陕西山西青海宁夏等四省联考2026届高三上学期1月期末英语写作训练+导学案（含答案）（邮件+读后续写之父子温情）

陕西山西青海宁夏等四省联考2026届高三上学期1月期末英语写作训练（邮件+读后续写之父子温情）
一、邮件写作（建议英语角活动形式）
（一）题型核心考点
本题为应用文之建议类邮件，核心考查“活动选择+选择理由”的清晰表达，兼顾礼貌得体的交际语气（对老师）。评分重点：内容完整性（选择+理由）、行文逻辑、格式规范及语法多样性。
（二）写作任务
假定你是李华，你校英语角负责人Ms. Brown近期想举办一场活动，有English Speech Competition和English Songs Singing Competition两种活动形式供选择。请你给她写封邮件，内容包括：1.你的选择；2.你的理由。
注意：（1）写作词数应为80个左右；（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Ms. Brown,
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Yours,
Li Hua
（三）语法亮点预判（可借鉴句式）
1. 宾语从句：表达选择及理由，如“I suggest we hold an English Songs Singing Competition because I think it can help students relax and show their talents.”
2. 比较级：对比两种活动，如“Compared with English Speech Competition, singing competition is less stressful and more popular among students.”
3. 不定式结构：说明活动意义，如“It can not only improve our oral English but also arouse our interest in learning English.”
（四）高分句子默写
1. 经过慎重考虑，我建议举办英语歌曲演唱比赛，因为它更适合大多数同学，也能营造轻松的英语学习氛围。________________________________________________________________
2. 与英语演讲比赛相比，唱歌比赛压力更小，能让害羞的同学也勇敢地展示自己的英语能力。________________________________________________________________
3. 此外，通过演唱英语歌曲，我们还能记忆更多单词和句型，这对我们的英语学习很有帮助。________________________________________________________________
4. 我相信这个活动能吸引更多同学参与英语角，让大家在快乐中提升英语水平。________________________________________________________________
（五）拓展表达练习（同义替换）
建议：suggest = _______ = _______
举办：hold = _______ = _______
适合：suitable = _______ = _______
提升：improve = _______ = _______
二、读后续写（父子温情主题）
（一）主题分析与续写思路
核心主题：父爱无言的表达与理解，从“隔阂疏离”到“彼此懂得”的情感救赎，诠释“陪伴比物质更重要”的深层含义。
伏笔呼应：前文Thomas默默付出（准备早餐、叠衣服、请假照顾）、Eli的抱怨与渴望（渴望陪伴、在意生日和球赛）、医院里Thomas的笨拙温柔，为续写“和解共鸣”铺垫。
续写思路：
Paragraph 1（两周时光流逝）：描写父子相处的细微变化→Eli逐渐感受到父亲的温柔→回忆父亲的默默付出，内心态度转变→两人之间的沉默变得温暖。
Paragraph 2（出院后谈心）：Eli主动开口倾诉心声→Thomas坦诚自己的愧疚与爱（失去妻子后的逃避、不懂表达）→父子和解，解开隔阂→升华“无言父爱亦深沉”的主题。
（二）写作任务
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Eli's notebook slipped from his hands as his father's car rushed out of the driveway—— another early morning, another quiet goodbye. Thomas Cole rarely spoke: no “good morning”, no “how was school”, just punishing workdays at his construction company, building skyscrapers while Eli grew up feeling invisible. Their house was neat but cold: a spotless kitchen, a home office piled with blueprints, and no photos of father and son on the walls. Every time Eli watched his friends hug their dads and laugh with them, his heart ached a little more, and the thought that his own father didn't care about him sank even deeper.
“It seems as if I were living with a stranger,” Eli once complained to his best friend, his eyes wet. Thomas lost his wife when Eli was five, and since then, work had become his escape. He'd get up and leave home at 5 a. m., return after 9 p. m., too tired to chat, believing providing for Eli—— paying his school fees, buying him whatever he needed—— was enough. But Eli was hungry for words, warmth, proof that he mattered. “He never asks about my soccer games, and never remembers my birthday,” he'd complain, ignoring how Thomas always left a warm breakfast on the counter, and how his clothes were always folded neatly.
One rainy evening, Eli rode his bike home as usual. Unexpectedly, he lost his balance on the wet road and fell down. The next thing he knew, he was being rushed to the hospital. His father, Thomas, had been called from work and hurried over to his side. When Eli woke in the hospital, he saw his father—— disheveled, eyes bloodshot, his work boots still caked in mud. He didn't say much, but just adjusted Eli's pillow, handed him a glass of water, and sat silently by the bed. It turned out that Thomas took the next two weeks off work—— something no one at his company had ever seen. He cooked Eli's favorite food, helped him shower and change with gentle, awkward movements, and read to him at night—— softly yet hesitantly, as if he was afraid to break the silence.
注意：1.续写词数应为150个左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
The two weeks passed in a strange new rhythm,
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After being released from hospital, Eli had a deep conversation with his father.
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（三）高分亮点预判
细节描写：通过动作（如“stroke Eli's hair gently”）、神态（如“eyes filled with softness”）、环境（如“warm light in the ward”）凸显情感变化。
语法结构：定语从句、分词作状语、宾语从句，提升句式复杂度与表达流畅度。
情感连贯：从“抱怨疏离”到“理解感恩”，呼应前文伏笔，层层递进，升华父子温情主题。
（四）高分句子默写
一、描写类（场景与动作）
1. 两周的时光在一种陌生而全新的节奏中流逝，父亲不再沉默寡言，偶尔会问起伊莱的功课，夜里读书时，手指会轻轻拂过伊莱的头发。________________________________________________________________
2. 伊莱看着父亲笨拙地收拾碗筷，眼角的皱纹里藏着从未有过的温柔，突然想起那些被自己忽略的清晨，温热的早餐一直静静放在餐桌上。________________________________________________________________
二、情感类（感悟与联结）
1. 伊莱终于明白，父亲的爱从不是轰轰烈烈的言语，而是藏在日复一日的默默付出里，藏在笨拙却温柔的陪伴中。________________________________________________________________
2. 那场谈心解开了父子间多年的隔阂，他们终于懂得，真正的陪伴无关言语多少，只要彼此心意相通，冰冷的房子就能变成温暖的家。________________________________________________________________
参考答案
一、邮件写作（建议英语角活动形式）
（一）题型核心考点
本题为应用文之建议类邮件，核心考查“活动选择+选择理由”的清晰表达，兼顾礼貌得体的交际语气（对老师）。评分重点：内容完整性（选择+理由）、行文逻辑、格式规范及语法多样性。
（二）写作任务
假定你是李华，你校英语角负责人Ms. Brown近期想举办一场活动，有English Speech Competition和English Songs Singing Competition两种活动形式供选择。请你给她写封邮件，内容包括：1.你的选择；2.你的理由。
注意：（1）写作词数应为80个左右；（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Ms. Brown,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
（三）高分范文（80词）
Dear Ms. Brown,
I’m writing to offer my advice on the English corner activity. After careful consideration, I suggest we hold an English Songs Singing Competition.
Compared with the speech competition, it is less stressful, allowing shy students to show their English ability bravely. Besides, singing English songs helps us memorize more words and sentences easily, which is beneficial to our English study. I believe it will attract more students to participate.
Yours,
Li Hua
（四）语法亮点
1. 分词作状语：Compared with the speech competition, it is less stressful...（过去分词作状语，简洁对比两种活动，提升句式复杂度。）
2. 现在分词短语：allowing shy students to show their English ability bravely（补充说明活动优势，衔接自然，避免简单句堆砌。）
3. 定语从句：which is beneficial to our English study（指代前文“唱英语歌有助于记单词句型”，使句子逻辑更连贯，表达更丰富。）
（五）高分句子默写
1. After careful consideration, I suggest we hold an English Songs Singing Competition, because it is more suitable for most students and can create a relaxed English learning atmosphere.
2. Compared with the English Speech Competition, the singing competition is less stressful and enables shy students to bravely show their English ability.
3. In addition, by singing English songs, we can memorize more words and sentence patterns, which is very helpful for our English study.
4. I believe this activity can attract more students to participate in the English corner and help everyone improve their English in joy.
（六）拓展表达练习（同义替换）
建议：suggest = advise = propose
举办：hold = organize = carry out
适合：suitable = fit = appropriate
提升：improve = enhance = promote
二、读后续写（父子温情主题）
（一）主题分析与续写思路
核心主题：父爱无言的表达与理解，从“隔阂疏离”到“彼此懂得”的情感救赎，诠释“陪伴比物质更重要”的深层含义。
伏笔呼应：前文Thomas默默付出（准备早餐、叠衣服、请假照顾）、Eli的抱怨与渴望（渴望陪伴、在意生日和球赛）、医院里Thomas的笨拙温柔，为续写“和解共鸣”铺垫。
续写思路：
Paragraph 1（两周时光流逝）：描写父子相处的细微变化→Eli逐渐感受到父亲的温柔→回忆父亲的默默付出，内心态度转变→两人之间的沉默变得温暖。
Paragraph 2（出院后谈心）：Eli主动开口倾诉心声→Thomas坦诚自己的愧疚与爱（失去妻子后的逃避、不懂表达）→父子和解，解开隔阂→升华“无言父爱亦深沉”的主题。
（二）写作任务
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Eli's notebook slipped from his hands as his father's car rushed out of the driveway—— another early morning, another quiet goodbye. Thomas Cole rarely spoke: no “good morning”, no “how was school”, just punishing workdays at his construction company, building skyscrapers while Eli grew up feeling invisible. Their house was neat but cold: a spotless kitchen, a home office piled with blueprints, and no photos of father and son on the walls. Every time Eli watched his friends hug their dads and laugh with them, his heart ached a little more, and the thought that his own father didn't care about him sank even deeper.
“It seems as if I were living with a stranger,” Eli once complained to his best friend, his eyes wet. Thomas lost his wife when Eli was five, and since then, work had become his escape. He'd get up and leave home at 5 a. m., return after 9 p. m., too tired to chat, believing providing for Eli—— paying his school fees, buying him whatever he needed—— was enough. But Eli was hungry for words, warmth, proof that he mattered. “He never asks about my soccer games, and never remembers my birthday,” he'd complain, ignoring how Thomas always left a warm breakfast on the counter, and how his clothes were always folded neatly.
One rainy evening, Eli rode his bike home as usual. Unexpectedly, he lost his balance on the wet road and fell down. The next thing he knew, he was being rushed to the hospital. His father, Thomas, had been called from work and hurried over to his side. When Eli woke in the hospital, he saw his father—— disheveled, eyes bloodshot, his work boots still caked in mud. He didn't say much, but just adjusted Eli's pillow, handed him a glass of water, and sat silently by the bed. It turned out that Thomas took the next two weeks off work—— something no one at his company had ever seen. He cooked Eli's favorite food, helped him shower and change with gentle, awkward movements, and read to him at night—— softly yet hesitantly, as if he was afraid to break the silence.
注意：1.续写词数应为150个左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
The two weeks passed in a strange new rhythm,
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After being released from hospital, Eli had a deep conversation with his father.
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（三）高分范文（148词）
The two weeks passed in a strange new rhythm, Thomas no longer kept silent. He would occasionally ask about Eli’s lessons and stroke Eli’s hair gently while reading at night. Eli watched his father tidy the bowls clumsily, his eyes filled with unprecedented softness. Suddenly, he remembered those mornings he had ignored, when a warm breakfast always lay quietly on the counter, and his folded clothes were placed neatly on the bed.
After being released from hospital, Eli had a deep conversation with his father. He poured out his longing for companionship, while Thomas looked guilty and admitted his mistake. He said he escaped into work after losing his wife and didn’t know how to express his love. Tears filled their eyes, and they hugged tightly. From then on, their cold house was filled with warmth, and they finally understood that silent love is the deepest.
（四）高分亮点
1. 细节描写：stroke Eli’s hair gently, eyes filled with unprecedented softness 等动作、神态描写，生动展现父子情感的微妙变化，画面感十足。
2. 分词作状语：while reading at night, when a warm breakfast always lay quietly... （补充细节，衔接自然，避免简单句堆砌，提升语法层次。）
3. 伏笔呼应：呼应前文“温热的早餐、叠整齐的衣服”，让情节连贯，凸显父亲“无言的付出”，为情感升华做铺垫。
4. 主题升华：以“silent love is the deepest”总结全文，点明“无言父爱亦深沉”的核心，贴合主题，传递积极情感。
（五）高分句子默写
一、描写类（场景与动作）
1. The two weeks passed in a strange new rhythm, and his father was no longer taciturn. He would occasionally ask about Eli’s lessons, and when reading at night, his fingers would gently brush Eli’s hair.
2. Eli watched his father tidy the bowls clumsily, the wrinkles at the corners of his eyes hiding unprecedented softness, and suddenly remembered those mornings he had ignored, when a warm breakfast had always been quietly placed on the dining table.
二、情感类（感悟与联结）
1. Eli finally realized that his father’s love was never vigorous words, but hidden in the daily silent dedication and clumsy but gentle companionship.
2. That talk resolved the years of estrangement between father and son. They finally understood that true companionship has nothing to do with the number of words; as long as their hearts are connected, a cold house can become a warm home.
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