牛
③picked strawberries摘草莓
④valued every meal珍惜每一顿饭
[高分句型]
①Though we got tired, we laughed a lot when seeing the cute animals and our full baskets of fruits. （though引导让步状语从句，when引导时间状语从句）
②I learned that hard work brings happiness. （that引导宾语从句）
6．例文
My Progress
As a middle school student, I see great progress in my life.
In my studies, I used to struggle with English grammar. But now, through continuous practice and the help of my teacher, I can use grammar rules correctly and my English grades have improved a lot.
For a healthy lifestyle, I have developed the habit of exercising regularly. I run for 30 minutes every morning, which makes me full of energy throughout the day. I also try to eat more vegetables and fruits instead of junk food.
In interpersonal relationships, I used to be shy and not good at communicating with others. However, I have become more outgoing and active. I actively participate in class discussions and after-school activities, and I have made many new friends. We help each other and get along well.
Looking back, I am proud of my progress. I will continue to work hard to become a better person.
[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：本文主要有“现在完成时态、一般过去时态和一般将来时态”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己在学习方面的进步；
第二步，介绍自己在生活方面的进步；
第三步，介绍自己在交友方面的进步。
[亮点词汇]
①used to do sth.过去常常做某事
②full of energy精力充沛的
③instead of而不是
④make friends交朋友
[高分句型]
①I run for 30 minutes every morning, which makes me full of energy throughout the day.（定语从句）
②I actively participate in class discussions and after-school activities, and I have made many new friends.（and连接的并列句）
7．例文：
The Warmth Around Me
Warmth is like a soft sweater and I wear it every day. It comes from everything around me.
My home is always full of warmth. My parents and I live in a house with two floors. There is a beautiful garden with lots of flowers and trees. We can smell the flowers and hear the birds sing. At the weekend, it’s a good time for us to have a BBQ in the garden.
The red paper-cut on my bedroom wall is my favorite warmth. It is called zhubaoping’an. It means I have a safe and healthy life. The bamboo seems alive and the leaves look like they are dancing. I feel the warmth of it.
I’m lucky to have so much warmth around me. Warmth turns my daily life into something golden.
[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇看图作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示中的介绍要点，适当添加细节，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。介绍身边的温暖；
第二步，具体阐述“温暖”内容。自选图中2—3方面来介绍生活中温暖的细节；
第三步，书写结语，表达感受。
[亮点词汇]
①be full of充满
②hear sb. do sth.听见某人做某事（经常做或全过程）
[高分句型]
①At the weekend, it’s a good time for us to have a BBQ at the garden.（it作形式主语）
②It means I have a safe and healthy life.（省略that的宾语从句）
8．例文
Helping Others Makes Me Happy
Last Sunday, I saw an old lady struggling with heavy bags at the bus stop. Without thinking twice, I offered to help her carry them home. Though the bags were heavy and the walk was long, her grateful smile warmed my heart. She thanked me and even gave me a homemade cookie.
This experience taught me that helping others not only brings them joy but also fills me with happiness. A small act of kindness can make a big difference. I will continue to help others because sharing love makes the world better.
[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息，可适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步，讲述你帮助他人的经历；
第二步，总结感悟或收获。
[亮点词汇]
①see sb. doing sth.看见某人正在做某事
②without thinking twice毫不犹豫
③offer to do sth.主动提出做某事
④help sb. do sth.帮助某人做某事
⑤not only…but also…不仅……而且……
⑥make a big difference有很大影响
⑦continue to do sth.继续做某事
[高分句型]
①Though the bags were heavy and the walk was long, her grateful smile warmed my heart.（though引导的让步状语从句）
②This experience taught me that helping others not only brings them joy but also fills me with happiness.（that引导的宾语从句）
③I will continue to help others because sharing love makes the world better.（because引导的原因状语从句）
9．例文
Hello, everyone! It’s a great honor to give a talk here. Health is important for students. Here is my advice about how to be a healthy student.
First, we should have healthy living habits. Washing hands often before meals is a good way to keep healthy. Also we must say no to smoking and drinking. Second, we should do sport every day. We can play basketball, football, run and so on. They can build us up. Third, we should have healthy eating habits. Breakfast gives us energy for the whole morning. So don’t go to school without it. Also we should drink enough water every day. Last but not least, we should be happy. Happiness is important for our health. Let’s try our best to keep healthy.
Thanks for listening.
[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，注意字母大小写以及标点符号。
[写作步骤]
第一步、开篇点题，引出话题；
第二步、根据提示，具体阐述自己是如何保持健康的；
第三步、书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①keep healthy保持健康
②say no to拒绝
③last but not least最后但同样重要的是
[高分句型]
①Here is my advice about how to be a healthy student.(倒装句)
10．例文
A Special Day for Me in Grade 7
Last month, my 13th birthday was a special day in Grade 7.
In the morning, my deskmate gave me a handmade card. During break time, classmates surrounded me, singing “Happy Birthday”. After school, my best friend and I found a box of cupcakes in my desk—my parents prepared them.
This day made me feel loved and warm. It’s a precious memory of Grade 7.
[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文，围绕七年级生活中特别的一天（生日）展开叙述；
②时态：以一般过去时为主，描述过去发生的生日相关事件；
③提示：需明确特别的一天是什么、当天发生的事及感受 。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点明七年级里特别的一天是自己13岁生日。
第二步，按时间顺序（上午、课间休息时、放学后）依次叙述当天发生的事，如同桌送手工贺卡、同学唱生日歌、发现父母准备的纸杯蛋糕 。
第三步，结尾阐述这一天带来的感受（被爱和温暖）以及对七年级的意义（珍贵回忆）。
[亮点词汇]
①handmade手工制作的
②surrounded围绕
③precious珍贵的
[高分句型]
①Last month, my 13th birthday was a special day in Grade 7.（简单直接开篇，点明主题，“Last month”明确时间，清晰呈现特别的一天是什么。）
②During break time, classmates surrounded me, singing “Happy Birthday”.（运用现在分词“singing”作伴随状语，简洁描绘出课间同学为“我”唱生日歌的画面，使句子更丰富生动。）
11．例文
A Special Day
There is a special day in my life. I will never forget it. Let me tell you something about it.
It was my twelfth birthday. The weather was sunny and warm. My parents took me to a park where we had a picnic. We played games, flew kites, and shared delicious food. Later, my friends surprised me with handmade gifts and a birthday cake.
I felt happy and loved. That day taught me that true happiness comes from spending time with people who care about you. I learned to appreciate the small moments of joy in life, and I will always treasure this memory.
[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般过去时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要求根据提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图；
第二步，具体介绍特别的一天；
第三步，表达感受和介绍学到的东西。
[亮点词汇]
①had a picnic 去野餐
②shared delicious food 分享美味的食物
③comes from 来自
④care about 关心
[高分句型]
①That day taught me that true happiness comes from spending time with people who care about you.（宾语从句）
②I learned to appreciate the small moments of joy in life, and I will always treasure this memory.（并列句）
12．例文
An Unforgettable Day One rainy Sports Day, I fell down the stairs and hurt my knee badly during a race. Blood soaked through my pants, and I burst into tears. Immediately, my classmates rushed over. One girl wrapped my knee with her scarf while two boys helped carry me to the clinic. The nurse cleaned the wound gently as they stayed by my side, comforting me.
Though I missed the race, their kindness warmed my heart. That day, I learned that true friendship shines brightest in difficult times. Even now, remembering their worried faces and warm hands fills me with gratitude. It wasn’t just a fall—it was a lesson in love and teamwork I’ll never forget.
[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般过去时”；
③提示：内容要包括写作要点，可适当添加，注意语法，语句通顺。
[写作步骤]
第一步，讲述难忘的一天经历；
第二步，谈谈自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①fall down跌倒
②burst into tears突然哭了
[高分句型]
①Though I missed the race, their kindness warmed my heart.（Though引导让步状语从句）
②That day, I learned that true friendship shines brightest in difficult times.（宾语从句）
13．One possible version:
Staying Positive
Last term, I faced a big problem in my school life. The English vocabulary was so difficult for me to remember that I often did badly in tests. I was really worried and afraid that I couldn’t learn English well.
However, I didn’t give up. Every morning, I got up early to read and remember the new words. I write five words a day on pieces of paper and place them in my room. I tried to use them when I saw them. With my hard wok, I got a good grade in the final English test. I was so excited and proud of myself.
This experience taught me that staying positive and working hard can help us solve any problem.
[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：根据所给要点进行写作，注意逻辑清晰，语句通顺，不要出现语法错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步，点明主题——遇到的问题；
第二步，具体介绍解决问题的方法；
第三步，讲述解决问题后的收获。
[亮点词汇]
①face a big problem面临一个大问题
②give up放弃
③be proud of sb为某人感到自豪
[高分句型]
①The English vocabulary was so difficult for me to remember that I often did badly in tests. (so...that...引导的结果状语从句)
②I tried to use them when I saw them. (when引导的时间状语从句)
③This experience taught me that staying positive and working hard can help us solve any problem. (that引导的宾语从句)
14．范文：
A happy moment
Hello, everyone! Today I am very glad to share my happiness with you.
Last summer vacation, I stayed at home and decided to make a cake for my family. I followed the recipe carefully, mixing flour, sugar, and eggs. When the cake was finally out of the oven, it looked perfect! My family tasted it and said it was delicious. Seeing their smiles, I felt so happy and proud. I realized that sharing handmade food could bring people together and spread joy. From then on, I often cook for my family, and every time, we share a happy moment.
This is my happiness. And I’m looking forward to yours.
[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已明确给出，包括事件发生的时间、地点、结果以及个人的收获和感受，考生需围绕这些要点展开，适当添加细节，使文章连贯且富有感染力。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。通过“Today I am very glad to share my happiness with you”来引出下文要分享的快乐经历；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。根据内容要点，详细描述事件发生的时间、地点，事件的具体经过和结果，以及个人在此事件中的收获和感受；
第三步，书写结语。通过“This is my happiness. And I’m looking forward to yours”表达分享的结束，并期待听到他人的快乐经历。
[亮点词汇]
①decide to决定
②follow... carefully仔细地遵循
③from then on从那时起
④look forward to期待
[高分句型]
①I realized that sharing handmade food could bring people together and spread joy.（that引导宾语从句）
15． My favourite outdoor activity
My favourite outdoor activity is cycling.
Last weekend, I rode my bike to a nearby park with my friends. The fresh air and beautiful scenery made me feel relaxed. We raced along the path and laughed together. Suddenly, I fell off my bike but my friends helped me immediately.
This experience taught me the importance of teamwork and friendship. I love cycling because it keeps me healthy and happy.
【总体分析】
①题材：材料作文；
②时态：一般过去时为主，穿插一般现在时；
③提示：需包含活动介绍、经历描述和收获感悟。
【写作步骤】
第一步：点明最喜欢的户外活动（cycling）；
第二步：描述一次具体经历（时间、地点、人物、事件）；
第三步：总结收获（友谊、健康）并表达情感。
【亮点词汇】
①outdoor activity户外活动
②beautiful scenery美景
【高分句型】
①Suddenly, I fell off my bike but my friends helped me immediately. (but表示转折）
②I love cycling because it keeps me healthy and happy. (because引导的原因状语从句)
