读后续写高级句式 组合练
句型一:无灵主语
A wave/sense of + 情绪名词 + washed over/swept through/struck /seized/took hold of /+ sb when/the moment sb did sth...
eg:A strong sense of delight took hold of me the moment I heard the good news.
翻译练习:
(1)听到这个消息,一股悔恨之情几乎无法控制地涌上我的心头。
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名词:happiness/joy/delight 开心; anger/rage/fury 狂怒;
sadness/sorrow 悲伤 gratitude/appreciation感恩;
admiration 钦佩/赞赏;guilt/remorse 愧疚悔恨
fear/terror/fright/panic 害怕/恐慌; astonishment/shock/surprise 震
2.The sight/thought of sth +made sb+情感形容词/filled sb with+情感名词
eg:The sight of the bear made him extremely nervous.
The thought of his parents' silent efforts and support filled him with endless gratitude.
翻译练习:
(2)想到家人的支持,我心中充满了力量。
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(3)看到母亲自豪的脸庞我无比高兴。
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The next few days/hours witnessed sb eagerly/passionately/energetically/enthusiastically doing sth
eg:The next few hours witnessed the kids energetically cleaning the whole classroom.
接下来的几天里,我满怀热情地为即将到来的比赛做准备。
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句型二:独立主格结构
独立主格结构就是由一个相当于主语的名词或代词加上非谓语动词、形容词、副词、名词或介词短语构成的一种独立成分。这种结构在形式上与主句没有关系,故称为 “独立主格”。
身体部位+非谓语
1.David looked at me, his eyes twinkling/shining/sparkling with excitement,and stood like a superman in front of me.
2.Tears welling up in his eye/streaming down his cheeks, he thanked the police in a trembling voice.
3.Heart pounding /beating with happiness,she leapt into the air.
4.Eyes filled with regretful tears,he apologized for what he had done.
5.She was lying on the grass, her hands crossed under her head.
6.He sat in the front row, his mouth half open/joy in his eyes.
7.Everything ready,they carried the breakfast upstairs.
8.She waved the white invitation card in front of my face,a self-satisfied smile forming on her lips. I froze there, a mixture of annoyance and accomplishment welling up inside me.
句型三:倒装句
1.全部倒装: 方位 / 地点状语 + 谓语动词 + 主语
先景后人,先环境后人物,让场景切换更丝滑,让画面更有 “镜头感”,代入感直接拉满
普通语序(平铺直叙):
Sally stood there, her eyes wide with disbelief. The classroom was decorated with colorful balloons and ribbons, and a fancy cake was on the teacher's desk.
重构语序(方位前置,镜头感拉满):
Sally stood frozen, her eyes wide with disbelief. Before her, decorated with colorful balloons and streamers, the classroom had been transformed into a warm birthday party. On the teacher's desk sat an elegant cake, and piled high on Sally's own desk were carefully wrapped gifts.
佳句欣赏
eg:There stood David, his eyes sparkling with excitement, ready to start the race. The starting gun went off with a loud bang, and the race finally began. As the sun slowly set behind the mountains, casting golden lights on the track, along the track ran David,his eyes burning with determination, his breath steady as he pushed forward.
2.部分倒装
2.1句首:否定词 (Never;Barely/Hardly )
(1)Never in my wildest dreams had I imagined/expected that I would won the first prize.
(2)There stood David, his eyes sparkling with excitement, ready to start the race. Barely/Hardly could he wait to rush forward the moment the starting gun went off.
2.2句首:Little (几乎不;常与“感受”类的词搭配,如 understand, know, realize)
(1)Little did he know that a big surprise was waiting for him.
(2)Mum gently patted me on the shoulder, her eyes filled with warmth.Little did I realize how much she had been worrying about me.
(3)She held me tightly in her arms, whispering comforting words in my ear. Little did she understand how deeply her love had touched my heart. At that moment, I realized nothing in the world could compare to a mother’s selfless love.
2.3句首:on no account / under no circumstances (绝不)
(1)On no account should you judge a person by the appearance.
(2)Under no circumstances should we start a project without any preparation.
2.4句首:only+状语 (only then; only when; only at that moment)
(1)Only after weathering life's storms can one come to understand the true value of perseverance.
(2)Only when in trouble can one realize the preciousness of friendship.
(3)Only then did I realize that it was bravery that could conquer whatever difficulty came in the way.
2.5 句首:No sooner...than... / Hardly...when... (一...就...)
强调两个动作在时间上的紧密衔接,能让情节节奏更紧凑、画面感更强。
(1)Hardly had I heard my name when a wave of joy swept over me violently.
= No sooner had I heard my name than a wave of joy swept over me violently.
(2)Hardly had the last note come to an end when thunderous applause and cheers burst forth from the audience.
2.6 句首:So+ adj./adv.+ be 动词 / 助动词 / 情态动词 + 主语 + that 从句
强化情绪 / 程度的感染力,让场景描写更有冲击力
(1)So proud was she that she could hardly speak a word when receiving the prize.
(2)However, so determined was David that he ignored everything around him, only watching forward.
2.7 句首: n./adj./adv.+as/though + 主语 + 谓语,主句
(1)Exhausted as he was, he still rushed to the finishing line.
(2)Painful and a bit embarrassed as/though he was, he still dragged his feet to keep moving forward.
2.8 句首: Not only + be / 助动词 / 情态动词 + 主语 + 其他,but also 不倒装
(1)Not only was Jane exhausted and hungry, but she was also regretful for what she had done.
(2)Not only did you help me get rid of the trouble, but also taught me the significance of perseverance.
(3)Not only did I overcome my fear of speaking in public, but I also gained more confidence in myself.
2.9 句首:Not until + 状语/状语从句 + 助动词/情态动词/be动词 + 主语 + 谓语 + 其他
(1)Not until I experienced the failure did I realize the true meaning of perseverance.
(2)Not until I faced my fear did I find the courage to move on.
句型四: adj1 and/but adj2,主句 //主句,adj1 and/but adj2
(1)Desperate and hopeless, Jack knelt down, tears streaming down his cheeks.
(2)After what seemed like ages/centuries, David crossed the finish line, exhausted but thrilled.
(3)Worried that I might be a failure, I couldn’t say anything but anxious to wait for the result.
(4)Curious to know what the note said, her hands trembling slightly, she unfolded it slowly.
(5)Deep in thought, I sat by the window, recalling the warm words my mom had said to me that morning.
句型五:强调句It was + sb/sth+that+主谓
(1)It was the man’s generous help that rid her of loads of troubles.
(2)It was not until then that she realized the importance of practice.
(3)It was this unique experience that made me understand whatever difficulty we are faced with,we shouldn't lose heart.
句型六:It suddenly occurred to/struck/hit/dawned on sb that...
(1)It suddenly dawned on me that true courage was not the absence of fear, but the choice to keep going despite it.
(2)It suddenly occurred to her that her mother's wrinkled hands had done everything to give her a warm life.
(3)It suddenly hit me that I had wasted so much time on meaningless worries instead of cherishing the present.
句型七:What + moved/inspired/comforted/confused/warmed sb most was/is that...
What warmed the whole community most was that everyone donated food and clothes to the homeless family.
句型八:虚拟语气
1.If 虚拟
(1)If it had not been for this unique adventure, they would have never discovered how brave and quick- thinking they truly were.
Had it not been for this unique adventure, they would have never discovered how brave and quick- thinking they truly were.
(2)Were there really magic power in this world, it must come from the kind and generous people /strangers who reached out/extend a helping hand without expecting anything in return.
2.Without/But for this unique encounter with the old man, Linda would have never realized that what started as a small act of kindness could grow into a heart-warming journey of friendship, trust, and unbreakable bonds.
3.情态动词+have done (“当初就(不)应该...”)
Looking at the perfect breakfast cooked by their father, they remorsefully thought, they should have asked him how to make breakfast previously!
4.if only (“要是...就好了”)
Mom said delightedly, “If only I could have such a delicious breakfast every day!”
5.The noise of the city seemed to fade away, as if the whole world had paused to witness this small act of kindness between strangers/humans.
句型九:介词短语
with (with+n.+非谓语 doing/done/to do, sb...)
(1)With tears welling up in his eyes, he thanked the police with a trembling voice.
(2)With everything well prepared, they carried the breakfast upstairs.
Without/But for +n, sb would (not) have done sth. (没有...就没有...)
(1)Without father’s help, they would have failed.
(2)Without his help, they would not have prepared the breakfast in time.
句型十:间断式句子
1.副词提前: “Adv.,sb did sth, doing sth”
I washed the dish reluctantly. -> Reluctantly, I washed the dish, feeling impatient.
2.嵌入短语:“sb, 介词短语/从句,do sth”
(1)The helicopter, as expected, had finally arrived.
(2)The boy, with tears in his eyes, hugged his mother tightly.
(3)My father, with a big smile on his face, handed me the gift.
组合练
1.他站在那里,眼里含着感激的泪水,一股温暖突然涌上心头。(独立主格 + 无灵主语)
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教室的角落放着一个神秘的盒子,一个小女孩好奇地走上前想一探究竟。(全部倒装 + Curious to know...)
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3.从未想过小小的善举会带来如此大的温暖,我站在原地,泪水不由自主地滑落。(否定词倒装 + 独立主格 + 无灵主语)
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4.夕阳西下,金色的余晖(golden glow)洒在小路上,我们疲惫却欣喜,突然明白所有的努力都有意义。(全部倒装 + adj1 but adj2 + 顿悟句)
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5.只有经历过并肩作战的时光,我们才能懂得友谊的珍贵,一阵感慨涌上心头,我紧紧抱住了我的队友。(Only + 状语倒装 + 无灵主语 + 动作描写)
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如果这世间真有奇迹,那一定源于永不放弃的坚持,他靠着墙壁喘息,突然发现希望从未走远。(省略 if 虚拟 + 强调句 + Deep in thought / 顿悟句)
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7.他话音刚落,掌声便响彻整个礼堂,不仅因为他精彩的演讲,更因为他传递的勇气。(Hardly...when... 倒装 + Not only...but also...+ 无灵主语)
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8.要是我早点理解父亲的沉默付出(silent dedication)就好了,他拍着我的肩,我这才懂得父爱(paternal love.)的深沉。(if only 虚拟 + 嵌入短语 + Not until 倒装)
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翻译练习答案:
(1)A wave of regret seized me the moment I heard the news.
(2)The thought of my family's support filled me with strength.
(3)The sight of my mother's proud face made me extremely happy.
(4)The next few hours witnessed the kids energetically cleaning the whole classroom.
组合练答案
1.He stood there, his eyes filled with grateful tears, and a wave of warmth washed over him suddenly.
2.In the corner of the classroom lay a mysterious box, and a little girl, curious to know what was inside, stepped forward carefully.
3.Never had I imagined that an ordinary kind act would bring such great warmth. I stood there, tears streaming down my cheeks unconsciously.
4.The sun set in the west, and over the path spread the golden glow. Tired but delighted, we suddenly realized that all efforts were meaningful.
5.Only after experiencing the time of fighting side by side can we understand the preciousness of friendship. A wave of emotion washed over me, and I hugged my teammates tightly.
6.Were there really miracles in the world, it must be that perseverance that never gives up that creates them. He leaned against the wall to catch his breath, and it suddenly dawned on him that hope had never been far away.
7.Hardly had his words faded when a wave of applause burst forth throughout the auditorium. Not only was it for his wonderful speech, but also for the courage he conveyed.
8.If only I had understood my father’s silent dedication earlier! My dad, with a gentle gesture, patted me on the shoulder, and not until then did I understand the depth of paternal love.