山东省临沂市2025-2026学年高三上学期期末质量监测英语写作训练 导学案（招募启事+读后续写之塑料瓶改造挑战）（含答案）
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山东省临沂市2025-2026高三上学期期末质量监测英语写作训练（招募启事+读后续写之塑料瓶改造挑战）
一、英文招募启事写作（Love for the Elderly志愿活动）（满分15分）
（一）题型核心考点
本题为应用文之英文招募启事，核心考查“活动信息+招募要求”的清晰表达，兼顾正式得体、简洁明了的语气（以学生会名义，面向全校中外学生）。评分重点：内容完整性（目的意义+时间地点+服务内容+报名要求方式）、行文逻辑、格式规范及语法多样性。
（二）写作任务
假定你是国际学校的李华，你校计划组织 "Love for the Elderly" 校园公益志愿活动，本周日上午前往社区阳光敬老院 (Sunshine Community Nursing Home) 为老人提供服务。请以学生会名义撰写一则英文招募启事，招募全校中外学生志愿者参与。内容包括:1. 活动的目的与意义；2. 活动时间、地点及具体服务内容；3. 志愿者报名要求与方式。
注意：1. 写作词数应为 80 左右；2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear schoolmates,
Our school will hold a "Love for the Elderly" volunteer activity.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
The Student Union
（三）语法亮点预判（可借鉴句式）
非谓语动词：用于补充活动目的，如“Aimed at caring for the elderly and spreading love, the activity helps us learn to respect and accompany the elderly.”
定语从句：描述活动内容，如“We will carry out various services, which include chatting with the elderly and helping them with daily chores.”
并列结构：说明报名要求，如>Volunteers should be kind-hearted, patient and willing to devote their time to the elderly.
（四）高分句子默写
1. 举办此次活动旨在关爱老人、传递温暖，帮助我们学会尊重和陪伴老人，培养社会责任感。________________________________________________________________
2. 活动将于本周日上午在阳光社区敬老院举行，志愿者将陪老人聊天、为他们表演节目并帮忙做日常家务。________________________________________________________________
3. 要求志愿者热心、有耐心，能认真参与活动，中外学生均可报名，可到学生会办公室报名。________________________________________________________________
4. 欢迎每一位有爱心的同学加入我们，用行动传递爱与温暖，给老人带去欢乐。________________________________________________________________
（五）拓展表达练习（同义替换）
举办：hold = _______ = _______
关爱：care for = _______ = _______
要求：require = _______ = _______
加入：join = _______ = _______
二、读后续写（塑料瓶改造挑战主题）（满分25分）
（一）主题分析与续写思路
核心主题：挑战与成长，创意与价值，从“初步成功”到“突破自我”，凸显“平凡事物亦有价值，坚持与创意能成就不凡”的核心。
伏笔呼应：前文朋友Tom的环保挑战（用两个塑料瓶做出价值20美元的物品）、“我”改造第一个瓶子做成多肉盆栽（卖了5美元）、妈妈用旧物做装饰品的启发，为续写“改造第二个瓶子、完成挑战”铺垫。
续写思路：
Paragraph 1（For the second plastic bottle, I became more creative.）：描写改造第二个瓶子的创意的过程（设计、材料、步骤）→ 成品的特点（精致、实用、环保）→ 前往市场售卖的过程与结果（卖出更高价格）。
Paragraph 2（When I shared my success with Tom, he was amazed.）：Tom对“我”作品的评价→ “我”分享改造心得与收获→ 升华主题（挑战的意义、环保的价值、创意的力量）。
（二）写作任务
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Inspired by a bet with my friends, I found myself taking on a seemingly impossible challenge. It all started when my friend Tom, who was a devoted environmentalist, challenged me to turn two empty plastic bottles into something valuable enough to sell for 20 dollars. The bottles were beyond ordinary wear and tear; they looked like discarded (废弃的) mineral water bottles with crushed shapes and labels that were coming off.
I shared my worries with my father. He smiled and said, "Every challenge is a puzzle that can be pieced together," which didn't solve my problem but generated a new idea. That night, I remembered my mother's stories about how, in her youth, she would use old things to create decorative items. Inspired by my mother, I decided to make a succulent (多肉) pot out of one bottle.
Early the next morning, I got to work. I washed the bottle thoroughly, then cut off the top third with a pair of scissors (smoothing the edge with sandpaper to avoid cuts). I wrapped thick string around the bottle body and glued on a few dried flowers for decoration. Finally, I filled it with soil and planted a small succulent from our balcony (阳台).
I felt a rush of pride when I held it up to admire my work. It wasn't perfect, but it looked fresh and eco-friendly. With newfound determination, I headed to the open-air market, where I stood at the side of the street showcasing my creation. I smiled and presented my succulent pot to passers-by, but it drew little attention. Hours went by, and only one elderly woman stopped long enough to consider buying it before walking away. Feeling really disheartened, I was about to head home when a young couple noticed my pot. They praised its unique design and eco-friendly concept, offering me five dollars for it. I couldn't believe my luck! I was over the moon, and with the money in my pocket, I returned home with my first victory.
注意：1. 续写词数应为 150 个左右；2. 请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
For the second plastic bottle, I became more creative.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
When I shared my success with Tom, he was amazed.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
（三）高分亮点预判
细节描写：通过动作（如“cut carefully”“glue patiently”“showcase proudly”）、神态（如“eyes shining”“smile brightly”）凸显创意过程与成功喜悦。
语法结构：定语从句、分词作状语、并列句，提升句式复杂度。
情感连贯：从“改造第二个瓶子”到“完成挑战、分享感悟”，呼应前文的环保挑战与初步成功，升华“创意赋予平凡事物价值”的主题。
（四）高分句子默写
描写类（场景与动作）
1. 我仔细清洗并整理了第二个瓶子，将它切成两半，用颜料装饰瓶身，还加上了小灯串，把它改造成了一个精致的小夜灯。________________________________________________________________
2. 我带着这个小夜灯再次来到市场，自豪地向路人展示，很快就吸引了很多人的注意，一位女士出价18美元买下了它。________________________________________________________________
情感类（感悟与联结）
1. 那一刻，我明白创意能让废弃物品重获新生，也懂得了只要坚持和用心，再难的挑战也能完成。________________________________________________________________
2. 这次挑战不仅让我赢得了赌注，更让我体会到环保的意义，学会了用创意发现平凡事物的价值。________________________________________________________________
参考答案
一、英文招募启事写作（Love for the Elderly志愿活动）（满分15分）
（一）题型核心考点
本题为应用文之英文招募启事，核心考查“活动信息+招募要求”的清晰表达，兼顾正式得体、简洁明了的语气（以学生会名义，面向全校中外学生）。评分重点：内容完整性（目的意义+时间地点+服务内容+报名要求方式）、行文逻辑、格式规范及语法多样性。
（二）高分范文（80词）
Dear schoolmates,
Our school will hold a "Love for the Elderly" volunteer activity. Aimed at caring for the elderly and spreading love, it helps us learn to respect them and develop a sense of social responsibility.
It will be held this Sunday morning at Sunshine Community Nursing Home. We’ll chat with the elderly, give performances and help with daily chores. Kind and patient students at home and abroad are welcome. Please sign up at the Students’ Union office.
The Student Union
（三）语法亮点解析
非谓语动词（过去分词作状语）：Aimed at caring for the elderly and spreading love, it helps us...（替代目的状语从句，简洁紧凑，提升句式复杂度。）
并列结构：chat with the elderly, give performances and help with daily chores（三个动词短语并列，使服务内容清晰，句式对称。）
定语从句（隐含）：We’ll carry out activities that include chatting with the elderly...（补充活动细节，逻辑连贯，符合招募启事正式简洁的语气。）
（四）高分句子默写
1. Holding this activity aims to care for the elderly and spread warmth, helping us learn to respect and accompany the elderly and develop a sense of social responsibility.
2. The activity will be held this Sunday morning at Sunshine Community Nursing Home, where volunteers will chat with the elderly, give them performances and help with daily chores.
3. Volunteers are required to be kind and patient and take the activity seriously. Both Chinese and foreign students can apply and sign up at the Students’ Union office.
4. Welcome every caring student to join us, pass on love and warmth through actions and bring joy to the elderly.
（五）拓展表达练习
hold = organize = conduct
care for = look after = take care of
require = demand = request
join = take part in = participate in
二、读后续写（塑料瓶改造挑战主题）（满分25分）
（一）主题分析与续写思路
核心主题：挑战与成长，创意与价值，从“初步成功”到“突破自我”，凸显“平凡事物亦有价值，坚持与创意能成就不凡”的核心。
伏笔呼应：前文朋友Tom的环保挑战（用两个塑料瓶做出价值20美元的物品）、“我”改造第一个瓶子做成多肉盆栽（卖了5美元）、妈妈用旧物做装饰品的启发，为续写“改造第二个瓶子、完成挑战”铺垫。
续写思路：
Paragraph 1（For the second plastic bottle, I became more creative.）：描写改造第二个瓶子的创意的过程（设计、材料、步骤）→ 成品的特点（精致、实用、环保）→ 前往市场售卖的过程与结果（卖出更高价格）。
Paragraph 2（When I shared my success with Tom, he was amazed.）：Tom对“我”作品的评价→ “我”分享改造心得与收获→ 升华主题（挑战的意义、环保的价值、创意的力量）。
（二）高分范文（148词）
For the second plastic bottle, I became more creative. I cleaned and reshaped it carefully, cutting it into two halves. I painted the bottle body with bright colors and added string lights around it, turning it into a delicate night light. It looked beautiful and practical, full of eco-friendly charm. I went to the market again, showcasing it proudly. Soon, it attracted many passers-by. A young lady loved its unique design and offered 18 dollars for it. I accepted happily, knowing I had completed the challenge.
When I shared my success with Tom, he was amazed. He praised my creativity and said I had done a wonderful job. I told him that the challenge made me realize that discarded things could be reborn with creativity. It not only helped me win the bet but also let me understand the value of environmental protection. From then on, I began to collect old things and turn them into valuable items, enjoying the joy of creation.
（三）高分亮点解析
细节描写：cleaned and reshaped, painted the bottle body, showcasing it proudly等动作描写，清晰呈现改造过程与成功喜悦，让情节更生动。
非谓语动词：cutting it into two halves（现在分词作伴随状语）、turning it into a delicate night light（现在分词作结果状语），替代简单句，提升语法层次。
伏笔呼应：描写第二个瓶子的改造与售卖，呼应前文Tom的环保挑战、第一个瓶子的初步成功，情节连贯，凸显“创意赋予价值”的主题。
主题升华：以“the challenge made me realize that discarded things could be reborn with creativity”总结，凸显创意与环保的意义，符合积极价值观导向。
（四）高分句子默写
描写类（场景与动作）
1. I cleaned and sorted out the second bottle carefully, cut it into two halves, decorated the bottle body with paint, added string lights, and turned it into an exquisite night light.
2. I took the night light to the market again, showed it to passers-by proudly, and soon attracted many people's attention. A lady bought it for 18 dollars.
情感类（感悟与联结）
1. At that moment, I realized that creativity could give new life to discarded items, and that as long as I persisted and put my heart into it, even the hardest challenge could be completed.
2. This challenge not only made me win the bet but also made me realize the significance of environmental protection and learn to discover the value of ordinary things with creativity.
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一、英文招募启事写作（Love for the Elderly志愿活动）（满分15分）
（一）题型核心考点
本题为应用文之英文招募启事，核心考查“活动信息+招募要求”的清晰表达，兼顾正式得体、简洁明了的语气（以学生会名义，面向全校中外学生）。评分重点：内容完整性（目的意义+时间地点+服务内容+报名要求方式）、行文逻辑、格式规范及语法多样性。
（二）写作任务
假定你是国际学校的李华，你校计划组织 "Love for the Elderly" 校园公益志愿活动，本周日上午前往社区阳光敬老院 (Sunshine Community Nursing Home) 为老人提供服务。请以学生会名义撰写一则英文招募启事，招募全校中外学生志愿者参与。内容包括:1. 活动的目的与意义；2. 活动时间、地点及具体服务内容；3. 志愿者报名要求与方式。
注意：1. 写作词数应为 80 左右；2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear schoolmates,
Our school will hold a "Love for the Elderly" volunteer activity.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
The Student Union
（三）语法亮点预判（可借鉴句式）
非谓语动词：用于补充活动目的，如“Aimed at caring for the elderly and spreading love, the activity helps us learn to respect and accompany the elderly.”
定语从句：描述活动内容，如“We will carry out various services, which include chatting with the elderly and helping them with daily chores.”
并列结构：说明报名要求，如>Volunteers should be kind-hearted, patient and willing to devote their time to the elderly.
（四）高分句子默写
1. 举办此次活动旨在关爱老人、传递温暖，帮助我们学会尊重和陪伴老人，培养社会责任感。________________________________________________________________
2. 活动将于本周日上午在阳光社区敬老院举行，志愿者将陪老人聊天、为他们表演节目并帮忙做日常家务。________________________________________________________________
3. 要求志愿者热心、有耐心，能认真参与活动，中外学生均可报名，可到学生会办公室报名。________________________________________________________________
4. 欢迎每一位有爱心的同学加入我们，用行动传递爱与温暖，给老人带去欢乐。________________________________________________________________
（五）拓展表达练习（同义替换）
举办：hold = _______ = _______
关爱：care for = _______ = _______
要求：require = _______ = _______
加入：join = _______ = _______
二、读后续写（塑料瓶改造挑战主题）（满分25分）
（一）主题分析与续写思路
核心主题：挑战与成长，创意与价值，从“初步成功”到“突破自我”，凸显“平凡事物亦有价值，坚持与创意能成就不凡”的核心。
伏笔呼应：前文朋友Tom的环保挑战（用两个塑料瓶做出价值20美元的物品）、“我”改造第一个瓶子做成多肉盆栽（卖了5美元）、妈妈用旧物做装饰品的启发，为续写“改造第二个瓶子、完成挑战”铺垫。
续写思路：
Paragraph 1（For the second plastic bottle, I became more creative.）：描写改造第二个瓶子的创意的过程（设计、材料、步骤）→ 成品的特点（精致、实用、环保）→ 前往市场售卖的过程与结果（卖出更高价格）。
Paragraph 2（When I shared my success with Tom, he was amazed.）：Tom对“我”作品的评价→ “我”分享改造心得与收获→ 升华主题（挑战的意义、环保的价值、创意的力量）。
（二）写作任务
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Inspired by a bet with my friends, I found myself taking on a seemingly impossible challenge. It all started when my friend Tom, who was a devoted environmentalist, challenged me to turn two empty plastic bottles into something valuable enough to sell for 20 dollars. The bottles were beyond ordinary wear and tear; they looked like discarded (废弃的) mineral water bottles with crushed shapes and labels that were coming off.
I shared my worries with my father. He smiled and said, "Every challenge is a puzzle that can be pieced together," which didn't solve my problem but generated a new idea. That night, I remembered my mother's stories about how, in her youth, she would use old things to create decorative items. Inspired by my mother, I decided to make a succulent (多肉) pot out of one bottle.
Early the next morning, I got to work. I washed the bottle thoroughly, then cut off the top third with a pair of scissors (smoothing the edge with sandpaper to avoid cuts). I wrapped thick string around the bottle body and glued on a few dried flowers for decoration. Finally, I filled it with soil and planted a small succulent from our balcony (阳台).
I felt a rush of pride when I held it up to admire my work. It wasn't perfect, but it looked fresh and eco-friendly. With newfound determination, I headed to the open-air market, where I stood at the side of the street showcasing my creation. I smiled and presented my succulent pot to passers-by, but it drew little attention. Hours went by, and only one elderly woman stopped long enough to consider buying it before walking away. Feeling really disheartened, I was about to head home when a young couple noticed my pot. They praised its unique design and eco-friendly concept, offering me five dollars for it. I couldn't believe my luck! I was over the moon, and with the money in my pocket, I returned home with my first victory.
注意：1. 续写词数应为 150 个左右；2. 请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
For the second plastic bottle, I became more creative.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
When I shared my success with Tom, he was amazed.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
（三）高分亮点预判
细节描写：通过动作（如“cut carefully”“glue patiently”“showcase proudly”）、神态（如“eyes shining”“smile brightly”）凸显创意过程与成功喜悦。
语法结构：定语从句、分词作状语、并列句，提升句式复杂度。
情感连贯：从“改造第二个瓶子”到“完成挑战、分享感悟”，呼应前文的环保挑战与初步成功，升华“创意赋予平凡事物价值”的主题。
（四）高分句子默写
描写类（场景与动作）
1. 我仔细清洗并整理了第二个瓶子，将它切成两半，用颜料装饰瓶身，还加上了小灯串，把它改造成了一个精致的小夜灯。________________________________________________________________
2. 我带着这个小夜灯再次来到市场，自豪地向路人展示，很快就吸引了很多人的注意，一位女士出价18美元买下了它。________________________________________________________________
情感类（感悟与联结）
1. 那一刻，我明白创意能让废弃物品重获新生，也懂得了只要坚持和用心，再难的挑战也能完成。________________________________________________________________
2. 这次挑战不仅让我赢得了赌注，更让我体会到环保的意义，学会了用创意发现平凡事物的价值。________________________________________________________________
参考答案
一、英文招募启事写作（Love for the Elderly志愿活动）（满分15分）
（一）题型核心考点
本题为应用文之英文招募启事，核心考查“活动信息+招募要求”的清晰表达，兼顾正式得体、简洁明了的语气（以学生会名义，面向全校中外学生）。评分重点：内容完整性（目的意义+时间地点+服务内容+报名要求方式）、行文逻辑、格式规范及语法多样性。
（二）高分范文（80词）
Dear schoolmates,
Our school will hold a "Love for the Elderly" volunteer activity. Aimed at caring for the elderly and spreading love, it helps us learn to respect them and develop a sense of social responsibility.
It will be held this Sunday morning at Sunshine Community Nursing Home. We’ll chat with the elderly, give performances and help with daily chores. Kind and patient students at home and abroad are welcome. Please sign up at the Students’ Union office.
The Student Union
（三）语法亮点解析
非谓语动词（过去分词作状语）：Aimed at caring for the elderly and spreading love, it helps us...（替代目的状语从句，简洁紧凑，提升句式复杂度。）
并列结构：chat with the elderly, give performances and help with daily chores（三个动词短语并列，使服务内容清晰，句式对称。）
定语从句（隐含）：We’ll carry out activities that include chatting with the elderly...（补充活动细节，逻辑连贯，符合招募启事正式简洁的语气。）
（四）高分句子默写
1. Holding this activity aims to care for the elderly and spread warmth, helping us learn to respect and accompany the elderly and develop a sense of social responsibility.
2. The activity will be held this Sunday morning at Sunshine Community Nursing Home, where volunteers will chat with the elderly, give them performances and help with daily chores.
3. Volunteers are required to be kind and patient and take the activity seriously. Both Chinese and foreign students can apply and sign up at the Students’ Union office.
4. Welcome every caring student to join us, pass on love and warmth through actions and bring joy to the elderly.
（五）拓展表达练习
hold = organize = conduct
care for = look after = take care of
require = demand = request
join = take part in = participate in
二、读后续写（塑料瓶改造挑战主题）（满分25分）
（一）主题分析与续写思路
核心主题：挑战与成长，创意与价值，从“初步成功”到“突破自我”，凸显“平凡事物亦有价值，坚持与创意能成就不凡”的核心。
伏笔呼应：前文朋友Tom的环保挑战（用两个塑料瓶做出价值20美元的物品）、“我”改造第一个瓶子做成多肉盆栽（卖了5美元）、妈妈用旧物做装饰品的启发，为续写“改造第二个瓶子、完成挑战”铺垫。
续写思路：
Paragraph 1（For the second plastic bottle, I became more creative.）：描写改造第二个瓶子的创意的过程（设计、材料、步骤）→ 成品的特点（精致、实用、环保）→ 前往市场售卖的过程与结果（卖出更高价格）。
Paragraph 2（When I shared my success with Tom, he was amazed.）：Tom对“我”作品的评价→ “我”分享改造心得与收获→ 升华主题（挑战的意义、环保的价值、创意的力量）。
（二）高分范文（148词）
For the second plastic bottle, I became more creative. I cleaned and reshaped it carefully, cutting it into two halves. I painted the bottle body with bright colors and added string lights around it, turning it into a delicate night light. It looked beautiful and practical, full of eco-friendly charm. I went to the market again, showcasing it proudly. Soon, it attracted many passers-by. A young lady loved its unique design and offered 18 dollars for it. I accepted happily, knowing I had completed the challenge.
When I shared my success with Tom, he was amazed. He praised my creativity and said I had done a wonderful job. I told him that the challenge made me realize that discarded things could be reborn with creativity. It not only helped me win the bet but also let me understand the value of environmental protection. From then on, I began to collect old things and turn them into valuable items, enjoying the joy of creation.
（三）高分亮点解析
细节描写：cleaned and reshaped, painted the bottle body, showcasing it proudly等动作描写，清晰呈现改造过程与成功喜悦，让情节更生动。
非谓语动词：cutting it into two halves（现在分词作伴随状语）、turning it into a delicate night light（现在分词作结果状语），替代简单句，提升语法层次。
伏笔呼应：描写第二个瓶子的改造与售卖，呼应前文Tom的环保挑战、第一个瓶子的初步成功，情节连贯，凸显“创意赋予价值”的主题。
主题升华：以“the challenge made me realize that discarded things could be reborn with creativity”总结，凸显创意与环保的意义，符合积极价值观导向。
（四）高分句子默写
描写类（场景与动作）
1. I cleaned and sorted out the second bottle carefully, cut it into two halves, decorated the bottle body with paint, added string lights, and turned it into an exquisite night light.
2. I took the night light to the market again, showed it to passers-by proudly, and soon attracted many people's attention. A lady bought it for 18 dollars.
情感类（感悟与联结）
1. At that moment, I realized that creativity could give new life to discarded items, and that as long as I persisted and put my heart into it, even the hardest challenge could be completed.
2. This challenge not only made me win the bet but also made me realize the significance of environmental protection and learn to discover the value of ordinary things with creativity.
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