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Section Ⅴ Writing—Write an essay
[语料积累]
1.开头部分
①The story is written by a renowned 19th-century novelist and it describes the struggles of a young woman breaking free from societal constraints.
这个故事是由一位19世纪著名小说家撰写的,它讲述了一名年轻女性摆脱社会束缚的奋斗历程。
②This fable describes a story between a kind farmer and a selfish neighbor.
这则寓言讲述了一位善良的农夫和一个自私的邻居之间的故事。
③The story about a greedy dog and its reflection goes like this.
关于一只贪婪的狗和它的水中倒影的故事是这样的。
④We all know the story about the boy who cried wolf.
我们都知道那个喊“狼来了”的男孩的故事。
2.主体部分
①Though it is an old fable,it casts a light on us even today.
虽然这是一则古老的寓言,但即使在今天,它仍对我们有启发意义。
②We have all surely had the experience of cramming for an exam the hight before.
我们肯定都有过考前通宵抱佛脚的经历。
③One example from real life is how smart-phones have changed family dinners.
现实生活中的一个例子是智能手机如何改变了家庭聚餐。
④I have ever experienced such an event.
我曾经历过这样的事。
⑤I am deeply impressed by Tom’s perfect performance despite his leg injury.
尽管汤姆的腿受伤了,但他的完美表现给我留下了深刻的印象。
3.结尾部分
①In conclusion,the fable teaches us that kindness works better than force.
最后,这则寓言告诉我们仁慈比强制更有效。
②After reading it,I’d like to point out that silent bystanders actually encourage bullies.
读完后,我想指出的是,沉默的旁观者实际上在助长霸凌。
③After reading it,I draw the conclusion that reducing single-use plastics is crucial for marine life.
读完后,我得出以下结论:减少一次性塑料对海洋生物至关重要。
[典题示例]
假定你是李华,你在故事书中看到了一则有关豪猪取暖的寓言故事,请你根据这则故事并结合自己的学习及生活情况,发表对于同学间关系的看法。内容包括:
1.这个故事的寓意;
2.这个故事给我们的生活启示。
注意:可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
1.审题谋篇
豪猪取暖给我们的启示
开头: ;
主体: ;
尾段: 。
论证自己的观点
总结自己的观点
2.要点翻译
①正如叔本华(Schopenhauer)在一则寓言中所描述的那样:在冬天,豪猪(porcupine)需要保持适当距离才能相互取暖而不至于伤害彼此。
(as)
As Schopenhauer puts in a fable: in winter, porcupines need to keep a proper distance to keep each other warm without hurting each other.
②从这个故事中我们可以得到启示:保持适当距离很重要。
(be of great importance)
③现实生活中朋友之间的关系也是如此。(be true of)
From this story, we can get the enlightenment: keeping a proper distance is of great importance.
The same is true of the interpersonal relationship between friends in real life.
④如果朋友之间太过亲密,我们会感觉自己得不到对方的尊重。
(宾语从句)
⑤如果朋友间关系太过于疏远,我们之间看起来就像是出现了隔阂。
(表语从句)
If friends are too close, we will feel that we cannot get respect from each other.
If the relationship between friends is too distant, it seems that there is a gap between us.
⑥正如谚语所说,“距离产生美。”(as)
As the saying goes, “Distance produces beauty.”
(1)用省略结构改写要点④。
If too close, we will feel that we cannot get respect from each other.
3.句式升级
(2)用适当的衔接词合并改写后的要点④和要点⑤。
If too close, we will feel that we cannot get respect from each other.On the contrary, if the relationship between friends is too distant, it seems that there is a gap between us.
4.连句成篇
【参考范文】
As Schopenhauer puts in a fable: in winter, porcupines need to keep a proper distance to keep each other warm without hurting each other.From this story, we can get the enlightenment: keeping a proper distance is of great importance.
The same is true of the interpersonal relationship between friends in real life.If too close, we will feel that we cannot get respect from each other.On the contrary, if the relationship between friends is too distant, it seems that there is a gap between us.
As the saying goes, “Distance produces beauty.”
[随堂演练]
最近你校就《狼来了》这则寓言故事及其寓意展开讨论,大家踊跃发表各自的看法。请你根据下面所给的要点,给《中学生英语报》的 “Your Words” 栏目写一篇英文稿件。内容包括:
1.该故事的寓意;
2.怎样做一个诚信的学生(举例说明);
3.你的看法(诚信的重要性)。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
【参考范文】
Almost all of us heard the story “Here Comes the Wolf” when we were little kids.
The story tells us that we must be honest and telling a lie is terrible.As students, honesty is important.By giving honest answers in the exam, we can make great progress in our study.Besides, we should finish our homework independently.If we promise to do something, we should keep our word and try our best to do it well.
Personally, honesty is a good virtue.People who are honest can always gain others’ respect.Only in an honest way are we able to make more friends and gain their cooperation to achieve our goals.