(共43张PPT)
第2讲 打磨词汇升级句式,润色习作2法宝
策略一 词汇升级——学会运用高级词汇
策略二 句式升级——学会运用高级句式
目 录 索 引
策略一 词汇升级——学会运用高级词汇
技法1 求新求变
同样意义的词语,要根据语境使用最新学过的词汇而不是小学、初中学过的词汇。如果同样的意义重复出现,要使用不同的表达方式。
1.(2022全国乙卷)Those who choose to read English books and visit English learning websites only make up 18% and 12% respectively.
→Those who choose to read English books and visit English learning websites only account for 18% and 12% respectively.
2.(2024新课标Ⅰ卷)It was such a good experience that I would always remember it.
→It was such a memorable/an extraordinary experience that I would always keep it in mind.
3.(2023浙江1月卷)Throughout the event,I was attracted by the wide variety of plants that exist in our world and learned about plants that are used for medical purposes,and those that provide food and shelter for animals.
→Throughout the event,I was struck by the incredible variety of plants that exist in our world and learned about plants that are used for medical purposes, as well as those that provide food and shelter for animals.
技法2 求准求精
写作时不一定每一句都要有复杂句式,有时准确使用一个单词或短语就会让整个句子增色不少。
1.(2023新课标Ⅰ卷)I think that it’s not a good idea to randomly pair up students for the spoken English training after class.
→I don’t think it a good idea to randomly pair up students for the spoken English training after class.
2.(2021全国乙卷)In conclusion,we should find a way to study online better.
→In conclusion,we should find a way to study online more efficiently.
3.(2022全国甲卷)The World Oceans Day was set up to raise people’s awareness of protecting the oceans,which play an important part in global ecosystem.
→The World Oceans Day was set up to raise people’s awareness of protecting the oceans,which play a significant/crucial part in global ecosystem.
技法3 短语优先
恰当地选用一些贴切、地道的高级表达,尤其是短语,对提高书面表达的得分至关重要。所以考生不妨考虑在文章中使用较高级的表达,充分展现自己的语言功底。
1.(2023新课标Ⅰ、Ⅱ卷)I would appreciate it if you could consider my suggestion.
→I would appreciate it if you could take my suggestion into account/consideration.
2.(2023全国乙卷)Initially,on watching the Winter Olympic Games in Beijing,I began to love skating.
→Initially,on watching the Winter Olympic Games in Beijing,I became enthusiastic about skating.
3.(2021全国乙卷)And eventually,we can master what we desire to learn.
→And eventually,we can have a good command of what we desire to learn.
4.(2023新课标Ⅰ、Ⅱ卷)Firstly,randomly pairing up students may cause imbalanced language abilities within the groups.
→Firstly,randomly pairing up students may lead to/result in imbalanced language abilities within the groups.
高分语料
普通表达与其对应升级表达总结:
类型1 校园生活
汉语意义 普通表达 升级表达
能够做某事 be able to do sth be capable of doing sth,be competent to do sth
努力做某事 try to do sth spare no effort to do sth,strive to do sth
某人必须要做的事情 ...sb must do a must for sb
试图做某事 try to do sth attempt/seek to do sth,make an attempt to do sth
汉语意义 普通表达 升级表达
参加 join in,take part in participate in,get involved in,attend,engage in
想做某事 want to do sth can’t wait to do sth,desire/long to do sth,be eager to do sth
专注于 focus on concentrate on,be absorbed in,be immersed in
帮助某人 help sb do sb a favor,lend/give sb a hand,come to sb’s assistance
忙于 be busy with be occupied with,be engaged in
即将来临 be coming be around the corner,be approaching
利用,使用 use make (full) use of,take advantage of,make the best of,adopt
类型2 动作行为
汉语意义 普通表达 升级表达
记住 remember keep/bear in mind that...
面对,面临 face be faced with,meet with,encounter
意识到 know,realize be aware of/that...,be conscious of,come to realize
重视 value attach great importance to,take sth seriously
参观 visit pay a visit to,go to...for a visit
某人想到某事 sb think(s) of sth sth occur(s) to/strike(s) sb,sb come(s) up with sth
建议 suggest/advise that... put forward the suggestion that...,recommend that...
汉语意义 普通表达 升级表达
弥补,补偿 make up for compensate for
吸引某人 attract sb appeal to sb,have great appeal for sb, draw sb
相信,认为 believe that...,be sure that... hold the firm belief/view that...,be convinced that...
影响 affect have an effect/influence/impact on
造成,导致 cause contribute to,lead to,result in,bring about
提高 improve,raise,increase promote,strengthen
照顾 look after,take care of tend to,attend to
类型3 人际关系
汉语意义 普通表达 升级表达
向某人道歉 say sorry to sb make an apology to sb,apologize to sb
因某事感激某人 thank sb for sth,be thankful to sb for sth be grateful to sb for sth,express one’s gratitude to sb for sth
遇见 meet come across,encounter,run into
鼓励某人 encourage sb be in favor of sb
向某人求助 ask sb for help turn to sb for help
类型4 修饰形容
汉语意义 普通表达 升级表达
不同种类的 different kinds of a wide range of,a variety of,various, varieties of
大量的,很多的 a number of,a lot of a considerable number of,
an overwhelming majority of,
large quantities of,scores of,
dozens of,countless,numerous
对……有益 be useful to,be good for be of great benefit to,do good to,
be beneficial to
汉语意义 普通表达 升级表达
由……组成 be made up of consist of,be composed of
疲惫不堪 be tired be worn out,feel exhausted
立即 immediately without hesitation/delay
擅长 be good at be skilled at,have a gift for,have a good command of,be expert at/in
准时 on time on schedule,punctually
类型5 陈述事实
汉语意义 普通表达 升级表达
几天前 a few days ago the other day
大家 公认…… People think that... It’s acknowledged/
accepted/believed that...
实际上 actually as a matter of fact
谈及 talk of/about,mention refer to,speak of,when it comes to
显然 clearly apparently,obviously
应该 should be supposed to
关于 about with regard to,in terms of,as for,
regarding,concerning
通常 usually more often than not
汉语意义 普通表达 升级表达
有时 sometimes occasionally,once in a while
不得不做 have to do have no choice but to do
仅仅 only no more than,merely
只要 as long as on condition that
在我看来 in my opinion as far as I’m concerned,personally speaking
引起人们的关注 attract people’s attention arouse/draw people’s concern
越来越多的 more and more an increasing number of,a growing number of
我担心…… I’m worried that... What makes me worried is that...
汉语意义 普通表达 升级表达
很重要 be very important be of great/vital importance
应采取有效措施解决这个问题 should take effective measures to solve the problem effective measures ought to be taken to deal/cope with the problem
受欢迎 be popular with/among enjoy wide popularity among/with
忽视 ignore fail to take...into account,turn a blind eye to
因为 because (of) on account of,in that,since,seeing that,as,on the grounds that...
与……有关的 be related to be associated/connected with
策略二 句式升级——学会运用高级句式
复杂结构的运用,如强调句、倒装句、含有名词性从句、定语从句或状语从句的复合句和语法结构,及含有非谓语动词的高级句式等,能彰显考生对英语语言文字的驾驭能力。但是,在使用这些句式时,应遵循以下原则:高级但不造作,多变但不离谱,复杂但不晦涩。
技法1 自我介绍 开篇吸睛
句式1:I am Li Hua,+同位语/定语从句
(2020全国Ⅲ卷)I am Li Hua,one of your students,writing in the hope that you can give us some advice on our short play.
我是你的一位学生李华,写这封信的目的是希望你能给我们一些关于英语短剧的建议。
技法2 活用非谓语 句句精彩
句式2:分词(短语)作状语
①(2025全国一卷)First,this theme directly reflects our daily school life,making it relatable to everyone.
首先,这个主题直接反映了我们日常的校园生活,让每个人都觉得亲切熟悉。
②(2023全国甲卷)Known as a Chinese writer and politician in the Song Dynasty,Fan Zhongyan was highly appreciated because he made great contributions to society.
作为中国宋代著名的作家和政治家,范仲淹因其对社会的巨大贡献而受到高度赞赏。
③(2023新课标Ⅰ卷)Learning that we’ll be randomly paired to do the oral practice,I feel an urge to express my different voice.
得知我们将被随机配对进行口语练习,我有表达自己不同想法的欲望。
句式3:aiming to...为了……
(2021全国甲卷)My school is to hold theme-based class meetings,aiming to promote traditional Chinese culture.
为弘扬中国传统文化,我校将举行主题班会。
句式4:the purpose of which + be to do (非限制性定语从句)……的目的是……
Various activities have been held,the purpose of which was to raise our awareness of campus safety.
各种各样的活动已经举行,其目的是提高我们的校园安全意识。
句式5:representing/on behalf of...代表……
(2022新课标Ⅰ卷)On behalf of/Representing the English program of our school’s radio station,I’m writing to invite you to give an interview.
我代表学校广播电台英语节目写信邀请你接受采访。
技法3 巧用it提升表达
句式6:It seems/seemed that...
(2024新课标Ⅰ卷)It seemed that I was integrated with nature and felt its vitality and rhythm.
我似乎与大自然融为一体,感受到了大自然的活力和节奏。
句式7:It is +adj./n.+ (for/of sb) to do/that从句
(2025全国一卷)It is also a great way to discover hidden sides of each other, thus strengthening friendships.
这也是一个发现彼此不为人知一面的绝佳方式,从而增进友谊。
句式8:It goes without saying that...
毋庸置疑……
(2021天津3月卷)It goes without saying that Beijing is not only the political center but also the economic center of our country.
毋庸置疑,北京不仅是我国的政治中心,而且是我国的经济中心。
技法4 三大从句 锦上添花
句式9:what引导的主语从句+be+n./that...
(2021浙江6月卷)What impressed me was the amazing works by those gifted student painters.
令我印象深刻的是那些天才学生画家的惊人作品。
句式10:There is no doubt/There is no denying that...毫无疑问/不可否认……
(2022全国甲卷)There is no denying that we will make a difference to the marine environment with joined efforts.
不可否认,我们将共同努力,对海洋环境做出巨大贡献。
句式11:As an old saying goes...俗话说……
As is known to us/all...众所周知……
As is known to all,both teachers and students are suffering from physical and mental health problems by sitting long before the desks.
众所周知,老师和学生都因久坐遭受着身体和心理健康问题。
句式12:if引导的条件状语从句
(2023新课标Ⅰ卷)To begin with,we’d feel privileged if you could match us according to our oral English levels,rather than pair us randomly.
首先,如果您能根据我们的英语口语水平给我们搭配,而不是随机搭配,我们会感到很荣幸。
技法5 倒装省略 风景独好
句式13:Not only+助动词/情态动词/系动词+主语+谓语+其他,but+主语(+also)+谓语+其他,意为“不仅……而且……”。
(2024新课标Ⅰ、Ⅱ卷)In a word,it was not only an art class but it also provided us with a chance to connect with nature.
→In a word,not only was it an art class but it also provided us with a chance to connect with nature.
总之,这不仅是一堂艺术课,也给我们提供了与自然接触的机会。
句式14:“Only+副词/介词短语/when/if引导的状语从句” 位于句首时的部分倒装句,意为“只有……才……”。
(2025全国一卷)Only when we give good clues can others guess who it is,with hints given,making it like a fun game!
只有当我们给出好的线索时,别人才能猜出是谁,给出提示,就像一个有趣的游戏!
句式15:So+adj./adv.+情态动词/系动词/助动词+主语+that...
(2021新高考Ⅰ卷)So patiently did their father instruct them that the twins made the breakfast fast and well.
父亲耐心地指导,因此双胞胎把早餐做得又快又好。
句式16:形容词/名词/副词+as+主语+系动词/谓语动词
(2021全国乙卷)Convenient as online learning is,staring at the screen for a long time is harmful to our eyes.
虽然网络学习很方便,但长时间看屏幕对我们的眼睛有害。
句式17:省略if的虚拟条件句
Your selfless assistance made me achieve such great progress in English.
→Had it not been for your selfless assistance,I couldn’t have achieved such great progress in English.
要不是你无私的帮助,我不会在英语方面取得这么大的进步。
句式18:When/while/unless/until/if/even if/even though+doing/done/adj.
Although we were hot and tired,seeing the neighbourhood neat and clean,we were more than delighted.
→Although hot and tired,seeing the neighbourhood neat and clean,we were more than delighted.
尽管又热又累,但看着小区整洁又干净,我们都非常高兴。
技法6 恰当强调 一句千钧
句式19:It is/was+被强调成分+that+其他,意为“正是……”。
(2024浙江1月卷)A small change can make a big difference in your day.
→It’s a small change that can make a big difference in your day.
一个小的改变可以给你的一天带来巨大的影响。
句式20:主语+助动词do/does/did+动词原形+...,意为“……确实/一定……”。
提示:该句用于强调动词,一般现在时用do/does,一般过去时用did。
(2025全国一卷) I do believe this column will both entertain and strengthen our school community.
我相信这个专栏既能娱乐大家,又能增强我们学校的团体凝聚力。
技法7 适时感叹 虚实结合
句式21:what/how 引导的感叹句
提示:what 引导的感叹句中,中心词是名词,how引导的感叹句中,中心词是形容词或副词。
I am delighted to be one of the members in your team.
→How delighted I am to be one of the members in your team!
成为你的团队的一员,我真高兴!
技法8 with复合句型 佳作之道
句式22:with+宾语+非谓语动词,主句
提示:该句式中,非谓语动词形式主要有3种:doing (主动或进行),done (被动或完成),to do(将来的动作)。
①(2025湖北武汉质量检测)With our exchange program drawing to an end,I want to express our sincere gratitude to you for your kindness and generosity.(with复合结构)
在我们的交流项目即将结束之际,我想对您的友好和慷慨表示衷心的感谢。
②With so many fantastic works to be shown at the exhibition,it will surely arouse your interest in Chinese painting.(with复合结构)
有这么多了不起的作品即将在展览中展出,这一定会激起你对中国画的兴趣。
课堂应用
Ⅰ.用高级词汇替换下列句中的加黑词语
1.(2025湖北七市调研)As planned,the activity will begin at 8:00 a.m.at the school lecture hall where the biology teacher will explain basic principles of scientific observation.
2.(2025湖南长沙模拟)I want to express my thanks for recommending that I read some illuminating stories of scientists.
3.(2025湖南长沙模拟)Therefore,it is important to strengthen international cooperation and jointly safeguard world peace.
scheduled
convey my gratitude/appreciation
crucial/vital/significant
4.(2025安徽“江南十校”联考)Our campus is attractive with green grass,tall trees and modern buildings.The atmosphere is inviting and perfect for both studies and leisure.
5.(2021全国乙卷)With the wide spread of the Internet,more and more people become online learners.
engaging/appealing/charming
an increasing number of
Ⅱ.用高级句式升级下列句子
1.We can improve our efficiency and make our school life meaningful only in this way.
→ we can improve our efficiency and make our school life meaningful.(强调句)
2.It not only helped us cooperate better and beautify our campus,but it also raised our awareness of protecting the environment.
→ ,but it also raised our awareness of protecting the environment.(倒装句)
It is only in this way that
Not only did it help us cooperate better and beautify our campus
3.The radio program was founded in 2016.It aimed to provide a good platform for the students to share their school life.
→The radio program was founded in 2016,
to share their school life.
(动词-ing形式短语作状语)
aiming to provide a good platform for the students
Ⅲ.完成句子
1. is Li Bai’s Tang Poems for the reasons below.
我首先推荐的是李白的唐诗,原因如下。
2.I’m writing to invite you to go for a morning run with me,
in an amazing way.
我写信是想邀请你和我一起去晨跑,这对我们俩都有好处。
3. in the English poetry writing contest held by the English newspaper.
我写信是想告诉你,我在这家英文报纸举办的英语诗歌写作比赛中获得了一等奖。
What comes first on my recommendation list
which may benefit both of us
I am writing to inform you that I won first prize(共184张PPT)
第3讲 分门别类讲练,提升写作技能
第一组 询问信、建议信和邀请信
第二组 申请信、求助信和告知信
目 录 索 引
第三组 道歉信、推荐信和感谢信
第四组 演讲/发言稿、征文投稿和宣传稿
第五组 倡议书、通知、新闻报道、人物介绍
第一组 询问信、建议信和邀请信
一、询问信
询问信,又称咨询信,是写信人在对某事物不理解、不熟悉或对某方面的信息感兴趣的情况下,希望进一步了解详细信息的信件。
询问信靓句集锦(不同主题的中间句)
1.传统文化班会
(1)I’m writing to see if it is possible for you to provide me with information concerning the class meeting about the traditional Chinese culture.
我写信是看您能否给我提供这次中国传统文化的班会的相关信息。
(2)I wonder if you could provide some specific information about the class meeting.
我想知道您能否提供一些关于班会的具体信息。
2.夏令营
(1)Many thanks for inviting me to your school’s Summer Science Camp.I am looking forward to it and would like to enquire about further details.
非常感谢你邀请我参加你们学校的暑期科学营。我很期待,并想询问更多的细节。
(2)I am delighted to have been selected to participate in the summer camp.So I’m writing to consult about the details of it.
我很高兴被选中参加本次夏令营。因此,我写信来咨询有关细节。
(3)First of all,could you keep me informed of the specific schedule of the summer camp so that I can make preparations in advance
首先,你能不能告诉我夏令营的具体时间表,以便我提前准备
(4)Secondly,I wonder if there is a student dormitory available.
其次,我想知道是否有可用的学生宿舍。
(5)And would you be kind enough to tell me about the costs associated with the summer camp activities as well as the accommodation fees
你能告诉我有关夏令营的活动费用和住宿费吗
3.比赛
(1)Concerning the contest,I would like to know details such as the exact dates and the schedule to help me plan my trip accordingly.
关于比赛,我想知道诸如具体的日期和日程安排等细节,以帮助我相应地计划我的行程。
(2)In addition,I would like to know more about the contest format and procedures.
另外,我想对比赛的形式和程序了解得更多一些。
(3)If there is anything else that needs special attention,please inform me at your convenience.
如果还有其他需要特别注意的地方,请你在方便的时候告诉我。
4.课程
(1)Above all,my keen interest and wide range of hobbies drive me to be curious about the courses offered.
最重要的是,我浓厚的兴趣和广泛的爱好使我对所提供的课程感到好奇。
(2)Another two points I am not certain about are where I could accommodate myself and how much I need to pay in total.
我不确定的另外两点是我能住在哪里以及我总共需要支付多少费用。
(3)What’s more,for the better preparation,would you be so kind as to inform me of requirements of application
此外,为了准备得更好,你能告诉我申请的要求吗
二、建议信
建议信是生活中一种常见的文体,是写信人向收信人对某事提出的建议或忠告。建议信要写得简明扼要、目的明确,具有合理性和说服力。
建议信靓句集锦(不同主题的中间句)
1.语言学习
(1)Reading English aloud can not only help us improve our oral ability but also develop our language skills,such as listening,speaking,reading and writing.
大声朗读英语不仅有助于提高我们的口语能力,而且能培养我们的听、说、读、写等语言技能。
(2)This is because reading aloud,which is the basis of memory,can make the sound,form and meaning of an English word strengthened and consolidated.
这是因为朗读是记忆的基础,可以使英语单词的音、形、意得到强化和巩固。
(3)In order to learn English well,apart from English class,you’d better take an active part in English Corner and other after-class English activities,which will benefit you a lot.
为了学好英语,除了英语课,你最好积极参与英语角和其他课外英语活动,这会对你大有裨益。
(4)Besides,making more Chinese friends and communicating with them often is a good choice for you,since they will tell you a lot about China and help you learn Chinese.
此外,结交更多的中国朋友并经常与他们交流对你来说是一个很好的选择,因为他们会告诉你很多关于中国的事情,帮助你学习汉语。
(5)What’s more,it is also helpful to watch Chinese TV programs and read books,newspapers and magazines in Chinese whenever possible.
另外,尽可能观看中国电视节目,阅读中文书籍、报纸和杂志也是有帮助的。
2.活动安排
(1)Consequently,you can prepare various activities and language games that are not only enjoyable but also highly educational.
因此,你们可以准备各种有趣而且很有教育意义的活动和语言游戏。
(2)To start with,I think it would be beneficial to have more events that encourage students to actively participate in English conversations.
首先,我认为有更多的活动来鼓励学生积极参与英语对话会有所帮助。
(3)In addition,to bring this theme to life,I suggest hosting a storytelling session where students can share their favorite stories as well as learn how to craft their own stories.
另外,为了使这个主题更生动,我建议举办一次讲故事的活动,学生们在活动上可以分享他们最喜欢的故事以及学习如何编写自己的故事。
3.人际交往
(1)As far as I am concerned,you’re supposed to communicate with your classmates actively.
在我看来,你应该和同学们积极沟通。
(2)If I were you,I would explain first,which will be beneficial to both of you.
如果我是你,我首先会解释,这会对你们两个人都有益。
(3)It would be wise to communicate openly and honestly with your friends in a calm and respectful manner.
以冷静和尊重的方式开诚布公地与朋友沟通是明智的。
三、邀请信
邀请信是邀请收信人参加某项活动的书信,在写作时,语气要热情真挚,不要强人所难。
邀请信靓句集锦(不同主题的中间句)
1.英语活动
(1)With the intention of/Aimed at enhancing students’ enthusiasm for learning English,an English speech contest will be held in our school on August 6.
为提高学生学习英语的热情,我校将于8月6日举行一场英语演讲比赛。
(2)It will begin at 2:00 pm and last two hours,during which 15 well-prepared contestants will deliver their speeches.
它将于下午两点开始,持续两个小时,在此期间将会有 15位准备充分的参赛者发表演讲。
(3)Participants will gather in the English Corner,sharing a knowledge of brilliant English cultures and interesting customs.
参加者将聚集在英语角,分享关于璀璨的英语文化和有趣习俗的知识。
2.美术活动
(1)As scheduled,the painting exhibition is to be held from 8:00 am to 12:00 pm in the school lecture hall.During the exhibition,there will be a wide range of activities you are interested in.
按计划画展将于上午8时至12时在学校讲堂举行。展览期间将会有各种你感兴趣的活动。
(2)Not only can we understand various activities held in our school,but also we can broaden our horizons and inspire our interest in painting.
我们不仅可以了解学校举办的各种活动,还可以拓宽我们的视野,激发我们对绘画的兴趣。
3.音乐活动
(1)The concert will be held on Saturday,starting at 7:30 pm,which is well worth admiring.
音乐会将于周六举行,晚上7点半开始,非常值得欣赏。
(2)The concert will showcase traditional Chinese instruments and melodies, and you are to be impressed by the richness and diversity of our musical culture.
音乐会将展示中国传统乐器和旋律,我们音乐文化的丰富性和多样性一定会给你留下深刻印象。
4.文化交流活动
(1)As scheduled,the party is to be held from 8:00 am to 12:00 pm in our school stadium,started with a classical dance.
按照计划,派对将于上午8点到12点在我们学校的体育场举行,将由一支古典舞开场。
(2)You are expected to arrive at the stadium by 8:00 am and it is hoped that you can prepare some programs representing your country’s culture,followed by enjoying delicious traditional Chinese food as well as some traditional Chinese opera performances.
您要在早上8点前到达体育馆,希望您能准备一些代表你们国家文化的节目,然后享受美味的中国传统食物,欣赏一些中国传统的戏曲表演。
[典题印证](2025全国二卷)
身份 对象 事件
假定你是校英文报编辑李华,外教Chris 上个月答应写一篇介绍加拿大体育运动的文章。请给 Chris写一封邮件,内容包括:
核心任务
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
Dear Chris,
Best wishes,
Li Hua
[文思梳理]
第一段:问候并表达感激(再次感谢答应写一篇介绍加拿大体育运动的文章)
第二段:询问具体内容(①询问文章进展②提醒交稿时间)
第三段:表达期待,欢迎联系
[满分范文]
Dear Chris,
I hope you’re doing well.Thank you again for agreeing to write the article on Canadian sports last month![问候并表达感激]
I’m writing to follow up on① its progress.Could you please let me know how it’s going Just a friendly reminder [1]that the submission② deadline③ is June 30.We’d truly appreciate it [2]if you could share your draft④ by then to allow time for editing.[询问具体内容并提醒交稿时间]
Thank you for your support!Please feel free to reach out if you need assistance⑤.Looking forward to reading your article![表达期待,欢迎联系]
Best wishes,
Li Hua
靓词标注:①跟进 ②提交 ③截止日期,最后期限 ④草稿 ⑤帮助
高级句式:[1]同位语从句 [2]条件状语从句
课堂应用
1.建议信
(2024北京卷)
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的外国好友Jim准备给其校报的Asia Today栏目投稿。得知今年是新中国成立75周年,他打算重点介绍中国的发展成就,发来邮件询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复,内容包括:
1.建议投稿内容;
2.就以上建议简要说明理由。
注意:1.词数100个左右;
2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
Yours,
Li Hua
Dear Jim,
It’s great to hear that you’re planning to write about China’s achievements on the occasion of① the 75th anniversary of the founding of this country.Here are a few suggestions for your article.[说明写信目的]
To begin with,talk about China’s economic growth and technological advancements,[1]which are the highlights② in the past few decades.Then, projects like the Belt and Road Initiative make a good topic to discuss [2] because it showcases China’s determination to build a shared future with the world.In addition,you can also mention China’s role in helping solve global issues such as the global warming,offering a more comprehensive view.[提出建议,说明理由]
Looking forward to reading your article![期盼回复]
Yours,
Li Hua
靓词标注:①在……之际 ②最好(最精彩的)部分
高级句式:[1]定语从句 [2]原因状语从句
2.邀请信
(2022新课标Ⅰ卷)
假定你是校广播站英语节目“Talk and Talk”的负责人李华,请给外教Caroline写邮件邀请她做一次访谈。内容包括:
1.节目介绍;
2.访谈的时间和话题。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
Dear Caroline,
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
Dear Caroline,
How’s it going I am writing the letter to invite you to an interview [1] held by“Talk and Talk”,[2]which is an English programme in our school broadcast station.[写信目的]
As you know,our programme starts at 10 am and ends at 11 am every Tuesday.Besides,the topic is about how to improve our spoken English.You can give us some suggestions about it.[3]It is certain that all students will benefit much from① your speech.[邀请原因及内容]
I would appreciate it if you could take my invitation into account②. Looking forward to your early reply.[期待回复]
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
靓词标注:①受益于 ②把……考虑在内
高级句式:[1]过去分词短语作后置定语
[2]非限制性定语从句
[3]it作形式主语,that从句为真正的主语
第二组 申请信、求助信和告知信
一、申请信
申请信有很多种,比如求职申请、加入某组织或活动的申请等。由于此类题目常有较多的文字提示,写作时应注意审题全面,不能遗漏要点。
申请信靓句集锦(不同主题的中间句)
1.做志愿者
(1)Outgoing and warm-hearted personalities combined with my good command of English will contribute to smooth communication with the locals.
外向热情的性格加上我良好的英语水平将有助于我与当地人顺利沟通。
(2)As a student who has worked hard on English learning for...years,I’m very skilled in this language,especially in oral English,which is beneficial to...
作为一名努力学习英语……年的学生,我非常精通这门语言,尤其是英语口语,这对……有帮助。
(3)Equipped with excellent spoken English,I’m sure I can meet your essential requirements.
我具备优秀的英语口语,我相信我能满足您的基本要求。
(4)Having served as a volunteer for years,I’ve gained abundant experience and thus can offer better service.
作为志愿者服务了许多年,我积累了丰富的经验,从而可以提供更好的服务。
2.加入活动
(1)Learning that Chinese Workshop will be held in the school,I am writing to apply to take part in the activity.
得知学校将举办中文研讨会,我写信申请参加该活动。
(2)Not only can I teach participants how to make dumplings,but I can also let them fall in love with Chinese cuisine.
我不仅可以教成员做饺子,还可以让他们爱上中国菜。
3.做导游
(1)In addition,with an outgoing and open-minded personality,it’s easy for me to get along well with others.
此外,我性格外向、思想开放,很容易与他人和睦相处。
(2)Last but not least,I have been to numerous famous scenic spots and my hometown is also a famous historical and cultural city,where I often act as a volunteer tour guide to show foreign tourists around,from which I’ve gained relevant experience.
最后但同样重要的是,我去过许多风景名胜,我的家乡也是一座著名的历史文化城市,在家乡我经常作为志愿导游带外国游客参观,从中我获得了相关的经验。
4.职位
(1)To begin with,I have an extensive knowledge of VR Industry,which proves to be beneficial to promoting China’s cutting-edge technology to the world.
首先,我对虚拟现实行业有广泛的了解,这有助于将中国的前沿技术推向世界。
(2)Most importantly,having worked as a volunteer for several international exchange programs,I’ve obtained abundant experience,which gives me the edge over others.
最重要的是,作为几个国际交流项目的志愿者,我获得了丰富的经验,这让我比其他人更有优势。
5.做记者
(1)I am passionate about sports and possess excellent writing and communication skills.
我热爱体育运动,具有优秀的写作和沟通能力。
(2)As a responsible and reliable individual,I can accurately report on sports events and capture the wonderful moments.
作为一个负责且可靠的人,我可以准确地报道体育赛事,捕捉精彩瞬间。
(3)I also have some experience in multitasking and working under pressure, which will enable me to handle the job effectively.
我也有一些关于多任务处理和在压力下工作的经验,这将使我能够高效地处理这份工作。
6.加入俱乐部
(1)As a dedicated student-athlete,I do believe that I possess not only the passion but also the necessary skills and commitment required for success on the field.
作为一名敬业的学生运动员,我非常相信我不仅拥有激情,还拥有在赛场上取得成功所需的技能和投入精神。
(2)Additionally,my leadership experience from captaining previous squads ensures strong camaraderie among teammates and fosters a competitive spirit within the group.
此外,我之前担任队长的领导经验确保了队友之间强烈的同志情谊,并培养了团队内部的竞争精神。
(3)Last but not least,I have confidence in myself that I’d make contributions to the team.
最后但同样重要的是,我相信自己会为团队做出贡献。
二、求助信
求助信是指自己遇到一些无法解决的问题或困难时向别人请求帮助的一种书信。
求助信靓句集锦(不同主题的中间句)
1.学习方面
(1)I have difficulty in remembering English words,which accounts for my limited vocabulary.
我记英语单词有困难,这就是我词汇量有限的原因。
(2)What troubles me most is that I often perform poorly in English exams, however hard I work.
最让我烦恼的是,无论我多么努力,我在英语考试中总是成绩很差。
(3)In addition,I am at a loss how to apply proper expressions to my writing, which makes me frustrated.
此外,我不知道如何将正确的表达应用到我的写作中,这让我很沮丧。
(4)I find myself making progress not as fast as before,which has been annoying me for a long time.
我发现自己进步得不像以前那么快了,这已经困扰我很长时间了。
2.人际交往
(1)I have some difficulties in getting along well with my classmates/the new teacher/my parents,which has caused me a great deal of distress.
我与我的同学/新老师/父母相处有困难,这给我带来了很大的困扰。
(2)What bothers me most is that it’s difficult for me to communicate with my classmates.
最让我困扰的是,我很难和我的同学们交流。
(3)I seem not to be able to fit in well with others here.
在这儿我似乎不能与他人融洽相处。
3.心理压力
(1)First of all,what frustrates/discourages me/casts me down is my inability/failure to pass the exam,dealing a blow to my confidence and dampening my passion.
首先,让我沮丧/泄气/气馁的是我没有能力/未能通过考试,这打击了我的信心,也抑制了我的热情。
(2)In addition,it is a headache/struggle for me to focus my mind on what the teachers say,serving as a stumbling block to my progress.
此外,专心听讲对我来说是一件头疼的事/难事,这是我进步的绊脚石。
(3)Faced with/Confronted with/In the face of such tricky and challenging problems,I am eager for your timely assistance and proposals.
面对如此棘手而有挑战性的问题,我急需你及时的帮助和建议。
4.改简历
(1)I have just completed my application letter and résumé,which are attached to this letter.
我已经写好了申请书和个人简历,它们就在附件里。
(2)I am wondering if you could kindly spare some time to check my application materials before next Friday,offering valuable advice on my use of words and format.
我想知道你可不可以在下周五前腾出一点时间帮我检查一下我的求职材料,对我的措辞和格式提一些宝贵的建议。
5.准备比赛
(1)With July around the corner,I intend to attend an English speech contest in Beijing,which I believe will be a golden opportunity for my personal growth.
随着七月的临近,我打算参加一场在北京举行的英语演讲比赛,我相信这将是我个人成长的黄金机会。
(2)Yet finding the solid information is difficult for me considering that we are living in the Information Age.
然而,考虑到我们正生活在信息时代,找到可靠的信息对我来说是很困难的。
(3)Furthermore,I am afraid that the words and expressions I used in my speech would sound unnatural as a result of mother tongue interference.
此外,我担心因为母语的干扰,我在演讲中使用的单词和表达方式会听起来不自然。
(4)Faced with the above problems,I am anxious to get your help.Would you please offer me some suggestions
面对上述问题,我渴望得到你的帮助。你可以给我一些建议吗
三、 告知信
告知信通常分为两种,一种是告知某人某事即将发生,另一种是回复某人关于某事的询问。
告知信靓句集锦(不同主题的中间句)
1.活动
(1)Aimed at offering a platform for foreign students to develop an interest in Chinese,various activities will be arranged,ranging from...to...,which are bound to appeal to enthusiasts like you.
为了给外国学生提供一个培养汉语兴趣的平台,我们将安排各种各样的活动,从……到……,这些活动一定会吸引像你这样的爱好者。
(2)On the theme of traditional Chinese culture,the summer camp will be hosted on July 6th and last for two weeks.
夏令营以中华传统文化为主题,将于7月6日举办,为期两周。
(3)The activity can benefit us a lot.Not only will it get us close to nature and give us relaxation from heavy schoolwork,but it will cultivate our spirit of persistence.
这次活动将使我们受益匪浅。它不仅将使我们接近大自然,使我们从繁重的功课中得到放松,还会培养我们坚持不懈的精神。
2.比赛
(1)The event witnessed intense competition among students,with many delivering impassioned speeches on how technology has revolutionized their lives.
这次活动见证了学生之间的激烈竞争,许多学生都发表了关于科技如何彻底改变了他们的生活的充满激情的演讲。
(2)The atmosphere was charged with excitement as students showcased their exceptional speech skills.
当学生们展示他们非凡的演讲技巧时,气氛中洋溢着兴奋。
(3)The winning speech was delivered by a student who cleverly combined real-life examples and visual aids to illustrate the profound impact of technology on society.
获奖演讲是由一名巧妙地结合现实事例和视觉辅助工具来说明技术对社会的深远影响的学生发表的。
(4)As scheduled,the contest is supposed to be launched at 2:30 this Wednesday afternoon in the school lecture hall,lasting about two hours.
按计划,比赛应在本周三下午2:30在学校演讲厅举行,持续大约两个小时。
(5)Before the event,regular training is necessary,which will guarantee you a good performance.
赛前,定期训练是必要的,这将保证你有一个良好的表现。
3.课程
(1)The course covers various contents and we can learn about the history and relevant culture through it,which will give us a better understanding of traditional Chinese culture.
本课程内容多样,通过它,我们可以了解历史和相关文化,这将使我们更好地了解中华传统文化。
(2)In addition,we’ll gain a chance to practice paper-cutting.Not only will we be able to improve our hands-on skills,but we may also harvest a number of delicate handicrafts and stick them to windows during the festivals.
此外,我们还将有机会练习剪纸艺术。我们不仅可以提高我们的动手能力,而且还可以收获一些精致的手工艺品,并在节日期间把它们贴在窗户上。
[典题印证] 事件
假定你是李华,暑期在伦敦学习,得知当地美术馆要举办中国画展览。请写一封信申请当志愿者,内容包括:
做什么
1.写信目的;
2.个人优势及能做的事情; 主体段:详细描述,注意条理性
3.表达期待。
注意:1.词数80个左右;
2.请在相应位置作答。
[文思梳理]
第一段:表明写信目的(申请当志愿者)
第二段:阐述个人优势(①对中国画的了解 ②性格优势 ③语言优势 ④可拓展志愿服务经验丰富……)
第三段:表达感谢,期待回复[感谢考虑申请,期待早日回复]
[满分范文]
Dear Sir or Madam,
No sooner had I caught sight of① the advertisement you posted on the Internet than I wanted to apply to be a volunteer.[表明写信目的]Here is my brief self-introduction.
In the first place②,I’m a Chinese student studying in London this summer vacation.[1]Having lived in China for more than 18 years,I have a good knowledge of③ Chinese paintings.Furthermore,being outgoing and talkative,I hold the firm belief [2]that④ I have the ability to introduce the exhibitions to the visitors.In addition⑤,I could speak Chinese as well as English fluently, [3]which will contribute to⑥ my voluntary work.Last but not least⑦,it’s my relevant experience as a volunteer that enables me to cope with⑧various emergencies.[阐述个人优势]
I would appreciate it if you could take my application into consideration⑨. Looking forward to your early reply.[表达感谢和期望]
Yours,
Li Hua
靓词标注:①看到 ②首先 ③十分了解 ④坚信 ⑤另外 ⑥促进 ⑦最后但同样重要的是 ⑧处理 ⑨考虑
高级句式:[1]现在分词的完成式短语作状语
[2]同位语从句
[3]非限制性定语从句
课堂应用
1.求助信
假定你是高三学生李华,你不知道如何选择适合自己的专业,为此你写邮件给大学一年级的美国朋友Lily,希望她能给你一些建议。内容如下:
1.你对专业选择的困惑;
2.希望对方给出一些建议。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.请在相应位置作答。
Dear Lily,
I hope this email finds you well.As the days of graduation draw near①,I find myself in a state of utter② confusion when it comes to choosing a university major.[简述问题]
There are so many options available,and I’m worried about making the wrong choice.I’m not sure [1]what my interests are exactly or which field would be the best fit for③ me.I feel lost and overwhelmed④ by this important decision.And [2]since you’re already a freshman in college,you must have gone through⑤ the process not long ago.I would be extremely grateful if you could offer me some advice.[介绍具体困难并发出求助]
Your assistance and guidance would be a blessing⑥ to me in resolving⑦ this issue.I anxiously await your reply.[表达期待,盼望回复]
Yours,
Li Hua
靓词标注:①接近,临近 ②完全的 ③适合 ④感到迷茫和不知所措 ⑤经历 ⑥好事,有益之事 ⑦解决
高级句式:[1]宾语从句 [2]原因状语从句
2.告知信
假定你是李华,你校外教Tony将与学生一起到阳光农场参加务农实践活动,请你给Tony写一封邮件,告知活动相关安排。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.请在相应位置作答。
Dear Tony,
I am Li Hua.I am writing to inform you about the upcoming① agricultural practice with us students at Sunny Farm.[说明写信目的]
Scheduled for② next Saturday,June 15th,the event will see us meet at the school gate at 8:00 am,[1]from where a school bus will transport us to the farm. Upon our arrival③,a safety briefing④ will be given by an experienced farm worker.[2]With us divided into groups,[3]not only will we participate in various farming tasks,such as planting,harvesting,and gardening,but we’ll pick and taste fresh fruits.By the way,it would be advisable to wear comfortable clothing and apply some sunscreens⑤.As the event nears⑥ the end,we plan to return to the school by 5:00 pm.[告知活动安排,给出提醒建议]
If you have any questions or require further information,please do not hesitate to contact me.I am looking forward to a fruitful⑦ and enjoyable day with you.[表达期盼]
Best regards,
Li Hua
靓词标注:①即将到来的 ②安排在 ③我们一到达 ④安全说明 ⑤涂抹一些防晒霜 ⑥接近(形容词动用) ⑦富有成效的
高级句式:[1]定语从句
[2]with的复合结构
[3]not only...置于句首引起的部分倒装
第三组 道歉信、推荐信和感谢信
一、道歉信
道歉信是因为过失、疏忽或其他原因给别人带来了麻烦或损失,为了给对方赔礼道歉而写的信件。
道歉信靓句集锦(不同主题的中间句)
1.不能赴约
(1)I am awfully sorry for the sudden change of the plan and feel it a great pity to miss the opportunity to go to the bookstore with you.
对于计划的突然改变我感到非常抱歉,错过这个与你一起去书店的机会令我感到非常遗憾。
(2)Considering that my grandparents whom we haven’t seen for a long time will come to visit me tomorrow,I have to pick them up at the airport and show them around.
考虑到我们很久没见的爷爷奶奶明天要来看我,我得去机场接他们,带他们四处转转。
(3)It is much to my regret that I cannot join you,because I am occupied in preparing for my exams.
很遗憾我不能加入你们,因为我正忙着准备考试。
(4)Anyhow,I sincerely hope that we can fix another time for...Will you be available this Sunday morning
无论如何,我真心希望我们可以再找一个时间……这个星期天上午你有空吗
(5)Shall we put it off till this Sunday morning We can go earlier so that we will have more time to read and choose books.
我们把它推迟到这个星期天上午好吗 我们可以早点去,这样我们就会有更多的时间阅读和选择书籍。
2.不能参加活动
(1)I am chosen to take part in the English debate competition with an American high school on behalf of our school,which is of great importance to me,for I have always been desiring to have a chance like this to improve my spoken English.
我被选中代表我们学校参加与一所美国高中进行的英语辩论赛,这对我来说非常重要,因为我一直渴望有这样一个机会来提高我的英语口语。
(2)I have just been chosen to communicate with a group of exchange students on behalf of my class.It provides a good chance for me to learn more about their culture.
我刚刚被选中代表我的班级与一群交换生进行交流。它为我提供了一个更多地了解他们的文化的好机会。
(3)I have just been chosen to take part in an English debate competition representing our school.It’s a golden opportunity for me to challenge myself and win honor for our school.
我刚刚被选中代表我们学校参加一场英语辩论赛。这是一个挑战自我、为我们学校争光的绝佳时机。
3.不能按时提交作业
(1)It is owing to the fact that my mother suddenly fell ill that I had to postpone handing in my homework.
由于我母亲突然生病了,所以我不得不推迟交作业。
(2)The reason why I can’t hand in my paper in time was that I had to go there and take care of her.
我不能及时提交论文的原因是我必须去那里照顾她。
(3)Sent by the Students’ Council to an English Speech Contest,I could not spare the time to prepare/give/finish the report.
学生会派我去参加一场英语演讲比赛,我抽不出时间来准备/提交/完成报告。
二、推荐信
推荐信是向对方推荐一个人、一个地方或一件东西等的信件。在写推荐信时,应给出推荐理由,介绍自己推荐的内容的优点。
推荐信靓句集锦(不同主题的中间句)
1.在线课程
(1)The online course “Explore Chinese Cuisine” is going to be included in the curriculum this semester in my school.Knowing you are interested in Chinese cuisine,I can’t wait to tell you the good news.
在线课程“探索中国美食”将被纳入我校本学期的课程。我知道你对中国美食很感兴趣,所以我迫不及待地想告诉你这个好消息。
(2)With the aim of popularizing Chinese food culture and enhance its influence,this online course is open up to the students worldwide.
为普及中国饮食文化,增强其影响力,这门在线课程向全球学生开放。
2.电影
(1)What appeals to me are the grand scenes and touching plots.
吸引我的是那些宏大的场景和感人的情节。
(2)The presented advanced technologies in the film also impressed me and filled me with pride.
影片所展示的先进技术也给我留下了深刻印象,让我感到自豪。
3.视频博客
(1)The vlog has appealed to a lot of foreigners who have been living in China for years.
该视频博客吸引了许多在中国生活多年的外国人。
(2)They have not only shared detailed and practical information about the most famous attractions in China,but also posted a lot of videos they have shot during their travels.
他们不仅分享了关于中国最著名的景点的详细和实用的信息,而且还发布了许多他们在旅行中拍摄的视频。
4.优秀学生
(1)He is an all-round student with excellent grades in all subjects.As a boy with great potential,he is good/skillful at solving difficult problems.
他是一个全能的学生,各科成绩优异。作为一个很有潜力的男孩,他善于解决难题。
(2)In addition,what makes him a model student is his positive attitude towards life.
此外,使他成为模范学生的是他积极的生活态度。
5.旅游景点
(1)When it comes to Hangzhou,the first thing that comes to my mind is the West Lake,which has been a famous scenic spot for hundreds of years.
说到杭州,我首先想到的是西湖,几百年来它一直是一个著名的景点。
(2)Guangzhou,the capital city of Guangdong,is a perfect combination of old and new.
广东的省会广州是新旧的完美结合。
(3)Equally impressive is the Cantonese cuisine,which will give you a feast for your appetite.
同样令人印象深刻的是粤菜,它会让你大饱口福。
6.传统文化活动
(1)I propose organizing visits to local cultural heritage sites for students to explore and learn.This would deepen our understanding of our country’s rich history and culture,fostering a sense of national pride and cultural identity.
我建议组织参观当地的文化遗址,让学生去探索和学习。这将加深我们对我国丰富的历史和文化的理解,培养一种民族自豪感和文化认同感。
(2)Activities such as traditional craft or folk performances would allow us to experience the charm of our traditional culture first-hand and acquire practical skills and knowledge.
诸如传统工艺或民间表演等活动可以让我们亲身体验传统文化的魅力,获得实用技能和知识。
7.成语
(1)This idiom actually originates from a touching legend,which literally tells us how Old Man Yu led his family to remove the two mountains blocking the doorway of their house.
这个成语实际上源于一个感人的传说,从字面意思上它告诉了我们愚公是如何带领他的家人移除了挡在他们房子门口的两座山的。
(2)I firmly believe the idiom is an ideal motto for you because it highlights the moral that if we keep trying and never give up,we will eventually achieve our aim,however hard it is,which is a universal principle applicable to language learning.
我坚信这个成语对你来说是一个理想的格言,因为它强调的寓意是,如果我们不断努力,从不放弃,我们最终会实现我们的目标,无论有多么困难,这是一个适用于语言学习的普适准则。
三、感谢信
感谢信是重要的礼仪文书,是向帮助、关心和支持过自己的集体或个人表示感谢的书信,有感谢和表扬双重意思。
感谢信靓句集锦(不同主题的中间句)
1.语言学习
(1)During my stay in the company,I had great difficulty in understanding Chinese and you helped me a lot.
在这家公司工作期间,我在理解中文方面有很大的困难,您帮助了我很多。
(2)It goes without saying that I have made great progress in English with your help.
不言而喻,在您的帮助下,我在英语方面取得了很大的进步。
(3)There is no doubt that it was your support and encouragement that cheered me up when I was confronted with difficulties in English learning.
毫无疑问,当我在英语学习中遇到困难时,是您的支持和鼓励让我振作起来。
2.旅游
(1)With the deepest gratitude,I’m writing to you to express my sincere thanks for your timely assistance and support when I was traveling in Beijing.
我怀着最深的感激给您写信,真诚感谢您对我在北京旅行时给予的及时帮助和支持。
(2)During my travel in Beijing,you showed me around the Summer Palace and I had a great time there.Thanks for your considerate and enthusiastic treatment.
在我去北京旅行的时候,你带我参观了颐和园,我在那里玩得很开心。谢谢你周到、热情的招待。
[典题印证]假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你和留学生好友Jim 原定本周末一起外出,你因故不能赴约。请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件,内容包括:
写信缘由
两个要点
注意:1.词数80个左右;
2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
Dear Jim,
Yours,
Li Hua
[文思梳理]
第一段:致歉并表示无法赴约;
第二段:说明原因、提出补救建议(①详述不能赴约的原因 ②另约时间,可拓展缘由)
第三段:再次致歉并希望得到回复(①衷心希望好友理解自己的处境并接受补救措施 ②期待对方的回复)
[满分范文]
Dear Jim,
I’m writing to express my heartfelt apology for my not being able to hang out with you① this weekend as scheduled②.[表示歉意]
[1]As you know,I hold the position of chairman for the Chinese Martial Arts Club.Recently we have been rehearsing for the coming school cultural festival.The club has just decided to have a rehearsal③ this weekend,[2]for which I’m afraid I have no alternative but to④ break our appointment.[说明原因]I deeply regret any inconvenience caused.I’m wondering if we can make it next Sunday.By then,everything will have settled down,and we can have a great time together without any distraction.If that suits you,please let me know.[提出补救建议]
Sorry again and [3]it’s my sincere hope that you can understand my situation and accept the alternative time.Looking forward to your reply.[再次致歉并期待回复]
Yours,
Li Hua
靓词标注:①与你一起闲逛 ②按照计划 ③进行排练 ④除了……别无选择
高级句式:[1]定语从句
[2]“介词+关系代词”引导的定语从句
[3]it’s+n.+that...,it为形式主语,that从句作真正的主语
课堂应用
1.推荐信
假设你是李华,你的外国朋友William对中国文化很感兴趣。近日,他在网上了解到了两个相关的线上节目(节目信息如下表所示),但他对节目选择有些茫然,想听听你的建议。请给William 回复一封邮件,邮件内容须包括:
1.推荐其中一个节目;
2.说明你推荐该节目的理由。
节目 名称 《故宫里的国宝》(National Treasures of the Forbidden City) 《寻访中国美食》
(Exploring Chinese Cuisine)
节目 内容 介绍故宫里的国宝及其背后的故事 介绍中国传统美食及其烹饪方式
节目 形式 纪录片 短视频
节目 语言 英语解说,无字幕(subtitles) 中文解说,英语字幕
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.请在相应位置作答。
Dear William,
[1]Having learnt that you cannot decide whether to opt for① National Treasures of the Forbidden City or Exploring Chinese Cuisine,I am writing to put forward② my own idea [2]that the second option might be more suitable for you.[说明写信目的]
The reasons can be listed as follows.To begin with,in this programme,you will be introduced to the process of making traditional Chinese food,[3]which is also a part of Chinese culture.In addition,it won’t cost you much time since it is comprised of short videos,[4] so that you can choose your time freely.Last but not least③,the programme is presented in Chinese,providing you with an opportunity to ④ practice and improve your Chinese proficiency.[推荐的理由]
To sum up,it is advisable that you choose the second one.Hope the above might be of help to you.[总结与希望]
Yours,
Li Hua
靓词标注:①选择 ②提出 ③最后但同样重要的是 ④给你提供一个……的机会
高级句式:[1]现在分词短语作状语
[2]that引导的同位语从句
[3]which引导的非限制性定语从句
[4]so that引导的目的状语从句
2.感谢信
假定你是校电台英语访谈节目“Live in China”的主持人李华,上周五你校外教Mr Smith 接受了你的访谈,节目播出后反响很好。请你给外教Mr Smith写一封感谢信,内容包括:
1.感谢他精彩的发言和真诚的建议;
2.希望他有机会再次来节目做客。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.请在相应位置作答。
Dear Mr.Smith,
I am writing to extend my sincerest gratitude for① your participation in our radio program “Live in China”.Your insightful remarks and valuable advice② made the program truly remarkable.[说明写信目的]
Your expertise and unique perspective on various topics [1]related to China and cultural exchange captivated our listeners③.The valuable insights [2]you shared have been highly appreciated by both students and faculty.Your passion for④ teaching and your dedication to promoting cross-cultural understanding were evident throughout the interview.Your presence and contribution are invaluable,and we would be thrilled to have you as our guest once more.[感谢发言和建议]
Once again,thank you for your outstanding contribution⑤ to our program. We look forward to having you again in the near future.[期待再次合作]
Yours,
Li Hua
靓词标注:①对……表示我最诚挚的感谢 ②有见地的评论和宝贵的建议 ③吸引了我们的听众 ④对……的热情 ⑤杰出贡献
高级句式:[1] 过去分词短语作后置定语 [2]省略了引导词的定语从句
第四组 演讲/发言稿、征文投稿和宣传稿
一、演讲/发言稿
演讲稿通常要有吸引力,明确演讲的对象。在语言使用上一定要准确简明、通俗易懂、层次清晰、条理分明。
演讲/发言稿靓句集锦(不同主题的中间句)
1.网上学习
(1)To start with,students have easier access to more materials in their favor online.
首先,学生们更容易在网上获得更多对他们有利的材料。
(2)Besides,there is no limit to learning time and space,which brings great convenience to all learners.
此外,学习时间和空间没有限制,这为所有学习者带来了很大的便利。
(3)Keep in mind that distraction should be dealt with wisely.
请记住,应该明智地处理分心的事情。
(4)From my point of view,online learning offers us a chance to enhance our study whenever it is convenient.
在我看来,在线学习为我们提供了一个在方便时加强学习的机会。
2.颁奖
(1)With a wide range of knowledge,the debaters brought us an impressive feast for our eyes and ears.
凭借渊博的知识,辩手们为我们带来了一场令人印象深刻的视听盛宴。
(2)We will never forget the inspiration and wisdom they brought to the debate.We will never forget the critical thinking and humanistic qualities they displayed in the competition.
我们永远不会忘记他们给辩论带来的灵感和智慧。我们永远不会忘记他们在比赛中所表现出的批判性思维和人文主义品质。
(3)After fierce competition comes first prize from Class 1,Senior 3 with the witty language,profound insights and comprehensive quality.
经过激烈的竞争,高三一班因语言诙谐、见解深刻、素质全面荣获一等奖。
(4)Let’s give a big hand to the winning team to express our congratulations.And welcome our guest of honor,Mr Smith,to present the award to the winners.
让我们为获胜的队伍热烈鼓掌,并欢迎我们的贵宾史密斯先生向获奖者颁奖。
3.阅读的力量
(1)I still remember a time when I failed to adapt to the school life as a freshman and felt at a loss.It was then that I came across a biography of Edison in the library.
我还记得有段时间,我作为一名新生无法适应学校生活,感到不知所措。正是在那时,我在图书馆里看到了一本爱迪生的传记。
(2)His story stirred up my passion for reading,immersing me in the library of wisdom.His spirit of never giving up has a profound impact on my study and life.
他的故事激起了我对阅读的热情,让我沉浸在智慧的图书馆中。他永不放弃的精神对我的学习和生活有着深远的影响。
(3)As Joseph Addison said,reading is to the mind what exercise is to the body.
正如约瑟夫·艾迪生所说,读书之于心灵,犹如锻炼之于身体。
(4)Let’s come together,swimming in the ocean of knowledge,exploring the unknown world,and pursuing a better future.
让我们联合起来,在知识的海洋中遨游,探索未知的世界,追求一个更美好的未来。
4.智能科技进校园
(1)Intelligent technology has been widely applied in our daily life.For example,smart home systems can control lighting,temperature,and security with just a few taps on your phone.
智能技术已被广泛地应用于我们的日常生活中。例如,只需在手机上点击几下,智能家居系统就可以控制照明、温度和安全。
(2)Smart wearable devices can monitor our health conditions and provide timely reminders for exercise and rest.
智能可穿戴设备可以监测我们的健康状况,并为运动和休息提供及时的提醒。
(3)In addition,intelligent transportation systems make our commuting more convenient and efficient.
此外,智能交通系统使我们的通勤更加方便和高效。
(4)In conclusion,intelligent technology has become an integral part of our life and learning science is essential for our personal growth and social development.
总之,智能技术已经成为我们生活中不可或缺的一部分,而学习科学对我们的个人成长和社会发展至关重要。
5.加强体育锻炼
(1)All of us know that sports play a very important part in our daily life.By taking exercise,we can be much healthier and it helps us keep in good condition as well.
我们所有人都知道,体育运动在我们的日常生活中起着非常重要的作用。通过锻炼,我们可以变得更健康,它也可以帮助我们保持良好的状态。
(2)Playing sports increases the flow of oxygen and blood to our brain. Therefore,doing exercise can make us more energetic and efficient in our study. As people often say,any exercise is better than none.
运动会增加氧气和血液向我们大脑的流动。因此,锻炼可以使我们更有活力,学习效率更高。正如人们常说的那样,任何运动都胜过不运动。
(3)There is a wide range of sports we can choose from,such as walking, jogging,playing badminton and swimming.
有各种各样的运动项目供我们选择,如散步、慢跑、打羽毛球和游泳。
6.国际交流活动闭幕式
(1)Over the past few days,we have had the opportunity to learn from each other,share our cultures,and form lasting friendships.
在过去的几天里,我们有机会互相学习,分享我们的文化,并建立持久的友谊。
(2)It has been an eye-opening experience that has broadened our horizons and enriched our understanding of the world.
这是一次令人大开眼界的经历,拓宽了我们的视野,丰富了我们对世界的理解。
(3)We’ll leave this program with a sense of accomplishment and a desire to continue learning and growing.
我们将带着一种成就感和继续学习和成长的愿望离开这个项目。
(4)It was with sincerity and faithfulness that we created a harmonious atmosphere.
我们是用真诚和忠诚创造了一个和谐的氛围。
二、征文投稿
征文投稿类文章一般都是就某个特定主题进行论述和描写,说明文和记叙文居多。
征文投稿靓句集锦(不同主题的中间句)
1.传统文化
(1)Last year,not only did I experiment with paper-cutting I had just learned,but I also succeeded in creating various beautiful “loongs”.
去年,我不仅尝试了我刚刚学会的剪纸,还成功地创造出了各种美丽的“龙”。
(2)The Chinese Lunar New Year is one of the most important festivals in China and the customs and traditions of celebrating the event vary from place to place.
中国农历新年是中国最重要的节日之一,各地庆祝该活动的习俗和传统不尽相同。
(3)For me,the most enjoyable activity is to decorate my home with the traditional paintings,which can add my personal touches to the celebrations.
对我来说,最有趣的活动是用传统的绘画来装饰我的家,这可以为庆祝活动增添我的个人色彩。
2.城市介绍
(1)Home to over 20 million people,the capital of China is also the political centre of the country.There are many famous historical places of interest in the city of Beijing,which attract a large number of tourists from all over the world every year.
中国的首都拥有2 000多万人口,也是中国的政治中心。北京市有许多著名的历史名胜古迹,每年都吸引着大量来自世界各地的游客。
(2)When you stay in Beijing,tasting the famous Beijing Roast Duck is a must.
当你待在北京时,品尝著名的北京烤鸭是一件必做的事。
3.文化遗产
(1)Among the many symbols that represent China and its unique culture,the Great Wall is on the top of my recommendation list.
在代表中国及其独特文化的众多象征中,长城是我的首选推荐。
(2)Originally built in the Qin Dynasty and expanded and strengthened in the Ming Dynasty,the Great Wall became the world’s largest military structure.
长城始建于秦朝,并在明朝扩建和加强,成为世界上最大的军事建筑。
4.中国发展
(1)With the increase of China’s national strength,China is playing an increasingly important role in the world.
随着中国国力的增强,中国在世界上发挥着越来越重要的作用。
(2)For one thing,China has a long history and boasts colorful,mysterious and unique cultures,which makes it more attractive.
一方面,中国历史悠久,拥有丰富多彩、神秘、独特的文化,这使其更具吸引力。
(3)For another,our country’s economy has been developing at a good pace. During their stay,they are bound to be rewarded with an unexpected experience.
另一方面,我国经济发展呈现良好态势。在他们逗留期间,他们一定会获得意想不到的体验。
5.社会实践活动
(1)We visited a nearby community and engaged in various activities.
我们参观了附近的一个社区,并参加了各种活动。
(2)We helped clean up the environment and interacted with residents,organizing cultural performances.
我们帮助清理环境,并且通过组织文化表演与居民互动。
(3)The highlight was assisting at a local charity event,where we raised funds for needy families.
最精彩的是在当地的一个慈善活动上提供援助,我们为贫困家庭筹集资金。
6.体育运动
(1)There is no doubt that doing sports is helpful to us,which can not only build up our body but also benefit us mentally.
毫无疑问,做运动对我们很有帮助,不仅能增强我们的体质,还对我们的心理有益。
(2)What’s more,doing sports can help to relax ourselves.The most important is that we can make friends when we do sports.
更重要的是,做运动可以帮助我们放松自己。最重要的是,我们在做运动时可以交朋友。
7.安全知识
(1)It is crucial to enhance our awareness of fire safety and equip ourselves with essential self-rescue measures to effectively cope with such emergencies.
提高消防安全意识和配备必要的自救措施对有效应对这些紧急情况至关重要。
(2)During a fire,quick thinking and immediate action can make all the difference.
在火灾中,敏捷的思维和迅速的行动会使结果大不相同。
(3)Firstly,it’s important to stay calm and call the fire department immediately to report the fire.If possible,escape through fire escape exits and use stairs instead of elevators.If trapped,seal off doors with wet towels to keep smoke out.
首先,必须保持冷静,并立即致电消防部门报告火灾。如果可能,从消防出口逃生,用楼梯代替电梯。如果被困,用湿毛巾密封门,防止烟雾进入。
(4)Remember to cover your nose and mouth with wet cloth while crawling low beneath smoke to avoid breathing in poisonous gases.
记得用湿布捂住鼻子和嘴,同时匍匐在烟雾下,以避免吸入有毒气体。
(5)It is our collective responsibility to prioritize the fire safety.
优先考虑消防安全是我们的共同责任。
三、宣传稿
宣传稿是为了某一特定需要,通过一定形式向公众传递信息的手段,可以分为活动类宣传稿和表彰类宣传稿等。
宣传稿靓句集锦(不同主题的中间句)
1.美术展
(1)As far as I know,this exhibition will last for a month in the school art gallery.
据我所知,这次展览将在学校美术馆持续一个月。
(2)Yesterday my friends and I visited the students’ Chinese painting exhibition held by our school.
昨天我和朋友们参观了我们学校举办的学生国画作品展。
(3)What pleases me most is that their artistic talent is extremely shocking.
最让我高兴的是,他们的艺术天赋是极其惊人的。
(4) I strongly appeal to all the students to make use of their spare time to appreciate these wonderful works.
我强烈呼吁所有学生利用他们的业余时间欣赏这些美妙的作品。
2.体育锻炼
(1)To enrich students’ school life and build up our body,a sports festival whose theme is “Sports and Health” will be held in our school stadium next weekend.
为了丰富学生的校园生活,强身健体,下周末我们将在学校体育馆举办一场以“运动与健康”为主题的体育节。
(2) Additionally,a lecture about how to do daily exercise properly will be given by health professionals.
此外,还会有健康专家讲授如何正确地进行日常锻炼。
(3)Based on such a meaningful theme,the festival will consist of various activities,ranging from group competitions such as the tug-of-war to the solo ones like a half-marathon race.
基于这样一个有意义的主题,从拔河等团体比赛到半程马拉松等个人比赛,节日将会有多种多样的活动。
3.饮食与健康
(1)I hold the belief that this activity will inspire/encourage more people to use “public chopsticks”.
我相信这项活动将激励/鼓励更多的人使用“公筷”。
(2)For the sake of our health and safety,I think it is good and necessary to use “public chopsticks” when we dine together with others.So let’s start taking action right away!
为了我们的健康和安全,我认为与他人一起用餐时使用“公筷”是好的,也是必要的。所以让我们马上开始行动吧!
[典题印证](2024全国甲卷改编) 注意图片信息
英语课要求做课堂展示,请你根据所给图片,以Development of Transport in China为题写一篇发言稿。 体裁
注意:1.词数80个左右;
2.题目和首句已为你写好。
Development of Transport in China
Good morning class.Today we’ll look at some developments in transport in China.
[文思梳理]
本题要求根据所给图片,以Development of Transport in China为题用英语写一篇发言稿。写作时需要注意:主要使用第三人称;主体时态用一般现在时与现在完成时。发言稿可以分为三部分:开场白(表达问候、交代背景、点名主题)——点名话题,阐述中国交通发展的现状;正文(发言的具体内容)——针对现状的描写,发表个人感想;结尾(感谢聆听,并表达展望、鼓舞等)——简短小结,画龙点睛。
[满分范文]
Development of Transport in China
Good morning class.Today we’ll look at some developments in transport in China.From the vehicle of horses to today’s convenient transport,Chinese transport has an enormous① development.Today I’d like to focus on some major developments,[1]which include shared bicycles,high-speed trains and new energy vehicles.[介绍主题]
First of all,shared bicycles have brought great convenience to our short-distance travel,[2]making it more flexible② and environmentally friendly. Besides,with its amazing speed and high efficiency③,high-speed trains have shortened the distance between cities and regions,promoting economic development.Currently,advanced new energy vehicles have entered our lives, helping reduce air pollution.[介绍中国交通的发展]
In conclusion④,the development of transport in China is astonishing.It has not only improved our living standards but also enhanced⑤ China’s international status and influence.Therefore,we need to study hard and make a contribution to the further development of transportation.[概括总结和个人感想]
Thank you for your listening!
靓词标注:①巨大的 ②灵活的 ③效率 ④总之 ⑤增强;提高;改善
高级句式:[1]which引导的非限制性定语从句
[2]现在分词短语作状语
课堂应用
1.征文投稿
(2024浙江1月卷)
请你写一篇短文向校英文报“Sports and Health”栏目投稿,向同学们推荐一项适合课间开展的运动,内容包括:
1.介绍这项运动;
2.说明推荐理由。
注意:1.写作词数应为80 个左右;
2.请在相应位置作答。
Stand Up and Exercise,Everybody!
Stand Up and Exercise,Everybody!
Are you tired of① being chained to your desk all day long Do you feel weary② during the daytime but find yourself wide awake at night If so③,tai chi may be the perfect solution for you.[推荐一项运动]
Tai chi,[1]a time-honored Chinese martial art,has become increasingly popular among people of all ages and fitness levels.It is characterized by graceful,flowing movements and deep breathing techniques.Moreover,tai chi has been shown to provide numerous④ health benefits,including better sleep, stress relief,and increased energy levels.[介绍推荐理由]
So what are you waiting for Stand up and give it a shot⑤![鼓励尝试]
靓词标注:①厌烦 ②疲劳的 ③如果这样的话 ④众多的,许多的
⑤尝试一下
高级句式:[1]同位语
2.宣传稿
假定你是李华,你校将举办以“English Literature Reading”为主题的英文原版书阅读活动,请你代表学生会用英语为本次活动写一则宣传稿,内容包括:
1.活动目的;
2.活动安排;
3.发出号召。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.开头和结尾已写好,不计入总词数;
3.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
Dear schoolmates,
Students’ Union
Dear schoolmates,
Our school will hold an activity [1]titled “English Literature Reading” at the end of May.The activity is intended to expose you to a wide range of① English literature,thus [2]helping you have a better understanding of English culture,develop reading skills and promote reading ability.[活动时间、内容及目的]
During the activity,you are encouraged to introduce your favorite English literature to us and state② the reason [3]why you like it.Then you are expected to share your reflection③ [4] after you read it.[活动安排]
I’d appreciate it if you could take an active part in this activity.[呼吁参加]
Students’ Union
靓词标注:①一系列的,各种各样的 ②陈述,说明 ③反思
高级句式:[1]过去分词短语作后置定语
[2] 现在分词短语作状语
[3]定语从句
[4]时间状语从句
第五组 倡议书、通知、新闻报道、人物介绍
一、倡议书
倡议书属于应用文的一种,是为倡议或发起某项活动而写的号召性的专用文体。倡议书一般由标题、称呼、正文、结尾、落款五部分组成。
倡议书靓句集锦(不同主题的中间句)
1.海洋保护
(1)The ocean plays a significant role on our planet.Not only does it offer us enough food,but it also maintains the ecological balance.
海洋在我们的星球上扮演着重要角色。它不仅为我们提供足够的食物,还维持着生态平衡。
(2)Therefore,it is imperative to protect the ocean.To start with,what we should do is to pay attention to our daily activities.
因此,保护海洋势在必行。首先,我们应该做的是注意我们的日常活动。
(3)Besides,we can also organise campaigns or give lectures to get more people involved.
此外,我们还可以组织活动或开办讲座让更多的人参与进来。
2.低碳生活
(1)It’s high time that we took measures,or we would have nowhere to live.We students can protect our environment by living a low-carbon life.
现在是时候采取措施了,否则我们将无处可住。我们学生可以通过过一种低碳的生活来保护我们的环境。
(2)Firstly,do remember to turn off lights and other devices when not using them to save electricity.
首先,在不使用灯和其他设备时,一定记得关闭它们,以节省电力。
(3)What’s more,if we go out,we should walk,ride or take public transport instead of driving.
更重要的是,如果我们外出,我们应该步行、骑车或乘坐公共交通工具,而不是开车。
(4)Finally,reusing paper and bottles in our daily life is also highly recommended.
最后,我们也强烈建议在我们的日常生活中重复使用纸张和瓶子。
3.健康生活
(1)What should be stressed is that health comes first in the long journey to success.
应该强调的是,在走向成功的漫长旅程中,健康是第一位的。
(2)Last but not least,we should try to form a good habit of going to bed early.
最后但同样重要的是,我们应该努力养成早点睡觉的好习惯。
(3)In my opinion,we should try to develop healthy eating habits to build up a strong body.Only in this way can we have enough energy to study.
在我看来,我们应该努力养成健康的饮食习惯以增强体魄。只有这样,我们才能有足够的精力学习。
4.保护动物
(1)There are many reasons for the extinction of wild animals,such as the destruction of wildlife’s habitats caused by human invasion and cutting down trees and killing quantities of wild animals to make a profit.
野生动物灭绝的原因有很多,比如人类入侵造成的野生动物栖息地的破坏,砍伐树木和杀死大量野生动物以获取利润。
(2)From my point of view,we should take action to protect wild animals.For example,we should set up more wildlife reserves and provide more habitats for them.
我认为,我们应该采取行动来保护野生动物。例如,我们应该建立更多的野生动物保护区,为它们提供更多的栖息地。
二、通知
通知是上级对下级、组织对成员布置工作、传达情况或告诉公众某件事情等情况时使用的一种应用文体,通常分为口头通知和书面通知两种。
通知靓句集锦(不同主题的中间句)
1.比赛
(1)All the students in our school can enter for it,but only 24 selected students are qualified to participate in the final competition.
我们学校的所有学生都可以参加,但只有24名被选中的学生有资格参加决赛。
(2)The competition will be made up of/consist of two parts,both of which are required to be finished in five minutes.
比赛将由两部分组成,两部分均需在五分钟内完成。
(3)The final English speech contest is to be held on June 2nd from 9 am to 12 pm in the school hall,whose topic is “Low-carbon Life”.
最后一场英语演讲比赛将于6月2日上午9点到中午12点在学校大厅举行,主题是“低碳生活”。
(4)An English writing competition will be held by our school next month, aiming to inspire students’ enthusiasm for English learning.
为了激发学生学习英语的热情,我们学校下个月将举办一场英语写作比赛。
2.活动
(1)It is required that you should finish reading an original Chinese masterpiece in a week.
要求你在一周内读完一本中国原创名著。
(2)Various activities are tailored for the enthusiasts,ranging from Chinese poems recitation to Chinese character writing competition.
为爱好者量身定制了各种活动,从中文诗歌朗诵到汉字书写比赛不等。
(3)Among all of fantastic shows,some traditional Chinese stories will be shown on the stage,allowing you a good chance to broaden your vision.
在精彩纷呈的节目中,舞台上将上演一些中国传统故事,让您有机会开阔视野。
(4)Anyone who is interested in it is welcome to take part in it.
欢迎任何对此感兴趣的人参加。
3.讲座
(1)We are going to invite Professor Zhang,a well-known poet in China,to give a lecture to us.
我们将邀请中国著名诗人张教授来给我们做讲座。
(2)Please do remember to take your notebooks with you and take notes during the lecture.
请务必记得带上笔记本,在听讲座期间记笔记。
(3)After the lecture,we will have 30 minutes for questions.Please prepare your questions in advance.
讲座结束后,我们会有30分钟的提问时间。请提前准备好你的问题。
三、新闻报道
新闻报道是对最近发生的事实的播报,报道的内容必须具有真实性和可传达性,即用事实说话。
新闻报道靓句集锦(不同主题的中间句)
1.活动
(1)The opening ceremony started at 9:00 am,and the schoolmaster will deliver a speech about...
开幕式将于上午9点开始,校长将发表关于……的演讲。
(2)At the beginning,a lecture related to...was arranged,after which our school teachers showed us how to...
开始时,安排了一场关于……的讲座,之后我们学校的老师向我们展示了如何……
(3)At the end of the activity,a short film was shown,helping us students know...
活动结束时,放映了一部短片,帮助我们学生了解……
(4)Successful and fantastic,the activity appeals to everyone in the pure charm of nature,definitely offering relaxation to us.
这场成功和奇妙的活动吸引了每个置身于大自然的纯粹魅力中的人,绝对让我们得到了放松。
2.比赛
(1)The contest was held in the lecture hall of our school,starting at 3:00 pm and lasting 2 hours.30 contestants took part in it,each giving a 3-minute speech.
比赛在我校报告厅举行,于下午3时开始,持续2小时。30名选手参加了比赛,每人都进行了3分钟的演讲。
(2)Six judges scored the contestants’ performance based on their speech content,pronunciation,intonation,etc.
6名评委根据选手的演讲内容、发音、语调等因素对其表现进行打分。
(3)All the classes,immersed in the preparation for the competition,went to great lengths to adapt the music,conduct the stage design and rehearse to the accompaniment of the piano.
所有的班级都沉浸在比赛的准备工作中,竭尽全力地调整音乐,进行舞台设计,在钢琴的伴奏下进行排练。
(4)Then came the big day,when all the participants impressed the judges and audience with the appropriate costume,amazing team spirit,and splendid power of their show.
这个重要的日子来到了,所有的参与者都以合适的服装、惊人的团队精神和精彩的表演给评委和观众留下了深刻的印象。
3.校园文化节
(1)The music festival included various activities such as singing contests, speech competitions,and band performances.
音乐节包括各种活动,如歌唱比赛、演讲比赛和乐队表演。
(2)There was also a display of traditional British food and a chance to try traditional Chinese dishes.
这里还展示了传统的英国食物,并有机会品尝中国传统菜肴。
(3)The response to the festival has been overwhelmingly positive.
人们对这个节日的反应非常积极。
(4)Students were excited to have the opportunity to use their English-speaking skills in a fun and relaxing environment.
学生们很高兴有机会在一个有趣和轻松的环境中使用他们的英语口语技能。
4.运动会
(1)I was thrilled to participate in the 100-meter sprint,as it was my favourite event.
我很激动能参加100米短跑,因为这是我最喜欢的项目。
(2)The activity was highly spoken of,because not only did it provide a good chance for us to exercise,but also made us more cohesive.
这次活动受到了高度评价,因为它不仅为我们提供了一个锻炼的好机会,而且使我们更有凝聚力。
四、人物介绍
人物介绍属于记叙文的写作范畴,写作时要围绕人物组织材料,要做到主题鲜明、内容清楚,并注意结构的完整性。
人物介绍靓句集锦(不同主题的中间句)
1.英雄人物
(1)Lei Feng set a good example to us,so all the people show great respect for him.
雷锋给我们树立了一个好榜样,所以所有的人都非常尊敬他。
(2)He has devoted himself to his work,giving a hand to people in trouble selflessly.So we should learn from him.
他热爱自己的工作,无私地帮助陷入困境的人,所以我们应该向他学习。
(3)He made great contributions to our country,and he will live on in our hearts forever.
他为我们的国家做出了巨大的贡献,他将永远活在我们的心中。
2.文学人物
(1)His family was so poor that he didn’t receive a good education.However,he never let go of his dream to be a poet.
他的家庭很穷,所以他没有受过良好的教育。然而,他从未放弃成为一名诗人的梦想。
(2)As a matter of fact,he was determined because he never gave up his dream of becoming a great writer.
事实上,他意志坚定,因为他从未放弃成为一名伟大作家的梦想。
(3)He wrote many famous novels,many of which have been put/translated into other languages and made into movies.
他写了许多著名的小说,其中许多已经被翻译成其他语言,并被拍成电影。
3.身边的人物
(1)Mr Yang who works as a foreign language teacher in a local school is so warm-hearted and helpful that he gets along very well with everybody who knows him.
杨先生在当地的一所学校担任外语教师,他非常热心,乐于助人,和所有认识他的人都相处得很好。
(2)Once my younger brother was ill while my parents were both on a business trip.Having heard the news,Mr Yang offered to help me care for my brother until he recovered.
有一次,我的弟弟生病了,而我的父母都在出差。听到这个消息后,杨先生主动提出要帮我照顾我的弟弟,直到他康复。
(3)Besides,Mr Yang often helps me with my English in his spare time.Without his help,I wouldn’t have made such great progress.
此外,杨先生还经常在业余时间帮我学习英语。没有他的帮助,我不可能取得如此大的进步。
4.科学家
(1)Born in Ningbo,Zhejiang Province on December 30th,1930,she was admitted into Peking University in 1951.
她1930年12月30日出生于浙江宁波,1951年被北京大学录取。
(2)Madame Curie made a great contribution to the development of science, which paved the way for further research.
居里夫人对科学的发展做出了巨大的贡献,这为进一步的研究铺平了道路。
(3)She has been burying herself in medical study,which enables her to win the Nobel Prize.
她一直埋头于医学研究,这使得她获得了诺贝尔奖。
(4)There is no doubt that he is regarded as one of the most distinguished scientists in the world.
毫无疑问,他被认为是世界上最杰出的科学家之一。
[典题印证](2023全国甲卷改编)
你们学校正举办主题为“用英文讲中国故事”的征文活动。请你以一位中国历史人物为题写一篇短文投稿。内容包括:
主题
两个要点
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.题目已为你写好。
The Historical Figure in China
[文思梳理]
本题要求用英文讲述中国历史人物故事,属于人物介绍,为半开放式的短文投稿。
写作时需要注意:第三人称与第一人称交替使用;一般现在时与一般过去时穿插使用。文章可以分为三部分:引出话题(历史人物是谁、生活的时期、身份等);介绍人物事迹(最为突出的事迹、重大的社会影响);意义或启示(产生的影响或带给自己的启示)。
[满分范文]
The Historical Figure in China
Among the Chinese historical figures [1]that are widely acknowledged①, Fan Zhongyan is the most influential in my opinion.Here are the reasons.[引出话题]
[2]Known as a Chinese writer and politician in the Song Dynasty,Fan Zhongyan was highly appreciated [3]because he made great contributions to② society.He spared no effort③ to carry out a series of reforms④ to make his country prosperous.Besides,he proposed the establishment of a national school system,[4]which had a far-reaching influence on⑤ the Chinese educational system.[介绍人物事迹]
[5]What impresses me most is his famous philosophy of life:“Be the first to worry about the troubles across the land,the last to enjoy universal happiness.” Fan Zhongyan is such a role model that he always encourages me to be a man of noble character.[启示]
靓词标注:①被广泛认可 ②对……做出巨大贡献 ③不遗余力 ④实施一系列改革 ⑤对……有深远影响
高级句式:[1]that引导定语从句
[2]过去分词短语作状语
[3]原因状语从句
[4] which引导非限制性定语从句
[5]what引导主语从句
课堂应用
1.通知
(2025广东普宁一模)
假如你是校学生会主席李华,你校将为交换生举办一场以“探索中国书法之美”为主题的研讨活动(workshop)。请你写一则通知,内容包括:
1.介绍活动;
2.阐明理由;
3.欢迎参加。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.请在相应位置作答。
Notice
We are thrilled to invite you to a workshop titled “Exploring the Beauty of Chinese Calligraphy”[1]designed to introduce the rich history and techniques of this essential① part of our cu(共15张PPT)
专题五 应用文写作
高考统计分析
年份 卷别 体裁 主题 命题方式
2025年 全国一卷 建议信 人与自我:英语报栏目选择 中文提纲
全国二卷 询问信 人与社会:礼貌提醒外教交稿时间 中文提纲
浙江1月卷 演讲稿 人与自我:对部分同学在校园内用手机拍摄短视频的看法 中文提纲
年份 卷别 体裁 主题 命题方式
2024年 新课标Ⅰ、Ⅱ卷 告知信 人与自我:公园里的美术课 中文提纲
浙江1月卷 短文投稿 人与社会:推荐课间运动 中文提纲
2023年 新课标Ⅰ、Ⅱ卷 建议信 人与自我:给外教的分组方式提建议 中文提纲
浙江1月卷 报道 人与自然:“认识我们身边的植物”活动 中文提纲
命题趋势
1.多立场开放性设题
在题目设置方面,试题采用多视角、多立场的语篇材料和开放性答题要求,考查考生的批判性思维和创新性思维能力。2025年全国一卷以班级英语报要增设栏目为情境,要求考生从给出的两个栏目中作出选择并说明理由,对考生的批判性思维、跨文化沟通和语言表达等能力进行综合考查。
2.语言在生活中的实际应用
题目设计既注重真实情境,又强调交际能力,引导考生在真实语境中运用交际能力解决实际问题。2025年全国二卷要求考生以校英文报编辑的身份询问外教稿件进展,体现了对语用能力的重点考查。
第1讲 研真题学规范,4步打造佳作
(2025全国一卷)
假定你是李华,你班的英语报要增设一个栏目。外教Jenny 提出“Fun at my school”和“Guess who I am”两个选项供大家选择。请给Jenny写一封邮件,内容包括: 二选一 语篇类型
(1)你的选择;
(2)说明理由。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为80个左右;
(2)请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
邮件内容
Dear Jenny,
I really like the idea of adding a new column to our English newspaper.
Yours,
Li Hua
写作示范
第一步 审题 明确任务和要求
文体定位
格式:正式邮件(开头 Dear Jenny,结尾 Yours,Li Hua)
身份:李华(学生)
对象:外教 Jenny
语气:礼貌、简洁。
核心任务
从 “Fun at my school” 和 “Guess who I am”两个栏目中选择一个,并给出 2、3 个理由;
注意: 避免同时讨论两个选项,理由需紧扣 “英语报栏目” 的功能(如学习、交流、趣味等)。
第二步 破题 快速确定写作框架
第三步 构思 理由拓展与细节填充
Reasons for “Fun at my school” ·draw readers in by showing the many interesting parts of school life ·encourage more students to write for the paper ·preserve and celebrate the little joys of school days ·bring classmates closer together
·create a more friendly school atmosphere
·build a positive school spirit
Reasons for “Guess who I am” ·sharpen students’ attention to detail ·develop critical thinking ·improve English proficiency when writing or interpreting clues ·transform English study into an engaging detective game ·spark curiosity and encourage interaction among students
·bridge
understanding and cultivate closer and meaningful bonds
第四步 成文 认真誊写,卷面整洁
Dear Jenny,
I really like the idea of adding a new column to our English newspaper. After carefully considering,I strongly believe that “Fun at my school” is the best option.
Here are my reasons:First,this column would draw readers in by showing the many interesting parts of school life—like fun daily moments,exciting sports meets,and lively club activities.Second,it will encourage more students to write for the paper,making it truly “by students,for students”.Additionally,it will be very helpful in bringing classmates closer together,creating a more friendly school atmosphere,and building a positive school spirit.
I am confident that this column will become a popular and enjoyable part of our newspaper,bringing fun and learning to everyone.
Yours,
Li Hua
评分亮点
词汇 提出观点 strongly believe(坚定认为):比简单的 “think” 更强调态度的明确性,增强说服力。
the best option(最佳选择):清晰表达对 “Fun at my school” 这一专栏的认可,替代平淡的 “good idea”。
阐述优势 draw readers in(吸引读者):形象生动,“draw in” 比 “attract” 更具动态感,体现 “让读者主动关注” 的效果。
bring...closer together(让……更亲近):将“增进同学关系”具象化,比“improve relationships”更生动。
总结展望 confident(有信心的):传递对观点的坚定态度,比 “sure” 更正式。
popular and enjoyable(受欢迎且有趣):用并列形容词精准概括专栏的预期效果,简洁有力。
句式 引出理由的衔接句式 Here are my reasons:开门见山,清晰引出下文的分论点,结构一目了然。
非谓语动词表结果 making it truly “by students,for students”作结果状语。bringing fun and learning to everyone用现在分词短语总结专栏的最终价值,呼应前文,让结论更有余韵。
强调效果的并列结构 bringing classmates closer together,creating a more friendly school atmosphere,and building a positive school spirit:三个
“v.-ing” 短语并列,从 “同学关系”“校园氛围”“校风” 三个层面递进,增强语言的节奏感和说服力。
