【期中考点培优】专题19 书面表达-2025-2026学年七年级下册英语期中复习考点培优译林版（新教材）（含答案解析）
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2025-2026学年七年级下册英语期中复习考点培优译林版（新教材）
专题19 书面表达
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
1．假设你正在参加学校举办的“智慧城市创意项目”展示活动，你需要用英语向大家介绍你设计的未来房屋。请根据以下要点提示，写一篇发言稿。
要点提示：
1. 房屋位置：建在树上或漂浮在水上
2. 建筑材料：特殊玻璃、太阳能板
3. 智能功能：会根据天气变化调节温度
4. 你的愿望：让生活更美好
词汇参考：float 漂浮 solar panels 太阳能板 temperature 温度
要求：词数70左右，语句通顺，语法正确。
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2．假设你是李华，你的英国笔友 Tom 想了解你的梦想家园。请你根据以下提示，给他写一封邮件，介绍你的梦想家园。
提示：
1.位置（如海边、山区等）；
2.类型和结构（如两层小楼、带花园等）；
3.里面的设施和你想在里面做的事；
4.和谁一起居住。
要求：
1.词数 80-100；
2.条理清晰，语句通顺，语法正确；
3.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
Dear Tom,
I’m glad to tell you about my dream home.
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Yours,
Li Hua
3．假设你是李磊，来自英国的交换生Peter即将去你家寄宿。他给你发了邮件，问了以下问题，请根据问题内容写一封回信。
1. Where is your hometown 2. What can we do in your hometown
2. What is your home like 4. How far is your school from your home
要求：1)要点齐全，适当发挥，语言通顺，书写规范；
2)词数在90词左右，邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Peter,
I’m writing to tell you something about my hometown.
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Welcome to my hometown. I’m looking forward to meeting you soon!
Yours,
Lilei
4．某学校为了激发中学生的创意和灵感，提高中学生学习英语的热情，举办了主题为“My Dream Home”的演讲比赛。请你根据下表中所提供的信息，完成演讲稿。
房子大 有2层，可以和家人住在一起；后面有花园
房间多 一层有厨房、卧室……；二层有浴室、书房……
很舒适 可以和朋友在家聚会；放学后在书房里做作业；早上在花园读书
其他 ……
要求：
1. 表达清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯，可适当发挥；
2. 须包括表格中的所有信息，但不要使用真实姓名；
3. 不少于70词。演讲稿的开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Ladies and Gentlemen,
I’d like to tell you something about my dream home.
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That’s all. Thank you!
5．某学校为了激发中学生的创意和灵感，提高中学生学习英语的热情，举办了主题为“My Dream Home”的演讲比赛。请你根据下表中所提供的信息，完成演讲稿。
房子大 有2层，可以和家人住在一起；后面有花园
房间多 一层有厨房、卧室……；二层有浴室、书房……
很舒适 可以和朋友在家聚会；放学后在书房里做作业；早上在花园读书
其他 ……
要求：
1.表达清楚，语句通顺,意思连贯，可适当发挥；
2.须包括表格中的所有信息，但不要使用真实姓名；
3.不少于70词。演讲稿的开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Ladies and Gentlemen,
I’d like to tell you something about my dream home.
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That’s all. Thank you!
6．假设你是社区工作人员王华，请你用英语写一份通知，邀请居民参加“家庭健康公益课堂”。内容包括：
1. 活动时间和地点：本周六下午3点，社区活动中心；
2. 活动内容：医生讲解健康饮食、运动建议，还有免费测血压；
3. 希望大家积极参加，学习健康知识，表达期待。
要求：包含所给要点，注意使用正确的时态，词数70词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
参考词汇：lecture讲座 healthy diet健康饮食 blood pressure check测血压
参考范文
Dear neighbors,
We are going to hold
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7．假设你是社区文体委员刘阳，请你用英语写一份倡议书，邀请邻居们参加“社区趣味运动会”，增进邻里感情。内容包括：
1. 活动时间和地点：下周日早上9点，社区公园；
2. 活动内容：两人三足、袋鼠跳、拔河等趣味项目；
3. 呼吁大家邀请更多亲友，组队参加，享受运动和交友的快乐；
4. 表达期待。
要求：包含所有要点，注意使用正确的时态。词数70词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
Dear neighbors,
Let’s have fun at the Community Fun Sports Day!
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8．假设你是王明，你所在的社区正在招募 “邻里互助小志愿者”，请你根据以下提示写一封申请信，表达你想加入的愿望。
提示：
你的个人信息 (年龄、身份) ；
你想加入的原因 (喜欢帮助他人，热爱社区) ；
你能做的事情 (至少两点，如：帮助老人、整理社区图书角等) ；
你的联系方式 (电话：136XXXX2345) 。
要求：
词数 80-100 词；
条理清晰，语句通顺，语法正确；
文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
Dear Sir/Madam,
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Yours sincerely,
Wang Ming
9．请根据中文提示，写一篇短文。
1.我们的社区中心有很多大学生，他们有各种不同的技能。
2.他们很友好而且乐于助人。
3.当人们遇到困难时，就向他们求助。
4.我喜欢周末去那里，因为我可以在英语方面得到帮助，住在这样的小区我太幸运了。
要求：
1.词数：60词左右；
2.内容必须包括提示中的要点，可适当发挥；
3.文章条理清楚、意思连贯、语句通顺。
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10．假如你是李华，你的学校要举办以“My Dream Neighbourhood”为主题的演讲活动。请你根据以下提示，用英语写一篇短文，向同学们介绍一下你理想的社区。
Environment (环境) clean, beautiful
People friendly, helpful
Wonderful places · a square: play and exercise to keep healthy · a garden: plant flowers and vegetables · …
注意：
(1) 短文必须包含所有要点及一个补充要点，可适当发挥。
(2) 文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。
(3) 词数60个左右 （开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
My Dream Neighbourhood
Hello, my name is Li Hua. Today, I’d like to share my dream neighbourhood with you. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
11．假如你是李华，收到好友Mike的来信，他想了解你的家乡哈尔滨冬季的一些情况。请根据以下提示，给他回一封信，并希望他来哈尔滨游玩。
写作要点：
1. 哈尔滨是一座美丽的北方城市，以冰雪而闻名。
2. 冬天寒冷多雪，景色洁白美丽。
3. 可以游览中央大街；游玩著名的冰雪大世界，滑冰、滑雪、畅玩其它雪上活动。
写作要求：
1. 不得使用真实姓名、地名和学校名。
2. 可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。
3. 字迹工整、语言精练、表达准确、条理清晰。
Dear Mike,
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Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
12．假设你是王林（Wang Lin），你的美国笔友Jack对中国山水感兴趣。请你回复他的信息，介绍你家乡的景点和特色，并邀请他来玩。词数70左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
内容包括：
1. 你的家乡在哪里？（如：桂林、张家界等）
2. 家乡有什么著名景点？（如：山水、溶洞、山峰等）
3. 家乡有什么特色？（如：米粉、少数民族文化等）
4. 邀请Jack来你的家乡游玩。
参考词汇：rice noodles米粉
Dear Jack,
How is everything My hometown is ________.
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13．假设你是李华（Li Hua），你的美国笔友Tom对中国历史感兴趣。上周末，你去了西安（Xi’an）的一处名胜“打卡”。请你给他写一封电子邮件，分享你的经历。词数70个左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
内容包括：
1. 你去了哪个景点？
2. 你和谁一起去的？你们在那里做了什么？
3. 西安既有古老的遗迹，也有现代化的街区。你感受到了怎样的结合？
4. 你的感受如何？
参考词汇：the Terracotta Army兵马俑；the Giant Wild Goose Pagoda大雁塔；the Tang Paradise大唐芙蓉园
Dear Tom,
How are you I went to Xi’an with my parents last weekend.
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14．假如你是李华，你正给来自英国的交换生Ben写一份英文邮件，向他介绍你的家乡无锡以及你在无锡的生活，请根据下图完成电子邮件。
注意事项：
1.邮件须根据大纲自拟，要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意；
2.大纲中括号部分为非限定性内容，仅供参考；
3.词数在80个左右，邮件的首尾已给出，不计入总词数；
4.邮件中不得使用真实的个人姓名或学校名称。
Dear Ben,
How is everything going I’m so glad that you are interested in my hometown. My hometown Wuxi is a beautiful city in the south of Jiangsu Province. In Wuxi, I live
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15．“故人西辞黄鹤楼，烟花三月下扬州”，春天是扬州最美的季节。假设你是王军，你的北京网友Andy在电子邮件上说想在五一小长假来扬州参观，请回一封电子邮件向他介绍你的家乡扬州。
地理位置 位于江苏中部地区，大运河 (the Grand Canal) 穿城而过 (run through)
历史文化 有2,500年历史，曾是中国古代的文化中心
风土人情 扬州人勤劳友好、乐于助人
旅游景点 1. 泛舟瘦西湖 (the Slender West Lake)，体验扬州美景 2. 游览东关街 (Dongguan Street)，品尝当地美食
个人感受 ……
要求：
1. 100 词左右，文章的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 要包含表格中的所有要点，可适当发挥。
Dear Andy,
I’m happy that you’ll visit Yangzhou next month. Let me tell you something about it.
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Best wishes,
Wang Jun
16．艺术能激发人们的想象力和创造力，也能深化人们对生活和世界的理解，让生活更加美好。假如你是李华，你的外国朋友Jack向你了解中国文化，请你写一封邮件回复，推荐一种中国艺术，如绘画、剪纸、陶艺等，结合自己的兴趣推荐并说明推荐的原因。
注意：1.短文须包括上图所有信息，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2．词数：70左右(开头已为你写好，不计入总词数)。
Dear Jack,
I’m glad you’re interested in Chinese culture. Chinese art can be quite surprising.
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Yours,
Li Hua
17．中国结作为一种传统艺术形式，深受国人和国外友人的喜爱，春节期间经常被人们挂在家中以增加节日气氛。请你写一篇发言稿向外国朋友介绍中国结。
要点：1.由一根红色的绳子编成；
2.因特别的形状和意义而得名；
3.过去用来记录发生的事，现在用来装饰；
4.是幸福和好运的象征。
要求：1.100词左右，要包含所有提示要点，可适当发挥；
2.行文连贯，思路合理，语法正确。
参考词汇: Chinese knot 中国结, significance 意义, record 记录, decorate 装饰
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18．假如你是李华，你的英国笔友David对中国民间艺术很感兴趣，尤其想了解中国剪纸。请你给他写一封邮件，介绍中国剪纸。内容包括：1. 剪纸的历史；
2. 剪纸的用途 (如装饰门窗、作礼物等)；
3. 你对剪纸的看法。
要求：词数50以上，语句通顺，可适当发挥。
Dear David,
I’m glad to know you’re interested in Chinese folk art, especially paper-cutting.
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Best wishes!
Li Hua
19．中国的传统艺术形式极其丰富，蕴含着五千年文明古国深厚的文化底蕴。为宣传中国传统艺术，请你用英文向外国朋友介绍你最喜欢的一种中国传统艺术形式。
提示：1. What is your favourite traditional Chinese art form
2. How are the art pieces usually made
3. Why do you like this art form
要求：1. 文中应包含所有提示内容，可适当发挥；
2. 90词左右，文章开头已给出，不计入总词数；
3. 文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
My Favourite Traditional Chinese Art
Among all the traditional Chinese art forms, ________ is my favourite.
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20．假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Peter对中国传统手艺很感兴趣，他来信询问你家乡的一种传统手艺。请你根据以下提示给他回一封邮件，介绍南京云锦 (Nanjing Yunjin Brocade)。提示：
云锦的历史：超过1,600年；
云锦的材料：丝绸；
云锦的特点：色彩鲜艳、图案精美，是中国传统工艺的瑰宝；
云锦的用途：制作衣服、装饰品等；
你的感受和希望。
要求：
1.词数80左右 (开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)；
2.语句通顺，语法正确，条理清晰；
3.不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
Dear Peter,
I’m glad to hear that you’re interested in Chinese traditional crafts. I’d like to introduce Nanjing Yunjin Brocade to you.
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I hope you can have a chance to see Nanjing Yunjin Brocade one day.
Yours,
Li Hua
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参考答案及试题解析
1．例文：
Look at my future house—a tree house.
It is made of special glass and solar panels. The glass is strong and clean. Solar panels give us light and power.
There is a small garden next to my bedroom on the second floor. I can see birds and flowers every morning. My family can have fun there—reading, chatting and watching stars.
I hope everyone can live in a green and happy home.
【详解】【总体分析】
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为发言稿；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，注意字母大小写以及标点符号。
【写作步骤】
第一步，先介绍“我”未来的房子是树屋，并说明其建造材料及材料的特点。
第二步，再描述树屋二楼卧室旁的小花园，以及“我”和家人在花园里可以做的事情。
第三步，最后表达“我”的愿望，希望每个人都能住在绿色、幸福的家里。
【亮点词汇】
①special glass特殊玻璃
②solar panels太阳能板
③next to在……旁边
【高分句型】
①It is made of special glass and solar panels. (be made of 句型，表达“由……制成”，清晰说明树屋的建造材料)
②My family can have fun there—reading, chatting and watching stars. (破折号后用现在分词短语补充说明家人在花园里的具体活动，丰富句子内容)
2．例文：
Dear Tom,
I’m glad to tell you about my dream home. It’s a two-story cottage in the mountains. There’s a small garden behind it, full of flowers and green plants.
On the first floor, there’s a cozy living room and a big kitchen. I can cook with my parents there. The second floor has two bedrooms and a study. I love reading books and listening to music in the study, where I can see the beautiful mountain views. I want to live there with my parents. We can walk in the mountains on weekends and enjoy the fresh air together.
It’s such a peaceful and happy place!
Yours,
Li Hua
(词数统计：96词)
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：电子邮件；
②时态：一般现在时；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏，并适当增加细节，以使行文连贯，并突出重点，注意字母大小写以及标点符号。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表达告诉对方梦想家园的喜悦；
第二步，介绍梦想家园的位置、类型和整体外观；
第三步，描述内部设施及想在里面做的事；
第四步，说明和谁一起居住以及共同的活动；
第五步，总结感受，表达对梦想家园的喜爱。
[亮点词汇]
①two-story cottage两层小楼
②full of flowers and green plants开满鲜花和绿植
③cozy living room舒适的客厅
④beautiful mountain views美丽的山景
⑤enjoy the fresh air享受新鲜空气
⑥peaceful and happy place宁静快乐的地方
[高分句型]
①There’s a small garden behind it, full of flowers and green plants. (There be句型，形容词短语full of…作后置定语)
②I love reading books and listening to music in the study, where I can see the beautiful mountain views. (where引导的非限制性定语从句，修饰study)
③We can walk in the mountains on weekends and enjoy the fresh air together. (and连接的并列谓语)
3．例文：
Dear Peter,
I’m writing to tell you something about my hometown. It’s in the south of China, a beautiful city with many parks and rivers. We can go boating in the rivers or have picnics in the parks. There are also some interesting museums to visit.
My home is near the city center. It’s a big apartment with three bedrooms and a large living room. We have a nice balcony where we can enjoy the sunshine.
My school is not far from my home, just about 3 kilometers. We can walk or ride bikes there.
Welcome to my hometown. I’m looking forward to meeting you soon!
Yours,
Lilei
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏邮件中Peter询问的关于李磊家乡、在家乡可进行的活动、家庭情况以及家到学校距离等要点，适当发挥，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。借用“介绍家乡”来引出重点介绍的内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“家乡位置、在家乡可进行的活动、家庭情况以及家到学校距离”几个方面重点介绍；
第三步，书写结语。表达“欢迎Peter来到家乡”的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①in the south of 在……的南部
②some interesting museums 一些有趣的博物馆
③look forward to 期待
[高分句型]
①It’s a big apartment with three bedrooms and a large living room.（“with+名词”结构作后置定语，修饰apartment）
4．例文
Ladies and Gentlemen,
I’d like to tell you something about my dream home. It is a large house in the country. It has two floors. My family can live together. There is a garden behind the house.
There are many rooms in it. On the ground floor, there is a kitchen, a dining room, a sitting room and a bedroom. On the first floor, there are two bedrooms, a bathroom and a study.
My dream home is very comfortable. After school, I do my homework in the study. In the morning, I read books in the garden and I can also grow some flowers in it. I can invite my friends to my parties, watch films or play games together in the house. It is great fun! I love my dream home.
That’s all. Thank you!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为演讲稿；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中关于“我的梦想之家”的各个要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。以“我想告诉你们一些关于我的梦想之家的事情”来引出重点介绍的内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“房子的大小、结构、功能、舒适性”等几个方面重点介绍梦想之家的具体情况；
第三步，书写结语。表达“希望大家都喜欢我的梦想之家”的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①live together 住在一起
②do my homework 做我的家庭作业
③invite...to... 邀请……到……
④watch films 看电影
[高分句型]
①I can invite my friends to my parties, watch films or play games together in the house. (并列谓语结构)
5．例文
Ladies and Gentlemen,
I’d like to tell you something about my dream home. It is a large house in the country. It has two floors. My family can live together. There is a garden behind the house.
There are many rooms in it. On the ground floor, there is a kitchen, a dining room, a sitting room and a bedroom. On the first floor, there are two bedrooms, a bathroom and a study.
My dream home is very comfortable. After school, I do my homework in the study. In the morning, I read books in the garden and I can also grow some flowers in it. I can invite my friends to my parties, watch films or play games together in the house. It is great fun! I love my dream home.
That’s all. Thank you!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇讲稿；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“表格信息”中“我的梦想之家”的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍外观特点；
第二步，具体阐述梦想之家的房间和分布；
第三步，介绍在梦想之家可以做什么；
第四步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①in the country 在乡下
②invite sb to sp 邀请某人来某地
③there be 有
④watch films 看电影
[高分句型]
①In the morning, I read books in the garden and I can also grow some flowers in it. (and连接并列的两个句子)
6．例文
Dear neighbors,
We are going to hold a family health lecture this Saturday afternoon. It will start at 3 p.m. at the community center. A doctor will give us advice on a healthy diet. Also, he will show us how to take exercise in the right way. What’s more, we can have free blood pressure checks when the lecture finishes.
We hope everyone will come and learn how to keep healthy. We will have a wonderful time together!
Community worker
Wang Hua
【详解】写作步骤
[第一步：审题立意]
确定文体：通知，以一般将来时为主
明确要点：活动时间与地点（本周六下午3点，社区活动中心）、活动内容（健康讲座、运动建议、免费测血压）、活动号召
确定人称：第一人称（we/our）
注意事项：包含所有要点，注意使用正确的时态
[第二步：构思布局]
三段式结构：
开头段：礼貌问候居民，点明通知对象
主体段：清晰传递活动核心信息——活动名称、时间、地点，再详细介绍活动具体内容
结尾段：发出诚挚邀请，鼓励参与，表达对居民到来的期待，最后署名
[第三步：要点展开]
要点一：活动基本信息
活动时间：this Saturday afternoon/at 3 p.m.等
活动地点：at the community center/at the community activity center等
要点二：活动内容
健康饮食讲解：advice/a healthy diet等
运动建议：take exercise/in the right way等
免费测血压：free/blood pressure checks等
要点三：活动号召与期待
活动邀请：hope/come/take part in/learn how to keep healthy等
表达期待：have a wonderful time/have a great time together等
7．例文
Dear neighbors,
Let’s have fun at the Community Fun Sports Day!
It will start at 9 a.m. next Sunday in the community park. We will play fun games like three-legged race, sack race and tug-of-war. You can form teams with your family or neighbors. If your relatives and friends are interested in this activity, please invite them to join us. Everyone who comes to the game can get a surprise gift box. More people, more fun!
Come and enjoy a happy morning together!
Liu Yang
【详解】写作步骤
[第一步：审题立意]
确定文体：倡议书，用一般现在时
明确要点：需包含活动时间地点、内容、呼吁参与及表达期待
确定人称：第一人称（We）；第二人称（you/your）
[第二步：构思布局]
三段式结构：
开头段：说明活动时间地点（下周日9点，社区公园）。
主体段：列举趣味项目（两人三足、袋鼠跳、拔河）。
结尾段：呼吁邀请亲友组队参加，强调运动与交友的益处，最后表达期待。
[第三步：要点展开]
要点一：活动时间地点
活动时间：at 9 a.m. next Sunday
活动地点：in the community park
要点二：趣味项目
两人三足：three-legged race
袋鼠跳：sack race
拔河：tug-of-war
要点三：邀请好友参加；运动与交友的好处
邀请好友：invite them to join us
好处：get a surprising gift box
8．例文
Dear Sir/Madam,
I’m Wang Ming, a 13-year-old Grade 7 student. I’m eager to join the “Little Volunteers for Neighbourhood Mutual Help” team because I love helping others and deeply care about our community.
I can do several things for the community. I often visit elderly neighbours, chat with them to reduce their loneliness and help them buy daily necessities. Besides, I’m good at arranging books, so I can tidy the community library corner to make it more orderly.
If I’m accepted, I’ll try my best to fulfill the volunteer duties. You can contact me at 136XXXX2345.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Wang Ming
【总体分析】①题材：本文是一篇应用文，是书信作文。
②时态：一般现在时为主。
③提示：需包含个人信息、申请原因、能做的具体事情及联系方式，按提示顺序组织内容。
【写作步骤】第一步：开头表明身份和写信目的（申请加入）。
第二步：中间段落说明申请原因（热爱帮助他人、关心社区）和具体能做的两件事（帮助老人、整理图书角）。
第三步：结尾表达愿望，提供联系方式并礼貌结束。
【亮点词汇】①eager to渴望
②join加入
③community社区
④elderly neighbours老年邻居
⑤loneliness孤独
⑥daily necessities日用品
⑦be good at擅长
⑧arrange整理
⑨orderly整洁的
⑩fulfill duties履行职责
contact联系
look forward to期待
【高分句型】①I’m eager to join the “Little Volunteers for Neighbourhood Mutual Help” team because I love helping others and deeply care about our community.（原因状语从句）
②If I’m accepted, I’ll try my best to fulfill the volunteer duties.（条件状语从句）
9．例文
There are many college students in our community center, they have many different kinds of skills. They are very kind and helpful. People ask them for help when they have some problems. I like to go there at weekends, because I can get help with my English. I’m very lucky to live in a neighbourhood like that.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：一般现在时；
③提示：根据中文要点描述社区中心的大学生志愿者及其帮助，并表达个人感受。
[写作步骤]
第一步：介绍社区中心有很多具备不同技能的大学生；
第二步：描述他们友好助人的品质及居民如何向他们求助；
第三步：说明自己喜欢周末去那里学习英语，并表达幸运之情。
[亮点词汇]
①community center社区中心
②different skills不同的技能
③ask...for help向……求助
[高分句型]
①They are very kind and helpful.（运用了and连接的并列表语）
②I like to go there at weekends, because I can get help with my English.（运用了because引导的原因状语从句）
10．例文
My Dream Neighbourhood
Hello, my name is Li Hua. Today, I’d like to share my dream neighbourhood with you. It is clean and beautiful. People are friendly and helpful. There are many wonderful places. There is a big square in the center. Children can play there and old people can do exercise to keep healthy. Beside the square, there is a garden. We can plant flowers and vegetables. It also makes the neighbourhood beautiful. There is also a supermarket. I can buy all kinds of things in it.
I feel happy and relaxed to live in my dream neighbourhood.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示的信息，并适当添加细节，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，以自我介绍开篇，引出要分享的“梦想社区”主题；
第二步，概括描述社区的整体特征，按照空间顺序依次介绍社区设施。介绍广场时，说明其位置及不同人群的活动；
第三步，表达在梦想社区生活的美好感受。
[亮点词汇]
①do exercise锻炼
②keep healthy保持健康
③all kinds of各种各样的
[高分句型]
①There are many wonderful places. (There be句型)
②Children can play there and old people can do exercise to keep healthy. (动词不定式表目的)
11．
Dear Mike,
I’m so glad to get your letter. Now let me tell you something about my hometown Harbin in winter.
Harbin is a beautiful city in the north of China, which is famous for ice and snow. In winter, it is very cold and snowy here, but the white snow makes everything clean and beautiful.
There are many interesting places to visit. You can walk along Central Street and see many old-style buildings. The most popular place is the Ice and Snow World. There you can see wonderful ice sculptures and also go skating and skiing. You can also have fun doing many other snow activities.
I hope you can come to Harbin this winter. I’m sure you will have a great time here.
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封书信作文 ；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”为主，适当使用“一般将来时”；
③提示：写作要点已按题目要求给出，考生应注意围绕哈尔滨冬季特色展开介绍，并发出邀请，使内容充实、行文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步：承接已给的开头，表达收到来信的喜悦，并引出对家乡哈尔滨冬季的介绍；
第二步：按照提示，先介绍哈尔滨的城市特点，再描述冬季的天气和景色；
第三步：详细介绍哈尔滨的游玩景点和冰雪活动，最后发出诚挚邀请并书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①be famous for以……闻名
②Ice and Snow World冰雪大世界
③have fun doing sth.做某事很有趣
④Central Street中央大街
[高分句型]
Harbin is a beautiful city in the north of China, which is famous for ice and snow. (which引导的非限制性定语从句)
12．例文
Dear Jack,
How is everything My hometown is Guilin. It is famous for its beautiful mountains and rivers.
The mountains and rivers look like green paintings. You can enjoy the stunning scenery by taking a boat ride along the Lijiang River—I often take photos there. We also have delicious rice noodles, which always leave a deep impression on visitors.
I’m looking forward to see you in my hometown. I’d love to show you around.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Wang Lin
【详解】写作步骤
[第一步：审题立意]
确定文体：书信类说明文，用一般现在时为主
明确要点：家乡位置、家乡景点、家乡特色、邀请Jack来游玩
确定人称：第一人称（I/we）、第二人称（you）
注意事项：注意书信的格式、词数70左右
[第二步：构思布局]
三段式结构：
开头段：承接开头，点明家乡名称
主体段：介绍著名景点、特色美食/文化
结尾段：表达邀请意愿
[第三步：要点展开]
要点一：家乡位置
地点选择：Guilin/Zhangjiajie/Wuhan/Beijing等
要点二：家乡景点
景点名称：Lijiang River/Tianmen Mountain National Forest Park/Yellow Crane Tower/Forbidden City等
特色美食/文化：rice noodles/hot dry noodles/hot pot/Beijing Duck/Water-Splashing Festival等
13．例文
Dear Tom,
How are you I went to Xi’an with my parents last weekend. It was sunny.
We visited the Terracotta Army. It was so amazing to see so many clay soldiers. They are over 2,000 years old! In the evening, we went to the Tang Paradise. The old-style buildings were beautiful, but there were also modern lights and music everywhere. It was like a mix of ancient and modern China.
I learned a lot about history and had great fun. I hope you can visit Xi’an one day.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】写作步骤
[第一步：审题立意]
确定文体：记叙文，以一般过去时为主（描述上周末的经历）
明确要点：包含四个方面——参观的景点、同行的伙伴及活动、古与今结合的感受、个人感受
确定人称：第一人称（I/we）
注意事项：开头已给出；可参考所给词汇
[第二步：构思布局]
三段式结构（邮件格式）：
开头段：承接已给开头，补充天气情况
主体段：介绍参观的景点及活动和晚上活动及古今结合的体验
结尾段：总结收获，表达希望对方来参观的愿望
[第三步：要点展开]
要点一：景点选择
主要景点：the Terracotta Army/the Giant Wild Goose Pagoda/the Tang Paradise
其他可选：the City Wall/the Muslim Quarter/the Bell Tower
要点二：同行与活动
同行人员：with my parents/with my family/with my cousin
具体活动：visited/saw/clay soldiers/took photos/learned about history
感受描述：amazing/unbelievable/impressive
要点三：古今结合体验
古老元素：old-style buildings/ancient streets/historic sites/thousands of years old
现代元素：modern lights/music/light shows/shops and restaurants/busy streets
结合感受：a mix of ancient and modern/the old meets the new/perfect combination
要点四：个人感受
收获层面：learned a lot about history/had great fun/enjoyed the trip
情感表达：felt excited/amazed/proud of Chinese culture
邀请对方：I hope you can visit Xi’an one day/look forward to traveling with you
14．
例文：
Dear Ben,
How is everything going I’m so glad that you are interested in my hometown. My hometown Wuxi is a beautiful city in the south of Jiangsu Province. In Wuxi, I live in a flat with my family. Our flat is not very big, but it’s warm and comfortable.
My neighbours are friendly and helpful. They often greet me with smiles and help each other. There are many places of interest here, such as the Taihu Lake and Lingshan Grand Buddha. I like to go boating on the lake and take photos. Wuxi is also famous for Huishan clay figurines. They are traditional folk art. I recommend you to buy some as gifts.
I hope you can visit Wuxi one day!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封电子邮件；
②时态：主要使用一般现在时；
③提示：需涵盖居住房屋类型、邻居特点、名胜古迹及推荐理由、民间艺术及推荐原因，结构清晰，语言亲切。
[写作步骤]
第一步，问候并表达对笔友兴趣的欣喜，介绍家乡地理位置；
第二步，描述居住情况（与家人住公寓，温馨舒适）；
第三步，介绍邻居特点（友好、乐于助人）；
第四步，列举名胜古迹（太湖、灵山大佛）及活动（划船、拍照）；
第五步，介绍民间艺术（惠山泥人）并推荐购买作为礼物；
第六步，表达对笔友来访的期待。
[亮点词汇]
①be famous for以……闻名
②live in a flat住公寓
③warm and comfortable温馨舒适
④friendly and helpful友好且乐于助人
⑤places of interest名胜古迹
[高分句型]
①There are many places of interest here, such as the Taihu Lake and Lingshan Grand Buddha. (There be句型列举景点，such as引出例子)
②I recommend you to buy some as gifts. (recommend sb. to do sth.结构提出建议)
15．范文
Dear Andy,
I’m happy that you’ll visit Yangzhou next month. Let me tell you something about it.
Yangzhou lies in central Jiangsu, with the Grand Canal running through it. It has a history of 2,500 years and was once a cultural center in ancient China. People here are hard-working, friendly and always ready to help. There are many tourist attractions in Yangzhou. When you go to the Slender West Lake, you can go boating to get a taste of the beauty along the lake. Also, walking along Dongguan Street to taste local snacks is a great choice. You’re sure to have a great time there.
Yangzhou is a good place to visit. I’m looking forward to showing you around.
Best wishes,
Wang Jun
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：电子邮件；
②时态：一般现在时为主，涉及历史背景可使用一般过去时；
③提示：需包含地理位置、历史文化、风土人情、旅游景点及个人感受，词数约100词。
[写作步骤]
第一步：介绍扬州的地理位置与历史文化，使用已给提示词；
第二步：描述风土人情与具体旅游景点，适当发挥；
第三步：表达个人感受与期待，自然结尾。
[亮点词汇]
①lies in位于
②go boating乘船
③looking forward to期待
[高分句型]
①Yangzhou lies in central Jiangsu, with the Grand Canal running through it. (with复合结构作状语)
②Also, walking along Dongguan Street to taste local snacks is a great choice. (动名词短语作主语)
16．Dear Jack,
I’m glad you’re interested in Chinese culture. Chinese art can be quite surprising. One of the traditional Chinese art forms is paper cutting.
In Chinese culture, people use paper cuttings to decorate their houses during festivals because people think they can bring good luck to them. I really enjoy paper cutting because the designs are beautiful.
Paper cutting has a long history and it’s important in traditional Chinese culture. I feel proud of this traditional art form and I hope more people can learn about it and enjoy its beauty.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封邮件；
②时态：是“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，注意字母大小写以及标点符号。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接已给的开头，引出话题，点明推荐的艺术形式；
第二步，介绍这种艺术是什么、用途和自己的看法；
第三步，说明推荐的原因（历史、文化意义、个人感受），并表达希望。
[亮点词汇]
①bring good luck带来好运
②feel proud of…为……感到自豪
③learn about了解
[高分句型]
In Chinese culture, people use paper cuttings to decorate their houses during festivals because people think they can bring good luck to them.(原因状语从句；宾语从句)
17．范文赏读
Dear friends,
Today, I am excited to introduce the traditional Chinese knot to you. It has a long history, dating back to ancient times.
The Chinese knot is made of one red string and gets its name from its special shape and significance. In the past, people used Chinese knots to record events in their lives. But now, people use them to decorate their homes, especially during the Chinese New Year and some other traditional Chinese festivals. The Chinese knot is a symbol of happiness and good luck, and it’s more and more popular around the world.
Thank you for listening!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：发言稿；
②时态：一般现在时为主，过去时辅助；
③提示：需涵盖中国结的制作材料、名称由来、历史用途、现代用途及象征意义。
[写作步骤]
第一步：问候并点明主题（1—2句）；
第二步：按要点顺序介绍中国结的特征与用途（4—5句）；
第三步：总结意义并表达祝愿（1—2句）。
[亮点词汇]
①symbol象征
②decorate装饰
③popular受欢迎的
[高分句型]
①The Chinese knot is made of one red string and gets its name from its special shape and significance.（运用了被动语态）
②In the past, people used Chinese knots to record events in their lives.（运用了不定式作目的状语）
18．例文：
Dear David,
I’m glad to know you’re interested in Chinese folk art, especially paper-cutting. Paper-cutting has a long history of more than 1,500 years in China. It has developed into a highly skilled art form over time.
Paper-cutting is widely used in our daily life. People often put paper-cuts on windows, doors and walls to decorate their homes, especially during festivals like the Spring Festival. Also, paper-cuts can be given as special gifts to friends and relatives, carrying people’s best wishes.
In my opinion, paper-cutting is a really amazing art. It not only shows the creativity and wisdom of the Chinese people but also spreads traditional Chinese culture. Every piece of paper-cut is like a small story, waiting for people to discover and appreciate.
Best wishes!
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“现在完成时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，不得遗漏，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步：开门见山，点明主题；
第二步：围绕剪纸，展开详细描述。
第三步：书写结尾，表达祝愿。
[亮点词汇]
①a long history一段长历史
②special gifts特别的礼物
③creativity创造力
④traditional Chinese culture中国传统文化
[高分句型]
①Paper-cutting is widely used in our daily life. (一般现在时态被动语态)
②It not only shows the creativity and wisdom of the Chinese people but also spreads traditional Chinese culture. (not only…but also句型)
19．例文
My Favourite Traditional Chinese Art
Among all the traditional Chinese art forms, paper-cutting is my favourite. It’s a kind of traditional Chinese art with a history of more than 1,500 years. People cut paper into shapes of flowers, animals and landscapes with knives or scissors.
I like paper-cutting because it’s not only beautiful and interesting but also very useful. People usually put them up on doors or windows to decorate their houses. They are always seen as a symbol of good luck and best wishes for the future.
Paper-cutting is such a wonderful art form that I hope more people know the beauty of it and become interested in it.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：围绕作者最喜爱的中国传统艺术——剪纸展开介绍，包含剪纸的历史、制作方式、作者喜爱的原因以及其象征意义和作者的期望等要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点明在所有中国传统艺术形式中，剪纸是作者最喜爱的，并说明剪纸是一种拥有1500多年历史的中国传统艺术；
第二步，详细介绍了剪纸的制作方式，以及作者喜爱剪纸的原因，如美丽有趣且实用，还说明了人们通常将剪纸贴在门窗上装饰房子，以及剪纸作为好运和对未来美好祝愿的象征意义；
第三步，总结剪纸是一种美妙的艺术形式，表达作者希望更多人了解剪纸的美并对它产生兴趣的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①traditional Chinese art中国传统艺术
②paper-cutting剪纸
③a symbol of……的象征
④best wishes美好祝愿
[高分句型]
①Paper-cutting is such a wonderful art form that I hope more people know the beauty of it and become interested in it. (such…that…引导的结果状语从句)
20．例文
Dear Peter,
I’m glad to hear that you’re interested in Chinese traditional crafts. I’d like to introduce Nanjing Yunjin Brocade to you.
With a history of over 1,600 years, Nanjing Yunjin Brocade is a precious treasure of Chinese traditional crafts. It is made of high-quality silk and known for its bright colors and beautiful patterns, such as dragons, phoenixes and flowers.
Once favored by royal families in ancient times, Nanjing Yunjin Brocade is now widely made into elegant clothes, delicate decorations and even art collections. Craftsmen have passed down this skill carefully. I am very proud of it, because it shows Chinese wisdom.
I hope you can have a chance to see Nanjing Yunjin Brocade one day.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：文章的写作要点已给出，按照提示的要点逐点阐述，可以适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍云锦的历史和材料；
第二步，描述云锦的特点和用途；
第三步，表达个人感受和希望。
[亮点词汇]
①high-quality高质量的
②pass down传承
③be known for以……闻名
[高分句型]
①I am very proud of it, because it shows Chinese wisdom. (because引导原因状语从句)
②Once favored by royal families in ancient times, Nanjing Yunjin Brocade is now widely made into elegant clothes, delicate decorations and even art collections. (过去分词短语作状语、被动语态)
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2025-2026学年七年级下册英语期中复习考点培优译林版（新教材）
专题19 书面表达
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
1．假设你正在参加学校举办的“智慧城市创意项目”展示活动，你需要用英语向大家介绍你设计的未来房屋。请根据以下要点提示，写一篇发言稿。
要点提示：
1. 房屋位置：建在树上或漂浮在水上
2. 建筑材料：特殊玻璃、太阳能板
3. 智能功能：会根据天气变化调节温度
4. 你的愿望：让生活更美好
词汇参考：float 漂浮 solar panels 太阳能板 temperature 温度
要求：词数70左右，语句通顺，语法正确。
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2．假设你是李华，你的英国笔友 Tom 想了解你的梦想家园。请你根据以下提示，给他写一封邮件，介绍你的梦想家园。
提示：
1.位置（如海边、山区等）；
2.类型和结构（如两层小楼、带花园等）；
3.里面的设施和你想在里面做的事；
4.和谁一起居住。
要求：
1.词数 80-100；
2.条理清晰，语句通顺，语法正确；
3.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
Dear Tom,
I’m glad to tell you about my dream home.
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Yours,
Li Hua
3．假设你是李磊，来自英国的交换生Peter即将去你家寄宿。他给你发了邮件，问了以下问题，请根据问题内容写一封回信。
1. Where is your hometown 2. What can we do in your hometown
2. What is your home like 4. How far is your school from your home
要求：1)要点齐全，适当发挥，语言通顺，书写规范；
2)词数在90词左右，邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Peter,
I’m writing to tell you something about my hometown.
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Welcome to my hometown. I’m looking forward to meeting you soon!
Yours,
Lilei
4．某学校为了激发中学生的创意和灵感，提高中学生学习英语的热情，举办了主题为“My Dream Home”的演讲比赛。请你根据下表中所提供的信息，完成演讲稿。
房子大 有2层，可以和家人住在一起；后面有花园
房间多 一层有厨房、卧室……；二层有浴室、书房……
很舒适 可以和朋友在家聚会；放学后在书房里做作业；早上在花园读书
其他 ……
要求：
1. 表达清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯，可适当发挥；
2. 须包括表格中的所有信息，但不要使用真实姓名；
3. 不少于70词。演讲稿的开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Ladies and Gentlemen,
I’d like to tell you something about my dream home.
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That’s all. Thank you!
5．某学校为了激发中学生的创意和灵感，提高中学生学习英语的热情，举办了主题为“My Dream Home”的演讲比赛。请你根据下表中所提供的信息，完成演讲稿。
房子大 有2层，可以和家人住在一起；后面有花园
房间多 一层有厨房、卧室……；二层有浴室、书房……
很舒适 可以和朋友在家聚会；放学后在书房里做作业；早上在花园读书
其他 ……
要求：
1.表达清楚，语句通顺,意思连贯，可适当发挥；
2.须包括表格中的所有信息，但不要使用真实姓名；
3.不少于70词。演讲稿的开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Ladies and Gentlemen,
I’d like to tell you something about my dream home.
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That’s all. Thank you!
6．假设你是社区工作人员王华，请你用英语写一份通知，邀请居民参加“家庭健康公益课堂”。内容包括：
1. 活动时间和地点：本周六下午3点，社区活动中心；
2. 活动内容：医生讲解健康饮食、运动建议，还有免费测血压；
3. 希望大家积极参加，学习健康知识，表达期待。
要求：包含所给要点，注意使用正确的时态，词数70词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
参考词汇：lecture讲座 healthy diet健康饮食 blood pressure check测血压
参考范文
Dear neighbors,
We are going to hold
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7．假设你是社区文体委员刘阳，请你用英语写一份倡议书，邀请邻居们参加“社区趣味运动会”，增进邻里感情。内容包括：
1. 活动时间和地点：下周日早上9点，社区公园；
2. 活动内容：两人三足、袋鼠跳、拔河等趣味项目；
3. 呼吁大家邀请更多亲友，组队参加，享受运动和交友的快乐；
4. 表达期待。
要求：包含所有要点，注意使用正确的时态。词数70词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
Dear neighbors,
Let’s have fun at the Community Fun Sports Day!
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8．假设你是王明，你所在的社区正在招募 “邻里互助小志愿者”，请你根据以下提示写一封申请信，表达你想加入的愿望。
提示：
你的个人信息 (年龄、身份) ；
你想加入的原因 (喜欢帮助他人，热爱社区) ；
你能做的事情 (至少两点，如：帮助老人、整理社区图书角等) ；
你的联系方式 (电话：136XXXX2345) 。
要求：
词数 80-100 词；
条理清晰，语句通顺，语法正确；
文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
Dear Sir/Madam,
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Yours sincerely,
Wang Ming
9．请根据中文提示，写一篇短文。
1.我们的社区中心有很多大学生，他们有各种不同的技能。
2.他们很友好而且乐于助人。
3.当人们遇到困难时，就向他们求助。
4.我喜欢周末去那里，因为我可以在英语方面得到帮助，住在这样的小区我太幸运了。
要求：
1.词数：60词左右；
2.内容必须包括提示中的要点，可适当发挥；
3.文章条理清楚、意思连贯、语句通顺。
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10．假如你是李华，你的学校要举办以“My Dream Neighbourhood”为主题的演讲活动。请你根据以下提示，用英语写一篇短文，向同学们介绍一下你理想的社区。
Environment (环境) clean, beautiful
People friendly, helpful
Wonderful places · a square: play and exercise to keep healthy · a garden: plant flowers and vegetables · …
注意：
(1) 短文必须包含所有要点及一个补充要点，可适当发挥。
(2) 文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。
(3) 词数60个左右 （开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
My Dream Neighbourhood
Hello, my name is Li Hua. Today, I’d like to share my dream neighbourhood with you. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
11．假如你是李华，收到好友Mike的来信，他想了解你的家乡哈尔滨冬季的一些情况。请根据以下提示，给他回一封信，并希望他来哈尔滨游玩。
写作要点：
1. 哈尔滨是一座美丽的北方城市，以冰雪而闻名。
2. 冬天寒冷多雪，景色洁白美丽。
3. 可以游览中央大街；游玩著名的冰雪大世界，滑冰、滑雪、畅玩其它雪上活动。
写作要求：
1. 不得使用真实姓名、地名和学校名。
2. 可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。
3. 字迹工整、语言精练、表达准确、条理清晰。
Dear Mike,
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Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
12．假设你是王林（Wang Lin），你的美国笔友Jack对中国山水感兴趣。请你回复他的信息，介绍你家乡的景点和特色，并邀请他来玩。词数70左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
内容包括：
1. 你的家乡在哪里？（如：桂林、张家界等）
2. 家乡有什么著名景点？（如：山水、溶洞、山峰等）
3. 家乡有什么特色？（如：米粉、少数民族文化等）
4. 邀请Jack来你的家乡游玩。
参考词汇：rice noodles米粉
Dear Jack,
How is everything My hometown is ________.
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13．假设你是李华（Li Hua），你的美国笔友Tom对中国历史感兴趣。上周末，你去了西安（Xi’an）的一处名胜“打卡”。请你给他写一封电子邮件，分享你的经历。词数70个左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
内容包括：
1. 你去了哪个景点？
2. 你和谁一起去的？你们在那里做了什么？
3. 西安既有古老的遗迹，也有现代化的街区。你感受到了怎样的结合？
4. 你的感受如何？
参考词汇：the Terracotta Army兵马俑；the Giant Wild Goose Pagoda大雁塔；the Tang Paradise大唐芙蓉园
Dear Tom,
How are you I went to Xi’an with my parents last weekend.
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14．假如你是李华，你正给来自英国的交换生Ben写一份英文邮件，向他介绍你的家乡无锡以及你在无锡的生活，请根据下图完成电子邮件。
注意事项：
1.邮件须根据大纲自拟，要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意；
2.大纲中括号部分为非限定性内容，仅供参考；
3.词数在80个左右，邮件的首尾已给出，不计入总词数；
4.邮件中不得使用真实的个人姓名或学校名称。
Dear Ben,
How is everything going I’m so glad that you are interested in my hometown. My hometown Wuxi is a beautiful city in the south of Jiangsu Province. In Wuxi, I live
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15．“故人西辞黄鹤楼，烟花三月下扬州”，春天是扬州最美的季节。假设你是王军，你的北京网友Andy在电子邮件上说想在五一小长假来扬州参观，请回一封电子邮件向他介绍你的家乡扬州。
地理位置 位于江苏中部地区，大运河 (the Grand Canal) 穿城而过 (run through)
历史文化 有2,500年历史，曾是中国古代的文化中心
风土人情 扬州人勤劳友好、乐于助人
旅游景点 1. 泛舟瘦西湖 (the Slender West Lake)，体验扬州美景 2. 游览东关街 (Dongguan Street)，品尝当地美食
个人感受 ……
要求：
1. 100 词左右，文章的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 要包含表格中的所有要点，可适当发挥。
Dear Andy,
I’m happy that you’ll visit Yangzhou next month. Let me tell you something about it.
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Best wishes,
Wang Jun
16．艺术能激发人们的想象力和创造力，也能深化人们对生活和世界的理解，让生活更加美好。假如你是李华，你的外国朋友Jack向你了解中国文化，请你写一封邮件回复，推荐一种中国艺术，如绘画、剪纸、陶艺等，结合自己的兴趣推荐并说明推荐的原因。
注意：1.短文须包括上图所有信息，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2．词数：70左右(开头已为你写好，不计入总词数)。
Dear Jack,
I’m glad you’re interested in Chinese culture. Chinese art can be quite surprising.
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Yours,
Li Hua
17．中国结作为一种传统艺术形式，深受国人和国外友人的喜爱，春节期间经常被人们挂在家中以增加节日气氛。请你写一篇发言稿向外国朋友介绍中国结。
要点：1.由一根红色的绳子编成；
2.因特别的形状和意义而得名；
3.过去用来记录发生的事，现在用来装饰；
4.是幸福和好运的象征。
要求：1.100词左右，要包含所有提示要点，可适当发挥；
2.行文连贯，思路合理，语法正确。
参考词汇: Chinese knot 中国结, significance 意义, record 记录, decorate 装饰
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18．假如你是李华，你的英国笔友David对中国民间艺术很感兴趣，尤其想了解中国剪纸。请你给他写一封邮件，介绍中国剪纸。内容包括：1. 剪纸的历史；
2. 剪纸的用途 (如装饰门窗、作礼物等)；
3. 你对剪纸的看法。
要求：词数50以上，语句通顺，可适当发挥。
Dear David,
I’m glad to know you’re interested in Chinese folk art, especially paper-cutting.
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Best wishes!
Li Hua
19．中国的传统艺术形式极其丰富，蕴含着五千年文明古国深厚的文化底蕴。为宣传中国传统艺术，请你用英文向外国朋友介绍你最喜欢的一种中国传统艺术形式。
提示：1. What is your favourite traditional Chinese art form
2. How are the art pieces usually made
3. Why do you like this art form
要求：1. 文中应包含所有提示内容，可适当发挥；
2. 90词左右，文章开头已给出，不计入总词数；
3. 文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
My Favourite Traditional Chinese Art
Among all the traditional Chinese art forms, ________ is my favourite.
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20．假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Peter对中国传统手艺很感兴趣，他来信询问你家乡的一种传统手艺。请你根据以下提示给他回一封邮件，介绍南京云锦 (Nanjing Yunjin Brocade)。提示：
云锦的历史：超过1,600年；
云锦的材料：丝绸；
云锦的特点：色彩鲜艳、图案精美，是中国传统工艺的瑰宝；
云锦的用途：制作衣服、装饰品等；
你的感受和希望。
要求：
1.词数80左右 (开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)；
2.语句通顺，语法正确，条理清晰；
3.不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
Dear Peter,
I’m glad to hear that you’re interested in Chinese traditional crafts. I’d like to introduce Nanjing Yunjin Brocade to you.
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I hope you can have a chance to see Nanjing Yunjin Brocade one day.
Yours,
Li Hua
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参考答案及试题解析
1．例文：
Look at my future house—a tree house.
It is made of special glass and solar panels. The glass is strong and clean. Solar panels give us light and power.
There is a small garden next to my bedroom on the second floor. I can see birds and flowers every morning. My family can have fun there—reading, chatting and watching stars.
I hope everyone can live in a green and happy home.
【详解】【总体分析】
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为发言稿；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，注意字母大小写以及标点符号。
【写作步骤】
第一步，先介绍“我”未来的房子是树屋，并说明其建造材料及材料的特点。
第二步，再描述树屋二楼卧室旁的小花园，以及“我”和家人在花园里可以做的事情。
第三步，最后表达“我”的愿望，希望每个人都能住在绿色、幸福的家里。
【亮点词汇】
①special glass特殊玻璃
②solar panels太阳能板
③next to在……旁边
【高分句型】
①It is made of special glass and solar panels. (be made of 句型，表达“由……制成”，清晰说明树屋的建造材料)
②My family can have fun there—reading, chatting and watching stars. (破折号后用现在分词短语补充说明家人在花园里的具体活动，丰富句子内容)
2．例文：
Dear Tom,
I’m glad to tell you about my dream home. It’s a two-story cottage in the mountains. There’s a small garden behind it, full of flowers and green plants.
On the first floor, there’s a cozy living room and a big kitchen. I can cook with my parents there. The second floor has two bedrooms and a study. I love reading books and listening to music in the study, where I can see the beautiful mountain views. I want to live there with my parents. We can walk in the mountains on weekends and enjoy the fresh air together.
It’s such a peaceful and happy place!
Yours,
Li Hua
(词数统计：96词)
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：电子邮件；
②时态：一般现在时；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏，并适当增加细节，以使行文连贯，并突出重点，注意字母大小写以及标点符号。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表达告诉对方梦想家园的喜悦；
第二步，介绍梦想家园的位置、类型和整体外观；
第三步，描述内部设施及想在里面做的事；
第四步，说明和谁一起居住以及共同的活动；
第五步，总结感受，表达对梦想家园的喜爱。
[亮点词汇]
①two-story cottage两层小楼
②full of flowers and green plants开满鲜花和绿植
③cozy living room舒适的客厅
④beautiful mountain views美丽的山景
⑤enjoy the fresh air享受新鲜空气
⑥peaceful and happy place宁静快乐的地方
[高分句型]
①There’s a small garden behind it, full of flowers and green plants. (There be句型，形容词短语full of…作后置定语)
②I love reading books and listening to music in the study, where I can see the beautiful mountain views. (where引导的非限制性定语从句，修饰study)
③We can walk in the mountains on weekends and enjoy the fresh air together. (and连接的并列谓语)
3．例文：
Dear Peter,
I’m writing to tell you something about my hometown. It’s in the south of China, a beautiful city with many parks and rivers. We can go boating in the rivers or have picnics in the parks. There are also some interesting museums to visit.
My home is near the city center. It’s a big apartment with three bedrooms and a large living room. We have a nice balcony where we can enjoy the sunshine.
My school is not far from my home, just about 3 kilometers. We can walk or ride bikes there.
Welcome to my hometown. I’m looking forward to meeting you soon!
Yours,
Lilei
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏邮件中Peter询问的关于李磊家乡、在家乡可进行的活动、家庭情况以及家到学校距离等要点，适当发挥，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。借用“介绍家乡”来引出重点介绍的内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“家乡位置、在家乡可进行的活动、家庭情况以及家到学校距离”几个方面重点介绍；
第三步，书写结语。表达“欢迎Peter来到家乡”的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①in the south of 在……的南部
②some interesting museums 一些有趣的博物馆
③look forward to 期待
[高分句型]
①It’s a big apartment with three bedrooms and a large living room.（“with+名词”结构作后置定语，修饰apartment）
4．例文
Ladies and Gentlemen,
I’d like to tell you something about my dream home. It is a large house in the country. It has two floors. My family can live together. There is a garden behind the house.
There are many rooms in it. On the ground floor, there is a kitchen, a dining room, a sitting room and a bedroom. On the first floor, there are two bedrooms, a bathroom and a study.
My dream home is very comfortable. After school, I do my homework in the study. In the morning, I read books in the garden and I can also grow some flowers in it. I can invite my friends to my parties, watch films or play games together in the house. It is great fun! I love my dream home.
That’s all. Thank you!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为演讲稿；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中关于“我的梦想之家”的各个要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。以“我想告诉你们一些关于我的梦想之家的事情”来引出重点介绍的内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“房子的大小、结构、功能、舒适性”等几个方面重点介绍梦想之家的具体情况；
第三步，书写结语。表达“希望大家都喜欢我的梦想之家”的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①live together 住在一起
②do my homework 做我的家庭作业
③invite...to... 邀请……到……
④watch films 看电影
[高分句型]
①I can invite my friends to my parties, watch films or play games together in the house. (并列谓语结构)
5．例文
Ladies and Gentlemen,
I’d like to tell you something about my dream home. It is a large house in the country. It has two floors. My family can live together. There is a garden behind the house.
There are many rooms in it. On the ground floor, there is a kitchen, a dining room, a sitting room and a bedroom. On the first floor, there are two bedrooms, a bathroom and a study.
My dream home is very comfortable. After school, I do my homework in the study. In the morning, I read books in the garden and I can also grow some flowers in it. I can invite my friends to my parties, watch films or play games together in the house. It is great fun! I love my dream home.
That’s all. Thank you!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇讲稿；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“表格信息”中“我的梦想之家”的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍外观特点；
第二步，具体阐述梦想之家的房间和分布；
第三步，介绍在梦想之家可以做什么；
第四步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①in the country 在乡下
②invite sb to sp 邀请某人来某地
③there be 有
④watch films 看电影
[高分句型]
①In the morning, I read books in the garden and I can also grow some flowers in it. (and连接并列的两个句子)
6．例文
Dear neighbors,
We are going to hold a family health lecture this Saturday afternoon. It will start at 3 p.m. at the community center. A doctor will give us advice on a healthy diet. Also, he will show us how to take exercise in the right way. What’s more, we can have free blood pressure checks when the lecture finishes.
We hope everyone will come and learn how to keep healthy. We will have a wonderful time together!
Community worker
Wang Hua
【详解】写作步骤
[第一步：审题立意]
确定文体：通知，以一般将来时为主
明确要点：活动时间与地点（本周六下午3点，社区活动中心）、活动内容（健康讲座、运动建议、免费测血压）、活动号召
确定人称：第一人称（we/our）
注意事项：包含所有要点，注意使用正确的时态
[第二步：构思布局]
三段式结构：
开头段：礼貌问候居民，点明通知对象
主体段：清晰传递活动核心信息——活动名称、时间、地点，再详细介绍活动具体内容
结尾段：发出诚挚邀请，鼓励参与，表达对居民到来的期待，最后署名
[第三步：要点展开]
要点一：活动基本信息
活动时间：this Saturday afternoon/at 3 p.m.等
活动地点：at the community center/at the community activity center等
要点二：活动内容
健康饮食讲解：advice/a healthy diet等
运动建议：take exercise/in the right way等
免费测血压：free/blood pressure checks等
要点三：活动号召与期待
活动邀请：hope/come/take part in/learn how to keep healthy等
表达期待：have a wonderful time/have a great time together等
7．例文
Dear neighbors,
Let’s have fun at the Community Fun Sports Day!
It will start at 9 a.m. next Sunday in the community park. We will play fun games like three-legged race, sack race and tug-of-war. You can form teams with your family or neighbors. If your relatives and friends are interested in this activity, please invite them to join us. Everyone who comes to the game can get a surprise gift box. More people, more fun!
Come and enjoy a happy morning together!
Liu Yang
【详解】写作步骤
[第一步：审题立意]
确定文体：倡议书，用一般现在时
明确要点：需包含活动时间地点、内容、呼吁参与及表达期待
确定人称：第一人称（We）；第二人称（you/your）
[第二步：构思布局]
三段式结构：
开头段：说明活动时间地点（下周日9点，社区公园）。
主体段：列举趣味项目（两人三足、袋鼠跳、拔河）。
结尾段：呼吁邀请亲友组队参加，强调运动与交友的益处，最后表达期待。
[第三步：要点展开]
要点一：活动时间地点
活动时间：at 9 a.m. next Sunday
活动地点：in the community park
要点二：趣味项目
两人三足：three-legged race
袋鼠跳：sack race
拔河：tug-of-war
要点三：邀请好友参加；运动与交友的好处
邀请好友：invite them to join us
好处：get a surprising gift box
8．例文
Dear Sir/Madam,
I’m Wang Ming, a 13-year-old Grade 7 student. I’m eager to join the “Little Volunteers for Neighbourhood Mutual Help” team because I love helping others and deeply care about our community.
I can do several things for the community. I often visit elderly neighbours, chat with them to reduce their loneliness and help them buy daily necessities. Besides, I’m good at arranging books, so I can tidy the community library corner to make it more orderly.
If I’m accepted, I’ll try my best to fulfill the volunteer duties. You can contact me at 136XXXX2345.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Wang Ming
【总体分析】①题材：本文是一篇应用文，是书信作文。
②时态：一般现在时为主。
③提示：需包含个人信息、申请原因、能做的具体事情及联系方式，按提示顺序组织内容。
【写作步骤】第一步：开头表明身份和写信目的（申请加入）。
第二步：中间段落说明申请原因（热爱帮助他人、关心社区）和具体能做的两件事（帮助老人、整理图书角）。
第三步：结尾表达愿望，提供联系方式并礼貌结束。
【亮点词汇】①eager to渴望
②join加入
③community社区
④elderly neighbours老年邻居
⑤loneliness孤独
⑥daily necessities日用品
⑦be good at擅长
⑧arrange整理
⑨orderly整洁的
⑩fulfill duties履行职责
contact联系
look forward to期待
【高分句型】①I’m eager to join the “Little Volunteers for Neighbourhood Mutual Help” team because I love helping others and deeply care about our community.（原因状语从句）
②If I’m accepted, I’ll try my best to fulfill the volunteer duties.（条件状语从句）
9．例文
There are many college students in our community center, they have many different kinds of skills. They are very kind and helpful. People ask them for help when they have some problems. I like to go there at weekends, because I can get help with my English. I’m very lucky to live in a neighbourhood like that.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：一般现在时；
③提示：根据中文要点描述社区中心的大学生志愿者及其帮助，并表达个人感受。
[写作步骤]
第一步：介绍社区中心有很多具备不同技能的大学生；
第二步：描述他们友好助人的品质及居民如何向他们求助；
第三步：说明自己喜欢周末去那里学习英语，并表达幸运之情。
[亮点词汇]
①community center社区中心
②different skills不同的技能
③ask...for help向……求助
[高分句型]
①They are very kind and helpful.（运用了and连接的并列表语）
②I like to go there at weekends, because I can get help with my English.（运用了because引导的原因状语从句）
10．例文
My Dream Neighbourhood
Hello, my name is Li Hua. Today, I’d like to share my dream neighbourhood with you. It is clean and beautiful. People are friendly and helpful. There are many wonderful places. There is a big square in the center. Children can play there and old people can do exercise to keep healthy. Beside the square, there is a garden. We can plant flowers and vegetables. It also makes the neighbourhood beautiful. There is also a supermarket. I can buy all kinds of things in it.
I feel happy and relaxed to live in my dream neighbourhood.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示的信息，并适当添加细节，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，以自我介绍开篇，引出要分享的“梦想社区”主题；
第二步，概括描述社区的整体特征，按照空间顺序依次介绍社区设施。介绍广场时，说明其位置及不同人群的活动；
第三步，表达在梦想社区生活的美好感受。
[亮点词汇]
①do exercise锻炼
②keep healthy保持健康
③all kinds of各种各样的
[高分句型]
①There are many wonderful places. (There be句型)
②Children can play there and old people can do exercise to keep healthy. (动词不定式表目的)
11．
Dear Mike,
I’m so glad to get your letter. Now let me tell you something about my hometown Harbin in winter.
Harbin is a beautiful city in the north of China, which is famous for ice and snow. In winter, it is very cold and snowy here, but the white snow makes everything clean and beautiful.
There are many interesting places to visit. You can walk along Central Street and see many old-style buildings. The most popular place is the Ice and Snow World. There you can see wonderful ice sculptures and also go skating and skiing. You can also have fun doing many other snow activities.
I hope you can come to Harbin this winter. I’m sure you will have a great time here.
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封书信作文 ；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”为主，适当使用“一般将来时”；
③提示：写作要点已按题目要求给出，考生应注意围绕哈尔滨冬季特色展开介绍，并发出邀请，使内容充实、行文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步：承接已给的开头，表达收到来信的喜悦，并引出对家乡哈尔滨冬季的介绍；
第二步：按照提示，先介绍哈尔滨的城市特点，再描述冬季的天气和景色；
第三步：详细介绍哈尔滨的游玩景点和冰雪活动，最后发出诚挚邀请并书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①be famous for以……闻名
②Ice and Snow World冰雪大世界
③have fun doing sth.做某事很有趣
④Central Street中央大街
[高分句型]
Harbin is a beautiful city in the north of China, which is famous for ice and snow. (which引导的非限制性定语从句)
12．例文
Dear Jack,
How is everything My hometown is Guilin. It is famous for its beautiful mountains and rivers.
The mountains and rivers look like green paintings. You can enjoy the stunning scenery by taking a boat ride along the Lijiang River—I often take photos there. We also have delicious rice noodles, which always leave a deep impression on visitors.
I’m looking forward to see you in my hometown. I’d love to show you around.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Wang Lin
【详解】写作步骤
[第一步：审题立意]
确定文体：书信类说明文，用一般现在时为主
明确要点：家乡位置、家乡景点、家乡特色、邀请Jack来游玩
确定人称：第一人称（I/we）、第二人称（you）
注意事项：注意书信的格式、词数70左右
[第二步：构思布局]
三段式结构：
开头段：承接开头，点明家乡名称
主体段：介绍著名景点、特色美食/文化
结尾段：表达邀请意愿
[第三步：要点展开]
要点一：家乡位置
地点选择：Guilin/Zhangjiajie/Wuhan/Beijing等
要点二：家乡景点
景点名称：Lijiang River/Tianmen Mountain National Forest Park/Yellow Crane Tower/Forbidden City等
特色美食/文化：rice noodles/hot dry noodles/hot pot/Beijing Duck/Water-Splashing Festival等
13．例文
Dear Tom,
How are you I went to Xi’an with my parents last weekend. It was sunny.
We visited the Terracotta Army. It was so amazing to see so many clay soldiers. They are over 2,000 years old! In the evening, we went to the Tang Paradise. The old-style buildings were beautiful, but there were also modern lights and music everywhere. It was like a mix of ancient and modern China.
I learned a lot about history and had great fun. I hope you can visit Xi’an one day.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】写作步骤
[第一步：审题立意]
确定文体：记叙文，以一般过去时为主（描述上周末的经历）
明确要点：包含四个方面——参观的景点、同行的伙伴及活动、古与今结合的感受、个人感受
确定人称：第一人称（I/we）
注意事项：开头已给出；可参考所给词汇
[第二步：构思布局]
三段式结构（邮件格式）：
开头段：承接已给开头，补充天气情况
主体段：介绍参观的景点及活动和晚上活动及古今结合的体验
结尾段：总结收获，表达希望对方来参观的愿望
[第三步：要点展开]
要点一：景点选择
主要景点：the Terracotta Army/the Giant Wild Goose Pagoda/the Tang Paradise
其他可选：the City Wall/the Muslim Quarter/the Bell Tower
要点二：同行与活动
同行人员：with my parents/with my family/with my cousin
具体活动：visited/saw/clay soldiers/took photos/learned about history
感受描述：amazing/unbelievable/impressive
要点三：古今结合体验
古老元素：old-style buildings/ancient streets/historic sites/thousands of years old
现代元素：modern lights/music/light shows/shops and restaurants/busy streets
结合感受：a mix of ancient and modern/the old meets the new/perfect combination
要点四：个人感受
收获层面：learned a lot about history/had great fun/enjoyed the trip
情感表达：felt excited/amazed/proud of Chinese culture
邀请对方：I hope you can visit Xi’an one day/look forward to traveling with you
14．
例文：
Dear Ben,
How is everything going I’m so glad that you are interested in my hometown. My hometown Wuxi is a beautiful city in the south of Jiangsu Province. In Wuxi, I live in a flat with my family. Our flat is not very big, but it’s warm and comfortable.
My neighbours are friendly and helpful. They often greet me with smiles and help each other. There are many places of interest here, such as the Taihu Lake and Lingshan Grand Buddha. I like to go boating on the lake and take photos. Wuxi is also famous for Huishan clay figurines. They are traditional folk art. I recommend you to buy some as gifts.
I hope you can visit Wuxi one day!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封电子邮件；
②时态：主要使用一般现在时；
③提示：需涵盖居住房屋类型、邻居特点、名胜古迹及推荐理由、民间艺术及推荐原因，结构清晰，语言亲切。
[写作步骤]
第一步，问候并表达对笔友兴趣的欣喜，介绍家乡地理位置；
第二步，描述居住情况（与家人住公寓，温馨舒适）；
第三步，介绍邻居特点（友好、乐于助人）；
第四步，列举名胜古迹（太湖、灵山大佛）及活动（划船、拍照）；
第五步，介绍民间艺术（惠山泥人）并推荐购买作为礼物；
第六步，表达对笔友来访的期待。
[亮点词汇]
①be famous for以……闻名
②live in a flat住公寓
③warm and comfortable温馨舒适
④friendly and helpful友好且乐于助人
⑤places of interest名胜古迹
[高分句型]
①There are many places of interest here, such as the Taihu Lake and Lingshan Grand Buddha. (There be句型列举景点，such as引出例子)
②I recommend you to buy some as gifts. (recommend sb. to do sth.结构提出建议)
15．范文
Dear Andy,
I’m happy that you’ll visit Yangzhou next month. Let me tell you something about it.
Yangzhou lies in central Jiangsu, with the Grand Canal running through it. It has a history of 2,500 years and was once a cultural center in ancient China. People here are hard-working, friendly and always ready to help. There are many tourist attractions in Yangzhou. When you go to the Slender West Lake, you can go boating to get a taste of the beauty along the lake. Also, walking along Dongguan Street to taste local snacks is a great choice. You’re sure to have a great time there.
Yangzhou is a good place to visit. I’m looking forward to showing you around.
Best wishes,
Wang Jun
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：电子邮件；
②时态：一般现在时为主，涉及历史背景可使用一般过去时；
③提示：需包含地理位置、历史文化、风土人情、旅游景点及个人感受，词数约100词。
[写作步骤]
第一步：介绍扬州的地理位置与历史文化，使用已给提示词；
第二步：描述风土人情与具体旅游景点，适当发挥；
第三步：表达个人感受与期待，自然结尾。
[亮点词汇]
①lies in位于
②go boating乘船
③looking forward to期待
[高分句型]
①Yangzhou lies in central Jiangsu, with the Grand Canal running through it. (with复合结构作状语)
②Also, walking along Dongguan Street to taste local snacks is a great choice. (动名词短语作主语)
16．Dear Jack,
I’m glad you’re interested in Chinese culture. Chinese art can be quite surprising. One of the traditional Chinese art forms is paper cutting.
In Chinese culture, people use paper cuttings to decorate their houses during festivals because people think they can bring good luck to them. I really enjoy paper cutting because the designs are beautiful.
Paper cutting has a long history and it’s important in traditional Chinese culture. I feel proud of this traditional art form and I hope more people can learn about it and enjoy its beauty.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封邮件；
②时态：是“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，注意字母大小写以及标点符号。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接已给的开头，引出话题，点明推荐的艺术形式；
第二步，介绍这种艺术是什么、用途和自己的看法；
第三步，说明推荐的原因（历史、文化意义、个人感受），并表达希望。
[亮点词汇]
①bring good luck带来好运
②feel proud of…为……感到自豪
③learn about了解
[高分句型]
In Chinese culture, people use paper cuttings to decorate their houses during festivals because people think they can bring good luck to them.(原因状语从句；宾语从句)
17．范文赏读
Dear friends,
Today, I am excited to introduce the traditional Chinese knot to you. It has a long history, dating back to ancient times.
The Chinese knot is made of one red string and gets its name from its special shape and significance. In the past, people used Chinese knots to record events in their lives. But now, people use them to decorate their homes, especially during the Chinese New Year and some other traditional Chinese festivals. The Chinese knot is a symbol of happiness and good luck, and it’s more and more popular around the world.
Thank you for listening!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：发言稿；
②时态：一般现在时为主，过去时辅助；
③提示：需涵盖中国结的制作材料、名称由来、历史用途、现代用途及象征意义。
[写作步骤]
第一步：问候并点明主题（1—2句）；
第二步：按要点顺序介绍中国结的特征与用途（4—5句）；
第三步：总结意义并表达祝愿（1—2句）。
[亮点词汇]
①symbol象征
②decorate装饰
③popular受欢迎的
[高分句型]
①The Chinese knot is made of one red string and gets its name from its special shape and significance.（运用了被动语态）
②In the past, people used Chinese knots to record events in their lives.（运用了不定式作目的状语）
18．例文：
Dear David,
I’m glad to know you’re interested in Chinese folk art, especially paper-cutting. Paper-cutting has a long history of more than 1,500 years in China. It has developed into a highly skilled art form over time.
Paper-cutting is widely used in our daily life. People often put paper-cuts on windows, doors and walls to decorate their homes, especially during festivals like the Spring Festival. Also, paper-cuts can be given as special gifts to friends and relatives, carrying people’s best wishes.
In my opinion, paper-cutting is a really amazing art. It not only shows the creativity and wisdom of the Chinese people but also spreads traditional Chinese culture. Every piece of paper-cut is like a small story, waiting for people to discover and appreciate.
Best wishes!
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“现在完成时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，不得遗漏，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步：开门见山，点明主题；
第二步：围绕剪纸，展开详细描述。
第三步：书写结尾，表达祝愿。
[亮点词汇]
①a long history一段长历史
②special gifts特别的礼物
③creativity创造力
④traditional Chinese culture中国传统文化
[高分句型]
①Paper-cutting is widely used in our daily life. (一般现在时态被动语态)
②It not only shows the creativity and wisdom of the Chinese people but also spreads traditional Chinese culture. (not only…but also句型)
19．例文
My Favourite Traditional Chinese Art
Among all the traditional Chinese art forms, paper-cutting is my favourite. It’s a kind of traditional Chinese art with a history of more than 1,500 years. People cut paper into shapes of flowers, animals and landscapes with knives or scissors.
I like paper-cutting because it’s not only beautiful and interesting but also very useful. People usually put them up on doors or windows to decorate their houses. They are always seen as a symbol of good luck and best wishes for the future.
Paper-cutting is such a wonderful art form that I hope more people know the beauty of it and become interested in it.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：围绕作者最喜爱的中国传统艺术——剪纸展开介绍，包含剪纸的历史、制作方式、作者喜爱的原因以及其象征意义和作者的期望等要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点明在所有中国传统艺术形式中，剪纸是作者最喜爱的，并说明剪纸是一种拥有1500多年历史的中国传统艺术；
第二步，详细介绍了剪纸的制作方式，以及作者喜爱剪纸的原因，如美丽有趣且实用，还说明了人们通常将剪纸贴在门窗上装饰房子，以及剪纸作为好运和对未来美好祝愿的象征意义；
第三步，总结剪纸是一种美妙的艺术形式，表达作者希望更多人了解剪纸的美并对它产生兴趣的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①traditional Chinese art中国传统艺术
②paper-cutting剪纸
③a symbol of……的象征
④best wishes美好祝愿
[高分句型]
①Paper-cutting is such a wonderful art form that I hope more people know the beauty of it and become interested in it. (such…that…引导的结果状语从句)
20．例文
Dear Peter,
I’m glad to hear that you’re interested in Chinese traditional crafts. I’d like to introduce Nanjing Yunjin Brocade to you.
With a history of over 1,600 years, Nanjing Yunjin Brocade is a precious treasure of Chinese traditional crafts. It is made of high-quality silk and known for its bright colors and beautiful patterns, such as dragons, phoenixes and flowers.
Once favored by royal families in ancient times, Nanjing Yunjin Brocade is now widely made into elegant clothes, delicate decorations and even art collections. Craftsmen have passed down this skill carefully. I am very proud of it, because it shows Chinese wisdom.
I hope you can have a chance to see Nanjing Yunjin Brocade one day.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：文章的写作要点已给出，按照提示的要点逐点阐述，可以适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍云锦的历史和材料；
第二步，描述云锦的特点和用途；
第三步，表达个人感受和希望。
[亮点词汇]
①high-quality高质量的
②pass down传承
③be known for以……闻名
[高分句型]
①I am very proud of it, because it shows Chinese wisdom. (because引导原因状语从句)
②Once favored by royal families in ancient times, Nanjing Yunjin Brocade is now widely made into elegant clothes, delicate decorations and even art collections. (过去分词短语作状语、被动语态)
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