(共17张PPT)
Online Classes or Not
(Writing)
Do you like having online classes Why or why not
Opinion: __________________________________________
Reasons:
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Share your opinions and reasons on the sheet.
Online Classes or Not
Opinion: It's necessary to have online classes.
Amy
Reasons:
1.It is a flexible way of study.
2.We can develop a great interest in studying.
3.We can review the same online classes repeatedly.
4. We can go over the lessons if we need.
5.Online classes are easy for everyone.
Tips: When we write, pay attention to the reasons, don't write repetitive or unreasonable contents. 写作时,要注意理由的选择,不要出现重复或者不合理的内容。
Opinion
Reasons
Support(支撑)
Read Para.1
Online Classes or Not
Opinion: We shouldn't have online classes.
Dick
Reasons:
1.Having online classes will do harm to our study
2.It will be bad for the students’ health.
3.We will lose the real face-to-face interaction.
4.Our eyes will get hurt if we looking at the screen for a long time.
5. I don't like having online classes.
Tips: When we write, pay attention to the reasons, don't write repetitive or unreasonable contents. 写作时,要注意理由的选择,不要出现重复或者不合理的内容。
Opinion
Reasons
Support
/comparison
facts
It's necessary to have online classes.
a flexible way
develop a great interest
Opinion
Reasons
(Don't have to worry about location...)
(We can have a wider range of ...)
Details
Read and underline
(While in a traditional class, ...)
(For example, ...)
Support 支撑
Support 支撑
Tips: When we write, we can support the reasons by using facts , comparisons or examples. 写作时,可以选择采用摆事实、做比较、举例子等方法,使理由更有说服力。
studying repeatedly
(The lessons can remain on the ... )
(For instance, ... )
facts
(But in a ... )
/examples
/comparison
(对比)
/examples
facts
开头表达鲜明观点,不可模棱两可:
Show the opinion clearly in the beginning.
结尾用不同结构重申观点:
Restate the opinion by using different expressions.
Compare the beginnings and endings.
With the rapid development of the society, online classes are becoming pretty popular in our daily life. In my opinion, it’s necessary to have online classes.
To sum up, having online classes is an effective way of gaining knowledge. I do believe they will get more and more important in the future
In a word, online classes are very important in our life and I think it is necessary to have online classes.
A
B
Nowadays, online classes have been popular with the public gradually. There are many advantages and disadvantages.
A
B
Tips: When we write, we should show the opinion clearly in the beginning and restate the opinion by using different expressions in the ending.
(开头清晰陈述观点,结尾处用不同结构重申观点, 避免与开头重复。)
With the rapid development of the society, online classes are becoming pretty popular in our daily life. In my opinion, it’s necessary to have online classes. Here are lots of reasons for it.
First of all, having online classes is a flexible way of study. Because we don’t have to worry about the location or time. For example, we can just sit at home or even at a coffee shop to start the classes any time we like. Second, with the help of the online classes, we can develop a great interest in studying. The reason is that we can have a wider range of choices of teachers and classes. While in a traditional class, we can’t have many chances to do so. Last but not least, we can review the same online classes repeatedly as the lessons can remain on the Internet for a long time.For instance, my brother always goes over the online lessons if he needs.But in a traditional class, we can only have the lessons once.
To sum up, having online classes is an effective way of gaining knowledge. I do believe they will get more and more important in the future.
How to link the beginnings, reasons, details and endings
Tips:Use proper transitions, such as linking words, phrases or sentences.
使用连接词(组),连接句子等多种方式进行过渡,让文章连贯,精彩。
Read quickly and circle
Use proper transitions
Summary
Show our opinion clearly
details
Reason1
Reason2
…
details
…
Restate the opinion
facts / examples / comparisons / ...
Tip2: We should show the opinion clearly in the beginning and restate the opinion by using different expressions in the ending.
Tip3: Use proper linking words, phrases or sentences.
Beginning
Ending
Body
Tip1: When we write, pay attention to the reasons, don't write repetitive or unreasonable contents.
Online Shopping or Not
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Writing
Make the outline of the passage.
A confident opinion statement
details
Reason1
Reason2
…
details
…
Restate the opinion
facts / examples / comparison / ...
Opinion:
Reasons:
Details:
Beginning
Ending
Body
Restate
Online Shopping or Not
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Writing
Tip2: When we write, we should show the opinion clearly in the beginning and restate the opinion by using different expressions in the ending.
Tip3: Use proper linking words, phrases or sentences.
Tip1: When we write, pay attention to the reasons, don't write repetitive or unreasonable contents.
facts
comparisons
examples
Good handwriting
A clear opinion
(观点鲜明)
1 reason
2 reasons
3 reasons
Check and revise by yourself
Tips:请根据评价内容,对文章进行自我修改并评分,看看你能得到几个星星哦!
facts
comparison
examples
Good handwriting
A clear opinion
(观点鲜明)
Check and revise together
Tips:请根据评价内容,对文章进行同伴互评并修改,看看你能得到几个星星哦!
1 reason
2 reasons
3 reasons
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Homework
Level B: Please write a new passage:
Is it a good idea to have a younger sibling(兄弟姐妹)?
Level A: Please polish your passage:
Online Shopping or Not
Blackboard Design
Don't write repetitive or unreasonable contents.
facts (事实)
comparisons (对比)/...