高考英语应用文书信/邮件备考资料
建议信
一、应用文:书信/邮件
具体写作步骤一般是“三段式〞
首段:自我介绍/寒暄问候 +写信背景+写信目的 (注意:提炼题干信息)
中间段落:根据题目内容写作(注意: 要点全面;逻辑清晰;表达多样)
尾段:重提主题+表达期待/祝愿/感谢 (注意:与首段呼应,变化表达句式)
(一)建议信(A Letter of Advice)
建议信是写信人向收信人对某事提出的建议和忠告。建议信可能是写给个人,也可能是写给某个组织或机构
一、必备词汇和表达
1. 做某事有困难:have difficulty (in) doing sth / have trouble (in) doing sth
2. 关于如何做某事的建议:advice on how to do sth / suggestions on how to do sth
3. 对…有益:be good for... / be beneficial to...
4. My suggestions are as follows:我的建议如下
5. develop a good habit of living:养成良好的生活习惯
6. as for how to do ...:至于如何做……
7. 和…相处:get along with... / get on with...
8. 保持乐观:keep optimistic / stay positive
9. 保持均衡饮食:keep a balanced diet / maintain a balanced diet
10. 坚持定期锻炼:keep taking exercise regularly / stick to regular exercise
11. practical advice:实用的建议
12. keep a good state of mind:保持良好的心态
13. take my advice into consideration:考虑我的建议
14. 给某人提供一些有用的建议:offer sb some useful advice / provide sb with some useful suggestions
15. 参加社交活动:take part in social activities / participate in social activities
16. 和别人分享你的感受:share your feelings with others
17. why not do sth:为什么不做某事呢(表建议)
18. It is a wise choice to do sth:做某事是一个明智的选择
19. 向某人求助:ask sb for help / turn to sb for help
20. 劳逸结合:balance work and rest / combine work with rest
二、常用高分句式
第一段:开门见山表明写作意图,语气委婉真诚。
1.以下是我的建议供您参考,希望对您大有裨益。
Here are my suggestions for your reference, which I hope can be of great benefit to you.
2.我对美化校园的建议如下。
My suggestions with regard to beautifying our campus are as follows.
3.从上一封来信中了解到你在学习上遇到困难,我写信与你分享我对此事的个人建议和考量。
Learning from your last letter that you are faced with difficulties in learning,I am writing to share with you my personal suggestions and considerations on this matter.
第二段:分条陈述,提出具体的建议或忠告,套用经典句式。
1. 我很高兴收到了你的邮件。现在我写信给你,就如何交朋友提出一些建议。
I’m very glad to have received your e-mail. Now I’m writing to give you some advice on how to make friends.
2. 我很高兴收到你的来信,信中你向我请教如何学习汉语的建议。
I’m very glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese.
3. 很抱歉得知你和同学相处有困难。我写信向你提供一些建议。
I’m sorry to hear that you are having trouble getting along with your classmates. I’m writing to offer you some advice.
4. 得知你学习中文有困难,我写信给你提供一些建议。下面是我关于如何学习汉语的建议。
Learning that you are having difficulty in learning Chinese, I’m writing to offer you some advice. Here are my suggestions on how to learn Chinese.
5. 至于如何提高汉语口语,我想给你提供一些建议。
As for how to improve spoken Chinese, I would like to offer you some advice.
6. 首先,我建议你积极参加一些社交活动,如你同学的生日派对、你社区的志愿者活动。
First of all, I suggest that you take an active part in some social activities, such as your classmates’ birthday parties and volunteer activities in your community.
7. 此外,定期的锻炼身体是个不错的选择,它能帮助你放松自己并保持快乐。
Besides, taking regular exercise is a good choice, as it can help you relax yourself and keep happy.
8. 最后但同样重要的是,乐观的心态有助于我们的整体健康。
Last but not least, an optimistic state of mind contributes to our overall health.
9. 最后,你最好和你的父母进行交流并征求他们的意见。
Last but not least, you’d better communicate with your parents and ask for their opinions.
10.为了发展友谊,你最好多参加一些活动。
It is advisable that you should participate in more activities in order to develop friendship.
11. 如果你能多读书来扩大词汇量就更好了。
It would be better if you could do more reading to enlarge your vocabulary.
第三段:鼓励对方接受建议,并且祝愿建议有效。
1. 我希望我的建议能对你有益。如有别的难题,请告知我。
I hope my advice will be beneficial to you. If you have any other problems, please let me know.
2. Hopefully, these suggestions will be of any help to you.希望这些建议对你有所帮助。
3. 如果有什么我能帮忙的,请随时告诉我。
If there is anything that I can do, please don’t hesitate to let me know.
4. 希望我以上的建议能够得到采纳,同时我相信所有的困难都能够妥善解决。
Hopefully, my above-mentioned suggestions can be adopted, and I believe all the difficulties can be settled properly.
三、思维提纲
首段:自我介绍+写信背景+写信目的
中间段落:简单分析原因,给出详细建议123
尾段:重提主题+希望采纳建议并表达期待与祝愿
四、实用模板
模板1:
Dear _______,(对方的称呼)
So worried am I to know that you_______(对方的问题). I’m writing to provide you with some constructive suggestions.
From my perspective,were I you,I would ______(建议1).In addition,it is beneficial for you to _____(建议2)Last but not least ,___(建议3) is a perfect choice.Not only will it _______(好处1),but it also _________(好处2)
I sincerely hope my suggestions are of help and you can make great progress in ____(对方的问题).
Yours,
______
模板2:
Dear _____(对方的称呼),
Delighted to hear that you_______(对方的兴趣、变化,进步等),I am dropping you a line about my advice.
As far as I am concerned,_______(推荐的选择)would be an ideal choice .Reasons are as follows.Not only will you _________(原因一),but also it will_________(原因二) .As for my suggestions ,it is of great benefit for you to _________(建议一),and you’d better _________(建议二).
I will appreciate it if you could take my advice into consideration. Looking forward to your early reply at your convenience.
Yours sincerely,
XXX
模板3:(收信人为陌生人)
Dear ________,
I am ________,介绍自己(editor of the HEART-TO-HEART column in your school English newspaper.)
Learning from ________(信息来源)that ________(问题),I am writing to share with you my personal suggestions and perspectives.
First,________(表理解,安慰,无需太过担心) .In addition,________(建议一+理由). Finally,________(建议二+理由)to do sth ,not only ________,but also ________.
I sincerely hope that my above-mentioned suggestions can be beneficial to you and you can recover soon.
Yours,
×××
五、经典范文
【2023新课标I&II卷】假定你是李华,外教Ryan准备将学生随机分为两人一组,让大家课后练习口语,你认为这样分组存在问题。请你给外教写一封邮件,内容包括;
1. 说明问题;2. 提出建议注意: 1. 写作词数应为80个左右: 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Ryan,
I’m Li Hua from Class 3. I think it’s not a good idea to randomly pair up students for the spoken English training after class. The reasons are as follows.
To begin with, randomly pairing up students may lead to unbalanced language abilities within the groups. This can hinder the progress of students as the more advanced one may dominate the conversation, leaving little room for the other students to improve. Besides, students may feel uncomfortable or less motivated if paired with someone who they don’t get along with or have difficulty communicating with.
My suggestion is to group students based on their language abilities or to let students choose their own partners. This way, everyone can feel more comfortable practicing and improving their spoken English together.
Thank you for considering my suggestion.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
______
六、实战练习
作文1.假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Tom来信说他在汉语口语学习方面感到迷茫,请你给他
回信,内容包括:
1.表示担忧;2.分析原因并给出建议。
注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Tom,
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Dear Tom,(对方的称呼)
So worried am I to know that you are confused about learning spoken Chinese(对方的问题). I’m writing to provide you with some constructive suggestions.
It is universally acknowledged that Chinese is one of the most complex languages in the world ,especially spoken Chinese. From my perspective,were I you,I would not be afraid of making mistakes ,which is a good way to learn how to say things right.So whenever I have a chance to speak Chinese ,I won’t hesitate and speak Chinese bravely.(建议1).In addition,it is beneficial for you to make more Chinese friends online ,who can offer you more opportunities to practise spoken Chinese(建议2)Last but not least ,joining a Chinese club(建议3) is a perfect choice.Not only will it make you have more Chinese friends(好处1),but it also helps you improve you spoken skill(好处2)
I sincerely hope my suggestions are of help and you can make great progress in your Chinese spoken learning(对方的问题).
作文2.
为了帮助中学生健康成长,某中学英文报开辟了“HEART-TO-HEART”专栏。假设你是该栏目的编辑Jamie,收到一封署名为Worried的求助信。信中该同学向你诉说了自己的困扰:近日容易发脾气,使正常的学习和生活受到了影响。请用英文给该同学写一封回信。
内容要点如下:1.表示理解并给予安慰;2.提出建议并说明理由。
注意:1.词数120左右;2.信中不能出现与本人相关的信息;3.信的开头与结尾①已为你拟好,不计入总词数。参考词汇:temper n.脾气,情绪
Dear Worried,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I sincerely hope that my above-mentioned suggestions can be beneficial to you and you can recover soon.
Yours,
Jamie
Dear Worried,
I am Jamie,editor of the HEART-TO-HEART column in your school English newspaper.Learning from your letter(信息来源)that your study and life are being affected by losing temper recently(问题),I am writing to share with you my personal suggestions and
perspectives.
First,so much academic pressure do you have that you tend to lose temper,which is quite normal for teenager like you.So there is no need to worry about it . (表理解,安慰,无需太过担心) .In addition,you can talk to your close friends about your the trouble you are face的 with ,from whom you might get spiritual comfort.(建议一+理由). Finally,(建议二+理由)to relieve your physical and mental stress ,not only should you keep regular exercise,but also you should listen to some soft music,which is an effective way to get rid of anger./Last but not least ,having a positive attitude towards life can be helpful in lifting your spirits.
I sincerely hope that my above-mentioned suggestions can be beneficial to you and you can recover soon.
Yours,高考英语应用文书信/邮件备考资料
建议信
一、应用文:书信/邮件
具体写作步骤一般是“三段式〞
首段:自我介绍/寒暄问候 +写信背景+写信目的 (注意:提炼题干信息)
中间段落:根据题目内容写作(注意: 要点全面;逻辑清晰;表达多样)
尾段:重提主题+表达期待/祝愿/感谢 (注意:与首段呼应,变化表达句式)
(一)建议信(A Letter of Advice)
建议信是写信人向收信人对某事提出的建议和忠告。建议信可能是写给个人,也可能是写给某个组织或机构
一、必备词汇和表达
1. 做某事有困难:_______________________ 2. 关于如何做某事的建议:_______________________
3. 对…有益:_______________________ 4. 我的建议如下_______________________
5. 养成良好的生活习惯______________________ 6. 至于如何做……_______________________
7. 和…相处:_______________________ 8. 保持乐观:_______________________
9. 保持均衡饮食:_______________________ 10. 坚持定期锻炼:_______________________
11. 实用的建议_______________________ 12. 保持良好的心态_______________________
13. 考虑我的建议_______________________ 14. 给某人提供一些有用的建议:__________________
15. 参加社交活动_______________________ 16. 和别人分享你的感受_______________________
17. 为什么不做某事呢(表建议_______________________) 18. 做某事是一个明智的选择_______________________
19. 向某人求助_______________________ 20. 劳逸结合_______________________
二、常用高分句式
第一段:开门见山表明写作意图,语气委婉真诚。
1.以下是我的建议供您参考,希望对您大有裨益。
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2.2.我对美化校园的建议如下。
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________3.3.从上一封来信中了解到你在学习上遇到困难,我写信与你分享我对此事的个人建议和考量。
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
第二段:分条陈述,提出具体的建议或忠告,套用经典句式。
1. 我很高兴收到了你的邮件。现在我写信给你,就如何交朋友提出一些建议。
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2.2. 我很高兴收到你的来信,信中你向我请教如何学习汉语的建议。
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________3. 3.很抱歉得知你和同学相处有困难。我写信向你提供一些建议。
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________4. 4.得知你学习中文有困难,我写信给你提供一些建议。下面是我关于如何学习汉语的建议。
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
5. 至于如何提高汉语口语,我想给你提供一些建议。
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
6. 首先,我建议你积极参加一些社交活动,如你同学的生日派对、你社区的志愿者活动。
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
7. 此外,定期的锻炼身体是个不错的选择,它能帮助你放松自己并保持快乐。
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________8. 8.最后但同样重要的是,乐观的心态有助于我们的整体健康。
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________9.9. 最后,你最好和你的父母进行交流并征求他们的意见。
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________110.为了发展友谊,你最好多参加一些活动。
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________111. 如果你能多读书来扩大词汇量就更好了。
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
第三段:鼓励对方接受建议,并且祝愿建议有效。
1. 我希望我的建议能对你有益。如有别的难题,请告知我。
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________12. 希望这些建议对你有所帮助。
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________13.如果有什么我能帮忙的,请随时告诉我。
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________7. 4.希望我以上的建议能够得到采纳,同时我相信所有的困难都能够妥善解决。
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
三、【思维提纲】
首段:自我介绍+写信背景+写信目的
中间段落:简单分析原因,给出详细建议123
尾段:重提主题+希望采纳建议并表达期待与祝愿
四、实用模板
模板1:
Dear _______,(对方的称呼)
So worried am I to know that you_______(对方的问题). I’m writing to provide you with some constructive suggestions.
From my perspective,were I you,I would ______(建议1).In addition,it is beneficial for you to _____(建议2)Last but not least ,___(建议3) is a perfect choice. Not only will it _______(好处1),but it also _________(好处2)
I sincerely hope my suggestions are of help and you can make great progress in ____(对方的问题).
Yours,
模板2:
Dear _____(对方的称呼),
Delighted to hear that you_______(对方的兴趣、变化,进步等),I am dropping you a line about my advice.
As far as I am concerned,_______(推荐的选择)would be an ideal choice .Reasons are as follows .Not only will you _________(原因一),but also it will_________(原因二) .As for my suggestions ,it is of great benefit for you to _________(建议一),and you’d better _________(建议二).
I will appreciate it if you could take my advice into consideration. Looking forward to your early reply at your convenience.
Yours sincerely,
XXX
模板3:(收信人为陌生人)
Dear ________,
I am ________,介绍自己(editor of the HEART-TO-HEART column in your school English newspaper.)
Learning from ________(信息来源)that ________(问题),I am writing to share with you my personal suggestions and perspectives.
First,________(表理解,安慰,无需太过担心) .In addition,________(建议一+理由). Finally,________(建议二+理由)to do sth ,not only ________,but also ________.
I sincerely hope that my above-mentioned suggestions can be beneficial to you and you can recover soon.
Yours,
×××
五、经典范文
【2023新课标I&II卷】假定你是李华,外教Ryan准备将学生随机分为两人一组,让大家课后练习口语,你认为这样分组存在问题。请你给外教写一封邮件,内容包括;
1. 说明问题;2. 提出建议注意: 1. 写作词数应为80个左右: 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Ryan,
I’m Li Hua from Class 3. I think it’s not a good idea to randomly pair up students for the spoken English training after class. The reasons are as follows.
To begin with, randomly pairing up students may lead to unbalanced language abilities within the groups. This can hinder the progress of students as the more advanced one may dominate the conversation, leaving little room for the other students to improve. Besides, students may feel uncomfortable or less motivated if paired with someone who they don’t get along with or have difficulty communicating with.
My suggestion is to group students based on their language abilities or to let students choose their own partners. This way, everyone can feel more comfortable practicing and improving their spoken English together.
Thank you for considering my suggestion.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
______
六、实战练习
作文1.假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Tom来信说他在汉语口语学习方面感到迷茫,请你给他
回信,内容包括:1.表示担忧;2.分析原因并给出建议。
注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Tom,
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
作文2.
为了帮助中学生健康成长,某中学英文报开辟了“HEART-TO-HEART”专栏。假设你是该栏目的编辑Jamie,收到一封署名为Worried的求助信。信中该同学向你诉说了自己的困扰:近日容易发脾气,使正常的学习和生活受到了影响。请用英文给该同学写一封回信。
内容要点如下:1.表示理解并给予安慰;2.提出建议并说明理由。
注意:1.词数120左右;2.信中不能出现与本人相关的信息;3.信的开头与结尾①已为你拟好,不计入总词数。参考词汇:temper n.脾气,情绪
Dear Worried,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I sincerely hope that my above-mentioned suggestions can be beneficial to you and you can recover soon.
Yours,
Jamie