【重质高效】26年春七年级下册Unit 1 The secrets of happiness Understanding ideas写作练习 （含答案）

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My Happy Experience of Love （我幸福的有爱的体验）（七下U1作文1）
写作要求：
写一次关于爱的经历，说明爱是否能带来快乐。
包含：时间、人物、地点、感受、学到的道理。
词数80词左右，使用课文中有用的表达。
【写作思路解析】
My Happy Experience of Love 写作万能模板（80词左右）
开头（点题）：
I believe love can make us happy.
我相信爱能使我们快乐。
中间（时间+人物+地点+事情）：
__________ (时间), I __________ (遇到的小事/困难). I felt __________ (负面情绪).
To my surprise, __________ (谁) __________ (做了什么爱的举动).
__________ (再写一个小细节).
That made me feel __________ (温暖/感动/开心).
结尾（感受+道理）：
This touched me greatly.
From this, I learnt love is the key to happiness.
It makes our life full of joy and we are happy to have __________ (family/friends' love).
可以直接背的完整套句版
I believe love can make us happy.
__________, I __________. I felt __________.
To my surprise, my __________ __________. __________.
That made me feel warm and moved.
This touched me greatly.
From this, I learnt love is the key to happiness.
It makes our life full of joy and we are happy to have __________ love.
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【二次写作】
写作要求：
写一次关于爱的经历，说明爱是否能带来快乐。
包含：时间、人物、地点、感受、学到的道理。
词数80词左右，使用课文中有用的表达。
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My Happy Experience of Love （我幸福的有爱的体验）（七下U1作文1）
参考范文
范文 1（朋友之爱）
My Happy Experience of Love
I believe love can make us happy. Last Friday, I lost my way home and felt very worried. To my surprise, my best friend helped me find the way home. She talked with me and made me feel safe. That made me feel warm and moved.
This touched me greatly. From this, I learnt love is the key to happiness. It makes our life full of joy and we are happy to have friends’ love.
范文 2（老师之爱）
My Happy Experience of Love
I believe love can make us happy. Last week, I did badly in my exam and felt sad. To my surprise, my teacher encouraged me patiently and helped me with my lessons. She gave me much care and support. That made me feel warm and moved.
This touched me greatly. From this, I learnt love is the key to happiness. It makes our life full of joy and we are happy to have teachers’ love.
范文 3 （家人的爱）
My Happy Experience of Love
I believe love can make us happy. Last Sunday, I was ill at home. I kept going over my sad feelings in my mind. To my surprise, my mom stayed with me all day and looked after me carefully. She cooked delicious food for me. That made me feel warm and moved.
This touched me greatly. From this, I learnt love is the key to happiness. It makes our life full of joy and we are happy to have family love..
范文4（同学的友谊）
My Happy Experience of Love
I believe love can make us happy. Last Saturday, I fell down on the playground and felt sad. To my surprise, my classmates helped me stand up and took me to the teacher. They looked after me well. That made me feel warm and moved.
This touched me greatly. From this, I learnt love is the key to happiness. It makes our life full of joy and we are happy to have friends’ love.
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