专题22 提纲作文
提纲作文是中考英语书面表达中最常见的一种命题形式，它要求考生根据题目所给的提纲进行写作，具有题型灵活、内容易受控制、简单易写等特征。提纲作文要求考生根据所给出的提示性内容，首先确定文章的中心思想，然后紧紧围绕中心思想展开论述，表达主旨。它的特点既体现了文章的层次，又规定了各段的大致内容，为考生提供了写作思路。其本身就决定了写作对象、范围、目的、体裁等，考生一般不会出现审题障碍。但其局限性也相对较大，如果考生不理解提纲所提示的内容，下笔就比较困难。常见的作文提纲有中文提纲、英文提纲、思维导图式提纲等。在回复书信或邮件类题目中，提纲往往出现在所给的信或邮件中。
提纲作文也是一种常见的写作题型,它要求学生紧扣主题,根据提纲提示的要点进行写作.提纲作文具有题型灵活、内容相对固定、简单易写等特征.
提纲决定了写作对象、范围、目的、体裁等.
（一）活动介绍类
（二）问题建议类
（三）观点看法类
（四）事物，人物描述介绍
（2023·襄阳）【提纲类：演讲稿：旅游】
今年五一，襄阳凭借丰富的旅游资源和优质的服务，吸引了各地的游客前来“打卡”。在校园英语文化周，你将代表班级做关于“旅行”的英语演讲。请根据以下要点提示，结合你的旅游或出行经历，写一篇英语演讲稿。
1.要点提示：
(1)简要介绍你对旅行的态度或看法；
(2)详述你的一次旅游或出行经历；
(3)根据你的旅行感受，为襄阳的旅游发展提出一条合理的建议或希望。
2.注意事项：
(1)词数90左右，开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数；
(2)可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
(3)作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
Dear schoolmates,
Good morning! I’m glad to make a speech here.
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That’s all. Thank you!
【答案】例文
Dear schoolmates,
Good morning! I’m glad to make a speech here.
Now more and more people are interested in travelling. I think trip is an opportunity for us to experience life and increase knowledge. At the same time, it can also broaden our horizon.
Last Wednesday, we went on a trip to Yixing. Yixing is a modern and tidy city, where there are many places of interest. It was a fine warm day. In the morning, we climbed the hill in the Bamboo Park. On the way, we met an Australian. He was kind and patient. We had fun practising speaking English. In the afternoon, we rowed boats along the underground river in the Shanjuan Cave. It was a great day.
I think if we want to attract more tourists, we should provide better service for tourists.
That’s all. Thank you!
【解析】
【总体分析】
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：根据内容提示，介绍自己的旅游经历和感受，不要遗漏要点，可适当发挥。
【写作步骤】
第一步，简要介绍你对旅行的态度或看法；
第二步，详述你的一次旅游或出行经历；
第三步，提出自己的建议。
【亮点词汇】
①be interested in对……感兴趣
②at the same time同时
③places of interest名胜古迹
【高分句型】
①Yixing is a modern and tidy city, where there are many places of interest.（非限制性定语从句）
②I think if we want to attract more tourists, we should provide better service for tourists.（宾语从句；if引导的条件状语从句）
一、开头。认真审题，导入文章话题。
充分理解题目的要求和写作要点.这样做可以确保文章符合题目要求.
二、正文。覆盖提纲要点，组织语言。考虑要点之间的连接，不要出现前言不搭后语之现象。
紧扣提纲要点提纲是写作的指南,务必严格按照提纲的要求进行写作.在写作过程中,需要注意是否涵盖了所有要点,并根据需要添加一些细节或例子来丰富文章内容.同时,要注意要点的顺序和逻辑关系,以确保文章的逻辑性和条理性. 拓展写作思路，尽管提纲明确限定了写作的要点和范围,但这并不意味着你的思路受到限制.在写作过程中,可以结合自己的经验和知识,从不同的角度思考问题,
三、结尾。结论性语言，观点，感受，号召性语言等。回应文章话题。这样文章篇幅才完整。
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（2023·吉林）【提纲类：五育并举：成为最好的自己】
青少年应勤于反思，在自我反思中正确认识自己、不断完善自己。请以“Self-reflection Makes Me Become Better”为题，结合自己的成长历程，从学习、运动、劳动等方面，用英语写一篇短文。
内容包括：
（1）结合实际，谈谈自我反思的重要性；
（2）列举自身存在的至少一个优点，并据此提出如何保持优点的方法；
（3）列举自身存在的至少一处不足，并据此提出如何改进不足的方法；
（4）发出自我反思的倡议。
写作要求：
（1）语言流畅，层次清晰，内容可以适当发挥；
（2）词数90-100，开头部分已经给出，不计入总词数；
（3）书写规范，卷面整洁；
（4）文中不能出现考生姓名和学校名称。
参考词汇：self-reflection n. 自我反思 reflect on sth. 反思（往事）
Self-reflection Makes Me Become Better
We teenagers should always reflect on the past because self-reflection makes us become better. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
Self-reflection Makes Me Become Better
We teenagers should always reflect on the past because self-reflection makes us become better. Through self-reflection, we can find out the advantages and disadvantages of what we did, and strive to do it perfectly the next time.
I like reading. It can not only increase my knowledge, but also open my eyes. If you want to develop a good habit of reading, you must stick to the good habit of reading, and keep writing after reading to improve your interest in reading. But I sometimes read so inaccurately that some of the author’s intentions cannot be understood. In the future I will read sentence by sentence to get rid of this bad habit.
So let’s do some serious self-reflection together to make us better ourselves.
【解析】
【总体分析】
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
【写作步骤】
第一步，谈谈自我反思的重要性；
第二步，列举自身存在的至少一个优点，并据此提出如何保持优点的方法；列举自身存在的至少一处不足，并据此提出如何改进不足的方法；
第三步，发出自我反思的倡议。
【亮点词汇】
①strive to do努力做
②not only…but also不但……而且……
③develop a good habit of培养成一个……的好习惯
④get rid of摆脱
【高分句型】
①We teenagers should always reflect on the past because self-reflection makes us become better.（because引导原因状语从句）
②If you want to develop a good habit of reading, you must stick to the good habit of reading, and keep writing after reading to improve your interest in reading.（if引导的条件状语从句）
（2）
（2023·沈阳）【提纲类：五育并举，德育。弘扬中华文化】
为了传承和弘扬中华民族的优良家风，学校英文社团开展主题为“孝亲敬长”的英语征文比赛。假定你是李华，请你写一篇征文参加比赛。内容包括：
1.尊重的对象和原因；
2.具体做法；
3.发出号召。
【注意】
1.词数 80-100，开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数；
2.短文须包括所给内容信息，可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.作文中不要出现考生和相关人物的真实校名和姓名。
Show respect for elders
Showing respect for elders is one of the family traditions that Chinese people have kept for thousands of years.
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【答案】例文：
Show respect for elders
Showing respect for elders is one of the family traditions that Chinese people have kept for thousands of years.
We are supposed to show respect for our parents because they are the most trusted elders and help us solve problems when we are in trouble.
Here are some things we can do to show our respect. First, we can offer to help with housework such as leaning the dishes or sweeping the floor so that they can have a rest after a day’s work. Second, don’t make them angry and try to take their advice when we disagree with each other. Third, share your happiness and sorrow with them as they were once like you and have more experience than you expect.
Small actions can make a great difference. Let’s show respect for our parents from now on!
【解析】
【总体分析】
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
【写作步骤】
第一步，开头已给出，介绍敬老是很重要的优良传统；
第二步，介绍应该尊敬父母的原因以及如何表现自己的尊敬；
第三步，发出号召。
【亮点词汇】
①be supposed to应该
②such as例如
③each other彼此
【高分句型】
①First, we can offer to help with housework such as leaning the dishes or sweeping the floor so that they can have a rest after a day’s work.（so that引导目的状语从句）
②Third, share your happiness and sorrow with them as they were once like you and have more experience than you expect.（as引导原因状语从句）
（3）
（2023·河南）【提纲类：学校生活】
为了丰富学校大课间活动内容，学校校刊英语专栏以“最美大课间，强健青少年”为主题面向学生进行征文。请你根据写作要求，用英语写一篇短文，向专栏投稿。
写作要求：1) 介绍学校目前30分钟大课间的活动内容，并简单谈谈你的感受；
2) 你对大课间活动内容有什么更好的建议，请写出理由；
3) 文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称；
4) 词数100左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
参考词汇：shuttlecock exercises 毽子操；badminton 羽毛球；rope skipping 跳绳
The colorful activities during the 30-minute break help make teenagers healthier and stronger.
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【答案】例文
The colorful activities during the 30-minute break help make teenagers healthier and stronger.
In our school, we usually do running during the 30-minute break. When the bell rings, students walk out of the classroom to the playground. Then we are lined up and run together. I think it is quite boring. In my opinion, we need different kinds of activities at break, such as shuttlecock exercises, rope skipping and so on. Through these activities, we can really relax ourselves and experience the joy of sports. Also, we will be more energetic in class.
Different kinds of activities at break time will surely benefit us a lot. I really hope our school can organize more of them to ensure the overall development of us students.
【解析】
【总体分析】
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据题干中的提示内容进行写作，适当增加细节。
【写作步骤】
第一步，引出话题；
第二步，介绍学校目前30分钟大课间的活动内容，并简单谈谈你的感受；
第三步，介绍你对大课间活动内容有什么更好的建议，请写出理由。
【亮点词汇】
①walk out of走出
②in my opinion依我来看
③different kinds of不同种类的
【高分句型】
①When the bell rings, students walk out of the classroom to the playground.(when引导的时间状语从句)
②I really hope our school can organize more of them to ensure the overall development of us students.(宾语从句)
（4）
（2024·苏州一模【提纲类：事物描述】
水滴石穿，绳锯木断。坚持做好一件事情，成就更好的自己。请以“One thing I keep doing every day”为题，根据以下要点和要求，用英语写一篇发言稿，参加学校的英语主题演讲活动。
内容应包括：
1.你每天在坚持做什么；
2.你坚持这么做的理由；
3.它会给你带来怎样的影响或改变。
注意：
1.词数100左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2.内容涵盖要点，可适当发挥；
3.文中不得出现与考生相关的真实校名和姓名等信息。
One thing I keep doing every day
Good morning, everyone!
I am very happy to be here to make a speech today. The topic of my speech is one thing I keep doing every day.
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That’s all. Thank you!
【答案】例文
One thing I keep doing every day
Good morning, everyone!
I am very happy to be here to make a speech today. The topic of my speech is one thing I keep doing every day.
As we know, what we keep doing every day is very important for us to achieve our goals. That’s why I keep reading every day no matter how busy I am. I usually spend about one hour a day reading my favorite books and I often share what I read with my friends. Honestly speaking, reading not only brings me knowledge, but also teaches me how to get on well with others and how to be a better person.
Keeping reading helps me open up my eyes to the outside world. The more I read, the wiser I will be.
That’s all. Thank you!
【总体分析】
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示内容，适当增加细节，并且突出写作重点。
【写作步骤】
第一步，指出自己每天都坚持做的事情；
第二步，介绍自己坚持做的理由；
第三步，叙述这件事带来的影响或改变。
【亮点词汇】
①not only... but also...不仅……而且……
②get on well with sb.与某人相处得好
③open up my eyes打开我的眼界
【高分句型】
①As we know, what we keep doing every day is very important for us to achieve our goals.（what引导的主语从句）
②That’s why I keep reading every day no matter how busy I am.（why引导的表语从句）
③The more I read, the wiser I will be.（固定句式：the+比较级，the+比较级）
（5）
（2023·无锡）【提纲类：问题与建议】
青少年在成长过程中会遇到各种问题，为此《21世纪英文报》开设了Teens Talk专栏，倾听读者的心声，并由“少年之友”Sigmund Friend予以回复。假设你是李华，最近也遇上了些烦心事，请给该专栏发一封英文邮件，讲述你的烦恼并寻求建议。
注意事项：
（1）邮件内容须自拟，要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意；
（2）词数在100左右，邮件开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
（3）邮件中不得使用真实的个人姓名或学校名称。
Dear Mr. Friend,
I’m writing to you about the problem I’m facing at the moment.
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I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】例文：
Dear Mr. Friend,
I’m writing to you about the problem I’m facing at the moment.
These days I’m not happy. I always argue with my parents. They only care about my schoolwork. The summer holiday is coming. They plan to choose lots of after-school classes for me. But I don’t want to take these classes and don’t want to be so busy. I’m interested in painting. I just want to take painting lessons during the holiday. They disagree with me. I don’t know what to do. And how can I improve the relationship with my parents Can you give me some advice
I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【解析】
【总体分析】
①题材：本文是一封电子邮件；
②时态：时态为一般现在时；
③提示：根据要求讲述自己的烦恼。注意不要遗漏要点。
【写作步骤】
第一步，点明自己遇到了问题。
第二步，讲述自己的烦恼并寻求建议。
第三步，书写结尾。
【亮点词汇】
①argue with和某人争吵
②care about关心
③take painting lessons上绘画课
【高分句型】
①The summer holiday is coming. (现在进行时表示将来的动作)
② I don’t know what to do. (疑问词+动词不定式)
（6）
（2023·云南）【提纲类：体育与健康】
Enjoy Sports, Enjoy Life
提示：享受运动，享受生活。你喜欢运动吗？你享受过运动带来的乐趣吗？请以“Enjoy Sports, Enjoy Life”为题，用英语写一篇短文，叙述一次你通过运动享受生活的经历，或谈谈运动给我们带来的好处。
要求：1.根据所给题目，写一篇短文，词数不少于60个；
2.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁；
3.文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计：
4.请将短文写在答题卡上，写在本试题卷上无效。
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【答案】例文
Enjoy Sports, Enjoy Life
Cycling is one of my favorite sports.
It always makes me relaxed and full of energy. It was sunny last Saturday morning. After finishing my schoolwork, I felt a little bit tired. So I went cycling along the road in a forest not far from my home. What great beauty of nature it was when I got close to it! Colorful flowers were smiling at me. Birds were flying here and there in the trees and they never stopped singing. Soft wind touched my face when I rode a little faster. I got relaxed and refreshed at once.
What an enjoyment of cycling it is! I enjoy my life by doing sports.
【解析】
【总体分析】
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第一人称为主。
【写作步骤】
第一步，介绍自己最喜欢的运动；
第二步，具体阐述自己运动经历；
第三步，最后总结全文，通过运动可以享受生活。
【亮点词汇】
①make sb adj使某人处于……状态
②get close to接近
③far from远离
【高分句型】
Soft wind touched my face when I rode a little faster.（when引导的时间状语从句）
②What an enjoyment of cycling it is! （感叹句）
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（2024·深圳一模）【提纲类：科技与生活】
随着5G、大数据、物联网、人工智能等的广泛运用，我们的生活将发生翻天覆地的改变。假设你是阳光中学的学生李华，你校英语报正在举办主题为“Our life in 20 years”的征文比赛 ，请你根据以下要点写一篇征文，要点包括：
1. 高科技的广泛运用将使我们的未来生活越来越智能化；
2. 畅想未来生活在以下方面的变化：①出行方式；②智能家居；③……
3. 中学生应努力学习，更好地迎接未来的智慧生活。
写作要求：
1. 80词左右(开头已给出，不计入总字数)。
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名及学校名称。
3. 可适当增加细节，使语句通顺，条理清晰、意思连贯。
参考词汇：
家用电器 electrical appliance 自动化 automatically(adv.) 无人驾驶交通工具 self-driving vehicle
Our life in 20 years
What will our life be like in 20 years Without doubt, our life will ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
Our life in 20 years
What will our life be like in 20 years Without doubt, our life will become more and more intelligent with the rapid development and wide application of high technology.
There will be lots of dramatic changes in our life. Firstly, travelling around will be much easier. We can go anywhere by self-driving vehicle. Subsequently, our home will be more comfortable. Robots and smart electrical appliances can work automatically and provide personalized services for the owners. Moreover, schools will have a high-tech makeover. With smart school system and technologies such as VR glasses, learning will become a fun experience.
The remarkable changes in 20 years are not just the above. As students, we should study hard for the future smart life.
【总体分析】
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般将来时”为主；
③提示：根据提示内容进行写作，可适当增添细节，以使行文连贯，注意无单词及语法错误。
【写作步骤】
第一步，介绍未来的生活将是什么样的；
第二步，具体介绍未来生活的变化；
第三步，书写结语，表达中学生应努力学习，迎接未来的智慧生活。
【亮点词汇】
①more and more越来越……
②subsequently其次
③provide sth for sb提供某人某物
【高分句型】
①Firstly, travelling around will be much easier. (动名词作主语)
②With smart school system and technologies such as VR glasses, learning will become a fun experience. (with表伴随)
（8）
（2024·深圳）【提纲类：体育与健康】
假设你是李华。你的英国笔友Peter即将来到你校做交换生，他想了解你们学校有哪些体育活动，请你根据提示写一封回信。要点如下：
（1）常规活动：①每天一节体育课；②各类体育赛事；
（2）活动感受：①强健身体；②……；
（3）推荐一项中国传统运动。
注意：
（1）词数为80左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；
（2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
（3）文章不能出现真实姓名及学校名称；
（4）条理清楚，语句通顺，意义连贯，书写规范。
参考词汇：sprint（v.短跑；冲刺跑）martial arts（n.武术）
Dear Peter,
Hearing that you are very interested in the sports activities of our school, I’d like to
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I’m looking forward to your arrival.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文：
Dear Peter,
Hearing that you are very interested in the sports activities of our school, I’d like to tell you some of our school’s sports activities. We have one physical education class every day. At the same time, we hold various sports events every semester. We have various ball and running competitions, such as sprints. Doing exercise not only helps us strengthen our bodies, but also increases our team awareness.
Tai chi is a traditional Chinese exercise that emphasizes slow, flowing movements and deep breathing. It is believed to improve physical balance, flexibility, and overall well-being. This activity is widely practiced by people of all ages and is often performed in public parks or other open spaces.
I’m looking forward to your arrival.
Yours,
Li Hua
【总体分析】
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“要点”中的内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
【写作步骤】
第一步，表明写作意图。主要写出“朋友对我们学校体育活动的喜爱”来引出重点内容的介绍；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。主要介绍“我们学校的体育活动以及活动感受”并且推荐了“中国的传统体育运动”以此来感受中国的传统运动的魅力；
第三步，书写总结。期待朋友尽快到来。
【亮点词汇】
①emphasize 强调
②awareness 意识
③of all ages 所有年龄段的
④flexibility 灵活性
【高分句型】
①It is believed to improve physical balance, flexibility, and overall well-being.（and表并列）
②Doing exercise not only helps us strengthen our bodies, but also increases our team awareness.（动名词短语做主语）
③Tai chi is a traditional Chinese exercise that emphasizes slow, flowing movements and deep breathing.（that引导定语从句）
（9）
（2024·浙江宁波一模）【提纲类：学习与生活】
良好的时间管理能力能够帮助我们更好地规划生活，使我们的时间得到充分利用，提高学习效率。但现在很多同学无法高效管理时间以致影响了学习。请你就此写一篇短文谈谈自己的看法。内容提示：
Manage your time well 1. A task that you failed to finish 2. Reasons and results
Your suggestions: 1. keep away from... 2...
注意：(1)短文必须包含思维导图中所提供的所有信息，可适当发挥，使文章连贯；
(2)文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；
(3)词数100左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Nowadays, many students can’t make good use of their time, and this has a bad influence on their studies.
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【答案】例文
Nowadays, many students can’t make good use of their time, and this has a bad influence on their studies.
Last summer vacation, my Chinese teacher asked us to read some classics. I planned to read one book every week. However, I spent too much time chatting with my classmates on WeChat. Then, I had to stay up late to do the task on the last day. But I couldn’t finish it and was punished by the teacher.
I learned my lesson that day and spent the whole night thinking about it. To manage my time well, I should keep away from my phone so that I can put all my efforts into my tasks. I should also make a good study plan and follow it strictly.
【总体分析】
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：主要采用“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③ 提示：写作内容包括：自己未能管理好时间的经历和从中学到的教训；经历部分时态是一般过去时。
【写作步骤】
第一步，叙述自己时间管理失败的经历；
第二步，表达学到的教训，提出具体建议。
【亮点词汇】
① spend time doing sth花时间做某事
② stay up late熬夜
③ keep away from远离
【高分句型】
① But I couldn’t finish it and was punished by the teacher.（被动语态）
② I should keep away from my phone so that I can put all my efforts into my tasks. （so that引导的结果状语从句）
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（2024·上海奉贤一模）【提纲类：问题与建议】
生活中，总有一些人在我们遇到困难、困惑的时候给我们提供帮助或者建议。Rebecca也遇到了成长的烦恼，她父母希望她把更多的时间和精力放在学习上，让她放弃弹钢琴的兴趣爱好。 她不知道该怎么办？假设你是她的朋友David，请你针对她的烦恼，给她写一封不少于60词的信，帮助她。
注意：1. 写作中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。
2. 照抄阅读语篇不得分。
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【答案】例文：
Dear Rebecca,
I heard that you’re going through a tough time with your parents wanting you to focus more on your studies and give up your passion for playing the piano. I understand how difficult this must be, but I want you to know that I’m here for you and I have some advice that might help.
Firstly, have a conversation with your parents about how important music is to you and how it helps you relax. Remember to express yourself in a polite way.
Secondly, try to find a compromise that involves both studying and playing the piano. For example, you could make a time-table for practicing piano and stick to a strict study schedule during the rest of the day.
Remember, it’s always good to have a hobby that you enjoy, and it can actually make you more energetic in your studies. So don’t give up on your passion, and keep working hard to achieve your goals.
Best regards,
David
【解析】
详解】【总体分析】
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：一般现在时；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并适当添加细节，突出重点。
【写作步骤】
第一步，表述已明白对方的问题；
第二步，给出对应的建议；
第三步，书写结语，表达自己的祝愿。
【亮点词汇】
① go through 经历
② focus more on 更专注
③ stick to坚持
【高分句型】
① I understand how difficult this must be.（宾语从句）
② Secondly, try to find a compromise that involves both studying and playing the piano.（定语从句）
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（2024·山东滨州）【提纲类：五育并举】
进一步加强滨州中小学劳动教育，促进五育并举，滨州中小学也独立开设劳动教育必修课。请你根据以下要点，写一篇关于劳动教育的短文，谈谈你对开设劳动课程的建议及你对开设该课程的理解。
内容包括：
1）你觉得是否有必要开设劳动课程？为何？
2）你建议学校开设什么样的劳动课程？（内容及方式）
3）呼吁青少年积极参与劳动。
劳动课 labor class 劳动教育 labor education
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【答案】例文
In my opinion, I think it is necessary to set up labor courses which are good for our students. The reason is that we can not only learn the basic skills of managing life, but also develop a sense of responsibility. As a student, I would like to share some suggestions for setting up the courses.
Above all, schools can provide students with courses on learning how to cook or how to fix up daily things. For example, it’s a good idea for us to practice cooking noodles or making cakes. In addition, we will have more ways to learn in class. It will be interesting if the school can hold some competitions, such as cooking competitions.
Last but not least, I call on every student to take an active part in labor courses. The more we do, the better our life will be.
【总体分析】
① 题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，可适当发挥。
【写作步骤】
第一步，介绍你觉得是否有必要开设劳动课程以及原因；
第二步，介绍你建议学校开设什么样的劳动课程；
第三步，最后呼吁青少年积极参与劳动。
【亮点词汇】
①not only...but also...不但……而且……
②above all首先
③last but not least最后但同样重要的是
【高分句型】
①The reason is that we can not only learn the basic skills of managing life, but also develop a sense of responsibility.（that引导的表语从句）
②It will be interesting if the school can hold some competitions, such as cooking competitions.（if引导的条件状语从句）
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（2024·广州一模）【提纲类：科技与生活】
科技发展日新月异。某英文网站正在开展以“科技与生活”为主题的征文活动。 假定你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈科技是如何改变你的生活的？面对科技带来的机遇与挑战，你将如何去做？
提示词语： AI（人工智能）, challenge, convenient, improve, create
提示问题： How does technology change your life
What will you do in the future
The rapid development of technology has brought great changes to our life.
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The rapid development of technology has brought great changes to our life. Technology has changed communication by providing instant and convenient means to connect with others globally. We can now communicate through emails, instant messaging, video calls, and social media platforms to stay connected with friends and family. Besides, development in transportation technology, such as airplanes, high-speed trains, and electric vehicles, has made travel faster, safer, and more available. Most importantly, technology has transformed the way we learn. Online courses, educational platforms, and digital tools have made education more interesting, flexible, and personal. As technology continues to change, it’s important to embrace lifelong learning to keep up with the pace. So I will study harder to learn more about science and technology. In short, I think we all should master more digital skills to get involved in the world while it is also essential to balance the screen time with our daily life.
【总体分析】
① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为征文投稿；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”；
③ 提示：围绕提示问题展开介绍科技带来的变化及未来应该做什么，注意要点齐全，可适当展开。
【写作步骤】
第一步，紧接文章所给的开头句，具体展开科技给生活带来的变化； 第二步，面对科技带来的变化，描述自己未来应该如何做；
第三步，文章总结，紧跟时代步伐，积极面对变化。
【亮点词汇】
① instant and convenient means 快捷便利的方法
② stay connected with...与……保持联系
③ keep up with... 跟上……
④ get involved in... 参加，融入
【高分句型】
①Online courses, educational platforms, and digital tools have made education more interesting, flexible, and personal. （make+宾语+宾语补足语）
② We should master more digital skills to get involved in the world while it is also essential to balance the screen time with our daily life.（“It is+形容词+to do”句型）
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（2024·广州一模）【提纲类：交通安全】
如今越来越多汽车进入我们的家庭，改善了我们的生活，但同时也带来了很多问题，如塞车和车祸，给家庭和社会带来了极大的危害。春节期间多地交通部门提出了“道路千万条，安全第一条”的口号。作为中学生，我们应该怎样做呢？
假如你是学生会的干部，请根据以下提示，对学校同学写一篇有关交通安全的倡议书。
要点如下：
1. 外出时要遵守交通规则；
2. 步行要走人行道，不能闯红灯；
3. 骑自行车时，不能和朋友聊天；
4. 劝父母不能酒后驾车，也不能开车时使用手机；
5. 你的其他建议。
参考词汇：sidewalk 人行道
注意：
1. 短文应包括所有要点，可以适当发挥，使文章连贯；
2. 词数80左右（倡议书的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）
3. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。
Dear schoolmates,
With more and more cars coming into our families, we are happy that it has greatly improved our lives.
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Remember: Routes are countless; safety is foremost. We must obey the traffic rules.
The Students’ Union
【范文】
With more and more cars coming into our families, we are happy that it has greatly improved our lives. But unluckily, it has also brought many problems, such as heavy traffic and traffic accidents.
As teenagers, we should always keep safety in mind. Here are some of my suggestions. First of all, we should pay attention to the traffic rules when we go out. We should walk on the sidewalk and always look carefully before we walk across the street. Don’t run the red light. Secondly, if we ride a bike with a friend, it’s dangerous to talk and ride at the same time. Moreover, we had better tell our parents not to drink before they drive and it is not allowed to use a mobile phone while driving. Last but not least, we must always wear safety belts when sitting in a car. Without belts, both the drivers and the passengers may be badly hurt in a sudden accident.
Remember: Routes are countless; safety is foremost. We must obey the traffic rules.
The Students’ Union
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现在，学校都很重视劳动对个人健康成长的影响。假如你是学生会的会长 John，你将在校园广播 English Today 中号召全校同学加入到劳动实践中。请根据以下所给的表格写一篇英语演讲稿：
原因 意义 建议
1. 缺乏劳动意识 2. 懒惰成性 3. …… 1. 锻炼身体 2. 培养独立 3. …… 1. 参与课程 2. 分担家务 3. ……
注意：
1. 短文应包括所有要点，可以适当发挥，使文章连贯；
2. 词数 80 左右；
3. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。
Dear schoolmates, Do you think labor education is a necessary skill for everyone ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Chairman of the student union
John
Dear schoolmates,
Do you think labor education is a necessary skill for everyone We can find the only thing we need to do at home is studying. This is because of our lack of this sense. Sometimes we get used to being lazy. Also, one of the reasons is that our parents don’t let us do housework.
In fact, doing some housework or other labor practice is really good for us. It can help us build stronger bodies and make us healthier. What’s more, we will also be more independent. So, we can benefit a lot from it. Why not do it
Also, we can help our parents do housework. We are supposed to know how hard our parents work. Besides, when we are free, we can take part in sports activities. Let’s get to work.
Chairman of the student union
John
（15）
无论时代如何变化，我们对于美好生活的向往始终一致，而垃圾分类在各大城市的实施也是为了更好地保护环境，更好地建设我们的家园。作为学生，我们可以从小事做起，养成良好的习惯，为建设美丽社区、魅力家乡出一份力。请以 “Act to build a beautiful community”为题目，写一篇倡议书。
提示：
1. 践行垃圾分类要求，不乱扔垃圾；
2. 保护公共区域的花草植被；
3. 养成良好的购物习惯，少用一次性购物袋等；
4. 遵守公共秩序，做文明学生。
5. 词数：不少于80词。
Act to build a beautiful community
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Act to build a beautiful community
Do you want to live in a more beautiful community To make this dream a reality, we should take action every day in small ways. Here are several suggestions that we should follow and make part of our daily routine.
First of all, it’s highly suggested that we sort garbage according to the local rules. Please sort your garbage carefully and throw it into the right bin.
Secondly, we should protect grass and flowers in public areas instead of destroying them.
Thirdly, it would be better to use fewer disposable (一次性的) plastic shopping bags while shopping. A better choice would be to use cloth or paper bags.
Last but not least, we should behave like civilized (文明的) people when we are in public. For example, we shouldn’t cut people when standing in line or speak too loudly in public.
Actions speak louder than words. It is time to make daily efforts to turn our communities into places where we not only live, but also enjoy ourselves!(共22张PPT)
导师：稻壳儿
二轮复习讲练测
第二十二讲：提纲作文
01
考情分析
02
知识建构
03
真题研析
04
考点提炼
目录
CONTENTS
05
题型特训
01
考情分析
PART ONE
提纲作文是中考英语书面表达中最常见的一种命题形式，它要求考生根据题目所给的提纲进行写作，具有题型灵活、内容易受控制、简单易写等特征。提纲作文要求考生根据所给出的提示性内容，首先确定文章的中心思想，然后紧紧围绕中心思想展开论述，表达主旨。它的特点既体现了文章的层次，又规定了各段的大致内容，为考生提供了写作思路。其本身就决定了写作对象、范围、目的、体裁等，考生一般不会出现审题障碍。 但其局限性也相对较大，如果考生不理解提纲所提示的内容，下笔就比较困难。常见的作文提纲有中文提纲、英文提纲、思维导图式提纲等。在回复书信或邮件类题目中，提纲往往出现在所给的信或邮件中。
02
知识构建
PART TWO
提纲作文也是一种常见的写作题型,它要求学生紧扣主题,根据提纲提示的要点进行写作.提纲作文具有题型灵活、内容相对固定、简单易写等特征.
提纲决定了写作对象、范围、目的、体裁等.
（一）活动介绍类
（二）问题建议类
（三）观点看法类
（四）事物，人物描述介绍
03
真题研析
PART THREE
（2023·襄阳）【提纲类：演讲稿：旅游】
今年五一，襄阳凭借丰富的旅游资源和优质的服务，吸引了各地的游客前来“打卡”。在校园英语文化周，你将代表班级做关于“旅行”的英语演讲。请根据以下要点提示，结合你的旅游或出行经历，写一篇英语演讲稿。
1.要点提示：
(1)简要介绍你对旅行的态度或看法；
(2)详述你的一次旅游或出行经历；
(3)根据你的旅行感受，为襄阳的旅游发展提出一条合理的建议或希望。
2.注意事项：
(1)词数90左右，开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数；
(2)可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
(3)作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
Dear schoolmates,
Good morning! I’m glad to make a speech here.
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That’s all. Thank you!
Dear schoolmates,
Good morning! I’m glad to make a speech here.
Now more and more people are interested in travelling. I think trip is an opportunity for us to experience life and increase knowledge. At the same time, it can also broaden our horizon.
Last Wednesday, we went on a trip to Yixing. Yixing is a modern and tidy city, where there are many places of interest. It was a fine warm day. In the morning, we climbed the hill in the Bamboo Park. On the way, we met an Australian. He was kind and patient. We had fun practising speaking English. In the afternoon, we rowed boats along the underground river in the Shanjuan Cave. It was a great day.
I think if we want to attract more tourists, we should provide better service for tourists.
That’s all. Thank you!
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：根据内容提示，介绍自己的旅游经历和感受，不要遗漏要点，可适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步，简要介绍你对旅行的态度或看法；
第二步，详述你的一次旅游或出行经历；
第三步，提出自己的建议。
[亮点词汇]
①be interested in对……感兴趣
②at the same time同时
③places of interest名胜古迹
[高分句型]
①Yixing is a modern and tidy city, where there are many places of interest.（非限制性定语从句）
②I think if we want to attract more tourists, we should provide better service for tourists.（宾语从句；if引导的条件状语从句）
04
考点提炼
PART FOUR
一、开头。认真审题，导入文章话题。
充分理解题目的要求和写作要点.这样做可以确保文章符合题目要求.
二、正文。覆盖提纲要点，组织语言。考虑要点之间的连接，不要出现前言不搭后语之现象。
紧扣提纲要点提纲是写作的指南,务必严格按照提纲的要求进行写作.在写作过程中,需要注意是否涵盖了所有要点,并根据需要添加一些细节或例子来丰富文章内容.同时,要注意要点的顺序和逻辑关系,以确保文章的逻辑性和条理性. 拓展写作思路，尽管提纲明确限定了写作的要点和范围,但这并不意味着你的思路受到限制.在写作过程中,可以结合自己的经验和知识,从不同的角度思考问题,
三、结尾。结论性语言，观点，感受，号召性语言等。回应文章话题。这样文章篇幅才完整。
05
题型特训
PART FIVE
（2023·吉林）【提纲类：五育并举：成为最好的自己】
青少年应勤于反思，在自我反思中正确认识自己、不断完善自己。请以“Self-reflection Makes Me Become Better”为题，结合自己的成长历程，从学习、运动、劳动等方面，用英语写一篇短文。
内容包括：
（1）结合实际，谈谈自我反思的重要性；
（2）列举自身存在的至少一个优点，并据此提出如何保持优点的方法；
（3）列举自身存在的至少一处不足，并据此提出如何改进不足的方法；
（4）发出自我反思的倡议。
写作要求：
（1）语言流畅，层次清晰，内容可以适当发挥；
（2）词数90-100，开头部分已经给出，不计入总词数；
（3）书写规范，卷面整洁；
（4）文中不能出现考生姓名和学校名称。
参考词汇：self-reflection n. 自我反思 reflect on sth. 反思（往事）
Self-reflection Makes Me Become Better
We teenagers should always reflect on the past because self-reflection makes us become better. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Self-reflection Makes Me Become Better
We teenagers should always reflect on the past because self-reflection makes us become better. Through self-reflection, we can find out the advantages and disadvantages of what we did, and strive to do it perfectly the next time.
I like reading. It can not only increase my knowledge, but also open my eyes. If you want to develop a good habit of reading, you must stick to the good habit of reading, and keep writing after reading to improve your interest in reading. But I sometimes read so inaccurately that some of the author’s intentions cannot be understood. In the future I will read sentence by sentence to get rid of this bad habit.
（2024·深圳一模）【提纲类：科技与生活】
随着5G、大数据、物联网、人工智能等的广泛运用，我们的生活将发生翻天覆地的改变。假设你是阳光中学的学生李华，你校英语报正在举办主题为“Our life in 20 years”的征文比赛 ，请你根据以下要点写一篇征文，要点包括：
1. 高科技的广泛运用将使我们的未来生活越来越智能化；
2. 畅想未来生活在以下方面的变化：①出行方式；②智能家居；③……
3. 中学生应努力学习，更好地迎接未来的智慧生活。
写作要求：
1. 80词左右(开头已给出，不计入总字数)。
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名及学校名称。
3. 可适当增加细节，使语句通顺，条理清晰、意思连贯。
参考词汇：
家用电器 electrical appliance 自动化 automatically(adv.) 无人驾驶交通工具 self-driving vehicle
Our life in 20 years
What will our life be like in 20 years Without doubt, our life will _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Our life in 20 years
What will our life be like in 20 years Without doubt, our life will become more and more intelligent with the rapid development and wide application of high technology.
There will be lots of dramatic changes in our life. Firstly, travelling around will be much easier. We can go anywhere by self-driving vehicle. Subsequently, our home will be more comfortable. Robots and smart electrical appliances can work automatically and provide personalized services for the owners. Moreover, schools will have a high-tech makeover. With smart school system and technologies such as VR glasses, learning will become a fun experience.
The remarkable changes in 20 years are not just the above. As students, we should study hard for the future smart life.
【总体分析】
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般将来时”为主；
③提示：根据提示内容进行写作，可适当增添细节，以使行文连贯，注意无单词及语法错误。
【写作步骤】
第一步，介绍未来的生活将是什么样的；
第二步，具体介绍未来生活的变化；
第三步，书写结语，表达中学生应努力学习，迎接未来的智慧生活。
【亮点词汇】
①more and more越来越……
②subsequently其次
③provide sth for sb提供某人某物
【高分句型】
①Firstly, travelling around will be much easier. (动名词作主语)
②With smart school system and technologies such as VR glasses, learning will become a fun experience. (with表伴随)
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