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热考话题突破四 科技与环保
“科技与环保”是近几年高考应用文写作的热点和常考点,主要涉及信息技术、科学与科学家、科技发展和科学精神、未来与科技发展、环境保护、海洋探索、绿色生活方式等。这些内容旨在考查与培养考生的科学精神与环保意识,鼓励考生投身科学研究和环保事业,更好地服务社会。具体考查见下表:
情境 卷别 类型与话题 写作要点
人与动植物 2023·浙江卷1月 [活动报道]对 “认识我们身边的植物”活动的报道 1.活动的过程;
2.收获与感想
情境 卷别 类型与话题 写作要点
环境保护 2022·全国甲卷 [倡议书]保护海洋的倡议 1.海洋的重要性;
2.保护海洋的倡议
人工智能 [投诉信]购买的智能手机与描述不符且质量不佳 1.投诉内容;
2.提出解决方案
CONTENTS
目 录
情境化命题1
01
情境化命题2
02
情境化命题3
03
当堂即练 精准提升
04
01
情境化命题1
情境化命题1 人与动植物+活动报道
活动报道通常需要直截了当地给出事件发生的时间、地点、涉及的人物、事件的起因、经过和结果,语言要具体、简明精炼、通俗易懂。具体写作架构为:(1)导语:交代事件发生的时间、地点及目的;(2)详细叙述事件的经过;(3)对事件进行简要总结或评论。
In order to help students get
close to nature
was held
lasted for three hours
checked on the Internet
was fascinated by
thought highly of
gave us relaxation from
heavy schoolwork
a closer relationship with nature
1.关键词汇升级
(1)按照计划as planned→______________
(2)参加take part in→____________________________
(3)各种各样的 all kinds of →________________________
(4)adj.有吸引力的attractive →____________
as scheduled
participate in/get involved in
appealing
varieties of/a variety of
2.句型升级
(1)结合1中所升格的词汇并用which引导的定语从句改写句②
____________ (按照计划), the activity, __________________________
____________________ (在学校附近的森林公园举行), started at 9 o'clock on Saturday morning and ________________________ (持续了三个小时).
As scheduled
which was held in the Forest
Park near the school
lasted for three hours
(2)结合1中所升格的词汇并用独立主格结构改写句③
The students and teachers from different grades actively ______________________________ (参加) it, _____________________
______________________________________________________ (一些人在拍照,一些人在网上查资料,另一些人在做笔记).
participated in/got involved in
some taking pictures,
some checking on the Internet and the others taking notes
(3)结合1中所升格的词汇并用v.-ed形式作定语改写句④
____________________________________________________________________ (参加的每个人都被各种各样的绿植迷住了) and the ____________ (有吸引力的) surrounding views.
Everyone involved was fascinated by varieties of/a variety of green
plants
appealing
(4)用not only置于句首引起的部分倒装改写句⑥
____________________________________________________ (它不仅让我们从繁重的作业中得到放松), but it also helped us enjoy ______________________________ (和大自然更亲密的关系).
Not only did it give us relaxation from heavy schoolwork
a closer relationship with nature
一马当先开头句
1.Last weekend witnessed an activity named English Night organized by the Students' Union, which was available to all students.
2.To raise students' awareness of labour, our school organized an activity to help the farmers in a nearby farm last Friday.
3.Recently the issue/problem of mental health has been brought into focus.
如虎添翼篇中句
1.There were a variety of Chinese paintings, ranging from ancient times to modern times.
2.What's better, the host introduced every excellent artwork so vividly that everyone was deeply attracted.
3.Calligraphy is the art of producing beautiful writing using brushes, which is not only a technique for writing Chinese characters but also a way to bring people inner peace.
4.After one and a half hours' hard work, the activity came to an end. Tired as we were, we had great fun and gained a sense of achievement.
画龙点睛结尾句
1.It was through this activity that we fully realized that the significance of protecting the oceans.
2.Learning Suzhou embroidery was meaningful as it offered us not only a new practical skill but also a good insight into traditional Chinese crafts.
3.Undoubtedly,this event can not only enrich our school life,but also offer us opportunities to learn more daily practical skills!
4.Not only is this theme activity of great benefit to our mental health, but it also enriches our school lives.
02
情境化命题2
情境化命题2 环境保护+倡议书
倡议书是为发起某项活动而写的具有号召性和公开提议性的专用文体。倡议书一般由标题、称呼、正文、结尾、落款五部分组成。通知是上级对下级、组织对成员布置工作、传达情况或告诉公众某件事情等情况时使用的一种应用文体,通常分为口头通知和书面通知两种。具体写作架构为:(1)通知/倡议书的主题、目的及结果;(2)背景、具体安排/内容及结果;(3)发起呼吁或表达愿景。
is becoming
more and more serious
raising awareness
the balance of nature
pay attention to
our behaviour
hand out
call on
are involved in protecting the oceans
it is high time that
with our joint efforts
1.关键词汇升级
(1)旨在做be aimed at doing→__________________
(2)n.保护 protection→____________
(3)v.保持keep→____________
(4)adj.重要的 important→必要的;必不可少的__________________
be designed to do
conservation
maintain
essential/vital
2.句型升级
(1)结合1中所升格的词汇并用v.-ing形式作状语改写句②
World Oceans Day, ________________________ (在6月8日), _________________________________________________________ (旨在提高海洋保护意识).
falling on June 8th
is designed to raise awareness of ocean conservation
(2)结合1中所升格的词汇并用not only置于句首引起的部分倒装改写句③
____________________________________________________________________________________
(3)用“the+比较级..., the+比较级...”结构改写句⑥
____________________________________________________________________________________
Not only do the oceans offer us sufficient food, but they also maintain the balance of nature.
The more people are involved in protecting the oceans, the better the ocean environment will be.
一马当先开头句
1.As water pollution is worsening, immediate measures should be taken.
2.As for keeping a clean campus, it is everyone's responsibility to work hard to achieve this goal.
3.With the academic pressure increasing sharply, I, on behalf of the English club, appeal to us Senior Three students to take an active part in physical activity.
4.On behalf of the Students' Union, I am writing to call on everyone to take part in our summer program named “Care for the Aged”.
如虎添翼篇中句
1.In my opinion, we should try to keep a balanced diet to build up a strong body.
2.Regular exercise is also one of the most important ways to help you stay away from catching any disease.
3.Therefore, I suggest both individuals and companies should stop dumping waste water into the sea. Meanwhile, I call for more relevant laws to protect the oceans.
4.The activity will provide a good platform to promote the traditional Chinese culture and improve communication between people from different cultural backgrounds.
画龙点睛结尾句
1.Everyone is welcome to take part in it.
2.Your active participation will surely make a difference.
3.Your involvement will be highly appreciated.
4.Don't miss the chance! We are looking forward to your participation.
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情境化命题3
情境化命题3 人工智能+投诉信
投诉信是用于向服务提供者或产品制造商表达不满或投诉的信件。写投诉信时,应保持冷静,同时陈述事实应客观、准确。具体写作架构为:(1)表明身份及写信目的,提出投诉;(2)说明具体情况并给出解决方案;(3)期待解决及回复。
am not satisfied with
match the description
what I specifically chose
long -lasting
caused great
inconvenience to me
much to my
disappointment
ignored my request
have no choice but
to turn to you for help
1.关键词汇升级
(1)v.购买buy→____________/订购____________
(2)提出投诉make a complaint→__________________
(3)据说要做be said to do→声称要做_________________
(4)v.解决solve→__________________/短语:处理____________
purchase
order
file a complaint
be claimed to do
tackle/address
deal with
2.句型升级
(1)用v.-ed形式作定语改写句②
First of all, it does not ________________________________________ (与你们的网站上所提供的描述相匹配).
match the description provided on your website
(2)用“The reason why...is that...”句型改写句③
________________________________________________________________________________________________
The reason why I am not satisfied is that it has a completely different colour from what I specifically chose.
(3)结合1中所升格的词汇并用v.-ing形式作状语合并句④和句⑤
Moreover, the battery, which _____________________________ (声称是持久的), is actually very short, _______________________________
(给我造成了极大的不便).
was claimed to be long -lasting
causing great inconvenience to me
一马当先开头句
1.My name is Li Hua, who is the customer of your travel agency. Here I'm sorry to express my dissatisfaction with the poor service.
2.I am writing to complain about a pair of shoes I bought/purchased/ordered from your website.
3.I bought a new laptop. However, here is a serious issue that deserves your immediate attention.
如虎添翼篇中句
1.Though I received the jacket on time, I regret to say that there's something wrong with it.
2.I have dialed your service number for several times but it was always busy, which really annoyed me.
3.The fact that the product is different from the one described in your advertisement bothered me.
4.I was disappointed to find that the books I received are not only poorly printed, but also slightly damaged, and even some pages are missing.
画龙点睛结尾句
1.Frankly, I don't want to put up with the situation any more. I hope that you can take some measures to improve your service.
2.I would be very grateful if you could deal with the matter as soon as possible/at your earliest convenience.
3.It is my sincere hope that proper measures should be taken to prevent such an incident happening again.
04
当堂即练 精准提升
Writing 1[投诉信]
(2024·成都模拟预测)假定你是李华,在海外代购网店买了一块智能手表,但是收货后发现了一些问题。请给该店店主鲍勃(Bob)写信投诉。内容包括:
1.遇到的具体问题;
2.表达诉求。
注意:写作词数应为80个左右。
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
One possible version:
Dear Bob,
I'm Li Hua, one of your customers. I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with your product.
I bought a smart watch in your shop and received it yesterday. To my disappointment, there are some problems. First of all, the smart watch didn't arrive on schedule. In addition, not only is it of the wrong color, but it's also of the wrong brand. I am sure you can thoroughly understand my discontent. And I wonder if you could return my money or change a new one for me.
I hope your service can be improved to live up to buyers' expectations. Your kind consideration to my problems would be highly appreciated. Looking forward to your reply at your earliest convenience.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
Writing 2[倡议书]
(2024·保定一模)假定你是某国际学校的学生会主席李华。为提升你市的文化品位,你市正在开展“黄河文化带”的建设。请你代表学生会写一份倡议书,向全校学生发出倡议,为打造“黄河文化带”助力。内容包括:
1.活动目的;
2.倡议内容:清理活动,保护环境;
3.活动意义。
注意:写作词数应为80个左右。
A Call for Assistance in Building “the
Yellow River Cultural Belt”
Dear fellow students,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
The Student Union
One possible version:
A Call for Assistance in Building
“the Yellow River Cultural Belt”
Dear fellow students,
I'm delighted to announce that our city is embarking on a project called “the Yellow River Cultural Belt”, with the aim of enhancing the cultural taste of our city. Today, I'd like to call upon all of you to lend your support and participate in this significant project.
As responsible students, we can play a role in promoting environmental protection along the Yellow River. Let's organize clean up campaigns and raise awareness among our peers about the importance of maintaining a clean and healthy environment. Together, we can make the river a picturesque and inviting place for locals and tourists alike.
Thank you for your attention and support.
The Student Union
Writing 3[电子邮件]
(2024·黄山模拟预测)假定你是李华,你的朋友皮特(Peter)想了解你对环保问题的看法,请你给他写一封邮件,内容包括:
1.简述当前环境问题的严重性,如空气污染、水污染和土壤污染等;
2.讨论环保在日常生活中的重要性,以及个人可以采取的环保措施;
3.提出你对未来的展望和建议。
注意:写作词数应为80个左右。
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
One possible version:
Dear Peter,
I'm deeply concerned about the growing severity of environmental issues, such as air, water, and soil pollution. These problems are not only harmful to our health but also pose a threat to the sustainability of our planet.
In our daily lives, it's crucial to adopt eco -friendly practices. Simple steps like reducing waste, conserving energy, and using reusable products can make a significant difference.
I suggest that we raise awareness about the importance of conservation and encourage more people to adopt a green lifestyle. Together, we can create a healthier and more sustainable future.
Best regards,
Li Hua
Writing 4[报道]
(2024·重庆三模)假定你是李华,上周末你参加了校学生会组织的“关爱老人”活动,为你所在社区的老人们讲解智能手机的使用方法。请为校英文报写一篇报道,内容包括:
1.活动的过程;
2.收获与感想。
注意:写作词数应为80个左右。
Caring for the Elderly: Teaching Seniors Tech Skills
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One possible version:
Caring for the Elderly: Teaching Seniors Tech Skills
This past weekend, I took part in the “Caring for the Elderly” activity to teach senior citizens how to use their smartphones.
Last Saturday the activity was held at a local community center where around 20 elderly residents presented. We first explained the basic features of smartphones. We then demonstrated how to make calls, send text messages and photos. We also showed them popular apps, camera and weather apps.
By helping the elderly use smartphones, not only did it allow them to better connect with loved ones, but it also gave us a chance to appreciate seniors and feel rewarded for contributing.