热考话题突破三 人际交往
高中生在学习和生活中不可避免地要面对人际关系问题,因此“人际交往”话题是高考应用文写作的常考点,该话题主要包括人与人之间的矛盾冲突和问题的解决等,具体来说主要聚焦于同学关系和朋友关系等。包含的话题主要有友谊、信任、尊重和感恩等。具体考查见下表:
情境 卷别 类型与话题 写作要点
同学交流 2022·浙江卷6月 [邀请信]邀请留学生一同体验图书馆新开设的小组学习室 1.位置和开放时间;2.室内设施和功能
朋友之谊 2021·北京卷 [道歉信]因故不能遵守和英国好友周末一起外出的约定 1.表达歉意并说明原因;2.提出建议并给出理由
情境化命题1 同学交流+邀请信
邀请信既可用于给亲朋好友的普通邀请,也可用于给专家、教授等的正式邀请。具体写作架构为:(1)交际问候并表明写信目的,即发出邀请;(2)介绍具体内容、原因或意义;(3)期待对方接受邀请并给予回复。
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答案:①I am writing to invite you ②Located on the second floor ③is equipped with ④It is remarkable that
⑤despite/in spite of its glass doors;be disturbed ⑥it will be a great place for us to study
⑦I hope you can accept my invitation
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1.关键词汇升级
(1)adj.有空的free→可用的available
(2)adj.宽的wide→宽敞的spacious
(3)v.使用use→进入;访问access
2.句型升级
(1)结合1中所升格的词汇并用that引导的定语从句改写句③
It is__equipped__with(配有) comfortable chairs and spacious(宽敞的) desks that__provide__an__ideal__setup__for__long__study__periods(它们为长期学习提供了理想的设置).
(2)结合1中所升格的词汇并用v.-ing形式作状语改写句④
It__is__remarkable__that(值得注意的是) the room includes high speed Wi Fi, ensuring__we__can__access__online__resources__without__interruption(确保我们可以不间断地访问在线资源).
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一马当先开头句
1.Our school is launching the 80th anniversary celebration, so I'm writing to sincerely invite you to take part in this grand occasion.
2.Since you have a strong passion for the traditional Chinese culture, it's a great honour for me to invite you to participate in the activity with the theme of Beijing Opera in our school.
3.How's everything going It's a delight to inform you that a music festival will be held in our school. I'm writing to invite you to take part in it.
如虎添翼篇中句
1.The activity is intended to promote the traditional Chinese culture as well as our ability to appreciate art.
2.As scheduled, the activity is to be held from 3:00 p.m. to 5:00 p.m. this Friday in the lecture hall of our school, whose theme is “Chinese Calligraphy”.
3.Our music festival will cover a wide range of activities, including short musical plays, musical instrument performances, as well as a singing contest.
画龙点睛结尾句
1.I'd be delighted if you could come and share the unforgettable moment with us. I am looking forward to your participation.
2.If you are interested, please let me know and I'll send you more relevant/detailed information.
3.An early/favourable/timely reply will be highly appreciated.
情境化命题2 朋友之谊+道歉信
道歉信是由于某事而向某人致歉的信件,通常是由于自己的过错或不能履行承诺等做出的道歉。写作时一定要提供合理的理由,并提供补救方法。具体写作架构为:(1)开门见山,表明意图;(2)阐述具体原因并提出补救措施;(3)期待对方接受道歉并表达期盼。
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答案:①express my sincere apology;as scheduled ②sprained my ankle ③avoid swelling and pain ④have to attend the class ⑤convenient;put off our plan ⑥accept my apology
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1.关键词汇升级
(1)不能not be able to→fail__to
(2)v.建议suggest→推荐,建议recommend
(3)在……的帮助下with the help of→with__the__assistance__of
(4)遵守我的诺言 keep my word→keep__my__promise
2.句型升级
(1)用“The reason why...is that...”句型和状语从句的省略改写句②
The__reason__why__I__can__not__go__is__that__I__sprained__my__ankle__while__playing__basketball__yesterday.
(2)结合1中所升格的词汇并用“do nothing but”句型改写句④
Now__I__have__to__attend__the__class__with__the__assistance__of__my__classmates__on__weekdays,__and__I__can__do__nothing__but__rest__in__bed__on__weekends.
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一马当先开头句
1.I am writing to say sorry as I will no longer be able to attend the conference next week.
2.I am terribly sorry to tell you that I cannot make it to your birthday party next Thursday evening.
3.I feel happy to receive your invitation to participate in the camp to be held this winter vacation, but I have no alternative but to turn down your invitation, for which I must convey my apology.
如虎添翼篇中句
1.The reason why I can't hang out with you is that I have to help make preparations for the English Speaking Contest to be held this weekend.
2.I hope the change will not cause you too much trouble.
3.You know I have no intention to break our appointment, so shall we make it next Sunday if you're available
4.I have a great desire to meet you. Would you mind if I change the appointment time
画龙点睛结尾句
1.Sorry again for any inconvenience caused by my absence and all the best wishes to you.
2.I sincerely hope you can accept my apology and understand my situation. Wish you a safe and happy journey!
3.Please allow me to say sorry to you again.
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Writing 1[道歉信]
(2024·烟台高三期末)假定你是李华,你的留学生朋友彼得(Peter)借给你一本英文名著《飘》,可是你不小心损坏了。请你给他写一封邮件,内容包括:
1.表示道歉;
2.解释损坏原因;
3.提出补救办法。
注意:写作词数应为80个左右。
参考词汇:《飘》(Gone with the Wind)
Dear Peter,
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Yours,
Li Hua
One possible version:
Dear__Peter,
I'm writing to express my sincere apology for the accidental damage to the English classic Gone with the Wind you kindly lent me.
Yesterday evening I was absorbed in the book when I carelessly knocked down the cup, the hot water pouring over the book. I was upset that the whole book was in bad shape. Knowing how precious the book is to you, I'm terribly sorry for any inconvenience caused.
I expect to make it up to you by replacing the book with a new copy. I've purchased one online, which will be sent to you in 3 days. I hope this unfortunate incident won't affect our friendship. Please accept my heartfelt apology.
Yours,
Li__Hua
Writing 2[推荐信]
(2024·合肥三模)假定你是李华,正在你校交流的露西(Lucy)将于端午节前回国,她请你推荐一个与此节日相关的小礼物给她妹妹。请你给她写一封邮件,内容包括:
1.推荐的礼物;
2.说明理由。
注意:写作词数应为80个左右。
Dear Lucy,
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Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
One possible version:
Dear__Lucy,
I have just received your email about selecting a gift related to the Dragon Boat Festival for your little sister.
In China, one of the typical gifts for the festival is called Xiangbao. It can take on various cute forms, such as hearts and stars. It is very popular among Chinese girls since it can be used to decorate their clothes, schoolbags or fans. The special herbs wrapped in it smell very nice. Best of all, it is said that it can drive away bad luck.
I hope my recommendation can help you. Best wishes!
Yours,
Li__Hua
Writing 3[电子邮件]
(2024·东莞三模)假定你是李华,正在参加一个文化交流营(Cultural Exchange Camp),因生活习惯差异与外国室友产生分歧,如室友经常在晚上举办派对。为此你向营地办公室写一封信来表达自己的困扰,内容包括:
1.描述情况;
2.个人建议。
注意:写作词数应为80个左右。
Dear Committee Office,
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Yours,
Li Hua
One possible version:
Dear__Committee__Office,
I am writing due to a challenge I face with my foreign roommate. There are significant lifestyle differences causing some disagreements. Specifically, my roommate often hosts late night parties, disrupting my sleep and daily schedule.
I kindly request the office to mediate and suggest setting party rules or providing separate accommodation options for those with different lifestyles.
If you could take my opinion into account, I would be grateful.
Yours,
Li__Hua
Writing 4[感谢信]
(2024·河南模拟预测)假定你是李华,明天就是一年一度的教师节了,请你给你的英语老师高老师(Miss Gao)写一封感谢信。内容包括:
1.写信目的;
2.难忘的一件事;
3.你的祝福。
注意:写作词数应为80个左右。
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One possible version:
Dear Miss Gao,
I would like to write a letter to express my sincere gratitude to you for tomorrow's Teachers' Day.
I remember one Monday I was reading in class when my stomach hurt. Immediately you rushed to the drugstore next to the school to buy me some medicine. Being taken good care of, I felt so much warmth. You are a reliable teacher. I am very grateful to you because you teach me how to read as well as the truth of life.
Happy Teachers' Day and wish you success in work and good health.
Your student,
Li Hua