2026届高考英语-重难点练习卷21读后续写——动作描写升级（具体动词代替泛词）导学案（含答案）
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2026高考英语·重难点练习卷21
读后续写——动作描写升级
【核心知识·深度解读】
读后续写中，动作描写的生动性是高分的关键。使用具体、形象的动词代替笼统的泛词（如walk, say, see, eat等），能让读者如临其境，人物形象跃然纸上。近三年高考高分作文无一例外地运用了丰富的动作动词。
一、为什么要升级动作描写？
泛词（如go, do, make）信息量小，无法传达人物的情绪、态度和方式。具体动词（如stroll, whisper, glare, devour）不仅能准确描述动作，还能暗示人物性格和情感，推动情节发展。
二、常见泛词升级词库
泛词 具体动词（按程度/方式分类）
walk stroll（闲逛）, march（行进）, stride（大步走）, tiptoe（踮脚走）, stagger（蹒跚）, wander（漫游）, creep（爬行/蹑手蹑脚）, pace（踱步）, limp（跛行）
say whisper（低语）, murmur（咕哝）, mutter（嘀咕）, exclaim（呼喊）, shout（喊叫）, yell（吼叫）, announce（宣布）, reply（回答）, respond（回应）, mumble（含糊地说）
look glance（瞥）, stare（凝视）, glare（怒视）, gaze（注视）, peek（偷看）, glimpse（瞥见）, observe（观察）, scan（扫视）, peer（凝视）
eat devour（狼吞虎咽）, swallow（吞咽）, chew（咀嚼）, bite（咬）, sip（小口喝）, gulp（大口喝）, nibble（小口吃）
cry weep（哭泣）, sob（啜泣）, wail（嚎啕大哭）, tear up（含泪）
laugh chuckle（轻声笑）, giggle（咯咯笑）, grin（咧嘴笑）, beam（笑容满面）
hit punch（拳打）, slap（掌掴）, knock（敲）, beat（打）, strike（击打）
hold grasp（抓住）, grip（紧握）, clutch（紧紧抓住）, seize（夺取）, grab（抢夺）
三、升级原则
① 贴合语境：根据人物的情绪和场景选择动词。如愤怒时用“stormed out”而不是“walked out”。
② 避免重复：同一段落中不要重复使用同一动词，可用同义词替换。
③ 与情感融合：动词往往暗示情感，如“trembling”表现恐惧，“dash”表现急切。
专项突破·动作描写
一、单句改写（用更具体的动词替换句中动词部分）
1. The old man walked slowly along the street. → ________________________
2. “I'm so sorry,” she said quietly. → ________________________
3. He looked at the stranger with suspicion. → ________________________
4. The children ate the pizza hungrily. → ________________________
5. She cried when she heard the bad news. → ________________________
6. He laughed at the joke. → ________________________
7. The man hit the table angrily. → ________________________
8. She held her mother's hand tightly. → ________________________
9. He walked out of the room angrily. → ________________________
10. “Help!” he shouted loudly. → ________________________
11. The cat walked quietly towards the bird. → ________________________
12. She drank the hot coffee slowly. → ________________________
13. He looked at the beautiful view for a long time. → ________________________
14. The boy ran quickly to catch the bus. → ________________________
15. She said something in a low voice to herself. → ________________________
16. He walked with difficulty because of his injured leg. → ________________________
17. She ate the cookie in small bites. → ________________________
18. The teacher looked at the noisy students with anger. → ________________________
19. He took the book from the shelf quickly. → ________________________
20. She walked back and forth nervously. → ________________________
21. The old woman walked with a stick, slowly. → ________________________
22. “I hate you!” she cried loudly. → ________________________
23. He looked at her with love. → ________________________
24. The thief walked silently into the house. → ________________________
25. She drank a glass of water in one go. → ________________________
26. He hit the ball with force. → ________________________
27. She smiled happily. → ________________________
28. He walked with long steps towards the finish line. → ________________________
29. She spoke in a soft, unclear voice. → ________________________
30. The children played noisily. → ________________________
二、选词填空（从方框中选择最合适的动词）
31. After the long walk, he __________ into the room and collapsed on the sofa.
32. “I love you,” she __________ in his ear.
33. The mother __________ at the child who had broken the vase.
34. The hungry dog __________ the food in seconds.
35. She __________ bitterly when she heard the tragic news.
36. He __________ from ear to ear when he received the prize.
37. He __________ the door shut in anger.
38. The little girl __________ her teddy bear tightly, afraid to let go.
39. The soldiers __________ confidently across the square.
40. He __________ out of the window, lost in thought.
41. She __________ out of the room so as not to wake the baby.
42. He __________ down the water, his thirst finally quenched.
43. The child __________ through the keyhole, curious about what was inside.
44. After the accident, he __________ with the help of a cane.
45. “I don't understand,” he __________ to himself.
46. She __________ with pride as her daughter received the award.
47. The police officer __________ the thief by the arm.
48. The cat __________ silently towards the mouse.
49. He __________ purposefully towards the exit.
50. She __________ silently, tears streaming down her face.
三、语篇填空（用合适的动词形式填空）
The old man 51.________ (walk with difficulty) along the icy path. He 52.________ (look carefully) at the ground before each step. Suddenly, he slipped and 53.________ (fell heavily) onto the ground. A young woman nearby 54.________ (ran quickly) to help him. “Are you okay ” she 55.________ (asked with concern). He 56.________ (nodded weakly) and tried to stand up. She 57.________ (held his arm firmly) and helped him to a bench. “Thank you, my dear,” he 58.________ (said softly). She 59.________ (smiled warmly) and replied, “Take care.” As she walked away, he 60.________ (looked at her for a long time) with gratitude.
51.________ 52.________ 53.________ 54.________ 55.________ 56.________ 57.________ 58.________ 59.________ 60.________
四、段落改写（用具体动词替换泛词，使描写更生动）
61. The children walked into the room quietly. They saw the birthday cake on the table. They said, “Wow!” and ate the cake quickly.
改写：____________________________________________________________________
62. The man walked out of the house angrily. He got into his car and drove away fast.
改写：____________________________________________________________________
63. She looked at the letter for a long time. Then she cried. She put the letter down and walked away.
改写：____________________________________________________________________
64. The little boy looked at the dog with fear. He walked slowly towards it and touched it gently.
改写：____________________________________________________________________
65. The teacher said something to the student. The student looked down and walked out of the room.
改写：____________________________________________________________________
参考答案及解析
一、单句改写（参考，答案不唯一，合理即可）
1. The old man trudged along the street. (trudge 表示沉重地走)
2. “I'm so sorry,” she whispered. (whisper 低语)
3. He glared at the stranger with suspicion. (glare 怒视)
4. The children devoured the pizza hungrily. (devour 狼吞虎咽)
5. She wept when she heard the bad news. (weep 哭泣)
6. He chuckled at the joke. (chuckle 轻声笑)
7. The man slammed the table angrily. (slam 猛击)
8. She clutched her mother's hand tightly. (clutch 紧握)
9. He stormed out of the room angrily. (storm 气冲冲地走)
10. “Help!” he yelled. (yell 喊叫)
11. The cat crept towards the bird. (creep 爬行/悄悄移动)
12. She sipped the hot coffee slowly. (sip 小口喝)
13. He gazed at the beautiful view for a long time. (gaze 凝视)
14. The boy dashed to catch the bus. (dash 猛冲)
15. She muttered something to herself. (mutter 咕哝)
16. He limped because of his injured leg. (limp 跛行)
17. She nibbled the cookie. (nibble 小口吃)
18. The teacher glared at the noisy students. (glare 怒视)
19. He grabbed the book from the shelf. (grab 迅速抓取)
20. She paced nervously. (pace 来回踱步)
21. The old woman hobbled with a stick. (hobble 蹒跚)
22. “I hate you!” she screamed. (scream 尖叫)
23. He gazed at her with love. (gaze 深情凝视)
24. The thief crept into the house. (creep 潜入)
25. She gulped down a glass of water. (gulp 大口喝)
26. He struck the ball with force. (strike 击打)
27. She beamed happily. (beam 笑容满面)
28. He strode towards the finish line. (stride 大步走)
29. She murmured something. (murmur 低语)
30. The children romped noisily. (romp 嬉闹) 或 roared (喧闹)
二、选词填空
31. staggered (蹒跚) 32. whispered (耳语) 33. glared (怒视) 34. devoured (狼吞虎咽) 35. sobbed (啜泣) 36. grinned (咧嘴笑) 37. slammed (猛关) 38. clutched (紧抓) 39. marched (行进) 40. gazed (凝视) 41. tiptoed (踮脚走) 42. gulped (大口喝) 43. peeked (偷看) 44. limped (跛行) 45. muttered (咕哝) 46. beamed (笑容满面) 47. seized (抓住) 48. crept (悄悄移动) 49. strode (大步走) 50. wept (哭泣)
三、语篇填空
51. trudged / hobbled 52. peered 53. crashed / slumped 54. dashed 55. inquired / asked softly 56. nodded weakly 57. grasped / gripped 58. murmured 59. beamed / smiled warmly 60. gazed
四、段落改写（示例）
61. The children tiptoed into the room. They spotted the birthday cake on the table. They gasped, “Wow!” and devoured the cake.
62. The man stormed out of the house. He leaped into his car and sped away.
63. She stared at the letter for a long time. Then she wept. She placed the letter down and stumbled away.
64. The little boy stared at the dog with fear. He crept slowly towards it and touched it gently.
65. The teacher whispered something to the student. The student hung his head and shuffled out of the room.
教学使用建议： 建议学生先熟记核心动词词库，然后通过改写练习体会具体动词的表达效果。在续写练习中，有意识地替换泛词，让描写更生动。教师可组织小组互评，看谁的动词选用最贴切、最丰富。
读后续写——动作描写升级
【核心知识·深度解读】
读后续写中，动作描写的生动性是高分的关键。使用具体、形象的动词代替笼统的泛词（如walk, say, see, eat等），能让读者如临其境，人物形象跃然纸上。近三年高考高分作文无一例外地运用了丰富的动作动词。
一、为什么要升级动作描写？
泛词（如go, do, make）信息量小，无法传达人物的情绪、态度和方式。具体动词（如stroll, whisper, glare, devour）不仅能准确描述动作，还能暗示人物性格和情感，推动情节发展。
二、常见泛词升级词库
泛词 具体动词（按程度/方式分类）
walk stroll（闲逛）, march（行进）, stride（大步走）, tiptoe（踮脚走）, stagger（蹒跚）, wander（漫游）, creep（爬行/蹑手蹑脚）, pace（踱步）, limp（跛行）
say whisper（低语）, murmur（咕哝）, mutter（嘀咕）, exclaim（呼喊）, shout（喊叫）, yell（吼叫）, announce（宣布）, reply（回答）, respond（回应）, mumble（含糊地说）
look glance（瞥）, stare（凝视）, glare（怒视）, gaze（注视）, peek（偷看）, glimpse（瞥见）, observe（观察）, scan（扫视）, peer（凝视）
eat devour（狼吞虎咽）, swallow（吞咽）, chew（咀嚼）, bite（咬）, sip（小口喝）, gulp（大口喝）, nibble（小口吃）
cry weep（哭泣）, sob（啜泣）, wail（嚎啕大哭）, tear up（含泪）
laugh chuckle（轻声笑）, giggle（咯咯笑）, grin（咧嘴笑）, beam（笑容满面）
hit punch（拳打）, slap（掌掴）, knock（敲）, beat（打）, strike（击打）
hold grasp（抓住）, grip（紧握）, clutch（紧紧抓住）, seize（夺取）, grab（抢夺）
三、升级原则
① 贴合语境：根据人物的情绪和场景选择动词。如愤怒时用“stormed out”而不是“walked out”。
② 避免重复：同一段落中不要重复使用同一动词，可用同义词替换。
③ 与情感融合：动词往往暗示情感，如“trembling”表现恐惧，“dash”表现急切。
专项突破·动作描写
一、单句改写（用更具体的动词替换句中动词部分）
1. The old man walked slowly along the street. → ________________________
2. “I'm so sorry,” she said quietly. → ________________________
3. He looked at the stranger with suspicion. → ________________________
4. The children ate the pizza hungrily. → ________________________
5. She cried when she heard the bad news. → ________________________
6. He laughed at the joke. → ________________________
7. The man hit the table angrily. → ________________________
8. She held her mother's hand tightly. → ________________________
9. He walked out of the room angrily. → ________________________
10. “Help!” he shouted loudly. → ________________________
11. The cat walked quietly towards the bird. → ________________________
12. She drank the hot coffee slowly. → ________________________
13. He looked at the beautiful view for a long time. → ________________________
14. The boy ran quickly to catch the bus. → ________________________
15. She said something in a low voice to herself. → ________________________
16. He walked with difficulty because of his injured leg. → ________________________
17. She ate the cookie in small bites. → ________________________
18. The teacher looked at the noisy students with anger. → ________________________
19. He took the book from the shelf quickly. → ________________________
20. She walked back and forth nervously. → ________________________
21. The old woman walked with a stick, slowly. → ________________________
22. “I hate you!” she cried loudly. → ________________________
23. He looked at her with love. → ________________________
24. The thief walked silently into the house. → ________________________
25. She drank a glass of water in one go. → ________________________
26. He hit the ball with force. → ________________________
27. She smiled happily. → ________________________
28. He walked with long steps towards the finish line. → ________________________
29. She spoke in a soft, unclear voice. → ________________________
30. The children played noisily. → ________________________
二、选词填空（从方框中选择最合适的动词）
31. After the long walk, he __________ into the room and collapsed on the sofa.
32. “I love you,” she __________ in his ear.
33. The mother __________ at the child who had broken the vase.
34. The hungry dog __________ the food in seconds.
35. She __________ bitterly when she heard the tragic news.
36. He __________ from ear to ear when he received the prize.
37. He __________ the door shut in anger.
38. The little girl __________ her teddy bear tightly, afraid to let go.
39. The soldiers __________ confidently across the square.
40. He __________ out of the window, lost in thought.
41. She __________ out of the room so as not to wake the baby.
42. He __________ down the water, his thirst finally quenched.
43. The child __________ through the keyhole, curious about what was inside.
44. After the accident, he __________ with the help of a cane.
45. “I don't understand,” he __________ to himself.
46. She __________ with pride as her daughter received the award.
47. The police officer __________ the thief by the arm.
48. The cat __________ silently towards the mouse.
49. He __________ purposefully towards the exit.
50. She __________ silently, tears streaming down her face.
三、语篇填空（用合适的动词形式填空）
The old man 51.________ (walk with difficulty) along the icy path. He 52.________ (look carefully) at the ground before each step. Suddenly, he slipped and 53.________ (fell heavily) onto the ground. A young woman nearby 54.________ (ran quickly) to help him. “Are you okay ” she 55.________ (asked with concern). He 56.________ (nodded weakly) and tried to stand up. She 57.________ (held his arm firmly) and helped him to a bench. “Thank you, my dear,” he 58.________ (said softly). She 59.________ (smiled warmly) and replied, “Take care.” As she walked away, he 60.________ (looked at her for a long time) with gratitude.
51.________ 52.________ 53.________ 54.________ 55.________ 56.________ 57.________ 58.________ 59.________ 60.________
四、段落改写（用具体动词替换泛词，使描写更生动）
61. The children walked into the room quietly. They saw the birthday cake on the table. They said, “Wow!” and ate the cake quickly.
改写：____________________________________________________________________
62. The man walked out of the house angrily. He got into his car and drove away fast.
改写：____________________________________________________________________
63. She looked at the letter for a long time. Then she cried. She put the letter down and walked away.
改写：____________________________________________________________________
64. The little boy looked at the dog with fear. He walked slowly towards it and touched it gently.
改写：____________________________________________________________________
65. The teacher said something to the student. The student looked down and walked out of the room.
改写：____________________________________________________________________
参考答案及解析
一、单句改写（参考，答案不唯一，合理即可）
1. The old man trudged along the street. (trudge 表示沉重地走)
2. “I'm so sorry,” she whispered. (whisper 低语)
3. He glared at the stranger with suspicion. (glare 怒视)
4. The children devoured the pizza hungrily. (devour 狼吞虎咽)
5. She wept when she heard the bad news. (weep 哭泣)
6. He chuckled at the joke. (chuckle 轻声笑)
7. The man slammed the table angrily. (slam 猛击)
8. She clutched her mother's hand tightly. (clutch 紧握)
9. He stormed out of the room angrily. (storm 气冲冲地走)
10. “Help!” he yelled. (yell 喊叫)
11. The cat crept towards the bird. (creep 爬行/悄悄移动)
12. She sipped the hot coffee slowly. (sip 小口喝)
13. He gazed at the beautiful view for a long time. (gaze 凝视)
14. The boy dashed to catch the bus. (dash 猛冲)
15. She muttered something to herself. (mutter 咕哝)
16. He limped because of his injured leg. (limp 跛行)
17. She nibbled the cookie. (nibble 小口吃)
18. The teacher glared at the noisy students. (glare 怒视)
19. He grabbed the book from the shelf. (grab 迅速抓取)
20. She paced nervously. (pace 来回踱步)
21. The old woman hobbled with a stick. (hobble 蹒跚)
22. “I hate you!” she screamed. (scream 尖叫)
23. He gazed at her with love. (gaze 深情凝视)
24. The thief crept into the house. (creep 潜入)
25. She gulped down a glass of water. (gulp 大口喝)
26. He struck the ball with force. (strike 击打)
27. She beamed happily. (beam 笑容满面)
28. He strode towards the finish line. (stride 大步走)
29. She murmured something. (murmur 低语)
30. The children romped noisily. (romp 嬉闹) 或 roared (喧闹)
二、选词填空
31. staggered (蹒跚) 32. whispered (耳语) 33. glared (怒视) 34. devoured (狼吞虎咽) 35. sobbed (啜泣) 36. grinned (咧嘴笑) 37. slammed (猛关) 38. clutched (紧抓) 39. marched (行进) 40. gazed (凝视) 41. tiptoed (踮脚走) 42. gulped (大口喝) 43. peeked (偷看) 44. limped (跛行) 45. muttered (咕哝) 46. beamed (笑容满面) 47. seized (抓住) 48. crept (悄悄移动) 49. strode (大步走) 50. wept (哭泣)
三、语篇填空
51. trudged / hobbled 52. peered 53. crashed / slumped 54. dashed 55. inquired / asked softly 56. nodded weakly 57. grasped / gripped 58. murmured 59. beamed / smiled warmly 60. gazed
四、段落改写（示例）
61. The children tiptoed into the room. They spotted the birthday cake on the table. They gasped, “Wow!” and devoured the cake.
62. The man stormed out of the house. He leaped into his car and sped away.
63. She stared at the letter for a long time. Then she wept. She placed the letter down and stumbled away.
64. The little boy stared at the dog with fear. He crept slowly towards it and touched it gently.
65. The teacher whispered something to the student. The student hung his head and shuffled out of the room.
教学使用建议： 建议学生先熟记核心动词词库，然后通过改写练习体会具体动词的表达效果。在续写练习中，有意识地替换泛词，让描写更生动。教师可组织小组互评，看谁的动词选用最贴切、最丰富。