七年级下册 Unit 6 Rain or Shine
例题：
假如你是李华，现在正和家人在三亚度假。你的英国笔友Grace对你的三亚之旅很感兴趣，请你用英语写一封明信片向她介绍你的假期。要点如下：
(1) Where are you (2) How is the weather
(3) What are you and your family doing (4) What do you think of your trip
要求：(1) 包含所有要点，可适当发挥，使行文连贯；
(2) 语篇完整，语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范；
(3) 文中不能出现任何人名、校名等真实信息。
Dear Grace,
How is everything going __________________________________________________
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Yours,
Li Hua
审题：
人称：第一、三人称 话题：假期正在进行的活动
文体：应用文（明信片） 时态：现在进行时
要点：目前在哪里度假、天气如何、自己和家人正在进行的活动以及自己的感受
写作框架：
开头：引出话题----假期
度假地点 (in/at +地点)
正文：描述具体活动内容
天气状况 (sunny, cloudy, rainy, windy, snowy, warm, breeze …)
自己和家人的具体活动 (lie on the beach, take photos, build a sand castle)
结尾：总结，表达感受
表达感受 (have a good/wonderful time, have fun, enjoy oneself)
一段难忘的记忆 (an unforgettable memory)
P1: 引出话题----假期
1. 我和我的家人正在三亚玩得很开心。
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【句型升级】我现在正和家人在三亚——中国最美丽的城市之一，我们玩得很开心。
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【优秀表达】______________________________________ “最……之一”
【练】(1) 三亚是中国最受欢迎的避暑城市之一。
Sanya is _______________________________ in China for summer vacations.
(2) 这是我们在沙滩上堆过最大的沙堡(sandcastle)之一！
This is ________________________________ we’ve ever built on the beach!
(3) 妹妹说贝壳是海洋馈赠的最美礼物之一。
My sister says seashells are _______________________________ from the ocean.
(4) 浮潜是我们旅程中最刺激的活动之一。
Snorkeling was ___________________________________ during our trip.
P2: 描述具体活动内容（天气状况+自己和家人的具体活动）
1. 这里天气晴朗，微风习习。我们都感到舒服极了。
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【句型升级】这里天气晴朗，微风习习。这里是如此舒适，我们玩得非常开心。
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【优秀表达】_________ n. 微风
______________ 如此……以至于…… (____________________________)
【练】(1) a cool summer _________ 夏日凉爽的微风
(2) 三亚的海水清澈见底，我们甚至能看到小鱼在水下游动。
The sea in Sanya is ______________ we can see small fish swimming underwater.
(3) 这里的椰子水甜滋滋的，我每天都要喝。
The coconut water here _______________________________________.
2. 我正躺在沙滩上放松。____________________________________________________
【句型升级】此刻，我正躺在沙滩上，鸟儿在我耳边唱歌。多么令人放松啊！
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【优秀表达】______________ 此刻，现在 ______ v. 躺；说谎 (现在分词：_______)
__________________ 表伴随，“(伴随着)……正在……”
e.g. My brother is swimming in the sea with sunlight dancing on the water.
弟弟正在海里游泳，阳光在水面上跳跃。
e.g. With my mother taking photos of the sunset, the whole family smiles at the camera.
妈妈拍着夕阳，全家对着镜头微笑。
感叹句：_______________________________ 多么……（形容词/副词）啊！
【练】(1) 三亚的海水真清澈啊！_______________ the sea water in Sanya is!
(2) 那些海鸥飞得好快呀！______________ those seagulls are flying!
(3) 这里的椰子水真美味啊！________________ the coconut water here tastes!
3. 妈妈正在海边拍照。______________________________________________________
【句型升级】与此同时，妈妈正在海边拍照，抓拍着金色沙滩和我们全家的欢乐瞬间。
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【优秀表达】_____________ 同时 ________ v. 拍摄 ________ n. 片刻/时光
【练】那是我一生中最快乐的一段时光。That was one of the happiest _________ of my life.
4. 爸爸和妹妹正在做什么呢？他们正在开心地堆沙堡呢！
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【句型升级】他们正在开心地堆沙堡，并用彩贝做装饰。
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【优秀表达】_______ n. 城堡 _________ adv. 高兴地 _________ v. 装饰
P3: 总结，表达感受
1. 我们一家在三亚过得很开心。_______________________________________________
【句型升级】总而言之，我们在三亚玩得很开心，并且这是一份令我难忘的记忆，将永远留在我的脑海中。_______________________________________________________
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【拓展句子】我等不及在我回来时和你分享更多的故事。
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【优秀表达】___________ 总之 替换表达：_________________________
__________________________ 一段难忘的记忆
________________________ 将……记在心中 被动：_________________________
【练】(1) 三亚多美啊！我会永远记住这段美好回忆。
How beautiful Sanya is! I’ll ___________________________________________.
(2) 旅行时，要牢记父母的建议。
When travelling, always __________________________________.
2. 你的假期怎么样？希望你也可以和家人一起度过一个愉快的假期。
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其他拓展： 1. Different types of weather: sunny, rainy, windy, cloudy, snowy, stormy, foggy, lightning, dry, wet, cold, warm, cool, hot, sunny and hot, sunny and warm, warm and dry 2. just right for … 正合适 e.g. The weather here is sunny, just right for walking. e.g. It’s cool, just right for climbing mountains.
【优秀范文---基础版】
Dear Grace,
How is everything going I'm having a great time with my family in Sanya.
The weather is sunny and windy. We all feel comfortable. I'm lying on the beach to relax. My mother is taking photos by the sea. What are my father and sister doing They are building a sand castle happily!
My family are having fun in Sanya. What about your holiday Hope you can also enjoy a happy time with your family.
Yours,
Li Hua
【优秀范文---提升版】
Dear Grace,
How is everything going I'm having a great time with my family in Sanya, one of the most beautiful cities in China.
The sun is shining and there is a soft, warm breeze. It's so comfortable that we enjoy ourselves a lot. At the moment, I'm lying on the beach with birds singing in my ears. How relaxing it is! At the same time, my mother is taking photos by the sea, capturing the golden beach and our happy family moments. What are my father and sister doing They are building a sand castle joyfully, decorating it with colorful shells!
In a word, my family are having fun in Sanya and it is an unforgettable memory which will be kept in my mind forever (定语从句). What about your holiday Hope you can also enjoy a happy time with your family.
Yours,
Li Hua
【拓展范文1】
My Happy Family Time
I’m Bob. It’s sunny today. I go to the park for a picnic with my family. It is two o’clock in the afternoon. My mum is reading a book. My sister Lisa is jumping rope. My brother is jogging on the road. I’m playing the guitar. I feel happy. My father is taking photos of us. We’re all having a good time. How I wish time could stop at this moment!
【拓展范文2】--- 中秋节所做的事情
Dear Jane,
Today is our traditional Mid-Autumn Festival. Getting together with our family (动名词短语做主语) is really exciting! It’s a cool autumn night. The moon is shining in the sky.
We are eating a big dinner now. My grandparents are looking at the moon. My parents are talking with each other. My younger brother is eating mooncakes at the moment. He is in high spirits!
When it is Mid-Autumn Festival, everyone is enjoying their wonderful time! The Mid-Autumn Festival makes everyone happy.
Yours,
Li Hua
【拓展范文3】
My name is Grace. Gina is my good friend. We are having holidays in different places.
I am having a great time visiting Harbin. The weather is cold and snowy. I am wearing warm clothes and a hat. I am so happy to see the white world. There are so many things made of ice here. I feel like I am in an icy world. There are many people here. Some are skating and some are having a snowball fight. I'm building a snowman. We are all having fun. My friend Gina is in Hainan. It's warm and sunny there. A lot of people are on the beach. Some are swimming. Some are playing beach volleyball. Gina is sunbathing.
Although we are having holidays in different places, we are having a good time.
【拓展范文4】--- 我的北京之旅
Dear Mary,
How's your vacation going I'm visiting the Great Wall in Beijing with my family. The Great Wall (长城), which attracts (v. 吸引) thousands of (成千上万) visitors from the whole world (定语从句) is one of the seven wonders (n. 奇迹/奇观) of the world.
The weather is sunny and hot, and my family are preparing to climb the Great Wall. For me, it's really difficult, so I almost (adv. 几乎/差不多) want to give up (放弃), however, my parents encourage (v. 鼓励) me again and again. With their encouragement (在他们的鼓励下), I'm keeping on (继续) climbing. After arriving at the top, we are all amazed by (惊讶于) the beauty of the Great Wall, which looks like a dragon (定语从句). As we all know (众所周知), the Great Wall is famous not only in China but also around the world.
In brief (简言之), we are enjoying ourselves in Beijing now and I'll keep this wonderful journey in mind forever (永远记住这段美好的旅程).
Yours,
Li Lei
【拓展范文5】--- 我最爱的季节
My favourite season
When it comes to (当谈及) my favourite season, summer soon appears in my mind (出现在我脑海 appear v. 出现).
The summer in my hometown is terribly (adv. 很/非常) hot, and the heavy rain (大雨) is another symbol (n. 象征/标志) of summer here. Millions of raindrops (n. 雨滴) fall down from the sky. They drop on the ground and wait for their next journey back to the sky.
However, the sunset (n.日落/晚霞) in summer is still charming (adj. 迷人的). When I sit in the yard, the most enjoyable (adj. 令人愉快的) thing for me is watching this bright shining sun (明媚的阳光) until it goes down the hill. Besides (此外), I can never forget those days on the basketball court (篮球场), when my friends and I could play happily (定语从句).
In my opinion (在我看来), four seasons are just like a box of chocolate without any labels (四季就像一盒没有任何标签的巧克力 --- 比喻的手法，让人眼前一亮). For me, I just accidentally (adv. 偶然地) find the most delicious piece in the box --- summer. (我只是偶然发现了盒子里最美味的一块---夏天。)
2七年级下册 Unit 5 Here and Now
例题：
假如你是李华，正在南京度假。现在是上午 10 点，你正在公园漫步。请用英语写一篇短文介绍你的所见所闻。
要求：（1） 语句通顺，表达准确； (2) 不少于 60 词。
审题：
人称：第一、三人称 话题： 公园里人们正在进行的活动
文体： 说明文 时态： 现在进行时
要点：在公园的所见所闻（游客、年轻人、孩子们、老年人等正在做什么）； 自己的感受
写作框架： 开头： 引出话题，表明时间、地点 周日上午 10 点 (10 o’clock on Sunday morning) 在公园散步 (in the park, taking a stroll) 正文： 公园里人们正在进行的活动 游客在拍照并分享 (taking photos, recording the beautiful scene, sharing) 少数人在交谈 (chatting) 孩子们在放风筝 (flying kites) 老年人在打太极 (playing Tai Chi, gracefully) 结尾：表达感受 玩得高兴 (having a good/wonderful time, looking forward to)
P1: 引出话题，表明时间、地点
1. 我的名字叫李华。我正在南京度假。My name is Li Hua. I'm taking a holiday in Nanjing.
2. 现在是周日上午 10 点。我正在公园散步。
It's 10 o'clock on Sunday morning. I am walking in the park.
【句型升级】 现在是周日上午 10 点。我正在一个安静的公园里悠闲地散步。
It's 10 o'clock on Sunday morning and I'm taking a leisurely stroll in a peaceful park.
【优秀表达】 leisurely adv. 慢悠悠地/不慌不忙地 peaceful adj. 安静的/平静的
stroll n.v. 散步，溜达，闲逛 take a stroll / go for a stroll 散步
【练】人们正在海滩漫步。People are strolling along the beach.
P2: 公园里人们正在进行的活动
1. 公园里有很多人。There are many people in the park.
【句子拓展】 公园充满生机。空气很清新，微风使得树上的树叶舞动着。到处都有五颜
六色的花，吸引着很多蝴蝶。The park is full of life. The air is fresh and sweet, and the gentle breeze is making the leaves on the trees dance. There are colorful flowers everywhere, attracting many butterflies.
【优秀表达】be full of 充满 …… sweet adj. 清新的/新鲜的
gentle breeze 微风 attract v. 吸引
2. 一些游客在拍照，并在微信上把它们分享给朋友。
Some tourists are taking photos and sharing them with their friends on WeChat.
【句型升级】一些游客拍照来记录美景，并在微信上把它们分享给朋友。
Some tourists are taking photos to record the beautiful scenery and sharing them with their friends on WeChat.
【优秀表达】record v. 记录 scene n. 景色/风光 （近义词： sights 名胜/风景）
3. 少数人在长椅上聊天。A few people are chatting on the bench.
【句型升级】少数人正坐在长椅上，聊着天，享受着温暖的阳光。
A few people are sitting on the bench, chatting and enjoying the warm sunshine.
4. 公园里也有一些小孩子。他们在放风筝。
There are some children in the park too. They are flying kites.
【句型升级】一群孩子正在草地上放风筝，笑得很开心。
A group of children are flying kites on the grass, laughing happily.
5. 一些老年人在打太极。 Some old people are playing Tai Chi.
【句型升级】一些老年人正在缓慢而优雅地练习太极。
Some old people are practicing Tai Chi slowly and gracefully.
【优秀表达】gracefully adv. 优雅地
P3: 表达感受
1. 每个人都很愉快。我喜欢这里放松的生活。
Everyone is having a good time. I like the relaxing life here.
【句型升级】每个人都很愉快。我真的享受这里放松而平静的生活。我期待着下次来这里的旅程。Everyone is having a wonderful time. I truly enjoy the relaxing and peaceful life here. I'm looking forward to my next trip here.
【优秀表达】have a good/great/wonderful time 玩得高兴/过得愉快 look forward to 期待
【练】(1) 我期待着周末。I'm looking forward to the weekend.
(2) 她正期待着自己的生日派对。 She is looking forward to her birthday party.
(3) 他期待尽快收到你的消息。He looks forward to hearing from you soon.
(4) 我期待再次见到你。I look forward to seeing you again.
【优秀范文--－基础版】
My name is Li Hua. I'm taking a holiday in Nanjing. It's 10 o'clock on Sunday morning.
I am walking in the park.
There are many people in the park. Some tourists are taking photos and sharing them with
their friends on WeChat. A few people are chatting on the bench. There are some children in the park too. They are flying kites. Some old people are playing Tai Chi.
Everyone is having a good time. I like the relaxing life here.
【优秀范文---提升版】
My name is Li Hua. I'm taking a holiday in Nanjing. It's 10 o'clock on Sunday morning and I'm taking a leisurely stroll in a peaceful park.
The park is full of life. The air is fresh and sweet, and the gentle breeze is making the leaves on the trees dance. There are colorful flowers everywhere, attracting many butterflies. Some tourists are taking photos to record the beautiful scenery and sharing them with their friends on WeChat. A few people are sitting on the bench, chatting and enjoying the warm sunshine. A group of children are flying kites on the grass, laughing happily. Some old people are practicing Tai Chi slowly and gracefully.
Everyone is having a wonderful time. I truly enjoy the relaxing and peaceful life here. I'm looking forward to my next trip here.
【拓展范文 1】
It's fine on Sunday morning. My mother and I are walking in the park. Many people are in the park. Look! Some boys are playing basketball and others are playing football. Some People are playing games under a big tree. Near a table, a girl is reading a book. Another girl is eating an apple and the others are playing chess. How happy they are!
【拓展范文 2】--- 三个人目前正在进行的活动
This is Sam from New York. It's eight o'clock in the morning. Right now he is in Central Park with his parents. He is walking with his mother while his father is taking photos. Everyone is having a good time.
Lucy is in Paris. It's two o'clock in the afternoon. Lucy is visiting the Eiffel Tower with
her parents. A guide shows them great sights and tells them stories about the tower.
I'm Li Lei from Beijing. It's nine o'clock in the evening now. I'm reading a book on the bed at the moment. I like reading because it's really interesting and relaxing. I go to bed at ten thirty.七年级下册 Unit 8 Once upon a Time
例题：
同学们一定听过“守株待兔”的故事吧，请根据图片提示用英语描述一下这个故事并谈谈自己的感想。
提示词：knock against 撞上； crops 庄稼
写作要求：（1）故事情节完整，可适当发挥，语言准确流畅，书写规范；
(2) 不少于 80 词。
审题：
人称：第三人称 话题： 描述“守株待兔”的故事
文体：记叙文/夹叙夹议 时态： 一般过去时
要点：“守株待兔” 的故事内容（故事背景、事件起因、经过与结果）； 自己的感想。
写作框架： 开头：介绍故事背景及事件起因 人物 (a farmer) 意外事件： 一只兔子撞在树桩上死了 (knock against a tree stump, died) 农夫的反应 (excited, took it home) 正文： 故事的发展与结果 错误决定：放弃种田，坐等兔子 (abandon, wait for) 结果： 一无所获 (couldn’t get anything, lost) 结尾：个人感想与启示 不能只依赖运气 (depend/rely on luck) 成功源于努力 (success comes from effort; no pain, no gain)
P1: 介绍故事背景及事件起因
1. 从前，有一位农夫每天在田里辛勤劳作。
Once upon a time, a farmer worked hard in his field every day.
【句型升级】从前，有一位农夫每天在田里辛勤劳作。
Once upon a time, there was a farmer who worked hard in his field every day （定语从句）.
【优秀表达】who 引导的定语从句：
先行词指人；从句紧跟先行词；从句动词与先行词一致。
e.g. The girl who is singing is my sister. 正在唱歌的那个女孩是我姐姐。先行词 定语从句
e.g. The boy who won the race is my classmate. 赢得比赛的那个男孩是我的同学。先行词 定语从句
【练】(1) 戴眼镜的那位老师教英语。The teacher who wears glasses teaches English.
(2努力工作的人常常会成功。People who work hard often succeed.
(3) 努力学习的学生会通过考试。 Students who study hard will pass the exam.
(4）正在做饭的那位女士是我阿姨。The woman who is cooking is my aunt.
(5) 你认识正在画画的那个女孩吗？Do you know the girl who is drawing a picture
2. 一天， 当他正在田里劳作的时候，他看到一只野兔。
One day, when he was working in the field, he saw a hare.
3. 这只野兔跑得太快了。它的头撞到了树桩上，不久就死了。农夫看到这一幕很兴奋。
The hare ran so quickly. Its head knocked against a tree stump and it died soon. The farmer was very excited to see it.
【句型升级】这只野兔跑得太快了。它的头撞到了树桩上，当场死去。农夫看到这一幕欣喜若狂 。The hare ran so quickly that its head knocked against a tree stump. It died immediately. The farmer was thrilled to see it!
【优秀表达】so ... that … 如此……以至于 …… knock against 意外撞到（某物）
knock v. 敲击/碰撞 stump n. 树桩 immediately adv. 立刻/马上
thrilled adj. 非常兴奋的/激动的
【练】(1) 进来前请先敲门。Please knock on the door before entering.
(2) 她感到不适后立刻打电话给医生。She called the doctor immediately after feeling sick.
(3）孩子们对去迪士尼乐园的旅行兴奋不已。The kids were thrilled about the trip to Disneyland.
4. 他捡起死兔子带回家美餐一顿。心里开心极了。
He picked up the dead hare and took it home for dinner. He was very happy.
【优秀表达】pick up 捡起；开车接（某人）；学会（技能/语言）
【练】(1) 你能把玩具捡起来吗？到处都是。Can you pick up the toys They're everywhere.
(2) 我爸爸放学后会来接我。My dad will pick me up after school.
(3) 我在巴黎旅行时学会了一些法语。I picked up some French while traveling in Paris.
【句子拓展】他心想：“何必这么辛苦？我干脆守在这里等更多兔子撞上来吧！”
And he thought, “Why work so hard I'll just wait here for more hares!”
P2: 故事的发展与结果
1. 从那天起，他不再下地干活，而是守在树旁等待其他兔子撞上来。
From that day on, he stopped working in the field. He stayed by that tree, and waited for hares to come again.
【句型升级 1】他不再下地干活。He didn't work in the field anymore.
【句型升级 2】从此，他抛下庄稼，日复一日地守在树桩旁，等待兔子再次出现。
From then on, he abandoned his crops and sat by the stump day after day, waiting for hares to come again.
【优秀表达】from that day on 从那天起 from then on 从此/从那时起
not … anymore 不再 …… abandon v. 放弃
【练】(1) 如果你炒我鱿鱼，我就再也高兴不起来了。
If you take my work away I can't be happy anymore.
(2) 人们不再对电影感兴趣了。People are not interested in movies anymore.
(3) 也许你不该再去那家餐厅吃饭了。Maybe you shouldn't eat at that restaurant anymore.
2. 最终，农夫什么也没得到。In the end, the farmer couldn't get anything again.
【句型升级】可惜，再没有兔子出现，他的田地也荒芜了。最终， 他既失去了不劳而获的机会，也毁了自己的收成。 Sadly, no more hares came, and his field turned barren. In the end, he lost both the chance for free meals and his harvest.
【优秀表达】turn v. （使）变成，成为 barren adj. 贫瘠的/不毛的
in the end 最后/终于 chance n. 机会 harvest n. 收获/收割
P3: 个人感想与启示
版本 1：这个故事告诉我们：不能只依赖运气，我们必须努力工作才能得到想要的东西。毕竟，“不劳则无获”。The story teaches us that we can't only depend on luck. We need to work hard to get what we want. After all, “No pain, no gain.”
【优秀表达】depend on 依赖/依靠 after all 毕竟/终究
No pain, no gain. 不劳则无获。（pain n. 疼痛/痛苦 gain v.获得 n.好处）
版本 2：（1）这个故事告诉我们：成功源于努力，而非侥幸。依赖意外之财只会招致失败。
This story teaches us that success comes from effort, not luck. Relying on unexpected gains leads to failure.
（2）生活中，我们应当脚踏实地地耕耘，而非等待 “兔子 ”主动送上门。毕竟，机会总是眷顾有准备的人，而不是空想家！
In life, we should work diligently instead of waiting for "hares" to knock on our doors. After all, opportunities favor those who are prepared, not those who daydream!
【优秀表达】success n. 成功 effort n. 努力 rely on 依赖 lead to 导致
unexpected adj. 出乎意料的 failure n.失败 (fail v.失败/不及格） diligently adv. 勤奋地/孜孜不倦地
Opportunities favor those who are prepared. 机会总是眷顾有准备的人。
(opportunity n. 机会 favor v. 更喜爱/偏袒 prepare v. 准备）
daydream v. 做白日梦/幻想/空想 n. 白日梦/幻想/空想
【优秀范文--－基础版】
Once upon a time, a farmer worked hard in his field every day. One day, when he was working in the field, he saw a hare. The hare ran so quickly. Its head knocked against a tree stump and it died soon. The farmer was very excited to see it. He picked up the dead hare and took it home for dinner. He was very happy.
From that day on, he stopped working in the field. He didn't work in the field anymore. He stayed by that tree, and waited for hares to come again. In the end, the farmer couldn't get anything again.
The story teaches us that we can't only depend on luck. We need to work hard to get what we want （宾语从句）. After all, “No pain, no gain.”
【优秀范文---提升版】
Once upon a time, there was a farmer who worked hard in his field every day. One day, when he was working in the field, he saw a hare. The hare ran so quickly that its head knocked against a tree stump. It died immediately. The farmer was thrilled to see it! He picked up the dead hare and took it home for dinner. And he thought, “Why work so hard I'll just wait here for more hares!”
From then on, he abandoned his crops and sat by the stump day after day, waiting for hares to come again. Sadly, no more hares came, and his field turned barren. In the end, he lost both the chance for free meals and his harvest.
This story teaches us that success comes from effort, not luck. Relying on unexpected gains leads to failure. In life, we should work diligently instead of waiting for "hares" to knock on our doors. After all, opportunities favor those who are prepared, not those who daydream!
【拓展范文 1】--- 狐假虎威
Long long ago （很久之前）, there was a fox in a forest. One day, a hungry tiger caught the fox and wanted to eat him. The fox was very scared (adj.害怕的） but he had a clever idea quickly. He told the tiger that he was the king of animals. If the tiger ate him, the tiger would get punishment (n. 惩罚）. The tiger didn't believe what the fox said. Thus (adv. 因此/所以）, The fox asked the tiger to follow him and walk around the forest. As soon as （一……就……） the animals saw them, they were so afraid that they ran away immediately. Seeing this, the tiger believed what the fox said （宾语从句) and let him go.
【拓展范文 2】--- 龟兔赛跑
Once upon a time, there lived a tortoise (n.乌龟） and a rabbit in the forest. One day, they decided to have a race. Lots of animals came to watch. At first, the rabbit was much faster than
the tortoise. The rabbit thought the tortoise was too slow, and she could win easily. So she
decided to have a break. Then, she fell asleep. The tortoise was slower, but he didn't stop. When the rabbit woke up, she ran very fast but it was too late. She didn't get to the finishing line before the tortoise.
【拓展范文 3】--- 花木兰
Mulan is a great cartoon which comes from an old Chinese story （定语从句）. It is about a village girl Mulan, who was truly brave and hard-working （定语从句）.
She lived with her family happily, but one day her weak and sick father （她体弱多病的父亲 weak adj. 虚弱的/不擅长 sick adj. 生病的） was asked to join the army （参军）,
so she decided to dress up as（装扮成）a boy and took her father's place (take sb’s place = take
the place of sb. 代替某人） to fight in the army. Some people might ask why this cartoon became so popular （宾语从句）. One of the reasons is that （其中一个原因是） Mulan was a common girl, but she could face everything bravely（勇敢面对一切）and was always ready to try her best. Another reason is that she showed us courage (n. 勇气）of protecting the country and her filial piety （孝顺/孝心） for parents.
I like this story best because Mulan set a good example for （给某人树立一个好榜样） us and her spirit (n. 精神）will inspire (v. 激励，鼓舞） us in many ways.七年级下册 Unit 6 Rain or Shine
例题：
假如你是李华，现在正和家人在三亚度假。你的英国笔友 Grace 对你的三亚之旅很感兴趣，请你用英语写一封明信片向她介绍你的假期。要点如下：
(1) Where are you (2) How is the weather
(3) What are you and your family doing (4) What do you think of your trip？
要求：（1）包含所有要点，可适当发挥， 使行文连贯；
（2）语篇完整，语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范；
（3）文中不能出现任何人名、校名等真实信息。
Dear Grace,
How is everything going _____________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
审题：
人称：第一、三人称 话题：假期正在进行的活动
文体：应用文（明信片） 时态： 现在进行时
要点： 目前在哪里度假、天气如何、自己和家人正在进行的活动以及自己的感受
写作框架： 开头： 引出话题----假期 度假地点 (in/at +地点） 正文： 描述具体活动内容 天气状况 (sunny, cloudy, rainy, windy, snowy, warm, breeze …) 自己和家人的具体活动 (lie on the beach, take photos, build a sand castle） 结尾：总结，表达感受 表达感受 (have a good/wonderful time, have fun, enjoy oneself) 一段难忘的记忆 (an unforgettable memory)
P1: 引出话题----假期
1. 我和我的家人正在三亚玩得很开心。I'm having a great time with my family in Sanya.
【句型升级】我现在正和家人在三亚——中国最美丽的城市之一，我们玩得很开心。
I'm having a great time with my family in Sanya, one of the most beautiful cities in China.
【优秀表达】one of the +形容词最高级+名词复数 “最……之一 ”
【练】(1) 三亚是中国最受欢迎的避暑城市之一。
Sanya is one of the most popular cities in China for summer vacations.
（2）这是我们在沙滩上堆过最大的沙堡（sandcastle）之一！
This is one of the largest sandcastles we've ever built on the beach!
（3）妹妹说贝壳是海洋馈赠的最美礼物之一。
My sister says seashells are one of the most beautiful gifts from the ocean.
（4）浮潜是我们旅程中最刺激的活动之一。
Snorkeling was one of the most exciting activities during our trip.
P2: 描述具体活动内容（天气状况+ 自己和家人的具体活动）
1. 这里天气晴朗，微风习习。我们都感到舒服极了。
The weather is sunny and windy. We all feel comfortable.
【句型升级】这里天气晴朗，微风习习。这里是如此舒适，我们玩得非常开心。
The sun is shining and there is a soft, warm breeze. It's so comfortable that we enjoy ourselves a lot.
【优秀表达】breeze n. 微风 so … that … 如此……以至于 …… (so + adj.adv. that+句子）
【练】(1) a cool summer breeze 夏日凉爽的微风
（2）三亚的海水清澈见底，我们甚至能看到小鱼在水下游动。
The sea in Sanya is so clear that we can see small fish swimming underwater.
（3）这里的椰子水甜滋滋的，我每天都要喝。
The coconut water here is so sweet that I drink it every day.
2. 我正躺在沙滩上放松。I'm lying on the beach to relax.
【句型升级】此刻，我正躺在沙滩上，鸟儿在我耳边唱歌。多么令人放松啊！
At the moment, I'm lying on the beach with birds singing in my ears. How relaxing it is!
【优秀表达】at the moment 此刻，现在 lie v. 躺；说谎 （现在分词：lying）
with+宾语+V-ing 表伴随，“（伴随着）……正在…… ”
e.g. My brother is swimming in the sea with sunlight dancing on the water.
弟弟正在海里游泳，阳光在水面上跳跃。
e.g. With my mother taking photos of the sunset, the whole family smiles at the camera.
妈妈拍着夕阳，全家对着镜头微笑。
感叹句：How + adj.adv. +主语+谓语！ 多么 ……（形容词/副词）啊！
【练】(1) 三亚的海水真清澈啊！How clear the sea water in Sanya is!
(2) 那些海鸥飞得好快呀！How fast those seagulls are flying!
(3) 这里的椰子水真美味啊！How delicious the coconut water here tastes!
3. 妈妈正在海边拍照。My mother is taking photos by the sea.
【句型升级】与此同时，妈妈正在海边拍照，抓拍着金色沙滩和我们全家的欢乐瞬间。
At the same time, my mother is taking photos by the sea, capturing the golden beach and our happy family moments.
【优秀表达】at the same time 同时 capture v. 拍摄 moment n. 片刻/时光
【练】那是我一生中最快乐的一段时光。That was one of the happiest moments of my life.
4. 爸爸和妹妹正在做什么呢？他们正在开心地堆沙堡呢！
What are my father and sister doing They are building a sand castle happily!
【句型升级】他们正在开心地堆沙堡，并用彩贝做装饰。
They are building a sand castle joyfully, decorating it with colorful shells!
【优秀表达】castle n. 城堡 joyfully adv. 高兴地 decorate v. 装饰
P3: 总结，表达感受
1. 我们一家在三亚过得很开心。My family are having fun in Sanya.
【句型升级】总而言之，我们在三亚玩得很开心，并且这是一份令我难忘的记忆，将永远留在我的脑海中。In a word, my family are having fun in Sanya and it is an unforgettable memory which will be kept in my mind forever （定语从句）.
【拓展句子】我等不及在我回来时和你分享更多的故事。
I can't wait to share more stories with you when I get back.
【优秀表达】in a word 总之 替换表达：all in all, in short, in brief
an unforgettable memory 一段难忘的记忆
keep sth. in (one’s) mind 将……记在心中 被动： sth be kept in (one’s) mind
【练】(1) 三亚多美啊！我会永远记住这段美好回忆。
How beautiful Sanya is! I'll keep this wonderful memory in my mind forever.
（2）旅行时，要牢记父母的建议。
When travelling, always keep your parents' advice in mind.
2. 你的假期怎么样？希望你也可以和家人一起度过一个愉快的假期。
What about your holiday Hope you can also enjoy a happy time with your family.
其他拓展：
1. Different types of weather: sunny, rainy, windy, cloudy, snowy, stormy, foggy, lightning, dry, wet, cold, warm, cool, hot, sunny and hot, sunny and warm, warm and dry
2. just right for … 正合适
e.g. The weather here is sunny, just right for walking. e.g. It's cool, just right for climbing mountains.
【优秀范文--－基础版】
Dear Grace,
How is everything going I'm having a great time with my family in Sanya.
The weather is sunny and windy. We all feel comfortable. I'm lying on the beach to relax.
My mother is taking photos by the sea. What are my father and sister doing They are building a sand castle happily!
My family are having fun in Sanya. What about your holiday Hope you can also enjoy a happy time with your family.
Yours,
Li Hua
【优秀范文---提升版】
Dear Grace,
How is everything going I'm having a great time with my family in Sanya, one of the most beautiful cities in China.
The sun is shining and there is a soft, warm breeze. It's so comfortable that we enjoy ourselves a lot. At the moment, I'm lying on the beach with birds singing in my ears. How relaxing it is! At the same time, my mother is taking photos by the sea, capturing the golden beach and our happy family moments. What are my father and sister doing They are building a sand castle joyfully, decorating it with colorful shells!
In a word, my family are having fun in Sanya and it is an unforgettable memory which will be kept in my mind forever （定语从句）. What about your holiday Hope you can also enjoy a happy time with your family.
Yours,
Li Hua
【拓展范文 1】
My Happy Family Time
I’m Bob. It's sunny today. I am going to the park for a picnic with my family. It is two o’clock in the afternoon. My mum is reading a book. My sister Lisa is jumping rope. My brother is jogging
on the road. I'm playing the guitar. I feel happy. My father is taking photos of us. We're all having a good time. How I wish time could stop at this moment!
【拓展范文 2】--- 中秋节所做的事情
Dear Jane,
Today is our traditional Mid-Autumn Festival. Getting together with our family （动名词
短语做主语） is really exciting! It's a cool autumn night. The moon is shining in the sky.
We are eating a big dinner now. My grandparents are looking at the moon. My parents are talking with each other. My younger brother is eating mooncakes at the moment. He is in high spirits!
When it is Mid-Autumn Festival, everyone is enjoying their wonderful time! The Mid- Autumn Festival makes everyone happy.
Yours,
Li Hua
【拓展范文 3】
My name is Grace. Gina is my good friend. We are having holidays in different places.
I am having a great time visiting Harbin. The weather is cold and snowy. I am wearing warm clothes and a hat. I am so happy to see the white world. There are so many things made of ice here. I feel like I am in an icy world. There are many people here. Some are skating and some are having a snowball fight. I'm building a snowman. We are all having fun. My friend Gina is in Hainan. It's warm and sunny there. A lot of people are on the beach. Some are swimming. Some are playing beach volleyball. Gina is sunbathing.
Although we are having holidays in different places, we are having a good time.
【拓展范文 4】--- 我的北京之旅
Dear Mary,
How's your vacation going I'm visiting the Great Wall in Beijing with my family. The Great Wall （长城）, which attracts (v. 吸引） thousands of （成千上万） visitors from the whole world （定语从句） is one of the seven wonders (n. 奇迹/奇观） of the world.
The weather is sunny and hot, and my family are preparing to climb the Great Wall. For
me, it's really difficult, so I almost (adv. 几乎/差不多） want to give up （放弃）, however, my parents encourage (v. 鼓励） me again and again. With their encouragement （在他们的鼓励下）, I'm keeping on（继续） climbing. After arriving at the top, we are all amazed by（惊讶于） the beauty of the Great Wall, which looks like a dragon （定语从句）. As we all know （众所周知）, the Great Wall is famous not only in China but also around the world.
In brief （简言之）, we are enjoying ourselves in Beijing now and I'll keep this wonderful journey in mind forever （永远记住这段美好的旅程）.
Yours,
Li Lei
【拓展范文 5】--- 我最爱的季节
My favourite season
When it comes to （当谈及） my favourite season, summer soon appears in my mind （出现在我脑海 appear v. 出现）.
The summer in my hometown is terribly (adv. 很/非常） hot, and the heavy rain （大雨） is another symbol (n. 象征/标志） of summer here. Millions of raindrops (n. 雨滴） fall down
from the sky. They drop on the ground and wait for their next journey back to the sky.
However, the sunset (n. 日落/晚霞） in summer is still charming (adj. 迷人的）. When I sit in the yard, it is the most enjoyable (adj. 令人愉快的） thing for me is watching this bright shining sun （明媚的阳光） until it goes down the hill. Besides （此外）, I can never forget those days on the basketball court （篮球场）, when my friends and I could play happily （定语从句）.
In my opinion（在我看来）, four seasons are just like a box of chocolate without any labels （四季就像一盒巧克力，没有标签，却处处是惊喜。） For me, I just accidentally (adv. 偶然地） find the most delicious piece in the box --- summer. （我只是偶然发现了盒子里最美味的一块---夏天。）七年级下册 Unit 5 Here and Now
例题：
假如你是李华，正在南京度假。现在是上午10点，你正在公园漫步。请用英语写一篇短文介绍你的所见所闻。
要求：(1) 语句通顺，表达准确；(2) 不少于60词。
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审题：
人称：第一、三人称 话题：公园里人们正在进行的活动
文体：说明文 时态：现在进行时
要点：在公园的所见所闻（游客、年轻人、孩子们、老年人等正在做什么）；自己的感受
写作框架：
开头：引出话题，表明时间、地点
周日上午10点 (10 o’clock on Sunday morning)
在公园散步 (in the park, taking a stroll)
正文：公园里人们正在进行的活动
游客在拍照并分享 (taking photos, record the beautiful scene, sharing)
少数人在交谈 (chatting)
孩子们在放风筝 (flying kites)
老年人在打太极 (playing Tai Chi, gracefully)
结尾：表达感受
玩得高兴 (having a good/wonderful time, looking forward to)
P1: 引出话题，表明时间、地点
1. 我的名字叫李华。我正在南京度假。_________________________________________
2. 现在是周日上午10点。我正在公园散步。
_________________________________________________________________________
【句型升级】 现在是周日上午10点。我正在一个安静的公园里悠闲地散步。
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【优秀表达】 _______ adv. 慢悠悠地/不慌不忙地 _______ adj. 安静的/平静的
_______ n./v. 散步，溜达，闲逛 __________________________ 散步
【练】人们正在海滩漫步。People are ___________ along the beach.
P2: 公园里人们正在进行的活动
1. 公园里有很多人。_________________________________________________________
【句子拓展】 公园充满生机。空气很清新，微风使得树上的树叶舞动着。到处都有五颜六色的花，吸引着很多蝴蝶。_______________________________________________
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【优秀表达】____________ 充满…… ________ adj. 清新的/新鲜的
______________ 微风 ________ v. 吸引
2. 一些游客在拍照，并在微信上把它们分享给朋友。
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【句型升级】一些游客拍照来记录美景，并在微信上把它们分享给朋友。
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【优秀表达】_______ v. 记录 _______ n. 景色/风光 (近义词：______ 名胜/风景)
3. 少数人在长椅上聊天。_____________________________________________________
【句型升级】少数人正坐在长椅上，聊着天，享受着温暖的阳光。
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4. 公园里也有一些小孩子。他们在放风筝。
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【句型升级】一群孩子正在草地上放风筝，笑得很开心。
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5. 一些老年人在打太极。_____________________________________________________
【句型升级】一些老年人正在缓慢而优雅地练习太极。
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【优秀表达】___________ adv. 优雅地
P3: 表达感受
1. 每个人都很愉快。我喜欢这里放松的生活。
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【句型升级】每个人都很愉快。我真的享受这里放松而平静的生活。我期待着下次来这里的旅程。________________________________________________________________
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【优秀表达】_______________________________ 玩得高兴/过得愉快
________________ 期待
【练】(1) 我期待着周末。I’m ___________________ the weekend.
(2) 她正期待着自己的生日派对。__________________________________________
(3) 他期待尽快收到你的消息。He ___________________ hearing from you soon.
(4) 我期待再次见到你。I __________________ seeing you again.
【优秀范文---基础版】
My name is Li Hua. I’m taking a holiday in Nanjing. It’s 10 o’clock on Sunday morning. I am walking in the park.
There are many people in the park. Some tourists are taking photos and sharing them with their friends on WeChat. A few people are chatting on the bench. There are some children in the park too. They are flying kites. Some old people are playing Tai Chi.
Everyone is having a good time. I like the relaxing life here.
【优秀范文---提升版】
My name is Li Hua. I’m taking a holiday in Nanjing. It’s 10 o’clock on Sunday morning and I’m taking a leisurely stroll in a peaceful park.
The park is full of life. The air is fresh and sweet, and the gentle breeze is making the leaves on the trees dance. There are colorful flowers everywhere, attracting many butterflies. Some tourists are taking photos to record the beautiful scene and sharing them with their friends on WeChat. A few people are sitting on the bench, chatting and enjoying the warm sunshine. A group of children are flying kites on the grass, laughing happily. Some old people are practicing Tai Chi slowly and gracefully.
Everyone is having a wonderful time. I truly enjoy the relaxing and peaceful life here. I’m looking forward to my next trip here.
【拓展范文1】
It’s fine on Sunday morning. My mother and I are walking in the park. Many people are in the park. Look! Some boys are playing basketball and others are playing football. Some people are playing games under a big tree. Near a table, a girl is reading a book. Another girl is eating an apple and the others are playing chess. How happy they are!
【拓展范文2】--- 三个人目前正在进行的活动
This is Sam from New York. It’s eight o’clock in the morning. Right now he is in the Central Park with his parents. He is walking with his mother while his father is taking photos. Everyone is having a good time.
Lucy is in Paris. It’s two o’clock in the afternoon. Lucy is visiting the Eiffel Tower with her parents. A guide shows them great sights and tells them stories about the tower.
I’m Li Lei from Beijing. It’s nine o’clock in the evening now. I’m reading a book on the bed at the moment. I like reading because it’s really interesting and relaxing. I’m going to bed at ten thirty.
2七年级下册 Unit 8 Once upon a Time
例题：
同学们一定听过“守株待兔”的故事吧，请根据图片提示用英语描述一下这个故事并谈谈自己的感想。
提示词：knock against 撞上；crops 庄稼
写作要求：(1) 故事情节完整，可适当发挥，语言准确流畅，
书写规范；(2) 不少于80词。
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审题：
人称：第三人称 话题：描述“守株待兔”的故事
文体：记叙文/夹叙夹议 时态：一般过去时
要点：“守株待兔”的故事内容(故事背景、事件起因、经过与结果)；自己的感想。
写作框架：
开头：介绍故事背景及事件起因
人物 (a farmer)
意外事件：一只兔子撞在树桩上死了 (knock against a tree stump, died)
农夫的反应 (excited, took it home)
正文：故事的发展与结果
错误决定：放弃种田，坐等兔子 (abandon, wait for)
结果：一无所获 (couldn’t get anything, lost)
结尾：个人感想与启示
不能只依赖运气 (depend/rely on luck)
成功源于努力 (success comes from effort; no pain, no gain)
P1: 介绍故事背景及事件起因
1. 从前，有一位农夫每天在田里辛勤劳作。
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【句型升级】从前，有一位农夫每天在田里辛勤劳作。
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【优秀表达】who引导的定语从句：
先行词_______；从句紧跟先行词；从句动词与先行词一致。
e.g. The girl who is singing is my sister. 正在唱歌的那个女孩是我姐姐。
先行词 定语从句
e.g. The boy who won the race is my classmate. 赢得比赛的那个男孩是我的同学。
先行词 定语从句
【练】(1) 戴眼镜的那位老师教英语。_________________________________________
(2) 努力工作的人常常会成功。_______________________ often succeed.
(3) 努力学习的学生会通过考试。_______________________ will pass the exam.
(4) 正在做饭的那位女士是我阿姨。_________________________________________
(5) 你认识正在画画的那个女孩吗？_________________________________________
2. 一天，当他正在田里劳作的时候，他看到一只野兔。
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3. 这只野兔跑得太快了。它的头撞到了树桩上，不久就死了。农夫看到这一幕很兴奋。
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【句型升级】这只野兔跑得太快了。它的头撞到了树桩上，当场死去。农夫看到这一幕欣喜若狂。_______________________________________________________________
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【优秀表达】___________ 如此……以至于…… ______________ 意外撞到（某物）
_________ v. 敲击/碰撞 _________ n. 树桩 ____________ adv. 立刻/马上
_________ adj. 非常兴奋的/激动的
【练】(1) 进来前请先敲门。Please _________ on the door before entering.
(2) 她感到不适后立刻打电话给医生。She called the doctor __________ after feeling sick.
(3) 孩子们对去迪士尼乐园的旅行兴奋不已。
The kids were _________ about the trip to Disneyland.
4. 他捡起死兔子带回家美餐一顿。心里开心极了。
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【优秀表达】_________ 捡起；开车接（某人）；学会（技能/语言）
【练】(1) 你能把玩具捡起来吗？到处都是。Can you _______ the toys They’re everywhere.
(2) 我爸爸放学后会来接我。My dad will ___________ after school.
(3) 我在巴黎旅行时学会了一些法语。I ___________ some French while traveling in Paris.
【句子拓展】他心想：“何必这么辛苦？我干脆守在这里等更多兔子撞上来吧！”
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P2: 故事的发展与结果
1. 从那天起，他不再下地干活，而是守在树旁等待其他兔子撞上来。
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【句型升级1】他不再下地干活。______________________________________________
【句型升级2】从此，他抛下庄稼，日复一日地守在树桩旁，等待兔子再次出现。
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【优秀表达】_________________ 从那天起 ________________ 从此/从那时起
_________________ 不再…… __________ v. 放弃
【练】(1) 如果你炒我鱿鱼，我就再也高兴不起来了。
If you take my work away I can’t be happy __________.
(2) 人们不再对电影感兴趣了。______________________________________________
(3) 也许你不该再去那家餐厅吃饭了。Maybe you _______ eat in that restaurant ________.
2. 最终，农夫什么也没得到。_________________________________________________
【句型升级】可惜，再没有兔子出现，他的田地也荒芜了。最终，他既失去了不劳而获的机会，也毁了自己的收成。________________________________________________
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【优秀表达】_______ v. (使)变成，成为 ________ adj. 贫瘠的/不毛的
___________ 最后/终于 _________ n. 机会 _________ n. 收获/收割
P3: 个人感想与启示
版本1：这个故事告诉我们：不能只依赖运气，我们必须努力工作才能得到想要的东西。毕竟，“不劳则无获”。_____________________________________________________
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【优秀表达】__________ 依赖/依靠 __________ 毕竟/终究
_________________ 不劳则无获。(______ n. 疼痛/痛苦 ______ v.获得 n.好处)
版本2：(1)这个故事告诉我们：成功源于努力，而非侥幸。依赖意外之财只会招致失败。
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(2) 生活中，我们应当脚踏实地地耕耘，而非等待“兔子”主动送上门。毕竟，机会总是眷顾有准备的人，而不是空想家！
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【优秀表达】_________ n. 成功 _________ n. 努力 _________ 依赖
___________ adj. 出乎意料的 _________ 导致
_______ n. 失败 (______ v.失败/不及格) __________ adv. 勤奋地/孜孜不倦地
_______________________________________ 机会总是眷顾有准备的人。
(___________ n. 机会 _________ v. 更喜爱/偏袒 _________ v. 准备)
___________ v. 做白日梦/幻想/空想 n. 白日梦/幻想/空想
【优秀范文---基础版】
Once upon a time, a farmer worked hard in his field every day. One day, when he was working in the field, he saw a hare. The hare ran so quickly. Its head knocked against a tree stump and it died soon. The farmer was very excited to see it. He picked up the dead hare and took it home for dinner. He was very happy.
From that day on, he stopped working in the field./he didn’t work in the field anymore. He stayed by that tree, and waited for hares to come again. In the end, the farmer couldn’t get anything again.
The story teaches us that we can’t only depend on luck. We need to work hard to get what we want (宾语从句). After all, “No pain, no gain.”
【优秀范文---提升版】
Once upon a time, there was a farmer who worked hard in his field every day. One day, when he was working in the field, he saw a hare. The hare ran so quickly that its head knocked against a tree stump. It died immediately. The farmer was thrilled to see it! He picked up the dead hare and took it home for dinner. And he thought, “Why work so hard I’ll just wait here for more hares!”
From then on, he abandoned his crops and sat by the stump day after day, waiting for hares to come again. Sadly, no more hares came, and his field turned barren. In the end, he lost both the chance for free meals and his harvest.
This story teaches us that success comes from effort, not luck. Relying on unexpected gains leads to failure. In life, we should work diligently instead of waiting for “hares” to knock on our doors. After all, opportunities favor those who are prepared, not those who daydream!
【拓展范文1】--- 狐假虎威
Long long ago (很久之前), there was a fox in a forest. One day, a hungry tiger caught the fox and wanted to eat him. The fox was very scared (adj.害怕的) but he had a clever idea quickly. He told the tiger that he was the king of animals. If the tiger ate him, the tiger would get punishment (n. 惩罚). The tiger didn’t believe what the fox said. Thus (adv. 因此/所以), the fox asked the tiger to follow him and walk around the forest. As soon as (一……就……) the animals saw them, they were so afraid that they ran away immediately. Seeing this, the tiger believed what the fox said (宾语从句) and let him go.
【拓展范文2】--- 龟兔赛跑
Once upon a time, there lived a tortoise (n.乌龟) and a rabbit in the forest. One day, they decided to have a race. Lots of animals came to watch. At first, the rabbit was much faster than the tortoise. The rabbit thought the tortoise was too slow, and she could win easily. So she decided to have a break. Then, she fell asleep. The tortoise was slower, but he didn’t stop. When the rabbit woke up, she ran very fast but it was too late. She didn’t get to the finishing line before the tortoise.
【拓展范文3】--- 花木兰
Mulan is a great cartoon which comes from an old Chinese story (定语从句). It is about a village girl Mulan, who was truly brave and hard-working (定语从句).
She lived with her family happily, but one day her weak and sick father (她体弱多病的父亲 weak adj. 虚弱的/不擅长 sick adj. 生病的) was asked to join the army (参军), so she decided to dress up as (装扮成) a boy and took her father's place (take sb.’s place = take the place of sb. 代替某人) to fight in the army. Some people might ask why this cartoon became so popular (宾语从句). One of the reasons is that (其中一个原因是) Mulan was a common girl, but she could face everything bravely (勇敢面对一切) and was always ready to try her best. Another reason is that she showed us the courage (n. 勇气) of protecting the country and her filial piety (孝顺/孝心) for parents.
I like this story best because Mulan set a good example for (给某人树立一个好榜样) us and her spirit (n. 精神) will inspire (v. 激励，鼓舞) us in many ways.
2七年级下册 Unit 7 A Day to Remember
例题：
同学们都参加过学校的郊游活动吧？请以“My school trip”为题，向学校英语报刊投稿，描述你参加过的一次学校郊游活动，主要包括什么时候去的、去了哪里、做了什么以及你的感受。
要求：(1) 词数不少于70；(2) 短文中不能出现真实的人名和校名。
My school trip
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审题：
人称：第一人称为主 话题：学校旅行 文体：记叙文 时态：一般过去时
要点：什么时候去的、去了哪里、交通方式、做了什么以及感受等。
写作框架：
开头：引出话题----学校旅行
旅行时间、地点、人物 (Last weekend/…, our school had/took/organized a trip to …)
正文：介绍学校旅行的具体活动
交通方式 (take a bus/by bus, take a car, ride a bike, take a train/plane …)
活动内容：参观农场/喂鸡/挤牛奶 (show sb. around, feed chickens, milk a cow)
结尾：总结，表达感受
累但是有意义 (tired but meaningful)
描述感受的表达 (learn a lot, get close to nature)
P1: 引出话题----学校旅行（时间、地点、人物等）
1. 上周六天气晴朗。我和我的老师、同学们去阳光农场进行学校旅行，在那里我们玩得很开心。_________________________________________________________________
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【句型升级】我们学校组织了一次去阳光农场的学校旅行，在那里我们玩得很开心。
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【优秀表达】________________________________ 组织一次去……的学校旅行
__________ v. 组织 _______________________ 玩得高兴
where引导的定语从句：地点名词 + where + 句子(缺地点状语)
e.g. This the beach where we built sandcastles yesterday. (我们在沙滩上堆沙堡)
e.g. Sanya is the city where my family spends summer vacations every year.
(我们一家在这个城市过暑假)
e.g. Do you remember the park where we flew kites last weekend
(我们在这个公园放风筝)
e.g. I want to visit the island where coconuts grow everywhere! (椰子生长在这个岛上)
【练】(1) 这是我每周末学习的图书馆。________________________________________
(2) 我们打篮球的操场正在维修。
The playground ____________________________ is being repaired.
(3) 我的家乡是那个夏日开满向日葵的村庄。
My hometown is ________________________________ everywhere in summer.
P2: 介绍学校旅行的具体活动
1. 我们坐了一个小时的公交到了那儿。_________________________________________
【优秀表达】__________________________________ 做某事花费某人多长时间
__________ 到达某地（注意：________ 到那儿 --- there为地点副词，其前不加介词）
2. 我们到那儿后，农场主先带我们参观了农场。
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【句型升级】我们一到那里，农场主就热情地欢迎我们。然后他带我们参观了农场。
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【句子拓展】每个人都兴奋得像出笼的鸟儿一样。
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【优秀表达】_________ 一……就…… ____________________ 热情地欢迎某人
________________ 带某人参观…… ____________________ 像出笼的鸟儿
【练】(1) 我一到就给你打电话。I will call you _____________________.
(2) 雨一停，我们就可以出去。__________________________, we can go out.
(3) 你一准备好我们就出发。We will leave ________________________.
3. 农场里有许多山羊，奶牛和鸡。______________________________________________
【句型升级】农场里有许多动物，比如山羊、奶牛和鸡。
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【优秀表达】________ prep. 例如
【练】(1) 宠物，例如猫和狗，需要很多照顾。Pets, ________________, need lots of care.
(2) 他喜欢意大利食物，例如披萨和意大利面。He loves Italian food, ________________.
4. 农场主给我们讲了这些动物的生活习惯。
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5. 然后我们帮农场主喂鸡。在那之后，农场主教我们如何（正确）挤牛奶。
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【优秀表达】_____________ 喂鸡 ___________ 挤牛奶 _________ adv. 正确地
6. 这看似容易，但学会正确地挤牛奶花了我们一些时间。
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【句型升级】挤牛奶看似容易，但它需要耐心和小心。
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【优秀表达】________ v. 似乎/好像/看来 ________ v. 需要
_________ n. 耐心 (________ adj. 耐心的)
_______ n. 小心/谨慎/照顾 (________ adj. 小心/谨慎)
【练】这些宠物需要悉心照顾。These pets _________ a lot of care and attention.
7. 下午，我们和农场主交谈，他（耐心地）教我们如何种植一些植物。________________
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【句子拓展】农场主种植的苹果很甜，我们吃了很多。
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【优秀表达】_________ adv. 耐心地 _____________ 如此……以至于……
【练】(1) 他跑得飞快，最终赢得了比赛。He ran ________________ he won the race.
(2) 电影太无聊了，我直接睡着了。__________________________________________
P3: 总结，表达感受
版本1：这次旅途很累人，但很有意义。那天我学到了一件事：饲养动物并不容易。需要做很多工作。那一天是值得记忆的一天。____________________________________
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版本2：(1) 虽然劳作了一天之后很累，但我们学到了很多，并且与大自然更加亲近，这将是我们最美好的记忆。____________________________________________________
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(2) 我忍不住想，如果我能每天待在那里，我会有什么感觉！
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【优秀表达】____________ adj. 有意义的
________ conj. 虽然/尽管（同义词：_________；引导让步状语从句，不与but连用）
__________ adj. 筋疲力尽的 ___________________ 与大自然更加亲近
____________________________ 情不自禁做某事 ________ v. 想知道
【练】(1) 虽然下着雨，我们还是去散步了。________ it was raining, _________________.
(2) 虽然筋疲力尽，但他还是跑完了比赛。He finished the race, ____________________.
(3) 他讲笑话时，我忍不住大笑。____________________ when he tells jokes.
(4) 他每隔五分钟就忍不住看一次(check)手机。
________________________ his phone every 5 minutes.
【优秀范文---基础版】
My school trip
It was sunny last Saturday. I went on a school trip to Sunshine Farm with my teachers and classmates. We had so much fun there.
It took us one hour to get there by bus. When we got there, the farmer showed us around the farm first. There were many goats, cows and chickens on the farm. The farmer told us something about these animals’ living habits. Then we helped the farmer feed chickens. After that, the farmer taught us how to milk a cow. It seemed easy, but it took us some time to get it right. In the afternoon, we talked with the farmer and he taught us how to grow some plants.
The trip was tiring but meaningful. One thing I learnt that day: Keeping animals isn’t easy. It needs lots of work. It was a day to remember.
【优秀范文---提升版】
My school trip
It was sunny last Saturday. Our school organized a school trip to Sunshine Farm, where we enjoyed ourselves a lot (定语从句).
It took us one hour to get there by bus. As soon as we got there, the farmer welcomed us warmly. Then he showed us around the farm. Everyone felt excited like birds out of cage. There were lots of animals like goats, cows and chickens on the farm. The farmer told us something about these animals’ living habits. Then we helped the farmer feed chickens. After that, the farmer taught us how to milk a cow properly. Milking a cow seemed easy, but it required patience and care. In the afternoon, we talked with the farmer and he taught us how to grow some plants patiently. The apples planted by the farmer (过去分词做后置定语) were so sweet that we ate a lot.
Though we were exhausted after a day of working, we learned a lot and got closer to nature, which would be the best memory for us (定语从句). And I couldn't help wondering how I would feel if I could stay there every day!
【拓展范文1】
An Exciting Trip
My name is Mike. Last weekend, I went on a trip with my classmates.
At 8:30 in the morning, we met up at our school gate. We went to the North Hill Park by bike. On the way, we were so excited that we sang loudly. When we arrived there, we started to climb the mountain. We had a picnic on the top of the mountain. After that, we took some pictures and had a rest. We didn’t go back until 5:00 p.m. We were tired but very happy. We had a good time!
I think the trip is very exciting.
【拓展范文2】
Last Saturday, I went on a school trip to Red Star Farm with my teachers and classmates. We went there by bus. In the morning, we explored some large tents with vegetables there. We also picked many vegetables, such as red tomatoes, green cucumbers and orange carrots. All the vegetables were very fresh. It was interesting to pick them from the plants or dig them out of the earth (n. 泥土). In the afternoon, we went for a walk on the farm. We talked with the farmer and he told us something about the farm. We learnt a lot and had a good time on the farm. The trip was tiring but great fun and meaningful! It made me think of the saying: “Every grain comes from hard work. (粒粒皆辛苦)” It was really a day to remember.
【拓展范文3】--- 崂山之旅
October 12th, 2024, Sunny
Last Sunday, our class organized us to Mount Lao to get close to nature.
To begin with (首先), the bus ride was short and relaxing. We told jokes and sang songs together, so the ride was full of joy (充满欢乐). Next, the air in the mountain was fresh and the scenery (n.风景) there was fascinating (adj. 迷人的). Seeing the green mount reflected (reflect v. 反映/映出) on the clean lake (现在分词作伴随状语), I thought I was moving in a painting. What's more (其次), although the mountain was high, I tried my best to climb to the top of it with the encouragement of (在……的鼓励下) our teacher.
In short (总而言之), the school trip was really meaningful and I had a better understanding of the saying (对这句话有了更好的理解) “Nothing is impossible for a willing heart (世上无难事，只怕有心人)”. I am looking forward to (期待) the next school trip.
2七年级下册 Unit 7 A Day to Remember
例题：
同学们都参加过学校的郊游活动吧？请以“My school trip”为题， 向学校英语报刊投稿，描述你参加过的一次学校郊游活动，主要包括什么时候去的、去了哪里、做了什么以及你的感受。
要求：（1）词数不少于 70； (2) 短文中不能出现真实的人名和校名。
My school trip
审题：
人称：第一人称为主 话题： 学校旅行 文体：记叙文 时态： 一般过去时
要点：什么时候去的、去了哪里、交通方式、做了什么以及感受等。
写作框架： 开头：引出话题----学校旅行 旅行时间、地点、人物 ((Last weekend/…, our school had/took/organized a trip to …) 正文：介绍学校旅行的具体活动 交通方式 (take a bus/by bus, take a car, ride a bike, take a train/plane …) 活动内容：参观农场/喂鸡/挤牛奶 (show sb. around, feed chickens, milk a cow) 结尾：总结，表达感受 累但是有意义 (tired but meaningful) 描述感受的表达 (learn a lot, get close to nature)
P1: 引出话题---－学校旅行（时间、地点、人物等）
1. 上周六天气晴朗。我和我的老师、同学们去阳光农场进行学校旅行，在那里我们玩得很开心。It was sunny last Saturday. I went on a school trip to Sunshine Farm with my teachers and classmates. We had so much fun there.
【句型升级】我们学校组织了一次去阳光农场的学校旅行，在那里我们玩得很开心。
Our school organized a school trip to Sunshine Farm, where we enjoyed ourselves a lot （定语从句）.
【优秀表达】organize a school trip to … 组织一次去……的学校旅行
organize v. 组织 enjoy oneself/oneselves 玩得高兴
where 引导的定语从句：地点名词 + where + 句子（缺地点状语）
e.g. This the beach where we built sandcastles yesterday 。 （我们在沙滩上堆沙堡）
e.g. Sanya is the city where my family spends summer vacations every year.
（我们一家在这个城市过暑假）
e.g. Do you remember the park where we flew kites last weekend （我们在这个公园放风筝）
【练】(1) 这是我每周末学习的图书馆。This is the library where I study every weekend.
（2）我们打篮球的操场正在维修。The playground where we play basketball is being repaired.
（3）我的家乡是那个夏日开满向日葵的村庄。My hometown is the village where sunflowers grow everywhere in summer.
P2: 介绍学校旅行的具体活动
1. 我们坐了一个小时的公交到了那儿。It took us one hour to get there by bus.
【优秀表达】it takes/took sb. +时间+ to do sth. 做某事花费某人多长时间
get to+地点 到达某地（注意：get there 到那儿 --- there 为地点副词，其前不加介词）
2. 我们到那儿后，农场主先带我们参观了农场。
When we got there, the farmer showed us around the farm first.
【句型升级】我们一到那里，农场主就热情地欢迎我们。然后他带我们参观了农场。
As soon as we got there, the farmer welcomed us warmly. Then he showed us around the farm.
【句子拓展】每个人都兴奋得像出笼的鸟儿一样。
Everyone felt excited like birds out of a cage.
【优秀表达】as soon as 一……就 …… welcome sb. warmly 热情地欢迎某人
show sb. around 带某人参观 …… like birds out of cage 像出笼的鸟儿
【练】(1) 我一到就给你打电话。I will call you as soon as I arrive.
(2) 雨一停，我们就可以出去。As soon as the rain stops, we can go out.
(3) 你一准备好我们就出发。We will leave as soon as you are ready.
3. 农场里有许多山羊，奶牛和鸡。There were many goats, cows and chickens on the farm.
【句型升级】农场里有许多动物， 比如山羊、奶牛和鸡。
There were lots of animals like goats, cows and chickens on the farm.
【优秀表达】like prep. 例如
【练】(1) 宠物，例如猫和狗，需要很多照顾。Pets, like cats and dogs, need lots of care.
（2）他喜欢意大利食物，例如披萨和意大利面。He loves Italian food, like pizza and pasta.
4. 农场主给我们讲了这些动物的生活习性。
The farmer told us something about these animals' living habits.
5. 然后我们帮农场主喂鸡。在那之后，农场主教我们如何（正确）挤牛奶。
Then we helped the farmer feed chickens. After that, the farmer taught us how to milk a cow (properly).
【优秀表达】feed chickens 喂鸡 milk a cow 挤牛奶 properly adv. 正确地
6. 这看似容易，但学会正确地挤牛奶花了我们一些时间。
It seemed easy, but it took us some time to get it right.
【句型升级】挤牛奶看似容易，但它需要耐心和小心。
Milking a cow seemed easy, but it required patience and care.
【优秀表达】seem v.似乎/好像/看来 require v.需要 patience n.耐心 (patient adj. 耐心的）
care n. 小心/谨慎/照顾 (careful adj. 小心/谨慎）
【练】这些宠物需要悉心照顾。These pets require a lot of care and attention.
7. 下午，我们和农场主交谈，他（耐心地）教我们如何种植一些植物。In the afternoon,
we talked with the farmer and he taught us how to grow some plants (patiently).
【句子拓展】农场主种植的苹果很甜，我们吃了很多。
The apples planted by the farmer （过去分词做后置定语） were so sweet that we ate a lot.
【优秀表达】patiently adv. 耐心地 so … that … 如此……以至于 ……
【练】(1) 他跑得飞快，最终赢得了比赛。He ran so fast that he won the race.
(2) 电影太无聊了，我直接睡着了。The movie was so boring that I fell asleep.
P3: 总结，表达感受
版本 1：这次旅途很累人，但很有意义。那天我学到了一件事：饲养动物并不容易。需
要做很多工作。那一天是值得记忆的一天。The trip was tiring but meaningful. One thing
I learned that day: Keeping animals isn't easy. It takes a lot of work. It was a day to remember.
版本 2：（1）虽然劳作了一天之后很累，但我们学到了很多，并且与大自然更加亲近，这将是我们最美好的记忆。Though we were exhausted after a day of working, we learned a lot and got closer to nature, which would be the best memory for us （定语从句）.
（2）我忍不住想，如果我能每天待在那里，我会有什么感觉！
And I couldn't help wondering how I would feel if I could stay there every day!
【优秀表达】meaningful adj. 有意义的
though conj. 虽然/尽管（同义词：although；引导让步状语从句，不与 but 连用）
exhausted adj. 筋疲力尽的 get closer to nature 与大自然更加亲近
can't/couldn't help doing sth. 情不自禁做某事 wonder v. 想知道
【练】(1) 虽然下着雨，我们还是去散步了。Though it was raining, we went for a walk.
（2）虽然筋疲力尽，但他还是跑完了比赛。He finished the race, though he was exhausted.
(3)他讲笑话时，我忍不住大笑。I can't help laughing when he tells jokes.
（4）他每隔五分钟就忍不住看一次（check）手机。
He can't help checking his phone every five minutes.
【优秀范文--－基础版】
My school trip
It was sunny last Saturday. I went on a school trip to Sunshine Farm with my teachers and classmates. We had so much fun there.
It took us one hour to get there by bus. When we got there, the farmer showed us around the farm first. There were many goats, cows and chickens on the farm. The farmer told us something about these animals' living habits. Then we helped the farmer feed chickens. After that, the farmer taught us how to milk a cow. It seemed easy, but it took us some time to get it right. In the afternoon, we talked with the farmer and he taught us how to grow some plants.
The trip was tiring but meaningful. One thing I learned that day: Keeping animals isn't easy. It needs lots of work. It was a day to remember.
【优秀范文---提升版】
My school trip
It was sunny last Saturday. Our school organized a school trip to Sunshine Farm, where we enjoyed ourselves a lot （定语从句）.
It took us one hour to get there by bus. As soon as we got there, the farmer welcomed us warmly. Then he showed us around the farm. Everyone felt excited like birds out of a cage. There were lots of animals like goats, cows and chickens on the farm. The farmer told us something about these animals' living habits. Then we helped the farmer feed chickens. After that, the farmer taught us how to milk a cow properly. Milking a cow seemed easy, but it required patience and care. In the afternoon, we talked with the farmer and he taught us how to grow some plants patiently. The apples planted by the farmer（过去分词做后置定语） were so sweet that we ate a lot.
Though we were exhausted after a day of working, we learned a lot and got closer to nature, which would be the best memory for us （定语从句）. And I couldn't help wondering how I would feel if I could stay there every day!
【拓展范文 1】
An Exciting Trip
My name is Mike. Last weekend, I went on a trip with my classmates.
At 8:30 in the morning, we met up at our school gate. We went to North Hill Park by
bike. On the way, we were so excited that we sang loudly. When we arrived there, we started to climb the mountain. We had a picnic on the top of the mountain. After that, we took some pictures and had a rest. We didn't go back until 5:00 p.m. We were tired but very happy. We had a good time!
I think the trip is very exciting.
【拓展范文 2】
Last Saturday, I went on a school trip to Red Star Farm with my teachers and classmates. We went there by bus. In the morning, we explored some large tents with vegetables there. We also picked many vegetables, such as red tomatoes, green cucumbers and orange carrots. All The vegetables were very fresh. It was interesting to pick them from the plants or dig them out of the earth (n. 泥土）. In the afternoon, we went for a walk on the farm. We talked with the farmer and he told us something about the farm. We learned a lot and had a good time on the farm. The trip was tiring but great fun and meaningful! It made me think of the saying: “Every grain comes from hard work. （粒粒皆辛苦）” It was really a day to remember.
【拓展范文 3】--- 崂山之旅
October 12th, 2024, Sunny
Last Sunday, our class organized us to Mount Lao to get close to nature.
To begin with（首先）, the bus ride was short and relaxing. We told jokes and sang songs together, so the ride was full of joy（充满欢乐）. Next, the air in the mountains was fresh and the scenery was (n.风景） There was fascinating (adj. 迷人的). Seeing the green mountain reflected (reflect v. 反映/映出） on the clean lake （现在分词作伴随状语）, I thought I was moving in a painting. What's more（其次）, although the mountain was high, I tried my best to climb to the top ofit with the encouragement of （在……的鼓励下） our teacher.
In short ( 总而言之 ), the school trip was really meaningful and I had a better understanding of the saying （对这句话有了更好的理解） “Nothing is impossible for a willing heart （世上无难事，只怕有心人）” . I am looking forward to （期待） the next school trip.
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