重难点 12 应用文写作
考点 三年考情(2023-2025) 命题趋势
考点 1 书信体(3 年 8 考) 2025 全国一卷--告知信; 2025 全国二卷—咨询信; 2025 八省联考卷—推荐信; 2025 北京卷—建议信; 一、体裁趋势:邮件为主,融合多元电子邮件(占比最高,2025 全国I/II 卷均考邮件) 高频体裁:建议信、告知/分享信、演讲稿、通知、倡议书、投稿 新趋势:文体融合(应用+记叙/议论)
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2024 北京卷—建议信; 2024 新课标 I&II 卷—告知信; 2023 新课标 I&II 卷—建议信; 2023 北京卷—建议信; 二、主题趋势:五育并举,文化+真实 校园生活(最高频):活动、课程、社团、校报、课间运动、学习建议 传统文化+跨文化:非遗、节日、中国元素对外介绍、中外交流 社会热点:环保、科技(AI)、健康、劳动、公共责任 个人成长:经历分享、问题解决、建议、感受表达 核心导向:立德树人+文化自信+真实交际 三、命题形式:反模板、重情境、强思维 从“套模板”→“真实沟通”:拒绝机械套用,强调交际目的+对象+得体性 半开放+多任务:提纲简洁、留发挥空间;常含 2–3 个复合任务(如邀请+建议+提醒) 情境真实化:贴近校园/生活,强调“用英语解决实际问题” 思维升级:夹叙夹议、现象分析、利弊权衡、方案建议 四、能力要求:从“写对”到“写好” 基础:格式规范、语法正确、词汇恰当、词数达标(80–100 词) 关键:逻辑清晰、要点齐全、语言简洁、交际得体 加分:文化表达准确、情感自然、句式多样、衔接流畅
考点 2 非书 信体(3 年 8 考) 2025 浙江 1 月卷—演讲稿; 2025 天津卷—网络帖子; 2024 浙江 1 月卷—短文投稿; 2024 九省联考卷—活动通知; 2024 全国甲卷—发言稿; 2023 全国甲卷—短文投稿; 2023 全国乙卷—短文投 稿;2023 浙江 1 月卷—活动报道;
考点一:告知信
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【2025 全国一卷--告知信】
1 .假定你是李华,你班的英语报要增设一个栏目。外教 Jenny 提出“Fun at my school”和“Guess who I am”两个选项供大家选择。请给 Jenny 写一封邮件,内容包括:
(1)你的选择;
(2)说明理由。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为 80 个左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Jenny,
I really like the idea of adding a new column to our English newspaper.
Yours,
Li Hua
一、高考告知信万能模板 Dear , How is everything going I am writing to inform you of some detailed information about . ______ The details are as follows.First of all, . Besides, . Last but not least, . ______ I hope you can take good notice of the information above. If you have any further questions, don’t hesitate to contact me. Yours sincerely, Li Hua
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二、开头必背句型 1. I am writing to inform you of some relevant information about …我写信是为了告知你关于 的相关信息。 2. I am glad to tell you something important about …我很高兴告诉你关于 的重要事情。 3. This letter is to let you know that …写这封信是为了让你知道 三、中间衔接 & 陈述信息句型 1. The details are as follows. 细节如下。 2. It is scheduled to be held on in . 它定于(时间)在 (地点)举行。 3. It will last about minutes/hours. 将持续大约 分钟/小时。 4. What deserves your attention is that … 值得你注意的是 5. Please remember that 请记住 6. You are expected to … 你被期望/需要 四、结尾必背句型 1. I sincerely hope you can take good notice of it. 我真诚希望你能留意此事。 2. If you have any questions, please feel free to ask me. 如有任何问题,欢迎随时问我。 3. I’m looking forward to your coming. 期待你的到来。(适合活动告知)
考点二:咨询信
【2025 全国二卷—咨询信】
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2 .假定你是校英文报编辑李华,外教 Chris 上个月答应写一篇介绍加拿大体育运动的文章。请给 Chris 写一封邮件,内容包括:
(1)询问进展;
(2)提醒交稿时间。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为 80 个左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Chris,
Best wishes,
Li Hua
一、咨询信万能模板 Dear Sir or Madam, I am Li Hua, a high school student from China. I am writing to ask for some information about 【你要咨询的事情】. To begin with, I wonder if you could tell me 【问题 1】. Besides, I am eager to know 【问题 2】. In addition, I would also like to inquire about 【问题 3】. I would appreciate it if you could reply at your earliest convenience. Thank you for your time and assistance. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 二、开头必背高分句型 1. I am writing to ask for some relevant information about …
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我写信是想咨询关于 的相关信息。 2. I am writing to inquire about some details concerning …我写信是想询问关于 的一些细节。 3. I wonder if you could do me a favor to provide some information.不知你能否帮我提供一些信息。 三、中间提问万能句型(最安全、最加分) 1. I wonder if you could tell me … 我想知道你能否告诉我 2. Could you please inform me of… 你能告知我 吗? 3. I am eager to know … 我很想知道 4. I would also like to ask about 我还想询问 5. What I am concerned about most is 我最关心的是 四、结尾必背句型 1. I would appreciate it if you could give me a reply soon.如果你能尽快回复,我将不胜感激。 2. Thank you for your kindness and I’m looking forward to your early reply. 感谢你的帮助,期待早日回复。 3. Thanks for your time and assistance. 感谢你的时间与帮助。
考点三:推荐信
【2025 八省联考卷—推荐信】
3.假定你是李华,你的留学生朋友 Beth 想学打乒乓球,发邮件向你求教。请给她回封邮件,内容包括:
(1)表示支持;
(2)推荐教练。
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注意:
(1)写作词数应为 80 个左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Beth,
Glad to know that you want to learn to play table tennis.
Yours,
Li Hua
万能满分模板 Dear , I am writing to recommend something/somewhere/someone to you. Having a full understanding of it, I am convinced that it will be absolutely beneficial and suitable for you. Firstly, 优点 1. Besides, 优点 2. What’s more, 优点 3. There is no doubt that it will bring you a lot of convenience/pleasure/gains. I hope you will like my recommendation. I would appreciate it if you could take it into consideration. Yours sincerely, Li Hua开头高级句 1. I am writing to share my recommendation of … with you. 2. It is my great pleasure to recommend … to you. 3. Knowing that you are interested in … , I’d like to recommend … to you. 中间万能优点句(替换括号内容即可)
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- It is practical and useful, which can help you a lot. - It can broaden your horizons and enrich your knowledge. - It is of great benefit to your study and daily life. - It is well worth visiting/reading/learning/experiencing. - It can not only … , but also … . 结尾高分句 1. I’m sure you will benefit a lot from it. 2. I do hope my recommendation will be helpful to you. 3. Thank you for your time and consideration.
考点四:建议信
【2023 新课标 I&II 卷—建议信】
4 . 假定你是李华,外教 Ryan 准备将学生随机分为两人一组,让大家课后练习口语,你认为这样分组存在问题。请你给外教写一封邮件,内容包括:
1. 说明问题;
2. 提出建议。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为 80 个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Ryan,
I’m Li Hua from Class 3.
Yours sincerely, Li Hua
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一、建议信 万能满分模板(必背)Dear , I am sorry to hear that you are having trouble with . I am writing to offer you some practical suggestions. As far as I’m concerned, the following suggestions may be beneficial for you. To begin with, it would be a good idea if you . Besides, you are supposed to . What’s more, it is high time that you . I hope you will find these suggestions useful. I am looking forward to your good news. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 二、万能高分句型(直接背)开头句型 1. I am writing to offer some suggestions/advice on …我写信就 提出一些建议。 2. Knowing that you have trouble in … , I’d like to share some useful advice with you.得知你在 方面有困难,我想给你提些有用的建议。 3. I am quite concerned about … , so I am writing to give you a hand. 我很关心 ,因此写信来帮助你。 中间提建议句型(高考高分) 1. It is advisable for you to do 你做 是明智的。 2. You are supposed to 你应该 3. Why not do 为什么不 ? 4. It would be better if you could 如果你能 会更好。 5. It is high time that you took action to 是你该采取行动 的时候了。 6. Only in this way can you 只有这样你才能 (倒装,高分)过渡句 - As far as I’m concerned.在我看来。 - There are several suggestions I want to put forward.我有几条建议想提出。 结尾句型 1. I hope you will find these suggestions practical and helpful.
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希望你觉得这些建议实用且有帮助。 2. I would be more than happy if my suggestions are taken into consideration. 如果我的建议被考虑,我将不胜感激。 3. I believe that with joint efforts, things will get better soon. 我相信通过共同努力,情况会很快好转。
考点五:邀请信
【2022 新课标 I&II 卷—邀请信】
5.假定你是校广播站英语节目“Talk and Talk”的负责人李华,请给外教 Caroline 写邮件邀请她做一次访谈。内容包括:
1. 节目介绍;
2. 访谈的时间和话题。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为 80 左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Caroline,
_______________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
一、邀请信 万能满分模板(必背)Dear , I am writing to invite you to take part in . It will be held in/at on . Now I’d like to tell you some details about it. To begin with, the activity will last hours. Besides, we will , which is very interesting and meaningful. What’s more, you can . I would appreciate it if you could accept my invitation. I am looking forward to your early reply. Yours sincerely,
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Li Hua 二、开头高分句型 1. I am writing to invite you to …我写信邀请你参加 2. It’s my great honor to invite you to …非常荣幸邀请你 3. Knowing you show great interest in … , I’d like to invite you to …得知你对 很感兴趣,我想邀请你 三、中间活动介绍句型 - It will be held in/at on . 活动将于(时间)在 (地点)举行。 - The activity will last … hours. 活动将持续 小时。 - It aims to 活动目的是 - Not only can you … , but also you can …你不仅可以 ,还可以 - I’m sure you will have a good time. 我相信你会玩得很开心。 四、结尾高分句型 1. I would appreciate it if you could accept my invitation. 如果你能接受邀请,我将不胜感激。 2. Please let me know your decision as soon as possible. 请尽快告知我你的决定。 3. I’m looking forward to your coming. 期待你的到来。
考点六:通知
【2024 九省联考卷—活动通知】
6 .你校英文报计划举办主题为“携手行动,节约粮食” 的作文比赛。请你写一则活动通知,
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内容包括:
(1)介绍活动目的;
(2)说明参赛要求。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为 80 个左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Welcome to Join the English Writing Competition
一、高考英语通知 万能满分模板 Notice Aimed to 活动目的, 活动名称 will be held. All of you are expected to take an active part. The activity is scheduled to be held in 地点 on 日期, starting from 开始时间 to 结束时间. To begin with, we will 活动内容 1. Besides, 活动内容 2. What’s more, 活动内容 3. It is a good chance to enrich your school life. Please be there on time and bring your enthusiasm. The Students’ Union June 12, 2026 二、必背高分句型(直接套)开头句型 1. A notice is to be given to inform you of … 现通知你关于 2. A … activity is to be held.
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将举办一场 活动。 3. It is aimed to 活动目的是 时间地点万能句 1. The activity is scheduled to take place in … on … 活动定于 (时间)在 (地点)举行。 2. It will last hours, from to 活动将持续 小时,从 到 。中间安排句 1. During the activity, you can …在活动中,你可以 2. What you need to do is …你需要做的是 3. Not only can you … , but also you can …你不仅可以 ,还可以 结尾要求句 1. Please be present on time. 请准时参加。 2. Anyone who is interested is welcome. 欢迎所有感兴趣的同学参加。 3. We are looking forward to your participation.期待你的参与。
考点七:演讲稿
【2025 浙江 1 月卷—演讲稿】
7 .你将参加英语课上的“一分钟演讲”活动。请你针对部分同学在校园内用手机拍摄短视频的现象写一篇演讲稿,内容包括:
(1) 陈述看法;
(2) 提出建议。
注意:
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(1) 写作词数应为 80 左右;
(2) 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
My Views on Filming Short Videos on Campus
一、高考英语演讲稿 万能满分模板 Dear teachers and classmates, I am greatly honored to deliver a speech here. The topic of my speech is . As we all know, . It plays an important role in our life / study.However, .As far as I’m concerned, effective measures should be taken. To begin with, we should . Besides, it’s our duty to .What’s more, only in this way can we .In conclusion, if we spare no effort to , we will surely . Thank you for listening! 二、开头高分句型 1. I’m greatly honored to speak here. 我非常荣幸在此演讲。 2. It’s my great pleasure to give a speech. 我很荣幸发表演讲。 3. The topic of my speech is … 我演讲的主题是 4. As we all know, … plays an important part in our life. 众所周知, 在我们生活中很重要。 三、中间万能高级句型(阅卷加分) 1. It’s very important for us to 做 对我们非常重要。
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2. As far as I’m concerned, 在我看来 3. There is no denying that 不可否认 4. Only in this way can we 只有这样,我们才能 (倒装,高分必用) 5. It’s our duty to 做 是我们的责任。 6. We are supposed to 我们应该 7. Not only can we but also we can 我们不仅能 ,而且能 四、结尾高分句型 1. In conclusion / In short / To sum up 总之 2. If everyone makes an effort, our world will be better.如果人人尽力,世界会更美好。 3. Let’s take action from now on.让我们从现在开始行动。 4. Thank you for listening!感谢聆听!
(建议用时:60 分钟)
(2026·河北·一模)
8 .假定你是李华,你校计划举办英语文化艺术节,现面向全体学生征集节日活动。请给负责人 Mr. Smith 写一封邮件,内容包括:
(1)推荐的活动;
(2)推荐的理由。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为 80 个左右;
(2)请按如下格式作答。
Dear Mr. Smith,
I’m Li Hua, a senior from Class 1.
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Yours,
Li Hua
(2026·辽宁·一模)
9 .假定你是李华,你校外教 Mr. Smith 负责组织了在线英语阅读活动。你在参与后,发现活动虽好,但存在一些可以改进之处。请你给外教写一封电子邮件,内容包括:
1. 表达感谢与肯定;
2. 提出具体建议。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为 80 个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mr. Smith,
Best regards,
Li Hua
(2026·河北·一模)
10.假定你是李华,最近你正在策划一部根据中国四大名著之一改编的短剧。请你给英国笔友 Michael 写一封电子邮件,内容包括:
1.介绍该短剧内容;
2.邀请他参加表演。
注意:
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1.写作词数应为 80 左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Michael,
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
11.假定你是李华,现在一所英国高中做交换生。因宿舍生活存在困扰, 计划向宿管老师申请调换宿舍。请你写一封邮件,内容包括:
1. 申请原因;
2. 表达感谢与期待。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为 80 个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Sir/ Madam,
Yours,
Li Hua
(2026·浙江·二模)
12.假定你是李华,近期,你观察到教室内课桌污损严重,整洁的桌面布满了乱涂乱画的痕迹。为此,你将在英语课上以“ 爱护公物”为主题,做一分钟左右的演讲。请写一篇演讲稿,
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内容包括:
1. 描述具体现象;
2. 呼吁爱护公物。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为 80 左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 Dear teacher and classmates,
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(2026·黑龙江哈尔滨·一模)
13.假如你是李华,上周参加了学校举办的关于“ 防范网络安全风险” 的主题讲座。请你给校英文报写一篇短文投稿,内容包括:
1. 讲座内容;
2. 你的感想。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为 80 个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Guarding Against Cybersecurity Risks
(2026·重庆沙坪坝·一模)
14.假定你是某国际学校学生会主席李华。你校将举办“ 中华美食文化节”,请你用英文写一
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则通知,内容包括:
1.活动目的、时间、地点;
2.活动内容(如美食展示、体验制作等);
3.鼓励大家积极参与。
注意:
词数 80 左右;
请按如下格式作答。
NOTICE
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
(2026·江西·一模)
15.假如你是李华,为了增加学生的文化自信,鼓励学生树立文化认同感,学校在上周五组织举办了非物质文化遗产进校园活动,学校学生会要求你对于此活动撰写此活动的报道稿。
非物质文化遗产:intangible cultural heritage注意:
1.写作词数为 80 词左右;
2.说明活动的过程及反响;
3.分享自己的感受以及建议。
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(2026·四川绵阳·模拟预测)
16 .假设你是李华,你的英国网友 Tom 对你校 4 月 4 日将要举行的成人仪式(the Coming-of-Age Ceremony)感兴趣,请写信告知他相关事宜。内容包括:
1. 活动时间和地点;
2. 活动内容。
参考词汇:宣誓 make an oath
注意:1. 词数应为 80 个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Tom,
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
(2026·甘肃武威·模拟预测)
17 .假定你是班长李华,你班计划设立一个“班级艺术角”(Class Art Corner),现面向全班同学征集设计方案。请你写一封英文倡议信,内容包括:
1.具体要求;
2.鼓励积极参与。
注意:1.写作词数应为 80 个左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear classmates,
_______________________________________________________________________________
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Yours sincerely, Li Hua
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1 .One possible version:
Dear Jenny,
I really like the idea of adding a new column to our English newspaper. I’m writing to
express that my predilection goes to “Guess who I am”, which capitalizes on an object clause to signal its potential contents.
The column will serve as a catalyst for closer bonds between students. Redoubling efforts to boost academic performance, we pay little heed to other classmates’ personalities, hobbies,
strengths, and even aspirations. Such an inviting column, adopting a “description and guess”
approach, must expose everyone to others’ characteristics, thus strengthening mutual
understanding. More importantly, more friendships will be forged, since the column enables us to befriend someone on the same wavelength.
This eye-catching column, I’m firmly convinced, won’t fail to grant the whole class a harmonious atmosphere.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生就外教 Jenny 提出的校英文报增设一个栏目,在“Fun at my school”和“Guess who I am”两个选项中给出自己的推荐,并说明理由。
【详解】1.词汇积累
表达:express → convey
利用:capitalize on → use
担当:serve as → act as
注意:pay heed to → take notice of
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Such an inviting column, adopting a “description and guess” approach, must expose everyone to others’ characteristics, thus strengthening mutual understanding.
拓展句:Such an inviting column, which adopts a “description and guess” approach, must expose everyone to others’ characteristics, thus strengthening mutual understanding.
【点睛】【高分句型 1】I’m writing to express that my predilection goes to “Guess who I am”, which capitalizes on an object clause to signal its potential contents.(运用了 that 引导的宾语从
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句,which 引导的定语从句)
【高分句型 2】More importantly, more friendships will be forged, since the column enables us to befriend someone on the same wavelength.(运用了 since 引导的状语从句)
2 .One possible version:
Dear Chris,
Hope this email finds you well! Last month, you kindly agreed to write an article about sports in Canada, and we’re all looking forward to reading it.
I’m writing to politely inquire about the progress of the article. Would you mind letting me know how it’s going Also, could I remind you that the deadline for submission is this Friday,
June 14th Your insights into Canadian sports will surely enrich our readers’understanding of global sports culture, which will be of benefit to us.
Thank you again for your support!
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文。要求考生给外教 Chris 写一封邮件,询问他上个月答应写一篇介绍加拿大体育运动的文章的进展,并提醒交稿时间。
【详解】1. 词汇积累:
询问:inquire →ask
理解:understanding →comprehension
此外:also →besides
肯定地:surely →certainly
2.句式拓展:
简单句变复合句
原句:I’m writing to politely inquire about the progress of the article.
拓展句:As you know, I’m writing to politely inquire about the progress of the article.
【点睛】【高分句型 1】Would you mind letting me know how it’s going (运用了 how 引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型 2】 Your insights into Canadian sports will surely enrich our readers’understanding of global sports culture, which will be of benefit to us. (运用了 which 引导的非限制性定语从句 )
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3 .Dear Beth,
Glad to know that you want to learn to play table tennis. It’s a fun and exciting sport! I
highly support your decision, as it will not only improve your skills but also help you make new friends.
I recommend you take lessons from Coach Zhang. He is an experienced coach who has trained many players at different levels. His classes are engaging and tailored to each student’s needs. You can find him at the local sports center.
Let me know if you need more information. Enjoy your training!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生对于你的留学生朋友 Beth 想学打乒乓球,发邮件向你求教这一情况,给她回封邮件。
【详解】1.词汇积累
强烈地:highly→ strongly
提高,增强:improve → enhance引人入胜的:engaging→ attractive
有趣的:fun→ interesting
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:His classes are engaging and tailored to each student’s needs.
拓展句:His classes are engaging, which are tailored to each student’s needs.
【点睛】【高分句型 1】He is an experienced coach who has trained many players at different levels.(运用了 who 引导的定语从句)
【高分句型 2】I highly support your decision, as it will not only improve your skills but also help you make new friends.(运用了 as 引导的原因状语从句以及 not only but also 的固定句型)
4 .Dear Ryan,
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I’m Li Hua from Class 3. I think it’s not a good idea to randomly pair up students for the spoken English training after class. The reasons are as follows.
To begin with, randomly pairing up students may lead to unbalanced language abilities within the groups. This can hinder the progress of students as the more advanced one may
dominate the conversation, leaving little room for the other students to improve. Besides, students may feel uncomfortable or less motivated if paired with someone who they don’t get along with or have difficulty communicating with.
My suggestion is to group students based on their language abilities or to let students choose their own partners. This way, everyone can feel more comfortable practicing and
improving their spoken English together.
Thank you for considering my suggestion.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇是应用文写作,要求考生给外教写一封邮件,告诉他将学生随机分为两人一组,让大家课后练习口语,你认为这样分组存在问题。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
首先:to begin with → first of all
提高:improve → progress
建议:suggestion → advice
选择:choose → select
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:My suggestion is to group students based on their language abilities or to let students choose their own partners.
拓展句:My suggestion is that we are supposed to group students based on their language abilities or to let students choose their own partners.
【点睛】[高分句型 1]
This can hinder the progress of students as the more advanced one may dominate the conversation, leaving little room for the other students to improve.(运用了现在分词作状语)
[高分句型 2]
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Besides, Students may feel uncomfortable or less motivated if paired with someone who they
don’t get along with or have difficulty communicating with.(运用了省略句和 who 引导定语从句)
5 .Dear Caroline,
This is my first time that I have invited you to attend our program —Talk and Talk. It is ten years since Talk and Talk was established. This is an amazing program where you can share your ideas with students. Now, when having trouble in learning English well, plenty of students urge to know how to deal with it. As our distinguished foreign language teacher, your aid can help us a
lot. If you are available on this Sunday, I together with the whole Talk and Talk staff am waiting for your coming. I’d appreciate it if you take my invitation into consideration.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一封邮件邀请你的外教 Caroline 来你校的广播站英语节目“Talk and Talk”做一次访谈。
【详解】1.词汇积累
参加:attend→participate in
建立:establish→set up
帮助:aid→assistance
许多:plenty of→a lot of
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:As our distinguished foreign language teacher, your aid can help us a lot.
拓展句:You are our distinguished foreign language teacher, whose aid can help us a lot. 【点睛】[高分句型 1]This is an amazing program where you can share your ideas with students.(运用了 where 引导的限制性定语从句)
[高分句型 2]Now, when having trouble in learning English well, plenty of students urge to know how to deal with it.(运用了 when 引导的时间状语从句的省略结构)
6 .范文
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Welcome to Join the English Writing Competition
Our school English newspaper is excited to announce the upcoming writing competition, whose theme is “Hand in Hand, Save the Food”. The competition aims to raise awareness about the importance of saving food.
All students are encouraged to participate. Entries should consist of an original piece of
writing, focusing on the theme of food waste and showing how we can contribute to its reduction. Please submit your entries to the English Department mailbox by the deadline of June 1st.
We look forward to your participation and creative submissions.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生为校英文报计划举办主题为“携手行动,节约粮食” 的作文比赛写一则活动通知。
【详解】1.词汇积累
比赛:competition→contest
集中:focus on→concentrate on
鼓励:encourage→hearten
主题:theme→topic
2.句式拓展同义句转换
原句:Entries should consist of an original piece of writing, focusing on the theme of food waste and showing how we can contribute to its reduction.
拓展句:Entries should consist of an original piece of writing, which should focus on the theme of food waste and show how we can contribute to its reduction.
【点睛】[高分句型 1] The competition aims to raise awareness about the importance of saving food. (运用了动名词作宾语)
[高分句型 2] Entries should consist of an original piece of writing, focusing on the theme of food waste and showing how we can contribute to its reduction. (运用了 how 引导宾语从句)
7 .My Views on Filming Short Videos on Campus
Dear classmates,
Recently, some of us have been filming short videos on campus. In my opinion, it can be a fun way to record campus life, but it also has its drawbacks. Not only may it distract us from our studies and even disrupt the school order, but it might also cause unnecessary comparisons and
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affect our self-esteem when the videos don’t get the expected response.
I suggest we should limit the time for filming and choose proper places. Let’s focus more on our academic tasks and make good use of our time on campus.
Thank you!
【导语】本篇书面表达属于演讲稿。要求考生针对部分同学在校园内用手机拍摄短视频的现象陈述看法并提出建议。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
记录:record → document
缺点:drawback → disadvantage
分散注意力:distract → divert
建议:suggest → propose
2. 句式拓展
并列句变复合句
原句:In my opinion, it can be a fun way to record campus life, but it also has its drawbacks.
拓展句:In my opinion, it can be a fun way that we can use to record campus life, but it also has its drawbacks.
【点睛】[高分句型 1] Not only may it distract us from our studies and even disrupt the school
order, but it might also cause unnecessary comparisons and affect our self esteem when the videos don’t get the expected response. (运用了 not only...but also...并列结构和从属连词 when 引导的时间状语从句)
[高分句型 2] I suggest we should limit the time for filming and choose proper places. (运用了省略连词 that 的宾语从句和虚拟语气)
8 .Dear Mr. Smith,
I’m Li Hua, a senior from Class 1. I’m writing to recommend an English song and drama show for the upcoming English Culture and Art Festival.
This activity is highly recommended for two main reasons. First, it provides a fun and
engaging way for students to practice their oral English and pronunciation through performance. Second, it can boost students’ confidence and creativity, fostering a deeper appreciation for
English culture. Additionally, it will strengthen teamwork and friendship among classmates, as they rehearse and perform together.
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I hope my suggestion will be helpful.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英语文化艺术节的负责人 Mr. Smith 写一封邮件,推荐节日活动并说明理由。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
吸引人的:engaging → appealing
培养:foster → cultivate
加强:strengthen → enhance
有帮助的:helpful → beneficial
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:I’m writing to recommend an English song and drama show for the upcoming English Culture and Art Festival.
拓展句:I’m writing to put forward a suggestion that an English song and drama show be held for the upcoming English Culture and Art Festival.
【点睛】【高分句型 1】Second, it can boost students’ confidence and creativity, fostering a deeper appreciation for English culture.(运用了现在分词 fostering 作状语)
【高分句型 2】Additionally, it will strengthen teamwork and friendship among classmates, as they rehearse and perform together.(运用了 as 引导的原因状语从句)
9 .Dear Mr. Smith,
I’m Li Hua. I’m writing to express my sincere thanks for organizing the online English reading activity. It has greatly broadened my horizons and improved my reading skills.
To make the activity even better, I have two small suggestions. First, could we add a
10-minute sharing session after reading to exchange ideas Second, it would be helpful if you could recommend reading materials of different difficulty levels to suit students’ various needs.
I hope my suggestions are useful. Thanks again for your hard work!
Best regards,
Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以李华的名义给外教 Mr. Smith 写一封电子邮
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件,对其组织的在线英语阅读活动表达感谢与肯定,并提出可改进之处。
【详解】1.词汇积累
表达:express→convey/voice
提高:improve→enhance
有益的:helpful→beneficial
各种各样的:various→diverse
2.句式拓展合并句子
原句:I’m writing to express my sincere thanks for organizing the online English reading activity. It has greatly broadened my horizons and improved my reading skills.
拓展句:I’m writing to express my sincere thanks for organizing the online English reading activity, which has greatly broadened my horizons and improved my reading skills.
【点睛】【高分句型 1】To make the activity even better, I have two small suggestions.(运用了不定式作目的状语)
【高分句型 2】Second, it would be helpful if you could recommend reading materials of different difficulty levels to suit students’ various needs.(运用了 if 引导的条件状语从句)
10 .Dear Michael,
How is everything going I'm excited to share that I'm organizing a short play based on one of China's Four Great Classical Novels — Journey to the West. The story follows the Monkey
King's adventure, full of courage and wisdom, and we’re adapting it with a creative twist.
I sincerely invite you to take part in the performance! You could play a character like a foreign monk joining the journey. It would be a fun cultural exchange. Let me know if you're interested!
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国笔友 Michael 写一封电子邮件,介绍自
己正在策划的根据中国四大名著之一改编的短剧内容,并邀请他参加表演。 【详解】1.词汇积累
兴奋的:excited → thrilled
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改编:adapt → modify
充满:be full of → be replete with
扮演:play → act as
2.句式拓展
并列句变复合句
原句:The story follows the Monkey King's adventure, full of courage and wisdom, and we’re adapting it with a creative twist.
拓展句:The story follows the Monkey King's adventure, which is full of courage and wisdom, and we’re adapting it with a creative twist.
【点睛】【高分句型 1】I'm excited to share that I'm organizing a short play based on one of China's Four Great Classical Novels — Journey to the West.(运用了 that 引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型 2】Let me know if you're interested!(运用了 if 引导的条件状语从句)
11 .Dear Ms. Wang,
I’m Li Hua, a student from Class 3, Grade 2 in Dorm 402. I’m writing to formally request/ apply for a dormitory change.
My roommate often stays up late playing games loudly, which severely disrupts my sleep. Consequently, I feel exhausted in class and struggle to focus on my studies. Despite repeated
attempts to communicate with him, the situation has shown no improvement.
I would be deeply grateful if you could help me find a more suitable dorm. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给宿管老师写一封邮件,申请调换宿舍,说明申请原因,并表达感谢与期待。
【详解】1.词汇积累
严重地:severely → seriously
扰乱:disrupt → disturb
专注于:focus on → concentrate on
感激的:grateful → appreciative
2.句式拓展
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简单句变复合句
原句:Despite repeated attempts to communicate with him, the situation has shown no improvement.
拓展句:Although I have made repeated attempts to communicate with him, the situation has shown no improvement.
【点睛】【高分句型 1】My roommate often stays up late playing games loudly, which severely disrupts my sleep.(运用了 which 引导的定语从句)
【高分句型 2】I would be deeply grateful if you could help me find a more suitable dorm. (运用了 if 引导的状语从句)
12 .One possible version:
Dear teacher and classmates,
Good morning. Today, I want to talk about protecting public property, especially our desks in the classroom.
Recently, I was saddened to find our classroom desks in a terrible state. The once clean and tidy surfaces are now covered with random drawings, messy scribbles and even deep scratches.
These marks not only ruin the beauty of our classroom but also affect our learning mood, showing a lack of respect for school property.
Our desks are our silent partners in learning, and it is our responsibility to protect them. I
sincerely hope we can stop hurting them and treat every piece of furniture with care. Let’s act now to bring back a tidy and comfortable study environment! Thank you!
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文, 要求考生写一篇演讲稿,描述教室内课桌污损严重,整洁的桌面布满了乱涂乱画的痕迹的现象,呼吁爱护公物。
【详解】1.词汇积累保护:protect→defend
难过的:saddened→grieved
破坏:ruin→devastate
影响:affect→impact
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Recently, I was saddened to find our classroom desks in a terrible state.
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拓展句:Recently, I was saddened to find that our classroom desks were in a terrible state.
【点睛】[高分句型 1] These marks not only ruin the beauty of our classroom but also affect our learning mood, showing a lack of respect for school property. (运用了现在分词 showing 作状语) [高分句型 2] I sincerely hope we can stop hurting them and treat every piece of furniture with
care. (运用了省略 that 引导的宾语从句)
13 .Possible version
Guarding Against Cybersecurity Risks
Last week, I attended a lecture on guarding against cybersecurity risks hosted by our
school. The lecturer warned us against potential online risks, including cyber cheating, virus
attacks and privacy leaks. He also shared some real cases with us, where students suffered
financial losses after clicking unsafe links and their personal information was stolen due to weak passwords. Meanwhile, he put forward some practical proposals, such as avoiding suspicious links and setting strong passwords.
This lecture is so instructive that it has boosted my awareness of cybersecurity and guided
me to use the Internet properly and safely. It is of great significance that we should learn to protect ourselves in the digital age and step away from cyber dangers.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文, 要求考生给校英文报写一篇短文投稿,说明你上周参加的学校举办的关于“ 防范网络安全风险” 的主题讲座的内容和你的感想。
【详解】1.词汇积累
参加:attend→participate in
私人的:personal→private
实用的:practical→functional
提高:boost→enhance
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:The lecturer warned us against potential online risks, including cyber cheating, virus attacks and privacy leaks.
拓展句:The lecturer warned us against potential online risks, which include cyber cheating, virus attacks and privacy leaks.
【点睛】[高分句型 1] He also shared some real cases with us, where students suffered financial
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losses after clicking unsafe links and their personal information was stolen due to weak passwords. (运用了 where 引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型 2] It is of great significance that we should learn to protect ourselves in the digital age and step away from cyber dangers. (运用了 it 作形式主语,that 引导的主语从句)
14 . NOTICE
Dear students,
Our school is going to hold a “Chinese Food Culture Festival” to promote Chinese food culture. The festival will take place in the school hall from 9:00 a.m. to 5:00 p.m. next Saturday. There will be various activities. You can admire a wide range of delicious Chinese food on display.
Also, there will be opportunities for you to experience making traditional Chinese dishes with the help of professional chefs.
We sincerely hope all of you can actively participate and enjoy this wonderful food-filled event.
Student Union 【导语】这是一篇应用文。考生校将举办“ 中华美食文化节”,请你用英文写一则通知。
【详解】1.词汇积累
推广;促进:promote→popularize举行:hold→sponsor
欣赏;观赏:admire→appreciate帮助:help→assistance
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Our school is going to hold a “Chinese Food Culture Festival” to promote Chinese food culture.
拓展句:Our school is going to hold a “Chinese Food Culture Festival” whose aim is to promote Chinese food culture.
【点睛】【高分句型 1】We sincerely hope all of you can actively participate and enjoy this wonderful food-filled event.(运用了省略 that 的宾语从句)
【高分句型 2】 Our school is going to hold a “Chinese Food Culture Festival” to promote Chinese food culture.(运用了动词不定式作目的状语)
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15 .例文
Last Friday, our school held an intangible cultural heritage campus activity to boost students’ cultural confidence and strengthen their cultural identity.
On that day, booths for paper-cutting, Chinese knotting and traditional calligraphy were set up on the playground. Inheritors demonstrated skills patiently, and students tried their hands
eagerly — some crafted delicate paper-cuts, while others learned to tie beautiful knots. Laughter and cheers filled the air, with everyone showing great enthusiasm and gaining a deeper
understanding of traditional culture.
As for me, this activity was truly inspiring. It made me proud of our rich cultural heritage. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生为非物质文化遗产进校园活动写一篇报道稿。
【详解】1.词汇积累举行:hold → host
加强:strengthen → enhance
鼓舞人心的:inspiring → encouraging
热情:enthusiasm → passion
2.句式拓展合并简单句
原句:As for me, this activity was truly inspiring. It made me proud of our rich cultural heritage.拓展句:As for me, this activity was truly inspiring because it made me proud of our rich cultural heritage.
【点睛】【高分句型 1】Last Friday, our school held an intangible cultural heritage campus activity to boost students’ cultural confidence and strengthen their cultural identity.(运用了不定式作目的状语)
【高分句型 2】Laughter and cheers filled the air, with everyone showing great enthusiasm and gaining a deeper understanding of traditional culture.(运用了 with 的复合结构)
16 .参考范文
Dear Tom,
Learning that you’re interested in our school’s Coming-of-Age Ceremony, I’m writing to share the details with you.
The ceremony will be held in the school hall on April 4th. First, our headmaster will deliver
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a speech to congratulate us. Then, all students will make an oath to take on responsibilities for our family and society. Finally, we will exchange letters with our parents.
I’m sure it will be a meaningful experience.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以李华的身份给英国网友 Tom 写信,告知其学校 4 月 4 日成人仪式的相关事宜,回应 Tom 对该活动的兴趣。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
对 感兴趣:be interested in → take interest in祝贺:congratulate → felicitate
承担:take on → undertake
有意义的:meaningful → significant
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:The ceremony will be held in the school hall on April 4th.
拓展句:The Coming-of-Age Ceremony that you are interested in will be held in the school hall on April 4th.
【点睛】【高分句型 1】Learning that you’re interested in our school’s Coming-of-Age Ceremony, I’m writing to share the details with you.(运用了现在分词 Learning 作状语和 that 连接的宾语从句)
【高分句型 2】I’m sure it will be a meaningful experience. (运用了省略 that 的宾语从句)
17 .One possible version:
Dear classmates,
To enrich our campus life, our class will set up a Class Art Corner. We warmly invite
everyone to contribute design proposals for this meaningful project. Your ideas should include the use of the available space, engaging themes and art forms for display, and an exhibition plan to
ensure the corner remains dynamic and inspiring.
Your active participation and creative vision are essential for bringing this corner to life. Let’s join hands to create a unique artistic haven that reflects our shared spirit and imagination. Please submit your proposals by next Friday.
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Looking forward to your innovative ideas.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一封英文倡议信,说明具体要求以及鼓励积极参与。
【详解】1.词汇积累
设立:set up→establish
有意义的:meaningful→significant
提交:submit→present
重要:essential→vital
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:To enrich our campus life, our class will set up a Class Art Corner.
拓展句:Our class will set up a Class Art Corner so that we can enrich our campus life.
【点睛】【高分句型 1】To enrich our campus life, our class will set up a Class Art Corner.(运用了不定式作目的状语)
【高分句型 2】Let’s join hands to create a unique artistic haven that reflects our shared spirit and imagination.(运用了 that 引导定语从句)
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