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技法篇
CONTENTS
目 录
技法1
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技法2
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当堂即练 精准提升
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技法1
技法1 锤词炼句——精准表达,亮点提分
语言规范是满分作文的基本要求,考生要在没有错误的基础上,增添亮点表达。首先,要规范拼写,规避简单错误;其次,词汇基础要扎实,能够灵活使用高级词汇及语块;最后,语法知识要系统,确保正确使用各种语法结构。
锤词炼句,地道准确
1.精准多样的动词
动词分为及物动词和不及物动词。精准的动词能够有效勾画交际场景,多样化的动词能够增加文章的生动性,恰如其分地传递信息和态度。
*(普通表达) Using the skills I had learned, I painted a lively scene of children playing under a big tree.
→(高级表达) Employing the skills I had learned, I sketched a lively scene of children playing under a big tree.(2024·新高考全国卷Ⅰ)
*(普通表达)Today I'd like to talk about the major developments in transport, which include shared bicycles, high -speed trains and new energy vehicles.
→(高级表达) Today I'd like to focus on the major developments in transport, which include shared bicycles, high -speed trains and new energy vehicles.(2024·全国甲卷)
*(普通表达)In my opinion, I believe we can contribute to building a more harmonious society.
→(高级表达)In my opinion, I am firmly convinced that/hold the firm belief that we can contribute to building a more harmonious society.
2.充满表达力的名词
灵活使用一些充满表达力的名词,包括抽象意义的名词、常见动词的同根名词形式或名词词组,能够出众脱俗,为文章增色,成为得分亮点。
*(普通表达)Such an experience made me feel grateful for the chance to immerse myself in the beauty of nature.
→(高级表达)Such an experience made me feel grateful for the opportunity to immerse myself in the wonders of nature.(2024·新高考全国卷Ⅰ)
*(普通表达)Known as a Chinese writer and politician in the Song Dynasty, Fan Zhongyan was highly appreciated because he did a lot for society.
→(高级表达)Known as a Chinese writer and politician in the Song Dynasty, Fan Zhongyan was highly appreciated because he made great contributions to society.(2023·全国甲卷)
3.丰富多彩的形容词
形容词是用来描述人或者事物的特征、性质、属性或状态的修饰性词语,最主要的功能是修饰或者限定名词或代词。形容词的恰当使用能够为文章增色不少。
*(普通表达) It was such a great experience that I would always keep it in my memory.
→(高级表达) It was such an extraordinary and unforgettable experience that I would always keep it in my memory.(2024·新高考全国卷I)
*(普通表达)In conclusion, rope skipping is good for our physical and mental health.
→(高级表达)In conclusion, rope skipping is beneficial to our physical and mental health.(2024·浙江卷1月)
4.灵活多变的副词
副词指在句中表示行为或状态特征的词语,主要用来作状语,修饰动词、形容词、其他副词或句子。副词的恰当使用能够提高得分的档次。
*(普通表达) Now, many teenagers find themselves addicted to computer games, resulting in reduced productivity.
→(高级表达)Currently, many teenagers find themselves addicted to computer games, resulting in reduced productivity.
丰富表达,妙笔生花
高考评分标准中的“复杂结构的运用及较多的语法结构”指的是句子结构的复合性和句型的多样性。复杂结构的运用,如强调句、倒装句、复合句及含有非谓语动词的高级句式,能彰显考生丰富的语言内涵。但是,在使用这些句式时,应遵循以下原则:高级但不造作,多变但不离谱,复杂但不晦涩。
1.非谓语动词,神采飞扬
*(普通表达)I was inspired by the beauty of nature, so I determined to capture the precious moment in my drawing.
→(高级表达)Inspired by the beauty of nature, I determined to capture the precious moment in my drawing.(过去分词作状语)(2024·新高考全国卷I)
*(普通表达)The Students' Union wanted to spark the interest in the plants around us. Last Saturday the Students' Union organized an activity called “Getting to Know the Plants Around Us”.
→(高级表达)To spark the interest in the plants around us, last Saturday the Students' Union organized an activity called “Getting to Know the Plants Around Us”.(动词不定式作目的状语)(2023·浙江卷1月)
*(普通表达)Our programme focuses on the topics appealing to teenagers and is committed to enhancing students' understanding of domestic and international affairs.
→(高级表达)Focusing on the topics appealing to teenagers, our programme is committed to enhancing students' understanding of domestic and international affairs.(现在分词作状语)(2022·新高考全国卷Ⅰ)
2.三大从句,绽放精彩
*(普通表达)The experience was so refreshing. It freed me from my daily pressure and sparked my creativity.
→(高级表达)The experience was so refreshing that it freed me from my daily pressure and sparked my creativity.(结果状语从句) (2024·新高考全国卷I)
*(普通表达)Recently, new energy vehicles begin to emerge and it reflects China's commitment to reducing pollution.
→(高级表达)Recently, new energy vehicles begin to emerge, which reflects China's commitment to reducing pollution.(定语从句)(2024·全国甲卷)
*(普通表达)When I put the dishes on the table, my parents gave me a thumbs -up.
→(高级表达)The moment I put the dishes on the table, my parents gave me a thumbs -up.(时间状语从句)(2023·全国乙卷)
*(普通表达)We're overwhelmed with excitement to know that an oral English class will be arranged for us.
→(高级表达)We're overwhelmed with excitement at the knowledge that an oral English class will be arranged for us.(同位语从句)(2023·新高考全国卷Ⅰ)
*(普通表达)I am impressed by his determination and perseverance.
→(高级表达)What impresses me is his determination and perseverance. (主语从句)(2023·全国甲卷)
3.妙用it,巧做点睛
*(普通表达)I think to randomly pair up students for the spoken English training after class is not a good idea.
→(高级表达)I think it's not a good idea to randomly pair up students for the spoken English training after class. (it作形式主语) (2023·新高考全国卷I)
*(普通表达)Oceans play a key role in our world, so I consider it is significant to protect them.
→(高级表达)Oceans play a key role in our world, so I consider it significant to protect them.(it作形式宾语)(2022·全国甲卷)
*(普通表达)To participate in the activity is of great benefit, because it has taught us the importance of working hard.
→(高级表达)It is of great benefit to participate in the activity, because it has taught us the importance of working hard. (it作形式主语)
4.倒装句式,更胜一筹
*(普通表达)The art class was so great that I felt blessed for the opportunity to get so close to nature.
→(高级表达) So great was the art class that I felt blessed for the opportunity to get so close to nature.(部分倒装)(2024·新高考全国卷I)
*(普通表达)Oceans not only provide abundant resources and food for us, but they are also crucial for the global climate.
→(高级表达)Not only do oceans provide abundant resources and food for us, but they are also crucial for the global climate.(部分倒装)(2022·全国甲卷)
5.强调谓语及强调句型,词若千钧
*(普通表达) I feel greatly honored to have the chance to present some major developments of transport in China.
→(高级表达) I do feel greatly honored to have the chance to present some major developments of transport in China.(强调谓语)(2024·全国甲卷)
*(普通表达)Through this experience I have gained a deeper appreciation for Chinese cuisine.
→(高级表达)It is through this experience that I have gained a deeper appreciation for Chinese cuisine.(强调句型)(2023·全国乙卷)
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技法2
技法2 衔接过渡——构建逻辑,完美行文
满分作文的最大特点就是清晰流畅,一气呵成。巧妙的衔接与过渡是完美行文的关键。用衔接过渡词把句与句、段与段巧妙地连接在一起,文章才会更加连贯、自然和紧凑,段落或文章的发展脉络也会更清晰,中心思想也会更明确,语篇意义才能更好地被体现。
1.综述及陈述背景:generally speaking、as we know、as is known to all、as is shown in...等
*Generally speaking, the more you practice, the more skillfully you can write in English.
*As is known to all, the Internet has become an important part in our daily life.
2.表示总结:to sum up、in conclusion、in a word、in summary、 all in all等
*(2024·新高考全国卷I)In conclusion, it was a valuable and enriching experience, leaving a lasting impression on all of us.
3.表示时间顺序:
现在:nowadays、 now、 at present、 currently等
最近:lately、 recently等
首先/开始: first of all、to begin/start with、first and foremost、in the first place、at first等
后来/不久:after、 afterwards、 later on、 soon afterwards、 after a while、 before long、 sooner or later等
与此同时: meanwhile、 in the meantime、 at the same time、 while等
最后/最终: finally、eventually、 ultimately、 in the end、 at last等
*Seeing people doing warm up exercises with great enthusiasm, we couldn't wait to join them. Soon afterwards, the signal fired, we began our cross -country race.
4.表示递进关系:moreover、what's more、 furthermore、besides、additionally、 in addition、most importantly、what I want to stress at last is that...、 what impressed sb. most is that...、not only...but also...等
*(2024·全国甲卷)Besides, China's high -speed train network has greatly improved travel efficiency and promoted connectivity between cities.
5.表示空间顺序:on one side...on the other side...、 on the opposite side、 in front of、 in the center of、 in the distance、 in/down the middle of、 at the back of、 on/to the left/right、 close to、 next to、 nearby、 beyond、 behind the top(s) of、 in the low land along...等
*In front of the school gate lies a large plot of lawn.
6.表示因果关系:because、 because of、 as a result/consequence (of)、 due to、 owing to、 thanks to、 now that、 therefore、 consequently等
*The Internet has become an inseparable part of our life. Therefore, we are supposed to use the Internet in a proper way.
7.表示举例说明:including、for example、for instance、such as等
*There are various themes for us to choose from,including calligraphy, martial arts and paper cutting.
8.表示让步或转折:but、however、nevertheless、although、though、yet、on the contrary、otherwise、despite、in spite of、regardless of、rather than、instead of、unfortunately、no matter...、even if/though等
*In my view, despite the disadvantages, space exploration has brought about significant benefits.
9.表示个人观点:personally、in my opinion、I am afraid、as I see it、as far as I am concerned等
*As far as I am concerned, extracurricular activities play a crucial role in enhancing students' overall development.
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当堂即练 精准提升
Writing 1[投稿]
(2024·武汉高三阶段练习)假定你是李华,你校英文报举办了以“An Unforgettable Art Lesson”为主题的征文活动。请你写一篇英文短文投稿,分享你参加的某次艺术课程,内容包括:
1.课程内容;
2.你的感想。
注意:写作词数应为80个左右。
An Unforgettable Art Lesson
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One possible version:
An Unforgettable Art Lesson
I'm Li Hua. I'd like to share an unforgettable art lesson that I had at school.
In that art lesson, our teacher guided us to explore the world of watercolor painting. We learned about different brush strokes and color combinations. The teacher demonstrated how to create different textures and effects using watercolor, such as the softness of a cloud or the vividness of a flower. Then, we were given the chance to practice and create our own paintings.
This art lesson was truly remarkable. It not only improved my artistic skills but also allowed me to express my creativity and imagination freely. Through painting, I found a way to relax and escape from the daily stress. It made me realize that art is a powerful form of self -expression and communication. Moreover, it taught me the importance of patience.
Writing 2[报道]
(2024·武汉模拟预测)为了更好地给学生提供职业规划指导,你校举办了“职业生涯日”活动,不仅邀请了专家做讲座,还邀请了优秀毕业生返校提供指导,请你为校英文报写一篇报道,记述此次活动。内容包括:
1.活动时间、地点;
2.活动内容;
3.你的收获。
注意:写作词数应为80个左右。
参考词汇:职业生涯日(The Career Day)
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
One possible version:
On March 29th, our school hosted “The Career Day” to provide students with insightful career planning guidance.
We first attended a 90- minute lecture given by a renowned career expert, who emphasized the importance of career design and highlighted the connection between academic subjects and prospective professional paths. Then we went to different rooms to consult some former graduates. They shared their post- graduation experiences patiently and offered us invaluable guidance on selecting majors.
The event was of great help to us. Not only did we realize it was important to make a plan for our future career, but we also knew how to choose majors that would lead us to our favourite jobs.
Writing 3[祝贺信]
(2024·江西模拟预测)假定你是李华, 刚刚获悉你的澳大利亚笔友杰西卡(Jessica)在她学校的“汉语歌唱比赛”活动中获得一等奖,请给她写一封祝贺信,并表示自己即将参加学校举行的英语歌唱比赛,请她为自己备赛提出建议。
注意:写作词数应为80个左右。
Dear Jessica,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours truly,
Li Hua
One possible version:
Dear Jessica,
How are you I wanted to extend my heartfelt congratulations to you on winning the first prize in the “Chinese Singing Competition” at your school! What an incredible achievement! Your dedication and talent shine brightly.
I'm also writing to share my excitement about an upcoming English singing competition at our school. As someone with experience in competitions, I would greatly appreciate any advice or tips you could offer to help me prepare.
Thank you in advance for your guidance, and once again, congratulations on your well- deserved success! Looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours truly,
Li Hua
Writing 4[电子邮件]
(2024·淮安二模)假定你是光华中学英文网站负责人李华,为了庆祝6月8日的世界海洋日(World Oceans Day),你们网站近期将举办以“海洋保护”为主题的海报设计大赛,你校交换生约翰(John)对此很感兴趣并写信咨询比赛的相关信息,请你给他回信,内容包括:
1.大赛目的;
2.作品要求;
3.参赛方式。
注意:写作词数应为80个左右。
Dear John,
Delighted to know ________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
One possible version:
Dear John,
Delighted to know that you intend to participate in the poster design contest with the theme of ocean protection, I'm writing to inform you of some detailed information.
Originality, by all means, is the first requirement. Plus, the poster you design should be inspiring, clearly illustrating the significance of the ocean and the urgency to protect it. Moreover, a powerful slogan is also preferred, which will make your work more persuasive and impressive.
If you are interested, submit your entry before June 6th to Englishclub @ . Looking forward to your participation.
Yours,
Li Hua