课件23张PPT。9A Unit 4 Growing Task The person who has influenced me mostLead in :The person who has influenced us most.Fu Qiang, from Ma’anshan, Anhui.He has donated the most blood in his province so far.Something unusual about him:The person who has influenced me most.blood cells people with blood cancerHe has also donated hisblood cells to
people with blood cancer.to my surprisedonate his body for medical research after his deatha person full of loveMr Wu is asking each of the Class 7, Grade 9 students to
write about the person who has influenced him or her most.
He shows an article to them as
a model. Read the article with
them.Before writingRead and answer:Who has influenced the author most?
2. How old is her father?
3. What is her father like?
4. What has her father done since 1990s?
5. What surprised the author?
6. What does the author realize now?1. Who has influenced the author most?
He is in his fifties.Her father.2.How old is her father?3.What is her father like?He is kind and helpful.Read and answer:4.What has her father done since 1990s?
He has donated blood many times.6.What does the author realize now?5. What surprised the author?She realizes that her father has a heart full of love.Her father has decided to donate his body for medical research after his death.Read and answer:Who has influence most?What does he/she look like?What is special about him/her?What do you think of him/her?What has he/she done? a person who has
influenced me mostWhat should be mentioned while you are talking about a person who has influenced you?Read and think:Complete contentWho has influence most?What does he/she look like?What is special about him/her?What do you think of him/her?What has he/she done?How can we organize the information?Read and think:IntroductionMain bodyConclusion Clear structure!Read through the article again and underline some useful expressions:… is the person who has influenced me most.
… is in his/her twenties/ thirties/ forties/…
You will not find anything unusual about him/her until…
… has always been kind/ helpful/…
To my surprise, …
When I was a little girl/boy, I could not understand…
Now I realize that…Make our language beautifulProper words
Special sentences
What makes a good English article?Work out:Beautiful languageComplete content Beautiful handwriting Clear structureIs there any person who has influenced you most during your life?
Maybe your father, your mother, your teacher, or even a stranger.
Talk about him/her with your partner. Pair work:A: Hi ! Who has influenced you most
in your life?
B: ……
A: What does he/she look like?
B: ……
A: What is special about him/her?
B: ......
A: What has happened to him/her?
B: …...
A: What do you think of him/her?
B: ……Pair work:1. Who has influenced you most?
2. What does he/she look like?
3. What is special about him/her?
4. What has he/she done?
( Give one or two examples. )
5. What do you think of him/her?
Write about a person who has influenced you most with the help of the following five questions:StructureLanguageContentHandwritingWriting:★ Exchange your article with your partners in your group and evaluate it with the help of the following table.
★ Underline the highlights.
★ Give your advice. 评分标准(满分20分)
结构: 1.段落是否清晰? 2分
2.开头是否吸引读者? 1分
3.结尾是否有所感悟? 1分
……………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………
语言: 1.是否借鉴了教材中好的语言? 1分
2.是否有令人眼前一亮的表达? 3分
3.是否有明显的语法错误? 3分
4.是否出现了中国式英语的不当表达? 2分
………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………
内容: 1.文章要点是否齐全? 3分
2.文章是否有生动的情节和细节描写? 2分
………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………
书写: 1.字迹书写是否工整? 1分
2.字迹书写是否优美? 1分 Evaluation (评价) : Appreciation (欣赏) :Sample Writing
My grandfather died many years ago, But I still cannot stop thinking of him from time to time. My grandfather was horn in the 1940s. He was an ordinary person, but he made the people around him happy and comfortable.
My grandfather was always willing to help others. He used to grow a lot of flowersin pots and sent them to neighbors to decorate their houses. After he retired, he
often offered to help look after the children when their parents were not at home.
My grandfather loved writing. He always told me that writing could make people feel calm and bring people pleasure as well. He kept writing short articles for newspapers and magazines all his life. In this way, he shared his experiences with as
many people as possible. He also taught me how to write a good article. There were many books in his study. He said that reading good books could help us learn more about the world.
I have learnt a lot from my grandfather. I will never forget him.You can do almost anything if you never give up!
Continue to edit your draft and share your favorite version with your partners. Homework Thank you!