(共35张PPT)
——写一篇关于中国对其他国家的援助的演讲稿
学语言 学结构
1.情感描写
[教材原句] To be honest, when my mother first left for Africa, I was upset... But more importantly, she was my best friend.
[分析] 通过个人情感的真实表达(如“upset” “best friend”),拉近与读者的距离。适用于读后续写中刻画人物心理或演讲稿中增强感染力。 本文是一篇典型的演讲稿,主题是宣讲中国对其他国家的援助。
学语言 学结构
2.对比手法突出主题
[教材原句] Many dangerous diseases which are rare in China are quite commonly contracted in Tanzania.
[分析] 通过中国乌坦驿尼亚医疗条件的对比,强调援助的意义。读后续写中可用对比展现变化,演讲稿中可用数据对比增强说服力。 演讲者首先以大家熟悉的援助事例开篇,并用一个设问抛出演讲者对援助工作的价值的思考。
学语言 学结构
3.设问句启发思考
[教材原句] Is it worth it?Why help people overseas when China has many areas that are still in need of development
[分析] 文中使用了设问的修辞手法。设问是一种以疑问句形式表达确定观点的手法,目的是加强语气或引发思考,而非寻求答案。说话者心中已有明确立场,通过提问强化说服力。 然后,从个人的角度展现自己从一开始的不理解到后来的完全认同并引以为傲的心路历程,穿插叙述了自己的母亲在非洲当地所做的贡献,真实地反映了中国进行国际援助的作用和意义。
学语言 学结构
4.升华主题的结尾
[教材原句] Everyone deserves a fair chance in life... I pray that you will do the same.
[分析] 由个人经历上升到“人类命运共同体”的价值观,适用于读后续写的主题深化或演讲稿中的号召性结尾。 最后,从共建人类命运共同体的高度坚定了自己将来投身国际援助事业的决心,并提出倡议,号召更多人加入国际志愿者的行列。
第一段:点明演讲的主题
1.Ladies and gentlemen,distinguished guests,and fellow students,I stand before you today to deliver a speech on how to win friends and influence people.
女士们、先生们、尊敬的客人们、同学们:今天我站在你们面前,发表关于如何赢得朋友和影响他人的演讲。
2.Good morning/afternoon/evening,everyone.Today,I want to talk to you about how to learn English.
大家上午/下午/晚上好。今天,我想和大家谈谈如何学习英语。
3.Thank you all for being here today.I am honoured to have the opportunity to speak on the topic of Human and Robots.
感谢大家今天的到来。我很荣幸有机会就“人与机器人”这一主题发表演讲。
4.Picture this:you wake up one morning and realise...
想象一下:一天早上你醒来,发现……
第二段:演讲的具体内容
1.Its advantages are obvious.It allows us to learn at any time wherever we are.Besides,we can absorb all kinds of resources to learn more efficiently.
它的优点显而易见。 它让我们可以随时随地学习。 此外,我们可以吸收各种资源来更加有效地学习。
2.However,its disadvantages cannot be ignored.Staring at the screen is harmful to our eyes.Worse still,we don't have many opportunities to interact with our teachers and classmates.
然而,它的缺点也不容忽视。 盯着屏幕会伤害我们的眼睛。 更糟糕的是,我们没有很多机会与我们的老师和同学互动。
3.We are very proud of ourselves,believing we can make more contributions to a better world.
我们为自己感到非常自豪,相信我们会为建设一个更加美好的世界做出更大贡献。
4.It is a pity that many people don't realise the importance of environmental protection.
遗憾的是,很多人没有意识到保护环境的重要性。
5.As is known to all,failure is the mother of success,but few people can really understand what the saying means.
我们都知道,失败是成功之母,可是很少有人能真正理解这句格言的真谛。
第三段:表达作者自己的观点
1.All in all,Beijing possesses a kind of power that makes us feel the long history of Chinese culture over 5,000 years.If you visit Beijing,you will be amazed at everything there.
总而言之,北京拥有一种力量,让我们感受到中国五千多年文化的悠久历史。 如果你去北京游览,你会对那里的一切感到惊奇。
2.In conclusion,to realise a dream is not that easy,so we must study hard to fulfill our dreams.
总之,实现梦想不是那么容易的,所以我们必须努力学习来实现我们的梦想。
3.So,please sort your garbage from today on.It's everyone's duty to protect the environment.
因此,从今天开始实施垃圾分类。保护环境,人人有责。
4.We have only one planet after all.Let's take action to protect it,for you,for me,and for our future generations!
毕竟我们只有一个地球。让我们行动起来保护它,为了你,为了我,也为了我们的后代!
5.Thank you for your listening to my speech!
感谢大家倾听我的演讲!
假定你是李华,你们班将举办一场英语演讲比赛,演讲内容是关于中国对其他国家的援助。
内容包括:
1.援助内容:援建学校、医院和道路等;
2.援助意义:促进经济发展;
3.你的看法。
注意:写作词数应为80个左右。
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[审题谋篇]
第一段:中国对外援助的内容:援建学校、医院和道路。
第二段:中国对外援助的意义:促进经济发展。
第三段:为祖国的援助感到骄傲。
[遣词造句]
1.我们国家的经济快速发展。(economy)
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2.我们有能力帮助其他国家。(be capable of)
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3.巴基斯坦仍是一个发展中国家,相当贫穷。(Pakistan;非限制性定语从句)
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Our country's economy develops quickly.
We are capable of helping other countries.
Pakistan is still a developing country,which is rather poor.
4.修建了很多高速公路,它们连接了城市与农村,促进了经济的发展。(link;rural areas;promote;and连接三个简单句)
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[句式升级]
5.用as引导的时间状语从句合并句1和句2。
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6.用动词-ing形式作结果状语和非限制性定语从句改写句4。
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Many highways have been built,they link the cities and rural areas,and they promote the development of economy.
As our country's economy develops quickly,we are capable of helping other countries.
Many highways have been built,linking the cities and rural areas,which promote the development of economy.
[连句成篇]
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[参考范文]
Hello,everyone!
My name is Li Hua.As our country's economy develops quickly,we are capable of helping other countries.Pakistan is still a developing country,which is rather poor.Our country helps build many schools,hospitals and roads.More importantly,many highways have been built,linking the cities and rural areas,which promote the development of economy.
Our country's help has played an active part in the development of Pakistan.It makes life more convenient for locals and promotes local economic development.
I am really proud of what our country has done in Pakistan,and I also like those Chinese volunteers working there.
Thank you!
1.遇到困难
单词 challenge n.挑战;obstacles n.障碍;difficulty n.困难;struggle n.&v.挣扎;hardship n.艰难困苦;dilemma n.困境;pressure n.压力;tension n.紧张;confusion n.困惑;disappointment n.失望
词块 be faced with/face a big challenge面临一个大挑战;encounter obstacles遇到障碍;feel anxious and frustrated感到焦虑和沮丧;make a reasonable plan and arrange my work properly制定合理的计划并且恰当地安排我的工作;be trapped in/get stuck in陷入……中;a tough journey一次艰难的旅程;overcome any challenge战胜任何挑战;find a way out of this mess 想办法摆脱这种困境
句型 ①Something very bad had happened.
非常糟糕的事情发生了。
②She encountered many obstacles while preparing for the exam,but she didn't give up.
她在准备考试时遇到了许多障碍,但她没有放弃。
③She found it hard to balance her work and studies,but she managed it in the end.
她发现很难平衡工作和学习,但最终她做到了。
2.慷慨救助
单词 generosity n.慷慨;charity n.慈善;aid n.&v.援助;support n.&v.支持;assistance n.帮助,援助;contribution n.贡献;relief n.救济,救援;goodwill n.善意,友好;compassion n.同情,怜悯;kindness n.善良
词块 donate generously慷慨捐赠;provide support提供支持;extend a helping hand伸出援手;make a contribution作出贡献;show kindness to对……表现出善意;help those in need帮助有需要的人;give/lend a hand 伸出援助之手;offer relief to 向……提供救济
句型 ①She gave back to the community by volunteering at the local food bank every weekend.
她通过每个周末在当地食物银行做志愿者来回馈社区。
②He offered assistance to the elderly woman who was struggling to carry her groceries.
他帮助了那位正在费力搬运杂货的老妇人。
③She generously donated a large sum of money to the charity to support children in need.
她慷慨地捐赠了一大笔钱给慈善机构,以帮助有需要的孩子们。
3.表达感激
单词 gratitude n.感激;appreciate vt.感谢,欣赏;acknowledgment n.感谢,承认;recognize vt.承认,认出;respect v.&n.尊重,尊敬;praise v.& n.赞扬;admire v.钦佩,赞赏;appreciative adj.感激的;thankful adj.感谢的;grateful adj.感激的
词块 give sb a light hug轻轻拥抱某人;be moved to tears感动得流泪;express my heartfelt appreciation表达我由衷的感激;be thankful to...感谢……;filled with gratitude充满感恩;sincerely appreciate真诚地感谢;show respect and admiration for对……致以尊重与钦佩;be touched to the heart内心深受感动
句型 ①Words can't express how thankful I am.
言语无法表达我的谢意。
②Stunned and moved,I stared at the note,feeling guilty about my previous thought that all people were indifferent.
震惊和感动,我盯着纸条,对自己以前认为所有人都漠不关心的想法感到内疚。
③I'm determined to pass kindness down to create a much friendlier world.
我决心把善意传递下去,创造一个更加友好的世界。
1.遇难脱困(遇到困难→困扰→寻求解决办法→脱困)
Last week,①__________________________ (我面临一个大挑战).I found it hard to finish my school project on time because of all the homework.I ②_________________
________ (遇到了很多障碍) and ③__________ (陷入) a situation,④_______________
_________ (感到焦虑和沮丧).However,I decided to stay strong and keep my head above water.First,I ⑤__________________________________________________ (设法制定合理的计划并且恰当地安排我的工作).Finally,I ⑥_________________________ (想办法摆脱这种困境),and I finished my project.It was ⑦______________ (一次艰难的旅程),but I learned that with determination,I can ⑧____________________ (战胜任何挑战).
I was faced with a big challenge
encountered many
obstacles
got stuck in
feeling anxious and
frustrated
tried to make a reasonable plan and arrange my work properly
found a way out of this mess
a tough journey
overcome any challenge
2.风暴中的感恩(困境→感激→传递善意)
When I was lost in the storm,a stranger ①________________ (轻轻拥抱我) and shared an umbrella.I ②__________________ (感动得流泪) by this kindness.Now,I want to
③____________________________ (表达我真挚的感谢) to them.Their help taught me to always ④_____________ (感谢) others.Though life is hard sometimes,people's love ⑤_______________________ (我的心中充满感恩).I ⑥________________ (真诚地感谢)every act of kindness.Let's ⑦_________________________ (致以尊重与钦佩) for those who help others.
gave me a light hug
was moved to tears
express my heartfelt appreciation
be thankful to
fills my heart with gratitude
sincerely appreciate
show respect and admiration
Ⅰ.应用文写作(满分15分)
假定你是李华,你校即将举办主题为“分享”的英语演讲比赛。请你写一篇演讲稿参加比赛,内容包括:
1.分享的好处;
2.动员大家分享。
注意:写作词数应为80个左右。
The Power of Sharing
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(满分:40分)
[参考范文]
The Power of Sharing
Good morning,everyone!My topic is the power of sharing.There are many benefits of sharing.
To begin with,sharing will make you happy.As the saying goes,“Sharing is caring.” When you share,it means that you are caring for others.This will give you a sense of satisfaction and achievement.In addition,sharing does have magic power.It's absolutely true that when you share your joy,it will be doubled;when you share your sorrow,it will be reduced by half.
Just share whatever you have!You will make your own days as well as others' days better by sharing.
Thanks for your listening!
Ⅱ.读后续写(满分25分)
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Callie was a high school student.Because of her parents' business,her family moved from London to Los Angeles,where she grew up.
Living in a quiet and warm community with her parents,Callie was very interested in various volunteer activities in the community,and almost no one in the community didn't know her.
On a sunny afternoon,Callie was reading a poem when she heard a soft knock.She stood up at once and opened the door.Her favourite neighbor,Mrs Baker,stood outside the door.
“I need your help,Callie,” Mrs Baker said,“and do you know the empty lot (场地) down the street?” Callie nodded,smiling.“The place is a mess,covered with trash.The city is letting us use the lot as a community garden,” she explained.“We need help to clean up the lot on Saturday.” “Sure,Mrs Baker!” Callie said cheerfully.“I just have nothing to do this Saturday.I will be happy to help you!” Mrs Baker looked pleased and said,“Thanks,Callie.We want to get the garden planted before summer.By then,adults and children in our community will have a good place to go.”
At school the next morning,Callie's close friend Tamara was waiting for her by their classroom,who had a surprise for her.Tamara said,“My mom bought tickets to Fun World this Saturday.She has an extra one for you!” The girls had been waiting for months for the amusement park to reopen.
Callie sighed and worried over how to choose for the rest of the day.Her mother noticed her mood when she arrived home.“Did something go wrong at school?” her mother asked.Callie explained her problem.“What should I do,Mom?” Callie asked.“I know you want to go with Tamara and also want to help Mrs Baker.Think carefully about your choice,and you need to make your own decision.But I know you will do what is best,” her mother answered.
注意:续写词数应为150个左右。
Callie spent the rest of the evening thinking about her decision.__________________
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On Sunday,Callie met Mrs Baker at the empty lot.___________________________
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[前文大意] 高中生Callie热衷于社区的各种志愿活动。一天下午,邻居Baker夫人请她在周六帮忙清扫社区的空地,她毫不犹豫地答应下来。之后,Callie的好朋友Tamara邀请她周六一起去游乐场玩。Callie不知该如何选择。
[续写思路]
1.段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“Callie整个晚上都在思考她的决定。”可知,第一段可描写Callie内心的纠结以及下定决心帮助清理花园。
②由第二段首句内容“星期天,Callie在空地上遇见了Mrs Baker。”可知,第二段可描写Callie得到了朋友的理解,在大家的共同努力下,她们完成了清扫工作。
2.续写线索:
思考决定——遵守承诺——告诉朋友——朋友谅解——完成清扫——感悟
[参考范文]
Callie spent the rest of the evening thinking about her decision. She wanted to go to Fun World,but in the end she decided that her promise to her neighbor was more important.The next day at school,Callie told Tamara that she would not be able to go to Fun World.Tamara tried to understand,but Callie could tell that Tamara was disappointed.The girls hardly spoke for the rest of the week.
On Sunday,Callie met Mrs Baker at the empty lot.“Your mother said you made a tough choice.Thank you for giving a hand today.” Callie smiled as she cleaned with a large trash bag.“Do you need any help?” A voice behind her asked.Callie turned,surprised to see Tamara.“I know you made a promise to clean up the garden,and I wanted to come to help you.My mom said she could take us to Fun World next weekend.” With joint efforts,they finished the cleaning.Both Callie and Tamara realized that once a promise is made,it needs to be kept.