人教版2024八年级下册单元话题写作
Unit 3 Growing up
本单元写作分为三大主题:建议信1(如何处理消极情绪)、建议信2(如何处理与父母之间的矛盾)、感谢信
文体一:建议信(针对对方遇到的问题给予建议)
◎写作框架
Beginning:表达关心
I am sorry to hear that you...........................
Body:给出三点建议并说明理由
建议信1:What advice can we give when people are angry,upset or stressed?
Advice Benefit
take a break from what you are doing help you clear your mind
share your problems with someone you trust cut your problems in half
take a walk, go for a run, or write about your feelings help you to reduce stress and improve your spirits
建议信2:How to deal with the problem with parents
Advice Benefit
talk to them face to face Communication makes people closer and helps you understand each other better.
write them a letter get your message across clearly
try to understand them You won't understand them until you put yourself in their shoes.
Ending:表达祝福
I hope my suggestions will be helpful for you. I am looking forward to hearing from your good news.
◎真题应用1
假设你是李华,你的朋友Tom给你发来一封电子邮件说他最近学习压力很大,很不开心,希望你能给他分享一些建议帮助他缓解目前的消极情绪。请你给他回一封电子邮件,提出你的建议并陈述理由。
要求:1、80个词左右;2、文中不得出现真实姓名。
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◎真题应用2
假设你是李华,你的朋友David给你发来一封电子邮件说他的父母不允许他在周末使用手机,为此他与他的父母争吵,他很不开心,不知道怎么办。请你给他回一封电子邮件,提出你的建议并陈述理由。
要求:1、80个词左右;2、文中不得出现真实姓名。
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文体二:感谢信
The person I want to thank most
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Beginning
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The purpose of this letter to express your thanks to her or him
Body
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How she or he helped you when you had difficulty
Ending
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Thanks once again and close the letter warmly
)写作框架
◎话题词汇过关
过去常常做某事_____________________ 虽然;尽管 _____________________
做某事有困难:_____________________ 考试不及格 _____________________
感到沮丧 _____________________ 情绪低落 _____________________
想要放弃 _____________________ 鼓励某人(不要)做某事_____________________
倾听 _____________________ 和某人交谈 _____________________
耐心地在某方面帮助某人_____________________ 在某人的帮助下 _____________________
在....方面取得进步 _____________________ 变得自信 _____________________
◎真题应用3
在我们的生命中,有很多人曾经在我们遇到困难时给予我们帮助,给我们带来温暖和希望,请结合自己的一段经历写一封感谢信向你目前最想感谢的人表达衷心的谢意。
要求:1、80个词左右;2、文中不得出现真实姓名。
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◎参考范文1
Dear Tom,
I am sorry to hear that you have too much stress on your study. I am going to give you some advice to help you.
To begin with, you had better take a break from what you are doing, which can help you clear your mind. Besides, you can’t be too hard on yourself. As the saying goes, No one is perfect. And you can ask teachers for help. They can help you a lot with your study. Last but not least, how about taking a walk or going for a run after class They can help you to reduce stress and improve your spirits.
I hope my suggestions will be helpful for you. I am looking forward to hearing from your good news.
◎参考范文2
Dear David,
I am sorry to hear that you argue with your parents because your parents don’t allow you to use phones at weekends. I am going to give you some advice to help you.
To begin with, you had better talk to them face to munication makes people closer and helps you understand each other better. Besides, you can write them a letter so that you can get your message across clearly. Last but not least, you should try to understand them. You won't understand them until you put yourself in their shoes. Your parents just want you to focus on study and not to spend too much time in playing games.
I hope my suggestions will be helpful for you. I am looking forward to hearing from your good news.
◎话题词汇过关参考答案
曾经或过去常常做某事:used to do sth. 虽然;尽管 even though
做某事有困难:have difficulty in doing sth. 考试不及格 fail the test
感到沮丧 feel upset 情绪低落 in low spirits
想要放弃 want to give up 鼓励某人(不要)做某事encourage sb. (not)to do sth.
倾听 listen to sb 和某人交谈 talk to sb
耐心地在某方面帮助某人help sb with sth.patiently 在某人的帮助下 with the help of sb.
在....方面取得进步 make progress in ....... 变得自信 grow confident
◎参考范文3
Dear XXX,
I want to thank you for being my teacher. You took the time to help me, even though you were so busy.
I used to have difficulty in learning maths and even failed the test. I felt so upset that I wanted to give up. You came to me with all smiles and encouraged me not give up easily. You listened to me and talked to me. It made me feel much better. And you often spent a lot of time helping me with my maths patiently. With the help of you, I finally made progress in my maths and grew confident.
Your kindness will remain in my mind. Thank you for being my teacher.